2014年广州二模英语基础写作&任务型写作评讲

基础写作：

1.最近对500人进行了调查

Recently, a survey has been

conducted among 500 people / we have surveyed 500 people.

2.开展：carry out, conduct, do, make,

undertake, take

3.对（名人的）调查：in our survey of

celebrities

4.关于…的调查：a survey on

volunteering / about getting up early

5.（调查）表明：show, indicate,

reveal

6.主要的阅读方式：one’s favourite

way of reading / reading preferences

7.占多大比例：话题11

The people…amount to / add up to / reaches 42%

Students who prefer audio books account for 42%

represent/make up

8.电子书刊e-books, electronic

books

9.方便conv e n ien t, of great

conv e n ience

10.最新的up-to-date / latest

information (U)

11.表示原因：

for the reason that they can…

because (of), due to, on account of…, for reasons including that…, 12.纸质书报paper books, hard

copy books

13.比…更优have advantages over

14.长期的习惯long-term habit, be

used / accustomed to doing, form

a habit of

15.听listen to

16.不伤眼do little / less harm / no

harm to

17.可同时做家务while doing

housework / do housework at the

same time , meanwhile, in the mean time

18.多元化：

Become more diverse / varied

There are a variety of / various ways of reading /more kinds of 19.结论

Our survey showed that…

From our survey, …

20.重要的是：

What matters is that…

The important thing is that…

错误表达：A survey has been carried out with a theme of “what ways do you prefer to read and

why ”

任务型写作普遍问题：

1.不少同学的概括段缺少原文第二

段内容：how English has spread

（三词同型：spread-spread-spread）to the whole world.

不少同学把这一点写成：

English spread across the world

more than 400 years ago. 或

English overtook French and

German as the main language of

international communication.

2.概括段不可直接抄原句，如

English is probably the most

widely used language in the world

today.

The spread of English across the world began more than 400 years

ago.

A working knowledge of English

has become a requirement in a

number of fields.

可以用同义句来替换上述句子，但

如果与原句完全一致则“零”分。

3.总分17,18分的同学不少情况是行

数够了，但句型用词简单化，因此

要多背平时范文中的段落并仿写

或默写。

4.最后一点（举例论证）草草收尾，

说明没有整体把握全篇布局。

1.What’s more, learning English

can take us to the western

world which will enrich our

knowledge and broaden our

horizons.

2.