高考英语大一轮复习 渐进写作全辑 Step Two 第11讲 引人入胜的开头与回味无穷的结尾讲义 牛津译林版
人教版新高考英语一轮复习Fascinating Parks 引人入胜的公园
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6.rewarding adj.值得做的; 有益的→ reward v.奖励; 汇报; 奖赏
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7.appeal vi.有吸引力; 呼吁; 恳求; 上诉 n. 吸引力; 呼吁; 上诉; 请求 → appealing adj.有吸引力的; 吸引人的 8.adorable adj.可爱的; 讨人喜爱的→ adore vt.热爱; 爱慕(某人); 喜 欢 9.amusement n. 娱乐(活动); 愉悦→ amuse vt.(提供)消遣; (使)娱乐 10.fashion n. 时尚; 时兴; 流行款式→ fashionable adj.时尚的; 流行的 11.rare adj.稀少的; 珍贵的; (肉)半熟的→ rarely adv.很少 12.entertainment n. 娱乐; 招待; 娱乐活动; 文娱节目 → entertain vt.(使)快乐; 招待→ entertaining adj.有趣的; 使人愉快 的
cream incredible 形容词(adj.) adorable enormous rewarding
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高考英语新增分大一轮渐进写作全辑 (6)
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(二)
学生会做了一个关于中学生睡眠、饮食和休闲等生活习惯的调查，发现
学生有不良习惯。请根据以下信息写一篇150词左右的短文。要点包括：
1.不良习惯：晚上熬夜，不吃早餐上学，长时间上网聊QQ和玩游戏；
2.简述这些坏习惯可能产生的影响；
3.请根据下表提示，写写你认为中学生应培养的健康生活习惯。
our eyes. _________
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I think it’s important for us to live a healthy life.First，we should have ____________________________________________________________________ good eating habits.We can eat more vegetables and fruit.Second，we should ____________________________________________________________________ take more exercise.We can play basketball and football as well as swim.Third， ____________________________________________________________________ in my opinion，reading can make us relaxed.Helpful books can help us a lot. ____________________________________________________________________ Finally，when we feel bad，we can listen to soft music to make us peaceful. __________________________________________________________________
2021版高考英语大一轮复习步骤化写作增分第二步过句子关第一讲句子如何写对讲义
2021版高考英语大一轮复习步骤化写作增分第二步过句子关第一讲句子如何写对讲义第一讲句子如何写对第1课时简单句的五种差不多句式句子成分构成了英语中各种各样的句子，事实上英语中最差不多的句式只有五种，其他各种句式差不多上由这五种差不多句式演变而来。
一、主语＋谓语(不及物动词)该句式常用来表示主语的动作或状态。
其特点为：句子的谓语动词都能表达完整的意思，这类动词叫作不及物动词，后面能够接副词、介词短语、状语从句等。
①What’s worse, I don’t communicate well i n my family.(2021·天津高考满分作文)更糟糕的是，在家庭中我不善交流。
②And I can play outside too！(2021·四川高考书面表达)我也能够在别处玩！[名师指津]主语和不及物动词(短语)是组成本句型不可缺少的必要成分。
在实际运用中，不及物动词往往与副词、介词及其他相关成分有相对稳固的搭配关系。
我们在学习此句型时，应当重视不同动词与其相关词汇的搭配关系。
二、主语＋谓语(及物动词)＋宾语该句式特点为：谓语动词均为实义动词，差不多上主语发出的动作，但不能表达完整的意思，必须跟一个宾语(宾语能够由名词、代词、动名词、不定式等来充当)，即动作的承担者，才能表达完整的意思。
①We debated over what to put into the video.(2021·北京高考书面表达)我们讨论了该把什么放进视频中。
②I plan to find a parttime job in a foreign capital company.(2021·全国卷Ⅰ书面表达)我打算在一家外资公司里找一份兼职。
[名师指津]上述例句差不多上本句型的典型句子，修饰谓语动词的状语通常放在句末。
这些状语多数是副词或介词短语，也能够用名词短语、分词或不定式短语等作状语。
高考英语大一轮复习步骤化写作增分第二步过句子关第二讲句子如何写美第2课时从内容上意蕴丰满课件
Ⅱ.用非谓语动词进行句型转换
1．I went back home proudly that afternoon. I jumped with joy. →I went back home proudly that afternoon, jumping with joy .(分词作状语)
第二讲 句子如何写美
第2课时 从内容上意蕴丰满
一、灵活改变句子开头
在通常情况下，英语句子的排列方式为“主语＋谓语＋ 宾语”，即主语位于句子开头。但若根据情况适当改变句子 的开头方式，比如使用倒装语序或以状语开头等，就会增强 文章的表现力。
在写作中，倒装句型应用比较广泛，涉及的句型主要包 括部分倒装和全部倒装。
→ Thinking that his solution might be wrong , I carefully analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way.(2015·湖北高考短文写作)
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Ⅰ.用倒装句型进行句型转换
In the newspaper of our school there is a column called “Foreign Cultures”，aiming to introduce American customs and the life of high school students.(2015·全国卷Ⅰ满分作文)
2．To return to the problem of water pollution, I’d like you to look at a study. It was conducted in Australia in 2012. →To return to the problem of water pollution, I’d like you to look at a study conducted in Australia in 2012 . (过去分词作定语)
2023届高考英语一轮复习小作文万能开场句型梳理课件(适用于有活动和主题类的小作文开头)
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writing to apply to be a volunteer.
