高一英语写作课课件
英语写作课件ppt

写作风格和语言选择
写作风格
根据文章目的和读者选择适当的写作 风格,如正式、非正式、商业或个人 风格。
语言选择
使用准确、清晰、简洁的语言,避免 语法和拼写错误,确保表达的流畅性 和准确性。
文章结构和段落组织
文章结构
合理安排文章开头、主体和结尾,确保内容逻辑清晰、条理 分明。
段落组织
分段合理,每段主题明确,段与段之间过渡自然,避免内容 重复或脱节。
为了避免句子结构过于单一,作者可以使用不同的句型和表达方式,如并列句 、复合句、倒装句等。同时,避免句子冗长,将长句拆分成短句,使文章更加 易于阅读和理解。
缺乏连贯性和逻辑性
总结词
文章缺乏连贯性和逻辑性会影响读者的阅读体验和理解。
详细描述
为了提高文章的连贯性和逻辑性,作者需要合理安排段落和布局,使用过渡词和短语来连接句子和段落,使文章 更加流畅。同时,注意文章的主题和论点,确保文章内容紧扣主题,条理清晰。
使用修辞手法和表达方式
比喻
通过比喻来描述抽象概 念或事物,使读者更易
理解。
拟人
将非人类事物人格化, 增强描述的生动性。
排比
使用三个或以上结构相 似的句子,增强语势。
倒装
打破常规语序,使句子 结构更加丰富多样。
提高文章深度和广度
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深度
通过深入挖掘主题,分析其内 在联系和影响,使文章更具深
使用过渡词和过渡句, 增强段落之间的逻辑连 接。
过渡词和过渡句的使用 能够使段落之间的逻辑 连接更加紧密。通过使 用合适的过渡词和过渡 句,可以引导读者的思 路,使文章更加连贯、 流畅。
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英语写作常见问题及解决方案
高一英语写作指导-扩展词汇、连词成句 课件(共31张PPT)

合并下列句子。(使用定语从句)
Gun control is a topic. Americans have argued about it for a long time.
• Gun control is a topic (that/which) Americans have argued about for a long time.
将下列句子变成并列句。
She didn’t come to the party. That’s a pity.
• She didn’t come to the party, and that’s a pity.
He is young. He is experienced and responsible.
week. 老师说下个月有一些留学生要来我们学校参观。
• Our teacher said (that) some foreign students would
come to visit our school the next month.
你能告诉我你是怎样算出这道数学题的吗?
• Can you tell me how you worked out this maths problem?
李华游泳很棒。 • Li Hua swims very well.
连词成句(3):复合句
巧用复合句 — 并列句
It’s foggy today, so we can’t see the distant hills.
They cancelled their trip to Yangzhou last
汉译英。(使用定语从句)
那个正在操场上跑步的男孩是我最好的朋友。
• The boy who/that is running on the playground is my best friend.
人教版高一英语必修第一册 Unit 3 写作Reading for Writing 课件

【扩展】水果有关的习语
apples and oranges
பைடு நூலகம்
截然不同
sour grapes
例: 1. 与其说他是一个海员,不如说他是个探险者。 _H_e__is_a_n__e_x_p_lo_r_e_r _ra_t_h_e_r_t_h_a_n_a__sa_i_lo_r_. __________
2. 在教室开会,不是在大厅里。 _W_e__w_il_l _h_a_v_e_t_h_e_m__e_e_ti_n_g_in__th_e______ _c_la_s_s_ro_o_m__r_a_th_e_r__th_a_n__in_t_h_e_g_r_e_a_t_h_a_ll.
She is Kayla.
She has some fitness problems.
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Read what Kayla wrote and answer the questions.
1. What problem did Kayla have Sinhethweaspwasotrr?ied about her weight and
think about __fi_tn_e_s_s_ _ra_t_h_e_r _th_a_n__w_e_i_g_h_t _.
__m_a_d_e__a_li_s_t _o_f _th_i_n_g_s _I_li_k_e_d_a_b_o_u_t_m__y_s_e_lf_.
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2. Underline the words and phrases used in the text to show similarities and differences.
《英语写作教案》ppt课件

