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中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
• 词汇—>短语—>句式
列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、 句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬 长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句 时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不 要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑 所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
连句成文
• 根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后 写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际 需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，划分 必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句 式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合 句要搭配运用。
二、各类作文常用框架
• 1、话题作文，演讲
总-分-总
It’s adj for us to….. On the one hand,…On the other hand,… What’s more,… In a word,/In short,….
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
stories were so interesting that I always felt they
weren’t enough. So I began to read books by myself.
Little by little I became interested in reading. I can
• 2、讨论报告，列举不同观点
总-A方-B方-我方-总
Recently, we have a discussion about…. Different people have different opinions. A thinks…. B thinks differently.…. As for me,/In my opinion, …. All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to….
列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、 句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬 长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句 时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不 要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑 所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
连句成文
• 根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后 写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际 需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，划分 必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句 式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合 句要搭配运用。
二、各类作文常用框架
• 1、话题作文，演讲
总-分-总
It’s adj for us to….. On the one hand,…On the other hand,… What’s more,… In a word,/In short,….
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
stories were so interesting that I always felt they
weren’t enough. So I began to read books by myself.
Little by little I became interested in reading. I can
• 2、讨论报告，列举不同观点
总-A方-B方-我方-总
Recently, we have a discussion about…. Different people have different opinions. A thinks…. B thinks differently.…. As for me,/In my opinion, …. All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to….
中考英语作文指导课
美连((bceoanunteicfty)
• How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.
• According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work.
Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
美(beautify)
According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed.
difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots
of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up English study.
the body And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t
中考英语写作指导I love…… 指导PPT课件(30PPT)
always ready to help me . I love my best friend because she is very considerate and always ready to help me. I love my best friend who is very considerate and always ready to help me.
kind nice outgoing humorous ...
1.Sentences about his/her appearance.(2)幻灯片
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2.Sentences about his/her personality.(2)幻灯片 7
3.Sentences about his/her occupation.(2)幻灯片 8
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4.对于话题作文的拟题我们一定要多 一些有 针对性 的训练 ，掌握 一定的 技巧， 达到需 要应用 时信手 拈来， 出语不 俗的效 果，感 动自己 ，征服 读者。
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5.这些根据材料提供的话题，进一步 挖深、 提炼出 来的题 目，源 源源于 材料而 高于材 料，加 进去个 体的感 悟与理 解，充 满了理 性的光 辉，于 平凡中 见奇倔 ，也是 很多喜 欢定议 论文的 同学拟 题一种 好方法 ，很有 思想深 度。
When Liu Qian was 7 years old, he fell in love with magic. He did not become a professional magician until he graduated from the university. No one knows that he learns by himself. He works so hard that he even does not have time to relax. He spends all his time thinking how to design the shows. He also did shows on streets to improve himself. As we know, it is the biggest challenge for a magician.
kind nice outgoing humorous ...
1.Sentences about his/her appearance.(2)幻灯片
6
2.Sentences about his/her personality.(2)幻灯片 7
3.Sentences about his/her occupation.(2)幻灯片 8
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4.对于话题作文的拟题我们一定要多 一些有 针对性 的训练 ，掌握 一定的 技巧， 达到需 要应用 时信手 拈来， 出语不 俗的效 果，感 动自己 ，征服 读者。
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5.这些根据材料提供的话题，进一步 挖深、 提炼出 来的题 目，源 源源于 材料而 高于材 料，加 进去个 体的感 悟与理 解，充 满了理 性的光 辉，于 平凡中 见奇倔 ，也是 很多喜 欢定议 论文的 同学拟 题一种 好方法 ，很有 思想深 度。
When Liu Qian was 7 years old, he fell in love with magic. He did not become a professional magician until he graduated from the university. No one knows that he learns by himself. He works so hard that he even does not have time to relax. He spends all his time thinking how to design the shows. He also did shows on streets to improve himself. As we know, it is the biggest challenge for a magician.
