23雅思基础写作
Writing Handout: 3Part 1: vocabulary practicePractice 1 :Sometimes we use this / these + noun to refer to an idea / different ideas.People who have a negative attitude to life can be very unhappy. This problem can affect everyone. Taxes have increased, salaries have been cut and food prices have risen. These factors have led to a drop in living standards across the region.Complete the sentences with this or these and a suitable noun (singular or plural) from the box.Now underline the verbs after the added nouns. Are they singular or plural?Write S or Pnext to sentences 1-4 above.Part 2: Skill development1.Read the sentences and decide if they are the writer’s opinion orthe opinion of other people. Write WO (writer’s opinion) or OPO(other people’s opinion).2.According to the government, traditional families are the happiest.3.There are many things that can make people happy. In my view, family andfriends arethe most important.4.Some teachers believe that children should learn how to manage money at school.Theysuggest that this could help the economy in the future.5.I believe that the government should provide more financial help to poorfamilies.6.My personal opinion is that having an enjoyable job is essential for happiness.7.Many people argue that all citizens should pay as little tax as possible.8.I think that wealthy people should pay more tax.9.Parents often claim that they need more money.2. Read the introduction to the essay below and underline the phrases used to introduce thewriter’s opinion and the opinions of other people.If people have more money, they are generally happier. To what extent do you agree withthis statement?Money is important in life but it does not always bring happiness. Some people say that havingmore money makes life less stressful, while other people argue that happiness can be foundin other aspects of life such as work, family or hobbies. In my view, having more money doesnot make people happier but it makes life easier. There are two reasons for my opinion.Answer these questions about the introduction.What do some people say?........................................................................................................ What do other people argue?..................................................................................................... What does the writer think?....................................................................................................... How many reasons will the writer give for his / her opinion? ...............................................3. Write an introduction for the following essay title. Remember to give your opinion and introducethe opinions of other people. Use your own ideas and the notes in the box to help you.Personal happiness comes from being successful in life. How far do you agree with thisstatement?plete this paragraph for the essay in Exercise 2 using suitable linking words. (Thinkabout whether each sentence or clause agrees or contrasts with what has just been said.)Firstly, I believe that money makes life easier because it reduces stress and worry. Familieswho have enough money to spend on accommodation, food and clothing are less stressedand so have fewer arguments. (1)..................................., children from wealthy familiesoften do better at school, (2)...................................this may be because they can afford topay for good schools. (3)..................................., some people think that money cannot solveall family problems. (4)...................................they believe that love from parents is moreimportant than money for bringing up children. (5)....................................I think that it can bedifficult for parents to be positive and loving if they are always worrying about money.Now continue this paragraph giving your own opinions and the opinions of other people. Usethe notes in the box and add your own notes. Remember to use linking words correctly.Secondly, having more money can help people plan for the future so they have morecontrol over their lives. ...plete the following paragraph with suitable referencing words, e.g. pronouns, this andthat and linking words.Happiness is considered very important in life. What are the best ways to be happy?One of the best ways to be happy is to try to develop a positive attitude to life. In myopinion, (1) .............................................. approach can help people to reduce stress andnegative feelings. (2) .............................................. can be much happier simply by thinkingabout all the good things in their life: family, friends, good health and pets. They can(3) ..............................................focus on improving things they are less happy aboutsuch as getting a better job or moving to a new place. (4)...............................................many other people say that (5).............................................. isn't easy for peoplewho have serious money problems or no chance of changing their life.(6)..............................................factors can often cause people to have problems with stressand ill health. (7).............................................. problems can affect how happy someone is(8)..............................................staying positive can still help in these situations.Part 3: HomeworkWriting Task 2You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Write about the following topic:Friends and family bring more happiness than money and possessions. How fardo you agree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from yourown knowledgeor experience.Write at least 250 words.。
雅思英语写作
