中考英语作文专题讲解.ppt
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us?ly Pandas
► There are many_k_i_n_d_s___(种类) of animals in the world，
but I like Pandas best. ► Pandas are rare animals. They live only in China.
to_c_h_a_n_g__e_(改变) his hair style very
much. His hair is always done in a new special and a bit strange way.
Many people _e_s_p_e__c_ia_l_ly_(尤其) young
to live， they will die gradually.
► Save the lovely pandas. _A_s____(做为) a kind of rare wild
animals, they are loved by everybody in the world. Let’ s try
our bestt_o__c_r_e__a_t_e(创造) a better environment for them.
优选
优选
9
Beckham’s hair style
David Beckham is one
of_t_h_e__m__o_s_t__fa__m_o__u_s___(最著名的)
football stars in the world. He likes
Born in Taiwan, in September,1980. Her favorite color are green, black and blue. Jolin Tsai is a famous singer. She was born in Taipei.She likes collecting jewelry and her favorite musical instrument is piano. Her singing is very sweet and popular. She was champion of the Jinmei Secondary School Singing Competition and she was also champion of 1998 MTV Youngsters Singing Competition. We wish she will be more and more popular in the future.
► There are many_k_i_n_d_s___(种类) of animals in the world，
but I like Pandas best. ► Pandas are rare animals. They live only in China.
to_c_h_a_n_g__e_(改变) his hair style very
much. His hair is always done in a new special and a bit strange way.
Many people _e_s_p_e__c_ia_l_ly_(尤其) young
to live， they will die gradually.
► Save the lovely pandas. _A_s____(做为) a kind of rare wild
animals, they are loved by everybody in the world. Let’ s try
our bestt_o__c_r_e__a_t_e(创造) a better environment for them.
优选
优选
9
Beckham’s hair style
David Beckham is one
of_t_h_e__m__o_s_t__fa__m_o__u_s___(最著名的)
football stars in the world. He likes
Born in Taiwan, in September,1980. Her favorite color are green, black and blue. Jolin Tsai is a famous singer. She was born in Taipei.She likes collecting jewelry and her favorite musical instrument is piano. Her singing is very sweet and popular. She was champion of the Jinmei Secondary School Singing Competition and she was also champion of 1998 MTV Youngsters Singing Competition. We wish she will be more and more popular in the future.
中考英语作文优秀指导课件(共38张PPT)
Enjoy an article
Group learning 1:
Read the article and find out: 1 What’s the main idea of each paragraph? （每一段的主要内容是什么？） 2 What’s the writer’s opinion? What are the reasons?（作者的观点是什么？理由？） 3 Is the experience typical for the topic? （作者的亲身经历对于观点来说典型吗？） 4 Are there any good phrases or sentences? Underline them!（有好词好句吗？请划住。）
正方： Last year, I got into trouble learning math. I got poor grades on math and I was really worried. However, I believed that I could deal with it by
me much time, my eyesight became
worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some
personal information, I often got many unwanted calls.
自己的亲身经历
All in all, as middle school students, we should be far away from the mobile phones, and pay much attention to our study.
Group learning 2:
【全文】中考英语书面表达指导教学课件-(共50张PPT)
连(conn源自ct)美(beautify)
We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
Dear Dr. Know， I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. First，some of us aren’t interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do. Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不用说)answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Please write soon.
We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
Dear Dr. Know， I’ m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. First，some of us aren’t interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then it’s so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us don’t have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. What’s more, there are so many new words we haven’t meet before in the passage. I don’t know what to do. Sometimes we can’t understand the main idea, let alone(更不用说)answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Please write soon.
中考英语作文指导课件(共38张PPT)
理由：
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
on the one hand, on the other hand besides also ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
•God helps those who helps themselves.
•During the process of solving problems, I
你的观点 2至3条理由
Last term, my aunt bought me a mobile phone as my birthday present. After that, I often used it to chat with my friends, even some strangers. It wasted me much time, my eyesight became worse. And because of leaking(泄露) some personal information, I often got many
Different people deal with their problems in different ways. As for me, when I meet problems , I like to deal with them with others. ...
