【讲义】刘洪波雅思写作真经班(1)
雅思精讲写作班精讲班第1讲讲义
第一章 第一章 写作概述
60 分钟
Task 1 150w G: letter A:graph 1/3
Task 2 250w Essay
2/3
评分标准（四要素作文法）
Task
Grganization
Idea
Language
第二章 第二章 议论文----概述
一、字数、时间 250-300 words 35-40m
As one of the most important inventions of the past century, TV is playing a more and more important role in modern life. However, some people are starting to worry about its negative effects on traditional families. I am convinced that the existence of TV has brought about alienation among family members.
Those who strongly approve of the ban lay too much emphasis on the rights of nonsmokers. They ignore smokers’ rights. Smoking is just a personal hobby and amusement. It is a kind of lifestyle. It is a stress reliever and can bring great pleasure to smokers. Furthermore, for smokers, nothing seems more difficult and painful than giving up the habit.
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刘洪波雅思写作真经班 Grammatical Range and Accuracy
7 • uses a variety of complex structures • produces frequent error-free sentences • uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms • makes some errors in grammar and punctuation but they rarely reduce communication • uses only a limited range of structures • attempts complex sentences but these tend to be less accurate than simple sentences • errors can cause some difficulty for the reader
• uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task • attempts to use less common vocabulary but with some inaccuracy • uses a limited range of vocabulary, but this is minimally adequate for the task • may make noticeable errors in spelling and/or word formation that may cause some difficulty for the reader
刘洪波雅思写作真经班(4)
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刘洪波雅思写作真经班
Poverty is one of the most important problems many developing countries face. However, what types of international aids are more effective for them is a controversial issue. In my view, what the poor countries need most is not financial aid or loans, but advanced technologies and talents in some key areas.
刘洪波雅思写作真经班
Moreover, the developed countries can not only send expert teams to poor nations to build roads, dams, factories and other infrastructures, but train talents and experts for them. The rich countries can provide scholarship or financial help to the students from the poor regions, which some famous western universities are actually doing. It is a wiser way to deliver help.
5. 刘洪波范文
First, it is obvious that the government is the one most capable and responsible for solving any social issue and ensuring social equality.This is because in order to bridge this wealth gap, the most effective and direct method should be taxation leverage, by which the government can use the rich people’s tax money to subsidize the unfortunate.So, the technology should not become the scapegoat of the issue.
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雅思写作第一节课课堂讲义
雅思写作第一节课课堂讲义Unit 1 雅思IELTS 考试写作简介雅思考试写作部分在听力和阅读后进行，由两部分组成，TASK1和TASK2。
要求考生在60分钟内完成两篇文章的写作。
普通培训类和学术类考生在写作的考试内容上有一些区别。
两类写作TASK2题目类型基本相同，考试的结构和要求也大体相同，要求在40分钟完成250字左右的议论文。
类似英美国家学校里任课教师布置的课堂讨论作文。
一般要求考生根据自己的知识和经验就一个现象阐明自己的态度和见解，或就一个观点发表自己赞同或反对的观点。
学术类写作TASK 1（ACADEMIC TRAINING MODULE）要求考生对题目中给出的各类图表加以观察和分析，并根据已知的图表和资料写一篇不少于150字的小短文。
考得较多的有曲线图、柱状图、饼状图、表格、饼图等。
也有可能考到两种不同种类的图。
另外，流程图和示意图也偶尔考到。
时间20分钟。
普通培训类写作TASK1（GENERAL TRAINING MODULE）则要求考生就某个假设的场景写一封信. 到目前为止，出现较多的书信种类有投诉信、请求信、建议信、寻找失物信、邀请信等。
20分钟内完成150个字的文章。
总之，就题目的难度而言，GENERAL TRAINING MODULE 普通类写作比ACADEMIC TRAINING MODULE学术类写作稍微简单一些。
