作文范文之6级作文和翻译70分
6级作文和翻译70分
【篇一：英语四六级作文及翻译】
家庭暴力(domestic violence)指的是在亲密关系(intimate relationship)中一方对另一方的虐待。通常来说，受害者是儿童和
妇女。在中国古代，人们认为男人有权利惩罚他的孩子和妻子。广
义上讲，家庭暴力不局限于明显的身体暴力，它也有许多其他的形式。关于家庭暴力产生的原因，出现了许多不同的理论，比如犯罪
者的性格和心理特征。外部因素也有影响，比如犯罪者所处的环境。然而，没有一种理论能涵盖所有情况。
参考译文：
characteristics.external factors also play a part,such as the perpetrators surroundings.however, no theory seems to cover all cases.
criminal
mental characteristic
青年奥林匹克运动会是专为全世界青年人设立的综合体育赛事。第
二届夏季青年奥林匹克运动会于2014年8月16日至28日在南京举行。本届青奥会的口号是“分享青春共筑未来”;寓意全世界青年人在
奥林匹克精神感召下，欢聚一堂，相互切磋，相互鼓励，增进友谊，共同成长。吉祥物创意来自雨花石，意为提倡自然、运动、健康、
快乐的生活方式;会徽将南京明城墙城门和江南民居轮廓组合在一起，勾勒出“nanjing”字样，寓意青春之门。参考译文：
youth olympic games, a comprehensive sports event, is designed for young people all over the world. the second summer youth olympic games was held from august 16, 2014
to 28 in nanjing. its slogan is share the youth, build the future”, which means the young people around the world in the
olympic spirit, get together and play
each other, encourage each other, enhance friendship and
grow up together. its mascot comes from rain flower stones, advocating a lifestyle of natural, sports, healthy and happy; its emblem will outline nanjing ming city wall gate and folk
houses together, with the idea of the gate of youth.
specially
中国水资源地区分布不均匀。总体来讲，南方水资源丰富，北方则
水资源匮乏。随着人口的增长和经济的快速发展，北方缺水的问题
日益严重，解决办法之一就是跨流域(drainage area)调水，也就是
南水北调工程(south-to-north water diversion project)。南水北调
工程包括东、中、西三条线路。东线从长江下游引水，沿京杭大运
河(beijing-hangzhou grand canal)北送，穿过黄河下的管道，向下
流入天津附近的水库(reservoir)。中线从长江的支流汉江的丹江口水库引水到北京。西线也被称作“大西线”，目的在于从长江上游引水
到黄河上游。
参考译文：
in china water resources are unevenly distributed.in general, water resources are abundant in the south but deficient in the north.with the increase of population and rapid economic development, the problem of water shortage in the north is getting more and more serious.one solution is to divert water from one drainage area to another,also known as the south-to-north water diversion project.there are three routes.the eastern route will transfer water from the lower reaches of the yangtze river to north along the beijing-hangzhou grand canal and through a tunnel under the yellow river, from where it can flow downhill to reservoirs near tianjin.the central route is from danjiangkou reservoir on the han river, a branch of the yangtze river, to beijing.the western route, also called the big western line, aims at diverting water from the headwaters of the
yangtze river into the headwaters of the yellow river.
中国，地球上最吸引人的国家之一，有5000多年的历史，是目前全
球第二大经济体(the second largest economy)。随着广泛的经济
改革，中国正经历着显著、快速的变化。1949年以前的中国极端贫困、收入不平衡(income inequalities)、国家不安全。由于经济改革，从1980年开始，人民的生活水平开始提升至基本水平之上。全国人
口有了足够的食物、衣服和住房，普通家庭可以吃得起各种各样的
食物，穿得上时尚的衣服。
参考译文：
insecurity.since 1980，thanks to the economic reforms, peoples standard of living started to climb beyond the basic level.the general population had adequate food, clothing, and housing, and ordinary families could afford to eat a variety of foods and wear stylish clothing.