第一部分：观点及理由 （开门见山，点明主题）
第三部分：结尾 （总结全文，重申观点）
in a word in short all in all ...
正方：
反方：
All in all, it is really important for us to deal with problems by ourselves. It can make us more independent and give us more opportunities to get true knowledge about the world.
中考英语写作指导优秀课件(共22张PPT)
2017年河西一模作文
Stage 1: 审 体裁________________ 时态________________ 人称________________
Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文， 把他介绍给大家，并说出你对他这些做法的看法。 （1）Jim的父母有钱，给他很多零花钱。 （2）Jim理解父母的不容易，不多花钱，想办法省钱； 他喜欢读书，在网上买书，有时去图书馆借书；别人 买饮料喝他却带水上学；从不花钱买零食。 （3）有人认为他的做法很怪异，但……。 参考词汇：零食 snacks 要求：（1）词数：80 ~ 100个。 （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Jim’s parents work very hard and his family has become very rich.___________________________________________
• Homework : • 1. Correct the composition on the handout. • 2. Finish the composition according to the mind map.
Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.
假如你所在中学的校刊近期开辟英文专栏，征集发生 在大家身边的感人故事。请根据以下提示，为该专栏 投稿。 （1）在一个寒冷的早晨，你买早餐时看到前面的女 孩买了面包和牛奶。 （2）女孩要离开时，发现树下有一个老年乞丐，他 看上去又冷又饿。 （3）女孩走到乞丐身旁，把食物递给了他。 （4）乞丐向女孩道谢，女孩微笑着离开。 （5）你很感动…… 参考词汇：乞丐 beggar 感动 be moved 要求：（1）词数：80 ~ 100个。 （2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 On a cold morning, while I was…
中考英语作文指导课件(79张 PPT)演讲稿.ppt
on the one hand…on the other hand; 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as,
that is to say, in other words; 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all),
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4. 使用“高端”的词汇。 Eg: I am very interested in pop music.
= show/take great interest in I have lots of homework to do every day.
=endless/oceans of
Playing too much computer is bad for our study.
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如何运用已有的“遣词 造句”能力在写作实践 中学会“谋篇布局”
“战无不胜” 呢？
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审 写作第一步
• 认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。 • 一般作文包括一定数量的内容点，漏写某一
点则要被扣掉2~3分，因此审题要细心观察 ，特别是在做看图作文题时，要注意某些夸 张“画点”，它（们）常是暗示应当写出的 内容点。画面内容较多时，不要事无巨细， 全面开花，应当仅仅围绕主题。恰当取舍， 做到详略得当。
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一 、英语写作的重要性及初中生写作现状
（二）初中生写作现状 •
1) 审题不清，抓不住要点，东拉西扯； •
2) 单词拼写错误； •
frist ,belive, ture, buzy, quite & quiet … •
3) 动词缺失； •
Eg: I happy I can go to Peking. •
that is to say, in other words; 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all),
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4. 使用“高端”的词汇。 Eg: I am very interested in pop music.
= show/take great interest in I have lots of homework to do every day.
=endless/oceans of
Playing too much computer is bad for our study.
课件
如何运用已有的“遣词 造句”能力在写作实践 中学会“谋篇布局”
“战无不胜” 呢？
课件
审 写作第一步
• 认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。 • 一般作文包括一定数量的内容点，漏写某一
点则要被扣掉2~3分，因此审题要细心观察 ，特别是在做看图作文题时，要注意某些夸 张“画点”，它（们）常是暗示应当写出的 内容点。画面内容较多时，不要事无巨细， 全面开花，应当仅仅围绕主题。恰当取舍， 做到详略得当。
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一 、英语写作的重要性及初中生写作现状
（二）初中生写作现状 •
1) 审题不清，抓不住要点，东拉西扯； •
2) 单词拼写错误； •
frist ,belive, ture, buzy, quite & quiet … •
3) 动词缺失； •
Eg: I happy I can go to Peking. •
中考英语作文课件(19张PPT)
看法
我认为……
建议（至少3条） 1. 合理安排时间 2. 参加兴趣小组
3. ……
注意: 100词左右，广播的开头已给出，不计入总词数 参考词汇: make good use of, interest groups
social activities, do sports, net bar
Hello, everybody! It’s time again for our
第五步：集句成段，组段成篇
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2. List some keywords about opinions.