中考英语作文指导ppt课件
We are planning an outing. (主题句) We are
going to the People’s Park by bus on July 10th, Sunday. (扩展句) We’ll leave at 7:00 a.m. at the
school gate and arrive there at 8:30 a.m. in the morning. (扩展句) Then you can go boating and swimming. ( 扩 展 句 ) Let’s have lunch in a
完整版ppt课件
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根据下面表格所提供的信息，写一则通知，告诉你 的同学关于你们郊游的计划。
时间
星期日（７月１０日）
地点
人民公园
交通工具 坐公共汽车前往
出发时间 早上７：００
到达公园时 早上８：３０ 间
活动安排
上午：划船；游泳；在饭馆吃午餐 下午：英语角活动（English corner activities）；照相
5、内容的完整：一般供料作文包括一定数量的 内容点，漏写某一点则要被扣掉2~3分，因此审 题要细心观察，特别是在做看图作文题时，要注 意某些夸张“画点”，它（们）常是暗示应当写 出的内容点。画面内容较多时，不要事无巨细， 全面开花，应当仅仅围绕主题。恰当取舍，做到 详略得当。此外，80词左右的英语作文至少需 70词，最多不能超过完9整版0p词pt课件，少词或多词则要扣4
begin and how much does it cost? ( 扩 展 句 )
Where will the class be held? (扩展句) Also, do
you have any more information about what we
going to the People’s Park by bus on July 10th, Sunday. (扩展句) We’ll leave at 7:00 a.m. at the
school gate and arrive there at 8:30 a.m. in the morning. (扩展句) Then you can go boating and swimming. ( 扩 展 句 ) Let’s have lunch in a
完整版ppt课件
7
根据下面表格所提供的信息，写一则通知，告诉你 的同学关于你们郊游的计划。
时间
星期日（７月１０日）
地点
人民公园
交通工具 坐公共汽车前往
出发时间 早上７：００
到达公园时 早上８：３０ 间
活动安排
上午：划船；游泳；在饭馆吃午餐 下午：英语角活动（English corner activities）；照相
5、内容的完整：一般供料作文包括一定数量的 内容点，漏写某一点则要被扣掉2~3分，因此审 题要细心观察，特别是在做看图作文题时，要注 意某些夸张“画点”，它（们）常是暗示应当写 出的内容点。画面内容较多时，不要事无巨细， 全面开花，应当仅仅围绕主题。恰当取舍，做到 详略得当。此外，80词左右的英语作文至少需 70词，最多不能超过完9整版0p词pt课件，少词或多词则要扣4
begin and how much does it cost? ( 扩 展 句 )
Where will the class be held? (扩展句) Also, do
you have any more information about what we
中考英语作文写作指导省公开课一等奖全国示范课微课金奖课件
join a sports club
Friends fun
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注意“四定”
1.定内容。 2.定时态。 记叙文、日志惯用普通过去时； 说明文、通知、布告、介绍等用普通现在时； 计划等用普通未来时。 3.定人称。 用第一人称亲近自然；用第三人称客观真实。 4.定句型、定词语。 应依据内容,先定句型后定词语。
Middle 正文 Ending 结尾
supporting sentences支持句 用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、 讨论。
concluding sentence 结论句 对全文总结和概括。
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例1: 利弊型作文——Microblog利与弊 Para1: （综述）with the development of
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例3: 学校 “English center” 是同学们练习英语 场所。这里 “teenager hotline” 天天都能收不 到不少同学咨询电话。作为热线一名志愿者，请你 依据当初统计，首先描述两位同学碰到问题，然后 给一位同学提出详细提议并说明原因。
主要内容: 问题、提议、原因 限制: 描述两位同学问题，给一位同学提提议 关键词: problem、suggestion、reason
写作步骤：
1 审题 2 选材 3 列提要 4 写作 5 复查
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第一步 审题
审题主题是关键。写文章都不能离开主题。假如审 不清主题, 就有可能出现“下笔千言, 离题万里” 情况。
在审清主题基础上, 还需注意要审清文体。 审题不准, 丢关键点, 失分惨重。
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例1: A special gift I’m looking forward to 强调这份“礼品”是“我所期待”, 而非我已拥有一份礼品。 假如慌忙动笔就轻易将文章写成 “My favorite gift”.
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张PPT)
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张 PPT)
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张 PPT)
Let’s look at these sentences. Can you make them more beautiful? 1.She is very young. She can’t carry the big box. __________________________________ 2.Writing a composition is very hard for me. __________________________________ 3.Our school trip was wonderful. __________________________________ 这回是用的什么方法使简单平淡的句子变得 丰富高级了呢？
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张 PPT)
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张 PPT)
中考作文如何拿高分？
1.灵活运用短语或词组，语言正确地道。 2.巧用连接词。 3.句式多样化。 4.用词生动。 5.就易避难，重短轻长。（基础差或中等同学） 6.长短句交错运用（基础较好） 7.书写规范，符合英文要求。 千万切记：万万不可为了美化作文出现汉式英语，
请同学们认真思考，这些关联词和过渡语在文 中起到了什么作用？在以后的学习和写作中 我们应该注意什么？
中考课(共17张 PPT)
How many ways do you find out?
1.结合情境选择恰当的词或短语，巧加修饰词 使语言更加生动。
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张 PPT)
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张 PPT)
By studying in groups, I am not worried about physics any more. I also get more confidence with my classmates’ help. What’s more, I become the master of the study.
