2019届二轮复习短文改错10篇训练之五(8页word版)

2019届二轮复习短文改错10篇训练之五

[一]

Over the past half century，using chemical fertilizers become very common in farming.Many farmers welcomed themselves as a great way to stop crop disease and increased production.Recently，however，scientists have been found that long-term use of these fertilizers can cause damage to the land and，even more dangerous，to people’s healthy.

With these discoveries，some farmers are beginning to turn to organic farming，that is simply farming with using any chemicals.There is many different organic farming methods.All of them have the same of goal：to grow good food and avoid damage the environment or people’s health.答案

Over the past half century，using chemical fertilizers

∧

has become

very common in farming.Many farmers welcomed themselves

them

as a great way

to stop crop disease and increased

increase

production.Recently，however，

scientists have been

found

finding

that l ong-term use of these fertilizers can

cause damage to the land and，even more dangerous，to people’s healthy health

.

With these discoveries，some farmers are beginning to turn to organic

farming，

that

which

is simply farming

with

without

using any chemicals.There

is

are

many different organic farming methods.All of them have the same ofgoal：

to grow good food and avoid

damage

damaging

the environment or people’s health.

[二]

One day Li Ping was riding in the street when the old man came across the street without noticing her.The old man knocked down.Instead of help him stand up，Li Ping shouted at the old man angrily.The old man said

nothing more.Then Li Ping rode away at a high speed.Several minutes late，she remembered her shoes which had been on the backseat of the bicycle，and now they are missing.She hurried back to the place that the accident took place.Much to his surprise，Li Ping found the old man waiting her.She felt really ashamed when the old man handed the shoe back to her.

答案

One day Li Ping was riding in the street when the

an

old man came across

the street without noticing her.The old man

∧

was knocked down.Instead of

help

helping

him stand up，Li Ping shouted at the old man angrily.The old man said nothing more.Then Li Ping rode away at a high speed.Several minutes late

later

，she remembered her shoes which had been on the backseat of the

bicycle，and now they

are

were

missing.She hurried back to the place

that

where

the accident took place.Much to his

her

surprise，Li Ping found the old man

waiting ∧

for her.She felt really ashamed when the old man handed the

shoe shoes

back to her.

28．答案the→an

解析此处表示泛指，“一个老人”，又由old是元音音素开头，故把the改为an。

29．答案knocked前加was

解析句意为：老人被撞倒。此处用一般过去时的被动语态，故在knocked前加was。

30．答案help→helping

解析instead of是复合介词，后面用名词或动名词作宾语，故把help改为helping。

31．答案删除more

解析句意为：这位老人什么都没说。more在这里是多余的，故删除more。32．答案late→later

解析句意为：几分钟之后。故把late改为later。

33．答案are→were

解析因为叙述的是一件过去的事，故用一般过去时，把are改为were。34．答案that→where

解析the place作先行词，在定语从句中作地点状语，应用where引导定语从句，故把that改为where。

35．答案his→her

解析根据上一句“She hurried back...”可知是“女孩”，故把his改为her。36．答案waiting后加for

解析固定搭配：wait for sb.等待某人。故在waiting后加for。

37．答案shoe→shoes

解析句意为：老人把鞋递给她。鞋是两只，故把shoe改为shoes。

[三]

I came across a article about a doctor called Lin Qiaozhi on chance.One of her books explained how to cut the death rate from having and caring for babies caught my eye.Then I do some research by raising some question about her.Further reading made me to realize it was hard work and determined as well as her gentle nature that got her into medical school.And that made her succeed was her kindness and consideration.She often went lately at night to deliver a baby for a poor family.I was excited and wanted to carry her career.

答案

I came across

a

an

article about a doctor called Lin Qiaozhi

on

by

chance.One of her books

explained

explaining

how to cut the death rate from having

and caring for babies caught my eye.Then I do

did

some research by raising

some question questions

about her.Further reading made me to realize it was hard work and determined determination

as well as her gentle nature that got her into medical school.And that what

made her succeed was her kindness and consideration.She often went

lately late at night to deliver a baby for a poor family.I was excited and wanted to carry ∧on her career.

[四]

They knew fall had arrived in Canada ，for they saw the red maple tree and frost on the ground.At the top of CN Tower ，they saw the misty cloud that rise from the great Niagara Falls.There was a pity that they couldn’t go as farther as Ottawa.The train arrived in Montreal in the next morning.They found Montreal was a French-spoken country because there were signs and ads on French.They spent the afternoon in lovely shops and visited artists in their workplaces besides the water.

答案

They knew fall had arrived in Canada ，for they saw the red maple tree trees

and frost on the ground.At the top of ∧the CN Tower ，they saw the misty

cloud that rise rose from the great Niagara Falls.There It

was a pity that they couldn’t go as farther far

as Ottawa.The train arrived in Montreal in the next morning.They found Montreal was a

French-spoken French-speaking country because there were signs and ads on in

French.They spent the afternoon in lovely shops and visited visiting artists in their workplaces besides beside

the water. [五]

I’d like to talking about my most memorable experience.It was the trip to Australia I had three years before with my dance group to participate in international dance festival.It was the first time I had travelled by plane in my life.My mum worried a lot ，so everything went smoothly.I stayed there for two week and it was the happiest time in my life.Besides our performances there ，we have much excitement.We spent on almost every morning sunbathing on the beautiful beach and swam in the blue sea.But warmly Australian nights were which I adored most of all.It was a time of joy ，light ，music and summer parties.

