浙江专用届高考英语二轮复习第四部分写作训练专题二读后续写
高考英语大二轮总复习第四板块写作第二部分读后续写课件
(2018·浙江卷 6 月) 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故 事。 It was summer，and my dad wanted to treat us to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West. We took a plane to Albuquerque，a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle_Paul，my dad's friend，picked us up from the airport and drove us to his farm in Pecos.
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4.续写特点 简言之，读后续写就是阅读完一篇还未写完的文章之后，根据要求和 提示把这篇文章未写完的部分补充完全，使之浑然一体。它一方面能 很好地考查考生对所学语言知识的实际运用能力，另一方面，它也培 养学生的发散思维能力。根据《考试说明》该部分的规定，考生在续 写文章时，要注意续写部分“与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程 度”，“内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况”，“应用语 法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性”以及“上下文的连贯性”。
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we chased after that pretty rabbit，frantic with rapture. Unfortunately，so clever and swift was it that it disappeared in the forest before long. Not until then did we realize that the last ray of twilight was quickly disappearing among the numerous trees and we couldn't find our track at all！We did get_lost.
【2021英语二轮复习】读后续写专练(浙江专版)(2)
【2021英语二轮复习】读后续写专练浙江专版（2）【题型概述】读后续写是随着我国高考改革由教育部考试中心研制的英语高考新题型，2016年10月在浙江省首次使用。
该题型通过读写结合，检测学生的英语书面语言理解与表达能力。
要求学生能够梳理故事文体的结构、分析故事发展的线索、想像故事发展的情节以及续写故事的发展和结局。
从试题结构看，读后续写评价的是书面理解能力和书面表达能力。
因此，在写作之前，首先读懂文本，理清故事情节，然后构思故事的发展和结局。
下面介绍一下读后续写的答题技巧：【答题策略】1.通读文本，提取线索词和信息句，写出每段段落大意。
2. 根据文本每段内容，结合所给续写部分的首句，构思完整的故事情节。
3. 根据续写部分所提供的首句，写出续写部分每段的段落大意，围绕续写部分的段落大意进行合理的细节描写。
4. 润色成篇。
【实战练习】四阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
In 1974, after filling out fifty applications, going through four interviews, and winning one offer, I took what I could get — a teaching job at what I considered a distant wild area: western New Jersey. My characteristic optimism was alive only when I reminded myself that I would be doing what I had wanted to do since I was fourteen — teaching English.School started, I was teaching English. I worked hard, taking time off only to eat and sleep. And then there was my sixth grade class who were only six years younger than me. I had a problem long before I knew it. I was struggling in my work as a young idealistic teacher. I wanted to make literature come alive and to promote a love of the written word. The students wanted to throw spitballs and whisper dirty words in the back of the room.In college I had been taught that a successful educator should ignore bad behavior. So I did, confident that, the bad behavior would disappear as I gave my students positive attention. But infact, humans particularly teenagers rarely seem reasonable. By the time my boss, who was also my taskmaster, known to be the strictest, most demanding, quickest to fire inexperienced teachers, came into the classroom to observe me, the students exhibited very little good behavior.My boss sat in the back of the room. The boys in the class were making animal noises, hitting each other while the girls filed their nails or read magazines. I just pretended it all wasn’t happening, and went on lecturing and tried to ask some inspiring questions. My boss, sitting in the back of room, seemed to be growing angrier and angrier. After twenty minutes he left, silently. Visions of unemployment marched before my eyes.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
2024届高考英语二轮复习读后续写话题练(四)
读后续写话题练(四)趣事篇[2023·浙江省十校联盟高三第三次联考]April Fools' DayNat woke early and jumped out of bed. Today was the best day of the year for him. Nat loved to play tricks, and today was April Fools' Day.Some of Nat's tricks were big hits. Last year, he shortsheeted his sister's bed. She couldn't understand what was going on and started to think that her legs must have grown much longer during the day. When she realized what had happened, she laughed her head off.Some of Nat's tricks were not so successful. Mom didn't think finding a furry toy mouse in the fridge was humorous at all. After she calmed down a bit, she said, “That's it! There's a ban on Nat tricks for two weeks.”Nat was also the class clown. He was always making jokes in class. He liked it when he made the other kids laugh. Since it was April Fools' Day, he felt like he had to come up with something really good to provide his classmates with some really good entertainment.For that, Nat thought long and hard before he came up with his brilliant idea. He bought two toy frogs which were made out of green plastic and looked very realistic. Nat knew just the trick he would play on his classmates.Nat arrived at school early. To succeed in his plan, he needed to get into the classroom before anyone else. Nat's class had a rainforest terrarium (饲养皿). It had plants, insects, and three frogs in it. Nat's idea was to pretend that the frogs had escaped. He knew that Ms. Lopez, his teacher, wasn't afraid of frogs but several of his classmates, including himself, were.Nat slipped into the classroom. Good! There was nobody here. He put one of the toy frogs on the floor, near the terrarium and the other on his friend Stacey's desk. Nat knew that Stacey really didn't like frogs. Also, she played a great trick on him last April Fools' Day. To make his trick more convincing, Nat pushed the lid of the terrarium open. Then he rushed off to morning gathering.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
