2020闵行区二模作文讲评
——2020闵行二模语文作文讲评
作文题
善良不只是一种常识，它更是一种行动，
不通过行动表达，人就渐渐失去善良。 请写一篇文章，谈谈你对这段话的思考。
要求：（1）自拟题目；（2）不少于 800字。
概念阐释
善良：《汉语大词典》中的解释为“和善，心 地好”。
常识：一般的、普通的知识或者世人所公认的、 普世的价值观念 ，这里偏向后者。
观点补充
示例：但没有行动，人真的会失去善良的 本性与品质吗？大可不必如此悲观。善良 是植根于基础人性之中的，但善良也害怕 被利用。当善举被误解，当善者被利用， 善良此时必须要有点锋芒，而不是认为不 通过行动表达就会失去善良。此时不妨聆 听村上春树的暖心抚慰：“倘若你无法将善 良洒遍各个角落，那就让善良带上锋芒隐 匿在你心中吧。”
名言名句
灵魂最美的音乐是善良！——罗曼·罗兰 知行合一。——王阳明 勿以善小而不为。——刘备 善不是一种学问,而是一种行为。 ——罗
曼·罗兰 行善的人应该觉得自己快乐才对。——罗
曼·罗兰 善良的行为使人的灵魂变得高尚。——卢梭 慈善的行为比金钱更能解除别人的痛苦。—
Байду номын сангаас— 卢梭
深入思考
但不通过行动表达，善心终将在日复一日的压抑中泯灭，在自我安
慰、自我说服中丧失殆尽。当我们习惯于推诿救助的道义责任，困于“电
梯受害者心理”的桎梏，我们终将变得冷漠自私，成为受害者有罪论的忠
实拥趸。 （分析“不行善”的危害）
更可怕的是，当人人都只将善良当作道德课本中的常识，而拒绝付诸 行动时，一个祛魅的、无情的钢铁丛林式社会将成为灾害，每个身居其 中之人都无可幸免。二战时期生活在富裕中的犹太人，“当他们给犹太人 带上六芒星袖章，我想这没什么；当他们把穷犹太人赶进集装箱，我想 这不会波及到我；直到他们向我举枪，我环视四周，无人再为我说话。” 在一个善良缺失而冷漠肆虐的社会中，极端的恶将卷土重来。契诃夫说： “一切都毁于你我间的仇恨与争端。”的确如此，失去善良的人类终将走 向自我毁灭的末日。（进一步分析“不行善”的社会影响） 善良不只是常识，它更是一种行动。善良是艾米莉·狄金森诗中写到 的，“假如我能免除一种痛苦或平息一条生命的疼痛，我就不虚此生；善 良是“山川风月，同气连枝”，是人类结成命运的共同体，抵御那些邪恶 与灾难；善良是对所有人的怜爱，是值得努力的道德信条。 陀思妥耶夫斯基说：“一切最最等而下之的人，也是人，而且可以称 之为我的兄弟！”让我们实践善良，不让它随风而逝；因为善良脆弱，但 它的美值得每个人为之奋斗一生。
1、现实中人们为什么会知善而不行善？ 行善的过程中，遭到“碰瓷”，而心存警戒。
2、失去善行后，善心是否会真的消失？ 不一定。心存善念，独善其身亦是一种智慧。
3、带来更多牺牲的善行是否要坚持？行善是否要 考虑自身能力？
行善也许量力而行，不能无视自身能力、实力，不 能被他人“道德绑架”。
4、知善和行善到底谁是因，谁是果，还是互为因 果？
然而更多的时候，我们选择让善良停留于常识，我们选择沉默，选 择冷眼旁观。（点出“不行善”这一现象）
这已然成为某种普遍现象。其背后的原因可能有许多：也许，这场 灾难并不会直接降临到你与你在乎的人身上；也许你能力有限，自顾 不暇，实难“兼济天下”；也许，我们是说也许，你暗暗的想：被害者也 有错，这种人不值得怜悯。以色列学者玛格丽特在《记忆的伦理》一 书中写到：“比起我们对身边的人关心，更应被克服的是我们对数量大 得无边的、看似与我们无关的群体的天生冷漠。”或许因为自认为“力所 不能及”，或许因为已经见惯了他人的苦难而逐渐变得冷漠麻木，或许 因为“多管闲事”可能会惹来麻烦……总之，我们任由善良在沉默与不作 为中漂泊流浪。（分析不行善的原因）
行动：指为实现某种意图而具体地进行活动。
审题立意
材料中“不只是……更是……”表什么关系？侧重点应落在哪里？ 递进关系；侧重后者 “把善良当作常识（知善）”有什么价值与意义？会不会有不 足与危害？ 价值与意义：道德共识引领、约束人的行动，进而形成一种道 德自觉，促进社会文明发展。 不足与危害：导致强制他人善良，形成“道德绑架”。 “把善良当作行动（行善）”有什么更重要的价值与意义？ 行善，给他人带来便利，自身也会获得满足感。 行善，自己的善念得以践行，心灵变得越来越丰富。 行善，更易唤起他人的善念与善行，形成良性循环，营造友善 和谐的社会环境。
范文展示2
论善良
有人说，善良不只是一种常识，它更是一种行动，不 通过行动表达，人就会逐渐失去善良。诚然，人们往往 都有区分善恶的常识观念，但真正决定人能否走向真正 善良的，是那一份为善意而伸出援手的行动。（提出观 点）
善良，即与人为善。尽管人皆有此善心，但愿意亲自 为此付诸努力，做出善行的人，才可谓是道行合一的善 人。而非仅陶醉于自我满足的伪善者，空有美好的祝愿， 却在他人受难之际不愿投入自身的时间精力助人脱险， 这样的“善良”除了让自己获得身为“好人”的心理暗示，实 则无法帮助任何人，而这与善良利他的本质南辕北辙。 这些空谈仁义道德却始终冷眼旁观之人，只会让人们感 受到加倍的冷漠而非社会的温情，因而我们强调善良在 于行动，呼吁善心必应当加以实践。（分析“伪善”的 本质与危害）
范文展示1
善良，脆弱而美丽
善良根植于人性，是人类在百万年漫长进化史中选择的伦理。孟子 说恻隐之心是“仁之端也”。亚当·斯密也说，“人天生有善良的本能，把 别人的事情当做自己的事情。”我们天生热情，天生善良，为邪恶不公 愤慨不已，对他人的苦难感到悲伤，我们更被教导着善良，为弱者发 声，向受害者伸出援手，是每个公民道德使命感的呼唤。（阐释“善 良”）
互为因果，知善指导人行善，行善使人对善的认知 更深刻。
二者关系阐释示例
真正善良的培养，需要我们每一个人投入到实际 行动中去。康德说“人只能是目的而非手段”， 面对社会上形形色色的欺骗与背叛，唯有足够的 定性才能在生活实际中弃恶扬善。这定性是从社 会价值观的引导和经典作品的激励作用中来的。 因此，知善与行善是相辅相成的，互相促进的。 从思想教育中我们获得“善良”的常识，能培养 善良的火种；最终这微弱火种要以实践回馈给社 会，方才有“星星之火，可以燎原”的向善之风。
2024上海闵行区高三语文二模作文指导与佳作
2024届闵行高三二模作文分析25.阅读材料，完成作文。
(70分)人们常说“温故知新”。
“温故”和“知新”可以是什么关系呢?请写一篇文章，谈谈自己的思考。
题目自拟，不少于800字。
审题立意分析1. “人们常说”，暗示了“温故知新”作为儒家经典思想在生活中常常遇到，学生的学习生活也经常面对，为学生基于自身经历和生活进行思辨提供可能。
常说的话语蕴含不寻常的思想，也可以有不寻常的多样解读。
2. “温故知新”，隐含了思辨的对象与话题——学习或认知的规律。
（“故”与“新”如果理解为旧历史新思想或者老朋友新伙伴之类，属于另类解读，是否合理？）3. “可以是”，不是应该是或者必然是，前者指向本义，后者指向唯一。
允许学生做合理的、多样化的阐释。
4. “关系”，可以有两种方法阐释。
一是可以基于逻辑的分析，补充关联词语或者其他词语，建立逻辑关系，如：（先）温故（后）知新——【顺承：学习或认知应该讲求顺序】；（借）温故（以）知新——【目的：通过温故的手段达到知新的目的】；（因）温故（而）知新——【因果：因为有温故的行为所以有知新的结果】；（欲）温故（须）知新——【条件：知道新的（知识、目标）才能有效温习旧知识】；（既）温故（又）知新——【并列：学习或认知中温故与知新不可偏废】；（去）温故（留）知新——【选择：温故不是目的并且有各种问题，知新才是最终追求】；（有）温故（方）知新——【条件：温故是知新的必要（或充分）条件】；（重）温故（轻）知新——【主次：学习或认知中选择不同的策略】；二是可以基于关系式的描述与解读，如：温故是知新的手段、基础、条件、方法、源泉，知新是温故的目的、理想、结果、追求；或二者间是相互交流互动、相辅相成等。
5. 可以有合理性的多样化的解读，不必固守于孔子本来意思。
写作时不必局限于哪个是最优解或最佳立意。
但是应该有基本的论题意识，探讨学习或认知的规律；优秀作文应该有比较明晰的概念界定，对何为温故何为知新做能自圆其说的合理的阐释；应该较为明确地回答了基本议题，即二者可以是什么关系。
2020年上海市闵行中学高三英语二模试题及答案解析
