写作教程第二版 邹申 unit General I
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like all the other kids. Then, beginning on New Year's Eve, the
sound of exploding firecrackers was everywhere, day and night.
On New Year's Day, I watched huge parades go by in the middle
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Personality One's personality plays an important role in foreign language learning. Weather Living in a place where the weather is always warm has many advantages.
5. (1) Then (2) morning (4) Then (5) After that (7) already (8) after
(3) afternoon (6)when
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6. Sample paragraph
The New Year celebration was so unforgettable for me when
3) Use of pronouns: they, their, this (as are boldfaced)
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Unit 2 FOLLOW-UP EXERCISES
3. When I was a child, we never varied our Christmas Eve ritual. We always began our private celebration promptly at 6 p.m. on December 24 when the whole family assembled in our small kitchen. We watched as Mother and my older sister prepared a light supper. As soon as we finished the meal, we rushed into the living room to decorate the tree. The younger children started the decorating by putting tinsel and colorful
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5.
(1) into
(2) crosses
(3) In the centinside
(6) On the front
(7) over
(8)down
(9) lined with
(10) At the rear
6. This paragraph is developed in a circular order, i.e. from east to north, and then to south.
a temple and visited friends and relatives to wish them Happy
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Unit3 FOLLOW-UP EXERCISES
3. Logical sequence of the sentences: 3–6–1–4–7–5–2
Relationship: Primarily, the organization of the paragraph represents movement in geographical space.
5. Task 1
Linking words and phrases that connect
these procedures:
firstly, also, afterward, Then, signals the end
4. Logical sequence of the sentences: 4 – 10 – 5 – 12 – 3 – 7 – 15 – 9 – 14 – 2 – 11 – 8 – 13 – 6 - 1
Topic sentence: My family spent two fun-filled days at Disney World last year.
写作教程第2版课件u10
• Level of generality
• A paragraph usually contains statements at varying levels of generality. One statement is more general than another if it refers to a larger number of specific cases or if it attempts to cover a wider range; similarly, if a statement carries a smaller portion of the total message, it tends to be more specific.
• Sentence 2. The particular instances are inadequate to support the general conclusion, so this statement has a problem of hasty generalization.
• Please make a conclusion from the two sentences.
• Thus we can say that the level of generality depends on the context.
• 3. Rearrange these sentences to make a welldeveloped passage ending with the most general statement. Use linking words where necessary.
• Look at the following groups of sentences. In each group one sentence is a generalization and the other three are supporting examples. Please find out the generalization.
写作教程第二版(邹申)unit1_General(I)
----Don Knefel
Sample 2 Find the T.S.
Shakespearian characters live. They are no stilted creations intended to represent differing points of view. They are people, with all the usual human foibles and weaknesses. As we laugh at or sympathize with them, we are learning something about our own selves. Shakespeare knew human nature so well and created his characters according to that knowledge. His understanding of human psychology is amazing and is one reason for the continued success of Shakespearian drama.
1. What is a paragraph supposed to do ?
inside 2. What should I keep in mind when I am writing one ?
To create a piece of writing, we have to start with paragraph.
1. General topic: 20th Century American Novelists Restricted: Hemingway and His Works More restricted: Hemingway and HiБайду номын сангаас Short Stories Topic chosen: Old People in Hemingway’s Short Stories
Sample 2 Find the T.S.
Shakespearian characters live. They are no stilted creations intended to represent differing points of view. They are people, with all the usual human foibles and weaknesses. As we laugh at or sympathize with them, we are learning something about our own selves. Shakespeare knew human nature so well and created his characters according to that knowledge. His understanding of human psychology is amazing and is one reason for the continued success of Shakespearian drama.
1. What is a paragraph supposed to do ?
inside 2. What should I keep in mind when I am writing one ?
To create a piece of writing, we have to start with paragraph.
1. General topic: 20th Century American Novelists Restricted: Hemingway and His Works More restricted: Hemingway and HiБайду номын сангаас Short Stories Topic chosen: Old People in Hemingway’s Short Stories
写作教程第二版(邹申)unit1 General(I)
paragraph.
Sample 1 Find the T.S.
• One of the central preoccupations of arts and humanities is the observation of human beings. Painters and sculptors create images of the human form; writers tell stories or compose poems about human experience; musical artists give melodic contours to the human spirit; historians and philosophers ponder the essential qualities of human civilization and nature. And in our own lives, in our own ways, we spend a great deal of our energy and attention on our fellow creatures, being in families and other kinds of relationships, observing people with curiosity and interest in the course of the day, thinking about and forming our own character- deciding what kind of person we wish to be- as we grow.
