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高中英语作文(公开课)：如何写好建议信课件 PPT
as a matter of fact in addition
in my opinion as far as I am concerned
first/firstly first of all
suddenly
however have to do sth.
all of a sudden
on the contrary have no choice but to do sth.
1、对该同学存在的问题表示理解
2、提出建议并给出理由
注意：词数120左右（信的开头已给出， 但不计入总词数）。
第一步：审题
养成重视审题的习惯。
思考的问题 第几人称？（person） 文章的题材是什么？ 要写的文章主题是什么 (topic)
动作是什么时候发生的？(时态) (when)
样题分析 第二人称
I will be more than happy to see improvements later.
Best wishes (for you).
实战演练
练习：假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来 信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据 下列要点写回信。
要点：⑴ 参加中文学习班； ⑵ 看中文书刊、电视； ⑶ 学唱中文歌曲； ⑷ 交中国朋友。
定语从句
=help 用短语来代替单词
=want to 用短语来代替单词
I hope that these suggestions will work.And I am dying to receiving your good news./ I can't wait to hear from you again. /Don't hesitate to write to me about your great progress. =want to 用短语来代短语
建议信英语作文,公开课ppt课件
composition
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建议信的结构：
建议信一般采用三段式：
首段：针对对方对自己的信任表示感谢， 并表明写作意图。
中段：围绕对方的困惑或烦恼等问题， 用语科学，并委婉的提出具体的建议 或者方法。
尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，希望自 己的建议能对对方有所帮助。
（一般用第一人称最，新版整以理ppt 一般现在时主…2 ）
energetic. Last but not least, don’t stay up late
studying. It is very important to have a good sleep a
night if you want to be energeticduring the day.
From my point of view, _____________________. For one thing, _________. For another, ________. Besides, it is important for you to ________, I believe that _________.
注意：词数100词左右。 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
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Dear Jack，
I am sorry to hear that you feel extremelynervous
before an important exam. I’d like to give you some
advice.
First, make careful plans before exams to master
what you have learned completely.It will help you b
最新版整理ppt
1
建议信的结构：
建议信一般采用三段式：
首段：针对对方对自己的信任表示感谢， 并表明写作意图。
中段：围绕对方的困惑或烦恼等问题， 用语科学，并委婉的提出具体的建议 或者方法。
尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，希望自 己的建议能对对方有所帮助。
（一般用第一人称最，新版整以理ppt 一般现在时主…2 ）
energetic. Last but not least, don’t stay up late
studying. It is very important to have a good sleep a
night if you want to be energeticduring the day.
From my point of view, _____________________. For one thing, _________. For another, ________. Besides, it is important for you to ________, I believe that _________.
注意：词数100词左右。 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
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Dear Jack，
I am sorry to hear that you feel extremelynervous
before an important exam. I’d like to give you some
advice.
First, make careful plans before exams to master
what you have learned completely.It will help you b
(课件)【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)
...
talk in English
Brainstorming
read English books
ways to improve English
watch English films
have a good attitude
listen carefully
Step4: organize your writing（组织语言）
to sum up 观点 in my opinion, as far as I'm concerned, from
my perspective
Write a draft(草稿） by groups.
Step5: write a draft（草稿）
para1：Purposes and Problems
2. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Li Hua, ————————————————————————————— ———————————————————————————
Best wishes.
Yours,
xxx
Step1：analyze (审题)
Writing
Suggestion Letter
建议信
Free talk
As a new student in senior one, do you have some problems?
