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中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
• 词汇—>短语—>句式
列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、 句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬 长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句 时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不 要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑 所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
连句成文
• 根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后 写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际 需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，划分 必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句 式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合 句要搭配运用。
二、各类作文常用框架
• 1、话题作文，演讲
总-分-总
It’s adj for us to….. On the one hand,…On the other hand,… What’s more,… In a word,/In short,….
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
stories were so interesting that I always felt they
weren’t enough. So I began to read books by myself.
Little by little I became interested in reading. I can
• 2、讨论报告，列举不同观点
总-A方-B方-我方-总
Recently, we have a discussion about…. Different people have different opinions. A thinks…. B thinks differently.…. As for me,/In my opinion, …. All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to….
列个提纲，考虑所要选用的单词、词组、 句型，要能根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬 长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句 时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不 要使用没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑 所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道。
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
连句成文
• 根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后 写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际 需要，重新排列组合已写成的 句子，划分 必要的段落，一般分成三段。但要注意句 式的灵活运用，长、短句，简单句，复合 句要搭配运用。
二、各类作文常用框架
• 1、话题作文，演讲
总-分-总
It’s adj for us to….. On the one hand,…On the other hand,… What’s more,… In a word,/In short,….
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共25张PPT)
stories were so interesting that I always felt they
weren’t enough. So I began to read books by myself.
Little by little I became interested in reading. I can
• 2、讨论报告，列举不同观点
总-A方-B方-我方-总
Recently, we have a discussion about…. Different people have different opinions. A thinks…. B thinks differently.…. As for me,/In my opinion, …. All roads lead to Rome, we can choose the way we like to….
中考英语专项复习书面表达英语大作文演示课程PPT课件
写句子
学 好
淡蓝色的海水轻轻地拍打着沙滩，一 浪盖过 一浪， 连绵不 绝，源 源不断 。海水 在人们 的心中 无非是 易怒的 。可是 ，在现 在的我 眼中， 如同母 亲的手 温柔的 抚摸着 这岸上 的一切 生灵。 贝壳与 螃蟹戏 玩着， 玩累了 ，便躺 在柔软 的沙上 睡上一 会儿。
英 语 的 建 议
看英语 电影、 听英语 歌曲
与外教 交谈
把单词 写在纸 条上
（（1 1））看W英atc语hi电ng影En和gl听ish英m语ov歌ies曲an是d学lis习ten英in语g t的o E好ng方lis法h （s2on）g多s a看re 、go多od听w几ays次to，le然arn后E猜ng测lis生h. 词 的 意 思 淡蓝色的海水轻轻地拍打着沙滩，一浪盖过一浪，连绵不绝，源源不断。海水在人们的心中无非是易怒的。可是，在现在的我眼中，如同母亲的手温柔的抚摸着这岸上的一切生灵。贝壳与螃蟹戏玩着，玩累了，便躺在柔软的沙上睡上一会儿。
英 语 的 建 议
看英语 电影、 听英语 歌曲
与外教 交谈
把单词 写在纸 条上
（（1 1））看W英atc语hi电ng影En和gl听ish英m语ov歌ies曲an是d学lis习ten英in语g t的o E好ng方lis法h （s2on）g多s a看re 、go多od听w几ays次to，le然arn后E猜ng测lis生h. 词 的 意 思 淡蓝色的海水轻轻地拍打着沙滩，一浪盖过一浪，连绵不绝，源源不断。海水在人们的心中无非是易怒的。可是，在现在的我眼中，如同母亲的手温柔的抚摸着这岸上的一切生灵。贝壳与螃蟹戏玩着，玩累了，便躺在柔软的沙上睡上一会儿。
学 好 英 语 的 建 议
看英语 电影、 听英语 歌曲
与外教 交谈
中考英语专项复习书面表达英语大作文演示PPT演示课件
a gooAdlswo,asymile before you speak and do not feel shy.
(2) You should start it with greetings or a question （1）每天在纸上写四到五个单词
a(1n)dWprlaitceefothuermorofnivtehwe owradlsl.Raedaadytohne pwioecrdeswohfepnaypoeur. see them,and try to use them in sentence.
