高考英语 书面表达专题指导与练习讲评(图画式作文)练习讲评一
专题 28 书面表达 图画作文(看图写话)--备考2023年高考二轮英语复习讲练测--讲练
专题28 应用文写作备考2023年高考英语二轮复习讲练测--讲练命题解读图画作文一般提供一幅或者多幅图画，要求考生根据题目要求进行写作。
图画作文主要考查考生的观察能力和理解能力，首先它要求考生抓住图画所传递的信息，然后根据自己掌握的信息进行发挥、创作。
此类题型的体裁比较广泛，可以是记叙文，要求将图画中的信息完整地表述出来，也可以是说明文，根据图画内容从时间、过程、步骤等方面加以解释，说明，还可以是议论文，描绘图画中的一些现象，得出结论，提出解决问题的方法。
解题步骤1.仔细审题，准确定位（1)确定主题。
考生须通过分析图画的表层含义来弄清命题意图，从而确定文章的主题。
（2)确定体裁。
仔细阅读图画及文字说明，确定文章体裁。
多幅图的图画作文通常要写成记叙文，单幅图的图画作文则通常要写成夹叙夹议文或议论文。
（3)确定人称。
日记、周记、议论文一般采用第一人称。
（4)确定时态。
日记、周记类以过去时态为主，而议论文则以现在时态为主。
2.认真读图，进行图文转换考生应对图画进行全面而细致的研究，以便准确掌握图画所传达的信息。
如果图画以系列形式（即两幅以上）出现，考生除需掌握每一幅图画的信息外，还应该对图画之间的相互联系有所理解，以便全面把握图画要传达的主要内容，在写作时不遗漏信息要点。
3.确定段落，草拟提纲根据要点确定段落。
寓意型图画类作文可采用三段式的模式来写提纲并确定段落：第一段描述图画并揭示寓意（寓意一般用一句话来概括即可），第二段分析图画内容并揭示原因，最后一段发表评论或提出建议，其中第二段、第三段是写作的重点。
对于叙事型图画类作文（通常会涉及多幅图，要求对某一事件的发生、发展进行叙述），可根据图画的数目和具体内容来确定段落。
写作攻略4.斟词酌句，组句成篇根据要点内容，确定文章结构，然后选择恰当的词语并结合要点间的关系及文章的体裁，选择适当的句型将要点呈现出来。
注意句与句及段与段之间的衔接。
5.检查与修改重点检查是否有遗漏的要点、是否有错误的语法结构或短语、是否有拼错的单词等。
高三英语看图作文讲评
She turned off the light and was leaving the classroom when she turned around to make sure all things were done well. Just then it began to rain heavily.when she got home,it was already half past three.
She hurried right to her classroom and opened the door.Oh,dear! All the windows were open,and the strong wind filled the classroom with great noise.it was not at all easy for her to shut up all the windows.
The wind blowing in through the open window made her feel a bit cold. She knew a heavy rain would soon arrive.She thought of her classroom again. She wondered whether the students on duty had closed the windows properly. She got up and put on her clothes.It was then 2 o’clock.
看图作文讲评
芳芳是个好学生。请根据下面5幅图用英语 写一篇短文，词数120以上.
• 如果单从画面看，所得的信息无非是：一天夜里， 风刮得很大。芳芳两点钟起床，赶到学校，把窗 户关好后回家。 • 如果你就按上述所看到的信息去写，肯定拿不到 高分。这是篇记叙文，记叙了芳芳做好事的前后 经过。但记叙离不开人。所以要根据“芳芳是个 好学生”这个信息对人物展开合理的想象：Fang Fang is a good student.She lives near her school.This term she was elected monitor of her class.She is a very responsible for her class work.给下面的叙述奠定了基础。
2012届高考英语书面表达课件讲评图表式作文专题指导
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3.听音乐36分钟 ①They spend 36 minutes listening to music. ②Listening to music takes up 36 minutes . 4.用电脑24分钟 ①24 minutes is spent working on the computer . ②They spend 24 minutes working on the computer . 5.体育锻炼12分钟 ①It takes them only 12 minutes to take part in sports activities. • ②They spend only 12 minutes on sports activities.