在此输入您的封面副标题
chemistry
math physics
English
假设你是某报社编辑，最近收到读者李华的一封来信。信 中李华提到自己在学习英语的过程中遇到了困难，这让他很 苦恼。请写一篇回给李华的建议信，帮他解决困难，促进学 习。 注意： 1. 词数100左右；
高中英语 建议信A letter of advice课件
③结尾-呼应开头，表达愿望，希望建议给对方以帮助。
1.写建议信要符合英文信件的基本格式。
2.文章中的时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。
3.建议信要简明扼要,同时所提出的建议要合理,有说 服力,语气要诚恳、有礼貌,慎用命令性词汇。
4.建议的角度要多样化、避免重复,可从政治、经济、文 化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议,因此要注意各 个建议之间的衔接。
I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions. 如果你能考虑我的建议我会感激不尽的。
These are my personal suggestions,but I do hope that they will be of some help. 这些只是我个人的建议，但是我确实希望会对你有帮助。
In the end,I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful. 最后，如果你发现我的建议很有用我会很高兴的。
Success grows out of struggles to overcome difficulties. 成功来自于克服困难的斗争! （有志者事竟成!）
写作模板
Dear_______，
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for advice on how to______(引出问题).I am more than glad to share some of my advice/views with you.
...is a good/great idea. .....是一个好想法.
You may consider doing... 你可以考虑(做)......
1.写建议信要符合英文信件的基本格式。
2.文章中的时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。
3.建议信要简明扼要,同时所提出的建议要合理,有说 服力,语气要诚恳、有礼貌,慎用命令性词汇。
4.建议的角度要多样化、避免重复,可从政治、经济、文 化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议,因此要注意各 个建议之间的衔接。
I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions. 如果你能考虑我的建议我会感激不尽的。
These are my personal suggestions,but I do hope that they will be of some help. 这些只是我个人的建议，但是我确实希望会对你有帮助。
In the end,I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful. 最后，如果你发现我的建议很有用我会很高兴的。
Success grows out of struggles to overcome difficulties. 成功来自于克服困难的斗争! （有志者事竟成!）
写作模板
Dear_______，
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for advice on how to______(引出问题).I am more than glad to share some of my advice/views with you.
...is a good/great idea. .....是一个好想法.
You may consider doing... 你可以考虑(做)......
(课件)【公开课优质课】高中英语建议信写作(共27张PPT)
Enjoy one possible version from your classmate.
a good composition
structure contents language
beauty
be attractive, finished in a limited time!
Homework
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
3. Reading English books helps a lot.(改为强调句） _It__ is reading English books _t_h_a_t _ helps a lot.
4.I hope my suggetions will be of great help.(改为强 调句） I_d_o__hope my suggestions will be of great help.
Use a variety of sentence patterns 丰富句型
5. In this way, you can make great progress in English.(改为倒装句） _O__n_ly_ in this way, _c_a_n_ you make great progress in English.
Step6. polish your writing（润色）
How to polish your writing？
Polish your composition by improving your handwriting（书写）
Polish your composition by improving your language
【课件】英语建议信课件(共23张幻灯片)
Chinese words more easily. What’s more, you can also make more Chinese friends. They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.
Try and write me in Chinese next time.
• 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友 Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学 好中文。请你根据下列要点写 回信。
• 要点：⑴ 参加中文学习班；⑵ 看中文书刊、电视； ⑶ 学唱中 文歌曲； ⑷ 交中国朋友。
• take a Chinese course
I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well.
First, you had better show your friendliness to others.
It is good for your to make friends. 两个简单句
First, you must be friendly to others if you want to make friends with others.状语从句
写作模板 第二段： (建议及理由) 1. Here are a few suggestions. 2.I’d like to share some advice
with you. 3.In my opinion/As far as I am
concerned, it would be wise to take the following actions.
高一英语写作---英语建议信课件(共23张幻灯片)
Then, you should make strangers feel easy, no matter where he is. Be more concerned about others than yourself.
3.与别人有分歧时不吵架，要商量； disagree with sb have different ideas/opinions don’t argue/quarrel discuss with sb have a discussion with sb talk with sb have a talk face to face
范文：
Dear Flower, I'm glad to receive
your e-mail. You ask me something about how to make friends. The following is my advice.
Everyone needs friends, so
写作模板 第二段： (建议及理由) 1. Here are a few suggestions. 2.I’d like to share some advice
with you. 3.In my opinion/As far as I am
concerned, it would be wise to take the following actions.
