高三英语看图作文讲评
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第五步连句成篇， 第五步连句成篇，过渡自然
对译出的要点通过合理的组合，加 对译出的要点通过合理的组合， 上必要的连接词或词语以及照顾到文章 的首尾呼应，再加上必要的结束语。 的首尾呼应，再加上必要的结束语。
参考答案 It was March the eighth that day, Women’s Day. LiHua had a good idea and told his father that he was going to do something to celebrate it. He asked his father to help him. First they decided to do some housework, which was always done by his mother. LiHua cleaned the house completely while his father did some washing.
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下列四幅图描述了李华一家某一天的经历。请根 下列四幅图描述了李华一家某一天的经历。 据画面及图中的有关提示， 据画面及图中的有关提示，用第三人称的口吻 写一篇120字左右的短文意：可以适当增加细节，并展开合理的想 使故事完整连贯。 象，使故事完整连贯。
第二幅图 They decided to do some housework, which was always done by his mother. LiHua cleaned the house completely. His father did some washing.
高三英语看图作文讲评
你好吗？ 每天都会有一声问候，出现在我的手机微信里。 我已经习惯了这样的问候，好像是仪式一样。报完平安，我也会给对方送去一个问候：“你好吗？” 我和小雨每天都这样彼此问候着。 小雨是儿童文学作家，我们是好朋友。春节前几天，我们应邀在南方的一个城市参加了一个文学大赛。我们不仅各自做了一场讲座，而且还是颁奖嘉宾。交谈，座谈，散会后的交流，我们是最近距 离和最频繁的接触者。 那时，关于肺炎传播传染的消息已经铺天盖地了。主办方也忐忑不安，连夜召开区的参与者，最后还是决定如期 举办。我始终没有看轻或者敌视疫情重点地区人员的想法，只觉得他们是值得同情的受害者。
高三英语看图作文讲评
She turned off the light and was leaving the classroom when she turned around to make sure all things were done well. Just then it began to rain heavily.when she got home,it was already half past three.
She hurried right to her classroom and opened the door.Oh,dear! All the windows were open,and the strong wind filled the classroom with great noise.it was not at all easy for her to shut up all the windows.
The wind blowing in through the open window made her feel a bit cold. She knew a heavy rain would soon arrive.She thought of her classroom again. She wondered whether the students on duty had closed the windows properly. She got up and put on her clothes.It was then 2 o’clock.
看图作文讲评
芳芳是个好学生。请根据下面5幅图用英语 写一篇短文，词数120以上.
• 如果单从画面看，所得的信息无非是：一天夜里， 风刮得很大。芳芳两点钟起床，赶到学校，把窗 户关好后回家。 • 如果你就按上述所看到的信息去写，肯定拿不到 高分。这是篇记叙文，记叙了芳芳做好事的前后 经过。但记叙离不开人。所以要根据“芳芳是个 好学生”这个信息对人物展开合理的想象：Fang Fang is a good student.She lives near her school.This term she was elected monitor of her class.She is a very responsible for her class work.给下面的叙述奠定了基础。
高三英语看图作文讲评汇编文字讲稿
高三英语看图作文讲评汇编文字讲稿8为迎接高考，你常常复习功课到深夜。
请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记。
1、审题①体裁：日记文体。
②主要时态：一般过去时，描述我一天上午的经历。
③人称：第一人称④要点：记叙描绘文体，抓住四个要点：时间、地点、人物、事件的前后经过。
⑤注意日记的格式。
2、简译为迎接高考，“我”常常复习功课到深夜。
