2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错(6)及答案

2014届高考英语二轮复习突破：短文改错

1.短文改错

Dear Diana,

Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne’s friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ and made our own way to home.

Much love,

Fiona

2.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第十一处起）不计分。

Last Sunday I witnessed a traffic accident on our way home. I was wandering down the sidewalk while there went loud crash. Two taxis crashed into each other about ten meters far away. I went up and found the two drivers bad injured, bleeding and trap in the taxis. Luckily, they were rescued on time because people came to help them and called an ambulance. As was clear that the taxi drivers were so eager to take more passengers that they drove too fast. It reflected their lack of concern for the safe of both others and them.

3.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(/)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at relaxing myself. I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I’ll have during the winter holiday! However, my parents think different. They don’t want me go out. They are afraid I’ll be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Beside, they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To get more freedom, I will try to persuade them.

4.

假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。

修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分

The day before yesterday, my classmates and me went to the park near my school. Can you guess that what we did there? Not for amusement but to take part in a volunteer task. They reached the park at nine o'clock. The whole class divided into three groups. Group One planted trees and water flowers. Group Two picked up litter leaving by the tourists and cleaned all the benches. The group which I was in wiped all the equipments in the Children's Playground. All of us worked hardly. Before noon we finished working. Each of us fell a little bit tired, so we were happy because we had done a good deed.

5.短文改错

I was real sad when I found my bicycle went wrong again. Tired of repairing it again

and again, I decided buy a new one. After school, I went to a shop locating in the

center of the city with a friend called Jack. The black bicycle attracted my eyes as

soon as we went into the store. It looked so cool that I could hardly wait to ride it. The shopkeepers told us that it was the latest bicycle. He wanted to charge me for 800 yuan,

that was too high for me. I just couldn’t afford such an expensive one. Then I choose

another one, which cost him only 200 yuan. It was not so it was much better than the old one.

6.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.

试卷答案

1.第一句：have----had

第二句：for----of

第三句：Unfortunate----Unfortunately

第四句：第一个for----as; mile----miles

第五句：unless-----until/till

第六句：here----there; as 后加a

第七句：They---We; 去掉to

2.

Last Sunday I witnessed a traffic accident on our way home. I was wandering down the sidewalk

my

while there went ∧ loud crash. Two taxis crashed into each other about ten meters far away. when a

I went up and found the two drivers bad injured, bleeding and trap in the taxis. Luckily, they were

badly trapped

rescued on time for people came to help them and called an ambulance. As was clear that the taxi

in It

drivers were so eager to take more passengers that they drove too fast. It reflected their lack of

concern for the safe of both others and them.

safety themselves

3.

The winter holiday is coming, which made me excited. I have been looking forward at

makes to

relaxing myself. I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie. I think I

movies

can play the basketball with my classmates. How a wonderful time I’ll have during the

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are afraid I’ll be knocked down by a truck, fallen off a tree, or fight with others. Beside,

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they are afraid I will lose my way. I hate being treated like a bird keeping in a cage. To

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get more freedom, I will try to persuade them.

4.

The day before yesterday, my classmates and me went to the park near my school. Can you

I

gues s that what we did there? Not for amusement but to take part in a volunteer labour. They

We reached the park at nine o'clock. The whole class∧divided into three groups. Group One

was

planted trees and water flowers. Group Two picked up litter leaving by the tourists and cleaned watered left

all the benches. The group which I was in wiped all the equipments in the Children's Playground.

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All of us worked hardly. Before noon we finished working. Each of us fell a little bit tired, so we hard felt but

were happy because we had done a good deed.

5.1 real ---really 2 decided 后加to 3 locating –located

4 The –A

5 shopkeepers –shopkeeper

6 for 去掉

7 that –which 8 choose –chose 9 him –me 10 so –but

6.

When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One

friends one

day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my fathe r∧the money.

which for

But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I I

went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a when

month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to later gave

school on my own bicycle.