（4） 为期一个月的中国古代瓷器（Chinese Porcelain） 艺术展将于下周日在你市博物馆开幕， 你想邀请外教Andrew一起前往。 首句：中国古代瓷器展 将会被举办 在我市博物馆 下 周日。我写信来邀请你一同前往。
翻Th译e：Exhibition of Ancient Chinese Porcelain __wI__’m__il__l __wb__er__it__ihn__e__g__ldt__o__n__ine____vx__itt__eS__u__yn__o__du__a__tyo____ag__t__o__ot__ou__rg____ec__tith__y__e__mr__. __u__s__e__u__m____.__
• 3、主动语态+定语从句： xxx （主办方） will hold an activity whose theme 古典音乐演奏会，请你 以A Chinese Classical Music Concert写一篇报 道。
•首句：一场中国古典音乐演奏会 被举办 在我们学校 礼堂 这周六晚上。 (时态）
（5） 你校将于下周五举办跳绳比赛skipping rope，请你给英国交换生Steven 写一封信邀请 他。 首句：一场跳绳比赛 将会被举办 在学校操场 下 周五。我写信来邀请你一起参加。
高考英语新增分大一轮渐进写作全辑 (10)
Step One 夯实基础，步步提升
第1讲 灵活好用的简单句
简单句的五种基本句型：
1.S＋V(主语＋谓语动词)
在这个结构中，谓语动词是不及物动词，能表达完整的意思。后面不接宾语， 但可以接副词、介词短语、状语从句等。 (1)It will start from June 16th and last for more than a week. 它将从6月16日开始，持续一周多的时间。(2017· 全国Ⅱ) (2)Graduation finally came. 毕业终于来临了。(2017· 北京)
请告诉我到车站怎么走。(2017· 上海)
[即时训练4] 1.现在，我就中国习俗方面给你提一些建议。(2018· 全国Ⅰ) Now，I’d like to offer you some advice on Chinese customs. 2.根据网上的排名，爸爸给我买了一件连衣裙。(2018· 江苏) Based on the ratings online，my father bought me a dress .
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2.S＋V＋O(主语＋谓语动词＋宾语) 在这个结构中，谓语动词是及物动词，不能表达完整的意思，后面必须接宾 语。充当宾语的通常是名词、动名词、代词、数词、动词不定式(短语)及名词 性从句等。
(1)Visiting this exhibition，we will not only enjoy the folk art works，but also
4.My mother ordered me a new wooden desk.
S＋V＋Oi＋Od句型 ___________________
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5.They saved a seat for me at the ball game. S＋V＋Od＋Oi句型 ___________________ 6.This kind of exercise will keep you in good shape.
2025高考英语步步高大一轮复习讲义人教版必修第二册——选择性必修第四册进阶写作答案精析
2025高考英语步步高大一轮复习讲义人教版必修第二册——选择性必修第四册进阶写作答案精析进阶写作答案第一章应用文写作一、实战演练Dear Glen，I am Li Hua, monitor of Class 1, Senior 3. I am writing to invite you to join us to climb a mountain next Friday，which is the Double Ninth Festival.Mountain climbing serves as a traditional activity on that day.Standing on the top of the mountain，we can enjoy broader horizons.We will gather at the school gate at 4：00 p．m.on that day.The school bus will take us to the Qingyun Mountain.Bottled water and snacks will be offered.And there are stone steps up to the mountaintop，so it won’t be so challenging and tiring.We would appreciate it if you could join us.Yours sincerely，Li Hua 二、实战演练Dear Sir or Madam，I have read your advertisement for a junior reporter at the “Campus V oice” section in the English school newspaper and I show great interest in it.I feel quite qualified for the position so I am writing to apply for it.I have been learning English for more than 10 years with a good command of oral and written English，which enables me to communicate with others fluently.Moreover，not only am I good at researching and presenting information in a compelling and informative way but I am also experienced in interviewing and st but not least，I’m outgoing as well as warmhearted，which makes me get along well with others.If given the chance，I plan to fully utilize my skills and work diligently to contribute to the “Campus V oice” section.I am looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely，Li Hua 三、实战演练Dear Mr Smith，I’m glad to provide you with some suggestions on your upcoming trip to Beijing during the MidAutumn Festival.Beijing，as the capital of China，offers a rich cultural experience.The Palace Museum showcases Chinese history.The Tian’anmen Square is a symbol of China.The Great Wall offers breathtaking views.You can also explore hutongs(traditional alleyways) to experience traditional Chinese culture.As for fine food，you can try Beijing Roast Duck，Zhajiangmian and Bingtanghulu.By the way，use the subways，buses or taxis to get around.Renting a bike or using shared bicycles is also convenient.I hope these suggestions will be helpful.Enjoy your trip to Beijing during the MidAutumn Festival!Yours sincerely，Li Hua 四、实战演练Dear Anne，I’m writing to convey my sincere appreciation for your kind help and care during my stay in London，without which I wouldn’t have enjoyed it so much.During the week，the comfortable room，delicious meals and especially your friendly family members all made me feel at home，leaving me lasting memories.Moreover，guided by you，I was honored to have a chance to visit those tourist attractions in London and be exposed to such an amazing culture as well as beautiful scenery.It was your generous help that enabled me to have a better understanding of your country and culture.Thanks again for your kind help and I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness by showing you around Beijing.Yours，Li Hua 五、实战演练Dear Wilson，How’s everything with you? I’m excessively sorry to tell you that I can’t attend your lecture concerning Internet Plus.I’m writing you this letter of apology to show my deep regret.The reason for my being absent is that my mother is seriously ill，so I will take her to hospital tomorrow since my father is on a business trip for an urgent matter.I will care for my mother.To be frank，I am extremely interested in the topic of Internet Plus.Therefore，it is really a pity that I will miss it.I wonder if there are any relevant materials of the lecture.If so，I can learn it by myself when it’s convenient.I want to extend my apology to you once again.I hope it won’t cause you much trouble.I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apology.Yours，Li Hua 六、实战演练Dear Mr Green，How is everything going? I am writing in sincerity to ask you a favor regarding a play we adapted for the upcoming English Evening.The play is based on the story of