雅思基础写作精讲班第1讲讲义基础写作基本框架Procedure of writing:How to distribute the time of 40 minutes一、议论文真题类型分类：练习题目：1. Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn the language. Do you agree?2. To what extent is nuclear technology a danger to life on Earth? What are the benefits and risks associated with its use?3. Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest at least one possible solution.4. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.5. Scientific and technological advances have changed our lives. But some scientists in some fields say that scientists are not able to find solutions to the problems they havecreated. To what extent do you agree or disagree?6. Intelligent machines such as robots are increasingly being used. They can do many things that used to be done by human. Discuss the benefits and dangers.7. In order to solve the problems of traffic jam and air pollution, government is determined to raise the price of petrol. Do you believe it isthe best way? What other methods can you recommend?确定关键词Procedure of writing:How to distribute the time of 40 minutes一、议论文真题类型分类：练习题目：1. Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn the language. Do you agree?2. To what extent is nuclear technology a danger to life on Earth? What are the benefits and risks associated with its use?3. Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest at least one possible solution.4. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug useby young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.5. Scientific and technological advances have changed our lives. But some scientists in some fields say that scientists are not able to find solutions to the problems they have created. To what extent do you agree or disagree?6. Intelligent machines such as robots are increasingly being used. They can do many things that used to be done by human. Discuss the benefits and dangers.7. In order to solve the problems of traffic jam and air pollution, government is determined to raise the price of petrol. Do you believe it is the best way? What other methods can you recommend?雅思基础写作精讲班第2讲讲义07年真题回顾2. 真题思路扩展brainstorming（1）specific: I. from abstract to personal: air travel, oneself study—group study, fast food-traditional food （2）general: economy, environment, efficiency, safety, pleasure, science and technology避开主题句错误类型3. 确定主题句：ascertain topic sentencesI. Some mistakes of the thesis statement or topic sentences:（1）The subject of this paper will be my parents.（2）My parents have been the most influential people in my life.（3）My parents had only one child.（4）My parents helped me grow in important ways, although in other respects I was limited.4. 开始动笔写作：1. format: block,2. pencil3. handwriting: clean and clear4. time control: 34m5. 装饰和改错：decoration and correction（1）After I cashed my paycheck. I treated myself to dinner.（2）The instructor told everyone in the room to be quiet his favorite show was on.（3）How you react to the incident reveal what side you stand on.（4）The crowd has surged forward, showing their excitement.（5）There are more and more people go abroad nowadays.（6）The student who had sat down quickly put on the headphones. 雅思基础写作精讲班第3讲讲义必备模板第二种模板形式(五段式）雅思基础写作精讲班第4讲讲义Mixed typesMethod:Successful introduction:1. “Knowledge is power,” wrote Francis Bacon long ago.Today college students are hard at study to acquire all kinds of skills, such as English, computer, and driving.People, however, cannot reach a general consensus on what subjects should be attached more importance to,academic or practical.( academic subjects Vs. practical subjects) (As the old saying goes)Art is long, life isshort;(Rudyard Kipling wrote) East is east, and West is west, and never the twain shall meet!; Experience is the father of wisdom and memory the mother; Knowledge isa treasure, but practice is the key to it; Knowledgeadvances by steps, not by leaps; Great works areperformed not by strength but by perseverance; Genius is nothing but labor and diligence.2. What can be done to solve the problem of watershortage? Surely, modern people frequently are plagued with this question. As for me, there are three methods as followings.（the problem of water shortage）3. Is the history of no avail to modern society? Recentdiscussions concerning the function of history haveraised some very real doubts in the minds ofcontemporary people. As far as I am concerned, we can benefit a lot form the past.(whether history is useful to cotemporary society)4. A recent survey reports that there were about one thirdof college graduates who could not find an ideal job in2005. This fact prompts us to make a thorough analysis of the root reason of this alarming phenomenon.(theissue of unemployment of graduates)5. It is generally agreed that the main responsibility ofteachers is to pass on knowledge to students. As a result, if students can do well in academic subjects, theirteachers are qualified enough. However, I assert thatassisting students in distinguishing right from wrong is more significant for teachers.(the relationship between students and teachers)6. With the development of computer technology, books, asa traditional medium, are more and more challenged.Many libraries are faced with such a dilemma, whether they should invest on computers or on books. With every aspect taken into consideration, I believe that to invest on computers would be a better choice.(investment inbooks or computers for a library)Successful body:1. One main reason for water shortage is lack of theawareness of water conservation. For example, moreoften than not we can come across such a phenomenon that a person turns a faucet on and forgets to turn it off.Precious water has been totally squandered. （theproblem of water shortage）2. Smoking should be banned without any hesitation for it israther detrimental to people’s health. Cigarette smokecontains nicotine, several cancer producing or irritatingsubstances and carbon monoxide gas. Damage to the lining of the bronchial tubes is much more among cigarettesmokers than non smokers, even when there is no obvious disease. Some of these changes are considered to bepre-cancerous. Lung function is generally reduced among cigarette smokers. Cigarette smoking is a greater hazard than other factors---such as community air pollution—in the causation of lung cancer and chronic bronchitis.(nosmoking)3 Due to great strides of modern technology, dramatictransformations have taken place in our life. In the past, if we were anxious to contact friends, we had to drop in on them in person, which was inconvenient andtime-consuming. Now, fashionable cell phones can be an efficient bridge between acquaintances.(the benefit of modern technology)4. There are a lot of benefits of raising dogs. First, dogscontribute to the health of their owners. Often theirdemands for walks and play improve their owner’sexercise routine. In fact, statistics show that dog owners get more regular exercise than non-dog owners do. Also, they enhance health simply be being around to bepetted. Second, they provide a means for parents toteach their children responsibility. When parents givechildren a dog, they provide them the opportunity tofulfill the responsibilities of walking, feeding, and caring for its other needs. Finally and most important of all,dogs enhance the well-being and emotional stability of families. Older people who live alone especially rely on dogs to give them enjoyment and company. Childrenalso find a great deal of comfort in their dogs. As anexample, a family dog helps a little boy adapt when his mother leaves him with a sitter and goes towork..