初中英语写作课件
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初中英语书面表达 PPT课件 图文
6.表示对比：Instead,not…but 7.表示举例：for example/instance,such as 8.表示顺序：to begin with,first(of all),second,since
then,from then on,finally,in the end 9.表示强调：what's more,in fact,besides,actually 10.表示总结：all in all,altogether,in a word
Step 1: 审
亚洲区
Work
Stay at Home
Travel
Visiting Friends or Parents
Step 2: 列
根据所划关键词及图表特点，用简单的句子 列出文章的要点。
※ 调查报告 ※ 倡议假日休闲
亚洲区
Stay at Home Work
Visiting Friends
Step 5: 美
选好词句，美化文章
Step 5: 美
l How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. • According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.While,Some people like to stay at home,watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. Besides,some people visit friends or parents to make themselves relaxed. However, A few people have to work. • Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.
初中英语作文写作课(精编版) PPT课件(共17张)
Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, the Internet makes our life more convenient. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
In my opinion, we should stay away from the unhealthy websites and make good use of the Internet. Only in this way, it can help us students a lot.
Outline (提纲)
Ending Linking words (连接词)
Outline Retell (提纲)
Beginning
Different people have different ideas about …. First of all learn… from listen to…, enjoy … …also…
Enfferent students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study. In my opinion, we should stay away from the unhealthy websites and make good use of the Internet. Only in this way, it can help us students a lot.
初中英语作文范文20篇ppt课件
The Spring Festival The Spring Festival comes in winter. It is the most important traditional festival in China. People usually go home to spend the festival with their family. They have a big family get-together. The Chinese people have big meals and watch TV during the Spring Festival. They also visit their friends and relatives. Children like the Spring Festival very much because they needn't go to school and they have a lot of time to play.
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No. 2
亲爱的同学，你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了，请你以“My English Study”为题，谈一下三年以来学习英语的心得体会。
要求：1.要点包括你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的方法以及 学习感悟；2.词数80左右。
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【优秀满分范文】
My English Study How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study. When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn't master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English. In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.
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No. 2
亲爱的同学，你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了，请你以“My English Study”为题，谈一下三年以来学习英语的心得体会。
要求：1.要点包括你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的方法以及 学习感悟；2.词数80左右。
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【优秀满分范文】
My English Study How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study. When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn't master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English. In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.
初中英语作文10篇,带翻译。 ppt课件(推荐)
• 10.乡村游记-a trip to the country
i
went to the countryside to spend my
summer holidays this year. i liked green
plants, clear rivers lovely amimals there.i
• 8.乡村游记-a trip to the country
i went
to the countryside to spend my summer
holidays this year. i liked green plants,
clear rivers lovely amimals there.i
there. i am used to getting up early in the
morning, breathing the fresh air,listening to
the birds singing, enjoying the green trees,
red flowers the river. i like fishing with my
example,last summer i learned to swim.this summer i might study
computers or english.summer vacation flies by fast,so it's important to
do as as you can.
色，而且喜欢那里的人。我帮他们干农活， 帮助邻家的孩子复习功课。孩子们对英语 很感兴趣，他们在读、写方面很好，但听、 说不好。我帮助他们提高听、说能力，他 们的父母高度赞扬了我。我意识到农村确 实需要知识。
初中英语作文PPT课件(28张)
六、一致性错误
所谓不一致不仅指主谓不一致，它还包括数的 不一致、时态不一致以及代词不一致等。
例1：Once one have money， he can do what he want to do. 人一旦有了钱，他就能想干 什么就干什么。
析：one 是第三人称单数，因此本句的 have 应改为 has。同理，want 应改为 wants。
四、时态的误用
例：She like it very much and reads it to the class. 她很喜欢它 并且读给同学们听。
析：在书面表达中，应根据上 下文或时间状语来确定动词的时态。
▪ 正：She liked it very much and read it to the class.
writing
书面表达六步法
审
抄
抓
书面
表达
改
扩
连
Writing points
一.审题 (体裁 结构 格式 内容 人称 时态） 二.抓要点 三.扩展句子 四.连句成文 （时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应） 五.查错改错 六.眷写
“中小学生健康 ”为话题写一篇短文 【要求】
(1)内容包括①列举中小学生面临的健康问题。 ② 请谈谈怎样才能保持健康。
例：There are many ways to know the society. For example， by TV radio， newspaper and so on. 有许多 方式来了解这个社会，例如通过电视、广播、报纸等等。
析：本句后半部分 For example， by TV， radio， newspaper and so on 不是一个完整的句子，仅仅是一些 不连贯的词语，不能独立成句。 正：There are many ways to know the society， for example， by TV， radio， and newspaper and so on.
