高中北师大版英语选修八同步检测：Unit 24 Society写作园地24含答案

[感悟范文]你们班同学以“什么是幸福”为主题举行了一场讨论会，请根据以下不同观点，以“On happiness”为题写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对幸福的看法。

1．有人认为有钱就是幸福；2．有人认为健康就是幸福；3．有人认为从父母那里得到财富就是幸福；4．你自己的观点。

要求：1.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2．词数100左右。

[范文]Happiness means different things to different people. Some students believe that possessing a great deal of money is the secret to happiness. They think if they have much money, they will be able to buy anything they want. Some students think happiness means good health. If a person is in good health, he will enjoy whatever he likes. Many other students wish to have much wealth from their parents. In this way they don't have to work hard and can have everything. I don't agree with the above points. We can't buy many important things with money, such as health, love and knowledge. I value knowledge, which makes me happy, for I can do much for mankind with knowledge. Although different people value happiness differently, my “wealth” of happiness is in my study.[技法讨论]写议论文时，要明确写作的主题和对象，掌握正确的用词和格式。

写作时一般遵循以下几个步骤：(1)提出论点。

首先要仔细审题，在此基础上根据对题目的理解和要求提出论点。

论点要简明扼要、旗帜鲜明、通俗易懂、富有理性。

(2)给出论据。

论据是用来说明论点的，要从各个不同的角度和层次给出论据，层层展开，步步深入。

论据要典型，说理性要强，既可以是身边的实例或可靠的报道，也可以是名人名言等。

总之，论据要充分，这样才能说明问题。

(3)得出结论。

有了论据，就要围绕论点进行合理的分析，作出恰当的逻辑推理和判断，以此证明论点的正确性，最后推出结论。

黄金表达(1)相关的连接词有：on the contrary, all in all, in short, generally, worse still, on the other hand, in conclusion, as a consequence, also, personally, furthermore, definitely, surely, undoubtedly, obviously, in addition, moreover, consequently, clearly, besides, as well, in my opinion, for the sake of, last but not the least, to begin with, firstly (first)．..(2)句式：The main reason is that... I can't agree more.Another thing we can't forget is that...There is every reason to believe that...As we all know...黄金格作文导入：第一段：Recently we've had a discussion about whether we should...(导入话题)Our opinions are divided on this topic.(观点有分歧)正文：第二段：Most of the students are in favour of it.(正方观点)Here are the reasons. First...Second... Finally...(列出2～3个赞成的理由)第三段：However, the others are strongly against it.(反方观点)Their reasons are as follows. In the first place... What's more... In addition...(列出2～3个反对的理由)结论：第四段：Personally speaking, the advantages overweigh the disadvantages, for it will do us more good than harm, so I support it.(个人观点)亮点分析：亮点一：本文具有论点、论据和论证三个要素，符合议论文的写作特点。

既有广度，也有深度和力度，同时加入了个人观点。

亮点二：作者在写作过程中使用了很多复合句式，如：Some students believe that...; They think if they..., they will be able to (I)value knowledge, which makes me happy, for I can do...等等。

[类文演练]上个星期你们班同学就“现代社会是否需要孔子思想”进行了一次讨论。

讨论结果如下表所示。

请根据表中内容写一篇英语短文。

注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

[联想词汇]1．一方面____________ one thing答案：for2．为……做出巨大贡献make great contributions ________答案：to3．某种意义上____________ a way答案：in4．对……有积极影响have positive effects ____________答案：on[连词成句]1．Last week we had a discussion about ____________ we still need Confucian thought in modern society.上星期我们班就“现代社会是否需要孔子思想”进行了一次讨论。

答案：whether2．About 60% of the students in my class think ____________ necessary __________________ Confucian thought.大约60%的同学认为，学习孔子思想是必要的。

答案：it；to study3．But every coin has ________________________.任何事物都具有两面性。

答案：two sides4．I think Confucian thought still ____________ some ____________________________ our society.我认为孔子思想仍对我们的社会有积极影响。

答案：has；positive effects on[连句成章]_______________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ 答案：Last week we had a discussion about whether we still need Confucian thought in modern society. About 60% of the students in my class think it necessary to study Confucian thought. For one thing, more and more people in different countries are bursting to study it, showing that it is still treasured in the world. For another, Confucian thought is believed to have made great contributions to the peace of the world.But every coin has two sides. About 40% of the students in my class insist Confucian thought is outdated. In a way it limits the development of the society.Different people have different opinions. I think Confucian thought still has some positive effects on our society.。