I often stay up late to go over my lessons for college entrance examination．Picture 1:I woke up at nine o’clock this morning .Picture 2:I got dressed.I rushed into the living room .Mother was preparing breakfast there .Picture 3:I got on my bike .Picture 4:When I got to the school,I found the schoolgate was closed.3、衔接将图中和图与图之间隐藏的要点挖掘出来。
对第一幅图所反应的内容我们要交待其原因：如：昨天晚上直到12点才睡觉。
Last night I didn’t go to bed until 12 O’ clock．对第二幅图我们要根据常识补出：（起来后）要洗漱：I brushed my teeth and washed my face quickly.对于第二和第三幅图之间我们也应该根据常识补出下列要点：图中的母亲有没有讲什么？（因为时间紧张，母亲没有来得及讲什么）我去上学肯定要拿什么？（书包）Before she could say anything，I got my school-bag…对于第三幅图，我们可以相象一下：“我”骑车往学校赶的路上的心情害怕迟到受处罚，而拼命地骑车I was afraid that I would be punished by the teacher because of be late so I rode as fast as I could. 对于第四幅图我们可以推测：因为车骑得快，因而心理感到好象没过几分钟就到了学校．It seemed only a few minutes before l got to the school.4、成文加上过渡词语、改变一些句式，整理成文。
英语高考作文 看图作文评价
能表达丰富的内容所致；体现了较强的 语言运用能力； • 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，所写 内容连贯、结构紧凑。 完全达到了预期的写作目的。
Model:①
In the morning of Feb.8,2018, I was walking along on the park road. A old man was acrossing the park road. The car hitted the old man , the
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对全文检查要点：
1）要点是否全
2）字数统计及检查体裁、 人称、主体时态.
3）标点、大小写及拼写错误
4）语法（如语态、人称和数、 句子结构、用词等是否正确及 时态是否一致）
Model:①
In the morning of Feb.8,2018, I was walking along on the park road. A old man was acrossing the park road. The car hitted the old man , the
car don’t stop but drived away quickly. I remembered the car number is AC864.
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• 未能传达任何信息：写的内容与要求无 关。
第五档 （1—5分）
未完成试题规定的任务。 • 明显遗漏主要内容； • 句式单调、词汇贫乏； • 语法或用词方面错误较多，严重影响了
《高三英语看图作文讲评汇编6》
• 5、连句成篇，过渡自然 • 对译出的要点通过合理的组合，加上必
要的连接词或词语以使表达连贯，再加 上文章开头和结尾的话照顾到文章的首 尾呼应。
• My uncle will never forget what happened to him yesterday.
• How he regretted what he had done!
• 将围绕主题初选出的要点和 经过合理想象补出的要点翻 译出来并连成句子。将图中 和图与图之间隐藏的要点挖 掘出来。
• 第一幅图：Yesterday evening my uncle was invited to dinner by his friends.He was so glad that he drank a lot of beers.As a result he got drunk.
• 第二幅图：根据他说的话：No problem可以推断：朋 友劝他，他没听，坚持驾车回家
• 第三幅图：酒后驾车，可以想象开车的情况：蜿蜒向 前，撞树出事故。根据第四幅图可推断他没有死而是 受了伤。警察到现场，将他送往医院。
• 第四幅图：因伤势严重，要住院几天；警察对他处罚 吊销驾照
• 4、变点为句
第四幅图：He had to stay in hospital for several days because of being seriously injurned. He was fined by the police and his driving license was revoked.
• How he regretted what he had done!