2020年上海市闵行中学高三英语二模试题及答案解析第一部分阅读（共两节，满分40分）第一节（共15小题；每小题2分，满分30分）阅读下列短文，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项AArtificial intelligence (Al) is practically everywhere today. There are so many products out there which use Al. Some are being developed, some are already in use, and some failed and are being improved, so it’s very difficult to name a few of them and regard them as the best.ViIt is an Al personal trainer which is mainly concerned with fitness and coaching. It, however, requires the use of bio-sensing earphones and other fitness tracking equipment! It can play your favourite music while you work out and all you have to worry about is the exercise you're doing.Deep TextDo you ever wonder how an ad appears suddenly just when you are looking for something similar? This is because of Deep Text. It uses real-time consumer information to produce data which in turn is used to target consumers. Thus, if you search online for flight tickets fromBangaloretoDelhi, it is very likely that an ad relating to hotels inDelhiwill soon follow.Hello EggIf you live alone and miss your mother because you always miss your breakfast or don’t know what to eat for dinner, then Hello Egg is exactly what you are looking for. A very healthy choice of the 2-minute noodles and oats, Hello Egg provides you with a detailed weekly meal plan about the needs of your body. It is truly a modern AI-powered home cooking tool for the young.WordsmithYou can put Mr. Smith into your Microsoft Excel using their free API, and let it write up detailed analysis of the stories behind your numbers. It can produce detailed reports on thousands of pages of spreadsheets in seconds.1. What can we learn about Vi from the text?A. It is an AI music player.B. It is a bio-sensing earphone.C. It doesn't work without bio-sensing earphones.D. It can make you more energetic while you work out.2. Which can help you improve cooking skill?A. Deep Text.B. Vi.C. Wordsmith.D. Hello Egg.3. What can Wordsmith do for us?A. Produce a detailed report.B. Provide us with a detailed meal plan.C. Book a ticket ahead of time.D. Offer us information on hotels for traveling.BMy sister Alice and I have been trying to get people tostop dropping cigarette（香烟）butts（烟头）for seven years. One day, we were walking in our hometown and saw hundreds of cigarette butts on the ground. They made the town look so ugly that we decided to start a group to make people dropping butts. We called it “No Butts About It”.At first, we drew pictures with “The Earth is not your ashtray（烟灰缸）”written on them. We put the pictures around our hometown—in parks, by beaches, and along roads. We wanted to make people understand that dropping butts hurts the environment. Most smokers don’t think that dropping butts hurts the Earth. But it does, and all rubbish does!Later, we wrote to companies and asked them for money to help us. We used the money to buy ashtrays to give to smokers. We wanted smokers to carry the ashtrays with them so they didn’t have to drop butts.At the moment, we are trying to get cigarette companies to put an ashtray in each pack of cigarettes. Some companies want to do it. Many people have started to join our group since it began. Today there are 45 other “No Butts About It” groups inAmerica.Now there even groups inEngland,Australia, andIndia! Many newspapers have written about my sister and me over the last seven years. And we have won many prizes for what we do. But we are not interested in prizes. We just want to make the Earth a better and cleaner place for animals, plants and people.One day, it will be.4. What did the writer think about the cigarette butts in the first place?A. They made the town smelly.B. They made the town unhealthy.C. They made the town dirty.D. They made the town poor.5. What does the writer do with the cigarette butts?A. Give ashtrays to the smokers.B. Stop people buying cigarettes.C. Pick up the cigarette butts.D. Win prizes for starting groups.6. From the passage we can know that _____.A. no companies wanted to give money to