高考概要写作范文上课讲义

Writing 1

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Yesterday Matt was sick.I picked up Archie from the sitter and Eloise from school and decided to run to Target for a few things.I had hoped to be in and out quickly.

I found a line with just one person ahead of me and began organizing my items on the conveyor.After placing my items，I looked up to see that the person ahead of me was an elderly woman. She was paying for her items with change and wanted to purchase each separately.I was frustrated with this woman and the inconvenience she had placed on me.

But then I watched the young employee with this woman.I watched him help her count her change，ever so softly taking it from her shaking hands. When she asked if she had enough to buy a reusable bag，he told her she did and went two lines over to get one for her and then repackaged her items.Never once was this employee angry.He was nothing but patient and kind.

As I was watching him，I saw that Eloise was too.She was standing next to the woman，watching the employee count the change.I realized I hadn’t been inconvenienced at all.That my daughter was instead witnessing kindness and patience and being taught this valuable lesson by a complete stranger.

When the woman was finished，the employee began ringing up my items and thanked me for my patience.I then thanked him for teaching us patience and kindness by his treatment of that elderly woman.When he was finished I pushed my cart through the store trying to find the

ience and how much it meant to manager.I wanted her to know of the employee’s kindness and pat

me.After tracking her down and sharing the story with her，we left Target with a cart full of consumable items，but what is more，a heart full of gratitude for such an invaluable lesson.

If you are ever in the Glendale Target，give Ishmael a smile and a nod.The world could use more people like him.

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【写作指导】

要写好记叙文的概要，先要找到以下两个问题的答案：(1)谁做了什么？(2)结果如何？

如果是夹叙夹议文，还要加上这个故事给人们的启示或教育意义。就该题而言，本文的概要

应该包含：作者购物的时间、地点、结果以及从本次购物中得到的启示，最后用自己的语言

串联起来。

【参考范文】

The passage tells us an experience of shopping.(要点1)One day，the author with two children went to Target for shopping.(要点2)While waiting in line，she found an old lady was troublesome，but the young employee treated her patiently.(要点3)Seeing that，the author was touched by his kindness and patience and she thought her children would learn a lot from this experience.(要点4)

Writing 2

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

，colour and thickness Sugars are popular in the processed food industry because they add taste

to food products. The studies have shown that sugars can provide a source of energy.The body breaks down the sugar into simple forms that can be readily used in the body.But too much sugar can contribute to health problems like obesity and tooth disease.