导入
介绍课程背景和目的
回顾相关知识点
展示案例或实物
引导学生思考并提问
讲授新课
导入新课:介绍课程背景和目标,激发学生的学习兴趣
讲解知识点:详细讲解英语写作的基本知识和技巧,包括文章结构、段落 组织、语言表达等方面
范文分析:选取一篇优秀的英语范文,分析其优点和特色,引导学生理解 并掌握英语写作的精髓
改进措施
针对教学方法和手段的不足, 提出改进措施
针对学生写作中存在的问题, 提出具体的改进建议
针对教学评价和反馈的不足, 提出改进措施
针对教学资源的不足,提行 总结和反思,指 出学生的不足之 处,提出改进意 见
归纳小结
回顾本次课程的主 要内容
总结英语写作的基 本技巧和方法
强调英语写作的重 要性和应用价值
鼓励学生将所学知 识应用到实际写作 中
教学重点与难点
第六章
重点
掌握英语写作的基本技巧和规 范
理解不同类型的英语写作要求
第三章
写作基本要素
主题明确:选择一个明确的主题,并围绕主题展开 结构清晰:文章应该有清晰的开头、中间和结尾 语言表达:使用准确、清晰、生动的语言 语法正确:确保语法正确,避免拼写和语法错误 逻辑连贯:段落之间应该有逻辑联系,使文章流畅易懂
写作技巧
写作基本要素:主题、结构、语言
写作技巧:运用修辞手法、注重细 节描写、表达清晰准确
练习与反馈:布置相关练习题目,让学生实践所学知识,并及时给予反馈 和指导,帮助学生改进和提高
巩固练习
写作练习:提供 与课程内容相关 的写作题目,让 学生进行实际写 作练习
小组讨论:让学 生分组讨论写作 题目,互相交流 思路和观点
课堂展示:让学 生展示自己的写 作成果,并接受 同学和老师的评 价和建议
高中英语写作课教学ppt课件

2) It may bring about severe unpredicted consequence.
3)It does us much harm// It is harmful to us.// It is bad for us.
4) It brings more harm than good to us.
they benefit people’s health greatly by giving them due physical exercise.
From what has been mentioned above, we have good
reason to believe that the bike will soon become people’s
English Writing
细化写作 化繁为简
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1.表示原因
1)There are three reasons for this.
2)The reasons for this can be listed as
follows:
3 ) The reason for this is obvious .
练吧
近年来,人们的生活发生了翻天覆地的 变化。电脑在今天已经进入寻常百姓家,请 简单阐述其原因。
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Three reasons may account for the
changes that have taken place in our
life.First of all,people’s living
While I admit that it is sometimes inconvenient for one to go on a long trip by bike, bicycles still have more advantages than disadvantages, compared with cars. There are several reasons accounting for my opinion.
高中英语作文写作教学公开课ppt课件

句子1 翻译
句1:学生会将要举办一次英语演讲比赛。目的: 增长环保知识和提高英语口语。主题:“保护环 境, 节约能源”。
The Students’ Union is going to organize an English-speaking contest to increase our knowledge about the environment and iTmhperothveem适更oue当加riss调顺:p“o整畅PkreonteEcnt goluisrhe.nvironment and save our energy”.
英语作文写作 What makes
a good essay?
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基础写作中存在的主要问题及分析
1. 话题词汇、短语错误 积累少
2. 词汇、短语、句型贫乏
3. 句子语法错误
语法不扎实
4. 连贯性差
篇章意识不足
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考场作文TIPS
1.取悦评卷人: 有清晰的整体脉络, 有自然的段间衔接. 经典的用词用句, 有整齐美观的书写. 2.经典的用句: 感叹句,倒装、强调、虚拟、省略句、定 语从句,名词性从句,名人名言。
学生会 _T_h_e_S_t_u_d_e_n_ts’ Union
参加 __ta_k_e_p_a_r_t_in_/_p_a_r_ti_cipate in
保护 _p_r_o_te_c_t_(v_t_) protection(n)
环境 _e_n_v_ir_o_n_m__en_t__(n_)_e_n_v_ir_o_n_m_e_n_t_a_l _(_a_dj)
中文没有主语 时:要补充主 语再翻译。
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句子4、5 翻译
句4: 奖项:3个一等奖, 6个二等奖和12个三等奖。
高中英语写作专题课件 (共17张PPT)

