雅思写作句子改错 (参考答案)知识分享

雅思写作句子改错(参考答案)

雅思写作常用语法错误分析

1．We are frequently confronted with statement about the alarming rate of loss of language diversity.

错因：statement是可数名词，在这里要么加冠词，要么变复数。

改正：We are frequently confronted with statements about the alarming rate of loss of language diversity．

大意：我们经常听到关于语言多元性快速丧失的言论。

2．Globalization will always have supporters who are blind on the destruction it can cause．

错因：惯用法。介词使用错误，blind后面常加to.

改正：Globalization will always have supporters who are blind to the destruction it can cause.

大意：全球化总有一些支持者，他们对由全球化造成的破坏视而不见。3．One problem that has not yet been addressed is the existing infrastructure and facilities fail to meet the demand posed by increased arrivals of tourists．

错因：句子结构。有两个谓语动词，分别是is和fail，需要将其中一个改成从句。

改正：One problem that has not yet been addressed is that the existing infrastructure and facilities fail to meet the demand posed by increased arrivals of tourists．

大意：一个仍然还没有被解决的问题是现有的基础设施和设备不能够满足越来越多的游客的需要.

4．Children，if grown up in a multicultural society，are more likely to embrace different cultures and values．

错因：从句部分不能用过去分词，小孩与 grow up之间是主动关系。

改正：Children，if growing up in a multicultural society．are more likely to embrace different cultures and values．

大意：如果孩子在多元文化的社会中成长，他们更容易接受不同的文化和价值观。

5．It is obvious that comparing with its drawbacks，the rise of English as a global language can bring us a lot of benefits.

错因: 不能用现在分词comparing，因为the rise of English as a global language 是被比较，是被动，因此要用过去分词compared。

改正：It is obvious that compared with its drawbacks，the rise of English as a global language can bring us a lot of benefits．

大意：很明显的是，相对于它的弊端，英语作为全球性语言的崛起会带给我们更多益处.

6．Importing goods from overseas might cause a country to depend exceedingly on imports, which mean that it would gradually lose the control on the market.

错因: 主谓不一致。这个定语从句修饰的是整个主句，因此动词要用第三人称单数。

改正：Importing goods from overseas might cause a country to depend exceedingly on imports，which means that it would gradually lose the control on the market．大意：进口商品有可能导致一个国家过于依赖进口，从而逐渐失去对市场的控制。

7. It would be not denying that almost every country has its unique culture or art forms that is different from other countries’．

错因：没有It would be not denying这种说法；or连接两个词的时候，谓语动词跟随后面的成分变化。

改正：There is no denying that (也可以说It can’t be denied that) almost every country has its unique culture or art for ms that are different from other countries’．大意：毫无疑问，几乎每个国家都有不同于其他国家的独特文化或艺术形式。8．Cultural diversity can be viewed both positively and negatively．While some see it as a barrier to effective communication or a cause of miscommunication，the others regard it as an asset.

错因: the others和others的区别在于：前若是特指某个范围里的另外一些人，而后者并不强调任何一个特定范围，只是泛指其他人。

改正: Cultural diversity can be viewed both positively and negatively．While some see it as a barrier to effective communication or a cause of miscommunication，others regard it as an asset．

大意: 我们可以从正反两方面看待多元文化、一部分人把它视作一个有效交流的障碍或者是一个引起误解的原因，另一些人则把它看作财富．

9. It is undeniable fact that the tourism industry has provided a substantial source of income for many countries．

错因：fact是个可数名同，应该加冠词。

改正：It is an undeniable fact that the tourism industry has provided a substantial source of income for many countries．

大意：不可否认，旅游业已为很多国家带来可观的收入。

10. I believe that everything has its downside，and the spread of English as a global language in the world is not exception.

错因：not是副词，不可以修饰名词exception。

改正：I believe that everything has its downside，and the spread of English as a global language in the world is no exception．

大意：我相信每件事都有它的弊端，英语作为全球性语言在世界的扩展也不是例外.