评分标准The examiner reads your answer and awards band score of between 1(did not answer the question) and 9 (native speaker-like ) according to these criteria: ? 1.T ask Response (i.e. how fully and appropriately the candidate has answered all parts of the task; the extent to which the candidate's ideas are relevant, developed and supported; the extent to which the candidate's position isclear and effective)2.Coherence and Cohesion (i.e. how well the information and ideas are organized and presented i.e. paragraphing; how well the information is linked) ?3.Lexical Resource (i.e. the range of vocabulary used, how accurately it is used and how appropriate it is for the task)4.Grammatical Range and Accuracy (i.e. the range of structures used, how accurately they are used and how appropriate they are for the task)The band scores are then added together divided by 3 and rounded to determine your band score for this task.Writing Overall Band = 1 / 3* Task1 + 2 / 3*Task2For example: Task1 =6Task2 =7Overall Band = 1 / 3* 6 + 2 / 3*7= 6.5Unit 2 曲线图1.描述上升的单词increase rise grow go up词汇升级：creep up ≤10edge up 10 ease up 20boom 30 surge 45 soar 60 swell 70 escalate 80 rocket 902．描述下降的单词decrease drop decline fall go down词汇升级：creep down ≤10edge down 10 ease down 20ebb 30 subside 45 slump 60 collapse 70 plunge 80 plummet 903．描述波动的单词fluctuate --- fluctuation go up and down rise and fall例：Sales of Computers 1995There was a slight growth in the sales of computers from Jan to Feb. However, they increased dramatically to a peak in the next month. After that, there was a downward trend in sales between Mar and Aug, which leveled off by the end of Dec.Task 1每部分的结构:例题分析example 1WRITING TASK 1You should spend about 20 minutes on this taskThe graph below shows the number of passengers in a London underground station at different times of the day.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting themain features and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.Number of passengers at a London underground stationThe line graph illustrates the fluctuation in the number of people at a London underground station over the course of a day.开头段三种万能方法：①改单词②换句型③加信息The busiest time of the day is in the morning. There is a sharp increase between 06:00 and 08:00, with 400 people using the station at 8 o'clock. After this the numbers drop quickly to less than 200 at 10 o'clock. Between 11 am and 2 pm the number rises, with a plateau of just under 300 people using the station.In the afternoon, numbers decline, with less than 100 using the station at 4 pm. There is then a rapid rise to a peak of 380 at 6 pm. After 7 pm, numbers fall significantly, with only a slight increase again at 8pm, tailing off after 9 pm.Overall, the graph shows that the station is most crowded in the early morning (around 08:00) and early evening (around 18:00) periods.例题分析2:Sample 2WRITING TASK 1---“例2”You should spend about 20 minutes on this taskThe graph below shows the annual amount of fish caught in North America from 1972 to 2000.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.line graph with two linesThe graph reveals changes in fish catches for the US and Canada over the last 30 years.Between 1975 and 1981, US fish catches averaged between 2.5 and 2.75 million tons per year, while Canadian landings fluctuated between 600,000 and 900,000 tons. …In 1981, however, there was a significant increase in fish caught in the US, and this rise continued and peaked at 5.6 million tons in 1991. During the same period, Canada's catch went up from 1 million tons to 1.6 million tons, a growth of over 50%.From 1991 onwards, a sudden decline in fish catching was reported in both countries. US figures plummeted to 4 million tons in 2001, a drop of 28%, and Canadian catches plunged to 0.5 million tons, a decrease of 66%. In the following four years, US catches remained stable at 4 million tons, while Canadian catches rose and fell around the 0.5 million tons mark.In general, fish catches have declined drastically in both the US and Canada since the early 1990s. Although Canadian production was much lower, it echoed US figures, declining or increasing at thesame rate.