高中英语写作技能之短文改错复习
高中英语短文改错专题练习40篇(附答案及解析)
高中英语短文改错专题练习40篇（附答案及解析）短文改错（每篇文章共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
（1）Today is Sunday. The sky is full of sunshine, so does my life. At about 9:00 a.m., I go to the bookstore with my friends. There was a lot of new books. I didn’t know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me. At 10:00, we went to cinema. The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office. It took us about two hours to see it. Having been seen the film, everyone was deeply moving. Some of my friends even burst into tear. That’s a really wonderful film. It is very worth seeing.What a happy day! I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.（2）Dear Mary,Our city had changed a lot in the past 5 years. Firstly, more high buildings have appeared, that are modern and beautiful. Many overpasses have set up, so it has become very convenient for people to travel. However, many families have got car of their own. The people’s life here has become rich or colorful. People can enjoy themselves traveling on the holiday. To my delighted, I can taste delicious food of different countries. And now it is easy for me to keep touch with you than before, for I can email you in my office.Yours,Christine（3）Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now wheneverI am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience.（4）Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.（5）Dear manager,I’m one of your customer. The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop. Before I left, I do check it carefully and everything was all right. When I got home, therefore, I found a fault with it. The problem is what the “Play” doesn’t work at all. Probable it’s not your fault and so is mine. Anyhow, I can’t solve the problem in person.You see, a walkman is of great useful for me to learn English and I cannot wait for too long before this problem is solved. Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay, when you accept my letter.Hoping to hear of you in the earliest possible time!Your sincerely,Li Hua（6）Dear Jim,I am so exciting that you will come to China. I will free from December 18 and will have a plenty of time to be together with you. I’ll meet you at the airport and then you will take No.8 bus for my home. You worry about the weather here in your email. In fact, the weather here is quite different from it in your city. It isn’t very cold, but you needn’t bring many clothes with you. During your stay here, I’ll take you to some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks. I am sure we will have greatly fun together.I’m looking forward to meeting you soon.Yours,John（7）Dear Miss Li,I’m one of your student in Class Six, Senior Three. Nowadays I meet a great many difficulties when studied English. To begin with, it is very difficult of me to memorize a large number of new words. In addition, grammar is too complex to understand, that has influenced my English writing seriously. And my performance on reading and correcting are notsatisfying. Faced with such a dilemma, you hope that you can give me a hand. Would you provide me with some effectively approaches? Secondly, I believe that I will have good command of what you teach, if you will slow down your speed in the class. There is no doubt whether I will achieve great progress in English learning with your assistance.Thank you.Yours,Wang Min（8）Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.（9）Nowadays there was a kind of language called Web language. Some people even speak Chinese mixed in English words. This is a phenomenon which is worth think about. Some people think it makes no difference in helping people learn English. Besides, it will ruin the Chinese language. However, the others, especially the youngsters, are fond this new language. They think it of special help in expressing them. What’s more, it may make the language to have more uses. In my opinions, it’s no good using this kind of language. It may be popular, and you may also get others confusing.（10）Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers, students were paying less and less attention to handwriting.According to a recently survey, many students don’t want to improve their handwriting for various reason. 52 percent of them think that they can just use a computer, so it is no need to waste time improving our handwriting. 32 percent believe that they are too busy with the study that they have no time to practising, and 16 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.As the saying went, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is great benefit, especially for students. Therefore, in my opinion, the more importance should be attached to handwriting from now on.（11）I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.（12）We were assigned a composition but I was in good mood for it until this morning. It is Sunday today, so I had a good sleep. When I get up, I had a strong desire do something. So I set about doing the toughest thing -- writing a composition. I had an extreme quick head and a good idea upon other rushed into my mind. Before long I typed about 500 words. I skimmed through my work and was quite satisfying. It should be another model composition. I stretched myself, intend to polish it after a rest, so something unexpected had happened: the power failed suddenly. And I forgot to save the file!