Hua Mulan who，after disguising herself as a man，joined the army instead of her father in the Northern Wei Dynasty.To us，however，the adaption of such an epic is quite challenging and we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play.So would you please spare some time to revise the draft script attached to this email? If possible，may I pay you a visit at your office next Tuesday to give you more details?Any of your professional advice would be highly appreciated.Best wishes.Yours truly，Li Hua 七、实战演练Dear Michael，Learning that a study trip will be held，I’d like to recommend a wonderful destination：Nanjing.Here are the reasons.As an ancient capital of six dynasties and a modern city with highquality development，Nanjing has much to provide for a study trip.For example，the grand museums and solemn monuments will undoubtedly educate us students not to forget history and motivate us to cherish the present.Meanwhile，efficient and convenient transportation adds attraction and vitality to this charming city.A study trip to Nanjing promises to be fruitful!Yours，Li Hua 八、实战演练Dear Li Jin，I’m going to study Chinese in Tianjin this summer vacation.I’m writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding relevant courses in your school.First of all，I want to know how many students there will be in each class and if the courses focus on listening and speaking practice.Besides，I wonder whether I’ll have the opportunity to communicate with Chinese students，which will surely be a good chance for me to learn more aboutChina.At last，I would be grateful if you could tell me whether accommodations are included.I’m looking forward to your early response.Yours faithfully，Chris 九、实战演练Dear Terry，I’m glad to know you desire to be a volunteer of the Sunshine V olunteer Club.As a member，I do think it is worthwhile to be engaged in voluntary work.I’m writing to share with you the details concerning it.A wide variety of regular activities are scheduled on a weekly basis，such as visiting the nursing home and organizing events to raise people’s awareness of environmental st weekend we collected books for the children in remote areas who have little access to them.We make great efforts to spread warmth and care，and it does pay off.Once you decide，please fill in the attached application form and send it to me.Eagerly looking forward to your participation.Yours，Li Hua 十、实战演练Dear Australian friends，On behalf of our school，I feel greatly privileged to convey warm welcome to you.We are delighted to have you with us.To make your stay here memorable，various activities will be arranged to enhance our mutual understanding and experience different culture.As planned，we will hold a talent show where everyone can show their outstanding performances.Classes on traditional Chinese culture are also scheduled，such as papercutting，Chinese opera，calligraphy，etc.，followed by a giftexchanging activity.Additionally，you’re invited to pay a visit to surrounding tourist attractions.I sincerely hope that you can enjoy yourselves and wish you a pleasant journey.Thank you!Yours，Li Hua 十一、实战演练NOTICETo promote our traditional Chinese culture，“Tang Suit Design Contest” will be held in the school hall next Friday.Every participant is allowed to hand in only one entry，which must be designed on your own.Besides，each piece is required to be displayed with a brief introduction of your designphilosophy.All entries will be submitted to the Students’ Council before next Tuesday.Those that stand out as the top ten will be awarded.Pictures of the winners’works will be posted on our school website.Every student studying in the International Department is welcome to take part in the competition.The Students’ Council十二、实战演练World Environment Day on CampusJune 5th,2023 marked the 50th anniversary of World Environment Day，with the slogan “Beat Plastic Pollution”．In honor of this occasion，our school organized various activities to sensitize students about the urgent need to combat plastic pollution and promote sustainable practices.The event started with an engaging presentation by environmental experts，who highlighted the detrimental impact of plastic and emphasized the importance of reducing，reusing，and recycling plastic.Then a plastic collection drive was held so as to encourage everyone to bring in their plastic waste for proper disposal.Additionally，students participated in a postermaking competition，creating thoughtprovoking artworks that showcased the importance of sustainable alternatives.The response to these activities was overwhelming.It is through such collective efforts that we can hope to “Beat Plastic Pollution”and create a cleaner，healthier environment for future generations.English Club 十三、实战演练Last week，I participated in our school sports meeting，competing in the 400meter race—a thrilling and unforgettable experience.On hearing the sharp whistle，I dashed out，the wind rushing against my face and the crowd’s cheers echoing around me.My attempts to match the pace of fellow runners proved challenging，but I did not give up.I pushed myself to the limit and crossed the finishing line with all my strength.I was glad that I took part in the sports meeting，which not only pushed my limits but also made me realize the importance of persistence.