习题③You should spend about 20 minutes on this taskThe graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.The line chart illustrates changes in the amounts of beef, lamb, chicken and fish consumed in a particular European country between 1979 and 2004.In 1979 beef was by far the most popular of these foods, with about 225 grams consumed per person per week. Lamb andchicken were eaten in similar quantities (around 150 grams), while much less fish was consumed (just over 50 grams) However, during this 25-year period the consumption of beef and lamb fell dramatically to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams respectively. The consumption of fish also declined, but much less significantly to just below 50 grams, so although it remained the least popular food, consumption levels were the most stable.The consumption of chicken, on the other hand, showed an upward trend, overtaking that of lamb in 1980 and that of beef in 1989. By 2004 it had soared to almost 250 grams per person per week.Overall, the graph shows how the consumption of chicken increased dramatically while the popularity of these other foods decreasedover the period.★考试高分必备表 3——Phrase。
刘洪波第一二三类考点词汇总（538个）
刘洪波第一二三类考点词汇总（538个）重要性考点词常考中?文词义雅思阅读真题命题?方式共20 + 34= 54个定义：当雅思阅读?文章中只要出现该词，90%会被命题考查！不不同的真题中被反复考查多次，超?高频考点词背记：考?生请严格按下表中重要性排?行行顺序记忆20个考点词。
是的，我的学?生雅思阅读，第—个背的单词不不是 abandon, abdomen , abnormal, ?而是 resemble, 它在《剑桥雅思 9》《剑桥雅思10 》中?又被多次考到。
请同时记忆下表真题命题?方式中相对应的34个同义替换考点词加粗单词。
不不熟的单词请?一定查出标注，同时建议思考相关反义词表达。
要求：滚?瓜烂熟。
1resemble v.像，与……相似like, look like, be similar to2recognize v.认出，识别；承认perceive, acknowledge, realize, appreciate, admit, identify, comprehend, understand, know 3adjust v.调整，使适合change, modify, shift, alter4approach n.?方法method, way5fundamental adj.基本的，基础的rudimentary, preliminary, basic 6rely on依靠，依赖depend on7domestic adj.家庭的；国内的home, local, national8measure v.测量量calculate, asses, evaluate9trait n.特性，特征characteristic, feature, property 10coin v.创造?rst used, invent11arti?cial adj.仿造的synthetic, man-made12prompt v.促进，激起initiate, immediately13exchange v.交换share, apply A to B14underlie v.成为……基础based on, ground, root15ignore v.忽视，不不顾neglect, overlook, underestimate16fertilizer n.化肥，肥料料chemical, toxic, unnatural17that*pron.那；那个this, it, they, those, these, such *指代是雅思阅读的重要考点18and*conj.和，?而且or, as well as, both...and, not only...but also..., other than, in addition, besides, on the one hand...on the other hand..., neither... nor... *并列列结构是雅思阅读的重要考点19rather than*?而?非，不不是but, yet, however, whereas, nonetheless, nevertheless, notwithstanding, although, though, instead *转折结构是雅思阅读的重要考点20thanks to*由于，幸亏stem from, derive, owing to, due to, according to, because of, on account of, as a result of, leading to, because, since, for, in that, as, therefore, hence *因果关系是雅思阅读的重要考点重要性排行行考点词常考中?文词义雅思阅读真题命题?方式共100 + 72 = 172个定义：当雅思阅读?文章中只要出现该词，60%会被命题考查，不不同的真题中被考查过1次以上，重要考点词。
雅思写作讲义汇总
雅思写作精编2011上半年讲义——张凯轩目录I. 写作评分标准II. 小作文类型介绍III. 小作文线状图及变化IV. 小作文表格图及变化V. 小作文多图结合VI. 小作文地图流程图VII. 大作文类型介绍VIII. 大作文常用学术词IX. 大作文单边论现象题句型，思路及范文X. 大作文单边论观点题句型，思路及范文XI. 大作文双边观点题句型，思路及范文XII. 大作文原因解决论句型，思路及范文XIII. 大作文杂论〔个性化议论文〕句型，思路及范文XIV. 张老师2011年下半年总预测24题，部分题思路分解XV. 对学员的期待和继续学习的方法XVI. 附件一：小作文图集XVII. 附件二：大作文真题集写作评分标准以及考试要求知己知彼我们首先了解雅思写作考试方需要什么IELTS Writing 首先分2个sectionSection I: Figure Writing or Diagram or Maps通常评分比例：40%考试理想时间安排10-15minutes 最多耗时不超过20minutes字数要求：150Section II：British Essay Writing通常评分比例：60%考试理想时间安排30-40minutes 最多耗时不超过45minutes字数要求：250雅思作文有4大评分标准Task Response就是答复下列问题，具体来讲，在最理想的状态下要做到以下3点1. 明确主题2. 全面论证3. 事实论证观点以下题为例2010-12-04: In the past, important knowledge about culture and history was stored in museums. Nowadays, information is freely available on the Internet. Therefore, there is no longer any need for museums.To what extent do you agree or disagree?明确主题：不太同意全面论证：有正方—确实有越来越多的‘虚拟博物馆’，他们还有好处…；另外也有反方—传统博物馆除了让人看，还保存文物，有些还是历史性或地标性建筑…。
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Argumentation 2
