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小站雅思作文范文科技的发展对人类社会产生了深远的影响，无论是在生活中还是在工作中，科技都扮演着至关重要的角色。

本文将探讨科技对人类的影响，并对此进行分析和讨论。

首先，科技的发展对人类的生活产生了巨大的影响。

随着科技的进步，人们的生活水平得到了显著提高。

比如，交通工具的发展使得人们的出行更加便捷，通讯工具的普及使得人们之间的沟通更加便利，医疗技术的进步使得人们的健康状况得到了很大的改善。

此外，科技的发展也为人们提供了更多的娱乐方式，比如互联网的普及使得人们可以随时随地享受到丰富多彩的娱乐资源。

其次，科技的发展对人类的工作产生了深远的影响。

随着科技的进步，许多传统的劳动力密集型产业逐渐被自动化和智能化取代，这导致了一部分人失去了工作机会。

但与此同时，科技的发展也为人们创造了更多的就业机会，比如信息技术行业、互联网行业等新兴产业的兴起为人们提供了大量的就业机会。

此外，科技的发展也为人们提供了更多的工作方式，比如远程办公、自由职业等新的工作模式的出现为人们提供了更多的选择。

然而，科技的发展也带来了一些负面影响。

首先，科技的发展导致了资源的过度消耗和环境的破坏，比如化石能源的大量消耗导致了全球变暖和环境污染的加剧。

其次，科技的发展也催生了一些社会问题，比如信息泛滥和隐私泄露等问题。

此外，科技的发展也给人们的生活带来了一些负面影响，比如人们沉迷于网络游戏和社交媒体，导致了身心健康的问题。

综上所述，科技的发展对人类的生活和工作产生了深远的影响，无论是在积极方面还是在消极方面，科技都扮演着至关重要的角色。

因此，我们应该充分认识到科技的重要性，正确看待科技的发展，努力发挥科技的积极作用，同时避免科技给人类带来的负面影响。

【小站教育】[B老师出品] [雅思写作救命稻草系列资料]教育类(1)

Task2: Some people say that to become a good teacher, you should acquire enough training, while others say that teaching capabilities can be developed with experience. Discuss both views and give your opinion.学生作文批改（注：红字部分为补充和点评，黑色划杠部分为删减）It is increasingly coming(increasingly 最好用进行时) to people's attention about the capacities/qualities/properties of a good teacher. Some people concern the sufficient training, with while(于此同时用while最合适)others focusing on the practice practical experience. I will try to discuss both of them.开头简单明了，不错，就是略有语法错误，学生要注意开头的重要性，很多阅卷老师都是看开头和第一段就基本定下该学生的分数基调！！！It is necessary to get individual well prepared in his or her pre-teacher period. Enough accumulation of professional knowledge enables a teacher to develop a wide range of views as well as to broadening horizon with an optimistic personality. Spontaneously, getting familiar with the textbooks , sufficient knowledge benefits teacher to cover more materials connected to the course, which provides abundant accomplishment s to both teachers and students. As a result, it is of vital importance to acquire enough training because of the persistant (persistent) time needed.(这句话我不是很理解，训练非常重要因为需要持续的时间？？不如改成it’s of vital importance to acquire enough training to be a real qualified teacher) Then, different kinds of teaching skills also urge teachers to learn before the stepping into job/their teaching careers. Teacher must prepared themselves with a diversity of teaching skills about education, psychology and multi-media technology. Morden(modern)class teaching contains enormous information and facilities(设施？不如改成knowledge reserve), requiring teachers with synthesic(all-around/overall) ability to deal with.这一段有诸多问题，1.不要用难词生词，首先你不知道用在这里是否合乎情理，其次拼写错误得不偿失，总之不要太装逼。

小站教育解析如何包装托福雅思中的口语和写作语言

小站教育解析如何包装托福雅思中的口语和写作语言广大考生们可有在托福、雅思备考进程中发现这个问题：形容永远是“very”，动作永远是“make”……写完托福作文后转头一看，处处布满了“important”？这种现象横跨口语和写作两个项目，总成为隐形扣分点。

小站教育自在线一对一托福、雅思课程开办以来已在这方面掌握了相当丰硕的经验，下面就由口语专项教师王凤来为大家讲解——小站教育的王凤老师在任职期间单独教授口语单项，通过对托福、雅思口语的细致钻研，对语言驾驭自有一番理解。

首先是语法要多变。

考生要注意在作文当选取一个中心时态，通常选取一般此刻时即可，但在陈述具体例证时要按照不同的情况变换时态，主如果例子里面。

只活在当下时态，而不知道“瞻前顾后”的人，怎么能使文章鲜活得起来呢？其次，句子要多样化。

所以最好不要通盘利用简单句，这样会降低文章的层次、复杂句和简单句应在文章中交叉出现，而对一些描述性的例证和临时想起的内容可利用简单句。

接着就是包装辞汇了。

辞汇的包装是个较为艰巨的进程，可以精选一些托福高分作文学习，吸取其中的语言营养，对其中的用词进行细致的研究和仿照，在练习时尽可能利用范文中一些自己可以理解的优秀辞汇。

但切记不可原样照搬模板和样句。

然后是文化移入。

谨慎利用带有比喻色彩的修辞手法，因为喻体的不同会带来文化理解的问题。

举一个最简单的例子，中国人在形容超级着急时常常比喻说就像“热锅上的蚂蚁”，但如果是在考试中出现“ants on a hot stove”，托福的评卷人不会明白是什么意思，西方对应的说法是“a cat on hot bricks”(滚烫的砖块上的猫)。

在文化移入方面也有一些成功的例子可供借鉴，考生在文章中可利用一些中国历史或典故，但前提条件是考生可以用英文将其解释清楚，这样不仅可以向评卷人展示自己的语言解释能力，还可以通过这种文化移入行为博得评卷人的好感。