十四、实战演练Dear schoolmates，V olunteering is playing a crucial role in students’ overall development.With the approach of winter vacation, it’s high time that we took up volunteering.A willing heart to volunteer provides us with massive benefits.V olunteering not only makes us feel connected with the community but also is beneficial to our wellbeing.Blessed with a sense ofpurpose in life，we are offered an amazing opportunity to learn valuable skills.There are different ways of serving people，ranging from volunteering at children’s home or libraries to virtual volunteering，such as helping pupils with schoolwork online.Why not throw ourselves into volunteering? It makes us a better person and creates a better world.Yours sincerely，Li Hua 十五、实战演练The Person I Admire MostWhen it comes to the person I admire most，I can’t help thinking of Fan Jinshi who is an archaeologist and a guard of Dunhuang.After graduating from Peking University，Fan Jinshi chose to work in Mogao Caves，Dunhuang.Although the living environment was terrible，she was deeply attracted by the works of art and desired to protect them for the future generations.She and her team overcame difficulties，explored scientific concepts and built a “digital Dunhuang”，which has balanced the relationship between cultural relics protection and tourism.Fan Jinshi is called the daughter of Dunhuang.She deserves the respect of all at home and abroad.第二章读后续写第2节技法指导技法三A few weeks later，when I almost forgot the contest，there came the news.To everyone’s surprise，I，an immigrant，won first place in the writing contest.Hearing the good news，I felt a sense of joy surging through me.I leapt into the air and shouted out loud，“I made it！”During the award presentation ceremony，I was invited to deliver a speech.Patiently and confidently，I told the audience how I once didn’t love writing and now enjoyed writing and how I realized the value of perseverance with the help of my teacher.I went to my teacher’s office after the award presentation.With the trophy in hand，I entered the office.My teacher rose from the seat and came up to me.“Congratulations！” he said，slapping me on the back.He grinned from ear to ear as I showed him the trophy.“I owe my success to you，” I said sincerely.“Without your encouragement and belief，I wouldn’t have succeeded.”He laughed，his eyes shining with excitement.“I knew you had it in you.I’m proud of you for notgiving up.” Whenever looking back on this incident，I feel extremely grateful to him.It was my social studies teacher who encouraged me to realize my potential and thus changed the course of my life.技法四实战演练Ⅰ.1.Relieved，Jenny told the truth to everyone.2．Feeling scared and helpless，Jane sat beside a tree and held her shoulders in her arms to make herself warm.3．They hugged and kissed with tears rolling/pouring/streaming down their cheeks. 4．“I...I don’t know，” he stammered, his voice trembling with fear.5．If she had not quarreled with Tom, they would have enjoyed a great time near the lake. 6．Mother hugged the twins tightly，whose faces were glowing with excitement.7．Since he continued speaking about wanting to share his paintings with the world, I knew what had to be done.8．I thanked him，saying that not only did he mend my shirt with his craftsmanship but he also repaired my dream with sportsmanship.9．It was at that moment that I was overwhelmed with gratitude to my teacher.10．A cold feeling crept over his heart and made him shiver.11．Drowned in happiness，Jimmy dashed out of the school gate like a free bird.12．Seeing such extraordinary beauty, I think every cell in my body woke up.Ⅱ.But Molly insisted that they should wait and keep the book.She didn’t place the illustrated book on the bookshelf，hoping Rick would show up soon.A kid might make all kinds of promises and fail to keep them.But Rick was so sincere and eager that Molly believed he wouldn’t break his promise.A kid’s promise is more valuable than the cost of the book.The book would rest in the drawer still until Rick showed up.Then on one sunny morning，Molly found a little boy running all the way towards her bookstore holding something.The little boy was exactly Rick.Rick pushed the door open and rushed to the counter holding his money box.Molly excitedly pulled the drawer open，took out the illustrated book and walked out from the counter immediately.She knelt with one leg and smiled at Rick，handing the book to Rick.Rick’s eyes were shining looking at the book，and he put the box on the floor and held the book.“I think you guys had better make your deal here at the coffee table，”said Rex.Molly winked at him delightedly.The sunlight came through the glass window and cast on the little customer and the nice lady.第3节语料素材一、实战演练1．Her face lit up with happiness as she received the presents prepared by the children.2．They jumped to their feet at the news, with their eyes filled with joy.Hearing the news, they jumped to their feet with joy in their eyes.3．Overwhelmed with gratitude, I couldn’t say a word.4．I was so deeply moved that tears welled up in my eyes.5．Hearing the news that his father passed away, his eyes welled up with tears.6．She got lost and it began to rain, a deep sense of despair overwhelming her.7．Her face turning pale, she stood there, tonguetied.8．My heart was in my mouth when I walked into her office.9．At the thought of the frightening bear, a sense of fear welled up in him.10．He was half dead with fear when he found he was surrounded by wolves.实战演练1．Having known others’ attitude, he shook/trembled with anger, holding his clothes firmly. 2．Filled with anger, Mike was unable to speak a word.3．I was about to explode and waved my fist at him.4．I was ashamed of my bad performance in the contest.5．