stylish
时尚的
fashionable
中国的社会关系是典型的由共同的社交网络(social network)组成的社会关系。社交网络中的个体通过“关系”相连，关系中的情感被称为“感情”。中国的社会关系中一个非常重要的概念是“面子”概念，就像其他许多亚洲文化中的一样。正如中国学术大家费孝通的社会学著作中所写的那样，中国人一跟其他社会的人相比一倾向于从社会网络角度看社会关系。因此，人们的关系以“近”或者“远”界定，而不是“有”或者“无”。
参考译文：
chinese social relationships are social relationships typified by a mutual social network. the individuals within the social network are connected by
guanxi(links) and the feeling within the links is known by the term “ganqing”.an important concept within chinese social relationships is the concept of face,as in many other asian cultures. as articulated in the sociological works of chinese leading academic fei xiaotong, the chinese，in contrast to people of other
societies,tend to see social relationships in terms of social networks. hence, the
years.the government provides primary education for six years,starting at age six or seven, followed by six years of secondary education for ages 12 to 18.some provinces may have five-year primary school,but six years for secondary school, including three years for middle school and three years for high school.the ministry of education reported a 99 percent eollment rate for primary school and an 80 percent for both middle and high schools.
自从商业航班出现后，对全球旅游业冲击最大的莫过于中国旅游。到2015年，将有1亿中国人打包行囊，出境旅游。2012年，中国超越美国和德国成为全球最大的国际旅游消费国，创造了8300万人在国际旅游中消费1020亿美元的纪录。韩国有报道说在2013年2月份，中国到访游客数量有史以来第一次超过了日本。为应对这种繁荣，全球旅游运营商一直不遗余力地改变他们提供的服务-特别是在酒店方面。
参考译文：exceed outnumber surpass 超过
chinese tourism brought about the strongest impact on the global travel industry since the advent of commercial flight.by
2015,100 million chinese will pack their bags to travel abroad.
in 2012, chinese overtook americans and germans as the
worlds top international tourism spenders, with 83 million people spending a record of 102 billion on international tourism. south korea reported that in february, 2013, for the
first time ever, chinese tourists overtook japanese tourists in terms of arrival number.in response to the boom,global travel operators have been relentlessly adapting their offerings-
hotels in particular.
spare no effort 不遗余力的
do ones utmost
从秦朝到晚清，朝廷将人民分为四个阶级:地主、农民、工匠和商人。地主和农民构成了两个主要的阶级，而商人和工匠们则归到两个较
小的阶级。从理论上讲，除了帝位，其他身份都不能世袭(hereditary)。当拥有大量土地和半农奴(semi-serfs) 的显赫家族出
现时，封建主义(feudalism)就会局部复辟。他们控制着朝廷重要的
民事和军事职位，并将任职这些职位的机会对本宗族的成员敞开。
自唐代开始，朝廷改革了科举制度(imperial examination system),
试图根除这种现象。
参考译文：
from the qin dynasty to the late qing dynasty,the chinese government divided chinese people into four classes:landlord, peasant, craftsman and
【篇二：英语六级作文翻译必背】
一、常用句型
一)原因
1.a number of factors might contribute to (lead to )(account
for ) the phenomenon(problem).
2. the change in https://www.360docs.net/doc/7817994564.html,rgely results from the fact that...
3. we may blame ...，but the real causes are...
4.another contributing factor (cause ) is ...
二)比较
1.the advantages of a are much greater than those of b.
2.for all the disadvantages， it has its compensating advantages.
3.a and b has several points in common.
4. people used to think ...， but things are different now.
三)批驳
1．there is a grain of truth in these statements， but they ignore a more important fact.
2．some people say ...， but it does not hold water.
3．it makes no sense to argue for ...
4．too much stress placed on ... may lead to ...
四)后果
1. it may give rise to a host of problems.
2. the immediate result it produces is ...
3. it will exercise a profound influence upon...
4. its consequence can be so great that...
五)举例
1．a good case in point is ...
2．such examples might be given easily.
六)证明
1．no one can deny the fact that ...
2．recent studies indicate that ...
3．there is sufficient evidence to show that ...
七)开篇
1．many nations have been faced with the problem of ...
2．never in our history has the idea that ... been so popular. 3．faced with ...， quite a few people argue that ...
4．according to a recent survey， ...
5．with the rapid development of ......
八)结尾
1. from what has been discussed above， we can draw the conclusion that ...
