通知告示类英语作文

通知告示类英语作文
通知告示类英语作文

通知告示类英语作文

一. 书面通知

1. A Brief Introduction

1) What is a notice?

As an effective means of written communication, a notice gives information published by the appropriate authority. It is intended to publicize social events, to report on matters of general interest to staff, to inform staff of instructions, change of plan, new systems and regulations, and to make the staff conform to certain arrangements, etc.

一般告示类文体都需要写标题,如Notice或者Announcement。告示类文体主要用于说明或者传达某件事情、某项活动等,重在言简意赅。如果是关于活动的通知,需要说明活动的内容、时间、地点、参加人员范围以及其它必要细节。请注意通知的三大要素:1)时间;2)地点;3)内容。书面通知或告示应在题头中间写“Notice”,最后右下方写出通知的单位或者个人。2) How to write a notice?

The heading of the notice is usually in the middle of the page, in boldfaced words. For example,

NOTICE

ENGLISH EVENING LECTURE

1) The main information such as time, place, should be made distinct.

2) Give the name of the person who gives the notice.

3) Give the date when the notice is issued if necessary.

3) A notice should be:

1)Attractive (so that people will NOTICE it)

2)Simple and easy-to-read

3)Clear and specific

2. Some Samples

Sometimes a notice can be as

simple as:

注:这3个图片的通知也是海报。

MEETING NOTICE

April 12, 2010

A review of status of implementation of Right to Information Act, covering the following topics, will be held on April 17, 2010 (Saturday) at 11:00 AM in the Main Auditorium:

1. Review of state for uploading of manuals — shortcomings

2. Review of status for online filing of applications

3. Latest developments about implementation of RTI Act and identification of problem areas.

All the Public Information Officers / officers responsible for implementation of the RTI Act are requested to make it convenient to attend the said program.

DEPUTY DIRECTOR

Notice

All the students will go and visit No.2 Car Factory on Monday, October 8th. In the

3. Some Exercises

Exercise 1:As a member of the Students' Union, you want to hold a special lecture. Write a notice to the students to inform: 1)The topic of the lecture;2)Time and place;3)The professor who will give the lecture.

Special Lecture Notice

May 20, 2010

Title:Impact of 2008 Global Financial Crisis

Speaker: Prof. John Betts, University of Technology Sydney

Time:6:00-9:00 PM, May 27, 2010

Place: Multimedia Classroom on 6th floor, Yifu Building

Sponsored by th e Students’ Union

Exercise 2

Directions: Suppose you are an secretary of the English Department of X University. Write a notice to inform the teachers and students of this department of a lecture on crosscultural studies.You should write about 120 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead.

Notice

There is going to be a lecture, titled "Across Cultures: Digital Media and Literate Activity", in the meeting room of the English Department from 9:00 a.m. to 11:00 a.m. on Monday, July 11th. The lecture will be given by Professor Robert Johnson, who is from the Department of Englsih Literature of University of Pennsylvania. Professor Johnson is known for his unique probing of the many connections between literate activity and new information technologies. He will present, in his humorous style, the relation he found between culture and technological development, which you surely will enjoy very much.

All the teachers and students are welcome to attend this lecture.

English Department

通知:7月11日周一上午9点至11点将在英语系会议室举办一场题为"跨越文化:数码媒体和文化活动"的讲座。主讲人为罗伯特.约翰逊教授,来自宾西法尼亚大学的英语文学系。约翰逊教授对文化活动和新的信息技术之间的关系做了非常独到的研究,并因此而闻名。他将以幽默的风格展示他在文化和技术发展之间关系上的研究成果,相信你们都会很感兴趣。欢迎广大师生来参加本次讲座。英语系

Exercise 3

Directions: The famous opera "Cat" will be presented the theatre of your university

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead.

Notice

Due to bad weather condition, the badminton competition, organized by the College Badminton Club, will not be held in the "May Fouth" Field as it was scheduled. Instead, it will be moved to the Haidian Gymnasium, which is about ten mininutes' walk from the university. All club members, competitors, and audience students will meet in front of the West Gate of the university at 9:00 a.m., June 5th, to go there togehter. For those who will go by themselves, please refer to the map in below. The event will be last from 9:30 a.m. to 11:30 a. m. Cold drinks and snacks will be provided in the gymnasium.