图表类作文的写作步骤
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图表类作文的审题与其他类型的作文相比 难度较大，主要表现在考生不易准确、全 面地把握图表显示的信息。因此要通过审 题抓住主要数据反映的主要问题即所要表 达的要点；通过审题确立表达时所要用的 时态：特定时间用过去时；经常出现的情 况或自己的评述用一般现在时。
本系列资料简介
• 专题一 2012届高考英语书面表达（图画式作 文）专题指导与练习讲评 • 专题二 2012届高考英语书面表达（文字提纲 式作文）专题指导与练习讲评 • 专题三 2012届高考英语书面表达（图表式作 文）专题指导与练习讲评 • 专题四 2012届高考英语书面表达（开放式作 文）专题指导与练习讲评
• 实例一（2012届江苏省石庄高级中学学情调研测试） • 假如你是李华，最近你们学校对中学生课余活动进行了调查，结果如下。 请根据图表1提供的信息描述学生每天的课余活动，并针对图表2中的某两 个数据中反映的情况写出你的个人看法。标题和开头部分已给出（不计入 总字数内），字数150左右。 After-school activities in our school Recently, I have done a survey about the daily average amount of time the students in my school spend on different after-school activities.
高考英语专题复习北师大版必修一《书面表达写作指导之图画类作文》 课件 (共48张PPT)
看图议论文的写作技巧
1.认真阅读图画，把握图的意义，正确解读隐 含的意图、背后的原因或现象，并联系生活 实际进行思考与阐述。
2.议论文的写作要点是： a.观点鲜明。 b.层次分明。 c.表达观点。
请用“Waiting on the Mid-autumn Day”为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述 下图的内容，并就此发表你的评论
3.说明文的叙述顺序一般有三种：时间顺序、 空间顺序和逻辑。注意文章开头与结尾的 呼应。
假设你是李华，在一所中学读书。最近收到美国朋友Tom先生的来信。他三年 前参观过你校，听说现在变化很大，希望了解有关情况。参照下图，给他写一 封信，介绍你校的变化。 注意：1.回信须包括图画的主要内容，可以适当增减细节，使内容连贯；
解图
1.描绘图片 注意把握图画素材：时间(when)、地点 (where)、人物(who)、事件(what) 、原因 (why)、经过(how)以及结果(result) 等
2.说明图画的主题/问题/意义
3.作出评论/发表感想
列出提纲：
•简练，概括性强 •单词，短语或句子
假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华，利用上周末的时间帮助祖父母安排 了去北戴河的旅行。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，叙述你 从准备到送行的全过程。
注意：1．周记的开头已为你写好。 2．词数100词左右。
Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe.