一样在引用名人名言时考生也要特别注意：中国人习惯用他人说的话来证明自己的观点，而西方人引用名人名言通常都是为了进行批判性分析，这也是东西方文化上的一大不同，建议考生不要一味地利用名人名言，而应当用自己的逻辑去说服对方。

工欲善其事必先利其器小站教育托福考试书籍推荐

工欲善其事必先利其器小站教育托福考试书籍推荐托福考试是横亘在许多拥有出国梦想的考生面前的一道屏障，考场如同战场，前期的准备工作异常重要。

然而当我们打开某宝，输入关键字托福，会有大量的相关书籍跳出来，那么这么多书我们该如何下手，买到适合自己的好书呢?接下来我们就来分享下不同阶段适合烤鸭们的资料。

一、词汇篇1.初级版如果你是高中生，或者词汇量停留在高中阶段的大学生，那么你首先要做的事情就是买两本书---新东方出版的《四级词汇》和《六级词汇》，这两本书不仅能打牢英语基础，更可以让你在写作时游刃有余，不会觉得无词可用，在阅读的词汇题中分分钟选出答案。

2.升级版当你的基础词汇已经积累够多，那么你可以背诵托福词汇，比如《无老师7天托福单词》、《TOEFL核心词汇21天突破》。

当你背诵完这些单词之后，你会发现有些词太像了，分辨不清时，你可以背诵一个终极版的书它叫做《词以类记》，张红岩老师写的。

在你正式上考场之前，背单词的脚步请不要停止，反复的记忆背诵。

二、听力篇1.基础版听力基础一般般你请看这里，不要急于求成，听力是一个练习的过程，最好的练习方法是跟读和精听。

最好的精听材料就是tpo原文，可以选择tpo前五套的文章作为精听的材料。

平时的听力练习可以使用一些书上的材料，比如《TOEFL iBT 听力新思维》。

2.升级版当你觉得听完一篇lecture毫无压力的时候，可以选择TPO里面的文章进行练习，还有DELTA的红蓝双煞。

三、阅读篇1.碎片化学习神器---《新托福白日百句百篇》2.强化阅读功底----《文勇的新托福阅读手稿》3.备考王道----《新托福IBT黄金阅读真题》四、口语篇1.准备阶段---《新托福口语词汇小伴侣》2.备考阶段---《新托福考试专项进阶》此书分为初级，中级，高级，根据自己实际情况自行选择相应阶段;《口语机经》，此书有1-5，都可以买买买;还有就是《小马口语机经》考前必看机经!五、写作篇1.准备阶段----《怎样让托福写作更美国》，慎小嶷老师编写的。