人教九年级Unit7写作课件(15张)
remember the car number
Do not take the lift.
话题: 规则 Try to remember what the robber looks like and tell the police later.
【课前任务】
一、写出下列短语。
1 、确信 make sure 2、使某人远离危险 keep sb. from danger 3、还嘴 talk back 4、对……要求严格 be strict with sb. 5、妨碍 get in the way of 6、担心 worry about 7、长大 grow up
Don’t take the lift and find an 4. _e_xi_t __
as fast as you can. Lin Li, a teacher from Yan tai, gives young students advice on how to deal with danger.
According to a new survey, student safety has become a big problem. Now in many big cities of China, many schools start a new lesson: self-protection. Students like this lesson because there are no exams or boring classes .And they can learn how to save lives and know how to stop danger before it really happens.
赏析：找出上面材料中的好词好句：
初中英语写作辅导省公开课一等奖全国示范课微课金奖PPT课件
职。
She works part time in a department store three afternoons a week. 在我十岁那年我和家人经历了一次奇妙旅 行。
I took a fantastic trip with my family when I was ten years old.
thus, therefore 5、强调：really, indeed, surely 6、其它插入语：worse still/what’s worse, after
all, if possible,
第8页
培养英语思维---词搭配
• 大雨 • 大桥 • 大楼 • 大错 • 大写 • 大病 • 大地震
heavy rain long bridge
high rise/large building big/terrible/serious mistake
capital letter
serious illness major earthquake
第9页
句表示
注意汉英差异： 一、状语 e.g. 她一周有三个下午在一家百货企业做兼
e.g. Yesterday I did my homework. It takes me
three hours.
took
His father thought he is good at math. was
She started her new job last week. She
liked it. likes
第11页
三、主语 e.g. 活到老，学到老。 One is never too old to learn. 极难说谁对谁错。 It’s hard to tell who is right and who is wrong. 昨天找到了丢失钢笔。 The lost pen was found yesterday. 上饭店吃饭很贵。 It’s expensive to eat out. 乘飞机旅行更舒适、便捷。 Travelling by plane is faster and more convenient.
She works part time in a department store three afternoons a week. 在我十岁那年我和家人经历了一次奇妙旅 行。
I took a fantastic trip with my family when I was ten years old.
thus, therefore 5、强调：really, indeed, surely 6、其它插入语：worse still/what’s worse, after
all, if possible,
第8页
培养英语思维---词搭配
• 大雨 • 大桥 • 大楼 • 大错 • 大写 • 大病 • 大地震
heavy rain long bridge
high rise/large building big/terrible/serious mistake
capital letter
serious illness major earthquake
第9页
句表示
注意汉英差异： 一、状语 e.g. 她一周有三个下午在一家百货企业做兼
e.g. Yesterday I did my homework. It takes me
three hours.
took
His father thought he is good at math. was
She started her new job last week. She
liked it. likes
第11页
三、主语 e.g. 活到老，学到老。 One is never too old to learn. 极难说谁对谁错。 It’s hard to tell who is right and who is wrong. 昨天找到了丢失钢笔。 The lost pen was found yesterday. 上饭店吃饭很贵。 It’s expensive to eat out. 乘飞机旅行更舒适、便捷。 Travelling by plane is faster and more convenient.
初中英语作文模板课件PPT课件 图文
responsible for _______. Maybe there are some
other reasons to show ________. But it is
generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing.(发表观点)
从更深一层次上讲，它为人类的精神文明蒙上了一层阴影。
更可怕的是，……
•
事实上，A的出现是因为……
•
而如今，我们已深受其害，要想消除它的危害，我们
必须从根源上杜绝它的产生，我们每一个人都应给予A高
度的重视，用系统的和科学的方法去解决，唯有这样，避
免它带来更多损失，我们人类前进的脚步才会更加平稳，
更加欢快的迈向辉煌的明天。
Yours sincerely,/Yours, Tony
4. 英语作文模板：说明利弊题型
• 这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状， 再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一 个角度（利或弊）出发，最后往往要求考 生表明自己的态度（或对事物前景提出预 测）
• １． 说明事物现状
• ２． 事物本身的优缺点（或一方面）
•
There are at least two good reasons
accounting for ______. On the one hand, ________.