看
英
语
电
影 、 听 英 语 歌 川流不息的人群热闹地挤在小小的骑廊下，或单独一人，或三三两两。有的低头私语，有的莞尔窃笑，没有大声的喧哗和吵闹，似乎谁都不愿破坏平和的气氛。放眼长长的一条街道，逛街的人都好象在做服装秀，尤其是那些披红戴绿穿着入时的少男少女，是中山路上最亮丽的风景。
曲
把单词写在纸条上
写句子
(2) See and listen several times,and guess the meaning （o1f）the与n外ew教w交or谈ds.也 是 一 个 好 方 法 （(12)）To你h应ave该a以co问nv候ers或at问ion题w开ith始foreign teachers is also
川流不息的人群热闹地挤在小小的骑 廊下， 或单独 一人， 或三三 两两。 有的低 头私语 ，有的 莞尔窃 笑，没 有大声 的喧哗 和吵闹 ，似乎 谁都不 愿破坏 平和的 气氛。 放眼长 长的一 条街道 ，逛街 的人都 好象在 做服装 秀，尤 其是那 些披红 戴绿穿 着入时 的少男 少女， 是中山 路上最 亮丽的 风景。
川流不息的人群热闹地挤在小小的骑 廊下， 或单独 一人， 或三三 两两。 有的低 头私语 ，有的 莞尔窃 笑，没 有大声 的喧哗 和吵闹 ，似乎 谁都不 愿破坏 平和的 气氛。 放眼长 长的一 条街道 ，逛街 的人都 好象在 做服装 秀，尤 其是那 些披红 戴绿穿 着入时 的少男 少女， 是中山 路上最 亮丽的 风景。
(2) You should start it with greetings or a question （1）每天在纸上写四到五个单词
a(1n)dWprlaitceefothuermorofnivtehwe owradlsl.Raedaadytohne pwioecrdeswohfepnaypoeur. see them,and try to use them in sentence.
看
英
语
电
影 、 听 英 语 歌 川流不息的人群热闹地挤在小小的骑廊下，或单独一人，或三三两两。有的低头私语，有的莞尔窃笑，没有大声的喧哗和吵闹，似乎谁都不愿破坏平和的气氛。放眼长长的一条街道，逛街的人都好象在做服装秀，尤其是那些披红戴绿穿着入时的少男少女，是中山路上最亮丽的风景。
曲
把单词写在纸条上
写句子
(2) See and listen several times,and guess the meaning （o1f）the与n外ew教w交or谈ds.也 是 一 个 好 方 法 （(12)）To你h应ave该a以co问nv候ers或at问ion题w开ith始foreign teachers is also
川流不息的人群热闹地挤在小小的骑 廊下， 或单独 一人， 或三三 两两。 有的低 头私语 ，有的 莞尔窃 笑，没 有大声 的喧哗 和吵闹 ，似乎 谁都不 愿破坏 平和的 气氛。 放眼长 长的一 条街道 ，逛街 的人都 好象在 做服装 秀，尤 其是那 些披红 戴绿穿 着入时 的少男 少女， 是中山 路上最 亮丽的 风景。
川流不息的人群热闹地挤在小小的骑 廊下， 或单独 一人， 或三三 两两。 有的低 头私语 ，有的 莞尔窃 笑，没 有大声 的喧哗 和吵闹 ，似乎 谁都不 愿破坏 平和的 气氛。 放眼长 长的一 条街道 ，逛街 的人都 好象在 做服装 秀，尤 其是那 些披红 戴绿穿 着入时 的少男 少女， 是中山 路上最 亮丽的 风景。
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
断句
Stage2: 抓
动词 短语语块
句式结构
(mind map)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
2017年河西一模作文
Jim 是你的一位同学。请结合下面的提示写一篇短文， 把他介绍给大家，并说出你对他这些做法的看法。
（1）Jim的父母有钱，给他很多零花钱。 （2）Jim理解父母的不容易，不多花钱，想办法省钱； 他喜欢读书，在网上买书，有时去图书馆借书；别人 买饮料喝他却带水上学；从不花钱买零食。 （3）有人认为他的做法很怪异，但……。 参考词汇：零食 snacks 要求：（1）词数：80 ~ 100个。
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)Βιβλιοθήκη (preview)审
书面 表达
连
(link)
抓 (focus) 扩
(expand)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
因并果列
顺序
Stage4: 连
观点 原句美化
Stage3: 扩
造句
Stage5、6:查改和誊写
Stage1:审
思
体裁 维 时态 导 人称 图
2.“他们给他很多零花钱。” 3.“他（Jim）理解父母的不容易” 4.“他不多花钱，想办法省钱。” 5.“他喜欢阅读，在网上买书” 6.“他有时去图书馆借书” 7.“别人买饮料他却带水上学” 8.“他从不花钱买零食” 9.“有人认为他的做法很怪异，但我.....”
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
中考英语写作指导课件(共26张PPT)
第五档（13-15分） 能写明全部或绝大部分内容要点；语言基本无误；行文连贯，表达
2023年中考英语写作讲评课件(24张PPT)
• 严以律己，自尊自立 be strict with yourself, be a confident and independent person
• 勤于思考，勇于实践 use my head as often as possible≈think in a creative way, take action for my dream
you, mom, i love you.”
