短文改错专项训练(一)

短文改错专项训练

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

第一篇：

The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I’ll have during the winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They don’t want me go out. They are afraid I will be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Besides, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To lose more freedom, I will try to persuade them.

第二篇：

Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she

knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.

第三篇：

One day, my whole family went to climb the big hill. My father and mother told my elder sister and I that the first one to get to the top of the hill would be give a toy. Hear this, we began to run up. At first I kept ahead, but a few minute later my sister was ahead me. However, I didn’t give up. I reached the top firstly in the end. We enjoy the beautiful scenery and had a picnic on the top of the hill. I was the most happiest one all the time, because I not only won a toy and also learnt that one shouldn’t give up easily.

第四篇：

Dear Miss Li,

How are you? Are you still busy at your work at that school? I’m writing to tell you anything about my new school here. This is a beautiful school with many trees and flowers in it. The classrooms were big and bright. The modern library is full of books on different subject. Every Wednesday afternoon we can go there and lend books. Teachers here are strict in their work and this is what the school is famous. Classes and

homework don’t take up all your time. After the supper, we usually gather to see the CCTV news so that we can learn that has happened in this world. How luckily I am to be a student in such a wonderful school!

第五篇：

When tea and coffee was first introduced to Europe in 18th century, people thought they were harmful. So a king of Sweden decided to find out whether this was true and not. It happened that there were two brothers who were in prison at the time. The king ordered one of them drink tea every day and the other coffee. Both of him lived many years without any problem. At last the one who had drink tea every day died at the age of 83 and the other one lived even long. Because of this today Sweden is one of the country where many tea and coffee are drunk.

第六篇：

Dear Bob,

I’m glad to hear of you. I’ve found suitable house for you. The house is on Fang Cao Street, that is not far from Jianxin Chinese School. It is a flat on the third floor of a building. It has three rooms, a living-room, a bathroom or a kitchen. The mirror, the basin and the bathtub is very conveniently for you. In the living room, there is a bed, a sofa and a desk with two chair. The total size is 25 square metres and the rent is 500 yuan

a month. Will you be satisfied with this a flat, or you want other one? Just let me know, I’ll try my best to helping you.See you.

Yours,

Li Hua

第七篇：

My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.

We lived in a comfortably double room with a big bath. What I like best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.

It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.