（13）My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.（14）Dear Diana,Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.Li Hua（15）You can not imagine what a dream I had last night. I dreamed that I took part in a race. At first, I could not to run very fast and fell behind. So I didn't lose heart and kept run. All the students on the playground cheer me on,"Come on! "I was so encouraged that I ran faster and fast till I caught up all the other runners. I felt as if I were flying like a superman. In an end, I got to the finishing line first.I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. Many of my classmate threw me up into the air. Just at that time，I woke up and found me still in bed!（16）It has been half a year after we parted. How I miss you all! It is you who always accompanied with me when l was homesick. It was very kind of you to make me feel at home and cooked such delicious food for me.Last night I had a dream. It was like this: I'm delighted to learn that you' re coming to travel in China and you need a English guide. I eager to get round China with you but I have to prepare me for the coming National Speech Contest. It isso a good chance that I can't afford to miss it. Feeling sweet and bitterly，I can't help crying.So, why not come to visit China one day? I really look forward to be your guide.（17）I was a newly qualified foot-health practitioner（执业者）. One day I was in the phone to a female patient recently, go over the details of an appointment. I careful wrote down her address, phone number and the set time in case of I forgot. We were just finished the conversation when she said, “I hope you don’t mind, so I have a rather strange question.” “of course”I reply.“ Go right ahead.” “Well,” said a lady nervously, “I was wondering if they offered discounts because I only have one leg.” Feeling that the lady extremely serious, I said yes without hesitation.（18）Li Ming and Wang Ying are two student of Senior Three. They both work hard but they have similar learning methods. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teachers. As result, he misses lots of points that the teachers make and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework. So he has to stay up lately and doesn't get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning. She listens attentively and tries to catch everything which the teachers say in class. Because of this, she spends more time doing her homework, which makes it possible for her go to bed early. In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more effective in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer to her learning method.（19）My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.（20）I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.（21）When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing in the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I had studied atall at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test.I went through the test for many times but I could only answer three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance.（22）I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent students in our class.Clever as she is, but she works very hard.We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk .One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor’s house .She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbor was very thankful for her help.（23）Once a king asked an artist to paint a picture by him. He told the artist he didn’t want to any shadows in picture, just sunshine. When the king saw the finish picture, he was disappointed. Without shadows, everything in the picture looked flat or unreal. The point of the story was that we need both shadows and sunshine to have a completely picture, just as we need both rain and sun to have a living world. People, too, needs both sadness and happiness. We often learn important lesson during sad times. So when we feel sad, we should try to think about that we might learn from the experience.（24）I went to the Summer Palace last week.At the gate I happened to meet some American tourists.I greeted to them in English and then we began to chat.I got know that they were college students traveling in China.Most of them were fond with Chinese medicine.They are busy taking pictures and were much impressed with the changes that had been taken place in the past few years.After that, we went boating on a lake and having a good time.We exchanged our email address so that we could write to each other in the future.They thanked us again and again.I was very glad to have chance to practicing my oral English..（25）I first met Li Meng at a friend birthday party five years ago. Then I invited Li Meng over in my place. We listen to my CDs together and soon became good friends. Three years ago, Li Meng’s parents invited I to spend a couple of wonderful week in Qingdao with them during the summer holiday. Li Meng and I loved walking along the beautifully beaches there. Last year I was ill but had to stay in hospital for a week. Li Meng came see me every day. Then, her father has changed jobs and they moved to another city. Since then we haven’t see each other much, but we’ve kept writing to each other.