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高考英语 书面表达专题指导与练习讲评(图画式作文)练习讲评一
高考英语书面表达专题指导与练习讲评（图画式作文）练习讲评一下图叙述了你和父亲散步时所发生的事情。
请根据下面6幅图，用英语写一篇题为An Accident的短文。
短文必须包括以下内容：1.图中讲述了一个什么故事？2.女孩的言行说明了什么问题？3.你对此事有什么感想？注意：1.对于图中所发生的事情可以适当发挥想象，增加有关细节，但必须合理；2.词数：150左右（标题已经给出不计入总词数）。
An Accident①有一天，我和父亲在湖边散步；②一个女孩骑自行车路过（结合后面的图中所反映的内容可以推断女孩骑车的速度很快）。
我们要将第二、三两幅图连起来看，才容易提炼要点。
根据第三幅图可以看出是有人掉到湖里了。
根据第一幅图可以推测是骑自行车的女孩。
结合常识提炼出下列要点：①听到人可怕的尖叫声和有什么掉到水里的声音；②转过头看到女孩在水里挣扎，在喊“救命啊！”。
对这幅图我们要展开合理的想象。
根据图中“我”头脑中的问号，可以推断“我”感到非常困惑。
为什么？结合常识“得到了别人的帮助，理应表示感谢”。
再根据图中“女孩已经骑车离去”可以推断女孩连声“谢谢”恐怕都没有说。
这样推断才能为后面谈谈感想埋下伏笔。
遣词造句（注意多重表达）One day Daddy and I were taking a walk by the lake .A girl rode past at a very high speed.We heard a frightened scream.There was a big noise of something dropping into the water.Something dropped into the water, making a big noise.We turned and found the girl struggling in the lake.The girl was crying for help.We heard the girl crying for help.Dad and I ran as possible as quickly towards her and pulled her out of the water.Without hesitation, Dad and I ran quickly towards her and saved her.We also managed to get her bike which fell into the lake.We were also able to pull her bike out of the water.The girl rode away even without saying＂Thanks＂.I had thought the girl would say ＂Thank you＂to us before she left, but she said nothing and rode away.I felt quite puzzled at her behavior.I felt quite disappointed at her impoliteness.连贯成篇One day Daddy and I were taking a walk by the lake when a girl rode past at a very high speed. Then suddenly we heard a frightened scream, followed by a big noise of something dropping into the water. We turned and found the girl struggling in the lake, crying for help. Without hesitation, Dad and I ran quickly towards her and pulled her out of the water. We also managed to get her bike. Almost immediately,the girl rode away even without saying＂Thanks＂. I felt quite puzzled at her impoliteness.围绕女孩的无礼行为自拟感想①对自己：为什么要帮助别人？帮助别人是明德，不是图别人的感谢；②对女孩的无礼进行评论：许多年轻人不懂礼貌，这对建设和谐社会非常有害。
高三英语看图作文讲评
八点多，别人还在觥筹交错，我们就结伴回酒店了。路上，那个比我年长几岁，在我心目中一直是“老奸巨猾”印象的销售经理跟我说，他父亲11月去世了，58岁，去世前，病了十九年。我拍拍他 的肩膀，什么也没说。他送我到酒店，我俩又聊了一个小时，交流工作和生活，一起吐槽。他像往常一样，笑呵呵说了很多，在无数扯淡里，也给了我一些有用的建议。等他笑着告辞走了，我跟自己说， 完全看不出来……拉上窗帘前，我看了眼远处的灯光，用最后一点矫情，跟西安说了声晚安。
六、臊子面，或许不是
我没纠结天天的事儿，跟叶子随便说了两句就挂断了，趴床上处理完邮件，又写了篇文章。然后，是学英语。快11点的时候，老板发来信息，又安排了一份工作任务。第二天的活动挺顺利，唯一美 中不足的是午餐，太素。不过，这并不妨碍我吃很多。负责做讲座应用部经理对这种午餐没有兴趣，销售经理很是善解人意地出去给她买了份水盆羊肉回来。她是我们公司的技术大拿，也是我的老同 事老朋友了，我到现在这家公司，跟她也有关系。下午，她就赶飞机回上海了，因为孩子明天要考试。我跟销售经理留下参加主办方的晚宴，很丰盛，有各色牛羊肉，清蒸鱼，还有葫芦鸡。最重要的是， 还上了一大碗面条。本以为要跟臊子面失之交臂的我，开心地拍照发到群里说：“臊子面，可算吃到了。”结果，有人提醒我说：“像是油泼面。”面条味道很一般，也可能是因为上来太晚，我已经吃 撑了，所以吃不出味道。球探比分
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