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新东方英语四六级作文必备写作模板整理

新东方英语四六级作文必备写作模板整理

英语四六级作文必备写作模板Chapter One 文章开头1-1 对立法: 先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法, 适用于有争议性的主题.e.g[1]. When asked about....., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that ....... But I think/view a bit differently. 在谈到.....,广大/绝大多数人的要求说.......但我觉得/观点有点不同。

[2]. When it comes to .... , some people believe that ....... Others argue/claim that the opposite/reverse is true . There is probably some truth in both arguments/statements , but (I tend to the previous/latter ) 当涉及到....有些人认为.......一些人则认为/声称,相反/恰恰相反。

可能有一些在两个参数真理/报表,但(我更倾向于前/后[3]. Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that .... They claim/ believe/argue that ... But I wonder/doubt whether......现在,它通常是/一般/普遍认为/月/承认,....他们声称/相信/认为...不过,我怀疑/怀疑.....1-2 现象法引出要剖析的现象或者问题, 然后评论.e.g[1]. Recently the rise in problem of/(phenomenon of) ... has caused/aroused public/popular/wide/ worldwide concern. 最近上升的问题/(现象)...已造成/引起公众/流行/宽/举世关注[2]. Recently the issue of/ the problem of/the phenomenon of ...。

新东方英语四级作文万能

新东方英语四级作文万能

新东方英语四级作文万能New Oriental English CET-4 Essay: The Importance of Learning English。

In today's globalized world, English has become the most widely spoken and used language. It has become the lingua franca of international communication, business, and education. As a result, there is an increasing emphasis on learning English, especially for non-native speakers. In this essay, I will discuss the importance of learning English and how it can benefit individuals in various aspects of their lives.First and foremost, learning English opens up a world of opportunities for individuals. It allows them to communicate with people from different cultural backgrounds and nationalities, making it easier to travel, work, and study abroad. English is also the language of international business, and proficiency in English can significantly enhance career prospects and job opportunities. In today'scompetitive job market, employers often require candidates to have a good command of English, as it is essential for global communication and collaboration.Furthermore, English is the language of the internet and technology. Most of the content available online is in English, and proficiency in the language is necessary for accessing and understanding information, as well as for using various digital tools and platforms. In addition, English is the language of science and research, and many of the world's leading academic journals and publications are in English. Therefore, learning English is crucial for individuals who wish to pursue higher education and engage in academic discourse and research.Moreover, learning English can broaden one's cultural horizons and enhance their understanding of the world. By learning English, individuals have access to a wealth of literature, films, music, and other forms of artistic expression from English-speaking countries. This exposure to different cultures and perspectives can enrich one's life and foster a greater appreciation for diversity andglobal interconnectedness.In conclusion, learning English is of paramount importance in today's interconnected world. It provides individuals with countless opportunities for personal and professional growth, as well as a deeper understanding of the world and its diverse cultures. Therefore, it is essential for individuals to invest time and effort in learning and mastering the English language. With dedication and perseverance, one can reap the many benefits of being proficient in English and thrive in the globalized society of the 21st century.。

四六级最后30天起死回生秘诀:作文冲刺提分法则

四六级最后30天起死回生秘诀:作文冲刺提分法则

四六级最后30天起死回生秘诀:作文冲刺提分法则考试日期一天天逼近,还没复习肿么办?老师我觉得我还可以再抢救一下!在四六级考试当中,Writing Section是一个在短期内可以快速提分的部分。

新东方在线四六级主治医生们负责任的告诉大家,即使是最后一个月内,只要通过对模板的总结、作文结构的掌握和大量的练习,现在还不晚,依然可以有很明显的提高。

新东方在线网络课堂四六级辅导名师认为,对于四级考试,近期考察非常多的图画是作文可能是一个重点,有可能会遇到三张图甚至是更多的图片;另外一个可能出现的题型是过去老版本的三段式中文论述型文章,而这三个段落有可能会变成全英文的解释,也请各位同学背单词一定要从现在一直背到上考场之前。

对于六级考试,可能会出现名言警句型文章及名言解释型的文章,比如样卷当中出现的题目"地球是满足人类正常欲望的,而不是满足人类贪欲的",又比如说"微笑是人类之间最短的距离"、"成功源于坚持"等等,对于这样的一些题目要做一些重点方向的准备。

于是新东方在线四六级主治名师提醒各位懒癌患者,以下几点一定要格外注意:一、拿到试卷要冷静,花两到三分钟审题在拿到试卷之后,无论是什么样的题目,一定要给自己两到三分钟的时间将题目至少看两遍。

