一篇典型中国式英语--抗生素滥用论文的修改稿

这是一篇百度文库里一篇关于抗生素滥用的英文文章。该文章中有通篇的语法错误及用词不当。句子的表达不符合英语习惯，是一篇典型的Chinese English。其中我在括号里改过来一些。希望大家引以为戒，不要用中文的语言习惯来翻译英文。读完这篇文章，真的令人很难受！

English pharmaceutical thesis About antibiotics Title: is it a must that antibiotics would fail 1041301 张慧君

An antibiotic is a chemical substance produced by one organism that is destructive to another. The word antibiotic came from the word antibiosis a term coined in 1889 by Louis Pasteur's pupil Paul Vuillemin which means a process by which life could be used to destroy life. The history of antibiotic: dating from very ancient(brief introduction of its development) Long long ago:The ancient Egyptians, the Chinese（无定冠词）, and Indians of central America all used molds to treat infected wounds. In the late 1800s,with the growing acceptance of germ theory of disease.（句子成分不全，片语） The scientists began to be devoted to the research for drugs that would kill these disease-causing bacteria（bacteria-causing disease）. In 1871s.The surgeon Joseph Lister, began researching the phenomenon that urine contaminated with mold would not allow the successful growth of bacteria. This research has made great progress in 1928s,Sir Alexander Fleming observed that colonies of the bacterium Staphylococcus aureus could be destroyed by the mold Penicillium notatum, demonstrating antibacterial properties. penicillin was the original antibiotic. Therefore In 1942s,The manufacturing process for Penicillin G Procaine was invented by Howard Florey (1898–1968) and Ernst Chain (1906–1979). Penicillin could now be sold as a drug. Fleming, Florey, and Chain shared the 1945 Nobel Prize for medicine for their work on penicillin. In 1998s,first sold the antibiotic under the tradenames of Amoxicillin, Amoxil, and Trimox. Amoxicillin is a semisynthetic antibiotic. PAST: During World War 2,penicillin successfully made the death of wound infections lower. （it is a miracle that penicillin successfully lower the death rate of wound infections）.Even the prime minister of British Churchill has said:the penicillin ought to be used for the best troops. It could cure the most infections at that time. It extremely debases the death in bacteria infections. PRESENT CONDITION: The development of antibiotics has undergone centuries of time. Its great efficacy is absorbing. and it was a legend that penicillin could cure almost every bacterial diseases. We trust antibiotics even much more than the doctor for that doctors could make a mistake but antibiotic would hardly do that. Antibiotic( 无冠词) would make us recover soon（无生命名词不可用情态动词we may recover soon after we take antibiotic.)We have to pay a lot of money for the hospital. But, a pill of penicillin would be ok for our illness（what is more, some doctors prescribe a heavily dose of antibiotic to make a profit, in spite of the patient’s condition）. When we get drunk in（were content with） the perfect efficacy in the late 1900s, antibiotic resistance come into the stage（come out/come on the stage登上历史舞台，出场） and more and more people died in it（时态不一致）. They used the antibiotics for a long period of time. And the bacteria exists the antibiotic resistance. The existence of antibiotic-resistance bacteria creates the danger of （重复）life-threatening infections because they did not response （had no response/did not respond）to antibiotics. It is obvious that the bacteria has advanced （evolved）during the long time which is like the revolution of human being（定语从句无先行词）. Someone would say that human could develop another（a new） antibiotic to kill antibiotic-resistance bacteria. But（中国式，应该用however） you ought to realize that（the） fact that with the abuse of antibiotics, a new antibiotic-resistance bacteria appears every two year,（两个句子之间没有连接词while）the research on new antibiotics would cost you （need）ten or more years（中

国英语）. According to this truth, none of the companies would be willing to manufacture the antibiotics. Some hospital would give you antibiotics to earn money even if you illness（you） does not need them. Apart from the abuse among people, it is much more serious in domestic animals, livestock, poultry, and fish on（in） industrial farms .The farm people put large quantities（dose） of antibiotics in animals' forage to keep them away from illness and compensate for the unsanitary conditions in which they are breeded（breeding conditions）. Some studies showed that the drugs cause animals to grow faster and put on weight more efficiently, increasing meat producers' profits. It is not limited in several some plants. It is a common phenomenon in the whole society（field）. These animals with antibiotics accumulate in our bodies and then our bodies would react to it to create（严重的逻辑错误） a new antibiotic-resistance bacteria. This means this kind of antibiotic would lose the effect. It is certain that all of the cattles in China grow up with antibiotics. It is estimated that as much as（about） 80 to 90 percent of all antibiotics given to animals are not fully digested and eventually pass through the body and enter the environment. So the rate of the accumulating of