【小站教育】雅思考试写作G类作文讲义

www.zhan.co雅思写作G类作文讲义插入雅思写作答题纸Task 1 (G)Types of Letterplaint2.Enquiry3.Request4.Apology5.Acknowledgement6.Suggestion7.Job application8.Recommendation9.Self-introduction10.InvitationTactics for Task 1 (General Training)StructureDear Sir or Madam, ——unknown authority/strangerDear Mr./Ms./Prof/Dr (Surname), ——known authorityDear (name), ——friend/relativeRe: (position)——only for application letterAs one of your (identity) s, I am writing this letter to express my (emotion) ——formalI am (name) , writing to you for (purpose)——informalQuestion 1&2——explanation of the whole event and expression of some emotionQuestion 3——offer your own solutionLooking forward to your early reply and thanks for your great effort to deal with it.Yours sincerely(English name)Emotion WordsComplain Request Thanks Apology Invitation App/Recom JunkWordsdiscomfort concern thanks regret invitation confidencedissatisfacti on confusion appreciationsorrowdisturbance interest thankfulnessgrief annoyance enquiryirritationMedium Words uneasiness perplexity remorse request self-assurance discomposurebewildermentrepentance boldnessFavorable words disconcertionsolicitude chagrin propositionaplombperturbationbafflement contrition solicitationpoisevexation compunctionlamentationComplaint –说明意图+解释情况+解决方案例：You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you.Write a letter to the Accommodation Office at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.1.I am writing to complain about…/that…2.I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with somebody about something3.I am most reluctant to complain, but…4.I feel sorry to trouble you but I am afraid I have to make a complaint about…Examples:I am writing to complain about the service on the Beijing-Shanghai train which I tookon August 16, 2001.I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about the Walkman I bought at theduty-free shop in your airport on February 14, 2005.End of a complaint letter1.I would be grateful / I shall appreciate it very much if you could take thematter into consideration and solve it at your earliest convenience.2.I would like to have this matter settled by the end of…/ within 14 days. Writing task 1You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you. Write a letter to the Accommodation Office at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing to inform you that I wish to move into a new room next term. I would prefer a single room, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient.I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior. For one thing, his friends are constantly visiting him; for another, he regularly holds noisy parties. In addition, he sometimes borrows my things without asking me. In these circumstances, I find it difficult to concentrate on my studies, and I am falling behind in my assignments.I am sure you will agree that the only solution is for me to move into a room of my own, where I will be free from such distractions. Therefore, I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible.Yours sincerely,Janice Kennedy考生样卷：Dear Sir, Dear Madam,I am writing you to express my dissatisfaction with my room mate and request to another accommodation next term.My main problem is that I cannot study in my room because my room-mate always has friends visiting. He also has parties, which usually ends early in the morning, several times a week. Further more he often borrows my things without asking me.I cannot accept this situation any longer. Especially because I have very important exams next term and I really must study hard. This is why I would be very grateful if I could have another room next term. It would be most convenient for me not having to share my room with someone else.I am looking forward to hear from you soon.Yours faithfullyDee White考官评分：6.5分修正版：Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing you to express my dissatisfaction with my room mate and request alternate accommodation starting next term.The main problem is that I find it extremely difficult to study in my room because my roommate constantly has friends visiting and throw loud parties which often last until early morning. This does not just happen once or twice a month. He has these parties several times a week, ever since the beginning of the term. In addition, my roommate often borrows my things without asking me. Even after numerous polite requests, there has been no change in my roommate’s behaviour. It has now gotten to the point that we don’t even talk to each other. This has added a lot of undue stress, which has started to take its toll on my studies.Because I have very important exams next term, I must request a new room, and I would like to have a single room, if that is at all possible. I would be very grateful if you would consider this request at your earliest convenience. Thank you for your help in this matter. I look forward to hearing from you soon.Yours sincerely,Sam ZhangWriting task 1You have received your pay for your summer holiday part-time job, but your pay is less than you were promised. Please write a letter to the manager of the unit, clearly stating what work you have done and how long your work took. While explaining your case, put forward your demand and suggestion.Dear Manager,I have received the $800 cheque which you pay to me as a part-time software programmer in your company during my latest summer vacation. However, I am at a loss why the amount is $ 100 less than you promised to pay me.It was contracted that a part-time software programmer’s weekly wage is $ 300. I signed the contract with you and consequently worked in your company for a total of 3 weeks. In the period, I went to and from work on time and to your satisfaction, I completed each task that you assigned me without any errors.Also, no blame about me was ever heard in any aspect. So my total income should be $ 900, which is $ 100 more than that I gained from you. I firmly insist on your kind explanation of the difference and making it up as soon as possible.Your early reply would be highly appreciated.Yours sincerelyJanet Smith✧Enquiry –目的+具体问题+（急切心情+感激+联系方式）1.I am writing for information abo ut…2.I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with informationregarding…3.I would be most grateful if you could supply me with the followinginformation.✧End of an Enquiry letter1.Thank you for your consideration2.I am expecting your early reply.3.I am looking forward to your immediate response.4.In addition, if you could let me have details of … I would be more thangrateful.Writing task 1As part of a student social survey project, you are organizing a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town. Write a letter asking for information regarding such things as the contents of the exhibition, and the dates of its opening and closing, and if there are any discounts available.Dear Sir,I am organizing a group of students to pay a visit to the historical exhibition in your town. This visit will be part of our school’s activities to encourage the students to take part in social surveys. Therefore, I would be grateful if you could supply me with the following information.First of all, what are the dates between which the exhibition will be held, and whatare the daily opening hours? Secondly, what is the size of the exhibition, what is its theme and what objects are on display? Thirdly, are there any other activities being held in connection with the exhibition?I must point out that I hope to bring over students to the exhibition. So I would like to inquire if there is any discount available on entrance tickets for students. If so, how much is the discount and what is the minimum number of students necessary to qualify for it?I look forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,George Moore✧Apology –目的+原因+再次表示歉意/ 补救措施1.I am writing to apologize for …2.I am terribly sorry, but…3.Thank you for …, but I am sorry to say that…✧End of an apology letter1.I hope you can accept my apologies. Please allow me to say sorry again.2.Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.3.I would be very grateful if you could tell me if there is any way that I canmake up for it. I do apologize for any inconvenience this may cause you. Writing task 1One of your pen pals will shortly be visiting your city. For some reasons, you cannot manage to meet her at the airport on time. Write a letter asking her to wait for you at the airport and tell her how to identify you.Dear Mary,I am very much looking forward to your visit to my city. Just think: after all these years of writing to each other, we will finally have the chance to meet! However, I regret to inform you that I will not be able to meet you at the airport as soon as you arrive.The reason is that your flight will arrive early in the morning, and the quickest I can get to the airport will be about an hour after you land. Please wait for me in the arrival lounge. You should be able to have breakfast there while you wait.By the way, as we have never met I must tell you how to recognize me: I am medium height and have a small mustache. In addition, I will be carrying a copy of themorning newspaper tucked under my left arm.Looking forward to out first meeting.Yours sincerely,Harry✧Acknowledgement –目的+原因+再次感谢1.I am writing to extend/convey my heart-felt thanks/sincereappreciation/gratitude to you for…✧End of a thank-you letter1.I must thank you again for your generous help / kind assistance.2.Please accept my gratitude, now and always.3.My true gratitude is beyond words. Thank you again.4.If you need any help to …, please let me know. I shall appreciate it very muchif you can give me a chance to return your kindness.Writing task 1After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by another person. Write a special letter to express your thanks.Dear John,I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude. I am referring to that unfortunate accident the other day, when I was knocked off my bike by a taxi. If it had not been for your timely assistance in giving me first aid and taking me to a nearby hospital, I fear that the consequences might have been much more serious.The doctor says that my broken leg is healing well, and the bruises and cuts I suffered will soon be completely better. In addition, the taxi company has agreed to pay my hospital bills. Everyone agrees that it was your quick-witted response in that emergency that has led to this satisfactory outcome.Although nowadays many people talk about the need to be unselfish to help others, we see very few people practicing what they preach. But you showed by your selfless action that you are an exception. If there were more people like you, this world would be a much nicer place.Yours sincerely,TedWriting task 1You have just arrived in the city where you are going to spend two years for yourmaster’s degree. You have a lot preparation to do before the new term starts, but you do not know how to go round the city. A friend you have newly acquainted offered you guidance and helped you through difficulties. Write a letter to express your thanks.Dear Mary,I am writing this letter to thank you for the guidance you gave me. I was a perfect stranger when arriving at this city. Once I lost myself for not knowing the way in a downtown street, although I stopped to ask some people for direction. As you know this is the first time for me to come up to this big city.I bought a guidebook, but there were still difficulties in going round the city. The streets and shops puzzled me so much that I would rather stay indoors. It is your valuable guidance that has enabled me to go about the city without losing myself. I thank you very much for your kind help. Now I begin to know how to take the proper trolley buses. Yesterday I went downtown with some of my schoolmates to buy some stationery.Lesson will begin in a few days. I will come over to see you some day next week and tell you everything that has happened to me.Sincerely yoursJulia Noel✧Invitation –目的+具体情况（5W）+ 期待回复1.I am writing to invite you to …2.I would like to see your presence at …3.I am sending you this invitation to … and I sincerely hope you can be part ofit.4.I am wondering if you could come to my birthday party in my new house thisSaturday evening.✧End of an invitation letter1.My family and I would feel honored if you could come.2.We would be looking forward to your participation in the party.3.Would you please drop me a line to let me know if you can come? I reallyhope you can make it.•RSVP (before April 1)Writing task 1You want to invite some friends to a party. Write an invitation letter to them individually, elaborating on the reason why such a party should be held and what activities will be arranged for them.Dear Susan,I will hold a dinner party at my house on June 23, 2000(Saturday) to celebrate my father’s being awarded the Pulitzer Prize for journalism this year. As you are a close friend of our family, my parents and I would very much like you to participate in the celebration and share our joy.The occasion will star at five o’clock in the afternoon, with the showing of the documentary film of the 1999 Kosovo war produced by my father, which secured the prize for him. This will be followed by a dinner party. At around eight o’clock, we will hold a small musical soiree, at which a band will perform some works by Bach and Strauss.If you do not have any prior appointment on June 23, my family and I look forward to the pleasure of your company.Cordially yours,Jessica LouisRSVP before June 19✧Request –目的+解释原因+重申并表达感谢1.I am writing to request to do something2.I am writing in the hope that …✧End of a request letter1.By the way, if you think it is possible …, I would like to …. I am sorry for theinconvenience this may cause you.2.I am looking forward to your reply.Writing task 1You stayed with a local family when you attended a training program in New Zealand. You returned to your home country in a hurry and found that you had left your laptop computer in the family. Write a letter to the family, thanking them for their hospitality. Describe your computer and where it is and ask the host to send it back to you.You do NOT need to write your own address.Dear Mr. Scoot,I’m writing to express my gratitude for your entertainment during my stay in your hou se. I cannot forget your beautiful wife’s cooking.However, due to my rashness, I left my laptop computer in the guest room that you had arranged for me, which causes many inconveniences both in my work and mylife.The above mentioned laptop computer is Model IBM 500 with gray appearance,half-new. I vaguely remember that I put it on the desk by the fireplace of the guest room. The laptop computer contains all the important data related to my job. I cannot live without it.I really appreciate if you can find it out and send it to me by EMS as soon as possible. Enclosed with the letter is the return envelope with address, and a cheque of post.I am looking forward to your kind reply.Sincerely yours✧Suggestion–目的+建议（2~3点）1.I got to know from … that …. I am writing to give you some advice about it.2.I am writing in response to … to suggest ways in which …✧End of a suggestion letter1.I would appreciate … and will be more than happy to expand on any of thecomments I have made here.2.I wish you a nice stay here.Writing task 1You have a friend who is about to enter university, and he wants you to advise him on which subject to specialize in --- history, in which he is very interested, or computer science, which offers better job prospects.Dear John,You have asked me for my advice concerning whether you should study history or computer science at university, and I will try to make some useful suggestions.You must keep in mind that, above all, your university training is a preparation for your future career. Therefore, your first consideration should be to study a subject which will best equip you to earn a living. There is no doubt that the field of computer science offers far wider job opportunities than history.Besides, we are now in the age of the high-technology revolution. For the foreseeable future, not only will it be necessary for everyone to be computer-literate, it will also be necessary for them to be equipped with computer skills merely to earn a living! History, I’m afraid, however fascinating it may be, offers few career prospects.Of course, you don’t have to devote all your time at university to studying computersand nothing else. On the contrary, I would recommend that you keep up your reading of history in your spare time. That way, you will find that your leisure hours are enriched while you prepare yourself for a worthwhile career in computer science. Yours sincerelyJamesWriting task 1A friend who lives abroad will shortly be visiting your university and has asked you to make arrangements for his stay. Write a letter informing him of what you have done.Dear Mr. Smith,I have received your letter dated April 5, 1996 in which you have asked me to make arrangements for your stay here. I am glad to tell you that all relevant things have been arranged as follows:First of all, I will meet you at the airport when you arrive here. Then I will take you to our university reception where I have booked a room for you. On the second day of your arrival, you will be invited to attend our teaching activity in a small group. In the afternoon, I will take you to visit our students’ design work of architecture. On the third day, I have arranged a lecture at which I hope you could give us an introduction to the teaching features of architecture at Cambridge. In the evening, I will have a small party for you at which you will have more chance to communicate with our student as well as our staff. On the last day I will see you off at the airport.If there is anything inconvenient for you in this schedule, please let me know as soon as possible.I am looking forward to your reply and wish you a pleasant journey.Yours respectfullyRobert Kennedy✧Application –目的+个人陈述（2~3点）1.I am writing to apply for the position of … you advertised in … on …2.I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for …✧End of an application letter1.All these give me enough confidence to say that I am the right person for theposition. I shall appreciate it very much if you could give my application itsdue attention.2.I am looking forward to your favorable reply.Writing task 1You want to apply for the following job. Write a letter to Mr. Moore describing your previous experience and explaining why you would be suitable for the job.Waiter/waitress required for evening work. Some experience necessary.Dear Mr. Moore,Re: Waitress positionI am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for a waitress. Enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my previous work experience and