人教版选修6unit5 writing
一、描写旅游景点类写作一般分为三部分 第一部分：整体介绍。交代清楚自己要介绍的对象是什么。
第二部分：按照一定的顺序具体描写景观，着重展示其最具有代表 性的地方，使读者如睹其物，如临其境。
第三部分：总结景观魅力，希望读者能亲身体验该景观。 二、写作过程中的注意事项 1．合理安排说明顺序。在介绍方位时，最好按空间顺序来写，这样会使 读者一目了然，在脑海中有一个清晰的方位图。
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Yours faithfully， Harry
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[名师点评] ①With the airport lying ... 作者正确运用本单元所学核心语法独立主格 结构作状语，表达简练流畅，准确达意。 ②作者运用含有名词性从句以及现在分词短语作状语(wherever you are going using ... )的高级句式为本文亮点，可为本文添分。 ③含主语从句的高级句式：What makes it unique is its splendid ancient ... 体现了作者较高的语言驾驭能力。
Hongcun, __5__ (fill) with lakes and beautiful Anhui－style buildings, is 900 years old. It was built to look like a big ox. Huangshan Mountain is the head; the town is the body and the bridges are legs.
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3．吸引某人的注意力 __________________ 答案：attract one's attention
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4．很多 __________________ 答案：a number of
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5．参观 __________________ 答案：pay a visit to
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连词成句 1．坐落于陕西省华阴县，华山是中国五岳名山之一。 Mount Hua is located in Huayin county, Shaanxi Province, and it is famous in the world as one of the Five Sacred Mountains of China. →Located in Huayin county, Shaanxi Province, Mount Hua is famous at home and abroad as one of the Five Sacred Mountains of China.(升级句)
2．到了山顶，你可观赏云海。 When you arrive at the top, you can see many clouds. →Arriving at the top, you'll enjoy the sea of clouds.(升级句) 3．你可步行上山，也可乘索道或缆车，沿途可欣赏美景。 You can go there on foot, take the ropeway or ride in a cable car. You can enjoy beautiful scenes on the way. →You can climb to the top on foot, take the ropeway, or ride in a cable car. The trip is fantastic, along which you can enjoy beautiful scenes.(升级句)
Fenghuang in Hunan doesn't look like a bird, __6__ its name means “phoenix (凤凰)” in Chinese. The town is as beautiful as the __7__ (magic) bird. The stilted (吊脚的) buildings on each side of the Tuojiang River make the area look like a scene from __8__ postcard.
2．时态相对较为统一。多用一般现在时，如涉及到历史事件的描述，则 用一般过去时。
3．自然景观与人文景观的有机结合。对自然风景进行描述，同时结合景 观的历史及当地的风土人情、生态、环境保护等知识，以达到自然景观和人 文景观的和谐统一。
4．抒发感情，融情于景。景点介绍不同于一般的说明文，在描写景物时 可抒发个人情感。
[跟踪训练] (2019·河北衡水中学高三二调考试)假如你是一名英国学生 Harry，有一位 中国笔友 Li Hua 想了解一下你的家乡爱丁堡，请你根据提示回复一封电子邮 件。 提示内容： 爱丁堡：苏格兰的首府，政治和文化中心。 人口：约 46 万。 面积：264 平方公里。 地理位置：苏格兰 (Scotland) 的东南部。
选修6 the power of nature Writing
描写旅游景点 对应《同步写作跟踪突破》P18 技法指导 描写旅游景点属于描写性说明文，所以它首先具备说明文的特点，即要 按照一定的顺序(时间顺序、空间顺序、逻辑顺序等)和描写方法(先总后分、 由整体到局部、由概述到细节等)来展开描写。其次，要重点突出，详略得当。 写作时应重点描写旅游景点的特别之处，突出其独特的风景特色、历史典故、 地理风貌、风土人情、传说故事、民族习俗或古迹名胜等，这样才能给读者 留下深刻的印象。最后，语言要生动，富有感染力，使读者有身临其境之感 且能激起其强烈的旅游欲望。
谋篇布局 1．体裁：说明文 2．话题：旅游景点介绍 3．时态：一般现在时为主 4．人称：第三人称为主
开头：简要介绍华山
5．结构中间：详细叙述华山景色 结尾：欢迎人们到此一游
联想词汇 1．坐落于 __________________ 答案：be located/situated in
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2．国内外闻名 __________________ 答案：be famous at home and abroad
The village of Zhouzhuang in Jiangsu calls __3__ (it) “the oldest water town in China”. The village, which __4__ (build) in 1086, is crossed with canals. Taking a boat ride through town, the red lanterns might make you think of China's romantic past.