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find out the information: train ticket, weather, hotel
要求：1．文章必须包括描述和评论两部分； 2．词数为100词左右。
高三英语看图作文讲评
当然，在小区的公共绿地上以及道边、墙根等处，还生长着一些自生自灭自开自落的野花，譬如比迎春花还要开得早的蒲公英，虽然只是一朵一朵地星散在草地上，并不成片，但是，那一点一点的 金黄，就足以让人们喜悦。尤其是那花朵开完后，变成了一张张撑开羽翼的小伞，常常被大人孩子们拿在手中，轻轻一吹，那一张张小伞便随风飞舞起来，带着人们美好的希冀飞向了蓝天飞向了远方。 还有那攀附在篱笆上不断地开开谢谢的牵牛花，或浅粉或淡蓝或乳白或微紫，总是在晨曦中张着那圆圆的薄薄的好看的嘴巴，在向人们问候着诉说着叮嘱着鼓励着那种叫做景天的野草，开着浅粉色的花，花朵很细碎，像米粒似的，不是很艳，但是很雅。它的规模很大，在小区里有好几片，每一片都有几十平方米，当那一片片景天同时开放时，也是很 壮观的。更可贵的是，这景天还是一种中药材，它的叶和梗均可入药，可以清热解毒。难能可贵的是，这些花草与那些人们栽种的花草不同，没人给它们施肥浇水，没人给它们撒药除虫，全是靠他们自 己顽强的生命力，年复一年地自我蓬勃着，而且还那么的顽强。除了月季和月月菊等少数花草外，大多数花草的花期都不算很长，很快由盛变衰了，但是，他们能够不负阳光雨露的照耀滋润，奉献了自 己的青春和美丽，装扮了自然界的一隅，也算是尽了自己的一份心意。尤其令人感佩的是蒲公英，从第一缕春风吹来最先绽放出花朵开始，到第一场雪花飘下来，它才收起自己那灿烂的笑脸，一茬接一 茬，可谓常开不谢。188金宝搏app
2022高考英语书面表达专项指导、讲练及习作评析2(2)图画式1
2022高考英语书面表达专项指导、讲练及习作评析2（2）图画式1假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者；以下漫画内容是你和你的朋友们上星期六在“the Fairy Lake Park”观光时的所见所闻，请依照要求写一篇英语短文投稿。
注意：1.描述漫画内容及发表个人感想。
2.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；3.词数150左右（短文标题差不多给出，不计入总词数）；参考词汇：告示牌signMind Your Behavior in Public Places讲评公民道德话题的看图写作，均是现实生活中的片段展现，探讨面对公民道德缺失的社会现象个人的感想，即公民道德缺失缘故与解决方法，考生应该有话可说。
本篇是看图作文，属于先叙后议的文体。
认真看图，结合文字和图画，确立所要表达的主题是什么。
本篇的主题确实是标题所表达的内容“Mind Your Behavior in Public Places”，无需考生多想。
围绕确立的主题，认真看图和文字，列出文字提示和图中的要点。
文字提示中的要点：“我”和“我”的朋友们上星期六在“the Fairy Lake Park”观光。
（这是交代情况发生的时刻和地点）遣词造句（注意多重表达）1.①Last Sunday, my friends and I went travelling in the Fairy Lake Park.②Last Sunday, I ,as well as my friends went to pay a visit to the Fairy Lake Park.③Last Sunday, together with my friends ,went sightseeing in the Fairy Lake Park.④Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park.2.①The park was full of fresh air and beauty of spring . The sun was shining. Birds were singingbeautifully.②There was fresh air and beauty of spring here and there in the park with sun shining and birds wereheard singing beautifully.③The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing.3.①A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly. They didn’t realizethat there was somebody else around. They spat and even threw rubbish into the lakewithout noticing the sign “Don’t throw rubbish into the lake”.②A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if there wasnobody else nearby. They spat and even threw rubbish into the lake and they seemednot to notice the sign “Don’t throw rubbish into the lake”.③A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if there wasnobody else nearby. They spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, turning a blindeye to the sign “Don’t throw rubbish into the lake”.④A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if they were theonly people in the world. They spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, totallyignoring the noticeable sign “No Littering” nearby.美与丑形成鲜亮对比。
2012高考英语书面表达专题指导与练习讲评(图表式作文)练习解读
• 第二步 谋篇
• Para 1话题讨论的背景； • Para 2概述图表所反映的信息，即 把现象产生的原因清楚地叙述出来 。 • Para 3向市政府提出改进的建议。
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• 第三步 表达
• 变点为句 • 注意多重表达
• 1.随着工业的发展，空气污染愈来愈严重； • ①With the development of industry, air pollution is getting more and more serious. • ②As industry is developing, air pollution is getting more and more serious. • 2.在一些城市越来越多的人因为空气的污染而备受疾病的煎熬。 • ①In some cities, more and more people are suffering from different kinds of illness because of air pollution. • ②In some cities, more and more people have got miserable diseases because of air pollution.