I stared at him in shock, with a small sound of disappointment escaping my throat.6．What surprised me was that there was a path here.7．A look of surprise crossed her face but she soon calmed down.8．Uncontrollably, a wave of regret washed over me as I heard the bad news.9．If only I had not left the farm alone!10．If I had followed his advice, we would be having fun together.二、实战演练Ⅰ.1.She jumped up，dashed forward and hugged the boy tightly.2．Standing beside the empty road，they looked up into the sky, feeling the precious peace. 3．As night was beginning to fall, Jane sat on the grass, staring at the vast sky, frightened and hungry.4．With a bunch of flowers in her hands，Mindy stood beside the sea and looked down at the flowers with a smile，wondering what to do tomorrow.5．She crept along the path，bent over swiftly and cupped her hands around the butterfly gently. 6．With her heart beating wildly，the innocent girl，held by her mom and screaming withexcitement，unwrapped her delicate gift box which she had been looking forward to without any hesitation.7．Every one of us on the bus looked on and laughed crazily.Ryan struggled to his feet，dusted the jacket and made his way to an empty seat.8．Looking straight into my eyes，Mike stroked my hair, whispering，“You are the most beautiful girl I’ve ever met.”Ⅱ.1.the twins got up early, tiptoed to the kitchen and scooped some flour out of the bag their father slid into the kitchen，patting the twins’ shoulders and comforting them in a soft voice they carried the breakfast，advanced upstairs and woke up their mother2．I signaled to him with a thumbsup, feeling proud of him He smiled, took a deep breath and got ready for the race，eyes brimming with determination every runner shot like an arrow三、实战演练1．The gentle breeze stroked his head，as if comforting all his tiredness.2．I closed my eyes and daydreamed in the speeding car.Winding rivers, lofty mountains, deep alleys and sunny beaches held me entirely in their fascination.3．The sun looked at her with a glowing smile and the flowers nodded merrily towards her. 4．The wind was howling dreadfully and the rain was pouring from the heaven，whipping against the branches of lined trees.5．On the day back to school，dark clouds hung low in the sky.The rain poured down，with cold drops and angry winds slapping my face.I was drowned in floods of warm tears and freezing rain.四、实战演练1．Festivals let us enjoy life，be proud of our customs and forget our work for a little while. 2．The precious tricycle not only helped me through that tough period，but also carried Father’s love forward into the far，far future.3．Seeing the paper bag，I felt as if it had been reminding me that I should pass on the kindness that the Mexican family offered me every time I meet someone in need.4．No matter how ordinary a job is，it plays a part in society and therefore deserves our respect. 5．Cold as the rain was，great warmth filled his heart like never before.6．It dawned on me that we should always be an honest person whatever situations we are in.7．I am firmly convinced that the slight power of every person can make our country more prosperous.8．All the students came to realize that everyone wants and deserves to be treated with respect，dignity and warmth.9．It is not how much we do but how much love we put into what we do that benefits our work most.10．The gift you give is not something your loved one keeps，but a voluntary contribution towards the people who really need it in their lives.第4节分类集训一、When my Monday came，I again took the bus to KMTV alone and waited.Everything was familiar this time.But hearing the musical sounds and applause from time to time，I felt my heart was pounding with excitement and nervousness.Eventually，it was my turn.Taking a deep breath，I calmed down.Confident，I went to the piano and began to play.Easy，so easy! Fun almost...right up to the coda at the end.I suddenly realized I should not be at the end! My heart jumped to my mouth.I had skipped a part.A huge part.How did that happen?Somehow my brain went to work and I continued playing.I tried to smile at the camera and played the rest smoothly as if no skipping had happened.After what seemed an eternity，I stopped playing.However，it turned out that my performance had probably lasted barely a minute.Surely the result was as expected—I wasn’t the winner.On my way home，I surprised myself by feeling more relieved than disappointed.I could not pretend that my performance was best.In truth，the other three were far superior.When I came back home to talk about “The Big Skip”，Daddy smiled，“It may not have been noticed by someone who doesn’t know Schubert’s ‘Ave Maria’．Your movement was smooth.You didn’t fall apart.All in all，a worthwhile experience.”二、No sooner had I picked up my phone than Lisa called me.“Belle，how is it going? Do you still need my help？” Lisa asked.“Thanks，Lisa.Everything is OK.And I’d like to tell you about it，” I said.I told her exactly what had happened，and specifically described how I had solved the problem.Lisa praised me for my quick wit.Then I asked her to teach me German in case I needed it later.She promised.By the end of the holiday，I could have already communicated with her in some simple German words.So I was ready for the new term with confidence.When the German teacher entered the classroom in the new term，I felt I’d seen her somewhere before.What amazed me was that she came over to me，saying，“Glad to see you again！