[实用参考]高二英语作文建议信公开课.ppt
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高中英语作文(公开课)：如何写好建议信课件 PPT
as a matter of fact in addition
in my opinion as far as I am concerned
first/firstly first of all
suddenly
however have to do sth.
all of a sudden
on the contrary have no choice but to do sth.
1、对该同学存在的问题表示理解
2、提出建议并给出理由
注意：词数120左右（信的开头已给出， 但不计入总词数）。
第一步：审题
养成重视审题的习惯。
思考的问题 第几人称？（person） 文章的题材是什么？ 要写的文章主题是什么 (topic)
动作是什么时候发生的？(时态) (when)
样题分析 第二人称
I will be more than happy to see improvements later.
Best wishes (for you).
实战演练
练习：假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来 信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据 下列要点写回信。
要点：⑴ 参加中文学习班； ⑵ 看中文书刊、电视； ⑶ 学唱中文歌曲； ⑷ 交中国朋友。
定语从句
=help 用短语来代替单词
=want to 用短语来代替单词
I hope that these suggestions will work.And I am dying to receiving your good news./ I can't wait to hear from you again. /Don't hesitate to write to me about your great progress. =want to 用短语来代短语
高中英语作文写作指导 建议信PPT下载
Complimentary close(结束语), Signature
Yours sincerely, Robert
高中英语作文写作指导 建议信PPT下载
实际操练
假如你是某英文周报“PLEASE TELL ME” 专栏的 编辑Robert。南县一中高三年级学生Xu Meili因最 近感觉学习压力大，成绩下降，和父母经常吵架而 写信向你求助。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下： 1、对该同学存在的问题表示理解 2、提出建议并给出理由 注意： 1. 词数100左右 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
the Structure of a letter for advice
Greeting, Dear … , Body: 1st part: the purpose
2nd part: suggestions and reasons
3rd part:
hope the receiver to consider the suggestions
How can we help them?
Teaching goal
How to write a letter for advice
Task1 Structure of writing a letter for advice
show the _p_u_r_p_o_s_e of the letter
高中英语作文写作指导 建议信PPT下载
高中英语作文写作指导 建议信PPT下载
4.建议信结尾常用句式：
1. I hope that my suggestions are of help to you, and please feel free to contact me for more questions.
(课件)【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)
...
talk in English
Brainstorming
read English books
ways to improve English
watch English films
have a good attitude
listen carefully
Step4: organize your writing（组织语言）
to sum up 观点 in my opinion, as far as I'm concerned, from
my perspective
Write a draft(草稿） by groups.
Step5: write a draft（草稿）
para1：Purposes and Problems
2. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Hua, ————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————
Best wishes.
Yours,
xxx
Step1：analyze (审题)
Writing
Suggestion Letter
建议信
Free talk
As a new student in senior one, do you have some problems?
在此输入您的封面副标题
chemistry
math physics
English
假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信 中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很 苦恼。请写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学 习。 注意： 1. 词数100左右；
高中英语复习---英语应用文写作(建议信)(共33张PPT)
常用句： 1. I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite common. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. 很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是 很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。
你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅 行，有两条线路可以选择：“长江之行”或者“泰山之 旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信，内容 包括： 1.你建议的线路; 2.你的理由; 3.你的祝愿。 注意：1.词数100左右; 2（.开二头）和谋结篇尾列已纲给：出，不计入总词数。 (1)说明写信的原因；(2)引出自己的建议； (3)建议的理由一； (4)建议的理由二； (5) 总结建议理由； (6) 祝愿旅游愉快。
6.祝愿您中国之行愉快。
（三）翻译要点并造句 1.很高兴收到您来信，信上说你们要来中国旅游。
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5.I would be ready to discuss about this matter with you to further deal. 我准备好和你进一步讨论这件事情。
信件启首
(1)写信的原因
高考英语建议信ppt课件
Welcome
1
建议信
2
文体概述
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方 接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题的一类 信件。建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理， 注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理 由充足，具有合理性和说服力。内容通常包括： (1) 说明写信目的; (2) 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告; (3) 表达希望建议被采纳并期盼回复。