Unusual, enough information, fresh, narrow & broad enough
Sample 1 Find the T.S.
• One of the central preoccupations of arts and humanities is the observation of human beings. Painters and sculptors create images of the human form; writers tell stories or compose poems about human experience; musical artists give melodic contours to the human spirit; historians and philosophers ponder the essential qualities of human civilization and nature. And in our own lives, in our own ways, we spend a great deal of our energy and attention on our fellow creatures, being in families and other kinds of relationships, observing people with curiosity and interest in the course of the day, thinking about and forming our own character- deciding what kind of person we wish to be- as we grow.
Unusual, enough information, fresh, narrow & broad enough
写作教程第二版邹申unit1 GeneralI
? 5. Nanoscale “trees”improve efficiency in low-cost plastic solar cells.
? --- unfamiliar to you, so you can not write about it knowledgeably.
Good Topics
succeed 6. play games
surf the net …
Disadvantages 1. expensive 2. harmful radiation 3. disturbing in public 4. dangerous in driving 5. ring in embarrassing
Unsatisfactory Topics
? 2. America should lower the drinking age.
? --- boring or written about too often.
? 3. There are many different theories to explain the disappearance of the dinosaurs.
Unsatisfactory Topics
? 1. The major poets, painters, and dramatists of the Renaissance:
? --- too board and can not be completed within the time allocated
? 1. Alternative fuels. subject ? 2. Henry Ford's development of the
assembly line resulted in the mass production of cars. topic ? 3. America's legal system. subject ? 4. America needs a flat tax. topic ? 5. Butterflies. subject ? 6. Is intelligence determined by nature or by nurture? topic
? --- unfamiliar to you, so you can not write about it knowledgeably.
Good Topics
succeed 6. play games
surf the net …
Disadvantages 1. expensive 2. harmful radiation 3. disturbing in public 4. dangerous in driving 5. ring in embarrassing
Unsatisfactory Topics
? 2. America should lower the drinking age.
? --- boring or written about too often.
? 3. There are many different theories to explain the disappearance of the dinosaurs.
Unsatisfactory Topics
? 1. The major poets, painters, and dramatists of the Renaissance:
? --- too board and can not be completed within the time allocated
? 1. Alternative fuels. subject ? 2. Henry Ford's development of the
assembly line resulted in the mass production of cars. topic ? 3. America's legal system. subject ? 4. America needs a flat tax. topic ? 5. Butterflies. subject ? 6. Is intelligence determined by nature or by nurture? topic
写作教程第二版(邹申)-Unit 6
2. Not a good definition. It tends to go in circles.
3. Not a good definition. The term is not adequately differentiated from other similar feelings.
4. A good definition. A synonym is used, which is more familiar. 5. A good definition. It defines by giving a brief explanation.
As a sin: condemned as the cause of mistakes and unhappiness; leading to excessive bragging; keeping people from seeing their own faults; dangerous As a strength: praised as essential to success
Made by Pizza. C
Made by Pizza. C
Pitfalls and strategies – P61
1. A good definition. To define the term, the writer relates it to something familiar or already known.
Definition can be found in almost all expository or persuasive writings. (scientific essays, textbooks, dictionaries, encyclopedia articles, new stories, manuals, government publications and so on.) It answers the questions:
3. Not a good definition. The term is not adequately differentiated from other similar feelings.
4. A good definition. A synonym is used, which is more familiar. 5. A good definition. It defines by giving a brief explanation.
As a sin: condemned as the cause of mistakes and unhappiness; leading to excessive bragging; keeping people from seeing their own faults; dangerous As a strength: praised as essential to success
Made by Pizza. C
Made by Pizza. C
Pitfalls and strategies – P61
1. A good definition. To define the term, the writer relates it to something familiar or already known.
Definition can be found in almost all expository or persuasive writings. (scientific essays, textbooks, dictionaries, encyclopedia articles, new stories, manuals, government publications and so on.) It answers the questions:
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Targeting
Successful Writing
Rosalynzhao rosalynzhao@
Requirements
Mobile-phone Attendance Assignment Participation Notebook
Unit 1 General (I) --- Paragraph
---too broad and can not be completed within the time allocated.