Six steps to write a composition
Analyse the task
Finding out the main points
Forming sentences
Thinking of key points/phrases
Combining the sentences into a
12、要记住,你不仅是教课的教师,也是学生的教育者,生活的导师和道德的引路人。07:29:1707:29:1707:29Monday, September 06, 2021
13、He who seize the right moment, is the right man.谁把握机遇,谁就心想事成。21.9.621.9.607:29:1707:29:17September 6, 2021
I am looking forward to your reply. With best wishes.
人教课标版高中英语必修1Unit1_写作课_公开课课件(共13张PPT)

interest in other people’s ideas
them see you are friendly
to ask for help from your teachers to build up your confidence.
to help others as possible as you can to communicate with them better
have a problem. I am not very good at communicating
•with people. He finds it hard to with people. Although I try to talk to my classmates, I
still find it hard to make good friends with them. So I feel quite lonely sometimes. I do want to
I hope you will find these ideas useful.
Task 4 write and show
Task 5
Homework:
1. Students will be asked to swap their letter with their group members and check for mistakes. 2.Finalize the writing draft and be ready to hand it in.
UNIT1 MODULE 1 Friendship
How to write a letter of advice
No.1 Middle School of Jiyuan Wang Qian
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高一英语写作课课件高一英语写作课课件教学目标Target language目标语言a重点词汇和短语explore, characteristicsb重点句子Write a short article explaining three problems you might meet on the moon..You may ask the following questions as well as work out some more.2 Ability goals 能力目标Enable the Ss to write an article about your idea or hopes for traveling in space.3 Learning ability goals 学能目标Help the Ss to learn how to write a passage.Teaching important& difficult points教学重点和教学难点Teach the Ss how to write an article about a space travel.Teaching methods教学方法Task-based learningDiscussion.Teaching aids教具准备a projector, a computerTeaching procedures & ways教学过程与方式Step I WritingThe purpose of this writing is for students to think about what kind of equipment they would need to b e safe in space. It’s a good opportunity for a discussion about the pains and pleasures that might occur when traveling in space. After the discussion, they can write down the problems and the way to solve them.T: If you are going off on a holiday, what will you take?S1: I will take clothes, shoes, food and many other things.T: But for space travel, you need specialized equipment. What equipment should you take? We have discussed them in last lesson. Who can answer this question?S2: oxygen can, spacesuit, gravity boots, water system, special food., special ropes, space buggy, sunglasses and space camera.T: We take so many things with us in order toavoid many dangers. What are the dangers? If youdon’t know many enough, let’s watch the film “Apollo”. It’s a film about an American space mission that went wrong. After that, you should write down the dangers and the way to solve them.(Watch the film.)Sample article:If I visited the moon, I might have three problems: how to breathe, how to eat and how to move around.I would have to carry all my air with me if I went to the moon. This is because the moon has no air ofits own. So I would need oxygen tanks placed on myback so I could breathe all the time. I would have totake all my food with me if I went to the moon. In the spaceship, there is no gravity so the food would float around. So, I would make sure that it is specially made as spacefood and then I would be able to eat it easily.I would find it difficult to move around on the moon as I would weigh one-sixth what I weigh on the earth. This means I would bounce like a balloon if I try to walk. I would have to learn to walk differently so that I don’t fall over.If I follow this advice, I think I will have a good holiday on the moon.Step II Writing TaskThe purpose of this writing task is for the students to use the information they have gathered on astronomy and their questions to each other to write an interesting and lively newspaper article. T: Have you ever remembered Oct.16th, 2003?S: Yes, of course..T: What happened on that day?S: China’s first manned spaceship landed safely that day.T: It’s a great moment for China and the whole world. How many preparations have they made for this space travel?S: Not exactly. But they must have made full preparations for this manned space flight.T: Do you admire Yang Liwei?S: He is our hero.T: Do you want to be a great man like him?S: Of course, I’m dreaming of that.T: You’ll get the chance if you work hard.. China has other new plans. The scientists plan to put a lab into space manned by scientists for short periods. They aim to visit the moon to look for valuable resources there as well as to study its environment and geological structures. Do you want to be that lucky scientist? Suppose you are the scientist who visits the moon in the future, please tell us your plan. For