02
河南开封2021一模书面表达
人设，矛盾，影响
my mother and i my mother was a doctor. she was always busy in my memory. when i was little, she sometimes brought me to her office. while she was wor , i played by myself. busy as she was, she always spared as much time as she could to be with me. i was happy then. however, the situation that she was busy seemed unchanged as i entered junior high school. i met some problems at school. but most of the time, she wasn’t there when i wanted to talk with her about my problems. one day, i yelled at her because i thought she didn’t care about me enough. she had a long talk with me. i understood her more and felt so sorry about yelling at her. i knew she loved me deeply. soon, i will graduate from junior high school. as i look back, i can pick up all pieces of memories of her love for me. i want to say, “thank
• 勤于思考，勇于实践 use my head as often as possible≈think in a creative way, take action for my dream
you, mom, i love you.”
02
河南开封2021一模书面表达
人设，矛盾，影响
my mother and i my mother was a doctor. she was always busy in my memory. when i was little, she sometimes brought me to her office. while she was wor , i played by myself. busy as she was, she always spared as much time as she could to be with me. i was happy then. however, the situation that she was busy seemed unchanged as i entered junior high school. i met some problems at school. but most of the time, she wasn’t there when i wanted to talk with her about my problems. one day, i yelled at her because i thought she didn’t care about me enough. she had a long talk with me. i understood her more and felt so sorry about yelling at her. i knew she loved me deeply. soon, i will graduate from junior high school. as i look back, i can pick up all pieces of memories of her love for me. i want to say, “thank
中考英语写作公开课版省公开课一等奖全国示范课微课金奖PPT课件
She got home late and she was very tired.
2. He waited for, but they didn’t reach until the next day. He waited, but they didn’t arrived until the next day.
4/14
Correct the following sentences
1.He usually finishehsishihsohmoemweowrkorbkebfoerfeore his parents come back home from work.
2. We heard him wgoenutpustpasitrasi.rs. 3. This umbrella is much emxopreenesxivpeenthsaivne tthhaatn
3. Didn’t go home at once, he went into the book-shop. Instead of going home at once, he went into the book-shop.
7/14
Put the following sentences into English
2.. TThheeyyflayirnegfklyitiensginkittheespianrkthneowp.ark now.
3. They seem very happiylytotdodaya.y. 44.. HHee wwaass rreeaalllysosrorryryfofrorththata.t.
姓名
Tom
• 年纪
15
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
2. He waited for, but they didn’t reach until the next day. He waited, but they didn’t arrived until the next day.
4/14
Correct the following sentences
1.He usually finishehsishihsohmoemweowrkorbkebfoerfeore his parents come back home from work.
2. We heard him wgoenutpustpasitrasi.rs. 3. This umbrella is much emxopreenesxivpeenthsaivne tthhaatn
3. Didn’t go home at once, he went into the book-shop. Instead of going home at once, he went into the book-shop.
7/14
Put the following sentences into English
2.. TThheeyyflayirnegfklyitiensginkittheespianrkthneowp.ark now.
3. They seem very happiylytotdodaya.y. 44.. HHee wwaass rreeaalllysosrorryryfofrorththata.t.
姓名
Tom
• 年纪
15
ห้องสมุดไป่ตู้
九年级中考英语作文专题复习课件 (共26张PPT)
要求:
1.80-120词
2.写作要求(1)(2)
列：用简单的句子和短语列出文章的要点.
1.I go to school on foot every day. I walk to school every day. 2. remember to turn off the lights, the TV and the fans . 3. turn off the tap, reuse water. 4. I make full use of paper. 5. Don’t use plastic bags.
人称一致:
时态:
she Alice is my best friend, he likes sports.
He has gone to Guilin yesterday. 主谓一致: is This pair of shoes are mine. The shoes are new. 习惯用法: with He helps me in my English.
• 1.句型、结构 --- 避免出现Chinglish 现象。
We all very like her.
We all like her very much.√
He by bike to school. He goes to school by bike. √
•避免方法： 多记短语和句型
2 注意语法项目
中考英语作文评分标准
三档11 - 15分 基本完成试题规定的任务
——含有所有试题规定的主要内容。 —— 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
——语法结构或词汇方面的应用基本正确，有一些错误但不影响
对写作内容的理解。 —— 应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。总体而言， 基本达到了预期的写作目的。 四档16-18分 完全完成了试题规定的任务 —— 含有所有内容，布局合理。 —— 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇知识。 ——体现较强的语法应用能力，语法结构和词汇方面基本没有错 误。 ——有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 ——有亮笔之处。
初三英语写作--省级公开课PPT课件
For example,when two people are talking, the listener often looks at the speaker, in order to show that he is interested in the speaker’s words. Also, when a man says “I love you” to a woman, he may look at the woman’s eyes, in order to show that his feeling is true and deep.