（26）This is a story told by my father: “When I was boy,the most exciting thing was when to celebrate the Spring Festival. My grandma was the best cooker in the world but could make the most delicious dishes. One time, I just couldn’t wait the Spring Festival dinner. As I was about take a piece from a cooked duck, I saw Grandma in the kitchen looking at me. Shake her head, she said, ‘It isn't a good time to do that, dear.’ At once I apologize and controlled me at my best till the dinner started. You know, that was a dinner we had waited for several month.”（27）Dear Editor,I'm writing to tell you about a food poisoning accident. Several days ago, my neighbor ate a bag of food buying from the market．After the meal, they had stomachaches and their faces turn pale.Fortunate, one of their friends found the accident and immediately called an ambulance, which carried them quickly to a hospital．After several hours' treatment they finally escaped with death．As some illegal businessmen only interested in making profits to become rich quickly, we seldom care about the necessary safety measures．Nor do they care about which happens to consumers．They shall be charged by law．Meanwhile, I do hope whole society can realize the important of food safety and begin taking action together to make sure food is safe.Li Hua（28）Manager,I am an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very well, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema.First, the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements at the beginning. It was rather annoyed. Second, the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear. The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly, which presented potential safety problems. If something terribly should happen, it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.As a visitor to your city, I’m disappointed with my experience in your cinema. I am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider on these problems and make some improvements.Yours faithfully,Li Hua（29）Dear Jim,I'd like to tell you something more about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct. 6th, it was a fine day. There were over 1,000 students and teachers attended it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meters race. He finished the race in 12.6 seconds and broke the school record. The sports meeting was really success. That was because we were all trying to do my best.Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of that we had done.Looking forward to receive your letter.Yours,Li Ping（30）Dear Lucy,I am very excited to learn that you’re coming to Xi’an for travel. Both my parent miss you a lot. So is our friend, Ruby. April is best time of the year to visit Xi’an. There is only a few rain and the weather is neither too hot or too cold. There are so many places I wanted to take you to after I finish my work like a volunteer in the local charity. When you come, you can stay with ourselves. My house is about three kilometers far away from Xi’an Moslem Street where is full of local foods.Best regards,Janet（31）Abby，How are you? I’ve got a wonderful news to tell you．I have offered a scholarship at a university in Australia for my further education. Two hundreds and twenty students took the exam for it, but only a few are chosen. Therefore, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against my going there.They say it is too far away that they will worry about me. They can't imagine a girl of my age live alone. They advise me to study in the capital instead. Then I’ll be able to continue on living with them. How can I persuade them to accepting the fact that I have grown up?Best Wishes，Jane(32)Dear David,I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find they are not willing to be with me now. They don’t talk with me, and they’ve become cold towards me. Many time, I wanted to talk with them about how I felt like, but I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don’t I win true friendship?(33)Good morning, everyone！I feel great honored to be here to give a speech. The topics of my speech today is “Thoughts on becoming a grown-up.” As child, I always hoped that I could grow up as soon as possible so that I could do whichever I liked. Now I am a grown-up, but I find things do not go as expect. Although I can enjoy more freedom, but I also realize being a grown-up not only mean this, but also more responsibilities. I hope to do more for my parents and society in the future to make my life less meaningful. To reach the goal, I must try my best to pass the college entrance examination and be admitted with a key university. Thank you for your listen.(34)I used to feel I was the sun in my family．But when my cousin was born，everyone pays more attention to her．So I disliked her and couldn’t get along well with her. With time went on，I realized how ridiculous I have been at that time．I tried to find a proper time to apologize．When my cousin’s family came to my home a few day ago，I took my cousin to play outside．In the way to the playground．I bought much snacks for her．Then we began chat．When we talked about their childhood，suddenly，I said“sorry”gently．She was silently，so I thought that she hadn’t heard me clearly．