example, you can think about these questions and write down your plan.1.What preparations should you make?2.What will you see during your space travel?3.What will you do on the moon?Show sample article:Going into spaceCarry out research on the moonI’ll visit moon soon. As a scientist, I have always wanted to visit it by myself. But it’s not an easy thing. So I should make many preparations. First I’ll take enough exercise in o rder to be strong. Then I’ll take enough and necessary equipment with me. I will make notes of what I’ll see on the moon because we’ll put a lab on it. Through experiments in the lab, we’ll collect valuable resources and study its environment and geologica l structures. We’ll alsowant to find out if it’s a good place for humans to live in in the future. I believe I’ll get what I want to get from the moon. (Teacher can supply other information for students. Show the following on the screen:)China’s manned s pace programme has four goals:1.to develop basic manned space flight technology;2. to observe the earth and undertake experiments in space;3. to help design space vehicles;4. to accumulate experience for a large space stationT: Suppose you are part of this future programme, talk about what you’ll do, what you’ll seeand what you’ll get.Step III ProjectAsk students to collect as much information as they can about the nine planets in our solar system. Choose one planet that they would like to explore. Then write a research report. The report should include the four requirements on Page68.1.One possible project:Topic: MarsThe planet I have chosen is Mars because it’s the closest to the earth and it’ll be one of the first planets for us to explore. It’s named after the Romangod of war because from the earth it looks red in the sky.InformationPosition: 4th planet in our solar systemDistance from our sun: 228 million kmsDiameter: half the size of the EarthMass: one tenth the size of EarthGravity: one third of that of EarthSurface size: same as dry land of EarthLength of day: half an hour longer than Earth day Time to circle the sun: two Earth yearsSatellites: twoAir: 95% carbon dioxide 2% argon, 3% nitrogen, very little oxygenFindings from space tripsThe most important trips to Mars have been made by the US and USSR. They have both sent many spaceships but no people to visit Mars. They have discovered: ---there are two seasons on Mars: a warm, dusty, southern summer and cold, dusty-free northern winter.---no life can live on Mars now, as the air doesn’t have enough oxygen---there are some evidence of early life whenthere was water on Mars three million years ago ---changes in the color of Mars are produced by dust storms on Mars---it has a north and a south pole made of frozen carbon dioxide gasWhat I would like to find out1.whether there is life under the surface of Mars2.whether it would be possible for people to live on Mars3.whether there is oil or jewels or rocks that would be useful for people on Earth2.Another project:Topic: JupiterJupiter is the fifth planet from the Sun and isthe largest one in the solar system. If Jupiter were hollow, more than one thousand Earths could fit inside. It also contains more matter than all of the other planets combined. It has a mass of 1.9 x 1027 kg andis 142,800 kilometers (88,736 miles) across the equator. Jupiter possesses 28 known satellites, four of which - Callisto, Europa, Ganymede and Io - were observed by as long ago as 1610. Another 12 satellites have been recently discovered and given provisional designators until they are officially confirmed and named.Information1.There is a ring system, but it is very faint and is totally invisible from the Earth. (The rings were discovered in 1979 by Voyager 1.)2.The atmosphere is very deep, perhaps comprising the whole planet, and is somewhat like the Sun. It is composed mainly of hydrogen and helium, with small amounts of methane, ammonia, water vapor and other compounds.3. At great depths within Jupiter, the pressure is so great that the hydrogen atoms are broken up and the electrons are freed so that the resulting atoms consist of bare protons. This produces a state in which the hydrogen becomes metallic.4. Colorful latitudinal bands, atmospheric clouds and storms illustrate Jupiter's dynamic weather systems. The cloud patterns change within hours or days. The is a complex storm moving in a counter-clockwise direction.5. emissions, similar to Earth's , were observed in the polar regions of Jupiter.What I would like to find out1.whether there is life under the surface of Jupiter2.whether it would be possible for people to live on Jupiter3.whether there is oil or jewels or rocks that would be useful for people on EarthStep V HomeworkSum up the whole unit.Collect the materials about stars, space travel and different ideas about the beginning of life..第 11 页共 11 页。