举一个发生过的例子,在13年6月份四级考试中,作文题目写到"For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay.You should start your easy with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of learning basic skills".一般来说,正常同学看到它的时候都会明白这篇文章的重点应该是首先需要描述图片,稍后陈述你对学习基本技巧(basic skills)这个问题上的观点。

新东方石雷鹏老师四六级作文预测

新东方石雷鹏老师四六级作文预测

新东方石雷鹏老师四六级作文预测新东方石雷鹏老师四六级作文预测四六级作文预测1:志愿者活动Part I Writing (30 minutes)Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Volunteering activities. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:1. 越来越多的人从事志愿者工作2. 志愿者工作的社会意义3. 作为大学生,应该怎么做范文:In recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people, especially among youngsters. According to a survey, in 2008, there were about 1,700,000 volunteers who offered service for Olympic Games. Actually, an increasing number of people become volunteers every year in China.Volunteering actions are of tremendous benefits to both those in need and the society. Olympic Games are a good example. As is known to all, volunteers played an active role in Beijing Olympic Games. Without them, it would be a tough task to hold this un-precedent Olympic Games. Therefore, we can say that it was those volunteers who ensured the success of these games.As modern college students, we should get actively involved in volunteering activities. By participating, we can learn how to work well in a team, how to improve our interpersonal skills and organizational ability. Undoubtedly, all of these are critical for our person growth. So, we should take this chance to learn and to grow. (161words)四六级作文预测2 书信:毕业时就业还是上研究生Part I Writing (30 minutes)Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter in reply to a f riend’s inquiry about Plan after graduation. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:假如你是李明,你的朋友石头来信咨询你的毕业之后的计划,考研还是就业,请根据自己的情况写封回信告知石头你的态度,并说明理由。

(完整word版)四六级写作套路(刘晓艳老师主编)

(完整word版)四六级写作套路(刘晓艳老师主编)

四六级写作套路(刘晓艳主编)(文登考研)(刘晓艳,原新东方首席主讲名师,考研英语语法长句难句教学体系创建者,现任文登考研独家授课核心讲师。

誉满山城的考研英语辅导名师,英语语言文学研究知名学者,她多年从事考研英语辅导,学术功底深厚,教学经验丰富,语言彪悍,授课把握重点干净利落,考点讲解清晰,深受广大学子喜爱。

)一观点对比型文章下面我们以下面的题目为例,来讲解观点对比型文章的写法。

养宠物有些人认为养宠物很好有些人认为养宠物不好你的观点是什么?本文共分三段。

第一段(3—4句话)第一句话:提出主题比如:1. Recently with the development /advance/progress of science and technology, the phenomenon of pets has aroused wide concern.2. Nowadays, it is undeniable that pets has almost become the biggest concern of the present-day world.第二句话:翻译第一个提纲比如:a part of citizens cling to the idea that keeping pets is beneficial to their daily life.第三第四句话具体说明原委,为什么养宠物好比如:1. first, keeping pets can reduce the loneliness of many people ,especially the old and the children, who have to stay alone.2. in addition, the pets are lovely, they can make you feel delighted when you go back to home.第二段(3—4句话)第一句话:过度语比如:although the former is reasonable to some people, there are still these who claim that having animals at home is unacceptable.第二句话:翻译第二个提纲比如:they are of the opinion that keeping pets should be banned.第三第四句话:说明原委,为什么养宠物不好。

名师点评英语四六级真题:如何充分发挥考试技巧

名师点评英语四六级真题:如何充分发挥考试技巧

洛基英语,中国在线英语教育领导品牌主持人:各位网友大家晚上好,今天非常荣幸请到新东方三位名师为大家点评今天的四六级考题。

首先坐在我旁边这位老师是北京新东方学校的四六级辅导老师赵建昆老师,欢迎您。

赵建昆:大家好,希望各位同学能够在今天的考试当中获得好的成绩。

主持人:做在他旁边的是北京新东方的尹延老师。

尹延:全国的考生、新东方的学员以及新浪的网友大家晚上好,非常高兴可以跟大家聊聊四六级考试。

主持人:下一位也是大家的老朋友王兆飞老师。

王兆飞:大家好。

主持人:今天的节目比较特别的地方是我们还邀请到了刚刚参加完四级考试的小雷同学。

雷钿情:大家好,我是北京工业大学的雷钿情,是今天上午四级考试的考生。

主持人:关于考试的情况待会儿再和你聊。

节目开始之前请三位老师简单介绍一下今天下午刚刚结束的六级考试的情况。

王兆飞:其实考试之前,包括我讲的各种班里,还有我的博客上,都是给大家很多模拟题、预测题,可是大家做完了之后在考完今天的考试会感到一点失望,因为没有押中,题目挺怪,讲的“姓名重不重要”。