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张 PPT)
Let’s look at these sentences. Can you make them more beautiful? 1.She is very young. She can’t carry the big box. __________________________________ 2.Writing a composition is very hard for me. __________________________________ 3.Our school trip was wonderful. __________________________________ 这回是用的什么方法使简单平淡的句子变得 丰富高级了呢？
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张 PPT)
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张 PPT)
中考作文如何拿高分？
1.灵活运用短语或词组，语言正确地道。 2.巧用连接词。 3.句式多样化。 4.用词生动。 5.就易避难，重短轻长。（基础差或中等同学） 6.长短句交错运用（基础较好） 7.书写规范，符合英文要求。 千万切记：万万不可为了美化作文出现汉式英语，
请同学们认真思考，这些关联词和过渡语在文 中起到了什么作用？在以后的学习和写作中 我们应该注意什么？
中考课(共17张 PPT)
How many ways do you find out?
1.结合情境选择恰当的词或短语，巧加修饰词 使语言更加生动。
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张 PPT)
中考英语复习专题写作指导课(共17张 PPT)
By studying in groups, I am not worried about physics any more. I also get more confidence with my classmates’ help. What’s more, I become the master of the study.
中考英语作文指导课件(共38张PPT)
理由：
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
初中英语作文写作课(精编版)-PPT课件(共17张)
Compare (比较)
Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
The beginning
三段式 The body ----用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。【注意使用 （总-分 支持句 连接词】 -总）
The ending
结论句----对全文的总结和概括。 【结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应】
Writing skills—seven steps
审清题意 誊写规范
(复述)
Key sentence1
Topic
On the Internet
Body
正文
Most students…
Besides make…more convenient
Supporting sentences Key sentence2
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WWF worker help animals live in peace
I(Xiao Peng)
写作第一步： 审(search)
• 审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、时
态、字数、结构、提示要点和补充信息。
人称 主题
假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。 英语课上老师要求展开小组调查，内容包 括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班 内汇报。 请你根据表格内容提示， 介绍本组成员及自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查报告。
（4）宾语从句：主语+谓语动词+that / if /whether / 疑问词+从句。
….
考场作文五步法
一审(search) 二列(list) 三加(add) 四连(connect) 五美(beautify)
假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。 英语课上老师要求展 开小组调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组 组长在班 内汇报。 请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员 及自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查汇报
பைடு நூலகம்
can experience different life and learn about different cultures.Wu Fan 's hobby is looking after animals. He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in
guide
Experience 1ife and 1earn about different cu1tures
WWF worker
he1p anima1s 1ive in peace
一般现在时
提示 要点
时态
写作第二步：列 (list)
• 用简单的单词、短语和句子列出文章要点提纲。
注意：要根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬长避短，避难就易。遇到想 不起的词、句时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不要使用明知 是错的单词或没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑所涉及到的情景、 场合，语言要地道，符合英语表达习惯。
I hope we enjoy our hobbies and
peace.I want to be an English teacher.I like speaking English. I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased.
Wu Fan 's hobby is looking after animals. He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace.
My dream is to work at school . I want to be an English teacher. Because I like speaking English. I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased.
Yi Ke's hobby is writing. She wants to be a
a nice body
writer.Writing brings her pleasure and success. Li
Rui likes travelling best. He wants to be a guide . He
Yi Ke's hobby is writing. She wants to be a writer. She thinks writing makes her relaxed and it brings her pleasure and success.
Li Rui likes travelling best. He wants to be a guide . He can experience different life and learn about different cultures.
基本句型结构的掌握
简单句的句子结构：
1. 主语+谓语。（这里的谓语为行为动词）
2. 主语+谓语+宾语。
3. 主语+谓语（及物动词）+间接宾语+直接宾语
4. 主语+谓语+宾语+宾语补足语（补充说明宾语的成分 就叫做宾语补足语）。
5,主语+系动词 （be/keep/stay/remain/taste/look/sound/smell/fe el）+表语（形容词，名词，介词短语）这种结构表示 一种状态
Names Yi Ke Li Rui
Hobbies writing travelling
Wu Fan
looking after anima1s
Survey
Dream Jobs
Reasons
writer
Bring her pleasure and success
guide
Experience life and learn about different cultures
复合句：其结构是：从句+逗号+主句 = 主句+ 从句
（1）条件状语从句： 主句+连词（if , unless ） +从句
（2）时间状语从句 ：主句+连词（when , while , after , before , until ,till，as soon as ）+从句
（3）原因状语从句： 主句+连词（because ） +从句
写作第三步：加(add)
加首尾句，使结构完整。
可以采取总分总三段式结构或总分 一段式结构，开头或结尾的句子应 注意简洁，漂亮。
Boys and girls，
Everyone has hobbies and dreams.Now let me share ours with you.
a nice head
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体裁
Names Yi Ke Li Rui
Hobbies writing trave11ing
补充 信息
Wu Fan
1ooking after anima1s
I(Xiao Peng)
Survey
Dream Jobs
Reasons
writer
Bring her pleasure and success