英语writing

第三、常见的错误和问题注意方面：1．切题2．结构（三段式）3．落题快（主题句在每段句首，不要绕圈）4．长度（120－150字，卷面第二页中间或到三分之二处，不要过多）语言方面须注意的问题：1．题目的大写An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic AccidentIt Pays to Be HonestHow to Succeed in a Job Interview2．句子错误1）语态时态不正确I read the passage carefully and several mistakes were found.( 语态不一致)I read the passage carefully and found several mistakes.I am very grateful if you could help me with this problem.(时态不一致)I will be very grateful if you could help me with this problem.2）主谓不一致He like playing football very much.He likes playing football very much.3）中式英语My English has made great progress.I have made great progress in English.Work makes me feel satisfied.Work is a source of satisfaction to me.4)结构不完整Although had many difficulties in studying English, I finally passed the exam.Although I had many difficulties in studying English, I finally passed the exam.5）改错：I think there are two reasons for the accident. First, it was just the time we began our first class, the bike rider perhaps did not want to be late, he ride his bike so fast, even didn’t low down his speed at the gate. Secend, the truck is too large, and at that time, there were too many people walk through the gate, so the bike driver have no other way to chose, but to ride in the middle of the road.第一、写作中的常用句式一、开头常用语式(主题段的引入)A proverb says…As the proverb says…Some people say that…Many people believe that…It is generally believed that…We all know thatAs we all know …It is quite clear thatVarious views exist as to …, but…There are many arguments/opinions/views aboutThere is much discussion about/attention toIt is well known that…It is sai d that…It has been found that…It is easy to see that…The pie graph shows…A recent survey provides…The chart/graph/table shows…No one can deny that …Nowadays,….At present…二、中间常用句式（扩展段的连接）通常按重要程度排列，我们习惯于先说最重要的，西方人则相反，但都得符合逻辑顺序。

1．表示“首先”first, firstly, first of all, to begin with 在跌降法里用first and foremost 但不可用at first。

2．表示“第二”、“此外”“其次”、“况且”second, secondly, and, besides, moreover, additionally, furthermore, what’s more, in addition, besides+名词短语，in addition to+名词短语，another+名词短语3．表示“最后”finally, last, lastly, 但不可用at last 或in the end。

4．表示“最重要的是” above all, most important of all，在跌降法里用last but not least 最后但并非最不重要的是。

5.表示“更严重的是”、“更糟糕的是”more serious, even worse, to make matter worse6. 表示“最为严重的是”、“最糟糕的是”most serious of all, worst of all例如：1）First of all, 论据1. More importantly,论据2. Most important of all,论据3. In summary,总结观点.2)The advantages can be listed as follows：First,好处1. Besides,好处2. Mostimportant of all, 好处3.But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. To begin with,坏处1. To make matter worse,坏处2. Worst of all,坏处3.From the above analysis, I believe 观点.3）For one thing, 论据1. For another, 论据2. Last but not the least,论据3. To conclude, 总结观点或From above, we can predict that 预测.4）First of all,论据1。

Furthermore, 论据2。

Among all of the supporting evidences, one is the strongest. That is,论据3。

A natural conclusion from the above discussion is that总结观点。

或From above, we can predict that预测.5．其他词语或句式：1）用于强调：after all, any way, in fact, indeed, apparently, clearly, obviously, especially,2）用于对比：however, on one hand, on the other hand, in contrast, by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, instead, but, different from,3）用于比较：similarly, likewise, like, in the same way,4）用于列举：for example, for instance, such as, take…for granted, except(for)5）表示时间：later, then, next, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, after that, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, after some time, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, recently, soon, now and then, during, nowadays, presently, since, as soon as, afterwards, some time later, temporally, in the meanwhile, after a while,6）用于解释：in other words, as a matter of fact, that is,7) 用于让步：although, in spite of, despite, even though, even if, though, no matter how8) 用于结果：consequently, thus, as a result, as a consequence, hence, so, therefore, accordingly9) 其他：not only…but also…, as far as I am concerned, when it comes to…, in practi ce, in principle, another key aspect of…is…, it is true that…, what is more serious is…, there is no doubt that…,but it is a pity that…,but the trouble /problem/point is…例1 Brain Drain in China (接开头)1）中国人才流失的现状；2）对人才流失的看法；3）如何解决人才流失。

However,people see this phenomenon in different perspectives.Some hold the opinion that China suffers a lot from brain drain. They argue, on the one hand, that brain drain considerably weakens our international competitiveness.On the other hand,they believe that the talent should serve their native country first.In contrast, others highlight the advantages of international exchange and cooperation. They claim that Chinese youths should go abroad to study and gain more experience. What’s more, the long-term benefits will outweigh losses we suffer now.三、结尾常用句式（终结段的连接）1．表示“总之”、“总而言之”、“简言之”in conclusion, in summary, to conclude, to summarize, to sum up, in short, in brief, in a word, on the whole2．“综上所述”from the foregoing, from what has been discussed above, from what has been mentioned above, from the above analysisObviously（此为过渡短语）, we can draw the conclusion thatThus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we can find that…Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken.例1 Vacation, Long or ShortOne the whole, either long or short vacation has its advantages and disadvantages. What matters is how to make use of it.例2 Good Health1．身体健康的重要性。