(advantage of keeping pets)5.lot of advantages. Firstly, after three or four years ofschooling, students can undoubtedly acquire valuableexpertise, which is essential to their future jobs. As weknow, through compulsory and optional courses,students lay a solid foundation in a particular field andare confident to solve the relevant problemsconfronted.(benefits of college education)6. By contrast, the opponents argue that its drawbacksshould not be ignored. For one thing, some existingmajors are so out of date that they serve no purpose for the future job. In such a dilemma, there is no doubt that graduation means exactly unemployment. If whatstudents learn in colleges is only theoreticalargumentation definitely unconnected with reality, what is the point in wasting such prime time? (drawbacks of college education)Successful conclusion:1. The extinction of species, the shortage of lumber anddrug ingredients, the reduction of oxygen and theincrease of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere all signal that we cannot afford to lose any moreforests.(protection of forests)2. To stop losing more forests, we should educate people,especially those who have destroyed and who are going to destroy forests for one reason or another, in why forestsmust exist on the earth. (protection of forests)雅思基础写作精讲班第5讲讲义写作的素材素材Topics:1. If a five-year old commits a crime, should his/her parents have the responsibility and are punished? What is the age of a child when parents no longer bear the responsibility for children's behavior? /Unlike other countries, police in UK donot carry guns. Some think it leaves citizen unprotected, while others think it reduces the overall violence in our society. Discuss both the views.2. We know that university graduates should earn higher salary than less well-educated members, so in this way they should pay all the full cost. /Quality of people that we need in our society can’t be learned in universities and other academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?3. International tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree?/ Government should build new buildings in a traditional way in order to protect traditional culture.4. The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? / Billions of money is spent on the space research. Some people say that it should be spent on improving the living standard of the people on the earth. Do you agree or disagree?5. Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, and the protection is a waste of resource. Agree or disagree? /Some people think killing animals for food is cruel and unnecessary and some people think is essential for dairy diet. To what extent what do you think about the both issues?6. Nowadays motorized flight is considered as the most important and influential invention in the world. Not any other invention has such a significant impact on our lives. Agree?/ Maintaining public library is a waste of money, because computer technology has already replaced its function. Do you agree or disagree?7. Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories with their employees to the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree?/ The environmental problem is so serious to most countries and individuals that it needs the international cooperation. Do you agree or disagree?8. Mass media have a significant influence on our life and this is a negative development. Do you agree or disagree?/ Do thenegative effects of some international media such as TV and magazine for example overweigh the positive effects?Topic Word:I.1. society: Society is flooded with unhealthy substance in the mass media, such as violence and pornography, therefore having inevitably downside effect on people, Citizens are preoccupied by money worship to make profits by hook or by crook; parents never discipline children strictly, divorce rate rockets, children are in need of solicitude, youngsters fall victim to prevalent domestic violence and are prone to aggressive impulse; students are heavily encumbered by knowledge acquisition, psychological education has been neglected, confronted with frustration, children have no efficient outlet to alleviate stress.素材（2）犯罪处罚2. Government should mount a crackdown on crime and bring criminals to justice, the aim is to reform those who have gone astray, offenders can turn over a new leaf and are endowed withproficiency in a particular line, inferiority complex and psychological shadow should be avoided, delinquents harbor vengeful sentiments against others and society as a whole, lawbreakers resume committing crimes or committing suicide.II.1. students can acquire academic qualification, learners can develop expertise, pupils have practical ability to apply what they have learned to society; campus and dormitory life instill discipline into students, living together can cultivate cooperation and strengthen the skill of interpersonal relationship, learners get tolerant of others, schooling can help students tell right from wrong2. course framework ought to be more flexible, such as more optional subjects rather than compulsory ones, interests can be aroused, subjects are practical and related to future jobs, learners should be more motivated, they have convenient access to relevant information of majors.III.1. advantage: cultures are mutually beneficial, theycan pool and share resources, the platform of exchange of ideas will assist diverse countries in comprehending actual state of affairs of distinct cultures, globalization will facilitate mutual understanding and dispel misunderstanding; disadvantage: the conflict between mainstream and marginal cultures will result in lesser-known cultures on the verge of extinction, the world is turned into a similar and monotonous entity.2. tradition is precious and unique, it symbolizes identity of a nation, people in the homeland are bristled with pride, for example, Forbidden City, fantastic buildings witness resplendent culture of feudalism, the Bastille, time-honored prison appreciates glorious history of French Revolution; peaceful coexistence between tradition and modernity should be guaranteed, tradition serves as places of tourist interests and boost the development of economy, we can invest money in the conservation of tradition and promote the education of protecting tradition.