以前我们关注的话题虽然不是最热门,但也是比较热门的,像食品安全、网上购物等等,但是这次考的竟然是一个跟时髦的东西没有关系的话题,但它却是一个常见的社会话题。

所以,我很佩服这次出题的人,就像我在博客上刚刚发表的文章所说的那样,新浪的博客,大家可以搜搜王兆飞就可以搜得到,我刚刚发表一篇博文,里面说在那么多模拟题、预测题的狂轰滥炸和围追堵截之下,出题人能够突破重围找到这么一个比较常见的社会话题,我挺佩服他们,他们挺能钻的。

但真的是万变不离其宗,就算考的话题不是我们所想到的那样,但也是属于它一贯的作风,因为我们说六级作文甚至四级作文也是这样,就是两个方面的内容,要么是常见社会话题,要么就是关于大学生的话题,其实四六级这回考的都应该是社会常见的社会话题,不会是那么难。

还有就是从形式上来说,这次的六级挺给面子,属于第一大类,我讲课的时候会讲到六级写作的第一大类特别典型的对立观点型,关于名字的看法,第一段有人说名字很重要,第二段是名字不重要,最后是说你的看法,其实四级跟这个也很相象,四级主要是说博物馆现在免费开放,目的是什么。

新东方4 6级考试作文免费辅导课程 讲义 第3课

新东方4 6级考试作文免费辅导课程 讲义 第3课

新东方4 6级考试作文免费辅导课程讲义第3课第一节Should Firecrackers Be Banned?1. 有人认为放鞭炮是好事,为什么?2. 有人认为放鞭炮是坏事,为什么?3. 我的看法2. 造成:cause、lead to、result in sth. 、bring about、beresponsible forFirst,setting off firecrackers leads to fires.Secondly it result in injuress to people.Finally it also brings about noise.On the other hand, there are many people who say that firecrackers should be banned.They point out that firecrackers are responsible for fires which destroy property, and for injuries suffered both by the people who set them off and by innocent bystanders. They also say that firecrackers are a waste of money and resources.注:point out 指出;be responsible for 造成On the other hand,there are many people who say that pets should be banned.They point out that pets are responsible for nioses which disturb people's rest,and for injuries suffered both by the people who keep them by innocent neighbors.My own point of view is that we should preserve the old custom of letting offfirecrackers, while at the same time making them harmless. We can do this by banning firecrackers from public places. In addition, we should restrict the setting off of firecrackers to festival days.注:My own point of view is that we should be allowed to keep pets, while at the same time making them harmless.1998年6月For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck? You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck?1.有些人认为某些数字会带来好运。

新东方老师教你怎么写6级作文,轻轻松松过6级。。。

新东方老师教你怎么写6级作文,轻轻松松过6级。。。

1.审题⏹ 2.构思⏹段首句;举例。

⏹ 3.动笔⏹ 4.检查⏹ 1.三段论;⏹ 2.文章开头尽量避免错误;⏹ 3.写好第二段基本层次结构;⏹ 4.多运用关联词语;⏹ 5.不能说空话,要举例子。

⏹例文评分。

⏹ 1.六级作文不要乱喊口号⏹We must be honest and faithful to our classmates, party, country and the wholeworld .⏹ 2.文章内容要展开,注意举例子和分析原因。

⏹(1)举例子⏹(2)分析原因⏹(3)万不得已凑字数⏹ 1.The methodology suggested may not guarantee the ultimate success, but the eventual pay-off could be worth the effort.⏹ 2. Achieving even partial success will benefit mankind and contribute to creatinga better world.⏹ 1.大量看范文。