qualifications.Not only do my qualifications and work experience make me a perfect candidate for the job, my personality is well suited to working as a waitress. I am a very friendly person who can quickly establish rapport with people of all ages. In my last waitressing job, I had over a dozen repeat customers each day. And, the fast-paced environment of waiting on tables suits me well, because I thrive on working under pressure. In fact, my former boss was surprised at both my stamina and efficiency in dealing with customers’ orders.I would like to meet with you at your earliest convenience, to discuss the possibility of working at your restaurant. I can be reached at 463-9234 during the day and924-6868 after 6 p.m.Thank you for your consideration of my application. I look forward to meeting you in the near future.Yours sincerelyMartha ScottWriting task 1From an advertisement you learn that a company has the position vacant in an engineering department. You are a postgraduate student with a master’s degree from Mechanical Training Program as Programmer Trainee. You have just arrived in the United States and you want to have the job. You’ll enclose your resume with details of academic courses in your letter. You should ask to have an appointment.Dear Sir or Madam,From your advertisement on New York Times, March 24, I have learned that you need an engineer in your mechanic department. I have been seeking a position in the engineering department in which I may use my training in computer sciences to solve engineering problems and I would be interested in exploring the possibility ofobtaining such a position within your firm.I received a master’s of science degree in mechanical engineering from Qinhua University in June 1995. Since September 1997 I have been participating, through my university, in Professional Training Program as Programmer Trainee and have gained a great deal of experience in computer applications. Details of the academic courses that I have taken are contained in the enclosed resume.May I have an appointment for an interview with you to discuss my qualifications in detail? Please write to me at my home or telephone me at (317) 668-5792 any weekday.Yours sincerelyMary Jones✧Recommendation–目的+解释原因+重申1.I have learned from your advertisement … that you are looking for …. I amwriting to you to recommend …2.As…, I earnestly recommend … for the position that you advertised …✧End of a recommendation letter1.Therefore, I do not hesitate to recommend … as an ideal candidate for thepost. I am sure you will make a wise decision in hiring her.2.I would like to lend my support to…for his…3.Before concluding this letter, I would again apply myself to convincing youthat…Writing task 1One of your friends wants to apply for a job involving working with foreign teenagers. Write a letter of recommendation for him/her.Dear Sir or Madam,I have learned form your newspaper advertisement that your center is organizing an international summer camp for overseas teenagers, and you are looking for a bilingual assistant tutor to work with the children. I am writing to you to recommend one of my best friends, Helen Wang, for this post.Helen used to be my classmate at Beijing Normal University, where she was already a very active organizer and participant in extracurricular activities. With her outstanding leadership skills and cheerful personality, she was elected chairperson of the Student Union several times.Busy as she was, she passed the college English Test Band Six and completed her major—teenager psychology—with an excellent school record. Upon graduation shewas assigned to be a teacher in an international high school in Beijing, where she has been teaching bilingual lessons for five years. What’s more, she loves her job and enjoys working with children. This has won her great popularity among her students.Therefore, I do not hesitate to recommend her as an ideal candidate for the post you advertised. I am sure you will make a wise decision in hiring her.Sincerely yoursVictor Li最新雅思写作题目集锦普通培训类小作文（书信类）1.You are going to London for a visit, and you would like to spend two days invisiting a library as you are doing a research project. Write a letter to the library assistant, asking him/her for help and specifying your requirements.(Request) 2.When you were painting your rented apartment, you accidentally damagedsomething in one of the rooms. Write to your landlord, explaining the reason for writing the letter and how the whole thing happened. Finally, you should suggest how you can compensate for the damages.(Apology)3.You are an international student who studies in a college without sports facilities.Write to the manager of a sports club nearby, inquiring about what procedures are needed before you can join the club.(Inquiry)4.During your travel overseas, you left a handbag on the passenger plane. Write aletter to the airline company, explaining the situation and describing the handbag.Also, indicate the way they can possibly solve the problem.(Request)5.You bought a CD player from a local store a few days ago, but now it doesn’t work.Write a letter to the manufacturer, asking them what the problems are andcomplaining about the attitude of the shop assistant. Also tell them how they can handle the situation.(Complaint)6.You are a local student who has moved to a new neighborhood where there is anextremely large tree just in front of your doorway. Write a letter to the localauthority, complaining about the problems the big tree has brought to yourlife.(Complaint)7.Write a letter to invite one of your friends to attend a large celebration at yourhome. State the reasons why the celebration is held and all the details about the celebration. Also, ask your friend to do a favor for you.(Invitation)8.One of the pen friends overseas is going to visit you. However, for some reason,you cannot meet him/her as previously arranged. Write about your reason, the place where you want him to wait for you, and how he/she can recognizeyou.(Apology)9.You are a college student taking part in a research project. Write a letter to a localmuseum, asking them to provide essential materials. Give the details of yourproject and specify the required materials.(Request)10.During your business trip to another city, you met an attendant on the train whotreated you with very impolite manners. Write a letter to the railway authority, complaining about the bad attitude and poor service of thatattendant.(Complaint)11.You have just received good news related with your family. Write a letter to oneof your friends, explain the reason for writing. Also, tell him/her the details of the good news and why you are so excited about it.(Explanation)12.You are an international student who has been arranged by your university to livewith a local family. However, for some reason, you are not satisfied with theaccommodation. Write a letter to your university, explaining about the situation and asking for a rearrangement.(Request)13.You are organizing a business meeting, and you should write to people from othercompanies and tell them the changes of the meeting (time, location, etc.). Youcan (1) explain why you have to make changes, (2) tell them the changes, and (3) apologize for the changes. (Apology)14.Someone wrote an article in the newspaper criticizing a new movie. Write a letterto the author to express your disapproval, explaining why you disagree with his or her opinion.(Explanation)15.You have a friend who will go on holiday to a town which you know very well.Please write a letter to him/her including these contents: (1) recommend a place to live (2) what things he/she can do there (3) the weather conditionsthere.(Recommendation)16.You want to ask a friend of yours to visit you for the first time and live at yourhome for a short period. Write a letter of invitation, suggesting him to bringessential things and what he can do during his visit.(Invitation)17.You are an international student who has rented an apartment on campus.Recently you damaged something in one of your rooms. Write to the schoolauthorities, explaining how the damage was caused, offering some solution and apologizing for the inconvenience.(Apology)18.Your company is going to have a working weekend in a hotel. Write a letter to thehotel staff about what you need. You need to introduce yourself, tell them your plan and requirements of the accommodation.(Request)19.You have been working for a company for several years. However, you aredissatisfied and disappointed with it. Write a letter of resignation, explaining the reason why you want to leave and making some requests orsuggestions.(Resignation=Complaint)20.One of your neighbours wrote you a letter, complaining about the annoying noiseyou made in the neighbourhood. Write a letter to him/her in which you should explain the situation, apologize for the noise you made and tell him/her about the action you will take to deal with the problem.(Apology)21.For some reason, you cannot attend a course you have already paid for. Write aletter to the professor, indicating the reason and tell him/her what you plan to do.(Request)22.A company is organizing a trip abroad for language training to a number of limitedplaces. Please write a letter, expressing that you want to join, why you think you should join, and why the organizer select you.(Application)23.You are a college student and feel very unhappy about having to live outside the。

