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中考英语作文优秀指导课件(共38张PPT)

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Group learning 1:
Read the article and find out: 1 What’s the main idea of each paragraph? (每一段的主要内容是什么?) 2 What’s the writer’s opinion? What are the reasons?(作者的观点是什么?理由?) 3 Is the experience typical for the topic? (作者的亲身经历对于观点来说典型吗?) 4 Are there any good phrases or sentences? Underline them!(有好词好句吗?请划住。)
正方: Last year, I got into trouble learning math. I got poor grades on math and I was really worried. However, I believed that I could deal with it by
me much time, my eyesight became
worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some
personal information, I often got many unwanted calls.
自己的亲身经历
All in all, as middle school students, we should be far away from the mobile phones, and pay much attention to our study.
Group learning 2:
中考英语作文公开课PPT(37张)

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Main body
3. ------
opinions ------
suggestions 1. 合理安排时间
2. 参加兴趣小组
Conclusion
3. ------
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中考专题复习课
Writing
书面表达: 是中考英语中的必考
题,占卷面总分的12.5%,分 值为15 分 。
分析文章的形成过程
文章的形成过程:
单词 句子
短语,结构 +符号
段落
文章
如何把这些组织一篇文章?
首先,我们必须在头脑中构成一幅mind map. 在map的帮助下,我们就能有效的到达我们的 目的地。
How to give this writing an end?
Let’s make better use of our free time and make our life rich and colorful!
Why not put our free time to better use ? It is a good way to have a more colorful future.
第三步:抓住要点,列关键词
1.List some keywords about problems. Phrases: ______________________________ _______________________________
2. List some keywords about opinions. Phrases: ______________________________ _______________________________
九年级英语公开课写作话题作文ppt课件

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Words 词汇: 头脑风暴
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___se_n_d__ words , pictures or s
____s_e_n_d__ videos or voice messages
__t_a_lk_t_o_______ friends
__p_la_y_____ games
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Homework
1. Complete your writing and we’ll share it next class. 2. Remember the six steps of writing skills.
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____t_e_ll__ people where I am
___s_h_a_r_e__ what I do with friends
__re_a_d____ news
ta_l_k_/_d_is_c_u_s_s in a group
__le_a_r_n______ English
loo_k_f_o_r_/_se_a_r_c_h_/_fi_n_d__ people around you
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BIneasdiddeisti,on, We can communicate with our friends by sending words and expressions very quickly. We can share pictures ,music and videos with them.
am , read news ,learn English…
in my opinion/view, improve our conclusion life, use it properly , be bad for
中考英语作文指导课件(共38张PPT)

理由:
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分:观点及理由 (开门见山,点明主题)
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分:观点及理由 (开门见山,点明主题)
第三部分:结尾 (总结全文,重申观点)
in a word in short all in all ...
正方:
反方:
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分:观点及理由 (开门见山,点明主题)
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分:观点及理由 (开门见山,点明主题)
第三部分:结尾 (总结全文,重申观点)
in a word in short all in all ...
正方:
反方:
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
中考英语写作指导优秀课件(共22张PPT)

2017年河西一模作文
Stage 1: 审 体裁________________ 时态________________ 人称________________
Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文, 把他介绍给大家,并说出你对他这些做法的看法。 (1)Jim的父母有钱,给他很多零花钱。 (2)Jim理解父母的不容易,不多花钱,想办法省钱; 他喜欢读书,在网上买书,有时去图书馆借书;别人 买饮料喝他却带水上学;从不花钱买零食。 (3)有人认为他的做法很怪异,但……。 参考词汇:零食 snacks 要求:(1)词数:80 ~ 100个。 (2)开头已给出,不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。 Jim’s parents work very hard and his family has become very rich.___________________________________________
• Homework : • 1. Correct the composition on the handout. • 2. Finish the composition according to the mind map.
Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.
假如你所在中学的校刊近期开辟英文专栏,征集发生 在大家身边的感人故事。请根据以下提示,为该专栏 投稿。 (1)在一个寒冷的早晨,你买早餐时看到前面的女 孩买了面包和牛奶。 (2)女孩要离开时,发现树下有一个老年乞丐,他 看上去又冷又饿。 (3)女孩走到乞丐身旁,把食物递给了他。 (4)乞丐向女孩道谢,女孩微笑着离开。 (5)你很感动…… 参考词汇:乞丐 beggar 感动 be moved 要求:(1)词数:80 ~ 100个。 (2)开头已给出,不计入总词数。 (3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。 On a cold morning, while I was…
初中英语作文写作课(精编版)-PPT课件(共17张)

Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, the Internet makes our life more convenient. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
第七步: 誊
誊文章,规范整洁
书 写 注 意 事 项: 1、规范书写,字母饱满圆润,格式正确。 2、坚决不能在试卷上出现乱涂、乱写、 或用修正液覆盖现象——给人一种凌乱的 感觉 3、一旦写错,规范修改——用一条斜线 划掉即可。
eg: He can speker speak English very well.
Ending
Beginning
Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study. In my opinion, we should stay away from the unhealthy websites and make good use of the Internet. Only in this way, it can help us students a lot.
初中英语作文PPT课件(28张)