themB. The writer believes that the Earth will be a better and cleaner placeC. There are only 45”No Butts About It”D. The writer likes to be on newspapers and win prizes27. Which is the best tittle for the passage?A. Save our Town From Cigarette Butts.B. Buy Yourself An Ashtray.C. Cigarette Butts Also Destroy Other Countries.D. No Butts Prize.CWho is a genius? This question has greatly interested humankind for centuries.Let's state clearly: Einstein was a genius. His face is almost the international symbol for genius. But we want to go beyond one man and explore the nature of genius itself. Why is it that some people are so much more intelligent or creative than the rest of us? And who are they?In the sciences and arts, those praised as geniuses were most often white men, of European origin. Perhaps this is not a surprise. It's said that history is written by the victors, and those victors set the standards for admission to the genius club. When contributions were made by geniuses outside the club—women, or people of a different color1 or belief—they were unacknowledged and rejected by others.A study recently published bySciencefound that as young as age six, girls are less likely than boys to say that members of their gender(性别)are “really, really smart.” Even worse, the study found that girls act on that belief: Around age six they start to avoid activities said to be for children who are “really, really smart.” Can our planet afford to have any great thinkers become discouraged and give up? It doesn't take a genius to know the answer: ly not.Here's the good news. In a wired world with constant global communication, we're all positioned to see flashes of genius wherever they appear. And the more we look, the more we will see that social factors(因素)like gender, race, and class do not determine the appearance of genius. As a writer says, future geniuses come from those with “intelligence, creativity, perseverance(毅力), and simple good fortune, who are able to change the world.”8. Whatdoes the author think of victors' standards for joining the genius club?A. They're unfair.B. They're conservative.C. They're objective.D. They're strict.9. What can we infer about girls from the study inScience?A. They think themselves smart.B. They look up to great thinkers.C. They see gender differences earlier than boys.D. They are likely to be influenced by social beliefs10. Why are more geniuses known to the public?A. Improved global communication.B. Less discrimination against women.C.Acceptance of victors' concepts.D. Changes in people's social positions.11. What is the best title for the text?A. Geniuses Think AlikeB. Genius Takes Many FormsC. Genius and IntelligenceD. Genius and LuckDSaroo Brierley, a 4-year-old boy, livedin ruralIndia. One day, he played with his brother along the rail line and fell asleep. When he woke up, he found himself alone. So he got on the train in front of him to search for his brother.That train took him a thousand miles across the country to a totally strange city. He lived on the streets, and then in an orphanage (孤儿院), where he was adopted by an Australian family and taken to Tasmania.Brierley is a famous writer now, and in his new book,A Long Way Home, he wrote he couldn’t help but wonder about his hometown back inIndia. He remembered landmarks, but since he didn’t know his town’s name, finding a small neighborhood in a vast country seemed impossible.Then he found a digital mapping program. He spent years searching for his hometown in the program’s satellite pictures. In 2011, he came across something familiar. He studied it and realized he was looking at a town’s central business district from a bird’s-eye view. He thought, “On the right-hand side you should see the three-platform train station”—and there it