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2024年中考英语作文精讲【成长变化类】 课件(共38张PPT).ppt
我很感激我的变化与成长. I'm grateful for my changes and growth.
书现在是我的朋友，它们使我受益很多. Books are my friends now, and they benefit me a lot.
句式：I sincerely hope everyone can join us, and try to be a virtue teenager.
进阶写作－成长变化类
Байду номын сангаас
我们在变化中成长
成长让我们的人生充满了意义
回首三年初中时光
我在学习、思想、性格、生活等方 面发生了很多变化
We grow up in changes.
句式: In our spare time, we can do regular exercise to keep healthy.
在家里：
经常与家人交流，分担家务，知错就改
句式：At home, it's our duty to help parents do some housework.
句式：In society, we must obey the rules in public
句式：Also, keep in mind that safety is the first.
句式：In my opinion, we are supposed to do all of the above.
句式：Parents will be happier if we can communicate more with them.
句式：Sometimes, if we make mistakes, we'd better face and correct them timely.
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语表达时，能够想一个与 这个汉语词义类似的几种词义。扩展思路，然后 从英语中找出一个与其对得上号的来替代。这样 可有异曲同工之妙。 ２．小词大用 汉语中有些语意看来很杂乱很文雅，但在英语 中常可用一些常用词来表达。下面这些词或许在 你的书面表达中有用：take, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。
看个例题吧！
（2003年常州市）依据要害提示写一篇短文。要 求：语法正确，意思连接，书写标准，要害完全。 词数60－80（标点符号不计入总词数）。 要害提示： 1．上星期天上午我一直在图书馆看书。 2．走出图书馆发现自行车不在了，只好步行回家。 3．昨日去买车，样式许多难以选择 4．店东说，常州产的金狮自行车物美价廉，我买 了一辆蓝色的。
cry, smile, shout 等） ⑤ 动作描绘： （come, go, get, have, take,
bring 等）
三、不会表达，另辟蹊径 中考作文给分是以要害和言语精确度而定，不以 文采来打分。造句越简略精确越好。造复合句简 略犯错，简略被扣分，阅卷场上有句话： “过错 面前人人平等，文采好不多给分。”如遇到单个 要害表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的方法， 化难为易，化繁为简。总归，所造句子要正确、 得当、契合英语表达习气。
weak, ordinary-looking 等） ② 服饰色彩： （red, yellow, blue, white,
green, brown, black 等） ③ 心里境地： （glad, happy, sad, excited,
interested 等） ④ 爱情描绘： （love, like, hate, feel, laugh,
３．借花献佛 有时书面表达中需求的单词或词组或许在试卷 中的其他地方呈现。由于你刚刚做过题，浮光掠影。 那么就可信手拈来，为我所用。 四、如虎添翼，力所能及 假如你还有时刻和精力，想把书面表达写得更 好，那么，请留意以下几点： １．句型多样化，不要 I (We) ……究竟，使人 觉得庸俗； ２．恰当运用一些并列句或主从复合句； ３．进一步描绘人或事物时，恰当运用定语从句；
中考中的书面表达题，首要有“补全对话”、 “看图填词”、“看图写话”、“看图作答”、 “看图完结短文”、“看图完结句子”和“依据 提示的内容，完结某项写作”等方式。这类题型 的考试意图在于：经过书面方式测验考生口头会 话和作简略书面表达的才能。