【小站教育】[B老师出品] [雅思写作救命稻草系列资料]社会类(1)

Task 2题目：Today there is a great increase in anti-social behaviors and lack of respect to others. What are the causes of this? Who should take responsibility for dealing with it? (选自2011年01月22日雅思写作机经)Writ at least 250 words学生作文批改（注：红字部分为补充和点评，黑色划杠部分为删减）With the society advancing at an accelerating rate, there seems to exist an unavoidable/inevitable trend that the anti-social behaviors and lack of respect to other people are increasingly prevailing among citizens, especially the young. In my opinion, the causes seem various as well as the officials(official 指行政官员，放在这里有点狭隘，不如改成，local authorities)and teachers who should be responsible for solving the situation.第一段总体来说写的很完美，paraphrase做的很棒，部分亮点词、词组诸如unavoidable trend, increasingly prevailing among等给文章争光添彩！On the one hand, this trend tends to have diverse causes, of which the most significant one prove d(被证明，应该是被动)to be the fact that the young and a sizeable percentage of adults are easily misled by the part of informal drama performers and singers which are accustomed to(be accustomed to doing sth意为习惯于做某事，放在这里不是很合适，不如用are favor of) showing anti-social presentations as well as scolding(亮点词) others in public. It can particularly affect teenagers easily regarding these famous people as the leaders they should learn from（为什么是学习？应该是效仿吧！regarding that they will tend to mimic their behaviors）. If teachers and parents, for instance, do not care about their children, the youth may become a part of the anti-social behavior descendants.(虽然听上去有些许搞笑，但是还是很在理！) Evidently, the teachers who should be responsible for solving the problem which need to focus a lot on these children to avoid (avoid from没有这种用法)prevent them from the misleading singers and players.这一段整体写的很流畅，观点也很到位，只是略微有点偏题嫌疑，大段都在讲那些艺人的影响，而主要内容应该放在教师身上！On the other hand, the government do not correct these terrible behaviors as quickly as they can. （Sometimes they do not notice these behaviors or emphasize these problems until these solutions develop rapidly, which means that the state can control the uncorrected situation to inhibit these terrible effects.）（这一段的表达实在很水，不是很到位，意思无非是这两点：政府采取措施太慢，可以提前预防，现在我按照原文的意思改写一下：The government and local authorities didn’t realize the bad consequence those anti-social behaviors could lead to so that they are alwaysreacting slow instead of preventing them in the early stage）Thus, the government not controlling on time is the second cause of the problem and should have responsibility to dealing with it.(最好一句虽然语法勉强正确，但是说的实在很拗口，不如改成：the untimely precaution and reaction attribute greatly to the outspread of problems related to anti-social behaviors)总结：该段语病较多，表达不是很精准，中式英语的痕迹很明显，观点还是没问题的In conclusion, the government and students（学生？）need to lead the young and some adults to learn from good behaviors and become a better person instead of a man with anti-social behaviors and lack of respect towards others.结尾的第一句话是败笔！首尾呼应也应该是teacher吧？！！总结：6-6.5分作文，语法错误较少，全文通俗易懂，也有部分亮点词，但是从第三段开始文章出现多处文不达意情况，表达不如第二段那么精确，同时，第二段出现一点偏题的苗头，请注意！B老师范文：With the development of modern society, there seems to be an irresistible uprising momentum of anti-social behaviors and lacking in respect between people. Various causes may lead to this increasingly prevailing phenomenon. From my personal perspectives, I tend to attribute this tendency to the morbid social conduct, the gap between the rich and the poor and the fiasco of school education.开头三排比提出自己的观点：病态的社会风气、贫富差距、学校教育的失败是原因，直接定义为五段论的基调，坚持五段论，高分作文最起码的结构！！！The surroundings somewhat influence the behaviors of people due to the conformity mentality among us. A healthy social conduct will guide people, on the contrary, an unhealthy society can destroy the very good nature of people. Take an example of the terrorist attack in Norway 2011, which caused 77 inno cent civilians’ lives. If there were a more harmonious social conduct to give more sense of belonging to that pervert killer, the tragedy could be prevented.无比贴切的例子的使用，挪威变态杀手的恐怖袭击，完全西方化的思维。

小站雅思口语范文

小站雅思口语范文1. Hello. Could you show me your identification card please?——Hello.Sure,here you are.2. Could you tell me your full name please?——My full name is XXX.Friends usually call my English name, XXX.3. What shall I call you?——You could call me XXX.4. How are you?——I am fine,thank you,and you?5. How old are you?——I am 22 years old. In other words,I was born in 1980.March 8,1980,to beexact.6. Does your name have any special meaning?——Yes, my name does have some special meaning.My family name means ‘peace’,and my first name has the meaning of ‘strong one’.My English name was given byone of my high school teachers,and itdoes not have any special meaningreally.7. Does your name have any special meaning?——I presume you are referring to my Chinese name.Yes, the English equivalentof my family name would be something like ‘peace’, and in the case of my firstname it would be ‘strong one’.My English name was randomly chosen by one of myhigh school teachers,and it really doesn’t have any special meani ng.8. Is your name important to you?——No.I don’t think it can do anything for me.I believe a person has to workout his own life.I am planning to do this as well as I can.9. Is your name important to you?——Not really. I belong to the new generation who do not attach too muchsignificance to our s were important to the older generation as theyare of the opinion that it will determine your destiny to some extent.However,I personally believe that I myself will determine my destiny no matter what myname is. I will do this by acquiring good qualifications and by workinghard.。