⏹ 2.关注段首句的写法和举例子的写法。

⏹ 3.适当的练习。

⏹ 1.大量看范文。

⏹ 2.关注段首句的写法和举例子的写法。

⏹ 3.适当的练习。

⏹ 1.开头直接切入正题。

⏹ 2.议论文第二段的主题句要写好。

⏹ 3.第二段要分层次展开。

⏹ 4.用名言、举例、解释等手段充实第二段内容。

⏹ 5.结尾要干脆有力。

⏹第一段:起始段。

⏹第二段:展开段。

⏹第三段:结论段。

⏹第一段:引出现象或引出话题。

⏹引出现象——阐述题;⏹引出话题——观点对立题。

⏹现象phenomenon;⏹话题issue。

⏹模版句1:⏹People in growing numbers have become increasingly aware of the seriousness ofthe phenomenon.⏹模版句2:⏹There is a growing concern over the seriousness of the phenomenon.⏹举例(03.12):the waste on campus⏹There is a growing concern over the seriousness of the waste on campus.⏹People in growing numbers have become increasingly aware of the seriousness ofthe waste on campus⏹模版句:⏹Whether something should or should not be done is a much debated problem inthat it affects many people (in their everyday life).⏹举例(2000.6):⏹Whether the test of speaking English should or should not be taken is a much debated problem in that it affects many university students.⏹举例(97.6):⏹Whether job-hopping should or should not be done is a much debated problem inthat it affects many people.⏹正方观点:⏹ Some people argue that⏹反方观点:⏹ Others, on the contrary, claim that⏹正方观点(97.6):⏹Some people argue that doing one job does good to one’s career development.⏹反方观点:Others, on the contrary, claim that job-hopping helps one acquire wide scope of knowl edge and accumulate more work experience.⏹我的观点:⏹ Careful consideration leads me to believe that⏹I tend to think that…⏹It seems to me that…⏹I am of the opinion that…⏹I would take view that…⏹第二段主题句:⏹The explanation for this phenomenon may include several factors and I will express only a few of the most important ones.⏹The reason why I cannot accept the job offered may include several factors andI will express only a few of the most important ones.⏹三个层次:⏹ first of all;⏹ in addition;⏹ furthermore.⏹first and foremost,⏹besides,⏹last but not least⏹In the first place⏹In the second place⏹In the third place⏹个人层面⏹ 1.个人的兴趣爱好⏹Doing something is of great interest, for it adds color to the dull routine of everyday life.⏹(02.6)A great many university students are fond of surfing online.⏹Surfing online is of great interest, for it adds color to the dull routine of everyday life.⏹As a result, a great many university students indulge themselves in the internet.⏹ 2.丰富/提高生活质量⏹Something helps to improve the quality of people’s lives.⏹例:The use of private cars helps to improve the qualit y of people’s lives.⏹ 3.运动健身⏹Regular exercises benefit both the body and mind.⏹ 4.社会责任感⏹Doing something will develop one’s strong sense of duty.⏹ 5.参加活动,培养团队合作精神⏹Participating in activities can develop a sense of team spirit and cooperation.⏹ 6.人际关系⏹Doing something will enhance mutual understanding.⏹例:Talking with my roommates will enhance mutual understanding.⏹7.个人能力和职业发展⏹Doing something will develop one’s capabil ity and helps one to start a new career.⏹例:Working hard will develop one’s capability and helps one to start a new career.⏹ Getting proper training will develop one’s capability and helps one to start a new career.⏹例:Working hard will develop one’s capability and helps one to start a new career.⏹ Getting proper training will develop one’s capability and helps one to start a new career.⏹社会层面⏹ 1.促进经济发展⏹It helps to improve the economic strength.。

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离6月份的英语四、六级考试还有一个月左右的时间,在这段短暂而又宝贵的时间里,如何有效而又合理地准备四、六级写作,如何在考场上最好地临场发挥,对于四、六级考生们来说是至关重要的。

复习策略
笔者列举几种能有效提高考生们英语写作水平的方法,供大家参考。

背诵
四、六级写作需要在30分钟内完成一篇短文,共计120或150余字,这对很多考生来说颇有难度。

但试想若将其改为中文作文,大家就会觉得易如反掌。

原因何在?俗话说:“熟读唐诗三百首,不会做诗也会吟。

”很多考生从小到大背诵了大量中文佳作,因而可以将其随意组合,自由输出。

然而,在英语学习中,很多人却只沉溺于记单词、抠语法、做阅读,很少有人背诵英文文章,殊不知背诵是提高英语综合能力的法宝,因而考生平时应注意多积累经典的英文词汇、句型和范文。

也有些考生反映自己背过很多英文文章,但上了考场大脑还是一片空白,什么都想不起来。

这种情况很常见,主要有两个原因:一是没有进行造句的工作,只是盲目背诵;二是背得不够熟练。

学习任何东西都讲究先求“质”,再求“量”。

大家英语学了很多年,文章看了很多,为什么写作还是学不好?主要原因是只“量”,没重“质”。

一篇文章应背到脱口而出的程度,如果还需要过脑子,就证明背得不够熟练。

若只是半生不熟,背得再多也是徒劳。

默写
背完经典范文后,还要进行默写,然后对照原文纠错,弄清楚错在什么地方。

默写的好处在于它让你发现常被自己忽略的一些容易犯错的小地方,如拼写、单复数、大小写等。

这些错误正是考生们写作中的弱点,也是阅卷老师最不能容忍的地方。

培根说过:“写作使人精确”。

只有默写下来,你才会发现自己常犯哪些错误。

中译英
中译英练习也是提高写作的好方法,也就是根据范文的中文译文,将其按照自己的理解译成英文。

译完后,你就会发现自己的翻译和原文有很大的出入,这些差距就是取得写作高分的关键。

这时,对照范文,看看原作者是怎么写的,思考为什么这么写;同样的一句中文,范文中使用了哪些词汇和句型,你使用了哪些词汇和句型,然后对照学习范文中词汇和句型的多样性。