雅思基础写作精讲班第6讲讲义第四大主题1. the ultimate purpose of government is to serve the people, dispelling adverse substance is the obligation, authority should make overall planning and give consideration to the interests of all sides in adopting policies, it can exercise executive power if necessary.V.1. animals are in an unfavorable situation, they are entitled to the right of subsistence and deserve impartial treatment, it is unjustifiable to expropriate the right of living,2. humans enjoy the right of priority, in medical field, human beings can carry out clinical experiment on laboratory animals, they can achieve breakthrough in medical treatment, vivisection is justifiable.3. a reciprocal relationship is strongly recommended, equilibrium in biosphere and harmonious development can be beneficial to each other, they are indispensable to each other,1. white-hot technology transforms the life of drudgery into a convenient and comfortable one, entertainment at a finger’s click is not beyond our wildest dream, the means of communications, traffic, and information have been changed dramatically, humans are more confident about the future2. people adhere to hedonist philosophy and become indolent, declined ability is accompanying the progress; humans are heavily dependent on modern science, they become alienated, environment falls victim to advance of science and technology, environmental pollution has been aggravated.素材7VII.1. modern society are flooded with one-off products, such as chopsticks, shopping bags, and purified water bottles, some of them are non-biodegradable, industry, fossil fuel in industrial development is widely applied, petrol, coal, gas, the increase of carbon dioxide leads to global warming and air pollution, it will deplete ozone layer, farming, fertilizer andpesticide give rise to erosion of soil.2. government should pursue strict policy and popularize biodegradable packaging, coordination should be ensured among various countries, education will fire the masses with enthusiasm for environmental protection.VIII.1. Readers are thoroughly informed of current affairs, they can have access to up-to-date information and enjoy the right to know the truth, the freedom of speech will be guaranteed.2. Because of lack of professional ethics, shameless and unscrupulous journalists always carry gloomy news, such as murder, to promote circulation, paparazzo(singular), hordes of paparazzi(plural), invade privacy, chequebook journalism leads to sham news, the mass media follow the fashion and pander to the low taste, it encourages vulgar interests雅思基础写作精讲班第7讲讲义写作中必备的词汇和句式词汇和句式：第一:1.appalling/drug-related/commit/tackle crime, turn to crime: bored youngsters turn to crime. hardened criminal, teach criminals salutary lessons, unwilling victims, fall victim to,2.decent education, enter higher education, education authority, education resources, encyclopedic knowledge, broaden knowledge,3. alien/indigenous/dominant/mainstream culture, assimilate the culture, experience culture shock, a mutual exchange of ideas, facilitate communication, eco-friendly tourismernment agency/backing, guarantee equality, maximize efficiency, supplement meagre income,5.prove medically beneficial for human beings, endangered animals, laboratory animals, slaughter animals,6. white-hot technology, communication/telecommunications technology, treat the world with difference,7. safeguard the environment, damage the environment, environment issues/protection, pollution of the environment, fragile balance, sit in traffic jam, strike a balance8.tabloid journalism, fashion/literary/science journalism, the world of journalism, information bombard, create serious disturbance to people, accurate information, misleading advertisements, classified advertisements,第二：1. give rise to/lead to/arouse a heated discussion/perplexity; when it comes to.., it is commonly believed that…; one indisputable fact is that….;it goes without saying that…; it cannot be denied that…; recently, …has been brought into focus; with the rapid of development of…, …has gained an ever-increasing popularity in modern people’s life;…..is not strange to modern people.I assert…; in my opinion…; what I emphasize is that…;2. the reasons are multiple, it is manifest that…., it is conceded that…, in other words, that is to say, for example.3. from what has been discussed above…, taking into account all the points.., from the above-mentioned facts,.. I am convinced that..第四种词汇第三：alarming issue/ thorny problem, crucial reason/contributing factor, profound impact/ disruptive influence, charismatic culture/ time-honored tradition, beneficialinterest/spectacular result, persistent effort/genuine dilemma, pollution prevention/prevailing attitude, efficient solution/mass production, harmoniousrelationship/sustainable development, rosy picture/ monotonous routine, infallible methodology, severepenalty/impending crisis, draconian measure/appropriate punishment, widespread phenomenon/current situation, rampant corruption/petty crime, improperly undoubtedly, inevitably, indiscriminately, absolutely, responsibly第四：1.In addition/additionally: Computers provide efficient work. In addition, they make our life more colorful.Furthermore/further: This method can, furthermore, be used in environmental protection. Moreover: private cars are cheap and, moreover, it can improve our life. In other words: Killing live animals is cruel, a murder in other words.2． Hence: The cost of transport is a major expense for a person. Hence job location is an important consideration. Consequently: Globalization is a widespread phenomenon and consequently the domestic culture has been affected. Thereupon: Nature will revenge on humans. Thereupon people begin to realize the power of nature.3．Whereas: Smoking is something personal whereas it will affect others’ right. Conversely: S ome policemen prefer to carry guns when on duty; conversely others are reluctant to do that.4．Although/though: Although some young men really have no idea of what a new culture is, they absorb it without any reservation. Granted: Granted that the deed is not perfect, the disadvantages are outweighed by the advantages.5. for example, specifically: Specifically, the departmentwanted answers to the following questions.6. On condition that: Television enrich our lives a lot on condition that we are not addicted to it. Given that: Given that pets have become an indispensable part of some people’s life, the key is to coordinate the relationship between them.雅思基础写作精讲班第8讲讲义第六种词汇positive words:1. strive for a harmonious society/greater efficiency/striveto do something争取2. take suitable/timely steps to address this problem.采取合适/及时的措施3. top the central government's agenda.位于…最重要的位置4. assist sb in sth.