College Badminton Club

通知:由于天气状况不佳,学院羽毛球俱乐部举办的羽毛球比赛原定于在五四运动场的计划将取消。活动将转移到距离学校10分钟路程的海淀体育馆举办。所有的俱乐部成员、参赛者、学生观众将于6月5日上午9点在学校的西门集合,一起前往体育馆。单独前往的同学,请参考下面的地图。活动时间为9:30到11:30。我们将在体育馆中提供冷饮和零食。学院羽毛球俱乐部。

Exercise 4

Directions: The Students’ Union of your department is planning a Chinese Speaking Contest. Write an announcement which covers the following information:

1、比赛目的、时间、地点;

2、参赛者的要求;

3、裁判和奖励的细节。

You should write about 120 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use Department of Chinese Language and Literature at the end of the announcement. Chinese Speaking Contest

Notice

December 22, 2007 To improve students’ ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities, the Students’ Union of Department of Chinese Language and Litera ture is organizing a school-wide Chinese speaking contest to be held on Saturday next week (29 December) at the Students’ Auditorium. Those who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Tuesday next week. Five professors will be invited to be judges. The first six winners will be given awards. Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.

The Students’ Union Department

of Chinese Language and Literature

Exercise 5

Directions: The Students' Union of your department is planning a Chinese Speaking Contest. Write an announcement which covers the following information:

1、the purpose of the contest;

2、time and place of the contest;

3、what is required of the candidates;

4、details of the judges and awards.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use Department of Chinese Language and Literature at the end of the announcement.

Chinese Speaking Contest

February 3, 2007 To improve students' ability to speak Chinese and enrich after-class activities, the Students' Union of Department of Chinese Language and Literature is organizing a school-wide Chinese speaking contest to be held on Saturday next week (10 February) at the Students' Auditorium. Those who are interested in taking part in it may sign up with the monitor of their classes before Tuesday next week. Five professors will be invited to be judges. The first six winners will be given awards. Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.

The Students' Union Department

of Chinese Language and Literature 附:万能句型:

There is going to be a lecture, titled... in the meeting room of ...from 10:00 to 12:00 on Monday, July 11th.

...which you surely will enjoy very much.

All the teachers and students are welcome to attend this lecture.

二. 口头通知

口头通知的开头应有称呼语,如“Attention, please!”、“Boys and girls”、“Ladies and gentleman”…等,或提醒听众注意的表达,如“May I have your attention, please!”结尾用“Thank you”。同时要注意通知的三大要素:1)时间;2)地点;3)内容。

1. 广播稿( 海啸)

Boys and girls,

May I have your attention, please? At the end of last year, a strong earthquake hit the west part of Indonesia, which brought on a terrible tsunami to some areas of western Asia. This disaster has caused millions of deaths and destroyed many beautiful cities. How terrible things are! Besides, millions more who have become homeless are in great need of help now.

At present many countries all over the world including China have sent rescue teams there and thousands of people in every corner of the world are donating money to show their concern for them.

It is true that many natural d isasters can’t be avoided sometimes. But at least we can do something to help the people in the tsunami-hit areas. So let’s offer our pocket money to them! Thank you.

2. 机场通知

Ladies and gentleman,

Attention, please! Because of the terrible weather, we have to change some of our plans.

The airport will be closed for about 12 hours. We are very sorry. Flight 1536 from Tokyo will be late for five hours and Flight 7270 to Shanghai will be late for 12 hours and we will provide free food and hotel service.

The tourist flight to Washington will take off at Hilton Airport. A bus will go there one hour later. Thank you.

三、启事

寻物启事是失主为寻找丢失的物件而写的一种公告性的应用文。它的主要格式有4个部分:

标题、正文、署名,以及联系人的姓名、地址和联系方式等。寻物启事重点要写清楚所丢失物品的特征和丢失的地点,以及失主的联系方式。

1.寻物启事

Lost

April 1st, 2007 Unfortunately, I left my_______ . Inside it were _______ . I’ll be very thankful if the finder returns it to me . My address is ______ . My telephone number is _______ .

Thank you !

Loser,

LI Ping 2.招领启事

Found

April 1st, 2007

I happened to find ______ on my way home yesterday, in which there is / are ____ . Loser is expected to claim it in our classroom.

Finder, LI Ping

Class 1, Grade 3

四、海报

海报是一种带有宣传广告性质的招贴,正文部分为具体内容,包括活动时间、地点一级出席的有关规定、主持或主办方等。其书写形式不拘一格,可按行排列,也可分项书写。

Lecture

Speaker:Prof. Jones of University of Southern California, USA.

Subject: American Literature

Time: September 24,2007, at 2:30 p.m.

Place: Room 405, the Teaching Building

Film News

Name:The Lord of the Rings

Time: 6:30 p.m. Saturday

Place:The cinema

Fare:Ten yuan each

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