英语作文 怎样赢得“大满分” ——衔接要“巧”, 过渡要“妙”

第四讲怎样赢得“大满分”——衔接要“巧”，过渡要“妙”审题、拟点、联句，接下来就是润色成文。

有效地使用语句间的连接成分巧妙地衔接过渡，利用好“起、承、转、合”四方法使文章流畅自然，是考生书面表达争创满分的必备条件。

【常用开头词汇】表示“起”的词汇常用在段落或文章的开头，用于开篇引出扩展句。

常见的词汇有：first, firstly, first of all, at first, in the first place, above all, to begin/start with, today, nowadays, at present, currently, recently, generally speaking, according to等。

First, I think everyone needs friends and is eager to get friendship.First of all, we must make full use of every 45-minute lesson.Nowadays/Recently, people in many big cities are complaining about the heavy traffic.In the first place, she can read at the rate of 100 words a minute.To begin with, smoking should be banned in public areas.Generally speaking, the more you practise, the more skillfully you can write in English.【常用开头句式】As the proverb says/As the saying goes, “Time is money.”As can be seen from the table, nearly everyone owns one mobile phone in China.With the development of the Internet, computers play an important role in people’s life.It goes without saying that it pays to keep early hours.There is no denying that successful business lies in a healthy body and mind.It is believed that health is above wealth.It is well known that the elephant is a very kind and gentle animal.I’m excited to learn that we are going to start a magazine.【满分作文选粹】(2015·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.(2014·江苏高考书面表达)Today, more and more English words find their way into the Chinese language.(2014·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)First of all, I’d like to know when the class will start and how many students there will be in a class.(2014·天津高考书面表达)Firstly, I’d like to tell you something about the weather in my city, which is often windy and very cold in winter.(2014·天津高考书面表达)I’m glad to hear that you will come to our school as an exchange student.【常用顺承词汇】表示“承”的词汇常用于承接主题句或第一个扩展句。

常用的词汇有：second/secondly, also, besides, in addition, soon afterwards, after that, what’s more, furthermore, moreover, still less, to make matters worse, what is worse, worse still, for example, in other words, especially, particularly, obviously, meanwhile, at the same time等。

Also, do let me know if you need more information.Secondly, we should get up early to memorize idioms and useful expressionsWhat’ s more, good books can help us to develop good characters.In addition, we shouldn’t neglect that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society. Meanwhile/At the same time, I will regard it as my duty to keep our environment clean and healthy.【常用顺承句式】Take Beijing for example, it is one of the oldest cities in the world.What is more serious is that we don’t cherish wildlife.As far as I am concerned, they stand for love, friendship and unity.【满分作文选粹】(2015·四川高考书面表达)In addition, I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life.(2014·北京高考书面表达)Soon afterwards, a second entrance was opened to the parking place. (2014·福建高考书面表达)Worse still, I took many falls off the bike.(2014·安徽高考书面表达)Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.(2014·福建高考书面表达)After that, I regained my enthusiasm for English and spent much more time and energy working on this particular subject.【常用转折过渡词汇】表示“转”的词汇常用来表示不同或相反的意见或情况。

常见的词汇有：but, yet, however, while, otherwise, or (else), on the contrary, on the other hand, contrary to, in any case, though, although, as, even if/though, despite, in spite of, regardless of等。

But unfortunately I mind my own business without considering my parents.However, not until the match was over did we realize that we became the loser.On the other hand, online shopping also has many disadvantages.On the contrary, the volunteers always claim that they are tired of the life on earth.Contrary to what I had originally said, the trip turned out to be fun.【满分作文选粹】(2015·江苏高考书面表达)But rules alone don’t secure an orderly society.(2014·湖南高考书面表达)However, what amazes you most is the following new function. (2014·重庆高考书面表达)On the contrary, smart phones not only take up our valuable time, but also do great harm to our health.【常用结尾词汇】表示“合”的词汇常用于小结上文的内容，引导最后一个扩展句或引导结尾句表示段落的结束。

常见的词汇有：finally, last but not least, in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a/one word, to sum up, all in all, on the whole, in general等。

All in all, travelling is the best choice to recharge ourselves and get ready for the new challenges. In conclusion, a good citizen should observe traffic regulations.On the whole, I find a bike more enjoyable than a motorcycle.In a word, success is important, and so is failure, because it’s the mother of success.To sum up, environmental protection is of great importance, which can make us live more comfortably and healthily.【常用结尾句式】I’d appreciate it if you could deliver them as soon as possible.It is high time that we did something to prevent the environment from being polluted.Only with combined efforts can we expect our hometown to take on a new look in the near future.We can, therefore, come to the conclusion that nothing is so precious as peace in the world. From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that you must have self-confidence if you want to achieve something.【满分作文选粹】(2015·湖北高考书面表达)From this experience I have learnt that questioning can serve as a bridge that helps us to seek the truth.(2015·安徽高考书面表达)Finally, I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life, which must be very interesting.(2015·陕西高考书面表达)I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration. (2014·江苏高考书面表达)In short, not only has the inclusion poisoned Chinese, it may also bring about distance between the Chinese people.(2014·全国卷Ⅱ书面表达)In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful. (2014·浙江高考书面表达)I’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.(2014·江西高考书面表达)Last but not least, health is also very significant for us students.Ⅰ用词汇或句式完成句子1．____________(首先), the most significant thing is to set a goal, work out a plan and carry out your plan step by step.答案：First of all/To begin with2．____________________(就我而言), I love wealth, but I value health more.答案：As far as I am concerned3．____________________(事实上), advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life.答案：As a matter of fact/In fact4．____________(况且), listening to some soft music does relax your mood and give you a new start.答案：Besides/In addition/What’s more/Moreover5．I lost my way in the forest and____________________(更糟的是), it became dark.答案：to make matters worse/worse still/what was worse6．____________(因此), I suggest we be given more time for sports and sleep.答案：Therefore7．____________(总之), changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience.答案：In a word/In conclusion/In short/In brief8．____________________(确实到了……的时候了) we took some measures to solve the problem.答案：It’s high time that9．__________________________(我们可以得出一个结论) our society is progressing and people are living a better life than ever before.答案：We can draw a conclusion that10．______________________________(我从这次经历中了解到) being careful is very important and that we can’t be too careful, especially in examinations.答案：From this experience, I learned thatⅡ篇章训练(2016·江淮十校联考)近来，中学生普遍缺乏自我保护意识这一问题备受关注，请你用英语写一篇短文：1．概括中学生自我保护的重要性；2．就如何保护自己谈谈你的看法(至少两点)。