When you have different opinions, you can discuss with others. I don't think it's necessary to quarrel with them. Finally, don't trust those who leave you when you are in trouble, because a friend in need is a friend indeed.
高考英语写作之建议信课件
我希望您会发现这些建议是实用的。如果您仍然感到
困惑，请随时与我联系。
建议信写作模版
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建议信写作训练 Letter of
创作者的利益，请勿复制、传播、
式 级 销售，否则将承担法律责任！小木
头将对作品进行维权，按照传播下 载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿！
I hope you will find these suggestions practical. If you
are still confused, please feel free to contact me.
创销头作售将者，对的否作利则品益将进，承行句式请担维勿法权复律，升级制责按、任照传！传播小播、木下
载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿！
开头： 从你的来信中，我了解到你遇到了关于…的问题, 下面是我给你提 供的一些建议。
From your letter I know you have some trouble in … Here are my sugge感PPs谢Tt作您io品下n，载为s小了木f您o头和r平小台y木上o头提u以供.及的原
结尾：
我希望这些建议对你有帮助，如果你依然有困惑，随时联系我。
【词汇】：
建议有用：find these感s谢u您g下g载e小st木io头n平s台h上e提l供p的ful / practical…
PPT作品，为了您和小木头以及原
满足你的需求：suit
创作者的利益，请勿复制、传播、
/销m售，e否et则将yo承u担r法律ne责e任d！小木
困惑，请随时与我联系。
建议信写作模版
感谢您下载小木头平台上提供的 PPT作品，为了您和小木头以及原 创作者的利益，请勿复制、传播、 销售，否则将承担法律责任！小木 头将对作品进行维权，按照传播下 载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿！
建议信写作训练 Letter of
创作者的利益，请勿复制、传播、
式 级 销售，否则将承担法律责任！小木
头将对作品进行维权，按照传播下 载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿！
I hope you will find these suggestions practical. If you
are still confused, please feel free to contact me.
创销头作售将者，对的否作利则品益将进，承行句式请担维勿法权复律，升级制责按、任照传！传播小播、木下
载次数进行十倍的索取赔偿！
开头： 从你的来信中，我了解到你遇到了关于…的问题, 下面是我给你提 供的一些建议。
From your letter I know you have some trouble in … Here are my sugge感PPs谢Tt作您io品下n，载为s小了木f您o头和r平小台y木上o头提u以供.及的原
结尾：
我希望这些建议对你有帮助，如果你依然有困惑，随时联系我。
【词汇】：
建议有用：find these感s谢u您g下g载e小st木io头n平s台h上e提l供p的ful / practical…
PPT作品，为了您和小木头以及原
满足你的需求：suit
创作者的利益，请勿复制、传播、
/销m售，e否et则将yo承u担r法律ne责e任d！小木
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difficulty in learning English. ②I feel that it is my duty to make some suggestions concerning environmental protection.
Here is some advice that may be beneficial to you. Firstly，…. Secondly,…．Thirdly,….
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading
表明写作意图；一两个句子
整
体 2. Body
三 部
提出具体建议；层次分明
分 3. Ending
总结；呼应主题
建议信写作的注意事项： a．这类文章一定要符合英
语信件的基本格式。 b．这类文章的基本时态多
用一般现在时和一般将来时。
Dear XXX, ① I am glad/sorry to hear that you have
如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。
假设你是李华，在校园英语论坛（forum）上 看到一些同学的帖子，他们在就如何学好英语 寻求帮助。请你以Bookworm的网名给他们回 帖，结合自己的经验提出一些建议。
内容提示：
1）培养学习兴趣；
2）词数100左右
Dear Friends,
From the forum, I’ve learned that many students have some problems in English learning. (I am sorry to know that you have difficulty in learning English.) Now I am willing to share my advice with you.
I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration. I believe your English will be improved.