was. “And on the left-hand side you should see a big fountain”—and there it was. Everything matched!Standing in front of the house where he grew up as a child, he saw a lady standing at the entrance. It tookhim a few seconds but he finally remembered what she used to look like.In an interview Brierley says, “My mother came forth and walked forward, and I walked forward, my eyes filled with tears and my brain blank. I just didn’t know what to say, because I never thought seeing my mother would ever come true. And here I am, standing in front of her.”12. Why did Brierley get on the train when he was a little boy?A. To go back to his home.B. To look for his brother.C. To travel toTasmania.D. To follow a stranger.13. What made it difficult for Brierley to find his hometown?A. The vast area ofIndia.B. The fact that he was nobody then.C. His not remembering the town’s name.D. The distance betweenAustraliaand his hometown.14. How did Brierley find his hometown?A. By studying digital maps.B. By analyzing old pictures.C. By travelling all aroundIndia.D. By spreading his story via his book.15. What’s the best title of the passage?A. Love for MotherB. Union with BrotherC. Memory of HometownD. Long Way back Home第二节（共5小题；每小题2分，满分10分）阅读下面短文，从短文后的选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。
上海市闵行区2020年中考语文二模试卷含解析
上海市闵行区2020年中考二模语文试卷（满分150分，考试时间100分钟）考生注意：1．本试卷共25题。
2．请将所有答案做在答题纸的指定位置上，做在试卷上一律不计分。
一、文言文（40分）（一）默写（16分）1．夜来城外一尺雪，。
（《卖炭翁》）2．，浓睡不消残酒。
（《如梦令》）3．毅魄归来日，。
（《别云间》）4．俶尔远逝，。
（《小石潭记》）5．现在我们常用柳永《蝶恋花》中“，”来形容对理想的执着态度。
（二）阅读下面古诗文，完成第6—9题（12分）【甲】过零丁洋宋·文天祥辛苦遭逢起一经，干戈寥落四周星。
山河破碎风飘絮，身世浮沉雨打萍。
惶恐滩头说惶恐，零丁洋里叹零丁。
人生自古谁无死？留取丹心照汗青。
【乙】鱼我所欲也（节选）《孟子》鱼，我所欲也；熊掌，亦我所欲也。
二者不可得兼，舍鱼而取熊掌者也。
生，亦我所欲也；义，亦我所欲也，二者不可得兼，舍生而取义者也，生亦我所欲，所欲有甚于生者。
故不为苟得也；死亦我所恶，所恶有甚于死者，故患有所不辟也。
如使人之所欲鼓其于生，则凡可以得生者何不用也？使人之所恶莫甚于死者，则凡可以辟患者何不为也？由是则生而有不用也，由是则可以辟患而有不为也，是故所欲有甚于生者，所恶有过干死者。
非独贤者有是心也，人皆有之，贤者能勿丧耳。
6.甲诗中“汗青”指（2分）7.下列对甲诗的理解不正确的一项是（）（2分）A.首联作者回顾身世暗示自己对艰难困苦的无所畏惧。
B.颌联运用比喻写出国势衰微和个人一生的动荡不安。
C.颈联在喟叹中展示诗人因个人危难而内心颤栗痛苦。
D.尾联以磅礴气势直接表现诗人宁死不屈的民族气节。
8.用现代汉语翻译文中画线句。
（4分）人皆有之，贤者能勿丧耳。
9. 文天祥用自己的行动诠释了乙文的“”价值观；乙文中“是故所欲有甚于生者”的“所欲”在文天祥的甲诗中具体指“”。
（4分）（三）阅读下文，完成第10-12题（12分）盖公者，齐之胶西人也，明《老子》，师事乐臣公，汉之起，齐人争往于世主，唯盖公独道居不仕。
2020年高三二模作文分析
2020二模·崇明区现实生活中，有些人并没有因为信息获取的途径便捷、获得的信息多样，而改变更倾向于依据自以为对的信息作出判断的情况。
对此你有怎样的思考？请写一篇文章，谈谈你的看法。
要求：（1）自拟题目；（2）文体不限（诗歌除外）。
【解析】现实生活中，有些人并没有因为……而改变……的情况。
“信息获取的途径便捷、获得的信息多样”是时代背景；材料中暗含的意思是，在这样的时代背景或条件之下，我们理应去获取更多样的信息。
“更倾向于依据自以为对的信息作出判断”，这是一个一贯的动作，还在坚持着的动作；材料暗示出，这种做法是不对的。
1.为什么不对呢？“依据……作出判断”，自以为对的信息不一定是真正对的信息，据此作出的判断也就可能是错误的。
2.那么，这些人为什么不“改变”呢？（1）思维惯性让有些人还生活在旧世界里，他们看不到世界的变化。
（2）获取到的多样的信息，支离破碎，真假难辨，有些人缺乏处理多样信息的能力。
（3）“自以为对”，或许不是自以为自己获取的信息对，而只是对自己有利。
也就是说，有些人是立场先行，先有观点再找论据。
3.如何做？（1）观念上，需要认识到个人认识的局限性。
《秋水》的故事。
生活中，人们大多相信自己的判断。
其实每个人的认识不过是全景图中的一块碎片，只有承认这一局限，才可能有接近真相的判断。
（15年二模作文材料）（2）观念上，要有探寻事情真相的意愿。
（3）行动上，先要拥抱新世界，了解获取信息的途径，看到多样化的信息。
意大利导演朱塞佩•托纳多雷执导的电影《天堂电影院》里，有一句台词：“如果你不出去走走，你就会以为这就是全世界。
”（15年一模作文材料）（4）行动上，更重要的是需要独立思考的能力和习惯，处理多样化信息的能力。
跳出自我的预设如今是信息爆炸的时代，但是多元化的信息却未能让人们的认知更趋于多元化。
有些人总能在海量的信息中“精确”地找到符合自己刻板认识的信息，尽量避免与多元认知进行平等的对话。
2020高三二模闵行作文题“知善 行善“解析及范文
2020高三二模闵行作文题“行善”解析及范文（2篇范文是62--63分）原题回放：善良不只是一种常识，它更是一种行动，不通过行动表达，人就渐渐失去善良。
请写一篇文章，谈谈你对这段话的思考。
要求：（1）自拟题目；（2）不少于800字。
材料类型：现象类隐含观点型关键句：善良更是一种行动（行善---关键词）材料侧重：材料提供一种现象。
由“不是……更是……”可知，出题者强调的是后者，即“善良更是一种行动”---材料隐含的观点。
用以佐证的是“不通过行动表达，人就渐渐失去善良”。
我们可以问自己：什么是善良？为什么说善良不只是一种常识，它更是一种行动？为什么不通过行动表达，人就渐渐失去善良？我们应怎样去行动—行善？提几个常规问题就能打开思路了。
一.界定概念1.善良是中华民族的美德，传统文化追求“善”，今天我们强调真、善、美。
2.行善的具体表现：博施济众、解囊相助、救困扶危……不图回报的付出，爱憎分明的援助；对邪恶者的鄙夷，对弱势群体的怜悯。
3.助人脱困的凡人小事，救人于危难的壮举，对世间怀着真诚善意的博爱。
二.行善的原因、意义、作用1.常识是思维的律动，行动是现实的轨迹。
善良在常识中，仅仅是镜花水月的空中楼阁，需要逾越巨大的鸿沟，方能从理念变为行动。
2.没有落实到行动上的善良，即以无须出力为条件而对别人怀有良好的愿望的善良会让你浮躁虚伪。
3.行善是在传播阳光和雨露，能医治人们心灵的创伤，启迪人们的智慧，净化人们的灵魂，开阔人们的襟怀。
4.行善体现的是人高贵的品质，崇高的境界，精神的成熟，心灵的丰盈。
行善是种智慧，是种文化，是种快乐，是种乐观---赠人玫瑰，手有余香。
5.行善体现个人的善心，会提升人修养、品位。
6.毫无原则地行善，会让没有良知的人得寸进尺，为所欲为，更加贪得无厌，甚至会助纣为虐。