2023届高三英语二轮专题读后续写模考题练习(贴近学生生活实际)
高考英语读后续写练习班级考号姓名总分1．（2023春·浙江·高三校联考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My great-grandmother Eileen is fierce, loyal and strong and a bit of a legend in her own lifetime, which now stretches to 92 years. I should add that we’re not allowed to call her Gran, because she says it makes her feel old.That summer, I lost my job and felt hopeless. One day, I paid a visit to her. She picked up a box which she placed on the coffee table. “There you go,” she said. “You do know what you’re doing with these things, don’t you?”It was a new phone. Her current mobile was pretty ancient. I was amazed it was still going.“Yes,” I said.“Good. That’s why I ask you. You young people know more about such things than us oldies. You can take i t home with you and get it all set up,” she went on. “Then, when you bring it back, you can show me how to use my new phone, such as getting on the internet, sending e-mails and so on.” She smiled so sweetly that I felt a surge of love for her.I grabbed the box and stood up. Setting up the phone would be easy. It was teaching her how to use it that may prove challenging （强调句）.The following day I headed back to my great-grandmother’s with the phone. “Here’s your phone. It’s all ready to use.”For the next hour, I was busy setting up her passcode and fingerprint recognition, which she said was like something out of James Bond.She chose a picture for her screen and it was all going so well until I tried to show her how to swipe (滑动屏幕). “What do you mean, swipe?” she asked. She was 92, I reminded myself. This had been tiring for her.She pressed at the up arrow and got angry when nothing happened. When I finally got her to swipe, she didn’t put the right amount of pressure on and the menu slipped away. After what seemed like hours, she threw the phone across the room and it landed on the sofa. “Take it away!” she howled. “I want my old phone back!”I picked up the phone and was about to leave to give her time to cool down when I realized I didn’t want to go hom e when she was angry and upset.注意：续写词数应为150左右；Paragraph 1“Come on, Eileen. One more try.” I said.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2I was not feeling so hopeless any more now.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．（2023春·浙江杭州·高三统考一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
2020届新高考英语二轮对点集训：第四板块 第二部分 读后续写
第四板块第二部分读后续写Writing 1阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
I had to go grocery_shopping this morning for the first time in a couple of weeks.My husband had been in Greece for a few weeks and my daughters were not at_home either so I had stocked up on vegetables，salad ingredients and fruits along with the meat that I had in the freezer.I am curious.When you are in line waiting to check out，do you check out what others have in their carts？I hate to admit it，but I do.I try not to judge，but again，I suppose I do to some extent －when I see a family in which the parents and the kids are very overweight and they are buying pop(汽水)and high-calorie snack foods.My biggest issue with groceries is that all of the processed foods are easier to get and cheaper than fresh produce and probably stretch further.It amazes me to see families buying 12 packs or 24 packs of different kinds of pop.Most of the people that I am seeing are buying regular pop，not diet.But when I was young，we bought pop on_special_occasions.For birthday parties or a camping trip，we could only have one can per day.We bought Shasta back then.I am not even sure whether it is still sold or not.We could all pick a few different_flavors that we wanted for the trip.But nowadays，pop is everywhere you go. I am glad to say that the_hospital that I work for threw_away all of their pop vending machines(自动贩卖机)．They didn't think health care workers，patients or patients' families needed them.I was happy for the change，but other people might not think so.注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
专题042022浙江卷6月-2024年新高考英语读后续写近五年真题最新模拟题分析与写作技巧策略
2 读P1P2首句 定情节发展
As they came in my direction, I put on my brightest and happiest smile.