答案

I’d like to talking talk

about my most memorable experience.It was the trip to Australia I had three years

before ago with my dance group to participate in ∧an international dance festival.It was the first time I had travelled by plane in my life.My mum worried a lot ，

so but everything went smoothly.I stayed there for two week weeks

and it was the happiest time in my life.Besides our performances there ，we

have had much excitement.We spent on almost every morning sunbathing on the beautiful beach and swam swimming in the blue sea.But warmly warm Australian nights were which what I adored most of all.It was a time of joy ，light ，music and summer parties.

29．答案 talking→talk

解析 考查动词不定式。would like to do sth.想要做某事。故talking 改为 talk 。

30．答案 before→ago

解析 考查副词。three years ago 3年前。故before 改为ago 。

31．答案 international 前加an

解析考查冠词。参加一个国际舞蹈节。international的首字母发音为元音，故international前加an。

32．答案so→but

解析考查连词。句意为：我母亲很担忧，但是一切进展顺利。前后为转折关系，故so改为but。

33．答案week→weeks

解析考查名词单复数。week为可数名词，根据前面的two可知应该用复数形式。故week改为weeks。

34．答案have→had

解析本文主要回忆过去发生的事情，故应用一般过去时。故have改为had。35．答案删除on

解析考查介词。spend为及物动词，后面直接跟宾语。故删除on。

36．答案swam→swimming

解析考查动名词。swimming in the blue sea应该与前面的sunbathing on the beautiful beach并列。故swam改为swimming。

37．答案warmly→warm

解析考查形容词。此处应该使用形容词修饰名词Australian nights。故warmly 改为warm。

38．答案which→what

解析考查表语从句。本句是一个表语从句，且从句中 I adored most of all 缺宾语。故which改为what。

[六]

Last month I paid a visit the moon with my friend.Before we left，I was told the force of gravity would change three time on our journey.Then we took up.As we left the earth，I became very heavily.Gradually the weight lessen.When I was in space，it was disappeared.We floated weightlessly around in the cabin and I cheered up.When I was on the moon，I was surprising to find even walking needed a bit of practice now that gravity changed.The returning of the earth was very frightened.We were amazed to watch fire broke out on the outside of the ship.

答案

Last month I paid a visit ∧

to the moon with my friend.Before we left，

I was told the force of gravity would change three

time

times

on our

journey.Then we took

up

off

.As we left the earth，I became very

heavily heavy .Gradually the weight

lessen

lessened

.When I was in space，it was

disappeared.We floated weightlessly around in the cabin and I cheered

up.When I was on the moon，I was surprising

surprised

to find even walking needed

a bit of practice now that gravity changed.The returning of

to

the earth was

very frightened

frightening .We were amazed to watch fire

broke

break

out on the outside

of the ship.

[七]

Finally，Yong Hui and Wang Peng could began to talk about menus and balanced diets in the peace.They found neither of their restaurants offer a balanced diet.So they decided to combine our ideas and provide a balanced menu with food full energy and fibre.Their balanced diets became such a success that before long Wang Peng became much slim and Yong Hui put on more weigh.After some time the two found that their business cooperations had turned into a personally one.At last they got married and lived happy ever after.

答案

Finally，Yong Hui and Wang Peng could began

begin

to talk about menus and

balanced diets in the peace.They found neither of their restaurants

offer offered a balanced diet.So they decided to combine

our

their

ideas and

provide a balanced menu with food

full

filled

或

with

of

energy and fibre.Their

balanced diets became such a success that before long Wang Peng became

much slim

slimmer and Yong Hui put on more

weigh

weight

.After some time the two found

that their business cooperations

cooperation

had turned into a

personally

personal

one.At

last they got married and lived

happy

happily

ever after.

[八]

As is often the case，when people are attending to meetings，having meals or waiting for buses，you can always find them addicting to their phones，completely ignoring others.

This is a really common phenomena in our life.The reason is why smart phones nowadays can be used for people to play mobile games and kept in touch with friends through QQ and WeChat.Therefore，too much exposure to phones are bad for people in terms of health.Moreover，people involved in phones fail to communicate well with these around them.

As far as I am concerned，people should wisely make use of their phones to help their work and study.Meanwhile，care much about their family and friends rather than mobile phones.

答案

As is often the case，when people are attending to meetings，having

meals or waiting for buses，you can always find them addicting

addicted

to their

phones，completely ignoring others.

This is a really common

phenomena

phenomenon

in our life.The reason is

why

that

smart phones nowadays can be used for people to play mobile games and

kept keep in touch with friends through QQ and WeChat.

Therefore

However

，too much