下面作一简略介绍： 一、测验要害 一般说来，测验的首要内容都是以日常日子
思路指点： 本篇书面表达比较简略，同学首要应留意以下几 点： 1．由于是叙说一件现已发生过的工作，所以全 文必定要留意时态一致，用曩昔时态。有的同学 在句中有表明曩昔时刻的词语时，能留意运用正 确时态，而其他情况下简略混杂。 2．一件工作总有其开展的先后顺序，所以在叙 说时必定要留意工作开展的条理，留意前后句子 的连接性。 3．要留意词的运用，如walk，home，Jinshi bikes，made，in Changzhou．
参阅范文 Last Sunday morning I was in the library．When I got out of it，I found my bike wasn't there．I had to walk home．Yesterday I went to buy a new one．There were many kinds of bikes in the shop．I couldn't decide which to choose．Then the shopkeeper told me that Jinshi bikes made in Changzhou were nice and cheap．So I bought a blue one．
3.留意白话与书面语的差异及一些特别的表达方 法，做题时必定要左顾右盼，既要看到前面的内 容，又要看到后边的句子；既要契合习气用法， 又要留意表达的精确性。
4.要常常进行日常运用文和命题作文的学习与 练习。
怎么学习写英语作文。 一、环绕中心，拟定提纲 咱们在进行写作时，要依据短文的中心思想考虑 怎么最初、打开和结束，幻想几个承上启下的连 词。将首要句型、要害词语草草记下，构成提纲， 写时切忌结构涣散，言之无谓，严峻跑题。英语 作文，内容广泛，体裁多样，要澄清写作的要求 是写人、叙事、介绍、告知、谈论、图表、信件、 日记、告知、条子仍是看图作文或改写缩写。假 如是日记，要写明（年、）月、日和天气情况， 假如是信件，则要留意信件的格局，留意短文字 数不要低于或超越规则的字数太多。
二、言语晓畅，表达精确 １、防止运用汉语式英语，尽量运用自己了解
的句型。几种句型可替换运用，以防止重复和板 滞。
２、多用简略句型，记事、写人一般都不需求 杂乱的句型。可恰当多运用陈述句、一般疑问句、 祈使句和感叹句。不必或少用非谓语或神态动词 等较杂乱的句型。
３、留意语法、句法常识的灵活运用。
① 语态、时态要精确无误。
② 主谓语要共同。主语的人称和数要和谓语共同。 ③
留意人称代词的宾格方式。
④ 留意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.
中的 an 不能写成 a。
标点符号特别留意汉英的不同。例如：
汉语 英语
A. 句号 。
.
B. 省略号 ……
…
C. 顿号 、
无
４、描绘人物时，要生动详细 ① 表面特征： （tall, short, fat, thin, strong,
为布景，进行简略的会话或写作。例如：问好、 问路、治病、打电话、购物、毛遂自荐等功能意 念项目和简略的运用文，例如：条子、告知、短 信等。一个标题写10个左右的句子，字数为80－ 100个左右。
二、日常练习与应试留意事项 1.平常要留意句型与对话的学习，留意传闻练 习，积极参与传闻练习的教育活动，以到达会话 恰当娴熟的程度。 2.在会话中，留意常在情形中运用的习气用语、 套语的概括和运用，做到信口开河，应对如流。
看个例题吧！
（2003年常州市）依据要害提示写一篇短文。要 求：语法正确，意思连接，书写标准，要害完全。 词数60－80（标点符号不计入总词数）。 要害提示： 1．上星期天上午我一直在图书馆看书。 2．走出图书馆发现自行车不在了，只好步行回家。 3．昨日去买车，样式许多难以选择 4．店东说，常州产的金狮自行车物美价廉，我买 了一辆蓝色的。
cry, smile, shout 等） ⑤ 动作描绘： （come, go, get, have, take,
bring 等）
三、不会表达，另辟蹊径 中考作文给分是以要害和言语精确度而定，不以 文采来打分。造句越简略精确越好。造复合句简 略犯错，简略被扣分，阅卷场上有句话： “过错 面前人人平等，文采好不多给分。”如遇到单个 要害表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的方法， 化难为易，化繁为简。总归，所造句子要正确、 得当、契合英语表达习气。