六、一致性错误
所谓不一致不仅指主谓不一致,它还包括数的 不一致、时态不一致以及代词不一致等。
例1:Once one have money, he can do what he want to do. 人一旦有了钱,他就能想干 什么就干什么。
析:one 是第三人称单数,因此本句的 have 应改为 has。同理,want 应改为 wants。
四、时态的误用
例:She like it very much and reads it to the class. 她很喜欢它 并且读给同学们听。
析:在书面表达中,应根据上 下文或时间状语来确定动词的时态。
▪ 正:She liked it very much and read it to the class.
writing
书面表达六步法
审
抄
抓
书面
表达
改
扩
连
Writing points
一.审题 (体裁 结构 格式 内容 人称 时态) 二.抓要点 三.扩展句子 四.连句成文 (时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应) 五.查错改错 六.眷写
“中小学生健康 ”为话题写一篇短文 【要求】
(1)内容包括①列举中小学生面临的健康问题。 ② 请谈谈怎样才能保持健康。
例:There are many ways to know the society. For example, by TV radio, newspaper and so on. 有许多 方式来了解这个社会,例如通过电视、广播、报纸等等。
析:本句后半部分 For example, by TV, radio, newspaper and so on 不是一个完整的句子,仅仅是一些 不连贯的词语,不能独立成句。 正:There are many ways to know the society, for example, by TV, radio, and newspaper and so on.
九年级英语作文讲解ppt课件

• 3. 语法和拼写错误:每个扣0.5,重复错误不计;
• 4. 标点错误:每4个扣0.5.
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(二)加分点
• 根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。
• 只要文章中有1个亮点,基本就可以争取到1分。而这1分的亮点,是 可以提前准备的。例如,有一些“万金油”式的复杂句型,例如强调句 型、only相关的倒装句等,只要同学们多操练几次,几乎是一定能用 到作文当中,从而为自己争取到这1分。
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有效的句式学习
基本句式。”五大“帮助学生掌握认清 .1 背、听写、加强中考相关话题必备佳句的朗读 .2 。句子翻译以及课外佳句的积累、诵、仿写 的句式变换中不断积攒实战经”多样“让学生在 .3 验。
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句子
3. “多样”的句式变换
)合并为简单句;1
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三、对考生的要求
• 1、内容要完整。 • 2、语句流畅。 • 3、没有语法错误。 • 4、书写规范。 • 能达到上述要求的作文,都会得到相应的
高分。
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四、评分标准
• 第五档(17—20分):表达清楚,行文连贯,语言基本无误。 • 第四档(13—16分):表达基本清楚,行文基本连贯,语言有
Eg: My brother helped me in maths. I made great progress.
I made great progress in maths with the help of my brother .
)学会使用感叹句;2 It is necessary to help others. How necessary it is to help others.
• 4. 标点错误:每4个扣0.5.
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(二)加分点
• 根据学生使用复杂句型、单词和谚语、俗语的情况来加分。
• 只要文章中有1个亮点,基本就可以争取到1分。而这1分的亮点,是 可以提前准备的。例如,有一些“万金油”式的复杂句型,例如强调句 型、only相关的倒装句等,只要同学们多操练几次,几乎是一定能用 到作文当中,从而为自己争取到这1分。
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有效的句式学习
基本句式。”五大“帮助学生掌握认清 .1 背、听写、加强中考相关话题必备佳句的朗读 .2 。句子翻译以及课外佳句的积累、诵、仿写 的句式变换中不断积攒实战经”多样“让学生在 .3 验。
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句子
3. “多样”的句式变换
)合并为简单句;1
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三、对考生的要求
• 1、内容要完整。 • 2、语句流畅。 • 3、没有语法错误。 • 4、书写规范。 • 能达到上述要求的作文,都会得到相应的
高分。
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四、评分标准
• 第五档(17—20分):表达清楚,行文连贯,语言基本无误。 • 第四档(13—16分):表达基本清楚,行文基本连贯,语言有
Eg: My brother helped me in maths. I made great progress.
I made great progress in maths with the help of my brother .
)学会使用感叹句;2 It is necessary to help others. How necessary it is to help others.
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THANK YOU !
Good bye!
all of you very much. How I wish to
see
you
all
soon!
But ……
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Yours,
Li Ming
Task 5: Write a diary
Friday, December 28th ,2004 Sunny
Yours, Ling Ming
A note asking for sick leave
Dear Miss Liu,
I’m sorry to tell you that I’m not feeling well today. I have a bad cold , and the doctor told me to1stay in bed for two days , so I can’t go to sc1hool today, I hope I will be better to1morrow and be back to school soon
Thank you.
Yours
_______
June 25
Dear Mr Wu,
I’m sorry that I can’t go to school today.I had an accident yesterday while I was playing volleyball. I fell down and broke my right leg. My cousin took me to hospital. The doctor said that I had to rest my leg for a few days.
Tha1nk you.
Yours
_______
A note asking for sick leave
Dear Miss Liu, I’m sorry to tell you that I’m not feeling well
today. I have a bad cold , and the doctor told me to stay in bed for two days , so I can’t go to school today, I hope I will be better tomorrow and be back to school soon
Hu WeiBiblioteka Task 3: Write a Note of Asking for Leave
A Note of Asking for Leave December 15th, 2004
Dear Miss ____,
_______________________________________ _______________________________________ _______________________________________ _______________________________________
I’m so glad to see my teachers and friend again.。
……___________________ _______________________ _______________________ _______________________ __________________
初中英语作文教学
Task 1: Look at the picture and write a story
on a winter morning, be covered with, make a snowman, throw snowballs
What will happen later?
Li Ming, fall down, be badly hurt, can’t stand up, take him to hospital
Task 2: Write a telephone message
TELEPHONE MESSAGE From: _______________ To: ______________ Date: _______________ Time: _____________ Message:__________________________________ __________________________________________ __________________________________________
Now I’m writing to you to ask for sick leave.
Rose Lee
Task 4: Write a letter
15 Renming Road Jinhua,321000 Dcecmber 22th ,2004
Dear Wang Lin,
Thank you for your letter. I miss