But after while she said：“Don’t say that．In my memory，you are always friendly．”(35)From the picture, we can see that there are many students are wearing glasses, that is, they are short-sighted. As we all know, which is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight? First, don’t keep your eyes work for a long time. You’d better have rest after you have studied an hour or so. Second, pay much attention to the following. Don’t read under the sun or in a poorly light; don’t read in bed or in a moved bus. Third, do eye exercise every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight. But last you should have enough sleep. Only you obey the rules above can you prevent your eyesight from becoming short-sighted.(36)Dear Li Hua,I’m familiar to your situation. As computers become more and more popular, some students cannot help play online games and chatting. It is not only a problem of wasting time, but serious problem for their future! What you should do at first is to find out what make her addicted to computer games. Lack of love from parents? Poor score? Then having a heart-to-heart talk with her. Secondly, you should help herself with her study to build up her confidence and make her interesting in it. Thirdly, find something else for her to do instead computer games. Your efforts will surely help change her life.Yours,Jack(37)V olunteers WantedThe Voluntary Service Club of our school will set up on March 25th. The main purpose of it is to call on and organize students to serve for society better and develop our ability to cooperate to others. The volunteers are required to work at weekends to visit the elderly in the nursing homes in our city, keep public places clean and offer some guidances to the passengers in some stations and so on. The students which are healthy, patience, warm-hearted and willing to help others are welcome to join the club. Whether you are interested and want to become a member of it, please sent your application to the Students’ Union before March 15th. The office of the Students’ Union will contact the choosing candidates for a interview in a few days.March 8thThe Students’ Union(38)My parents have decided to take me to Britain for a visit. I am excited, hope to make good use of this opportunity. Firstly, I will talk to native speaker as much as I can improve my English. Secondly, there are many attractions in which interest me a lot, among which is Big Ben. Besides, football, that is popular in England, is my favorite sport. I had been dreaming of watching live football match there, but now the dream will come true. My friend Alice lives in London. I will probable meet her. However I do, I am sure I will have a good time.(39)A high school in England has been issued a new policy to allow students to sleep longer on the mornings. It is introducing a 1:30 –7:00 pm timetable in September. It will become an only school in Britain start lessons in the afternoon. Head teacher Guy Holloway said the new hours should help students get higher grade. He said a research on neuroscience (神经学) show students’ productivity increases unless they can sleep longer in the mornings. Mr. Holloway said, “We want to get students into an environment that they can get quality sleep and their bodies are functioning good.” He adds, “It's about what works in our community.”(40)Last Tuesday，the Students’ Union in our school advised that Senior Three students shall do something specially for their parents on their 18th birthdays. All the students are active in responding it and most of them have come up with their ideas．Some choose to write a letter saying it’s best way to express their appreciations as well as love for their parents. Others will prefer to cook a big meal to show that they have already grown up. As for me, I want to do up hair and wash feet for my parents. By doing which my parents have been doing for me I can really know how much they have devoted to bring me up. Being 18 years old mean that we should learn to be independent and that we should be responsible for us.短文改错专题参考答案【技巧点拨】短文改错要做好，常见类型要记牢。
高中英语短文改错超详细解题技巧
高中英语短文改错超详细解题技巧一短文改错的复习重点1、考生必须熟悉设错方式：多词、少词、错词。
⑴ 多词现象大多出现在冠词、介词、助动词、连词、语义重复及行文逻辑等方面。
⑵ 少词现象主要出现在冠词、介词、副词、助动词、不定式符号to、连词等。
⑶ 错词现象主要在冠词、介词、名词单复数、动词时态、非谓语动词、主谓一致、代词、连词、词形。
2、考生平时应加强基本功训练，用一个“错题集”本把自己或同学在书面表达中出现的错误归纳一下，以便考前复习。
二对全文的宏观把握学生应把改错内容当作一篇小短文来理解，这样能对短文有个宏观把握，对上下文有全面的了解。
在理解篇章的基础上逐句审读，分析判断，上下兼顾，把明显的、拿的准的题先做完，这样可以缩小包围圈，也有助于对全文的进一步理解。
三从语法角度审查1、查看时态是否一致。
My favorite sport is football. I was a member of our football team. 全文都是用的一般现在时，此句中的was显然与上下文语境不符，应改为am。
2、查看主谓是否一致。
Anyone may borrow books, and it cost nothing to borrow them. cost应改为costs，因其主语是it为形式主语，且上下文均为一般现在时。
3、查指代是否一致。
The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.句中的主语the Smiths表的是Smith一家人，因此指示代词his应改为their。
4、查平行结构是否平行一致。
由and, or, but, either...or..., neither...nor..., not only...but also..., as well as等并列连词和词组连接的结构可称为平行结构。
It was very kind of them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home. 句中的drove显然与and前面的to meet不平行，应改为drive。
专题07 短文改错-2020-2021学年高二下学期英语期末考前10天必、