• In order to learn a language well, we should learn about the country as well as the cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak it. • To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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刘洪波雅思写作真经班 雅思作文四大评分标准
Task Response （任务回应） Coherence and Cohesion（一致与连接） Lexical Resource（词汇资源） Grammatical Range and Accuracy（语法范围与正确性）
类别 官方建议时间 字数 题材
学术类 Task 1
培训类 Task 1 学术类／普 通类Task 2
20分钟
150字以 上
150字以 上 250字以 上
图表作文
20分钟
书信作文
40分钟
议论文 或 报告
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Argumentation 1
• Some people think it is acceptable to use animals for the benefit of humans. Other people think it is wrong to exploit animals for human purposes. • Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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Lexical Resource
7 • uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision • uses less common lexical items with some awareness of style and collocation
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Exercise 2: Some industrialised countries have serious environmental problems. The damage to the environment is an inevitable result when a country tends to improve the standard of living. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Exercise 3: Some people said the government should not spend money on building theaters and sports stadiums. Instead, it should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree?
刘洪波雅思写作真经班 Report 3 (Causes Vs. Effects, Solutions)
Today, there are more images of disasters and violence in the media. What are the causes and what are your solutions?
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Coherence and Cohesion
7 • uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under-/over-use • presents a clear central topic within each paragraph • uses cohesive devices effectively, but cohesion within and/or between sentences may be faulty or mechanical • may not always use referencing clearly or appropriately
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IELTS Writing Lecture 1
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Lecture 1 : Lecture 2 : Lecture 3 : Lecture 2 :
总纲，大作文相关，审题，首段 大作文相关，15句，语法句型 小作文相关 说明文，考前预测，高分论句准备
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学以致用 中西合璧 评分标准 循序渐进 读写互通 自成风格
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Why aim for 7 not 9
9 Coherence and Cohesion uses cohesion in such a way that it attracts no attention
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Report 4
Happiness is very important to individuals but it is very hard to define.
Why is happiness hard to define? What is your definition of happiness?
• uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task • attempts to use less common vocabulary but with some inaccuracy • uses a limited range of vocabulary, but this is minimally adequate for the task • may make noticeable errors in spelling and/or word formation that may cause some difficulty for the reader
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按考题内容分类
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雅思学术写作七大注意事项
写作流（审题） I, My, We, You 缩写 数字 标点 拼写 格式
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审题-赢在起跑线 正确判断题目重心 紧扣核心词汇拓展论据
原因1.现代人均寿命增长，生育期相应延后； 2.社会竞争压力大，选择事业收入稳定后生孩子。 影响1.父母与孩子的年龄差会变大，交流中代沟会明显； 2.会出现劳动力缺口，老龄化社会。
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Exercise 1: In order to learn a language well, we should learn about the country as well as the cultures and lifestyles of the people who speak it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
洞察本质联系立意高远
抽象具体同义替换
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12-12-08 More men and women decide to have children later in life. Why is it happening? What influences does it have on society and family life?
Mean band score for the most frequent countries or regions of origin