新东方BEC上课笔记(写作)
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Lesson 1 小作文
BEC中级:四级水平
要求:大作文120—140字小作文40-50(可以上下浮动5个单词,有上限,多了会扣分)
小作文考试类型:
1.便条,备忘录(对内,非正式),电邮
内容:Giving instructions, explain a requesting information, asking for comments, requesting information, agreeing to requests
2.信件(对外,正式),报告,建议
内容:Explaining apologizing, complaining, describing, summarizing, reassuring, recommending, persuading
评分标准:
1.内容完整
2.结构缜密
3.词汇多样
4.格式正确
写作结构:
1. Note/memo When? /where? /who? /what? /why?
2. Letter purposes/ reasons /endings
3. Report/proposal introduction/findings/conclusion /recommendation
如何满足要求?
1.内容完整:不遗漏要点即可
2.结构缜密:连贯与衔接,运用关联词:分类、强调、解释、
让步、转折、原因、结果、举例结论。
3.词汇多样:a.避免拼写错误(记词要动笔,用电脑辅助纠错,
用熟知的同义词和短语代替)
b. 词汇的丰富性
c.恰当的语言风格
例:同义词的置换
Popular-widespread-prevalent-stylish-common
Important-vital-crucial-significant
Necessary-indispensable-essential
More and more-an increasing/growing/rising number/amount
商务便函或便条1.写作格式
2.留言内容
3.常用句型
4.分类练习
MEMO
格式1:
TO:(收信人)
FROM:(发信人)
DATE:(日期)
SUBJECT:(事由)
……………… (正文)
格式2:
TO:(收信人)
COMPANY:(公司)
DEPT:(部门)
LOCATION&EXT:(地址与分机号)SUBJECT:(事由)
……………… (正文)
易犯错误小结:
TO:(收信人)
1.收信人的姓名与职衔(首字母大写)2.姓名前可用尊称MR/MRS/MS 3.不要用DEAR SIR OR MADAM 4.更不能用HI,SIR, OR MADAM EXAMPLES
TO: Mr.Jhon.Smith, Sales Manage TO: John smith
TO: Sales Manager
TO: All staff
FROM:
1.发信人的姓名和职衔
2.发信人不用尊称
EXAMPLES
FROM: Kim Dong, Chief Executive FROM: Kim Dong
FROM: Chief Executive
Date:
1.年份、日期用数字,月份用单词(不能用缩写)
2.两种模式:日-月-年或月-日-年(年份前应该打个逗号)EXAMPLE: 1 October,2009 October 1,2009(1不加st)
Subject:
1.用一个或几个词概括主要内容(首字母大写),虚词不需大
写,如(冠词,连词),只有名动形副词大写
2.简单明了(不用句子),将动词改成-ing
EXAMPLE:
a.Travel Advance Form(出差预支表)
b.Promotion of staff(人事任命)
c.Vacation Schedule(假期安排)
d.Participation in training programs(培训计划安排)
Message(正文)
1.简洁明了(3-4个句子)
2.涵盖全部要点
3.考查范围:inform.告知信息arrange.布置安排enquire.
询问信息request.征求意见apply.求助申请suggest.
推荐建议
Inform
1.告知:
inform,tell,note,explain,report,advice,remind,express,m
ention,notify
句型:a. I am writing to tell/inform you that
b. I am writing to explain why
c. I am writing to express my
regret/thanks/congratulations on
d. I am writing to express my
regret/thanks/congratulations on
例文
试题一:P42
Memo
TO: ALL STAFF
FROM: MANAGER
DATE: MAY 29, 2010
SUBJECT: CHANGE OF NAME
I am writing to inform you that our company`s name has
been changed into Masongolding. Due to the merged with a competitor. You mentioned that the new name should be used on June 1.You must not use the new name before the