我们应有的做法1.善良本身是一种情感，一种美德，更要付诸行动，我们不能始于心灵的触动，却止于手脚的行动。
2.善良要讲技巧，行善要讲原则，我们在行善时要学会拒绝别人，学会以牙还牙。
2020初三上海闵行英语二模作文解析
2020初三闵行二模作文解析一、真题再现Writing at least60words on the topic”Ways to improve my online learning”(以“提高我在线学习效率的方法”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
)。
在线学习是当代青少年需要掌握的一项。
请结合居家学习期间自己在线学习中的具体事例，谈谈你有哪些提高学习效率的方法。
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。
）二、总体分析本次闵行区二模采用常考的命题形式以及最新的话题，学生们相对比较熟悉，所以难度正常。
三、审题立意1.这篇写作考察的是夹叙夹议体裁，写具体实例属于叙事，写方法属于议论。
一定要注意开头点题、经历以及议论是要互相呼应的，不要牛头不对马嘴。
2.书写的过程中要注意时态，故事主线用一般过去时，背景铺垫可以用过去进行时，开头和结尾的议论部分要用一般现在时，一定要特别注意时态的转换。
3.文章结构可采用20%开头点题+50%中间经历+30%结尾议论。
四、范文参考Ways to improve my online learningDuring the outbreak of the coronavirus,most of the countries in the world are suffering from it.The nation tightening control over theseverely infectious disease,the online classes are being conducted during our absence from school.Five days a week,we learn the required subjects featuring Chinese, maths,English and so on.And each of the daily six classes is scheduled to last40minutes,with a15-minute break between classes for eye exercises and self-relaxation.By getting actively involved in classes,I’ve adapted to such a unique way of learning and made great progress.From my experience of online learning,I have some suggestions to recommend.First and foremost,you should take up regular habits as usual so that you can be in a good state and be ready for lessons. Furthermore,you are supposed to keep away from you mobile phone if possible or delete the unnecessary apps at least,which can distract you all the st but not least,set clocks to alert you the schedule of attending classes,handing in assignments etc.In conclusion,have a correct awareness and make full use of it,you will benefit a lot.优秀词汇&词组1.scheduled adj.规定价格的;预定的;排定的;严格按时间表生活的;初中阶段，我们只学习了schedule作为名词的意思，即“课程表、日程”，但是此处运用了一个短语be scheduled to表示“被安排…”，能够运用到一次多词性的单词，是十分难得的。
上海市闵行区2020届高三第二次模拟考试语文试题 Word版含答案
2020届上海市闵行区高三二模语文试卷及答案一、积累应用（10分）1．按要求填空。
（5分）（1）_______________，憔悴损，_______________!（李清照《声声慢》）（2）分野中峰变，_______________。
（王维《终南山》）（3）苏轼《江城子·密州出猎》中“为报倾城随太守，亲射虎，看孙郎”句用典抒情，杜甫《登楼》中与其手法相同的两句是“__________________，__________________。
”2．按要求选择。
（5分）（1）有四位同学春游到一处景点，相约每人用古诗来表达对眼前秀美春光的欣喜之情，下列表达不恰当的一项是( )。
（2分）A．荠花榆荚深村里，亦道春风为我来。
B．燕子不归春事晚，一汀烟雨杏花寒。
C．胜日寻芳泗水滨，无边光景一时新。
D．便觉眼前生意满，东风吹水绿参差。
（2）填入下面语段空白处的语句，最恰当的一项是( )。
（3分）戏曲源远流长，是中华优秀传统文化的重要根脉。
毋庸讳言，其传承发展遇到了困境，观众逐步流失，市场慢慢萎缩，令人担忧。
一些戏曲人士自恃正宗，不肯轻易改变，______________________，是文化自信的题中应有之义。
①在文化市场多元丰富的今天②否则看戏的观众会越来越少③让戏曲在文艺百花园中风采依旧④但相当多的观众觉得戏曲要与时俱进⑤如何守正创新A.③⑤①②④B.⑤③①④②C.④②①⑤③D.④③②⑤①二、阅读（70分）（一）阅读下文，完成第3-7题。
（16分）社会学视野中的游戏与社会王水雄①网络空间因“网络游戏”而进一步拓展，人类“个人与社会”关系的基本格局随之而变，“游戏”越来越多地紧密地介入其中，形成“个人—游戏—社会”的关系链条，充实乃至部分替代传统的“个人—组织—社会”关系格局。
人类生活呈现出“游戏的社会化”和“社会的游戏化”这样两种相向而行的过程，在这里，游戏与娱乐、生存、生活乃在一起。
至劳动的场景彼此镶嵌．．②“游戏的社会化”是指基于快捷的网络信息传播能力，过去只有“相聚”在特定时空中才能玩的游戏，现在可在远隔重洋的两人、数人乃至成百上千人之间玩起来这样一个过程。
2020年上海市闵行中学高三英语二模试题及答案
2020年上海市闵行中学高三英语二模试题及答案第一部分阅读（共两节，满分40分）第一节（共15小题；每小题2分，满分30分）阅读下列短文，从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项AAmid the coronavirus outbreak, the U. S. Department of Homeland Security recommends having at least a two - week supply of water and food.PotatoesShelf life：2 to 5 weeks if stored in a cool, dry, dark placeYukon Gold, red, and fingerling potatoes will last from two to three weeks. Larger white potatoes can last for three to five weeks. Sweet potatoes have about the same shelf life. Don't store them next to onions, however. The two might go together well in cooking, but raw, each gives off gases and moisture that might cause the other to spoil faster.Tea※Shelf life：6 to 12 months past "sell - by" dateDried tea leaves, whether loose (in a sealed container) or in teabags (in an unopened box) can easily last a year or more if they' re not subjected to damp or humidity. However, the