4. America needs stronger control laws.
--- boring or written about too often.
Unsatisat are those following sentences belongs to, subject or topic?
1. Alternative fuels. subject 2. Henry Ford’s development of the
assembly line resulted in the mass production of cars. topic 3. America’s legal system. subject 4. America needs a flat tax. topic 5. Butterflies. subject 6. Is intelligence determined by nature or by nurture? topic
Unsatisfactory Topics
2. America should lower the drinking age.
--- boring or written about too often.
3. There are many different theories to explain the disappearance of the dinosaurs.
3. Narrowing down the scope of your topic to a facets which can be developed into a research paper
4. Formulating the final topic
subject
topic
Is my topic:
3In.teWreshtiyngm, nyarrfoawt,heears/y rmesoeatrhche,rsuisfficmienyt hdeetariols…
Try to do the exercises in P3
Try to narrow down the scope and make them specific topics on which you can write a paper.
1. too limited? 2. too broad? 3. too technical? 4. yesterday’s news? 5. too controversial? 6. likable enough?
Try to tell what are those following sentences belongs to, subject or topic?
Unsatisfactory Topics
1. The major poets, painters, and dramatists of the Renaissance:
--- too broad and can not be completed within the time allocated
1. Media producers should prosecute people who download copyrighted music…
Interesting, 2 sides (pro & against), sufficient information
2. Students should be placed in classes according to their academic ability, not their aUgnues…ual, enough information, fresh, narrow & broad enough
5. Nanoscale “trees” improve efficiency in low-cost plastic solar cells.
--- unfamiliar to you, so you can not write about it knowledgeably.
Good Topics
Paragraph
what exactly is a paragraph? And what is a good paragraph?
II.1 Topic Sentence
Definition --- A sentence that names the topic of the paragraph and contains a controlling idea is called T.S.
is the kindest neighbor I have ever known.
has a profound effect on our health.
Choosing a topic
1. Selecting a general topic（subject） 2. Reading and thinking
Topic
Controlling idea
Television programs for children have become increasingly violent.
Learning a foreign language Cathy The food we eat
is more and more important for young people.
Successful Writing
Rosalynzhao rosalynzhao@
Requirements
Mobile-phone Attendance Assignment Participation Notebook
Unit 1 General (I) --- Paragraph
---too broad and can not be completed within the time allocated.
4. America needs stronger control laws.
--- boring or written about too often.
Unsatisat are those following sentences belongs to, subject or topic?
1. Alternative fuels. subject 2. Henry Ford’s development of the
assembly line resulted in the mass production of cars. topic 3. America’s legal system. subject 4. America needs a flat tax. topic 5. Butterflies. subject 6. Is intelligence determined by nature or by nurture? topic
Unsatisfactory Topics
2. America should lower the drinking age.
--- boring or written about too often.
3. There are many different theories to explain the disappearance of the dinosaurs.
3. Narrowing down the scope of your topic to a facets which can be developed into a research paper
4. Formulating the final topic
subject
topic
Is my topic:
3In.teWreshtiyngm, nyarrfoawt,heears/y rmesoeatrhche,rsuisfficmienyt hdeetariols…
Try to do the exercises in P3
Try to narrow down the scope and make them specific topics on which you can write a paper.
1. too limited? 2. too broad? 3. too technical? 4. yesterday’s news? 5. too controversial? 6. likable enough?
Try to tell what are those following sentences belongs to, subject or topic?
Unsatisfactory Topics
1. The major poets, painters, and dramatists of the Renaissance:
--- too broad and can not be completed within the time allocated
1. Media producers should prosecute people who download copyrighted music…
Interesting, 2 sides (pro & against), sufficient information
2. Students should be placed in classes according to their academic ability, not their aUgnues…ual, enough information, fresh, narrow & broad enough
5. Nanoscale “trees” improve efficiency in low-cost plastic solar cells.
--- unfamiliar to you, so you can not write about it knowledgeably.
Good Topics
Paragraph
what exactly is a paragraph? And what is a good paragraph?
II.1 Topic Sentence
Definition --- A sentence that names the topic of the paragraph and contains a controlling idea is called T.S.
is the kindest neighbor I have ever known.
has a profound effect on our health.
Choosing a topic
1. Selecting a general topic（subject） 2. Reading and thinking
Topic
Controlling idea
Television programs for children have become increasingly violent.
Learning a foreign language Cathy The food we eat
is more and more important for young people.