专题07 短文改错考前必做1.具有责任与担当是评价标准中重要的话题（必做理由）【广西岑溪市2020-2021学年高二下学期期中】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词：2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Zhou Chenyu, a 24-years-old female space commander, has become famous on Chinese social media as her work. According to her colleague, Zhou was very much surprised when she found out she went a viral sensation (轰动) online. She said that she was happy when she see people online considering her as the pride of the country. She kept say, “I am nobody but the normal worker which works at a launch site”. She added, “Always there are a lot more workmates just like me going unnoticed while doing the most difficultly job to guarantee a better future for the Chinese space program”. She wished remain her current status and continue doing her work with or without the popular.【答案】1. 24-years-old→ 24-year-old 2. as→for 3. 删除much 4. see→saw 5. say→saying 6. which→who/that 7. difficultly→ difficult 8. a→the 9.在remain前加to 10.popular→popularity【解析】这是一篇记叙文。
高中英语短文改错题做题技巧探秘
高中英语短文改错题做题技巧探秘一、高考对短文改错题型的定位：短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性英语试题，旨在考查学生对语言的评价与校正的能力以及对词汇、语法和语篇,三要素的把握能力。
它是专门针对考生们平时学习英语过程中，尤其是写作练中常犯的又是较为普遍的错误而设计的。
对考生们而言，该题又是拉开距离和档次的题型。
短文改错这种题型对同学们来说有一定的难度，要想做好并不容易，所以学生平时一定要注意积累更多的语言知识，扩大词汇量，掌握丰富的英语短语，了解更多的句型结构和习惯表达，这样在考试中才能游刃有余，迅速地找到错误并加以纠正。
二、体裁和句式：体裁以记叙文为主，句子结构以简单句为主过渡到以复合句和并列句为主。
从近几年考试题来看，短文改错的句子平均长度趋于平稳，由于多数句子不是只占一行，所以只有读完整个句子，仔细分析，才能发现错误、纠正错误。
但几乎每篇都有一个长达20多个词的句子。
这就需要考生在这个句子中判断出二到三个地方有错或无错，增加了试题的难度。
三、归纳短文改错错误类型:(一) 词法的测试1.名词：主要是查名词是否可数，与其修饰语是否一致。
eg: 1) I have many hobby, such as football, sing, listen music.Hobby是可数名词，在这要用复数形式；playing football是一项运动，football只是一种球；sing和listen to 要用动名词形式。
2) Do exercises do good to our healthy. exercise作运动讲是不可数名词，do exercise作主语要用动名词形式，谓动用单数；healthy是形容词，这里要用名词形式。
3) Reading books is one of my hobby.one of 后的名词应用复数形式。
2. 代词：对于短文中出现的每一个代词都要查一下它所指代的内容及在句中的作用，注意其数、格、词性是否正确和前后是否一致，常考的代词包括人称代词、指示代词、反身代词、关系代词及疑问代词等。
2023高考英语复习之短文改错精练精析
2023高考英语复习之短文改错精练精析A【全国卷I】I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I wasin primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone’s surprising, the ball went into the net. Allthe football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to playmy football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.B【全国卷II】Since I was a kid, I’ve considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered mg goal or decided to be a doctor.They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.AMy parents and I visited my uncle in Seattle on last July. My favorite experience was our trip to Mount Rainer, an volcano near Seattle. Before we left, my uncle gave us hats to protect us from getting sunburned, I supposed that it will be very hot. When we drove up the mountain, I found the top covering with snow and ice! My uncle led me to a small path to increase our chances of seeing wildlife. Suddenly there appeared a field that small wild flowers grew up through the snow. Little animal stood sti ll; tiny birds rose highly into the air. It was the most beautiful sight that I’dnever seen.BRecently I found a couple of donation box in my living community. People come to it when they have clothes they don’t wear. The donation box, I think, is of great useful. I have a lot of clothes which don’t fit for me any longer. I have no idea before about how to deal with the clothes that are real new and still in good condition. Now I know how to do next. I will donate them or help those people in need. So I think the donation box is good idea that lights up our life and make the world a better place to live in.CLast weekend, I visit the People’s Park with my parents. We were enjoying the fantastic scenery around while I noticed anything unpleasant happening. A young couple were taking some photo on the grass. The man was shouting excitedly, “How beautiful!” They completely forgot what they should bear in mind when travelling or ignored the sign say “Keep off the grass”. What shame!Such behavior left me deep on thought. If all visitors to the People’s Park do as the couple did so, the park will besevere damaged and become messy.DIt was a rain and cold night. I finish my evening classes and was about to go back to my house, I got into a taxi and told the driver my destination. To my surprise, the driver made an apology, says he didn’t know the way. What come a taxi driver didn’t know the way? I was a little of angry. At the moment, an old couple stopped our car. Their destination was the same as me, so he let them in. The two greeted us but the grandpa told the driver the way. From their conversation I knew the driver was a farmer and he had become a taxi driver just for three days.I’m also new to Chengdu. Sometimes I make direction mistakes, but there is always someone can help me. It wascold outside, but I felt real warm.答案与解析A【答案】1. interesting改为interested2. where改为when3. suddenly后面加a4. but改为and5. hardly改为hard6. surprising改为surprise7. player改为players 8. say改为saying9. now改为then 10. my去掉【解析】1.考查形容词用法。
高中英语的改错题技巧
高中英语的改错题技巧高中英语的改错题技巧短文改错考查考生发现和纠正错误的能力，它是测试考生写作能力的一种客观方式。
下文是店铺为大家收集整理的高中英语的改错题技巧，希望大家喜欢。
高中英语的改错题技巧1一、冠词。
主要考查冠词表示泛指、特指的用法及固定搭配中冠词的使用。
1. ... and fish was caught. (陕西2013)【解析】本题考查不定冠词。
本句的意思是“一条鱼被抓住了”。
fish在本句中是单数可数名词，且是泛指，故应在前面加不定冠词a。
2. As a result, nobody knew truth. (浙江2012)【解析】本题考查定冠词the的用法。
此处指特定的真相，应在truth前加the。
3. In a fact, he even ... (2013新课标全国卷I)【解析】in fact是固定短语，应去掉a。
二、名词。
主要考查可数名词和不可数名词辨析、可数名词单复数等。
1. He has ruined his healthy. (辽宁2013)【解析】本题考查名词的用法。