tea does tend to lose flavor over time.Peanuts● Shelf life：1 to 2 monthsPeanuts in their shell, especially when kept cool and dry, are perfectly happy in the cupboard for as long as two months.Canned fruits and vegetables● Shelf life：1 to 2 years past "sell - by” dateCanningis an extremely efficient means of preserving food. Generally speaking, if canned foods aren't subjected to extreme heat, their contents should stay good for two years or more. Be aware, however, of dented cans or those with swollen tops, which may indicate the presence of bacteria inside.1. Which can go bad faster if stored with onions?A. Potatoes.B. Tea.C. Peanuts.D. Canned fruits and vegetables.2. What is special about tea?A. The flavor of tea can always remain the same.B. Tea leaves are better to be preserved in an open jar.C. Tea leaves should be kept away from the state of being wet.D. The maximum length of time that tea can be stored is 6 months.3. What may shorten the "sell - by” date of canned foods ?A. Shapes of cans.B. Categories of foods.C. Decline of the temperature.D. Exposure to high temperature.BPeople saved a 20-foot orca (虎鲸) that was stuck between rocks on an Alaskan shore by continuously pouring water over it and protecting it from birds who circled above the defenseless whale.The whale was ultimately saved after a six-hour, labor-intensive life-saving operation. Someone spotted the large whale on the Prince of Wales Island near the coast of British Columbia on the morning of July 29th. The Coast Guard was called around 9 a.m. local time. Chance Strickland, the captain of a private yacht in Alaska, and his crew anchored and began life-saving action that were videoed by Aroon Melane and posted on the Internet.Strickland could hear the orca calling out to killer whales swimming in the area. People on other boats stopped with water and buckets to pour water over the animal. “There were tears coming out of its eyes,” Mr. Strickland told the local newspaper. “It was pretty sad.”The group of people formed a chain that passed buckets of seawater back and forth and poured the water on the orca, which seemed to liven it up. It made a noise and raised its tail when it got water.The National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration (NOAA) was called in, which can be seen on the video using a machine to spray amist of seawater on the orca, which doubled as a way to keep the whale cool and scare the large group of birds that were hoping to feast on the beast.Melane said in her video that the orca was stranded (搁浅) for about six hours until the tide came in andswept it back into the ocean. The group efforts of Strickland’s crew and the NOAA saved the 13-year-old killer whale.4. Why did birds circle above the orca?A. They were eager to eat it.B. They wished to protect it.C. They were attracted by the people.D. They wanted to find a place to rest.5. What did Strickland do immediately after finding the whale?A. Posted pictures online.B. Called friends for help.C. Took action to save it.D. Videoed the trapped animal.6. Why did the whale make a noise and raise its tail?A. To express its eager for water.B. To extend its thanks to people.C. To call out to its fellow whales.D. To show its power and sadness.7. Which can be the best title for the text?A. Killer Whale Got SavedB. The Orca Inspired KindnessC. Combined Efforts WantedD. Animals and Humans UnitedCThe idea came to him when he least expected it. Alvin Irby was at a barbershop when he saw one of his former students sitting in the shop with a bored look on his face. That’s when Irby realized that by pairing barbershops and books, he might be able to inspire young boys to read.Alvin Irby, a former kindergarten and first-grade teacher, knows how important it is for young children to