On the other hand, _______ is due to the fact that ________. In addition, ________ is
one thing_____________________ ,for another________
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初中英语作文要求要求学生在20 分钟内写出60-80词左右的短文， 并且质量高、内容全、形式正确。Fra bibliotek主要问题
要点不全 线索不清
【我的经验】
• • • • • 审题 确定文体 记叙文 书信 。。。 把人称和时态定下来 列出要点 句句之间，段段之间最好能用连接词、句 子，如first of all，above all，at last ，高 级一点的可以用meanwhile
3、自然结尾随着文章的结束，文章自然 而然地结尾。如“Fishing”（钓鱼）的结 尾： I caught as many as twenty fish in two hours， but my brother caught many more. Tired from fishing， we lay down on the river bank， bathing in the sun. We returned home very late.
书面表达六步法
审 抄 改
书面 表达
抓
扩
连
假定你叫张华，最近从报纸上得知美国某公司将在你的家乡 建一座工厂，请给该公司写封电子邮件。要点如下： ●表示欢迎：有利于家乡发展等； ●感到担忧：造成环境污染等； ●希望了解有关环保措施及更多信息。 注意：1．词数80-100； 2．请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥以使行文连贯； 3．邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Sir or Madam, _____________________________________________ _____________________________ Yours faithfully, Zhang Hua
3、 回忆性的开头 用回忆的方法来开头。例如"A Trip to the Taishan Mountain"(泰山游)的开头是： I remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were yesterday.
4、概括性的开头
即对要在文章中叙述的人或事先作一 个概括性的介绍。如"The Happiness of Reading Books"(读书的快乐)的开头：
6、交待写作目的的开头 在文章的一开头就交待写作目的，如 通过文章要表扬谁，批评谁，或说明一个 什么问题等。如"Pollution Control"(控制污 染)的开头： In this article I shall draw your attention to the subject of pollution control.
The summer holiday is coming. I'm going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself. I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge. I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework. I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society. If possible, I'd like to go to Shanghai for a visit of the World Expo. I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.
表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or… 表示转折关系的：but, yet, however… 表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 表示因果关系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 表示列举的：for example , such as… 表示总结性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking…
结尾
一些记叙文和描写文经常采用自然结尾的方 法；但说理性和逻辑性较强的说明文和议论 文则往往都有结束语，以便使文章首尾呼应， 结构完整。
1、首尾呼应，画龙点睛在文章的结尾， 把含义较深的话放在末尾，以点明主题， 深化主题，起到画龙点睛的效果。如“I Cannot Forget Her” （我忘不了她）的结 尾： After her death， I felt as if something were missing in my life. I was sad over her passing away， but I knew she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the people.
紧张的初中学习生活就要结束了，你即将迎来一个轻松的暑假。请根据 下面方框内的提示写一篇短文，谈谈你的假期计划。 暑假计划 1、好好休息，学会放松 2、读书，因为读书既有趣又能学到很多知识 3、陪父母聊天，帮他们做家务 4、参加社会活动，了解社会 5、……
注意： 1、词数80～100； 2、文中不得出现真实的地址和姓名； 3、方框内容不必逐字翻译，可适当发挥。 参考词汇：知识 knowledge, 社会活动 social activities
2、交代人物、事情、时间或环境开头 在文章的开头，先把人物、事件和环境交 待清楚。例如"A Trip to Jinshan" (去金山旅游) 的开头：
The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan. The bus ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us.
常用连接词：
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First， Secondly/Second…And then，Finally，In the end，At last 2.表并列补充关系的：What is more，Besides， Moreover 3.表转折对比关系的：However，On the contrary， but Although +clause(从句)，Inspite of+n/doing ，On one hand…On the other hand…Some…，while others…
4、含蓄性的结尾
针对3要点
• good for the development of my hometown more jobs 好处 同意该项目 • However noise and pollution • more information
• 再加点写信的客套话，就ok了
• 全文如下
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a middle school student. I have recently learned from the newspaper that you are going to build a factory here in my hometown. There is no doubt that it is good for the development of my hometown and it will provide us with more jobs. Most of us stand by the program. However, some of us are worried that the factory will make much noise and pollute the environment of the area. I would like to know whether you have any plans for the environment protection. Would you please offer us more information about it? I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Zhang Hua
People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world. But I say that to read books is more valuable than anything else, because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power.
5、介绍环境式的开头
即开头利用自然景物或自然环境引出要介 绍的事物。如"An Accident"(一场事故)的开头 是:
It was a rainy and windy morning. The sky was gloomy, the temperature was low, and the street was nearly empty. I was on my way back to school. Suddenly, a speeding car came round the corner.