his是形容词性物主代词，其后应接名词，故应将healthy改为health。
2. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard ... (2013新课标全国卷I)【解析】本题考查名词单复数。
表示“宽厚的肩膀”应用broad shoulders，故应将shoulder改为复数形式。
三、动词。
主要考查动词的时态、语态等。
1. I was only four when she passes away. (2013新课标全国卷I)【解析】本题考查动词的时态。
主句是一般过去时，when引导的时间状语从句也应用一般过去时，故应将passes改为passed。
2. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. (2013新课标全国卷II)【解析】本题考查动词的语态。
英语短文改错题的考点归纳
解题技巧短文改错题涉及的知识点多，覆盖面广，对同学们的综合能力要求高，是高考英语的一大易失分点。
对此，笔者就高考英语短文改错题的考点进行了归纳。
考点之一：用词错误这类错误考查面广，常见的设错点有：①非谓语动词的错用；②形容词与副词的错用；③动词时态、语态、主谓一致的错用；④人称代词主宾格的错用；⑤名词单复数、名词与不可数名词、名词所有格的错用；⑥习惯用法中介词的错用；⑦基数词与序数词的错用；⑧并列连词、从属连词的错用；⑨从句关系代词和副词的错用等。
在解答时，同学们要认真浏览全文，在理解文章大意的基础上整行整句分析，并从词法、句法以及逻辑等方面判断出用词错误。
【例1】①（2020年高考全国卷1）I like eating fry-ing tomatoes with eggs .②(2020年高考全国卷2)Actually,I started to learn kung fu when I was seven years old,for I have long been out of practice.③（2020年高考全国卷3）My mom is really con-cerned with the health of everyone in our families.解析：①考查非谓语动词的准确运用。
句意是：我喜欢吃西红柿炒鸡蛋。
动词“fry ”与“tomatoes ”之间为动宾关系，并非主动关系，所以应用过去分词作定语，故此处的“frying ”应改为“fried ”。
②考查连词的准确运用。
句意是：事实上，我7岁时就开始学功夫了，但我很久没有练习了。
通过分析句子可知，前半句说“我7岁时就开始学功夫了”，后半句说“我很久没有练习了”，由此不难看出，前后语意出现了转折，应用转折关系的连词，故此处“for ”错误，应改为“but ”。
③考查单数名词的运用。
句意是：我的妈妈真的关心我们家里每个人的健康。
2020届高三英语专项复习之短文改错(有答案)
2020届高三英语专项复习之短文改错(一)Last week, I went to a painting exhibition. Upon enter the gallery, I put on the earphones which would give me an introduce to all the paintings. Suddenly, I noticed elderly woman who didnt know how to use the earphones stood anxious in front of a painting. I rushed to her with hesitation and helped her put on the earphones. The woman thanks me for my kindness. She realized then that reaching out to others could really bring a great moment of happiness. That day when I appreciated lots of breathtaking paintings. What's more, I leamed a value lesson from the grateful smile giving by the elderly woman.答案:1.enter ---entering 2.introduce---introduction 3. notcied 后加an4.anxious—anxiously5. With –without6.thanks—thanked7. She –I8. when去掉9.value---valuable 10. giving---given(二)I like traveling very much. I always dream of being independence and traveling on my own. But my parents worry with me all the time. They think I may meet problem and can't solve them. In order to comfort her, I decided to travel with a friend but they agreed. This was the first time for me to leave home and I had to do all the things by myself. I bought two tickets, and I book a room in a hotel.I downloaded an app which was using to help me find the hotel easily. I read several kinds of the information on my destination and picked out the part that was useful to me. Beside, I knew about the funny places and local food.答案：1.independence—independent 2.with---about 3.problem---problems4.her—them5.but---and6.me后加to7.book—bookeding---used9.the 去掉10. Beside---Besides（三）Yesterday our club held an English speech contest, which theme was “Challenge Myself”. A large number of students attended to the contest and showed their wonderful performances. In the stage, though face great pressure, the speakers bravely overcame it and challenged them to achieve great success. Moreover, they impressed us deep with their unusual confidences and performances.Through such activity, we know a lot more about our students but we have gained much, such as self-confidence and bravery. Besides, our club was growing stronger.1which—whose 2去掉to 3In—On 4.face—facing 5 them-- themselves6 deep—deeply7 confidences –confidence8 such后面加上an 9but—and 10.was—is(四)Nowadays Greece is struggling under a mountain of debt. The European Union promises to take actions to maintain financial stability, when need. worries over Greek debt have pushed the euro to its lowest value against a dollar. EU minister are expected to talk about Greece when they will meet in Belgium.Sixteen nations in the EU use the euro their currency. Now, the stronger members are seeking ways to help the weak ones. According to EU rules, the European Central Bank is not permitted to aid members by purchasing its debt. European officials hope to avoid the economic disasters what could become even worse unless Greece fails to pay its debt.This year Greece’s debt can reach as many as 120% of its GDP.答案：1. Actions—action 2. Need—needed 3.a—the 4. Will去掉5. eruo后加as6. Weak---weaker7.its—their8. Unless—if9. what---that/which 10. Many---much（五）Last Saturday, eighty students from our school visit to Liaoning Science and Technology Museum. The museum, which main task is to spread the knowledge of science and technology, covers area of 15, 000 square meters. The moment when we entered the museum. Th exhibition caught their attention. In the museum, we saw the latest progresses in science and technology. Moreover we did an amazed scientific experiment by ourselves. What appealed for us most was the 4D film which made us feel we were In real events.Though the visiting time was slight short we gained a lot. It is so an instructive activity that we hope more will be organized in the future.