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I was so happy that I had earned my service hours in this way.
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As they came in my direction, I put on my brightest and happiest smile.
2024年新高考英语读后续写 近五年真题最新模拟题分析与写作技巧策略
2022年浙江6月 做个施粥志愿者
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1 读原文 划要素 填表格 2 读P1P2首句 定情节发展 3 列大纲 两段12句法 4 写句式 招招升级 5 水写到句渠式成招范招文升赏级析
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e.g.: 7）I suddenly came to realize that not everyone was blessed with fortune and born to be wealthy, and therefore, we should always keep grateful for what life blessed us with.
2022浙江高考英语读后续写模拟试题(含范文详解10篇)2
2022届浙江高考英语总复习-读后续写专项训练21.The worst tourist (旅行者) in the world may be Nicholas Scottie of San Francisco. Once he flew from the US to his hometown in Italy. He had some troubles on his journey. The night before, he stayed up late to deal with some emails, so when he boarded on the plane he decided to have a sleep. Hours later, he was woken up by some noise and he found the plane had landed.As he thought he had arrived home, Mr. Scottie got off the plane. He thought he was in Rome. However, the truth was that the plane made a one-hour stop to get oil at Kennedy Airport of New York.Mr. Scottie waited at the airport for some while, but nobody was there to meet him, he thought maybe they were held up by heavy traffic which was very common in Rome. He decided to give his family a phone call. Unfortunately, he found he had left his cellphone at the hotel in San Francisco. Therefore, he decided to go home by himself. While he was walking in the city, Mr. Scottie found that the old “Rome” had changed a lot. Many old buildings were replaced by high modern ones. He also found that many people spoke English instead of Italian and that many street signs were written in English. What made him most surprised was that drivers’ awareness of traffic safety was improved and he hardly found any driver speeding on the road. All cars were driving in line. The condition was widely different from that in the past. He was feeling proud.Mr. Scotti knew very little English, so he asked a policeman (in Italian) the way to the bus station. He happened to meet a policeman who was also born in Italy and answered him in the same language. Mr. Scotti thanked him, left, quickly found the bus station and got on a bus. He looked outside of the bus window.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
浙江高考英语读后续写参考作文
续写A Vacation with My MotherI had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprise and amusement, all because of my mother---loving, sweet, yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was elven tells a lot about her.My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if we would ever see them againFinally, the moment of our departure arrived, and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten.David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathroom if Mom was driving while Dad slept: “You stand outside the door and play lookout 放哨 while I go, and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.”I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey, where are the kids ”“WhatOh, Gosh…I thought they were being awfully quite.”We were never actually left in a strange city, but we were not about to take any chance.On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections反对. If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语;Paragraph 1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.Paragraph 2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.提炼原文情节1. My mother’s forgetfulness filled our life with much surprise and amusement.2. During a family trip, my family had to return back to fetch our purse and traveler’s checks as my mother forgot to bring.3. She advised us to put up a tent in a stranger’s family, because she thought others were as nice as herself. But my father turned down the idea. we finally spent a night in a hotel.Paragraph 1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.