雅思写作教材

雅思写作考试介绍一、考试时间雅思雅思写作考试安排在听力和阅读考试之后。

考生在阅读与写作考试之间有10分钟休息时间。

普通培训类与学术类写作均为60分钟，各包括两部分，即，两项写作任务。

第一项写作任务建议时间为20分钟；第二项写作时间为40分钟。

二、考试题材通常写作题会给出背景，然后提出问题，要求考生就问题展开议论、叙述或者描述。

源于生活，所写题目都是关于社会或者学习生活的方方面面以及热点话题。

三、考试模式1. 普通培训类写作任务与学术类相比倾向于实用性，但第二项写作任务要求考生就某一个社会问题进行写作，与学术类相似。

第一项写作任务：书信写作，要求考生就所给出的情景和问题再20分钟内写作150个词以上的投诉信、询问信或者感谢信等。

要求问题得当——非正式、半正式或者正式信件。

第二项写作任务：要求考试就某一现象或者观点在40分钟内写一篇250词以上的说明文或者议论文。

要求考生就所给题目对某一方面的问题通过比较、对比例证，提出解决办法，通过权衡利弊阐述观点，或者评价和挑战所给观点。

2. 学术类模式学术类写作要求考生在60分钟内完成两片不同类型、不同长度的写作。

第一项写作任务：要求考生在20分钟内写出150词以上的图表描述报告。

图表包括曲线图、扇形图、柱状图、表格。

流程图等。

要求考生采用报告形式，用正式学术问题通过比较数据或采用一系列数据来支持某一观点，有时候可能要求就一个流程或物体进行描述。

第二项写作任务：要求考试就某一现象或者观点在40分钟内写一篇250词以上的说明文或者议论文。

要求考生就所给题目对某一方面的问题通过比较、对比例证，提出解决办法，通过权衡利弊阐述观点，或者评价和挑战所给观点。

雅思写作普通培训类与学术类的写作第一部分差异较大，第二部分是相同的。

普通类的题材更贴近生活。

3. 书信或图表评分标准Task1（书信或图表）按照以下三方面评分：Task Fulfilment（完成任务）；Coherence and Cohesion （连贯与衔接）；Vocabulary and Sentence Structure (词汇与句子结构）Task Fulfilment指的是考生是否能够在正确审题的基础上完成题目的命令。

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雅思写作教材�雅思写作必须为AcademicWriting，但是何为AcademicWriting，且看下面两段文字：E.g.:livinginbigcityisagoodchoice,becauseourchildrencouldgetbettereducation. Forexample,plentyofprimaryschoolsarelocatedinbigcity,so localcitizenscouldsend theirchildrenthere.Secondly,therearealotoftheatersinbigcitysowecouldenjoyfilms intheweekend. Thetwomeritsinbigcitiesasbetterservicejointlycontributetomakeurbanizationapriority. Firstofall,sufficienteducationalinstitutionsandfundshaveguaranteedthat higherlevelofeducationcouldbeacquiredinlargecity.Additionally,urbancitizenscanappreciate amorecolorfullifethanruralcitizens.Thecityprovides aplentyofplacesfor entertainmentwhilerurallifemayabitdull andtasteless.第二段文字是典型的AcademicWriting，仅供参考。

�雅思写作必备基础常识。

首先从类型角度说五类小作文，四类大作文；从字数角度说是至少150+250=400字；从写作时间角度说是理论上20+40=60mins；从技术处理角度说建议先写大作文再写小作文。

�官方给出每篇作文的分数是根据四个评分标准来的，小作文分别是：TA/CC/LR/GRA，大作文分别是：TR/CC/LR/GRA。

两者结合白话一点说就是：题意理解/连贯衔接/词汇运用/语法准确。

分别来看：7分作文：♦写作内容涵盖写作任务的要求♦（学术类）清晰地呈现关于主要趋势、区别或不同阶段的概述♦（培训类）清晰地呈现写作目的，行文语气一致且恰当♦能就主要内容/要点进行清晰的呈现与强调，但未能更为充分地展开♦符合逻辑地组织信息及观点；清晰的行文推进贯穿全文♦恰当地使用一系列衔接手段，尽管有时使用不足或过多♦使用足够的词汇，体现一定灵活性及准确性♦使用不常见词汇，对语体及搭配有一定认识♦在选择用词、拼写及/或构词方面可能偶尔出现错误♦运用各种复杂的语法结构♦多数句子准确无误♦对语法及标点符号掌握较好，但有时出现少许错误6分作文：根据写作任务要求作文♦（学术类）选择恰当的信息进行概述♦（培训类）写作目的基本清晰；行文语气有时未能保持前后一致♦呈现并充分地强调了主要内容/要点，但有时含有不相关、不恰当或不准确的细节信息♦连贯地组织信息及观点，总体来说，能清晰地推进行文发展♦有效地使用衔接手段，但句内及/或句间的衔接有时有误或过于机械♦有时无法保持一贯清晰或恰当地使用指代♦使用足够的词汇开展写作任务♦试图使用不常用词汇，但有时使用不准确♦在拼写及/或构词方面有错误，但不影响交流♦综合使用简单句式与复杂句式♦在语法及标点符号方面有一些错误，但这些错误很少影响交流5分作文：♦基本上能就写作任务作文，但某些地方写作格式有时存在不当之处♦（学术类）机械地描述细节，缺乏清晰的概述；有时未能提供数据支持所描述的内容；♦（培训类）信函有时能体现特定的写作目的，但有时目的不清晰；行文语气变化不定，且有时不得体；♦呈现但不能充分地涵盖主要内容/要点；有时出现着重表述细节的倾向♦有一定组织性地呈现信息，但总体来说有时缺乏清晰的总体行文推进♦衔接手段不足、不准确或过度使用♦由于指代和替换不足显得行文重复♦使用词汇范围有限，但能达到进行写作任务的最低限度♦在拼写及/或构词方面可能出现明显的错误，且可能会对读者造成一定的阅读困难�雅思Academic Writing需要掌握的语法知识：词汇：小作文：数据对比和趋势描述词汇掌握，大作文：动词的多样化/ 名词的准确性/ 形容词副词修饰恰当/ 介词短语精确使用句型：简单句的精准表达。