答案：1.pay—paid 2.which—whose 3. Cover 后加a 4. When去掉5.their—our6. progresses---progress7. Amazed---amazing8.for ---to9. Slight—slightly10. so--such(六)In my early days at my senior high school, I struggled to keep up in class and near dropped out. The problem was what I had no self-confidence. Then coming Miss Li，my English teacher. She told me to try much hard Whenever I lost the heart, she would encourage me: Youcan make it. I spent hours memorize words. We meet in her office each morning and she would urge me read English for at least 20 minutes. Eventually, something amazingly happened and I got high marks in English. I am grateful that Miss Li often gives me confidences 答案：1. Near—nearly 2. What ---that ing—came 4. Hard—harder5.the 去掉6. Memorize---memorizing7. Meet---met8.me 后加to 9. Amazingly—amazing 10. Confidences—confidence(七)I've always loved Harry Potter. When my mom and dad said that I can go to themidnight release of Harry Potter and the Cursed Child, I was very much excited! When we got there I participated a series of activities which theme was Harry Potter. Both of us counted down from ten to zero for the last ten second before midnight. The activity was amazed！Everyone present started cheering but then we started to buy the book. All in all, it was the great party. I am glad I was present at the party though I fell asleep late than usual that night.答案：1.can-could 2.much去掉 3.participte后加in 4.which---whose 5. Both—all6.scond—seconds7.amazed---amazing8.but---and9.the ----a te---later(八)Yesterday, I was walked my dog in the evening when I saw the poor child who was selling some key chains, He had five key chains and was asking for me to buy one. Iasked myself, " Is he selling this A build a house? My heart answered, "No, this is for his hungry tonight. "I bought all the key chain and offered him milk and biscuits, I gave her a smiley key chain back as a gift, but his smile was awesome. I feel great satisfaction in my heart at that moment. I believe that life is successfully if you win a smile from someone.答案：1.walked-walking 2.the—a 3.for 去掉4.this后加to5.hungry---hunger6. Chain—chains7.her—him8. But---and9.feel—felt10.successfully—successful（九）Recently, there have been more and more Confucius Institutes built all over the world, that shows our Chinese culture has been become much more popular than ever. As one of the four ancient civilization, China creates many splendid cultures within it's long history. The ancient Chinese culture once had great influences in the worlds civilization. Especially in Japan, South Korea and other Asian country. The Chinese culture is slowly accumulated in the whole Chinese history making colorful and brilliant. If one want to know or study Chinese culture more deep, he or she must spend more time. Therefore, he or she can only get the tip of an iceberg.答案：1.that---which 2. Been去掉3. Civilization—civilizations 4.it’s—its5.in—on6.country—countries7.making后加it8.want---wants9. deep---deeply 10.therefore—Otherwise（十）We live in the rural areas. Most of what we see is beauty and nature. One of the exception to the beauty is the litter some people throw out their windows as they are driving on the roads, One of the few drawbacks to live in the countryside is that public services, such as litter collection, are little available than they are closer to the city. A helping habit that my family practise regularly are picking up litter in our surrounding area, We have become very accustomed to doing this that my little brother will often say, "There's some litter, Daddy, stop the car!"And we would often pull over and pick it up. It may seem strange, and we actually enjoy it. We pick up litter in parks, on sidewalks, practically anywhere. Once I even saw a completely stranger picking up litter close to where we live in. He smiled at me and said, "I saw you doing it, and it seemed like a good idea.答案：1.exception---exceptions 2. Out后加of 3.live---living 4.little—less5.are—is6.very—so7. Would---will8.and—but9. Completely---complete10.in去掉(十一)Last week. our teacher told us that we will have a practical activity. At first, we were happy to hear the news, and all of us thought they must be great fun. However, we felt disappointed when learning that we needed assist some cleaners with their work. Before we joined them, we found that the cleaners there was very nice to us. They were all enthusiastically about their work.We tried to help with them as much as possible. All of the sudden,I was so grateful to them, for they were the city’s decorator. What they did meant so many to the society. We should respect them and appreciate their work.答案：1.will-would 2.they—it 3.needed后加to 4.Before –After 5.was—were 6.enthusiastic—enthusiastically 7.with去掉8. the—a 9.decorator---decorators 10.many--much(十二)Of all the members in my family, my father is the busy one. He works at a university. Besides give lectures, he does most of the houseworks. Yesterday, he got up very early. He did some shopping, preparing our breakfast, and went to work in a hurry. Right after the first two classes. he went to his office to make her teaching plans for the next day. He came back to home at 12 o'clock. Then, he had appointment with his friend to talk about some important things. And then he went to the Lab to doing experiments. In the evening, he careful corrected students’ reports until II pm. My father is very busy, and he feels happy.1.busy-busiest2. Give—giving3.houseworks—housework4. Preparing—prepared5.her—his6. To去掉7.had后加an 8 .doing—do 9. Careful---carefully 10. And--but。