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4.空气污染10%的原因由其它因素引起。 ①About 10% of air pollution is caused by other reasons. ②Other factors, taking up about 10%, cause air pollution. 向市政府提出改进的建议：围绕造成空气污染的其中两条 原因进行联想。如：应该采取措施与空气污染作斗争。努 力改善公共交通以满足公众的需求。禁止人们在公共场所 抽烟； • We suggest that the city government should take some measures to fight against pollution. For example, first of all, the government should make a great effort to improve the public transport system to meet citizen’s demands. In addition, smoking must be forbidden in public. Only in this way can we solve the problem as soon as possible.
高三英语看图作文讲评
高考英语书面表达专题指导、练讲及习作评析(第二部分) 专题三 图表式专题练评1
2013届高考英语书面表达专题指导、练讲及习作评析（第二部分专题练评）（专题三图表式1）下面的图表和漫画反映了世界上野生动物种类的变化情况和原因，请根据你对图表和漫画的理解，用英语写一篇短文。
你的短文应包含以下内容：1.描述野生动物种类的变化趋势；2.分析导致野生动物种类变化的原因；3.谈谈你对保护野生动物的看法和建议。
注意：1.可参照图表中文字及下面文章开头所给的提示，作必要的发挥想象。
2.词数150左右。
开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
3.作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。
Many animals are in danger of dying out.讲评一、图表信息概述审图表抓要点题目中已经明确给我们以提示“描述野生动物种类的变化趋势”。
通过柱形图四年（1980、1990、2000、2010）柱形的高度变化，我们由此得出事物发展趋势：在过去的三十年野生动物种类激趋下降。
从柱形图中找出支撑结论的典型数据。
从1980年的野生动物种类大约有2.5百万，到2010年只剩下1.5百万这些数据的变化，我们可以计算出：平均每年大约减少了30,000。
由以上分析，我们可以得出以下要点：1.在过去的三十年野生动物种类激趋下降2.平均每年大约减少了30,0003.2010年只剩下1.5百万化要点为句子（注意多重表达）(注意动词应该使用什么时态)1.在过去的三十年野生动物种类激趋下降①The number of animal species has sharply decreased in the past thirty years.②A number of animal species have quickly disappeared in the past thirty years.③The kinds of wild animals have decreased sharply in the past thirty years.2.平均每年大约减少了30,000①There are about 30,000 kinds of animals disappearing on average each year.②About 30,000 kinds of animals have decreased on average each year.③About 30,000 kinds of animals have reduced on average each year.3.2010年只剩下1.5百万①Until 2010, only 1.5 million kinds of animals was left.②There were only 1.5 million kinds of animals remaining until 2010.③There were only 1.5 million kinds of animals left till 2010.描述图表信息(加上适当的过渡句和合并有关句子)As is clearly shown in the bar chart, the kinds of wild animals have decreased sharply in the past thirty years. With about 30,000 kinds of animals reduced on average each year, as a result, there were only 1.5 million left till 2010.二、分析原因化要点为句子（注意多重表达）1.①Many people would like to wear clothes made of animal fur to seek fashion.②Many people would like to wear clothes made of animal fur for fashion.③In order to show off, many people would like to wear clothes made of animal fur.2.①Human beings often hunt wild animals illegally to sell them for a big profit.②Human beings often hunt wild animals illegally to sell them to earn large amount of money.③Human beings are making attempts to hunt wild animals for fashion and a big profit.讲述原因，连句成篇(加上适当的过渡句和以及调整表达的顺序)三、发表自己的看法围绕原因来自拟自己的看法1.是我们人类采取措施来保护野生动物的时候了2.给动物一个良好的生存环境3.政府应该制定法律来禁止滥杀动物4.人类与动物要和谐相处化要点为句子（注意多重表达）wild animals.②The government should pass some firm laws to forbid abuse killing.4.人类与动物要和谐相处①Human beings and animals should get along well with each other.②Human beings should live in harmony with wild animals.