非谓语动词在写作中的应用

“Reading makes a full man; conference a ready man; and writing an ______ man.” --Francis Bacon

非谓语动词在写作中的运用（By Du Yan）

Learning aims: Ss learn to write a better basic writing by learning to use nonfinite

verbs

Learning difficulties: How to use nonfinite verbs in a basic writing.

Step I. Lead-in

◆Task1. Questions: 1. How to write well / a wonderful essay?

2. What sentence patterns do you know?

◆Task2.Enjoy a writing (2012年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(湖南卷)作文范文)

Getting back what you have lost would be an unforgettable experience. Last

Monday, I lost my expensive cell-phone, on which my name was inscribed.

Fortunately, it was returned.

That morning, I rushed out of my house and jumped into a taxi, for I would be

late for the final examination. On arriving at school, I headed to my classroom

quickly, not noticing that I had left my cell-phone on the back seat.

When the exam ended, to my great surprise, I found the driver waiting at the

school gate. He handed the phone over to me, wearing a smile on his face. So

touched was I that tears rolled down my cheeks.

From this story, I am firmly convinced of the significance of honesty, which will

contribute to building a warm and harmonious society.

Step II. Review

A. 找出非谓语动词，并判断成分

• 1. Making our city greener is everyone’s duty.

• 2. The government is determined to continue the green program.

• 3. I find my hometown changed so much.

• 4. Having fresh air, trees can reduce air pollution.

• 5. Every effort to make the program makes a difference.

B. 高考链接2012年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(湖南卷)

21. We’ve had a good start, but next, more work needs _____ to achieve the final success.

A. being done

B. do

C. to be done

D. to do

23. Time, _____ correctly, is money in the bank.

A. to use

B. used

C. using

D. use

31. The lecture, ___ at 7:00 pm last night, was followed by an observation of the moon with telescopes.

A. starting

B. being started

C. to start

D. to be started

Step III. Presentation

Task1.纠正下列句子错误并归纳出写作中非谓语动词常见的错误

1、状语动作行为者与主句不一致

➢Seeing from the top of mountain, the city is beautiful.

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2、用动词短语充当、表语和宾语

➢In my opinion, climb mountain is an enjoyable thing.

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3、、含义混淆

➢—Which team is good at cooking?

—A team called itself the supper cook.

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Task2. 看图写句

Picture1:

Picture2:_________ by the reporter from CCTV, the man said he was very happy. (interview) Picture3:

Task3. 用非谓语结构改写和美化句子

1. 因为在这国家又没有朋友，她觉得要想找到工作是不可能的。

①用连词because: , she found it impossible to find a job.

②用非谓语结构: , she found it impossible to find a job.

2. 这本用简易英语写成的书很容易读懂

①用定语从句: The book, , is easy to understand.

②用非谓语结构: The book, , is easy to understand.

3. Moyan stood there and was surrounded by many reporters.

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4. ①It is high time we took part in some activities.

② We want to make ourselves more healthy.

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Task4. 用非谓语结构美化文章

Nowadays, some students often cheat in exams. It is popular among students who are lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons. They cheat for they want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. Also, some students who work hard at their lessons will cheat in exams because they are afraid of failing in exams. →

Step IV.Having a try (学写句段)

Task1. (学写句子) 高考临近，保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气。第一步：拆分成几个简单句(中文)

①

②

③

第二步：分别翻译这几个简单句

①(National College Entrance Examination)

②( have a right attitude)

③（relax and overcome difficulties bravely）第三步：合并句子

Sentence1:→

Sentence2:→