2. it is high time that strict measures were taken to stop ...
3. with the efforts of all parts concerned， the problem will be solved thoroughly.
九)解释原因的
1.to begin with， then， furthermore， finally(强烈推荐)
2.to start with， next， in addition， finally(强烈推荐)
3.first and foremost， besides， last but not least(强烈推荐)
4.most important of all， moreover， finally
5.on the one hand， on the other hand(适用于两点的情况)
6.for one thing， for another thing(适用于两点的情况)
十)前后连接词
then， therefore， consequently， accordingly， hence， as a result， for this reason，
so that
二、词汇替换
1.individuals，characters， folks 替换(people ，persons)
2.positive， favorable， rosy (美好的)promising (有希望的)，perfect， pleasurable ， excellent， outstanding， superior 替
换 good
3.dreadful， unfavorable， poor， adverse， ill (有害的)替换
bad 。如果 bad 做表语，可以有 be less impressive 替换。 eg.an army of college students indulge themselves in playing games，enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. when it approaches to graduation ，as a result，they find their academic records are less impressive
4.(an army of， an ocean of， a sea of， a multitude of ，a
host of， many， if not most)替换 many.注：用 many， if not most 一定要小心，many 后一定要有词。 eg. many individuals，
if not most， har bor the idea that….同理用 most， if not all ，
替换 most.
5. a slice of， quiet a few ， several 替换 some
6.harbor the idea that， take the attitude that， hold the view that， it is widely shared that， it is universally acknowledged that)替换 think (因为是书面语，所以要加 that)
7.affair ，business ，matter 替换 thing
8. shared 替换 common
9.reap huge fruits 替换 get many benefits )
10.for my part ，from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion
11.increasing(ly)，growing 替换 more and more( 注意没有growingly 这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用 increasing/growing.修饰形容词，副词用 increasingly.)eg.sth has gained growing popularity. sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.
12.little if anything，或 little or nothing 替换 hardly
13.beneficial， rewarding 替换 helpful
14.shopper，client，consumer，purchaser，替换 customer
15.exceedingly，extremely， intensely 替换 very
16.hardly necessary，hardly inevitable …… 替换 unnecessary，avoidable
17.sth appeals to sb， sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 替换 sb take interest in / sb. be interested in
18.capture one’s attention 替换attract one’s attention.
19.facet，demension，sphere 替换 aspect
20.be indiicative of ，be suggestive of ，be fearful of 替换indicate， suggest ，fear
21.give rise to， lead to， result in， trigger 替换 cause.
22. there are several reasons behind sth 替换..reasons for sth
23.desire 替换 want.
24.pour attention into 替换 pay attention to
25.bear in mind that 替换 remember
26. enjoy， possess 替换 have(注意 process 是过程的意思)
27. interaction 替换 communication
28.frown on sth 替换 be against ， disagree with sth
29.to name only a few， as an example 替换 for example， for instance
30. next to / virtually impossible替换 nearly / almost
impossible
31. believe， claim， maintain， argue， insist， hold the opinion/ belief that替换think
三、常用短语
1.经济的快速发展 the rapid development of economy
2.人民生活水平的显著提高/稳步增长the remarkable
improvement/ steady growth of peoples living standard
3.先进的科学技术 advanced science and technology
4.面临新的机遇和挑战 be faced with new opportunities and challenges
5.人们普遍认为it is commonly believed/ recognized that…
6.社会发展的必然结果the inevitable result of social development
7.引起了广泛的公众关注arouse wide public concern/ draw
public attention
8.不可否认it is un deniable that…/ there is no denying that…
9.热烈的讨论/争论 a heated discussion/ debate
10.有争议性的问题 a controversial issue
11.完全不同的观点 a totally different argument
12.一些人…而另外一些人…some people…while others…
13.就我而言/就个人而言 as far as i am concerned， / personally，
14.就…达到绝对的一致reach an absolute consensus on…
15.有充分的理由支持 be supported by sound reasons
16.双方的论点 arguments on both sides
17.发挥着日益重要的作用 play an increasingly important role
in…
18.对…必不可少be indispensable to…
19.正如谚语所说as the proverb goes：
20.…也不例外…be n o exception
21.对…产生有利/不利的影响 exert positive/ negative effects
on…
22.利远远大于弊 the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.