在…方面帮助5. play an increasingly more integral role in wealthdistribution.起到越来越整体的作用6. contribute to sth/doing做出贡献7. implement the policy执行8. exert a positive/baneful effect on9. embark on reform and opening开始做…10. t ake initiative to eliminate negative effects.主动做…11. l aunch a spate of stringent measures发动，采取12. n avigate one’s way through the difficult situation.通过13. P roblems triggered by income composition are easy toresolve.解决/ muster enough resolve to quit smoking.鼓起勇气/Distribution of wealth is tainted and distorted by corruption must be redressed.纠正14. P roblems arising from development-based factors can berelieved and eased.减轻/ improve and ease减轻 thedifficulties and frustrations faced by travelers15. e liminate/ weed out 消除the structure of unscientificdesign.16. u tilize利用 their rich resources.17. i mprove/upgrade/optimize改善 the conditions18. f acilitate 推动the country's future sustainabledevelopment.19. b oost 推进the employment20. s houlder 承担起greater social responsibilities/bridge 消除，减少the cultural differences./ sth is mirrored by被反映21. m ake a difference有很重要的作用22. a vail oneself of something利用23. a bide by traffic rules遵守24. e nhance their job opportunities/enrich one’s life丰富，提高25. a spire to careers in finance/aspire to study abroad努力想要26. v oice their support for the movement表示了27. m ake efforts to do努力做事情28. h elp with 帮助weight loss and control; improve 改善fitness; reduce 减少stress, and of course save 节省money on petrol and parking.29. m inimize 减轻air and noise pollution, traffic accidents,oil consumption, road repairs and beautifies cities. 30. T hose measures, coupled with 与…一起advanced science andtechnology, will be taken without any delay.31. H ouse prices will start to calm down, saving the sector.下降32. T he current campaign to curb控制 the use of tobacco shouldbe stepped up.加速33. n urture/ cultivate a great number of learned people/培养，培育34. F igures released 公布on World No Tobacco Day serve as asource of frustration for everyone who wants to curb smokingin China.35. a slew of/a spate of/ a skyrocketing number of多数量第五：negative words:1. fail to do没能做…2. be a heache to…对于..是个难题3. pose a potential threat to residents' health.有潜在的威胁4. mean a formidable battle to do艰苦的斗争5. is now confronted with the same question that haunts/ beplagued with/be afflicted with (overpopulation/youth drug abuse/traffic accidents) 受到…问题的困扰6. be detrimental to sth对..有害7. focus attention on/bring something to somebody's attention引起…注意8. be blind to this point注意不到，忽视9. be of no avail没有用处10. crack down on(严厉的处罚) smoking in public places andpenalize(处罚) those who sell cigarettes to juveniles.11. exert a negative effect on sth有负面的影响12. exacerbate income disequilibrium/ The situation wascompounded by…加剧了13. squander natural resources浪费14. deprive sb of sth剥夺15. We believe that car tax should be scrapped.废除16. If it is hard to rein in控制17. The move has aroused controversy引起争论18. Apart from that, numerous factors are to blame for thecurrent situation. 责备19. We must stop pampering children纵容20. take various measures to tackle such malpractices处理玩忽职守21. Air pollution has turned into a major hazard affecting urbanresidents' quality of life. 巨大的危险影响了.22. an apparent total lack of明显的完全缺乏23. social and economic disequilibrium/ gauge(衡量) incomeinequality/disparity不平衡24. the severity of the pollution levels严重性25. lung damage and respiratory problems肺部损害以及呼吸问题26 be mind-boggling/ a problem of mind-boggling complexity令人难以置信的27. People cannot help but wonder why efforts to cut the numberof smokers have proven to be so futile. 没有效果的28. Smokers are six times more likely to be infertile（不生育的）and have a greater chance of becoming disabled,（残疾的） while women who smoke have a higher chance ofcontracting（得…病） breast cancer.29. looming environmental and public health disaster逐渐显现的30. leave others to the mercy of market forces受到..控制31. The abuse（滥用） of power for financial gain veils behind(隐藏)monopolies32. a hard nut to crack is that..困难是…33. Emissions from car exhausts have been found to be one ofthe major sources of urban air pollution. 尾气的排放34. carbon dioxide and carbon monoxide二氧化碳，一氧化碳35. We have no reason to be optimistic about the improvementof urban air quality. 对..不乐观第六：同义必备词：66. youth, teenager, minor, fledgling67. the old, elderly, grizzled, grey-headed68. conserve, preserve保存，如：We must conserve our waterresources for future generations.69. assure, ensure(insure), guarantee, pledge, avouch保证，如：Government should assure consumers of the quality of commodities. /It is important to insure that universities have enough funds to carry out important research inscience subjects./ The law guarantees equal rights for men and women./ The new government pledged to reduce crime./ Some criminals avouched that they themselves wereinnocent.70. Ideal, aspiration(beyond normal expectation), ambition(aparticular end)理想，雄心71. compare with/to, contrast, analogize(elaboration on thefunction of families in social life, sociologists like to analogists them to the cells of a human body.) 比较72. change, alter, modify(change of function), convert into,transform(appearance),改变73. argue, controversy(long-continued argument),dispute(angry manner), debate(formal argument)争论74. standard, criterion, gauge, yardstick标准75. inevitable, inescapable, unavoidable难免76. wealth, property, assets, fortune财富77. attend, take part in, participate in(formal), partake in,join in,参与。
2023年4月22日雅思大作文题目及范文
2023年4月22日雅思大作文题目及范文题目：经济发展的利弊Nowadays, most countries improve the standard of living through economic development. But some social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of the phenomenon outweigh the disadvantages?如今，大多数国家通过经济发展提高生活水平。
但一些社会价值观却因此而丧失。