I’m Florence.” I was surprised to find that she was the daughter of the lady that I had helped during the holiday.What a fantastic fate! As our new foreign teacher，Florence was patient and considerate.We all respected her and took every lesson seriously.I even made friends with her mother，so I had more opportunities to practise speaking German.I was resolved to visit Germany the next summer holiday.三、Giving or keeping? I struggled with myself.Giving it? Hardly could I imagine life without the model car! After all，it was my most precious treasure，which I had been proud of.My heart kept aching at the prospect of giving it away.Nope! I shook my head determinedly.Glancing at mymother’s expectant eyes，I couldn’t help sobbing.Keeping it? Definitely，it would otherwise upset Alex.Torn between the two tough choices，I was totally at a loss.Nevertheless，deep down，I could feel my affection for Alex.Yep! I resolved to do the right thing.In the moment of parting，my model car went with Alex.Though I was crushed to see it go，my heart sang when I saw his beaming face as he tightly clutched it.Seeing the thumbsup from my mother and sister，I did swell with relief，pride and joy，for I knew it was not a gift；to some extent，it was our concern and love for him.Plus，sharing the model car also strengthened our bond，which，I was fully convinced，would always uplift him.An effort made for the happiness of others lifted us above ourselves as well.四、Then came the final testing day.The whole class gathered in the science classroom，watching breathlessly as Jeff carefully loaded their selfmade robotic hand onto Sergio’s right arm.It fitted quite well! So excited was Sergio that his arm trembled slightly.Having put a baseball on the desk，Jeff signed to Sergio to pick it up.Slowly，Sergio extended his right hand and reached for the ball.Successfully he caught hold of it and everyone present broke into cheers! Holding the ball，Sergio couldn’t contain his tears.Never in his life did he expect to catch something with his right hand!The lifechanging gift for Sergio drew huge attention.Jeff and his students became an instant hit and various media competed to cover the news.When interviewed about the intention of the project，Jeff said，“I intended Sergio’s robotic hand to show our support for him.Meanwhile，I hope to foster students’ scientific spirit through this handson operation.” His students stated that Jeff challenged them to transform abstract concepts into reality，from which they benefited greatly.Soon voluntary donations poured in，which would go to the school’s scientific research and help students develop better.五、Ruby walked over to my mother，we girls holding our breath.We waited to see who would shout first and what terrible things would be said.“We are sorry about the flowers.The girls will fix them and help weed the roses，” said Mom.My sisters and I looked at each other in horror，but Ruby smiled through her tears.“I know we’re particular about these roses，but they’re very special because they remind me of my mother.”Soon both women were down on their knees examining the damaged bushes together.A few weeks later，the plants all came back to life.My mother and Ruby worked together on the roses all summer and many summers to follow.So did my sisters and I．A friendship was formed between the families.Ruby became part of our family，spending many happy hours at our house，especially during countless birthdays，graduations and weddings.And the rose fence wasn’t a fence any longer.My mother had turned it into a bridge.六、Suddenly，I remembered the door to the basement.I dashed to the door and opened it withoutany hesitation.There she sat on the top step，quiet as a mouse，head down，ears hanging down.She had been following me，as she always did，and I had casually closed the door on her.So she had to wait quietly for me to find her.I don’t know whether she assumed that she was being punished，but it was clear that she was hurt，for she behaved differently this time.I held her in my arms tightly，telling her how sorry I was.I touched her head and rubbed her belly gently，telling her that she was not making trouble.She let me hold her for exactly one minute and then suddenly ran off，returning with a toy for me to throw.At that very moment，Dottie taught me a valuable lesson：Forgive quickly because forgiveness is to light a lamp not just for others but also for ourselves.Life is short.There is so much love to offer and receive and so many toys to chase.。
高考英语新增分大一轮渐进写作全辑 (3)
实战演练 (一) (2018· 江苏)
请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
[写作内容]
1.用约30个词概括上述利用排名(ratings)进行消费的现象；
2.谈谈你如何看待消费排名，然后用2－3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。
[写作要求]
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
[评分标准]
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
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(三) 请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。 He Really Loved His Job
Zhang Chao joined the PLA Navy in 2004 after graduating from a middle
Anaya’s proud parents ， Bianca Middleton and Gary Ellick say the
young girl’s determination and desire to be independent became obvious when she was just a baby.Unable to hold on to her pacifier(安抚奶嘴)with her hands，she figured out how to do it by cupping her arms.As a young child，she learned to eat with a fork and build with blocks.At 5，she managed to hold a crayon or marker between her hands and draw.Though Anaya was fitted with prosthetic arms for a short time，the young girl decided she was better off with her natural ones and threw them away.