23.导致，引起 lead to/ give rise to/ contribute to/ result in
24.复杂的社会现象a complicated social phenomenon
25.责任感/成就感 sense of responsibility/ sense of achievement
26.竞争与合作精神sense of competition and cooperation
27.开阔眼界 widen ones horizon/ broaden ones vision
28.学习知识和技能acquire knowledge and skills
29.经济/心理负担financial burden / psychological burden
30.考虑到诸多因素take many factors into account/ consideration
31.从另一个角度 from another perspective
32.做出共同努力make joint efforts
33.对…有益be beneficial / conducive to…
34.为社会做贡献make contributions to the society
35.打下坚实的基础lay a solid foundation for…
36.综合素质 comprehensive quality
37.无可非议 blameless / beyond reproach
39.致力于/投身于be committed / devoted to…
40.应当承认 admittedly，
41.不可推卸的义务 unshakable duty
42.满足需求satisfy/ meet the needs of…
43.可靠的信息源 a reliable source of information
44.宝贵的自然资源 valuable natural resources
46.方便快捷 convenient and efficient
47.在人类生活的方方面面 in all aspects of human life
48.环保(的) environmental protection / environmentally friendly
49.社会进步的体现 a symbol of society progress
50.科技的飞速更新 the ever-accelerated updating of science and technology
51.对这一问题持有不同态度 hold different attitudes towards this issue
52.支持前/后种观点的人people / those in fovor of the former/ latter opinion
53.有/提供如下理由/证据have/ provide the following reasons/ evidence
54.在一定程度上to some extent/ degree / in some way
55.理论和实践相结合integrate theory with practice
56.…必然趋势an irresistible trend of…
57.日益激烈的社会竞争 the increasingly fierce social competition
58.眼前利益 immediate interest/ short-term interest
59.长远利益 interest in the long run
60.…有其自身的优缺点…has its merits and demerits/ advantages and disadvantages
61.扬长避短 exploit to the full ones favorable conditions and avoid unfavorable ones
62.取其精髓，去其糟粕 take the essence and discard the dregs.
63.对…有害 do harm to / be harmful to
64.交流思想/情感/信息 exchange ideas/ emotions/ information
65.跟上…的最新发展 keep pace with / keep abreast with the latest development of…
66.采取有效措施来… take effective measures to do sth.
67.…的健康发展the healthy development of…
68.有利有弊 every coin has its two sides. no garden without weeds.
69.对…观点因人而异views on…vary from person to person.
70.重视attach great importance to…
71.社会地位 social status
72.把时间和精力放在…上focus time and energy on…
73.扩大知识面 expand ones scope of knowledge
74.身心两方面 both physically and mentally
75.和…直接/间接相关be directly / indirectly related to…
76.提出折中提议 set forth a compromise proposal
78.缓解压力/减轻负担 relieve stress/ burden
79.优先考虑… give (top) priority to sth.
80.与…相比compared with…/ in comparison with
81.相反 on the contrary.
82.代替 replace/ substitute / take the place of
83.经不起推敲 cannot bear closer analysis / cannot hold water
84.提供就业机会 offer job opportunities
85.社会进步的反映 mirror of social progress
86.毫无疑问 undoubtedly，/ there is no doubt that…
87.增进相互了解 enhance/ promote mutual understanding
88.充分利用 make full use of / take advantage of
89.承受更大的工作压力 suffer from heavier work pressure
90.保障社会的稳定和繁荣 guarantee the stability and prosperity of our society
91.更多地强调put more emphasis on…
92.适应社会发展 adapt oneself to the development of society
93.实现梦想 realize ones dream/ make ones dream come true
94.主要理由列举如下 the main reasons are listed as follows：
95.首先 first，firstly，in the first place， to begin with
96.其次 second，secondly，in the second place， besides，in addition， additionally， moreover， furthermore
97.最后finally， last but not the least， lastly，
98.总而言之 all in all， to sum up， in summary， in a word，
99.我们还有很长的路要走 we still have a long way to go.