要点不全 线索不清
【我的经验】
• • • • • 审题 确定文体 记叙文 书信 。。。 把人称和时态定下来 列出要点 句句之间，段段之间最好能用连接词、句 子，如first of all，above all，at last ，高 级一点的可以用meanwhile
3、自然结尾随着文章的结束，文章自然 而然地结尾。如“Fishing”（钓鱼）的结 尾： I caught as many as twenty fish in two hours， but my brother caught many more. Tired from fishing， we lay down on the river bank， bathing in the sun. We returned home very late.
书面表达六步法
审 抄 改
书面 表达
抓
扩
连
假定你叫张华，最近从报纸上得知美国某公司将在你的家乡 建一座工厂，请给该公司写封电子邮件。要点如下： ●表示欢迎：有利于家乡发展等； ●感到担忧：造成环境污染等； ●希望了解有关环保措施及更多信息。 注意：1．词数80-100； 2．请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥以使行文连贯； 3．邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Sir or Madam, _____________________________________________ _____________________________ Yours faithfully, Zhang Hua
3、 回忆性的开头 用回忆的方法来开头。例如"A Trip to the Taishan Mountain"(泰山游)的开头是： I remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were yesterday.
4、概括性的开头
即对要在文章中叙述的人或事先作一 个概括性的介绍。如"The Happiness of Reading Books"(读书的快乐)的开头：
6、交待写作目的的开头 在文章的一开头就交待写作目的，如 通过文章要表扬谁，批评谁，或说明一个 什么问题等。如"Pollution Control"(控制污 染)的开头： In this article I shall draw your attention to the subject of pollution control.
The summer holiday is coming. I'm going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself. I will read more useful books because reading more books is not only interesting but also can make me learn more knowledge. I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them to do some housework. I am going to take part in the social activities so that I can know more about the society. If possible, I'd like to go to Shanghai for a visit of the World Expo. I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful summer holiday.
表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or… 表示转折关系的：but, yet, however… 表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that… 表示因果关系的：so, therefore ,as a result… 表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that… 表示列举的：for example , such as… 表示总结性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking…
结尾
一些记叙文和描写文经常采用自然结尾的方 法；但说理性和逻辑性较强的说明文和议论 文则往往都有结束语，以便使文章首尾呼应， 结构完整。
1、首尾呼应，画龙点睛在文章的结尾， 把含义较深的话放在末尾，以点明主题， 深化主题，起到画龙点睛的效果。如“I Cannot Forget Her” （我忘不了她）的结 尾： After her death， I felt as if something were missing in my life. I was sad over her passing away， but I knew she would not have had any regrets at having given her life for the benefit of the people.
紧张的初中学习生活就要结束了，你即将迎来一个轻松的暑假。请根据 下面方框内的提示写一篇短文，谈谈你的假期计划。 暑假计划 1、好好休息，学会放松 2、读书，因为读书既有趣又能学到很多知识 3、陪父母聊天，帮他们做家务 4、参加社会活动，了解社会 5、……
注意： 1、词数80～100； 2、文中不得出现真实的地址和姓名； 3、方框内容不必逐字翻译，可适当发挥。 参考词汇：知识 knowledge, 社会活动 social activities
2、交代人物、事情、时间或环境开头 在文章的开头，先把人物、事件和环境交 待清楚。例如"A Trip to Jinshan" (去金山旅游) 的开头：
The day before yesterday my class went on a bus trip to Jinshan. The bus ride there took three hours. The long trip made us very tired, but the sight of the beautiful sea refreshed us.
常用连接词：
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First， Secondly/Second…And then，Finally，In the end，At last 2.表并列补充关系的：What is more，Besides， Moreover 3.表转折对比关系的：However，On the contrary， but Although +clause(从句)，Inspite of+n/doing ，On one hand…On the other hand…Some…，while others…
4、含蓄性的结尾
针对3要点
• good for the development of my hometown more jobs 好处 同意该项目 • However noise and pollution • more information
• 再加点写信的客套话，就ok了
• 全文如下
Dear Sir or Madam, I am a middle school student. I have recently learned from the newspaper that you are going to build a factory here in my hometown. There is no doubt that it is good for the development of my hometown and it will provide us with more jobs. Most of us stand by the program. However, some of us are worried that the factory will make much noise and pollute the environment of the area. I would like to know whether you have any plans for the environment protection. Would you please offer us more information about it? I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully Zhang Hua
People often say that gold and silver are the most valuable things in the world. But I say that to read books is more valuable than anything else, because books give us knowledge and knowledge gives us power.
5、介绍环境式的开头
即开头利用自然景物或自然环境引出要介 绍的事物。如"An Accident"(一场事故)的开头 是:
It was a rainy and windy morning. The sky was gloomy, the temperature was low, and the street was nearly empty. I was on my way back to school. Suddenly, a speeding car came round the corner.