Generally speaking, eye contact should be done according to the relationship between two pe.ople and the place where we st1a0y.
Step by step
• 1. 审 • 2. 构 • 3. 列 • 4. 连 • 5. 美
文体_____ 时态_____ 人称_____ 把握文章框架结构，必要时适当增加 细节 列出要点
连字成句，连句成段
在有把握的情况下，变换句型，灵活 使用长短句和复合句，使文增色
.
11
Have a Try!
.
12
网络已成为我们生活的一部分。请你根据以下要点以“The Internet in Our Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文.
However, sometimes, we may feel uneasy when someone looks at us. Do you have such kind of experience? If we are looked at by a stranger for more than necessary, we will look at ourselves up and down, to see if there is anything wrong with us.
Generally speaking, eye contact should be done according to the relationship between two pe.ople and the place where we st1a0y.
Step by step
• 1. 审 • 2. 构 • 3. 列 • 4. 连 • 5. 美
文体_____ 时态_____ 人称_____ 把握文章框架结构，必要时适当增加 细节 列出要点
连字成句，连句成段
在有把握的情况下，变换句型，灵活 使用长短句和复合句，使文增色
.
11
Have a Try!
.
12
网络已成为我们生活的一部分。请你根据以下要点以“The Internet in Our Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文.
However, sometimes, we may feel uneasy when someone looks at us. Do you have such kind of experience? If we are looked at by a stranger for more than necessary, we will look at ourselves up and down, to see if there is anything wrong with us.
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guide
Experience 1ife and 1earn about different cu1tures
WWF worker
he1p anima1s 1ive in peace
一般现在时
提示 要点
时态
列 写作第二步
• 用简单的句子或短语列出文章要
点。
Yi Ke's hobby is writing. She wants to be a writer. She thinks writing makes her relaxed and it brings her pleasure and success.
Wu Fan
1ooking after anima1s
I(Xiao Peng)
Survey
Dream Jobs
Reasons
writer
Bring her pleasure and success
guide
Experience 1ife and 1earn about different cu1tures
A Lesson of Writing
假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。 英语课上老师要求展开小组调查，内容包括爱好、 理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班 内汇报。 请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员 及自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查汇报。
Names Yi Ke Li Rui
Hobbies writing trave11ing
• 表转折：but, yet, however, though，although… • 表因果关系：because, so, therefore, as a result…
• 表先后顺序：First, Second, Third, Next, Then, Finally… • 表时间关系：when, while, after, before, then, …
WWF worker he1p anima1s 1ive in peace
审 写作第一步
• 认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、
字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信 息。
人称 主题
假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。 英语课上老师要求展开小组调查，内容包 括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班 内汇报。 请你根据表格内容提示， 介绍本组成员及自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查汇报。
My dream is to work at school . I want to be an English teacher.Because I like speaking English. I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased.
字数
体裁
Names Yi Ke Li Rui
Hobbies wrn
1ooking after anima1s
I(Xiao Peng)
Survey
Dream Jobs
Reasons
writer
Bring her pleasure and success
• 表列举说明：for example , for instance, such as… • 发表观点：in my opinion, to my understanding, from my point of view,… • 表总结陈词：in general, all in all, in a word, generally speaking…
写作第三步：
加
• 加首尾，使结构完整。
• 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构， 开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂 亮。
Boys and girls，
Everyone has hobbies and dreams.Now let me share ours with you.
a nice head
Yi Ke's hobby is writing. She wants to be a writer.Writing brings her pleasure and success. Li Rui likes travelling best. He wants to be a guide . He can experience different life and learn about different cultures.Wu Fan 's hobby is looking after animals. He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace.I want to be an English teacher.I like speaking English. I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased.
a nice body
I hope we enjoy our hobbies and our dreams can come true.
a nice tail
写作第四步： 连
• 恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清 晰，各个部分衔接自然。
英语写作时常用的过渡语:
• 表并列或递进：and, besides, both…and，not only…but also，what’s more, …
Li Rui likes travelling best. He wants to be a guide . He can experience different life and learn about different cultures.
Wu Fan 's hobby is looking after animals. He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace.
• Boys and girls，
• Everyone has hobbies and dreams.Now let me share