交通：机场位于市中心，公共交通十分便利。 天气：气候温和 (mild climate)。 旅游：最受欢迎的旅游城市；古老建筑众多；每年吸引 200 多万名游客， 是理想的度假胜地。 注意：1.词数 110 左右； 2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Li Hua， How are things with you? Today I'm writing to tell you something about Edinburgh which you asked about in the last e-mail.
Mount Hua _______________________________________ _______________________________________ _______________________________________ _______________________________________
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黄金表达 ①Located in ... , it covers an area of ... ②It lies in/to/on ... , covering an area of ... ③It has become one of the most popular tourist attractions for ... ④It is well known/famous for/as ... ⑤It has a population/an area of ... , with a history of ... ⑥The weather here gets neither too cold nor too hot all the year round. ⑦If you come here for a visit, you will have a chance to enjoy ... ⑧With its pleasant climate, rich natural resources and picturesque scenery, it is one of the major tourist cities in China.
[总评] 本文首先介绍了爱丁堡的地理位置、人口分布等基本情况，然后对其交 通、旅游特色和名胜作了介绍，最后发出邀请。全文文笔优美，行文结构紧 凑，用语恰当贴切。
课外拓展阅读——中国优秀传统文化专题练 阅读下面短文，在空白处填入 1 个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。 These days, modern buildings are everywhere. But if you want to see __1__ life was back in the old days, China still has many beautiful water __2__ (town) to visit. CNN has chosen four of the country's most beautiful ones.
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人教版高中英语选修6 Unit5 Writing 导学案
2.华山有五座山峰，分别为东峰、西峰、南峰、北峰和中峰。
3．可以步行上山，也可乘索道（ropeway）或缆车（cable car）。
Unit5 Writing导学案
学习目标
learn to write a good composition
学习重点
Learn how to organize a good composition
学习难点
How to use more advanced sentences into a good compHale Waihona Puke sition学生活动自
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Some advanced sentences on the screen
Students offer more good sentences that can express the same idea
自学展示
Students show t heir preview and give some advice on how to organize a good composition
Complement more points by all the students
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1. 地点状语+,+主句/(历史) (分词结构做状语）
Located in…, ×××is a city…with a history of…
.. .stands at the foot of\on the top of...
2.面积+人口（with结构做定语）
…
…with a population of ….
…has a population of…,
3．可以步行上山，也可乘索道（ropeway）或缆车（cable car）。
Unit5 Writing导学案
学习目标
learn to write a good composition
学习重点
Learn how to organize a good composition
学习难点
How to use more advanced sentences into a good compHale Waihona Puke sition学生活动自
主
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讨
导入
Some advanced sentences on the screen
Students offer more good sentences that can express the same idea
自学展示
Students show t heir preview and give some advice on how to organize a good composition
Complement more points by all the students
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1. 地点状语+,+主句/(历史) (分词结构做状语）
Located in…, ×××is a city…with a history of…
.. .stands at the foot of\on the top of...
2.面积+人口（with结构做定语）
…
…with a population of ….
…has a population of…,
高二英语人教版选修6课件：Unit 5 Writing
They witness Taihe’s ancient civilizations. The scenery is very beautiful and _a_tt_r_a_c_ts__a_l_a_r_g_e_q_u_a_n_t_i_ty_ _o_f_t_o_u_r_is_t_s_a_r_o_u_n_d__th_e__g_lo_b_e_._ (每年吸 引大量的来自不同地方的游客)
_T_a_ih_e__c_o_u_n_t_y_l_ie_s_i_n__th_e__n_o_r_th__ea_s_t_o_f___ _A_n_h__u_i _P_r_o_v_in_c_e_ (太和县位于安徽省西 北部), lying in Huanghuai Plains. It is
between Fuyang and Bozhou City.