发表看法，连句成篇(加上适当的过渡句)参考答案Many animals are in danger of dying out. As is clearly shown in the bar chart, the kinds of wild animals have decreased sharply in the past decades. With about 30,000 kinds of animals reduced on average each year, as a result, there were only 1.5 million left till 2010.There are several reasons accounting for this problem. Apart from the polluted environment and natural disasters, illegal killing is an important reason. Human beings are making attempts to hunt wild animals for fashion and a big profit, which can be seen vividly from the right picture. This has resulted in a sharp decrease in the number of animals.In my opinion, it is high time for us to take quick action to protect them. A national public campaign should be launched to give animals a good living environment.In addition, the government should pass some firm laws to forbid abuse killing. Only in this way can we live in harmony with wild animals.。
高三英语看图作文讲评
钱塘江流域邻近中国东南沿海，属亚热带季风气候区，年平均温度17℃，冬季盛行西北风，天气晴冷干燥；夏季多东南风，气温高，光照强，空气湿润；春秋两季气旋活动频繁，冷暖变化大，夏多 锋面雨，季风环流的方向与主要山脉走向基本正交，山脉起着阻滞北方寒流和台风的作用，以及江水四季澄碧，清澈见底。夹江两岸，群山蜿蜒，翠岗重叠，山势各殊万态，神木参天，谷多飞瀑流泉， 种植土壤肥沃，春茶吐芽时节，细雨蒙蒙，云雾环绕，气候潮湿，因其优越独特的生态环境和特殊的地理位置，成就了“涌潮茶”独特的品质与风韵。
每一种茶就像是一位老师，帮你扫除疲惫，涤净心尘，带你走进意趣盎然的世界。不同的茶，不同的时间、不同的地点、不同的泡数，会给你的带来完全不同的感受。它像一段经历，更像每一个平 凡的日子，跌跌宕宕、起起伏伏，时而浓郁，时而柔和，时而清新，而宁静。nba论坛
我喜欢和习惯泡的是一种涌潮茶，倒不是因为这茶的名字“涌潮”二字如人生潮汐的风景轨迹，潮起潮落，其中沉浮，温凉自知。我更喜欢和习惯了他的茶味醇厚有劲，多道冲泡，水底香韵依然不 减，既老成深邃，又有十分烂漫，这是其它茶所不具有的，这种气节或许是与其产地和出身分不开的。
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高考英语书面表达专题指导与练习讲评（图画式作文）练习讲评一下图叙述了你和父亲散步时所发生的事情。
请根据下面6幅图，用英语写一篇题为An Accident的短文。
短文必须包括以下内容：1.图中讲述了一个什么故事？2.女孩的言行说明了什么问题？3.你对此事有什么感想？注意：1.对于图中所发生的事情可以适当发挥想象，增加有关细节，但必须合理；2.词数：150左右（标题已经给出不计入总词数）。
An Accident①有一天，我和父亲在湖边散步；②一个女孩骑自行车路过（结合后面的图中所反映的内容可以推断女孩骑车的速度很快）。
我们要将第二、三两幅图连起来看，才容易提炼要点。
根据第三幅图可以看出是有人掉到湖里了。
根据第一幅图可以推测是骑自行车的女孩。
结合常识提炼出下列要点：①听到人可怕的尖叫声和有什么掉到水里的声音；②转过头看到女孩在水里挣扎，在喊“救命啊！”。
对这幅图我们要展开合理的想象。
根据图中“我”头脑中的问号，可以推断“我”感到非常困惑。
为什么？结合常识“得到了别人的帮助，理应表示感谢”。
再根据图中“女孩已经骑车离去”可以推断女孩连声“谢谢”恐怕都没有说。
这样推断才能为后面谈谈感想埋下伏笔。
遣词造句（注意多重表达）One day Daddy and I were taking a walk by the lake .A girl rode past at a very high speed.We heard a frightened scream.There was a big noise of something dropping into the water.Something dropped into the water, making a big noise.We turned and found the girl struggling in the lake.The girl was crying for help.We heard the girl crying for help.Dad and I ran as possible as quickly towards her and pulled her out of the water.Without hesitation, Dad and I ran quickly towards her and saved her.We also managed to get her bike which fell into the lake.We were also able to pull her bike out of the water.The girl rode away even without saying＂Thanks＂.I had thought the girl would say ＂Thank you＂to us before she left, but she said nothing and rode away.I felt quite puzzled at her behavior.I felt quite disappointed at her impoliteness.连贯成篇One day Daddy and I were taking a walk by the lake when a girl rode past at a very high speed. Then suddenly we heard a frightened scream, followed by a big noise of something dropping into the water. We turned and found the girl struggling in the lake, crying for help. Without hesitation, Dad and I ran quickly towards her and pulled her out of the water. We also managed to get her bike. Almost immediately,the girl rode away even without saying＂Thanks＂. I felt quite puzzled at her impoliteness.围绕女孩的无礼行为自拟感想①对自己：为什么要帮助别人？帮助别人是明德，不是图别人的感谢；②对女孩的无礼进行评论：许多年轻人不懂礼貌，这对建设和谐社会非常有害。