你认为这一现象利大于弊吗？范文：With the implementation of economic incentive, most countries have witnessed the flourishing economy while social values are ignored and even lost as a consequence. Although the process of developing economy should not sacrifice the social values, as far as I am concerned, economic development outweighs the disadvantages in terms of social values.Admittedly, while seeking the high speed of economy development, people tend to neglect traditional values and cultural practices. For example, mutual trust and support had always been honored in the tradition virtues, but nowadays this has been made a way for personal interests such as promotion or high salary, since people are more preoccupied with their own b usiness, indifferent with others’ troubles. These losses can have negative effects on people'ssense of identity and community, leading to social problems like alienation and disconnection.However, it is important for people to notice various tangible benefits brought by economic development. For one thing, with the thriving economy, increased job opportunities emerged in different sectors, resulting in higher wages and broad working options for workers. For another thing, the development of economy also advances other aspects that people have a better access to healthcare and education. Consequently, these factors contribute to an overall improvement in people's standard of living and have positive effects on society.To conclude, while there are certainly disadvantages to economic development, the benefits generally surpass the costs. By generating employment opportunities, elevating the standard of living, economic expansion ultimately fosters the improvement of society as an entirety. It falls upon governments and individuals to reconcile material development with the preservation of social values, guaranteeing a harmonious and sustainable future for generations to follow.。
雅思写作题目【通用4篇】-最新
雅思写作题目【通用4篇】在平凡的学习、工作、生活中，大家都经常看到作文的身影吧，写作文可以锻炼我们的独处习惯，让自己的'心静下来，思考自己未来的方向。
怎么写作文才能避免踩雷呢？它山之石可以攻玉，以下内容是为您带来的4篇《雅思写作题目》，如果能帮助到您，将不胜荣幸。
雅思写作题目篇一1、偏远地区考试松。
其实，以前考雅思的人不多的时候，一些偏远考点可能人数少确实会相对松一些。
但现在雅思处于全国爆满的状态，不管什么考场人都不少，所以标准都一样。
2、考官的问题有正确答案。
在雅思口语对话中，你可能会犯语法错误或发错音，但就内容而言，是没有对错的！雅思口语考察大家的交流能力，只要自圆其说即可。
3、语速越快越好。
考官不仅会听考生语言是否流畅，也要听是否连贯。
所以即使考生的语速很快，但如果不断重复，而且还出现很多逻辑错误，同样也得不了高分。
4、像老外一样讲话。
当你在使用第二语言时，很多因素会影响你的表达文化背景、所受教育、母语的语音系统等。
因此你完全没有必要非要像外国人一样讲话。
1、首先按照口语机经将话题整理出来，大约30个不到，整理好之后按照这些topic逐个写提纲，接下来就是要用准确的表达来将这些提纲串成完整的句子。
2、在地道短语和词汇上可以参考十天，注意是参考短语和单词而不是照着背句子。
可以常用过渡词，比如with regard to…。
as far as i’m concerned…。
. 显得你在思考，整个对话有逻辑。
3、拒绝内容空洞，要细节化。
比如说描述一个度假胜地三亚，你可以这样说：那里的气候很好，可以穿漂亮的裙子；那里阳光充足，可以在沙滩上晒日光浴；那里海水很蓝，很多漂亮的鱼，还能冲浪等等……4、每天坚持读英语1小时。
主要训练的是fluency and coherence。
建议在阅读时，每天认准2篇文章，读到烂为止，要读出感觉读出速度。
这就达到目的了。
5、找外教或者口语比自己好的partner练习，可以帮助指导对错6、烤鸭备考的时候一定要用自己身边的素材。
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在脑中形成文章的大致框架和 要点。
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根据草拟的提纲，展开段落， 完成全文。
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仔细阅读题目，明确写作要求 和主题。
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在纸上写出文章的提纲和主要 观点。
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通读全文，检查语法、拼写错 误，调整句子结构和用词。
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《基础雅思写作》ppt课件
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• 雅思写作简介 • 雅思写作技巧 • 雅思写作题型解析 • 雅思写作常见问题及解决方案 • 雅思写作练习与模拟题 • 总结与展望
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雅思写作简介
雅思写作考试目的
评估考生在学术英语 环境下的写作能力
为考生进入更高层次 的学习提供证明
检测考生是否具备在 英语国家攻读本科及 以上学位所需的写作 技能
雅思写作考试形式
考试时长：1小时 考试题型：图表说明、议论文、书信等
写作任务：考生需完成两篇作文，第一篇为图表说明，第二篇为议论文或书信
2023年6月17日雅思大作文范文及解析
2023年6月17日雅思大作文范文及解析再犯罪的原因和解决办法一、2023年6月20日雅思大作文题目Many criminals continue to commit crimes even after being punished for it. Why do you think this happen? How can we solve this problem?二、范文及解析IntroductionA mushrooming number of criminals, after being released from the jail, will revert to crime, exerting ceaseless baneful influence on the social harmony and stability. Behind such a ticklish problem, from my perspective, are two predominant factors and viable solutions are in desperate need to avert the bleak future.解析本场考试重复1月14日大作文考题，虽然是很多考生害怕的犯罪类话题，但本题以说明文的形式考出，要求分析犯罪分子被释放出之后继续犯罪的原因及解决方法，是一个复古旧题，整体难度并不大；mushrooming adj.迅速增长的；越来越多的；ceaseless adj.不断的；不停的；baneful adj.不好的；有害的；ticklish adj.难对付的；棘手的；Body 1The chief culprit for re-offending would be the difficulty for the criminals to settle down and reintegrate into the society. Indisputably, one of the root causesfor anti-social behaviors is poverty, by which I mean living odds force some people to embark on a path of delinquency to support themselves by engaging in illegal activities such as stealing, larceny and the like. After being freed from the prison, with a criminal record, never would it be easy for the law-breakers who lack livelihood skills to secure a job and become economically independent. Another contributing factor for such a worrying trend has much to do with the psychology condition of the criminals. Suffering from improper treatment, be it physical punishment or verbal aggression, many offenders, when set free from the prison, are inundated with resentment instead of visions of life, for which they, running after revenge, are apt to fall back into perpetrating crimes.解析：再次犯罪的原因有：(1)物质层面：犯过罪的人出来之后在稳定生活重新融入社会上存在明显困难；(2)精神层面：报复心理；culprit n.不好的事情的原因；罪魁祸首；reintegrate into v.重新融入；living odds n.生活窘境；verbal aggression n.语言攻击；embark on a path of delinquency v.走上犯罪的道路；larceny n.盗窃；be inundated with v.充斥着；resentment n. 愤恨；怨恨；revenge n.复仇；are apt to v.倾向于；易于；perpetrate v.犯罪；作恶；Body 2Prickly as the issue is, steps can be taken to address this . Primarily, the government should play a leading role by enacting tougher laws and carrying out more severe penalties such as heavier fines or longer sentences for offenders toaccomplish the purpose of deterrence. The authorities should also polish the effectiveness of imprisonment with the aim to help criminals achieve rehabilitation. To specify, job-related training targeted at those released offenders are staunchly suggested, which enables them to be furnished with some employment abilities, be they a plumber, a hairdresser or a driver. In this case, they can be, in large part, encouraged to live a normal life rather than violate the law for survival. Efforts from family members, friends and the society are also indispensable to cure the mental disorders. To elaborate, showing enough respect and helping those ex-prisoners to find a job are great tender solicitude. The general public and the whole society should be made to believe are formed man deserves a new leaf.解析：解决方法：(1)政府层面：颁布更严格的法律配备更严厉的处罚以达到更好的震慑作用；进一步改进监禁的教育方式从而达到帮助犯罪分子真正改过自新；(2)家庭和社会：更多地尊重，接纳，包容改过自新的罪犯；prickly adj.麻烦的；address v.解决；enact v.制定；颁布法令；rehabilitation n.改过自新；staunchly adv.强烈地；be furnished with v.具有；配备有；solicitude n.安慰；关怀reformed adj.改过自新的；ConclusionIn conclusion, the problem for ex-prisoners to resort to offence, notwithstanding its gravity, can be brought under control with both the government and the public shouldering joint responsibility.解析：总结前文：notwithstanding prep. 虽然；尽管；gravity n.严重性;三、范文2There are a variety of punishments for criminals, including imprisonment, fines, and community service. However, even after serving their sentences, a significant proportion of ex-prisoners continue to commit crimes. This essay will explore the reasons behind this and propose solutions.对罪犯有各种各样的惩罚，包括监禁、罚款和社区服务。
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雅思写作评分标准对照表2023
2023雅思写作评分标准对照表1.概述作为国际英语语言测试系统（IELTS）的一部分，雅思写作部分是考生们在申请留学或移民过程中必须面对的重要考试之一。