It has a long history and _p_l_a_c_es__o_f____ _i_n_te_r_e_s_t_a_r_e_a_l_l _o_v_e_r_t_h_e_c_i_ty_ (名胜古迹 遍布县城内), among which are the building groups _d_a_ti_n_g_f_r_o_m__ (追溯到) the Yuan Dynasty in Taihe Temple.
downtown. 6. … is _w_i_th_i_n_ easy rich.
1. China has a _h_i_st_o_r_y_ of more than 5, 000 years.
2. Japan is an _A_s_i_a_n_ country _w__it_h_ a history of ….
Please write a passage to introduce Guangzhou to the foreign guests. (at least more than 90 words)
选修六 Unit 5 Writing
旅游景点介绍
现在，越来越多的大陆游客可以赴台旅游，而日月潭作 为台湾的主要景点，很多人并不真正了解，请按照以下要点 提示，写一篇介绍日月潭(Sun Moon Lake)的英语短文。 1．日月潭位于台湾的南投县，是台湾最著名的风景区， 也是台湾最大的天然湖泊。
2．日月潭处在山地与西部平原之间，受3000万年 前喜马拉雅(the Himalayas)造山运动的影响，由玉山 (Mt.Yu)和阿里山(Mt.Ali)之间的断裂(ruptured)盆地积 水而成。
⑦It has a population of ..., with a history of ... ⑧The weather here gets neither too cold nor too hot all the year around. ⑨If you come to ... for a visit, you will have a channtainous region and the western plain lies Sun Moon Lake, which was greatly affected by the mountainmaking movement of the Himalayas 30,000,000
4．突出语言特色：以描写为主要写作手法，对景物进 行介绍，并适当抒发个人感情。为此在写作中要根据内容提
示，筛选可能用到的描述该景点的形容词，同时既要恰当、
灵活地运用词汇，又要避免同一词汇的单调重复。 5．抓住典型特征：在描写中要做到重点突出，详略得 当。可以把景点和周围环境及景点的历史意义等结合起来。 6．把握文章时态：文章的时态通常采用一般现在时，
用于强调客观事实。
[黄金表达] ①...lie in/on/to the east/west/north/south of ...
现在，越来越多的大陆游客可以赴台旅游，而日月潭作 为台湾的主要景点，很多人并不真正了解，请按照以下要点 提示，写一篇介绍日月潭(Sun Moon Lake)的英语短文。 1．日月潭位于台湾的南投县，是台湾最著名的风景区， 也是台湾最大的天然湖泊。
2．日月潭处在山地与西部平原之间，受3000万年 前喜马拉雅(the Himalayas)造山运动的影响，由玉山 (Mt.Yu)和阿里山(Mt.Ali)之间的断裂(ruptured)盆地积 水而成。
⑦It has a population of ..., with a history of ... ⑧The weather here gets neither too cold nor too hot all the year around. ⑨If you come to ... for a visit, you will have a channtainous region and the western plain lies Sun Moon Lake, which was greatly affected by the mountainmaking movement of the Himalayas 30,000,000
4．突出语言特色：以描写为主要写作手法，对景物进 行介绍，并适当抒发个人感情。为此在写作中要根据内容提
示，筛选可能用到的描述该景点的形容词，同时既要恰当、
灵活地运用词汇，又要避免同一词汇的单调重复。 5．抓住典型特征：在描写中要做到重点突出，详略得 当。可以把景点和周围环境及景点的历史意义等结合起来。 6．把握文章时态：文章的时态通常采用一般现在时，
用于强调客观事实。
[黄金表达] ①...lie in/on/to the east/west/north/south of ...
