杨浦五角场恒高补习班一对一英语中考满分作文技巧

杨浦五角场恒高补习班一对一英语中考满分作文技巧
一、How to make a cake
Beginning:
Sample One:
Everyone likes to eat cakes which is sweet when you smell it, so almost no one can refuse it, especially girls. Now, I would like to show you the process of making a cake.
Sample Two:
It is meaningful/unforgettable for me today, because I learned how to make a cake. Now, I would like to show you the process of making a cake.
Sample Three:
Making cake is my hobby, and I often make cakes with my parents at home on weekends.
Body:
Sample One:
First of all, we should prepare well before making a cake. Flour, eggs, sugar and butter are the most important things which we can't lack for. Besides, milk is essential to make the cake taste soft. Second, mix milk, eggs, some sugar and a little butter up. Stir it until they are well mixed. Third, put the mixture into a baking tray, and put it in an oven and bake it afterwards. Finally, wait until the cake is cool and decorate it with my favourite food, such as some chocolates, strawberries or some cheese. Then it’s time to have it.
Sample Two:
First, mix the flour, sugar, butter and milk together to a thick flour paste. Second, put the paste into the cake mould. Set the oven at 200 degree C, and bake it for 20 mins and then let it cool
for half an hour. Third, put the cream and your favourite fruit over it, such as strawberries,mangoes and watermelons.
End
Sample One:
This is how I make the cake, do you want to try one by yourself?
Sample Two:
At the beginning, I think making a cake is a difficult thing to do. However, after making it, I think if I have patience and concentrate on what I do, I will certainly make it! How meaningful/unforggettable it is today!
分析：
这篇作文可用于技能、难忘的经历、爱好等话题。

题目汇编
1.2017长宁二模
94. Write at least 60 words on the topic “A story about______”.(以一个关于……的故事“为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。

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（注意：1. 在答题上将题目补充完整。

2. 短文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。

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A story about making a cake
2.2017虹口二模
94. Write a passage of at least 60 words on th e topic “My joy of living”（以“我的生活乐趣”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
生活有艰辛，也有乐趣，你的生活乐趣是什么？你为何觉得这是你的乐趣所在？你是怎么想的？怎么做的？
My joy of living is making a cake. Everytime I make a cake, I can concentrate on what I do. 过程
I really enjoy the process of making it, and the most important is I can share the cake I made with my parents and friends. This is my joy of living. How about yours?
3.2018嘉定一模
94. Write at least 60 words on the topic“_____ brings me happiness”（以“___为我带来快乐”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
我们的生活多姿多彩，在学习和生活中，总有一叠经历、习惯、爱好或一些人会为你带来快乐。

请结合自身经历，谈谈你的感想。

（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、学校及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。

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The following is for reference only（以下表达仅供参考）
*be full of
*make…happy
*be fond of
Making a cake brings me happiness
Everyone has his own hobby to make himself happy. So do I.
I am fond of making a cake, which can brings me happiness. I still remember the day I learned to make a cake. ...... During the process, I am full of curiosity and happiness and I can concentrate on what I do and the most important is I can share the cake I made with my parents and friends. How happy I am!
4.2018长宁二模
94. Write at least 60 words about the topic “I finished a task successfully” （请以‘我成功地完成了一项任务’为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格。

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你在初中四年的学习生活中一定完成过家长，学校和老师布置的一项任务。

请你简单描述一次完成任务的经历。

I still remember it was a sunny afternoon, my mother asked me to make a cake with her....
5.2018奉贤二模
94. Write at least 60 words on the topic "That day, I made a/an___________”(以“那天,我(做) 了一（个）_____________”为题,写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符号不占格) (注意:短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息,否则不予评分。

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生活中的每一次体验、每一段经历都为你的成长助力。

你或许交了一个新朋友、许了一个新愿望、作了一次新选择······，请分享一段你的经历，并说明这段经历是如何帮助你成长的。