大学英语病句改写全套汇编

改写病句串句串句：错误将两个独立的分句串在一起，不用连词、标点，误将两个句子当成一个句子。

类型：1。

用一个逗号把两个独立的句子连接起来。

2。

什么标点符号都没有使用。

破句破句：是一组词由于缺少主语或动词无法表达完整意思的错句。

只是句子的一个从属部分类型：从属词破句，分词、不定式破句，附加细节句，无主破句。

1st: 修改串句：4 ways分成两个句子误The local tire plant shut down for the holiday everyone had two weeks off. 正The local tire plant shut down for the holiday. As a result, everyone had two weeks off.误She didn’t feel particularly well she went to bed.正She didn’t feel particularly well. Therefore，she went to bed.误He tried many times to give up smoking he never managed to.正He tried many times to give up smoking. However, he never managed to. 用连词and, but, for, or, nor, so, yet连接两个句子，连词之前加逗号。

（误）Don’t tease the dog you might get bitten.（正）Don’t tease the dog, or you might get bitten.用分号连接两个句子1.He tried many times to give up smoking; however, he never managed to.2.The local tire plant shut down for the holiday; as a result, everyone had twoweeks off.用从属连词把一个分句化为从句，修饰或限定主句After we walked over to the waterfall slowly, we sat down to admire the beauty of the falls.There is no school tomorrow, so they will go on a picnic.最佳方法修改串句首选逗号加并列连词，用于两句之间有逻辑关系的句子；其次选择分号，用于两句中有表示连接关系的副词或副词词组时或后句是前句的说明时；最后考虑句号，用于两句没有逻辑关系或角度表化等情况。

2nd：修改破句：4类类1：从属词破句（误）Smokers claim the right to smoke in public places. While nonsmokers claim the right to clean air.（正）Smokers claim the right to smoke in public places while nonsmokers claim the right to clean air.（误）Examinations remain as primitive as ever before. No matter how advanced our science and technology have become in this modern society.（正）Examinations remain as primitive as ever before no matter how advanced our science and technology have become in this modern society.（误）After I arrived in Chicago by bus. I checked into a room. Then I went to a dinner to get something to eat.（正）After I arrived in Chicago by bus, I checked into a room, and then I went to a dinner to get something to eat.（误）My daughter likes to make paper boats. Which she floats in the tub during her nightly bath.（正）My daughter likes to make paper boats which she floats in the tub during her nightly bath.（正）My daughter likes to make paper boats. She floats them in the tub during her nightly bath.类2：分词和不定式破句修改方法（1）让破句与其前或其后的句子连接起来，使语义完整（2）增添主语，把现在分词改成动词的正确形式；（3）把being 改为be的恰当形式；（4）将不定式部分与前面句子连接起来。

（误）Starting at the clock on the far wall. I nervously began my speech. I was afraid to look at any of the people in the room.（正）Starting at the clock on the far wall, I nervously began my speech. I was afraid to look at any of the people in the room.（误）I spent almost two hours on the phone yesterday. Trying to find a garage to repair my car. Eventually I had to have it towed to a garage in another town. （正）I spent almost two hours on the phone yesterday, trying to find a garage to repair my car. Eventually I had to have it towed to a garage in another town.（误）I plan on working overtime. To get this job finished. Otherwise, my boss may get angry with.（正）I plan on working overtime to get this job finished. Otherwise, my boss may get angry with.类3：增加细节引起的破句especially, specially, for example, such as, for instance, like, also, as well as, except, but, besides后接n.时, 不能单独存在，只能是句子的部分。

修改方法：（1）与其前面具有完整意义的句子连接起来；（2）增加主语和谓语动词；（3）改动, 使其成为前句的一部分。

（误）My aunt likes watching daytime television shows. Especially old movies and soap operas.（正）My aunt likes watching daytime television shows, especially old movies and soap operas.（误）Student cheating is still widely practiced. In spite of the fact that the violators get severe punishment once they are caught.（正）Student cheating is still widely practiced in spite of the fact that the violators get severe punishment once they are caught.（误）He failed a number of courses before he earned his degree. Among them, English, Economics, and General Biology.（正）Among the courses he failed before he earned his degree were English, Economics, and General Biology.（误）Cotton grows well in their county. Particularly in Vanguard Commune. （正）Cotton grows well in their county, particularly in Vanguard Commune. 类4：缺少主语的破句改正方法为：a.使破句依附于前面的句子b.增加主语（该主语往往是代词，指代前句中的主语）（误）They take an active part in social activities. On holidays, frequently do temporary jobs.(正）They take an active part in social activities, and on holidays, they frequently do temporary jobs.（误）One example of my father’s generosity is that he visits sick friends in the hospital. And takes along get-well cards with a few dollars folded in them．在慰问卡里塞钱（正）One example of my father’s generosity is that he visits sick friends in the hospital and takes along get-well cards with a few dollars folded in the （正）One example of my father’s generosity is that he visits sick friends in the hospital. He takes along get-well cards with a few dollars folded in them. （误）Sarah looked with admiration at the stunningly attractive model. And wondered how the model looked upon waking up in the morning.（正）Sarah looked with admiration at the stunningly attractive model and wondered how the model looked upon waking up in the morning.3rd: 错误平行结构（1）词与词间的平行（名词、形容词、副词、动名词、分词以及不定式等）①A wedding anniversary is a celebration of love, trust, partnership, and tolerance.②Kate is not only beautiful but also intelligent.③Tom works carefully and diligently.④Working or resting, she always enjoyed herself.⑤The soldier preferred to die rather than surrender.（2）词组间的平行：That’s one small step for a man, one giant leap for mankind.We prefer camping in the open to playing football in the field.（3）分句间的平行：The love of liberty is the love of others; the love of power is the love of ourselves.Take your books out and put them on the desk.He paid more attention to what he ate than to what he wore.（4）句子间的平行：Militarily, Great Britain was shockingly weak in 1941. Socially, however, the country was surprisingly strong.（误）Kate has been a waitress, a nurse and taught school.（正）Kate has been a waitress, a nurse and a teacher.(系列中的每个平行成分都应是名词。