雅思写作考试是评估考生在书面交流能力方面的一个重要指标，了解雅思写作评分标准对于备考考生来说至关重要。
本文将介绍2023年最新的雅思写作评分标准对照表，分析各个评分维度的具体要求和标准，帮助考生更好地准备和应对雅思写作考试。
2. 任务响应(Task Response)任务响应是雅思写作评分的第一个维度，它着重于考生对于题目所要求的内容是否进行了详尽和准确的回答。
在2023年的雅思写作评分标准对照表中，任务响应的要求更加具体和明确。
考生需要在文章中清晰地表达对于题目要求的理解，确保在回答问题的过程中足够详细和全面。
考生还需注意提供具体的例子和论据来支撑自己的观点，确保文章的逻辑性和连贯性。
3. 语言（Lexical Resource）语言是雅思写作评分的另一个关键维度，它主要评价考生的词汇和表达能力。
在2023年的雅思写作评分标准中，语言的要求更加注重考生对于词汇的准确和丰富使用，以及表达能力的灵活和多样性。
考生需要在文章中运用恰当的词汇和短语来表达自己的想法，避免重复和简单的表达方式。
考生还需注意使用恰当的句式和语法结构，确保文章的流畅和连贯。
4. 语法和句子结构（Grammar and Sentence Structure）语法和句子结构是雅思写作评分的另一个重要维度，它主要评价考生对于语法和句子结构的掌握程度。
在2023年的雅思写作评分标准中，语法和句子结构的要求更加强调考生对于句子的准确性和多样性。
考生需要在文章中避免简单和重复的句式，尝试运用各种复杂的句子结构来表达自己的观点。
考生还需注意使用恰当的时态和语态，确保文章的表达准确和清晰。
5. 一致性和连贯性（Coherence and Cohesion）一致性和连贯性是雅思写作评分的最后一个维度，它主要评价考生在文章结构和段落间的连接上是否达到了一定的水平。
雅思写作基础作文题目汇总
雅思写作基础作文题目汇总雅思考试的脚步临近了，在雅思写作中有哪些基础作文题目的出现几率都是比较大的呢？下面是小编整理的雅思写作基础作文题目汇总，欢迎大家阅读分享借鉴，希望对大家有所帮助。
雅思基础作文题目1. You are an university student who are living in the accommodation at the campus. One day you find something wrong with your accommodation. So you write a letter to the House Officer to tell them what happened, the reason you think, what you decide to do, and whether if it is right.2. It is wrong that our government pay more money to the artist projects, for instance, there are more and more paintings and sculptures appearing at the public places, because there are more important thing to do. What's you opinion? Do you agree or disagree with it?3. writing to an English speaking college about qualification, accommodation, fee, what courses do you want to choose and why.4. Participating in a sport is as important for psychological health as it is for physical condition and social development.5. You have left college. But you didn't say goodbye to your friend who live in the room with you because he had a course at that time. Write a letter to him to appology and tell hem how you spend that days before you leave and how you get home. Then invite him to visit you.6. Some people say the parents should except school to conduct their children's behavior and tell them what is 'right' or 'wrong'. Others say schools should take this responsibility. Please give your point about it.7. Write to the agency officer and complain about the rent car which has sth wrong. Tell them the problems of the car you rent from the agency and your requiring.8. As the developing countries and the third world countries, there are a funds, how to use it? Invest in the basic education or in the high-technology, for instance, computer? What's your opinion?9. You are a foreign student. Write to the Student Union, introduce your hobbies and interests and ask information of clubs and societies. You want to join a club or society enjoy your time when you study there.10. Fast food is developing more and more popular. It replaces other traditional food. Some people think it is good, some people disagree with it. What's your opinion about it. Give some reason of your opinion.11. A friend will visit Beijing. You will meet him at airport. But for some reason, you have to be late. Explain the reason. Since you haven't meet each other, tell the friend where you will meet and how to recognize each other.12. More and more children's writing & math ability are affected by computers and calculators. We should limit the use of those tools. Disagree or agree.13. you have broke your leg and have to stayed in hospital. you received many cards and letters from your classmates. write a letter to tell them your detail of your position and thank them at the same time.14. some people say that it is impossible for women to be an effective women and to be a good mother in home at the same time. they also suggest that the government should give the salary to mothers who stay at home to take care of their children.15. Your friend write to you and tell you that he is hesitating to chose computer or history as his major in university. Write to him and tell him your opinion.16. Participating in a sport is as important for psychological health as it is for physical conditions and social development.17. You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you. Write a letter to the Accommodation officer at the college and ask for a new room nest term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reason.18. Who has responsible for our old people?19. Write to the agency officer to complain about a rent house by them. Tell them the problems of the house and your requiring.20. You read an ad about a sale of a shop in the local newspaper, when you came to buy the goods you wanted, you find the sale had ended. Write to the shop manager and complain about this. Require for the compensation.21. Write to an English speaking college about qualification, accommodation, fee, what courses do you want to choose and why.22. You are accepted as an oversea student by an university. Before you go to the university, write to the student officer and ask them sth about the accommodation, the transportation,and the class schedule.23. You are a history teacher at a high school. You see an ad at the local newspaper to introduce the local museum which coincidens with what you teach now. Write to the museum officerand tell them that you want to bring your students to visit it.24. Write a letter to your friend and express thanks for his present which was brought to you during you were ill at the hospital.25. The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. What do you think? Give reasons for your answer.26. The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. Give reasons for your answer.27. People can do longer expect a job for life. What should individuals and governments do to prepare the current and future environments for different working conditions?28. As technological innovation brings about rapid changes and retraining becomes a lifelong necessity, industry should take over more and more of the responsibility for education.29. It is more important for governments to ensure adequate standards of housing, education and health care for their citizens by developing the industrial base than to use their resources to develop the rural areas.30. Business education and training today must promoter environmental awareness.31. Whilst studying abroad provides an opportunity to broaden one's experience, it also presents the danger of negative influences from the host culture.32. Technological advances continue to improve manufacturing efficiency; the weight of a drinks can has comedown from thirty-five grams to about fifteen grams, for example, and modern cars and production techniques are much more energy efficient. Governments need to control the environment rather than controlling industry, as companies already control their resources very efficiently.33. Training for work is far more important than proving a broad-based education.34. What steps should a student take in preparing for tertiary education and what would be the benefit of taking such steps?35. The developed world should lead by example and not insist that aid to the Third World is used to develop rural areas.雅思大作文常见的题型有哪些一、教育类A.理论与实践1.知识和经验的重要性。