6
套用句式
1. 你就……向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建 设性的建议。
1. You have asked me for my advice with regard to…and I will try to make some constructive suggestions.
2. 我觉得如果能够……将会很有帮助。
4. 利用
__m__a_k_e__u_s_e_o__f ___________
5. 向某人征求意见__a_s_k_s_b__. _fo_r__a_d_v__ic_e_______
4
6. 制订计划
_m_a__k_e_a__p_l_a_n____________
7. 认为……有用
find…__h_e_l_p_f_u_l_/_u_s_e_fu__l/_b_e_n_e_f_i_c_ial
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Step7.课外作业
假设你是李华，最近你的美国笔友Bob打算练中文毛笔字， 他来信向你请教如何练好毛笔字。请你给他写封信，提供一些 建议。要点如下：1.支持他练毛笔字；2.列举注意事项（选择 字帖，注意姿势，模仿视频，贵在坚持）；3.相信他会练好。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.开头语已为你写好。参考词汇：书法 calligraphy字帖 copybook 毛笔 brush笔画 stroke
1
建议信
2
文体概述
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方 接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题的一类 信件。建议信不是投诉信，观点要合情合理， 注意礼貌当先。同时，建议信要简洁明确、理 由充足，具有合理性和说服力。内容通常包括： (1) 说明写信目的; (2) 提出建议与改进措施并给予忠告; (3) 表达希望建议被采纳并期盼回复。
6
套用句式
1. 你就……向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建 设性的建议。
1. You have asked me for my advice with regard to…and I will try to make some constructive suggestions.
2. 我觉得如果能够……将会很有帮助。
4. 利用
__m__a_k_e__u_s_e_o__f ___________
5. 向某人征求意见__a_s_k_s_b__. _fo_r__a_d_v__ic_e_______
4
6. 制订计划
_m_a__k_e_a__p_l_a_n____________
7. 认为……有用
find…__h_e_l_p_f_u_l_/_u_s_e_fu__l/_b_e_n_e_f_i_c_ial
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Step7.课外作业
假设你是李华，最近你的美国笔友Bob打算练中文毛笔字， 他来信向你请教如何练好毛笔字。请你给他写封信，提供一些 建议。要点如下：1.支持他练毛笔字；2.列举注意事项（选择 字帖，注意姿势，模仿视频，贵在坚持）；3.相信他会练好。
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3.开头语已为你写好。参考词汇：书法 calligraphy字帖 copybook 毛笔 brush笔画 stroke
高中英语作文 建议信(共9张PPT)
16. 如能看到……我会非常开心的。
I would be more than happy to see…
17. 我建议…… _____________
I would like to suggest that…
I would like to make a recommendation that…
交朋友首先要对别人友善；
If I were you, I would… have difficulty/trouble in doing sth.
向某人征求意见________________________
制订计划
_______________________
பைடு நூலகம்
May I suggest that… 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的美国笔友Chris在给你的邮件中提到他最近在准备SAT考试（美国高考），心理压力很大，很苦恼，希望得
3. 在做某事时遇到困难
__h_a_v_e__d_i_ff_i_c_u_l_t_y_/t_r_o_u_b__le__i_n_d__o_in__g_s_t_h4. .
向某人征求意见________a_s_k_s_b_._f_o_r__a_d_v_i_c_e_
5. 制订计划
___m_a_k__e_a__p_l_a_n__________
6. 认为……有用
find…__h__e_l_p_f_u_l_/u__s_e_f_u_l_/b__e_n_e_f_icial
7. 参加
tak__e_p__a_r_t_i_n_/_p_a_r_t_i_c_ip__a_t_e_i_n
8. 听从某人的建议 __f_o_l_lo_w___o_n_e_’_s_a_d__v_ic_e____
I would be more than happy to see…
17. 我建议…… _____________
I would like to suggest that…
I would like to make a recommendation that…
交朋友首先要对别人友善；
If I were you, I would… have difficulty/trouble in doing sth.