相信通过不断练习,你的写作水平会在不知不觉中有所提高。

模仿
所谓模仿指的就是模仿范文,套用范文的精彩词汇、句型、句子和框架。

最初套用时可能比较生硬,但只要不断积累和练习,套用起来会越来越顺手。

临场注意事项印象原则和阅卷老师的“三眼”
在人际交往过程中,第一印象至关重要,四、六级写作也不例外。

阅卷老师要在短时间内批阅上千份试卷,目光在每份试卷上平均停留的时间只有几分钟甚至几十秒钟,要想在这么短的时间里抓住其眼球,给其留下良好的印象,难度可想而知。

所以考生应该进行换位思考,为阅卷老师,也为自己的分数着想,首先要把字写工整。

通常,阅卷老师看“三眼”即可打分。

以2007年12月四级作文“选修课”为例:
第一眼看你是否把字数写够,不够则会扣分;同时看文章是否是三段(四级写作一般以三段为宜),是否“两头小中间大”(第一、三段较短,第二段较长)。

第二眼看第一段是否进行现状说明,第一句是否有“各大学开设了各种各样的选修课”之类的话;第二段是否进行原因列举,第一句是否有“学生由于各种原因选择了不同的选修课”之类的话;第三段是否进行举例论证,是否有“以我自己为例”之类的话。

如果文章符合上述要求,则证明没有跑题。

第三眼是扫描和查看,主要是看文章中是否有明显的错误。

同时,老师会随意读一两句,敲定最后分数,因而使用得当的经典句型,会给阅卷老师留下极好的印象,有助于考生取得高分。

语言第一位
四、六级写作重点考查考生的英语表达能力。

阅卷老师最重视的是语言,考生最需要提高的也是语言能力。

有的考生以为使用一些高难词汇就能取得高分,其实不然。

中英文写作都讲究“简洁就是美”、“绚烂之极,归于平淡”。

美国作家海明威经常使用小学词汇,但他是诺贝尔文学奖的得主,可见语言的好坏不在词藻的华丽与否,而在于使用是否得当。

中学词汇用好了,也可以取得各种英语写作考试的高分。

当然,基础较好的考生,恰当使用高难词汇的确有助于提高分数,但是不要盲目追求难度,与其写一个错误的复杂句,不如写一个正确的简单句。

四、六级考试对写作的话题、观点和字数都有严格限制,它是一个展示考生英语书面表达能力的平台。

考生应该把构思的时间减到最少,把主要精力放在推敲语言上,力争将语法、拼写、标点类的低级错误降至最低,力求遣词用句准确恰当,表达地道。

这样,即便没有使用高难词汇和句型,也可以保证稳得及格分数。

切记作文不是口语,语言永远第一,它决定了得分高低。

阅卷老师在语言方面主要从两个方面进行评判:
1.基本正确
四、六级考生写作的最大问题不是写得太简单,而是文章中错误太多。

考生最常犯的语言错误有三类:语法、拼写、标点。

最常犯的语法错误包括:时态、冠词、主谓一致、名词单复数等。

2.丰富多变
基础较好的考生,要想取得四、六级写作高分,应做到语言上的丰富多变。

丰富多变主要体现在词汇和句型两方面。

同一词语在一句话、一个段落乃至一篇文章中最好不要重复出现,应尽量使用同、近义词替换(无法替换的关键词除外)。

例如:think可以替换为reckon, assume, argue等词。

此外,句型也应富于变化,不要拘泥于“主谓宾”句型,可以使用“主系表”、过去分词和现在分词短语作状语、不定式短语作状语、状语从句等多种句型。

四级作文如果量化成句数,只需写十句左右;六级只需12句左右。

全文应以短句为主,长短句相结合。

所谓短句是指十个词左右的句子,不能全篇都是五六个词的短句。

同时,全文应有一定数量的长句,一般15~20词即可,太长则显冗赘。

有的考生以为只写长句不写短句,就能取得高分,实际上老师看长句会觉得很累,写长句又容易出错,反而不易得高分。

其实一篇好的作文应当是长短句相结合,难易度相适宜。

精炼的短句可以放在段首表示强调;复杂的长句可以进行具体的论证、举例或描述。

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