新人教版选修6高中英语Unit5Thepowerofnature5.4SectionⅣWriting
7．表达“方位”的常用词句： in the center ofto the left/right at the foot of; on the top of; in the distance close to; next to; beside; opposite; facing two blocks away; at the crossing It is just in front of you. on the other side of 8．表示“接待参观者”的句型 The history museum has received over 10 million visitors from all over the country. 10 million visitors from all over the country have paid a visit to the history museum since it opened years ago.
Dear Nick， I'm glad to hear that you're coming to Sichuan in August._____________________________________________________ ___________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________ ________________________________________________________ ________________
It is a beautiful city with a population of... 4．表达“时间”的常用词句： The opening time is from...to...on weekdays, and it works as usual on weekends. It's open from...to...on weekdays and closed on weekends.
2021版高中英语人教版选修六课件：Unit+5+Grammar+%26+Writing
____________________________________________________ 3.They came into the room and they were singing and talking.
____________________________________________________ 4.When she heard the news，she couldn’t help laughing.
6.When we had finished the work，we went out to play. ____________________________________________________
7.If the weather permits，we’ll go out on an outing. _____________________________________________________
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Ⅰ.满分作文赏析 外宾要来学校参观，请用英语写一篇能说明学校情况的介绍， 内容包括： 1.学校概况：建于1957年，现有36个班级、100余名教师、 近两千名学生； 2.教学情况：学生能努力学习，积极参加各项活动，互相帮 助、互相学习；教师对工作认真负责，对学生态度和蔼；
Ⅲ.用非谓语动词把下面复合句和并列句改成简单句 1.Since I don’t know her address，I can’t get in touch with her.
____________________________________________________ 2.We have come here in order that we can improve our English.
____________________________________________________ 4.When she heard the news，she couldn’t help laughing.
6.When we had finished the work，we went out to play. ____________________________________________________
7.If the weather permits，we’ll go out on an outing. _____________________________________________________
[写 作 点 拨]
Ⅰ.满分作文赏析 外宾要来学校参观，请用英语写一篇能说明学校情况的介绍， 内容包括： 1.学校概况：建于1957年，现有36个班级、100余名教师、 近两千名学生； 2.教学情况：学生能努力学习，积极参加各项活动，互相帮 助、互相学习；教师对工作认真负责，对学生态度和蔼；
Ⅲ.用非谓语动词把下面复合句和并列句改成简单句 1.Since I don’t know her address，I can’t get in touch with her.
____________________________________________________ 2.We have come here in order that we can improve our English.
高二英语人教版选修6课件：Unit 5 Reading and writing
5. The ancestors of the Manchu people were believed to be good at language and persuasion. F
1. The height of the land varies from 700 meters above sea level to over 2, 000 meters and is home to a great diversity of plants and animals. 这里的地面高度从海拔700米到2, 000 多米不等, 是各种各样的动植物的生长 地。
have a gift / talent for … _在__…__…__方__面__有__天__赋____
她在舞蹈方面有天赋。 She __h_a_s_a__g_if_t_f_o_r_ dancing.
4. …, don’t forget to drop a coin into the clear blue water to guarantee your love will be as deep and lasting as the lake itself. 别忘了投一枚硬币到清澈的水里以保 证你的爱像湖水一样是深刻而持久的。
_从__…__…__变__为__…__…____
这些鱼的价格从3镑到5镑不等。 These fish v_a_r_y__ in price _f_r_o_m_ £3 _t_o_ £5. 她的情绪由乐观一变而极为消沉。
Her mood v_a_r_i_e_d_f_r_o_m_ optimism _t_o_ extreme depression.
什么是学习力
什么是学习力-你遇到这些问 题了吗
总是 比别人 学得慢
1. The height of the land varies from 700 meters above sea level to over 2, 000 meters and is home to a great diversity of plants and animals. 这里的地面高度从海拔700米到2, 000 多米不等, 是各种各样的动植物的生长 地。
have a gift / talent for … _在__…__…__方__面__有__天__赋____
她在舞蹈方面有天赋。 She __h_a_s_a__g_if_t_f_o_r_ dancing.