2023年6月3日雅思大作文示范写作
2023年6月3日雅思大作文示范写作老人缺乏锻炼的原因与解决方法一、2023年6月3日雅思大作文题目Doctors encourage older people to take regular exercise, but few of them take enough physical exercise. What are the causes and what can be done to encourage them to take exercise?二、范文及解析IntroductionTaking regular exercise, as is universally acknowledged, plays midwife to helping old people keep physical fitness, while most of them, in spite of strong recommendation from doctors, still fail to take ample exercises. Behind such a ticklish problem, from my own perspective, are three predominant factors and viable solutions are in desperate need to avert the bleak future.解析本次task 2是新考题，但是整体难度并不大，审题注意限定词older people；play midwife to v.促成;帮助；ticklish adj.不安定的；难对付的；viable adj.可望成功的，切实可行的；avert v.防止，避免；bleak adj.不乐观的；Body 1Primarily, much as many elders are pleased to enjoy their twilight years, it does not look feasible since most youngsters, bread winners in families, are swamped with work under this cut-throat competition, under which circumstance, their parents will voluntarily help them with chores and minister to their grandchildren. Consequently, hardly do they have sufficient time to take sports. Another major contributing factor would have much to do with the transformed lifestyles of the elderly. Unlike the past when people have limited forms of entertainment, the current digital era is saturated with intriguing activities, ranging from surfing the internet to shooting off to see amusing videos, which tightly grip the old's attention. Benefited from its online convenience and diversity, the old will be indisposed to step out for exercises. Undeniable is also the fact that the lack of tailored creational amenities in the vicinity of residence will dampen the old's zeal for taking sports. To illustrate, with a swimming pool being kilometers away, swimming would only be a wild wish.解析Causes：(1)年轻人忙碌，老人需要帮助照顾家庭，带孩子；(2)老人在现代生活中的生活方式也有明显变化；(3)缺乏适合老年人运动锻炼的基础设施；feasible adj.可行的，办得到的；be swamped with v.忙着做;忙的一塌糊涂；cut-throat adj.（竞争）残酷的，激烈的；minister to v.照顾；援助；be saturated with v.使充满，使饱和；intriguing adj.非常有趣的，引人入胜的；grip v.使感兴趣，吸引住（某人）的注意；be indisposed to v.不愿意；tailor v.定做；迎合，使适应；amenity n.便利设施；vicinity n.周围地区，邻近地区，附近；dampen v.减弱，抑制；Body 2In order to address the prickly problem of inadequate physical exercise among elderly, the government should play a leading role by earmarking funds to proffering more age-appropriate sports facilities with either installing handrails or perfecting walking path, which are expected to give the old easier access to recreational areas, opening up more opportunities for them to join in activities like jogging and hiking. Apart from fiscal policy from the government, disseminating information through public service advertising, community centers and senior organizations is also of tangible boons in boosting the awareness concerning the significance of physical health. Besides, young adults, instead of being boomerang children, are supposed to shoulder more family responsibility for the care of older people is firmly within the domain of the family.解析Solutions：(1)政府起主导作用，投资完善运动设施，定制一些适合老年人锻炼的器材；(2)宣传以提升老人锻炼的思想意识；(3)年轻人要学会承担更大的家庭责任；prickly adj.多刺的；棘手的；earmark vt.指定……的用途；划拨（款项）；proffer v.递上；提供，提出；disseminate v.散布，传播（信息、知识等）；tangible adj.明确的，真实的；boon n.裨益，优势，有用的东西；boomerang children 回归子女；啃老族；ConclusionIn conclusion, barriers for the lack of sufficient exercise among the older individuals are various and the thorny issue should not be downplayed. By tailoring exercise facilities and elevating their awareness, older generations will be more likely to engage in regular physical activities.解析总结前文信息；重申观点。
2023年6月10日雅思大作文真题全解,附高分范文
2023年6月10日雅思大作文真题全解，附高分范文6.10雅思大作文真题解析+高分范文话题：社会话题—人们是否应该交税题目：Some people think we should keep all the money we earn and not pay taxes to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?写作思路:公民纳税是合理合法的事情。
政府需要用税收的钱来维持社会的正常运转，比如建设和维护基础设施，提供各种公共服务。
此外，税收制度也是一种财富再分配的机制，高收入群体缴纳的税收比例更高。
政府将用税收资助弱势群体，建立社会保障体系，促进了社会的稳定和发展。
所以，除了部分低收入、困难的免税群体，大部分人都需要缴税。
雅思写作真题范文Taxes play a vital role in funding public services andensuring societal well-being. While some people arguefor keeping all the money earned and question thenecessity of paying taxes to the state, I disagree with thisopinion.Admittedly,individuals with low ines can retain allthe money they earn, which is a mon policy adoptedby many countries worldwide. This is to ensure everymember of society has the money to meet their basicsurvival needs.However, when a person s inesurpasses a certain threshold, they should fulfill theirobligation of paying taxes to the state.One primary reason for paying taxes is that governmentsneed money to maintain criticalinfrastructure andprovide public services. Education, healthcare.transportation, and public safety are all supported by taxrevenue. Without adequate funds, these essentialservices would suffer, affecting people' s lives andhindering societal progress. By contributing a portion oftheir earnings through taxes, individuals activelyparticipate in building a well-functioning society.真题范文Moreover, taxation serves as a mechanism forredistribution of wealth and the promotion of socialstability.In most tax systems, individuals with higherines contribute a larger proportion of their earningsThis policy can help address socioeconomic disparitiesand provide a safety net for the vulnerable members ofsociety. lf people were allowed to keep all the moneythey earn, it would widen the gap between the rich andthe poor, leading to various social problems, such asresentment towards the wealthy or even an increase inviolent crimes.In conclusion,I disagree with the idea of keeping all themoney people earn without paying taxes, as it fails toacknowledge the crucial role that taxation plays insustaining and advancing society重点词汇与语料fund提供资金necessity必要性retain保留surpass超过threshold门槛obligation义务infrastructure基础设施revenue收入adequate足够的hinder阻碍well-functioning 运转良好的mechanism机制重点词汇与语料redistribution重新分配disparity差距safety net安全保障vulnerable弱势的resentment憎恨sustain维持以上就是关于《2023年6月10日雅思大作文真题全解，附高分范文》介绍。