(完整版)六年级英语上册英语作文范文
鲁教版五四制六年级英语上册
英语作文
Unit 1 Good morning!
在早晨上学的路上, Helen和Eric相遇,请编写一段两个人的对话,内容包括自我介绍和相互问好。
Eric: Good morning! I'm Eric.
Helen: Good morning, Eric! I'm Helen.
Eric: How are you, Helen ?
Helen: I'm fine, thanks! And you?
Eric: I'm OK, too. Let's go to school together.
Helen: OK. Let's go!
Unit 2 What’s this in English?
早上,在教室里,Jim和他的同桌Tom.两人互致问候,询问身体健康,并对桌子上的一些物品进行询问。请写一段两人的对话。要求书写认真,条理清晰。
Tom: Good morning, Jim!
Jim: Good morning, Tom!
Tom: How are you?
Jim: I'm fine, thanks. And you?
Tom: I'm OK. What's this in English?
Jim: It's a pen.
Tom: Spell it, please
Jim: P-E-N. What is that in English?
Tom: It's a map
Jim: Please spell it.
Tom: M-A-P.
Unit 3 What color is it ?
请根据英语提示词,写一段话,向你的加拿大笔友露西(Lucy)介绍你的房间,不少于30词。
提示词：map, blue and white, Jacket, black ,desk, white
Hi, Lucy! This is my room. The map is blue and white. This is my jacket, it is black. I like black That is my desk, it is white. The ruler is blue. The pen is yellow. The eraser is yellow.
Unit 4 My name’s Gina.
First name: Mary
Last Name: Hand
Age: 13
Sex(性别):girl
Telephone number: 808-2698
假如你是文中的人物,根据短文内容介绍一下自己。词数:不少于30词。
Hi, I am a girl. My name is Mary Hand. Mary is my first name. Green is my last name. I am 13 years old. My telephone number is 8082698.
Unit 5 This is my sister.
根据以下信息,以My family为题,写一篇50词左右的短文。
1.我是一名英国女孩,我叫Jenny Hand,我14岁( years old),我是一名中
学生( a middle school student)。
2.我家有( There are)五口人( people),我的爷爷、奶奶、爸爸、妈妈和我。
3.我的爸爸妈妈都是教师。
4.我有(have)一个大(big)家庭。我们是快乐的( happy)一家人,我爱我的家人
My family
I am an English girl. My name is Jenny Hand. I am 14 years old. I am a middle school student. There are five people in my family. They are my grandparents, my parents, and me. My parents are teachers. I have a big family. We are a happy family. I love my family.
期中考试
假如你是美国女孩Alice Brown,你在中国学习的时候,认识了一个新朋友Grace Green。
请根据下面表格中的信息用英语写一篇50词左右的短文,介绍你自己和你的新朋友。
Hello! I'm Alice Brown. My first name is Alice and my last name is Brown.
I am 12 years old. My phone number is 789-7856 and my QQ number is 974917025. My good friend is Grace Green. She is in China now. She is 12, too. Her first name is Grace and her last name is Green. Her phone number is 763- 4507 and her QQ number is 887643571.
Unit6 Is this your sister?
请根据下面的提示写出寻物启事和招领启事。
1.Emily Smith丢了电子游戏机,她的电话372-5683。
2. Ben green在图书馆里捡到了一串钥匙,他的电话:645-2357。
Lost：
My computer game. Please call Emily Smith at 372-5683.
Found:
A set of keys in the school library. Is this yours? Please call Ben Green at 645-2357.
Unit7 Where’s my schoolbag?
假如你是张培,请根据下列汉语提示用英语给你的朋友林晓峰写一封信,介绍你房间物品所在的位置。词数在60词左右,可以适当发挥。
提示词:书包,地图,墙(wal1),一个棒球,电子游戏机,一些激光唱片,床,一把蓝色的椅子在……附近(near),紧挨着( next to)。
Dear Lin Xiaofeng,
Hello, how are you? This is a picture of my bedroom. My bed is next to the wall. A map is on the wall. The desk is near the bed. You can see my schoolbag on the desk. My computer game is on the desk, too. A baseball is in the desk. A blue chair is under the desk. Some CDS are on my bookcase. My room is not big, but it's very tidy. How about yours?
Yours
Zhang Pei
Unit8 Do you have a soccer ball?
我的朋友Tommy热爱体育运动。他有许多体育用品:7个篮球、6个排球、3个棒球和4个足球。他还有8个网球拍、2个乒乓球拍。他每天都进行体育运动,他也在电视上看足球赛。
请以上述内容为题写一篇介绍你的朋友Frank的文章。
提示词: a great sports collection许多体育用品rackets球拍bats球拍
I have a friend, his name is Tommy. He likes sports and he has a great sports collection. He has seven basketball, six volleyball, three baseballs and four soccer balls. He has eight tennis rackets and ping- pong bats, too. He plays sports every day. And he watches soccer games on TV.
Unit9 Do you like bananas?