向某人征求意见________________________
制订计划
_______________________
பைடு நூலகம்
May I suggest that… 假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的美国笔友Chris在给你的邮件中提到他最近在准备SAT考试（美国高考），心理压力很大，很苦恼，希望得
3. 在做某事时遇到困难
__h_a_v_e__d_i_ff_i_c_u_l_t_y_/t_r_o_u_b__le__i_n_d__o_in__g_s_t_h4. .
向某人征求意见________a_s_k_s_b_._f_o_r__a_d_v_i_c_e_
5. 制订计划
___m_a_k__e_a__p_l_a_n__________
6. 认为……有用
find…__h__e_l_p_f_u_l_/u__s_e_f_u_l_/b__e_n_e_f_icial
7. 参加
tak__e_p__a_r_t_i_n_/_p_a_r_t_i_c_ip__a_t_e_i_n
8. 听从某人的建议 __f_o_l_lo_w___o_n_e_’_s_a_d__v_ic_e____
高中英语写作-建议信.ppt
and express yourself well in Chinese
I wish you great success and rapid progress in learning Chinese．I am
expecting to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Zhang Peng
• It is necessary for you to ... • In my opinion, it would be better to ... • As far as I'm concerned, you'd better ... • If I were you, I would ... • It should be a good idea to ... • What's more, it will be helpful to you that ... • Why not ...
Li Ming
范文（3） (One possible version)
I am Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.
段尾常用表达
• I hope you will find these suggestions
useful / helpful/ practical. • I believe that you will take my suggestions
into account / consideration. • I'd appreciate if you accept my advice. • Waiting for your good news. • I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
I wish you great success and rapid progress in learning Chinese．I am
expecting to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Zhang Peng
• It is necessary for you to ... • In my opinion, it would be better to ... • As far as I'm concerned, you'd better ... • If I were you, I would ... • It should be a good idea to ... • What's more, it will be helpful to you that ... • Why not ...
Li Ming
范文（3） (One possible version)
I am Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.
段尾常用表达
• I hope you will find these suggestions
useful / helpful/ practical. • I believe that you will take my suggestions
into account / consideration. • I'd appreciate if you accept my advice. • Waiting for your good news. • I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
(课件)【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)
Enjoy one possible version from your classmate.
a good composition
structure contents language
beauty
be attractive, finished in a limited time!
Homework
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
3. Reading English books helps a lot.(改为强调句） _It__ is reading English books _t_h_a_t _ helps a lot.
4.I hope my suggetions will be of great help.(改为强 调句） I_d_o__hope my suggestions will be of great help.
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
5. In this way, you can make great progress in English.(改为倒装句） _O__n_ly_ in this way, _c_a_n_ you make great progress in English.
Step6. polish your writing（润色）
How to polish your writing？
Polish your composition by improving your handwriting（书写）
Polish your composition by improving your language
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difficulty in learning English. ②I feel that it is my duty to make some suggestions concerning environmental protection.
Here is some advice that may be beneficial to you. Firstly，…. Secondly,…．Thirdly,….
如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。
假设你是李华，在校园英语论坛（forum）上 看到一些同学的帖子，他们在就如何学好英语 寻求帮助。请你以Bookworm的网名给他们回 帖，结合自己的经验提出一些建议。
内容提示：
1）培养学习兴趣；
2）找到适合的学习方法；
3）勤学好问，多实践。
词数100左右
Dear Friends,
From the forum, I’ve learned that many students have some problems in English learning. (I am sorry to know that you have difficulty in learning English.) Now I am willing to share my advice with you.
A letter of giving advice
写作攻略
1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建 议和忠告。 2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某 个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是 写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出 建议或忠告。 3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容， 提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理， 语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得 简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服 力。
I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration. I believe your English will be improved.
