应试作文杀招 之一 根据曹其军老师讲稿整理

应试作文杀招之一根据曹其军老师讲稿整理总原则之一：应试作文以又臭又长为好：臭——全是废话（改卷老师不会看你的内容的）；长——是很多废话的堆积；所以，考研作文要写到280——300字为好。

总原则之二：要有固定，漂亮的“外表” 分析历年试题，考研出题类型不外乎四种：（问题）单向类、（好现象）单向类、双向类、图表加前三种。

一、（问题）单向格式总共是三段段一：S1+S2+S3+S4+S5 （S——sentence）共5句话，一共60字左右，下面给出每句话可以套用的格式，这些漂亮的格式是一定要牢记和熟背的！S1是介绍，固定格式有1．The past few years(decades)have witnessed us (our society) faced with the issue of…… 2. In recent years there has been a growing concern among the general public over the issue of…… 3. Nothing can be more serious (upsetting ,outstanding, meaningful…) than the issue of……S2+S3运用Flex 技巧进行扩展和包装，这些Flex 技巧在后面详细给出，要熟背！运用statistics: The past few years(decades)have witnessed us (our society) faced with the issue of…… 2. In recent years there has been a growing concern among the general publi c over the issue of…… 3. Nothing can be more serious (upsetting ,outstanding, meaningful…) than the issue of…….(在此直接用数字，不要写英文，一般写两句随便给出两个数据足够)S4 “同一份调查还表明…（又给出另一个数据）The past few years(decades)have witnessed us (our society) faced with the issue of…… 2. In recent years there has been a growing concern among the general public over the issue of…… 3. Nothing can be more serious (upsetting ,outstanding, meaningful…) than the issue of……（又一数据）S5 收尾，与S1呼应，“由此可见，…问题已经非常严重了” It can be concluded, therefore, t hat the issue of……has become more and more serious (harmful).段二：120——140字左右开头：S1 : 10 words 1. To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon (issue,tendency), various reasons (causes) have been put forward. 2.The above problem (phenomenon) may well give rise to some effects (consequences) as follow. S2+S3+S4: 50 words 开始列举了，但是千万不要用那些滥词：first，second，firstly，secondly，印象分会降低，要用些漂亮的词，尽可能用短语：In the very beginning, +S2 In the first place, In the second place, In the end, +S3 +S4 What is more, Last but S2,S3,S4 在简单阐述了各自一个观点之后，就开始进行Flex 扩展，扩展可运用Quotation 或是Example达到增加60——80字：Quotation: To illustrate the point, let’s take a look at what ……(President Cliton) said in an article :“。

” 所以，整个第二段是核心段，基本结构是：开头S1（10字）+ S2 扩展S3 50字扩展共扩展60-80字S4 扩展段三（解决方法，suggestions）100 words S1 15 words 1.We should take immediate measures, for if the present situation continues as before, serious outcome will come up. 2. It is high time that (immediate measures be taken now.) (such a problem be put an end to.) (a reform be made.) S2+S3+S4+S5+S6 100 words or so S2 On one hand, we should urge our government to lay down stricter rules to forbid…… S3 Should anyone dare to break the law, he to she should be put into jail for 5 years. S4 In addition , our government should put in more money to protect ( encourage) ……. S5 On the other hand, we should try every means to enhance the public awareness of the issue of….. S6 Only through these measures, I firmly believe, will the above-discussed problem be efficiently resolved.二、（好现象）单向类段一介绍60 字段二分析重要性原因（或结果benefits）做法段三结论（要重视）段一介绍开头：Nothing can be more outstanding (meaningful ) than …… 接下来运用的扩展和（问题）单向类相同段二分析(1)开头：The above phenomenon may well give rise to some benefits as follow. (2) benefits 社会的经济的个人的（3）做法As the phenomenon is important ,we can approach it inthe following ways. 接下来运用扩展技巧段三结论重视社会生活（money，awareness）个人生活（awareness，我的决心等等）说明：该现象为较大类的，如希望工程，就可以加上社会的重视；较小的如交朋友，信念如明灯，就只用个人生活的做法。

开头：It goes without saying that due attention should be paid to the phenomenon.三、双向类（一）A1 VS A2 = contrast “对照”即是一个事物的两方面做比较，如看电视的利弊，出国留学等等，A1好，A2坏；或是A1坏，A2好；（二）A VS B = compare 对比即是两个事物做比较，如锻炼是跑步好还是做操好等，A B同好或是同不好但是两种题型结构都是一样的，如下：段一摆擂台，展现“两”面段二回到A （A1）单向分析原因，或结果，重要性，做法段三回到B （A2）段四结尾选择类A or B 表态类（用死不表态法）A1 vs A2段一1．When it comes to the issue (phenomenon) of ……( tuition fee;TV effects), different people have radically different opinions. Some people hold onto the idea that ……. Other people ,however, deem that……. 2. As regards the issue of……,there is a popular discussion. Some people … Other people ,however,……段二开头：…… because of the following factors. 接下来和单向类的段二相同段三开头By comparison, A or B In the similar way, By contrast, A1 VS A2 Quite on the contrary, 接下来和单向类段二相同段四表态类（死不表态法）Just as any coin has two sides, it’s no exception with the issue of …. Actually the issue is just like a double-edged sword,and we should try every means to avoid its harmfulness while at the same time, making the most of its advantages.选择类As discuss ed above, each side has its advantages and disadvantages. If I’m allowed to make a decision, I prefer A to B ( B to A) , for the following reasons. On one hand,….. On the other hand,……应试作文杀招之二四、图表类此类作文是近年来的热点，但这类作文只有段一和前三类不同,其他都一样的来写. 每一幅图画(表),尤其是cartoon, 是要表达一个philosophy(哲理),因此,段一就是描述这一哲理的段落,但是描述的时候只用一到两句话来“轻描淡写”说出这个哲理即可。