③自我劝慰比起帮了别人反成被告的人来说，我们还算幸运。
毕竟我们没有被人冤枉。
遣词造句（注意多重表达）Helping others is the traditional virtue.We don’t help others for“Thanks” .We don’t help others because they thank us.Many young people don’t know how to be polite .Many people don’t know what being polite means.It does much harm to the construction of Harmonious Society .It is very harmful to constructing Harmonious Society .Compared to the people who offered their hand but were later accused of causing the accidents, How lucky we were! After all, we were not done wrong to by others.I remembered stories where people offered their hand but were later accused of causing the accidents. How lucky we were! After all, we escaped being included in such stories.连贯成篇As far as I’m concerned, helping others is the traditional virtue. We don’t help others for “Thanks”, b ut nowadays, many young people don’t know how to be polite, which does much harm to the construction of Harmonious Society. However, compared to the people who offered their hand but were later accused of causing the accidents, I felt how lucky we were! After all, we were not done wrong to by others.【参考范文】一One day Daddy and I were taking a walk by the lake when a girl rode past at a very high speed. Then suddenly we heard a frightened scream, followed by a big noise of something dropping into the water. We turned and found the girl struggling in the lake, crying for help. Without hesitation ,Dad and I ran quickly towards her and pulled her out of the water. We also managed to get her bike. Almost immediately, the girl rode away even without saying＂Thanks＂. I felt quite puzzled at her impoliteness.As far as I am concerned, h elping others is the traditional virtue. We don’t help others for “Thanks”, but nowadays, many young people don’t know how to be polite, which does much harm to the construction of Harmonious Society. However, compared to the people who offered their hand but were later accused of causing the accidents, I felt how lucky we were! After all, we were not done wrong to by others. 【参考范文】二One day Daddy and I were taking a walk by the lake when a girl rode past at a very high speed. Then suddenly we heard a frightened scream, followed by a big noise of something dropping into the water. We turned and found the girl struggling in the lake, crying for help. Dad and I ran quickly towards her and pulled her out of the water. We also managed to get her bike. Almost immediately, the girl rode away even without saying＂Thanks＂. I felt quite disappointed at her behavior.We don’t help others for＂Thanks＂, but nowadays many young people don’t know to be polite. What a pity it is for our society and for our civilization! At the same time, I remembered stories where people offered their hand but were later accused of causing the accidents. How lucky we were! After all, we escaped being included in such stories.【2012届·四川省成都石室中学高三月考】以下四辐图所反映的是你上周六在你家附近的公园里的一条湖里救起了一名落水儿童的经过。