外研版高考英语一轮总复习 写作专项提升 Step 3 重两头——确保合乎规范
3.自我介绍式 自我介绍式的开头多用于与陌生人之间的通信与交流,由于双方关系陌生, 故需要先做一番自我介绍,比如询问信、申请信、投诉信、求助信、建议 信等。
I’m Li Hua.I’m honored to be here to extend a warm welcome to you on behalf of our school. 我是李华。我很荣幸能代表我们学校在这里向你们表示热烈的欢迎。 4.询问问候式 询问问候式开头是一种客套语,一般用于熟人之间的交流,偶尔也可用于陌 生人之间,能够给人一种亲近的感觉。 How is everything going?I am writing to seek help from you. 一切都好吗?我写信是想寻求你的帮助。
5.感谢来信式 此类开头用于回信,开头往往是表示收到信的感受、感谢、请求建议或帮 助等。 (2018全国Ⅲ卷,书面表达)I’m so glad to hear from you.I’m writing to tell you that everything goes well with me. 我很高兴收到您的来信。我写信告诉您我一切都好。 6.列举事例式 列举事例式的开头往往通过一个事例或现象引出相关话题,接着点明文章 主题。
雕词琢句 单句写作 1.(2021全国甲卷,书面表达)如果你能立即给我反馈,我将不胜感激。(表示 感谢式) I would greatly appreciate it if you could give me instant feedback. 2.(2020浙江7月卷,应用文写作)祝您早日康复,并期待再次见到您。(表达 期待式) Wish you a full recovery soon and look forward to seeing you again. 3.(2019全国Ⅲ卷,书面表达)如果你能加入我们,我会很高兴的。如果你还 有什么事要问,请尽管问我。(邀请信结尾语) I’d love it if you could join us.Please do not hesitate to ask me if you have something else to enquire about.
高考英语一轮复习 循序写作 第二步 用高级表达增分 第三周 不落俗套的亮点词汇课件 新人教版共26页
高考英语一轮复习 循序写作 第二步 用高级表达增分 第三周 不落俗套的
亮点词汇课件 新人教版
1、纪律是管理关系的形式。——阿法 纳西耶 夫 2、改革如果不讲纪律，就难以成功。
3、道德行为训练，不是通过语言影响 ，而是 让儿童 练习良 好道德 行为， 克服懒 惰、轻 率、不 守纪律 、颓废 等不良 行为。 4、学校没有纪律便如磨房里没有水。 ——夸 美纽斯
5、教导儿童服从真理、服从集体，养 成儿童 自觉的 纪律性 ，这是 儿童道 德教育 最重要 的部分 。—— 陈鹤琴
41、学问是异常珍贵的东西，从任何源泉吸 收都不可耻。——阿卜·日·法拉兹
42、只有在人群中间，才能认识自 己。——德国
43、重复别人所说的话，只需要教育； 而要挑战别人所说的话，则需要头脑。—— 玛丽·佩蒂博恩·普尔
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1 第11讲 引人入胜的开头与回味无穷的结尾
一、引人入胜的开头 开头一般来说要做到开门见山，使读者了解要谈什么，最好能立刻吸引读者的兴趣。下面介绍几种开头的常见写法： 1.书信的常用开头法——开门见山法 (1)I’m writing to invite you to see the Chinese papercutting exhibition. 我写信邀请你来看中国剪纸艺术展。(2017·全国Ⅱ) (2)I am writing to tell you some good news. 我写信告诉你一些好消息。(2017·全国Ⅲ) 2.记叙文的常用开头法 (1)故事背景法——交代人物、事件、时间、地点、背景等 A week before Earth Day，posters were put up around our school，calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth. 地球日前的一周我们学校贴了很多海报，号召我们加入到绿化地球的行动中。(2016·北京) (2)往事追忆法——回忆过去发生的某件事 I still remember how nervous I was on my first day in the new school three years ago，when I found it difficult to follow my teacher in the first English class. 我仍旧记得三年前我进入这所学校的第一天，当我发现在第一节英语课上很难跟上老师的节奏时是多么紧张。 3.说明文的常用开头法 (1)点明中心法——开门见山点明所要介绍的事物 2
The mouse is a most effective device used by people to communicate with a computer. 鼠标是人们用电脑交流时使用的一种非常有效的设备。 (2)引入数据法——运用数据引出所要论证的主题 A recent study shows that more than 40% of the school kids don’t have breakfast. 最近的研究表明，有超过40%的学生不吃早饭。 4.议论文的常用开头法 (1)点明主题法——提出一个观点或论据作为文章要阐明或论述的主题 Years of school life has taught me a lot of things，of which teamwork is the most important for me. 多年的学校生活教会我很多东西，其中团队协作对于我来说最为重要。 (2)引用名言法——摘录或引用某些名人的名言或常见的习语、谚语作为文章的开头 When it comes to how to succeed，many people may think of the proverb “Where there is a will，there is a way.” 当谈及如何成功时，很多人或许会想起谚语“有志者，事竟成”。 (3)列举实例法——通过一个实例或现象引出话题 Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school. 