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高中英语写作技能之短文改错复习I.错误类型1.谓语动词的错误是历年考试的重点和热点，常见动词错误类型有：①一般现在时与一般过去时错用;②and前后动词时态不一致;③主谓不一致;④缺少动词,特别是be动词;⑤第三人称单数形式错用;⑥主动语态和被动语态错用。
2.名词的常见错误：单复数名词错用，可数名词与不可数名词错用。
3.连词错误：连词包括关系代词、副词，并列连词and/or/but等。
关于连词，一般考查从句关系who/whom/whose/what/which/how/why/when/where/if/whether等。
4.冠词错误：误用a和an(根据单词的第一个音素来判定);误用a/an和the(固定搭配，或泛指、特指;多冠词或少冠词)5.形容词和副词错误：系动词后用形容词(be/am/is/are/was/were/become/go/感官性动词smell/feel);词性的误用(形容词修饰名词;副词修饰动词、形容词)。
6.代词错误：代词的主格和宾格(I/me; he/him; she/her; we/us they/them)错误;反身代词(myself/yourself/himself/herself/themselves/ourselves)使用错误;代词的单数和复数使用错误;代词指代错误;多代词或少代词。
7.非谓语动词的常见错误：不定式、动名词作主语、宾语时;and连接的不定式或动名词前后不一致(尤其距离较远时);介词后用动名词形式作宾语;某些动词后要求接动名词或不定式。
8.介词错误：词组中的介词误用;介词意思理解偏差;介词的多用或少用II.技巧总结1.句中各部分的结构是否完整，特别是每个句子要有动词;2.谓语动词的时态、语态;3.非谓语动词的用法;4.名词的单、复数，格的使用是否正确;5.定冠词和不定冠词是否正确;6.代词的格和性的使用是否有误;7.定语从句中关系代词、副词是否准确无误;8.并列句中的并列连词、主从复合句中的从属连词用的是否得当真题精讲(1) After an hour or so we began to feel very frightening. (frightening 改为frightened，因它表示某人感到害怕，而不是令人害怕) (全国卷)(2) Charles said, “As soon as I see a realy tall building, I want to climb it. (realy 改为really 或real，若改为really，则修饰tall;若改为real，则修饰building) (全国卷)(3) Last Sunday, police cars hurry to the taller building in New York. (taller 改为tallest，因从含义上看此处应是最高级) (全国卷)(4) As a result, people in the modern world generally live much more longer thanpeople in the past. (去掉more，因为longer 本身已是比较级，不能再受more 修饰) (全国卷)(5) Therefore, there are still some countries where people have shorter lives.(Therefore 改为However，因此处语意转折) (全国卷)(6) People in industrial countries can expect to live for twice so long as people wholived a few hundred years ago. (so long as 改为as long as，其意为“与……一样长”) (全国卷)(7) In some places you may borrow many books as you want. (many 之前加as，因as ... as 结构不完整)(8) I told Mother, Father, Sister and all my friends here that a great time I had. (that改为what) (全国卷)(9) I never knew a ride down a river could be so much exciting. (去掉much，因much 不能用来修饰形容词的原级，尽管它可用来修饰比较级和最高级) (全国卷)(10) I’m sure we’ll have a won derfully time together. (wonderfully 改为wonderful，因它是放在名词前作定语)课堂练习passage 1When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing in the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I had studied at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test. I went through the test for many times but I could only answer three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail the exam. Then, I put my book undermy desk, opening it and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance.passage 2I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent students in our class. Clever as she is, but she words very hard. We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk .One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor’s house .She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbor was very thankful for her helppassage 3I often dream of a teacher, I dream of standing on the platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys and girls . I teach them, play with them, but watch them growing up. I am always young when I was staying with them. I know there is not easy to be a teacher. You have to learn in order to teach. Without enough knowledges, you can never learn well .What is more , you have to be friends with your pupils and take good care of him. Only in this way can you be good teacher and win respect from them. Though I am a student now, I will work as very hard to make my dream come true.passage 1in 改为out had 后加not easy 前加an；去掉for from 改为of opening 改为opened；answer 改为answers but 改为so don’t 改为di dn’t punish 后加mepassage 2教师范读的是阅读教学中不可缺少的部分，我常采用范读，让幼儿学习、模仿。
如领读，我读一句，让幼儿读一句，边读边记；第二通读，我大声读，我大声读，幼儿小声读，边学边仿；第三赏读，我借用录好配朗读磁带，一边放录音，一边幼儿反复倾听，在反复倾听中体验、品味。
who’s 改为whose . 第二行：去but 第三行：on 改为in ；talk 后加aboutwas 改为were；homeworks 改为homework stopped 后加to find 改为foundimmediate 改为immediately 去掉thepassage 3dream 后加being/becoming give 改为giving；but 改为and was 改为am ；there 改为it knowledges 改为knowledge/learning learn 改为teach him 改为them；be 后加a 去掉as课后练习Mary was an university student. She didn’t have much money and her parents were not rich, but she had an uncle who had been luck enough to collect great wealth. He always gave her valuable Christmas and birthday present .When her uncle’s birthday came round, Mary want to buy him something real special , butbecause he was so rich, she did not know how to get him. She went into the best shop in her town and explained that what her problem was to one of the helpful shop assistant. Finally she asked, “What do you have for someone has already got everything he wants or needs?” The girl sighed deep and answered, “Envy(忌妒), only envy.”Last weekend, I helped my grandparents with their trip to the Dalian. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I search the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Dalian, and some hotel informations. In the afternoon, they went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there had a long queue. After dinner, I packed the things into the suitcase, what my grandparents would need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, a map. The next morning, I went to the station to show them off. Waved goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happily for them and wished them a safe journey.语文课本中的文章都是精选的比较优秀的文章,还有不少名家名篇。