写作(满分15分)
根据下表介绍一下你的朋友,50词左右
Name Annie
age 13
playing computer games, playing tennis
watching TV
bread, bananas, chicken, ice cream
carrots, strawberries, apples
Annie is my friend. She's 13. She likes playing computer games and tennis, but she doesn't like watching TV. She likes bread, bananas, chicken and
icecream, but she doesn't like carrots, strawberries or apples. She's my good friend. I like her very much.
Unit10 How much are these socks?
请根据以下提示词给Mr smith' s Clothes Store写一篇广告。毛衣,每件50元;书包,每个14元;T恤衫,每件21元;袜子,每双2元
要求:语句通顺,意思明确,词数在50左右。
Come and buy your clothes at Mr Smith's clothes store. We sell all our clothes at very good prices. Do you like sweaters? We have sweaters in all colors at 50 yuan each! Do you need backpacks for sports or school? We have great schoolbags for only 14 yuan! For girls, we have T-shirts in red, green and black for only 21 yuan! The socks are only 2 yuan! Come to our store now!
期末考试
新年就要到了,各商家都在进行以降价为主题的商品促销活动,假如你
所在的青青服装店要在新年期间进行降价销售,请你根据下面的商品价格表写一则70词左右的广告语。
Qingqing Clothes Store Sale
Welcome to Qingqing Clothes Store! We have T-shirts in blue and red for
only $ 20. Do you need sweaters? We have sweaters in all colors for only 15. For girls, we have trousers in black and brown for $ 25. For boys, we sell shoes in al colors for $40. Oh, there are nice socks. They are on sale. Just for $5. We sell all our clothes at very good prices. Come to Qingqing Clothes Store now!
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中考英语作文专题训练及范文(10篇) 1.越来越多汽车进入我们的家庭生活，改善了我们的生活，但同时也带来了很多问题，如堵车和车祸，给家庭和社会带来极大的危害。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？请写一篇有关交通安全的短文(80字左右) 内容包含：遵守交通规则，如走人行道/过斑马线。 别在街道上或马路上玩耍和踢球。 劝父母不能酒后驾车。 你可以适当增加内容，让短文通顺，过渡自然。 参考词汇：sidewalk 人行道 zebra-crossing 斑马线 注：第一段已给出，不计入总数 With more and more cars coming into our families, we are happy that it has greatly improved our life. But unluckily, it has also brought many problems, such as heavy traffic and traffic accidents. 2. 根据中文大意和英语提示词语，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于90词的短文。所给英文提示词供选用。注意：不要写出你的真实姓名和校名。 假设你是刘伟，你的美国朋友Mike 想通过你了解中国的传统节日。请你根据提示，给Mike 写一封e-mail，向他介绍我国传统节日春节的情况。 内容提示：1.春节是中国最重要的传统节日；
2.春节期间人们的主要活动(节前、除夕、节日期间) < Spring festival, traditional, decorate, on the eve of the festival, get together, Spring Festival Gala set off fireworks, lucky money> Dear Mike, 3.幸福是什么？幸福是父母为你营造的温馨的家，幸福是老师望向你的赞许的目光，幸福是孤独时朋友送来的一杯奶茶，幸福是…… 请以My happiness为话题，写一件曾经发生过的令你感到幸福的事情。 要求：条理清晰，语言流畅，用词准确，字迹工整，90词。
六年级下册重点英语作文范文
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1. 成功的四个步骤 Four Steps to a Successful Four Steps to a Successful The first time in life? Then grasp your chance with your perfect performance on the dating night, by learning the following principle in heart. Dress properly. While everyone wants to give an impressive debut on the first date, you should avoid wearing something too bizarre to be accepted. If you are still in school, a sportswear can fulfill your purpose. For businessman or grownups, casual clothes are recommended. Never put up your working uniforms,no matter how well you like that Armani suit. It is no work. A few accessories such as a pair of sunglasses or silver loops on the wrist can add up to the romance sphere. Take a bath before dating. And if you like, spray a little perfume, but unless you're sure that he or she likes the smell,don't use ones that are too strong. Watch your manner. You're no prince of the Scotland nor Cinderella in the legend. Proper manners will ensure a lasting relationship while bad ones scare away your sweetheart. And do make sure you do not boast about your fortune, for, not everyone are green addicts. And your way of smiling, or your greatestoath, should neither be "coy" nor "by St. Loy!" after the nun in Chaucer. Be a little sensitive than merely innocent. Do make sure you do not intrude his or her privacy on the first date. For there maybe something deeply concealed within the inner core of every heart, of which the owner doesn't share often with anyone but his intimacy. Finally, wish you good luck. May you get your hearts combined and start a new journey in the miracle of life and love. Stay tuned till a borderline is reached, and keep on through out the whole way. 简评 看来第一次约会真是令人兴奋并紧张期待的。为第一次约会所提出的建议也是仁者见仁、智者见智。王永同学用词简单、结构精炼，读起来节奏快，例如：“Dress Properly....If you are still in school，a sportswear can fulfill your purpose.For businessman Orgrowmups，casual clothes are recommended.”这样的文章结构像是在提醒我们时不我待，要抓住机会，抓紧时间。 2. 我的宿舍生活My Dormitory Life
小学五、六年级英语作文范例
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