三年前我在人生的一次重要考试中失利，成为普通学校的一名学生。 5.图画作文的常用开头法 描述图画法——描写图画内容，为下文做好铺垫 What is illustrated in the picture is that parents expect too much from their child and try every means to encourage her to work harder.However，the daughter feels unhappy，or rather more stressed. 图画里描述的是父母对孩子怀有很高的期望，想尽一切办法鼓励她更加努力学习。然而，女儿感到伤心，更确切地说，压力更大了。 即时训练1 翻译下列经常用作开头的句子 1.毕业终于来到了。我和同学们决定做些事情。(2017·北京) Graduation finally came.My classmates and I decided to do something. 2.我写信是要详细告诉你关于我的情况。(2017·天津) I am writing to tell you something about myself in detail. 3.人们普遍认为，吸烟对健康有害。 It is generally believed that smoking does harm to 3
our health. 4.俗话说，“岁月不等人。” A saying goes like that “Time and tide wait for no man.” 5.每当我看到这张照片，我就会想起我的童年。 Every time I see the photo，I will think of my childhood.
二、回味无穷的结尾 结尾有概括全文内容，进一步强调中心思想、升华主题的作用。主要有以下写法： 1.书信的常用结尾法 (1)表示感谢法 ①I’ll appreciate it if you can reply to my letter at your earliest convenience. 如果您尽早给我回信，我会非常感谢。(2017·全国Ⅰ) ②I’d appreciate it if you could do me a favor. 如果你能帮助我，我将非常感激。(2016·全国Ⅰ) ③I must thank you again for your generous help. 我必须对你慷慨的帮助再次表示感谢。 (2)表示期待法 ①Hope you’ll have a good time in China. 希望你在中国玩得快乐。(2017·北京) ②Looking forward to your reply. 期待着您的回复。(2017·全国Ⅱ) ③I hope we’ll get together again next year. 希望明年再聚。(2016·天津) 2.记叙文的常用结尾法 (1)主题升华法 My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are. 我的经历告诉我：决定你成为什么样的人的不是你被给予了什么，而是你怎样利用它。 (2)问题设问法——通过问答形式总结全文 Isn’t it a pleasure to have great calm in mind while you are reading? 你在阅读时，内心非常平静不是一种快乐吗？ 3.说明文的常用结尾法 4
总结全文法——总结说明的事物，进一步说明其特征 In a word，changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us convenience and comfort. 总之，过去20年里我们生活中的变化给我们带来了便利和舒适。 4.议论文的常用结尾法 (1)得出结论法——结尾总结全文，得出结论 Therefore，the film industry should make greater efforts to attract more viewers. 因此，电影业应该付出更大努力来吸引更多观众。(2017·江苏) (2)深化中心法——结尾进一步深化主题 In reality，we should learn from the black pencil：not to mind what others say so long as we are confident in what we have done. 事实上，我们应该向这支黑色铅笔学习：只要我们对自己做过的事情有信心，就不要去介意别人说什么。 (3)提出建议法——结尾提出建议以及应对措施 I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places.Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings. 我认为，我们都应该注意自己在公共场合的行为。只有这样我们才能生活在更舒服和美丽的环境中。 (4)引用名言法——结尾用名言总结全文 Anyhow，different cultures，different customs.If you “Do as the Romans do when in Rome”，you will enjoy more your stay here. 不管怎么说，不同的文化就有不同的习俗。如果你“入乡随俗”，你就会更好地享受这里的生活。 (5)照应开头法——结尾对开头进行照应 Different ways of traveling can make people happy，but I like traveling by train most. 不同的旅行方式都能让人愉快，但是我最喜欢乘火车旅行。 即时训练2 翻译下列经常用作结尾的句子 1.我认为夏天一定比其他三个季节更有趣，我最喜欢夏天。(2016·四川) I think summer is certainly more fun than the other three seasons.I like summer best. 2.我知道怎样实现成功。成功来自于好的计划和更好的行动相结合。 (2016·浙江) I know how I achieved my success.It came from good planning and better doing combined. 3.因此，我对网上投票持积极态度。(2016·江苏)