4. …, don’t forget to drop a coin into the clear blue water to guarantee your love will be as deep and lasting as the lake itself. 别忘了投一枚硬币到清澈的水里以保 证你的爱像湖水一样是深刻而持久的。
_从__…__…__变__为__…__…____
这些鱼的价格从3镑到5镑不等。 These fish v_a_r_y__ in price _f_r_o_m_ £3 _t_o_ £5. 她的情绪由乐观一变而极为消沉。
Her mood v_a_r_i_e_d_f_r_o_m_ optimism _t_o_ extreme depression.
什么是学习力
什么是学习力-你遇到这些问 题了吗
总是 比别人 学得慢
高中英语选修六 Unit 5 using language--reading and writing
vary from A to B 1.从…到…不等 2.由…转变为…
Her mood varied from optimism to extreme depression. 她的情绪由乐观一变而为极度消沉 .
home to silk
• Hangzhou is the place where silk is produced. • Our capital city Hangzhou is home to… • ….
depth
2,194 meters above…
200 meters rewarded with the sight of… the view of…
Scenery
The most well known story concerns…. three young women from heaven bathing a bird flew dropped
Xuxian and Bai Suzhen; a rainy day met on Duanqiao Bridge Bai Suzhen borrowed an umbrella from Xuxian, the man she loved
The most popular attraction is the West Lake
Can you say something abut the West Lake?
苏堤春晓
柳浪闻莺
花港观鱼
曲院风荷
平湖秋月
南屏晚钟
三潭印月
雷峰夕照
断桥残雪
Bai Suzhen and Xu Xian
How much do you know about Hangzhou?
Hangzhou
高中英语 Module5 writing课件2 新人教版选修6
New vices instead of virtues.
to obtain a supply of stem cell, which People can not accept that the can help cure diseases or help them embryo would be wasted walk again after an accident.
Cloned animals get ill and die quite young.
People are afraid that scientists may create thousands of copies of the same person.
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It would be handy to clone.
restrict the biodiversity of the breed
to help solve crimes by analyzing the suspect’s saliva
Discuss with your partner about more advantages and disadvantages of cloning! Take notes on the hand out.
Careful reading Part three
Advantages
Relative disadvantages
an optional treatment for couples who the clone would be under unknown
find it difficult to have children
高二英语人教版选修6课件：Unit 5 Reading and writing (共35张PPT)
have a gift / talent for … _在__…__…__方__面__有__天__赋____
她在舞蹈方面有天赋。 She __h_a_s_a__g_if_t_f_o_r_ dancing.
4. …, don’t forget to drop a coin into the clear blue water to guarantee your love will be as deep and lasting as the lake itself. 别忘了投一枚硬币到清澈的水里以保 证你的爱像湖水一样是深刻而持久的。
guarantee when getting the loan.
n. 保证金，抵押品
Choose another tourist attraction in China that you know well. Write a passage describing it. Make some notes about it like the one below.
6. The television comes with a year’s guarantee. n. 保修单，保证书
7. Occasional success is not a guarantee of your eternal（永恒的）treasure.
n. 起保证作用的事物 8. We had to offer our house as a
3. What is the most popular tourist attraction in the reserve? Tianchi, or the Lake of Heaven.
4. What does Tianchi mean? How is Tianchi formed? The Lake of Heaven. It is formed in the crater of a dead volcano.
人教版高中英语选修六Unit5ThePowerofNaturewriting课件
10am left holiday house to walk in the mountains
12am saw dark clouds in the sky, started to go back
12:30pm snowstorm started
1:00pm we were completely lost
As we walked the clouds got nearer and nearer and the day grew darker. Then all of a sudden it began to snow. It was soon snowing so hard we couldn’t see very far in front of us. Holding each others’ hands so we couldn’t get separated, we continued down the mountain.学科网
4. Spend a few minutes on your own imagining your experiences and how you felt. Now imagine you are safely back home. Write a dairy entry about your experience.
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3. Work with your partner. Take turns to tell your story. When you listen to your partner’s story, ask questions about how he/she felt at different time.
But the snow got deeper and deeper. Walking became harder and harder. We began to get very tired and very frightened.