read. He also knows that young boys in particular often don’t have adult male role models who inspire them to read. “Many young boys may literally never see a man reading in school during the years when they’re learning to read because there are so few male elementary school teachers,” Irby toldMashable.That’s where the barbershops come in. Four years ago, Irby launched Barbershop Books as a way to not just get books into the hands of young boys, but also to create community reading spaces in a place where kids go frequently. Since itsinceptionin 2013, the program has created kid-friendly reading spaces in 50 barbershops in 12 states throughout the United States.Irby isn’t the first person to see the connection between barbershops and books and boys. Hair stylist Courtney Holmes, launched a program a few years ago offering free haircuts to kids as long as they read to him while he cuts their hair.That’s the kind of environment that Irby wants to promote with his program. The reading spaces created by Barbershop Books help to spark an interest in books by showing kids that reading is about more than just spelling and vocabulary skills, it’s about making reading a low-stress activity that can help them relax, laugh and have fun.“Our belief is that if we can create positive reading experiences early and often for young boys, then they will choose to read for fun,” Irby noted, adding, “This is really what Barbershop Books is about, getting young boys to say three words: I’m a reader.”8. What happened to Alvin when he was at a barbershop?A. He found it easy for young people to get bored.B. He offered a barbershop to his former student.C. He thought of a way to encourage young readers.D. He realized the importance of reading for young boys.9. What is the function of Barbershop Books?A. To attract more customers who love films.B. To provide free haircuts to book lovers.C. To show the influence of reading on children.D. To create a reading environment fbr children.10. It can be inferred from the passage that ________.A. reading is a low-stress activity that is relaxingB. Barbershop Books is only suitable for young boysC. Irby attaches great importance to school educationD. Barbershop Books can arouse (引起) young people’s interest in reading11. What does the underlined word “inception” in the 3rdparagraph mean?A. discovery.B. success.C. popularity.D. beginning.DLike all cultural institutions, galleries and art fairs are adapting to a new reality.Art Basel Hong Kong, Asia's biggest contemporary-art fair, was cancelled because of covid-19, but anyone he who had planned to visit last week could enjoy an experimental alternative：the viewing room. At the click of a keyboard) you could enter an overall view but private visual salon, without having to brave the airless Hong Kong Convention and Exhibition Centre.There, on one webpage, was Jeff Koons riffing(翻唱)on Botticelli's "Primavera" in a tribute to the history of painting at David Zwirner Gallery. Ota Fine Arts offered one collector the chance to acquire an "infinity(无限)room“, one of the most Instagrammed artworks of recent years- the creation of the fantasies,nonagenarian (九十多岁) Japanese artist, Yayoi Kusama. White Cube presented a large collection of international works by Andreas Gursky (German), Theaster Gates (American) and Beatriz Milhazes (Brazilian). But not every artist, gallery and form showed to equal advantage in this alternative fair. Not surprisingly, simple two-dimensional works in bright colours came across best No sculpture or conceptual art was includedBesides depth and texture, there are aspects of gallery hopping that a website is unlikely to copy. Oneisserendipity—the sense of wandering between artworks and encountering the unexpected. Another is sociability. Art is a communion