考研倒计时24小时：大作文真题解析(2)

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考研倒计时24小时：大作文真题解析
(2)

考研英语写作出题的总趋势和特点是从人与自然的关系向人与人的关系和个人体验方向转
移；另一个特点是选择的题材非常宽泛，可以从多种角度来写。出题范围一般贴近生活，均
为考生所熟悉的热点话题，比较容易取材，具有一定可写性。下面我们就往年真题来分析一
下大作文的写作方法。
【题目要求】
Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In
your essay, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) explain its intended meaning, and then
3) give your comments.
You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

【谋篇分析】
本幅漫画中有两名残疾人，一人左腿残疾，一人右腿残疾，可是他俩互相搀扶着，却能
够大跨步地飞快向前走，拐棍被抛在身后。漫画下面的两行文字“你一条腿，我一条腿；你
我一起，走南闯北”点明了漫画主题：该漫画讲述的应该是“合作的重要性”问题，通过合
作，可以弥补缺陷，克服困难，实现梦想，走向成功。
围绕这一主题，根据提纲要求，本文结构设计如下：
根据提纲中的信息1）describe the drawing briefly第一段简要描述图画内容，包括
两名残疾人相互搀扶快速前进的画面内容及漫画下面的文字内容；
根据提纲中的信息2）explain its intended meaning第二段揭示漫画的含义，以一项
调查为证，论述合作的重要性；
根据提纲中的信息3）give your comments第三、四段表明作者的看法，相互合作，可
以共渡难关，并引用名人名言结尾，意味深远。
【范文】
What an impressive cartoon it is in describing one of the most widespread social
phenomena concerning cooperation and communication. As issymbolically illustrated
in the cartoon, supporting each other with their powerful hands, two handicapped
adolescents are continuing their new journey on the ground. Crutches left behind,
they have successfully cracked the hard nut of lameness which might have confused
the majority of the disabled. The caption indicates, “You have merely one leg and
so do I. Helping each other, we can travel extensively.”

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Undoubtedly, we can deduce from the portrayal that the cartoonist is trying to
attract our attention to the issue cooperation makes success. According to a survey
conducted among a group of people who were in the same college class 10 years ago,
those who are ready to give their cooperation to others all become rich or managers
of all field, while not a single young man having difficulty in getting along with
their classmates becomes an executive or boss. Why those who are excellent in team
work tend to be managers or own their own enterprise in their later life? The answer
seems self-evident. On the one hand, if you are competent in profession, but have
difficulty in getting along with your colleagues and even your boss, you can hardly
survive the corporation. On the other hand, your chances of success are much higher
with wide circle of friends who are willing to cooperate with you to provide
information and resources.
It is my view that, first of all, we can frequently use the drawings to enlighten
the juvenile to learn to cooperate successfully with each other. On the other hand,
whatever difficulty or situation we are confronted with, those who have the spirit
of cooperation and team work are nearer to success.
Just as John Adams, the second U.S. president quoted from the ancient Greek
Aesop’s Fables,“United we stand, divided we fall.”
短文写作中，考生应注意文章是否切题，论据是否充分；在展开过程中应注意各段内容
是否围绕主题句展开，有无与主题无关的句子内容；句子之间、段落之间的连接要自然，逻
辑关系要清晰；句子结构要保持完整，人称、时态、动词变化等要保持一致，单词拼写、大
小写、标点要无误。这样才能写出一篇令人满意的文章。
考研成功难又不难，一旦大家开始准备就要全力以赴。自制力差的学生可以找几个研友，
互相激励，因为坚持下来也确实不容易，也看个人习惯，有的同学可能一个人学习更有效率；
在这个过程中更主要的还有大家坚持的信念，坚持完成一件事情本身就是成功。
在三百多天的日子里，老师会一直陪伴着大家，里边的每条微博、微信、咨询都是温暖
大家并激励大家前行的动力。奔跑吧，2016的考生们！
虽然有突破口、也有规律可循，但这并不意味着我们可以一劳永逸、高枕无忧，要知道，
想要精通世界上任何一门语言，除非有天生的语言天分，否则偷不得半分懒，只能勤勤恳恳
反复练习。一遍不懂读两遍，默念不行就大声念出来，遇到不认识的单词就查，不懂的句子
就静下心来拆分结构。总之，读书百遍、其义自现，英语学习之路上没有笨蛋，只有懒人。
综上就是小编给大家提供的高分技巧，技巧就是牢固的知识点和强悍的答题思路，预祝所有
考生2016考研有个好成绩。
小提示：目前本科生就业市场竞争激烈，就业主体是研究生，在如今考研竞争日渐激烈的
情况下，我们想要不在考研大军中变成分母，我们需要：早开始+好计划+正确的复习思路+
好的辅导班（如果经济条件允许的情况下）。2017考研开始准备复习啦，早起的鸟儿有虫
吃，一分耕耘一分收获。加油！