开头句出现了the brand-new tent, 可以围绕这个新的帐篷展开,结合妈妈比较健忘这个特点,可以把这两个结合起来;比如前面是我们在酒店里住了一晚,会不会妈妈把帐篷丢在酒店呢我们为什么会想到帐篷呢是不是有可能要野营已给词汇：absent-minded, forgetful, trip, David, camping, tent, Mom, Dad, trouble, nice步骤三：Paragraph 1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. The night before, we turned down Mom’s idea of camping in the house’s backyard. In order to realize her dream, we made our minds to spend a night in the wild. What surprised us was that along the way, a nice camping site, located by a lake, came to our eyes. In the moment we pulled over, we found many travelers busy setting up their tents. The sunset cast an orange light over the lake and glorified the green grass, which attracted us immediately. Having greeted our neighbors, we began to set up our brand-new tent. However, out of our expectation, the sleeping bags were missing. Yes, my mother forgot to pack up them. My parents had to turn to our neighbors for help. To our surprise, a neighbor offered their spare bags, making us able to spend the night in our tents.Paragraph 2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. It was a great trip, and we were drowned in the beautiful scenery. Finally, we arrived at my grandparents’ house where we shared the fantastic experiences with them all the way. When they heard my mother’s funny stories, they made fun of her. Despite Mom’s being absent-minded, she was still a kind and nice Mom.。
(浙江专用)高考英语二轮复习 第四部分 写作训练 专题二 读后续写-人教版高三全册英语试题
专题二读后续写Writing 1阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进展续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
At the center of the mall was the perfect Santa with a gentle manner and a real white beard.My six－year－old granddaughter，Leah，jumped from foot to foot as we waited in line for her turn to sit on his lap．“I don’t know what to say，〞 Leah said，raising her neck around the kids in front of her.“Sure you do，〞her mother，Leanne，said.“It’s Santa.He’s already your friend．You’ll do just fine.〞“He’ll ask you what you want for Christmas，〞I said.“And you just tell him.〞We’d gone over and over the toys she’d ask for.Her mother didn’t want surprises! Leah repeated the list．But a minute later，she inserted new toys she’d just spotted at the mall.“I’ve got an idea，〞 said Leanne，digging into her purse as the line inched forward.“Let’s write down your requests so you won’t forget them.〞I couldn’t help but laugh.Going to see Santa was such an important appointment for a six－year－old.No child should have any worries bigger than that.But the night before，on the news，I’d see n a village in the Middle East that had come under fire.Many of the wounded were children just like our Leah.Looking around the mall full of magical decorations and happy shoppers I felt safe，as safe as anyone could be.Everyone in the world should have that kind of security，especially at Christmas.“Okay，〞Leanne said.“Now you’ve got everything you want written down here.If you get nervous you can just give the note to Santa.〞Leah nodded and took the list. She read out loud，“A Chia Pet，Moon Sand andAquadoodle．〞“Why don’t you add a fourth request，Leah，〞I heard myself say.“Ask for peaceonearth．〞 My daughter looked a little surprised by my suggestion.“What’s peace on earth，Grandma？〞 Leah asked.“Peace on earth means all the people in the world would get along.That’s the true meaning of Christmas.〞Leah nodded seriously.“Yes，〞 she agreed.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写局部分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
2021浙江卷读后续写分析讲义-2024届高三英语二轮复习
2021浙江卷读后续写分析My dad, George, only had an eighth-grade education. A quiet man, he didn't understand 父亲George只有八年级文凭。
my world of school activities. From age 14, he worked. And his dad, Albert, took the moneymy dad earned and used it to pay family expenses.父亲小时候把所挣的钱都用来补贴家用。
I didn't really understand his world either：He was a livestock trucker, and I thought thatI would surpass（超过）anything he had accomplished by the time I walked across the stage“我”认为“我”会在任何方面超过父亲。
at high school graduation.Summers in the mid-70s were spent at home shooting baskets, hitting a baseball, or throwing a football, preparing for my future as a quarterback on a football team. In poor weather, I read about sports or practiced my trombone（长号）.The summer before my eighth grade I was one of a group of boys that a neighboring farmer 上八年级之前的暑假“我”被雇佣到附近农场去做兼职挣钱。
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浙江专用2017届高考英语二轮复习第四部分写作训练专题二读后续写-CAL-FENGHAI-(2020YEAR-YICAI)_JINGBIAN专题二读后续写Writing 1阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