100.加大了…的可能性 increase the chances of
四、谚语
1.practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
2.god helps those who help themselves. 天助自助者。
3.easier said than done. 说起来容易做起来难。
4.where there is a will，there is a way. 有志者事竟成。
5.one false step will make a great difference. 失之毫厘，谬之千里。
6.slow and steady wins the race. 稳扎稳打无往而不胜。
7.a fall into the pit， a gain in your wit. 吃一堑，长一智。
8.experience is the mother of wisdom. 实践出真知。
9.all work and no play makes jack a dull boy. 只工作不休息，聪明孩子也变傻。
10.beauty without virtue is a rose without fragrance. 无德之美犹如没有香味的玫瑰，徒有其表。
11.more hasty，less speed. 欲速则不达。
12.its never too old to learn. 活到老，学到老。
13.all that glitters is not gold. 闪光的未必都是金子。
14.a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.千里之行始于足下。
15.look before you leap. 三思而后行。
16.rome was not built in a day. 伟业非一日之功。
17.great minds think alike. 英雄所见略同。
18.well begun，half done. 好的开始等于成功的一半。
19.it is hard to please all. 众口难调。
20.out of sight，out of mind. 眼不见，心不念。
21.facts speak plainer than words. 事实胜于雄辩。
22.call back white and white back. 颠倒黑白。
23.first things first. 凡事有轻重缓急。
24.ill news travels fast. 坏事传千里。
25.a friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。
26.live not to eat，but eat to live. 活着不是为了吃饭，吃饭为了活着。
27.action speaks louder than words. 行动胜过语言。
28.east or west，home is the best. 金窝银窝不如自家草窝。
29.its not the gay coat that makes the gentleman. 君子在德不在衣。
30.beauty will buy no beef. 漂亮不能当饭吃。
31.like and like make good friends. 趣味相投。
32.the older， the wiser. 姜是老的辣。
33.do as romans do in rome. 入乡随俗。
34.an idle youth，a needy age. 少壮不努力，老大徒伤悲。
35.as the tree，so the fruit. 种瓜得瓜，种豆得豆。
36.to live is to learn，to learn is to better live. 活着为了学习，
学习为了更好的活着。
【篇三：六级翻译写作评分标准】
六级翻译评分标准
（一）翻译题型描述
翻译部分测试学生把汉语所承载的信息用英语表达出来的能力，所
占分值比例为15%，考试时间30分钟。翻译题型为段落汉译英。翻译内容涉及中国的历史、文化、经济、社会发展等。四级长度为
140-160个汉字，六级长度为180-200个汉字。
（二）翻译评分标准
本题满分为15分，成绩分为六个档次：13-15分、10-12分、7-9分、4-6分、1-3分和0分。各档次的评分标准见下表：
档次评分标准
13-15分译文准确表达了原文的意思。用词贴切，行文流畅，基本
上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。
10-12分译文基本上表达了原文的意思。文字通顺、连贯，无重大
语言错误。
7-9分译文勉强表达了原文的意思。用词欠准确，语言错误相当多，其中有些是严重语言错误。
4-6分译文仅表达了一小部分原文的意思。用词不准确，有相当多
的严重语言错误。1-3分译文支离破碎。除个别词语或句子，绝大部分文字没有表达原文意思。 0分未作答，或只有几个孤立的词，或
译文与原文毫不相关。
六级写作评分标准
(一) 作文评分原则
1. cet作文题采用总体评分(global scoring)方法。阅卷人员就总的
印象给出奖励分(reward scores),而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。
2. 从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个
统一体，作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清
楚而确切地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上
的障碍。
3. 避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括满分;该给低分的给低分，包括0分，一名阅卷人员在所阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几
种分数。
(二) 作文评分标准
1. 本题满分为15分。
2. 阅卷标准共分五等: 2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准
样卷一至二份。
3. 阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数(如8分)相似，即定为该分数(即8分)，若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数，即
可加一分(即9分)或减一分(即7分)，但不得加或减半分。
4. 评分标准：
2分……条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。
5分……基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语
言错误。
8分……基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯;语
言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。
11分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。
14分……切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性好。基本上无语
言错误，仅有个别小错。