between artist and viewer, but galleries and fairs are also places to swap opinions and share enthusiasms.Thereare ways to compensate (or these inevitable(不可避免的)disadvantages. As they shut their physical doors, some of the world's nest galleries and museums are offering advanced interactive visits, 360 degree videos and walk around tours of their collections, allwithout queues and high ticket prices. One of the best is laid on by the Rijksmuseum in Amsterdam；its tour allows visitors to view its Vermeers and Rembrandts, including the magnicent "Night Watch”, far more closely than would normally he possible. Another standout offering is from the Museu de Arte de SPaulo, which has an even broader collection. On its virtual platform, its pain tings, spanning 700 years, appear to be hanging in an open-plan space, seemingly hung on glass panels, or "crystal easels” as the. museum calls them, ideal for close-up inspection,12. From the paragraph 3, we may knowA. "Primavera" was originally painted by JeKoonsB.“innity room” was the most popular artworks of recent years on social mediaC. White Cube displayed a great many works by artists from different nationsD. Various paintings and statues showed on the webpage are well-received13. What does the underlined word "serendipity" in Paragraph 4 probably mean?A. surpriseB. treasureC. expectationD. compromise14. What is the purpose of writing the last paragraph?A.To introduce some popular art show in the world.B. To show that there are some alternative ways to promote the display during covid-19 epidemic.C. To prove that paintings hung on glass panels can be idealfor close-up inspection,D. To release some information about some extraordinary art shows.15. What is the best title?A. Art beyond the internet.B. Fascinating art.C. Art under covid-19.D. gallery hopping第二节（共5小题；每小题2分，满分10分）阅读下面短文，从短文后的选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。
2020年上海闵行区高三二模语文试卷(答案+解析)
2020年上海闵行区高三二模语文试卷考生注意：1.答卷前，考生务必在答题纸上将自己的姓名、准考证号、所在学校及班级等填写清楚。
2.所有试题的答案必须全部涂（选择题）或写（非选择题）在答题纸上，写在试卷上一律不给分。
答题时应注意试题题号和答题纸题号一一对应，不能错位。
3.本试卷共6页。
满分150分。
考试时间150分钟。
一、积累应用（10分）1．按要求填空。
（5分）（1）_____________________，憔悴损，_____________________!（李清照《声声慢》）（2）分野中峰变，_____________________。
（王维《终南山》）（3）苏轼《江城子·密州出猎》中“为报倾城随太守，亲射虎，看孙郎”句用典抒情，杜甫《登楼》中与其手法相同的两句是“_____________________，_____________________。
”2．按要求选择。
（5分）（1）有四位同学春游到一处景点，相约每人用古诗来表达对眼前秀美春光的欣喜之情，下列表达不恰当的一项是（）。
（2分）A．荠花榆荚深村里，亦道春风为我来。
B．燕子不归春事晚，一汀烟雨杏花寒。
C．胜日寻芳泗水滨，无边光景一时新。
D．便觉眼前生意满，东风吹水绿参差。
（2）填入下面语段空白处的语句，最恰当的一项是（）。
（3分）戏曲源远流长，是中华优秀传统文化的重要根脉。
毋庸讳言，其传承发展遇到了困境，观众逐步流失，市场慢慢萎缩，令人担忧。
一些戏曲人士自恃正宗，不肯轻易改变，_______ ___，是文化自信的题中应有之义。
①在文化市场多元丰富的今天②否则看戏的观众会越来越少③让戏曲在文艺百花园中风采依旧④但相当多的观众觉得戏曲要与时俱进⑤如何守正创新A.③⑤①②④B.⑤③①④②C.④②①⑤③D.④③②⑤①【答案】1.（1）满地黄花堆积如今有谁堪摘（2）阴晴众壑殊（3）可怜后主还祠庙日暮聊为《梁甫吟》2.（1）B （2）C【解析】1.考察了文言文的记忆默写和理解性默写，注意平时积累和理解古诗，不能死记硬背。
2020届闵行区梅陇中学高三语文二模试题及答案
2020届闵行区梅陇中学高三语文二模试题及答案一、现代文阅读（36分）(一)现代文阅读I(9分)阅读下面的文字，完成下列小题。
材料一：近日，媒体从北京市公安局网安总队获悉，“星援”App利用粉丝给偶像刷流量的需求疯狂牟利，帮助歌坛“小鲜肉”流量艺人蔡徐坤制造1亿微博转发量，半年内吸金800余万元的案件事实成立。
此案件一经公布就在社会上引发了强烈的反响。
这表明，法治的利剑终于落在了“流量造假”的头上。
在这起“星援”App的刑事犯罪案件中，涉案者高二学生陈芳（化名）称，她每天都会登录“星援”App并完成粉丝组长布置的转发任务。
转发，点赞，打榜，做完一系列活动后，她凭借“超话社区”参加抽奖活动，获得更加接近“爱豆”（偶像）的机会，每个月花费约1000元。
针对粉丝购买相关服务，通过平台、商家等自动转发评论明星微博的行为，北京康达律师事务所律师韩骁就曾对媒体表示，虽然这是一种粉丝自愿行为，但属于数据造假，违反了《中华人民共和国电信条例》和《北京市微博客发展管理若干规定》中关于实名制注册，不得以虚假身份办理入网手续、实施扰乱网络传播秩序的法律规定，应予以禁止。
（摘编自曾庆瑞《以法治利剑剜掉“流量造假”的毒瘤》，《光明日报》2019年6月18日）材料二：应该承认，数据的确可以成为一个指标，毕竟也不是哪一个明星都能吸引那么多粉丝……问题不在于数据本身，而是我们对于数据的态度：我们该如何看待数据？现在的粉丝圈将数据视为唯一。
这种不自觉的“唯数据论”，会带来深远的恶果。
一个是疯狂的数据造假。
央视曾专题列举了8个艺人的相关数据，记录了他们相关数据脱水前和脱水后的具体对比，造假比例最高的居然达到了80%。
另一个糟糕的影响是，造假会给粉丝圈的年轻人带来一种错误的价值观：哪怕造假了也没有关系，只要最后赢了就行。
我不管你什么是非曲直，数据才是硬通货，只要偶像通过数据赢得利益即可。
当有人批评她们的偶像时，她们就扔出一堆数据：偶像这么红，你批评就是在黑他！（摘编自陈子非《周杰伦赢蔡徐坤超话登顶，能浇灭流量时代的数据狂热吗？》，《南方周末》2019年7月22日）材料三：在资本的影响下，流量创造的粉丝经济，不断抬高流量明星的身价和地位，也让粉丝心甘情愿地掏钱，以致于“刷量”成为业内公开的秘密。