At the center of the mall was the perfect Santa with a gentle manner and a real white beard.My six－year－old granddaughter，Leah，jumped from foot to foot as we waited in line for her turn to sit on his lap．“I don’t know what to say，” Leah said，raising her neck around the kids in front of her.“Sure you do，”her mother，Leanne，said.“It’s Santa.He’s already your friend．You’ll do just fine.”“He’ll ask you what you want for Christmas，” I said.“And you just tell him.”We’d gone over and over the toys she’d ask for.Her mother didn’t want surprises! Leah repeated the list．But a minute later，she inserted new toys she’d just spotted at the mall.“I’ve got an idea，” said Leanne，digging into her purse as the line inched forwa rd.“Let’s write down your requests so you won’t forget them.” I couldn’t help but laugh.Going to see Santa was such an important appointment for a six－year－old.No child should have any worries bigger than that.But the night before，on the news，I’d seen a vi llage in the Middle East that had come under fire.Many of the wounded were children just like our Leah.Looking around the mall full of magical decorations and happy shoppers I felt safe，as safe as anyone could be.Everyone in the world should have that kind of security，especially at Christmas.“Okay，” Leanne said.“Now you’ve got everything you want written down here.If you get nervous you can just give the note to Santa.”Leah nodded and took the list. She read out loud，“A Chia Pet，Moon Sand and Aquadoodle．”“Why don’t you add a fourth request，Leah，” I heard myself say.“Ask for peace on earth．” My daughter looked a little surprised by my suggestion.“What’s peace on earth，Grandma” Leah asked.“Peace on earth means all the people in the world would get along.That’s the true meaning of Christmas.” Leah nodded seriously.“Yes，” she agreed.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1：Finally we reached the head of the line.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph 2：The coming days were filled with ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【写作指导】本篇写作是读后续写，要求考生根据所读短文内容，尤其是带有下划线的词或者短语的提示完成作文。
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【参考范文】Finally we reached the head of the line.One of Santa’s helpers waved Leah up to Santa and lifted her lightly onto his knee.Within seconds he had her chatting like they were old friends．Leah shyly handed him her note．Santa adjusted his glasses and read it over very carefully before placing it on the shelf beside him.Leah jumped off his lap and ran into my arms.The coming days were filled with the last－minute preparations for the holiday.It was all worth it as I watched Leah tear joyfully into her presents on Christmas morning.“I got Aquadoodle！”she screamed.“It’s just what I wanted！”It was the perfect Christmas as far as I could see.And then I noticed Leah，looking somewhat unhappy.“What’s wrong，honey”I asked.Leanne came over，“Didn’t Santa bring you everything you wanted”Leah sighed.“Almost，”she said，“But where’s the peace on earth”Writing 2阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
I worked from the time I was four and raised seven children，all of them college graduates.It seemed I’d done everything I’d ever wanted to do in my life，but I had one regret．I was born in 1898，the oldest of five kids.Papa couldn’t spare me to go to school，so I worked in the fields with him till I was 21 years old.Everywhere I went，I learned some hard lessons about what happens to a man who even can’t read the alphabet．People cheat you out of wages.They sell you a ticket to one city，take your money and hand you a ticket to somewhere else.By 1928，I’d been wandering for nine years.I met a woman named Elzenia.We fell in love，married and moved to Dallas，where I got work fixing roads for the city.When Amelia，the oldest of our seven children，first went to school，I took my wife aside.“Elzenia，” I said.“I don’t want the ki ds to know I can’t read or write.”In 1938，one day my boss called me in. “George，” he said. “No one knows those machines like you do.I’d like to promote you.” But my thrill and surprise were cut short when he said，“Fill out this application and we’ll get y ou a raise.” I couldn’t admit the truth．I thanked him and walked out of his office.I did stay right where I was，until I turned 65 and my boss made me retire.But I didn’t stop working.For the next 25 years，I lived a happy life，but it still seemed to me like something was missing.A young fellow handed me a piece of paper. It’s information about adulteducation classes. People can learn to read and write. Now I’m 98. I thought of my friends and neighbors and what they might think if they found out I couldn’t read.After all these years，my secret would be out.But all my life I’ve wanted to read.It was high time for action.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。