•
yours,
Here is some advice that may be helpful to you. Firstly, it is important to cultivate/develop your interest in learning English. As you know, interest is the best teacher, which can encourage us to learn English actively. Secondly, finding a suitable method is significant . Only if you use effective methods can you improve your English. Thirdly, it is suggested that you should ask your teacher for help when you are in trouble. As you know, practice makes perfect.
I hope you will find these suggestions useful. Yours, XXX
写作语料库：英语建议信的常用词句
A.建议信开头常用句式(对应材料,表明写作意图)
1．After I read your letter in the newspaper/on the internet, I am sorry to know that … 2．I am very glad to hear that you want to… 3．I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter. 4. I feel that it is my duty to make some suggestions concerning…. 5. I am writing to share some advice on… with you.
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading
表明写作意图；一两个句子
整
体 2. Body
三 部
提出具体建议；层次分明
分 3. Ending
总结；呼应主题
建议信写作的注意事项： a．这类文章一定要符合英
语信件的基本格式。 b．这类文章的基本时态多
用一般现在时和一般将来时。
Dear XXX, ① I am glad/sorry to hear that you have
果你能采取以下措施，将是一种明智的选择。
3. Firstly，…Secondly,…．Thirdly,….
4. To begin with,….In addition,….What’s more,….Last but not least,….
建议信பைடு நூலகம்尾常用句式
1.I believe you will take my advice into serious consideration.
B.建议信第二段常用句式,给出建议及理由， 井然有序。 1 . I think it would be more beneficial if you could…我想如果你能……可能会更好
2. In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following actions.在我看来， 如
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。
2.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.
我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你来说实用/有用/ 有帮助。
3.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
Here is some advice that may be beneficial to you. Firstly，…. Secondly,…．Thirdly,….
如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。
假设你是李华，在校园英语论坛（forum）上 看到一些同学的帖子，他们在就如何学好英语 寻求帮助。请你以Bookworm的网名给他们回 帖，结合自己的经验提出一些建议。
内容提示：
1）培养学习兴趣；
2）找到适合的学习方法；
3）勤学好问，多实践。
词数100左右
Dear Friends,
From the forum, I’ve learned that many students have some problems in English learning. (I am sorry to know that you have difficulty in learning English.) Now I am willing to share my advice with you.
A letter of giving advice
写作攻略
1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建 议和忠告。 2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某 个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是 写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出 建议或忠告。 3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容， 提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理， 语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得 简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服 力。
I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration. I believe your English will be improved.
•
yours,
Here is some advice that may be helpful to you. Firstly, it is important to cultivate/develop your interest in learning English. As you know, interest is the best teacher, which can encourage us to learn English actively. Secondly, finding a suitable method is significant . Only if you use effective methods can you improve your English. Thirdly, it is suggested that you should ask your teacher for help when you are in trouble. As you know, practice makes perfect.
I hope you will find these suggestions useful. Yours, XXX
写作语料库：英语建议信的常用词句
A.建议信开头常用句式(对应材料,表明写作意图)
1．After I read your letter in the newspaper/on the internet, I am sorry to know that … 2．I am very glad to hear that you want to… 3．I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter. 4. I feel that it is my duty to make some suggestions concerning…. 5. I am writing to share some advice on… with you.
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading
表明写作意图；一两个句子
整
体 2. Body
三 部
提出具体建议；层次分明
分 3. Ending
总结；呼应主题
建议信写作的注意事项： a．这类文章一定要符合英
语信件的基本格式。 b．这类文章的基本时态多
用一般现在时和一般将来时。
Dear XXX, ① I am glad/sorry to hear that you have
果你能采取以下措施，将是一种明智的选择。
3. Firstly，…Secondly,…．Thirdly,….
4. To begin with,….In addition,….What’s more,….Last but not least,….
建议信பைடு நூலகம்尾常用句式
1.I believe you will take my advice into serious consideration.
B.建议信第二段常用句式,给出建议及理由， 井然有序。 1 . I think it would be more beneficial if you could…我想如果你能……可能会更好
2. In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following actions.在我看来， 如
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。
2.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.
我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你来说实用/有用/ 有帮助。
3.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.