weak, ordinary-looking 等） ② 服饰色彩： （red, yellow, blue, white,
green, brown, black 等） ③ 心里境地： （glad, happy, sad, excited,
interested 等） ④ 爱情描绘： （love, like, hate, feel, laugh,
３．借花献佛 有时书面表达中需求的单词或词组或许在试卷 中的其他地方呈现。由于你刚刚做过题，浮光掠影。 那么就可信手拈来，为我所用。 四、如虎添翼，力所能及 假如你还有时刻和精力，想把书面表达写得更 好，那么，请留意以下几点： １．句型多样化，不要 I (We) ……究竟，使人 觉得庸俗； ２．恰当运用一些并列句或主从复合句； ３．进一步描绘人或事物时，恰当运用定语从句；
中考中的书面表达题，首要有“补全对话”、 “看图填词”、“看图写话”、“看图作答”、 “看图完结短文”、“看图完结句子”和“依据 提示的内容，完结某项写作”等方式。这类题型 的考试意图在于：经过书面方式测验考生口头会 话和作简略书面表达的才能。
下面作一简略介绍： 一、测验要害 一般说来，测验的首要内容都是以日常日子
思路指点： 本篇书面表达比较简略，同学首要应留意以下几 点： 1．由于是叙说一件现已发生过的工作，所以全 文必定要留意时态一致，用曩昔时态。有的同学 在句中有表明曩昔时刻的词语时，能留意运用正 确时态，而其他情况下简略混杂。 2．一件工作总有其开展的先后顺序，所以在叙 说时必定要留意工作开展的条理，留意前后句子 的连接性。 3．要留意词的运用，如walk，home，Jinshi bikes，made，in Changzhou．
参阅范文 Last Sunday morning I was in the library．When I got out of it，I found my bike wasn't there．I had to walk home．Yesterday I went to buy a new one．There were many kinds of bikes in the shop．I couldn't decide which to choose．Then the shopkeeper told me that Jinshi bikes made in Changzhou were nice and cheap．So I bought a blue one．
3.留意白话与书面语的差异及一些特别的表达方 法，做题时必定要左顾右盼，既要看到前面的内 容，又要看到后边的句子；既要契合习气用法， 又要留意表达的精确性。
4.要常常进行日常运用文和命题作文的学习与 练习。
怎么学习写英语作文。 一、环绕中心，拟定提纲 咱们在进行写作时，要依据短文的中心思想考虑 怎么最初、打开和结束，幻想几个承上启下的连 词。将首要句型、要害词语草草记下，构成提纲， 写时切忌结构涣散，言之无谓，严峻跑题。英语 作文，内容广泛，体裁多样，要澄清写作的要求 是写人、叙事、介绍、告知、谈论、图表、信件、 日记、告知、条子仍是看图作文或改写缩写。假 如是日记，要写明（年、）月、日和天气情况， 假如是信件，则要留意信件的格局，留意短文字 数不要低于或超越规则的字数太多。
二、言语晓畅，表达精确 １、防止运用汉语式英语，尽量运用自己了解
的句型。几种句型可替换运用，以防止重复和板 滞。
２、多用简略句型，记事、写人一般都不需求 杂乱的句型。可恰当多运用陈述句、一般疑问句、 祈使句和感叹句。不必或少用非谓语或神态动词 等较杂乱的句型。
３、留意语法、句法常识的灵活运用。
① 语态、时态要精确无误。
② 主谓语要共同。主语的人称和数要和谓语共同。 ③
留意人称代词的宾格方式。
④ 留意冠词用法，例如： He is an honest student.
中的 an 不能写成 a。
标点符号特别留意汉英的不同。例如：
汉语 英语
A. 句号 。
.
B. 省略号 ……
…
C. 顿号 、
无
４、描绘人物时，要生动详细 ① 表面特征： （tall, short, fat, thin, strong,
为布景，进行简略的会话或写作。例如：问好、 问路、治病、打电话、购物、毛遂自荐等功能意 念项目和简略的运用文，例如：条子、告知、短 信等。一个标题写10个左右的句子，字数为80－ 100个左右。
二、日常练习与应试留意事项 1.平常要留意句型与对话的学习，留意传闻练 习，积极参与传闻练习的教育活动，以到达会话 恰当娴熟的程度。 2.在会话中，留意常在情形中运用的习气用语、 套语的概括和运用，做到信口开河，应对如流。