并列句的并列恰当。

复合句的使用，以此避免简单句的啰嗦，使主从句思想分明的基础上，结构更加紧凑。

分词结构的点缀使用，当然要根据自己写作分数的要求做句型的合理安排。

集萃正餐：写作细节描述WritingTaskOne�GeneralStatement评分标准：TA：task achievementCC：coherenceandcohesion LR：LexicalResources GRA：GrammaticRangeandAccuracy�作文开头简单明了：一般现在时，对题目进行概述，包括4要素：what，when，where，how�作文正文描述到位：时态同图表时态一致，一般为过去时。

对图表信息进行分析比较�作文结尾干脆利落：在信息均表述完整前提下，结尾段可以省略。

时态为一般现在时�LineChart 一般为同一坐标轴多根曲线交错，首先对单根曲线进行描述，通过拐点将其分割成若干阶段进行描述，然后对曲线之间数据进行对比。

基本用词：3变化1平缓，4个基本点1变化：上升Itrises/increases /climbsup/......Sharply/dramatically/gradually/slightly/......from ...in ...to...in...2变化：下降Itfalls/decreases/drops/......Sharply/dramatically/gradually/slightly/......from ...in ...to...in...3变化：波动Itremainedunsteady/ fluctuatingwithan......overtheperiodfrom ......to......1平缓Itremainedstablebetween......and......4个基本点：起点、最高点、最低点、终点Itstarted/haditsstartingpoint at......in......,Itreachedthehighestpoint/peakedat......in.......;Itreachedthelowestpoint at......in....../tothefoot/atthebottomin...... andthengaveitsfinishingpoint at......in.......如果在表述数字无法精确取读时，可以使用模糊词汇在数字面前，可以更加体现出写作时的学术严谨性，模糊词汇：around/ about/almost/nearly/approximately......Ascanbeseenfromlinechart,itillustratesupwardtrends towardthegrayingarmyinthree countries:Japan,SwedenandUSA.Generalspeaking,twowesterncountries increasedsteadilyover aforty-yearperiod whereas thenumberofJapaneseelders bottomedout inthesameperiod.Afterthat thefigureforJapan rocketedintothesky,peaking at approximately27%in2040.TheagedintheUS,however, declinedslightly from15%in1980to14%in2020andthen continuedtorise,reachingthehighestpointatroughly24%in2040.Similarly,afteritsfirstdrop over10years,theproportionofpeopleaged65fluctuatedwithanoverallupwardtrend andit ranked thesecondplace(inthe neighborhood of 25%)inthefuture.To concluded,thenumberoftheagedineasterncountryislessthanthefigureinbothUSand Swedenatthepresenttime.Nevertheless,intermsoftheexpectedpercentagesinthefuture, thereis a dramaticincrease from2020to2040and clearly outnumber itscounterpartsatlast.�PieChart 饼图单独出现的几率比较小，只要抓住百分比和每一部分之间的比较，然后要分析百分比数据，饼中每个部分之间的关系就可以了。

对于两个以上的piechart，一定要注意饼和饼之间是否有联系，这个也是总体与部分，部分与部分的变体。

对于混合出现的题目，可当做是单一的piechart来叙述，同时注意关联内容。

基本用词：比例排序、占比例、比较、倍数比例排序：Aisthemost......among......;thennextis......with......,followedby ......,making up…;andfinallycome......, ......and......at......,......and......respectively.占比例：Itprovides/makesup/occupies/takeup/......XX%of......比较：不变Compared with......,thepercentageof......between......and ......Inrelationto......,theproportionof......at......略高/略低ThepercentageofBisslightlymarginallymore/larger......thanthatof A.倍数A是B的N倍，A比大N－1 倍AisNtimesasmuchasBAisN-1timeslargerthanBAccordingtothe datagiveninthefirstpicture,theproportionof theunemployed accountedforone-fourthsofthewholegroupin1932.Ofthosewhohadajobthe largestpercentage(45%) workedintheindustrialsector,followedby thoseintheservicessector(15%)andinagriculture andfishing(12%).Asthesmallestproportion amongfoursections,governmentalemployees provided only3%in1932.Thesecondpictureindicates,by1992therehavebeen greatchanges intheinternalstructureof theworkforcedistribution.Theunemploymentrate declined significantly duringthesixtyyears: dropping from25%in1932to10%in1992.Furthermore, therelativesizeofdifferent occupationalsectorshadchangeddramatically. Theindustrialsector decreasedto one-thirdsof thatin1932(from45%to15%),ranking thesecondamongthewholesectors.Similarly, A&Fhad reducedtheleast overthesameperiod.Ontheotherhand,therewereupwardstrend from bothservice andgovernmentsector,from15%to52%andfrom3%to15%,respectively.Toconcluded,some work distributionsectorsincreased whereas othersdecreased.�BarChart柱状图通常提供信息量较大，也是考生比较难处理的题目。