•
yours,
B.建议信第二段常用句式,给出建议及理由， 井然有序。 1 . I think it would be more beneficial if you could…我想如果你能……可能会更好
2. In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following actions.在我看来， 如
I hope you will find these suggestions useful. Yours, XXX
写作语料库：英语建议信的常用词句
A.建议信开头常用句式(对应材料,表明写作意图)
1．After I read your letter in the newspaper/on the internet, I am sorry to know that … 2．I am very glad to hear that you want to… 3．I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter. 4. I feel that it is my duty to make some suggestions concerning…. 5. I am writing to share some advice on… with you.
果你能采取以下措施，将是一种明智的选择。
3. Firstly，…Secondly,…．Thirdly,….
4. To begin with,….In addition,….What’s more,….Last but not least,….
建议信结尾常用句式
1.I believe you will take my advice into serious consideration.
A letter of giving advice
写作攻略
1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建 议和忠告。 2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某 个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是 写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出 建议或忠告。 3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容， 提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理， 语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得 简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服 力。
Here is some advice that may be helpful to you. Firstly, it is important to cultivate/develop your interest in learning English. As you know, interest is the best teacher, which can encourage us to learn English actively. Secondly, finding a suitable method is significant . Only if you use effective methods can you improve your English. Thirdly, it is suggested that you should ask your teacher for help when you are in trouble. As you know, practice makes perfect.
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。
2.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.
我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你来说实用/有用/ 有帮助。
3.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
Here is some advice that may be beneficial to you. Firstly，…. Secondly,…．Thirdly,….
如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象
1. Heading
表明写作意图；一两个句子
整
体 2. Body
三 部
提出具体建议；层次分明
分 3. Ending
总结；呼应主题
建议信写作的注意事项： a．这类文章一定要符合英
语信件的基本格式。 b．这类文章的基本时态多
用一般现在时和一般将来时。
Dear XXX, ① I am glad/sorry to hear that you have
如果这方面有所改善我会非常开心的。
假设你是李华，在校园英语论坛（forum）上 看到一些同学的帖子，他们在就如何学好英语 寻求帮助。请你以Bookworm的网名给他们回 帖，结合自己的经验提出一些建议。
内容提示：
1）培养学习兴趣；
2）词数100左右
Dear Friends,
From the forum, I’ve learned that many students have some problems in English learning. (I am sorry to know that you have difficulty in learning English.) Now I am willing to share my advice with you.
I hope you will take my suggestions into consideration. I believe your English will be improved.
•
yours,
B.建议信第二段常用句式,给出建议及理由， 井然有序。 1 . I think it would be more beneficial if you could…我想如果你能……可能会更好
2. In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following actions.在我看来， 如
I hope you will find these suggestions useful. Yours, XXX
写作语料库：英语建议信的常用词句
A.建议信开头常用句式(对应材料,表明写作意图)
1．After I read your letter in the newspaper/on the internet, I am sorry to know that … 2．I am very glad to hear that you want to… 3．I know you have trouble in…after reading your letter. 4. I feel that it is my duty to make some suggestions concerning…. 5. I am writing to share some advice on… with you.
果你能采取以下措施，将是一种明智的选择。
3. Firstly，…Secondly,…．Thirdly,….
4. To begin with,….In addition,….What’s more,….Last but not least,….
建议信结尾常用句式
1.I believe you will take my advice into serious consideration.
A letter of giving advice
写作攻略
1.建议信是向收信人对某事提出写信人的建 议和忠告。 2建议信有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某 个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是 写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出 建议或忠告。 3建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容， 提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理， 语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得 简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服 力。
Here is some advice that may be helpful to you. Firstly, it is important to cultivate/develop your interest in learning English. As you know, interest is the best teacher, which can encourage us to learn English actively. Secondly, finding a suitable method is significant . Only if you use effective methods can you improve your English. Thirdly, it is suggested that you should ask your teacher for help when you are in trouble. As you know, practice makes perfect.
我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。
2.I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions/recommendations practical/useful/helpful.
我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你来说实用/有用/ 有帮助。
3.I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.