2020年高考高三英语改错Proof Reading
高考英语短文改错解题技巧学案-2025届高三英语上学期一轮复习专项
Guided learning plan(学案)How to do Proof-readingLearning objectivesAfter the class, you will be able to:1. review types and forms of errors in proofreading.2. understand key points of each error through exercises and summary.3. design 10 errors in a passage based on what you've learned today.4. raise the awareness of correcting the errors in time through famous sayings. Step I Review types and forms of errors1. Get me be a quiet handsome boy.2. Comparing with Li Ziqi, I am bad at cooking.3. Having been done so many exercises, I became crazy.Step II Key points in each error动词形，名词数；还要注意形和副代词格，细领悟；固定搭配要记住从句非谓须关注；介冠连数常光顾Step III PracticeThe teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn‘t seem to think such. They alwa ys tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I ever felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.Step IV Designing阅读下面语篇，并找出适合设计成短文改错的考点。
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2.名词： （1）主要考察能力：单复数混用。 （2）出题形式： 单复数混用 例：Helen is seventeen year old. She is very busy.讲解：“年龄多大了”复数形式，把year改 为years。 • 注意：代词单复数混用类似。 • 例：As for a friendship we can readily find them in our classmates and other people around us. • 讲解：显然因该把them改为it，指代前面提及的 friendship。此句话意思是“就友谊来说，我们可 以很容易地从我们的同学和四面的人中找到。”
• 6.句式 • （1）主要考察能力：常考that与what或 which/how与what之间的转换。 • （2）出题形式： • ① 例： She never has enough time for that she wants to do. • 讲解：原文意思是“她没有足够多的时间来做自 己想做的事情”，很明显应该把that改为what。 • 注意：这一形式是改错常考点。 • ② 例： We Chinese people have always been concerned about which has happened in your area. • 讲解：原文中需要一个连接词承接前后连个句子， 这个连接词充当be concerned about引导宾语从 句中的主语，所以应该把which改为what。
1.动词： （1）主要考察能力：时态、主谓是否一致、固定搭配。 （2）出题形式： ①时态混用： 例：Then the trouble started. We can not open the door. So we asked the policeman for help. 讲解：很显然此句子主时态是一般过去式，因此应把can改为could。 ②主谓不一致： 例：There were a football game on TV last Saturday evening. 讲解：原句中a football game决定了谓语动词必须用单数，所以应 该把were改为was。 ③固定搭配： 例： I have given up somke. The dog doesn’t like the smell. 讲解：give up doing sth。因此动词somke应该改为somking。
高考英语短文改错练习
高考英语短文改错练习Proofreading 1 (2022届山西运城测试) 话题:瞻仰凡·高难度:易July 29, 2021 marks the 131st anniversary of Van Gogh's die. As a big fan of Van Gogh, I fulfill my lifelong dream this summer by taking a trip to Europe. I first traveled to the Netherlands, where Van Gogh born and lived for most of his life. In Amsterdam I went to the Van Gogh Museum but viewed hundreds of his works, including much of his greatest paintings. Before visiting Amsterdam, I drove to Saint-Rémy. There Van Gogh, depressing and lonely as he was, he made one masterpiece after another. My last destination was The Church at Auvers, where continues to keep the subjects of Van Gogh's paintings looking just as they did when he painted them. At that moment I had never felt close to Van Gogh.答案1.第一句:die改为death2.第二句:fulfill改为fulfilled3.第三句:在born前加was4.第四句:but改为and5.第四句:much改为many6.第五句:Before改为After7.第六句:depressing改为depressed8.第六句:把made前的he删除9.第七句:where改为which10.第八句:close改为closerProofreading 2 (2022届昆明一中摸底)话题:一位公交司机的壮举难度:易The hero in my heart is an ordinary bus driver, who did what he could save the lives on the bus.In a cold morning, he was driving on the freeway while he had a sudden heart attack. He bears the great pain and braked the bus with perseverance. Finally, he was pulled up on the emergency lane, bring 54 passengers back from the death line. Therefore, he was unconscious and lost his life.He is a common individual, but he did a awesome deed. It is due to his strong sense of responsibility that he saved life in that urgent moment. He set a good example for me and what inspires myself in my life is the spirit of being devoted to others.答案1.第一句:在could后加to2.第二句:In改为On3.第二句:while改为when4.第三句:bears改为bore5.第四句:去掉was6.第四句:bring改为bringing7.第五句:Therefore改为However8.第六句:awesome前的a改为an9.第七句:life改为lives10.第八句:myself改为meProofreading 3 (2022届成都七中测试)话题:给东京奥运健儿的一封信难度:易Dear athletes,With your excellence, your joy, or your tears, we created the magic of the Tokyo 2020 Olympic Games. You were competing fierce with each other for Olympic glory.You inspired us by the power of sports. This was even more remarkable given the many challenges you had to face because of pandemic. In this difficult time, you gave the world the most precious gifts—hope. For the first time since the pandemic begins, the entire world has come together. Sports returned back to the centre stage. Billions of people around the globe were united by emotion, share moments of joy and inspiration, what gives us hope and faith in the future.Yours,Li Hua 答案1.第一句:or改为and2.第一句:we改为you3.第二句:fierce改为fiercely4.第三句:by改为with5.第四句:在pandemic前加the6.第五句:gifts改为gift7.第六句:begins改为began8.第七句:删除back9.第八句:share改为sharing10.第八句:what改为whichProofreading 4 (2022届河南天一大联考阶段性测试)话题:成为环保卫士的建议难度:中Would you like to be a greener person to protect the environment? Here was some advice. You should reduce the waste you produce daily. You can use all sides of the paper and collecting the drinking bottles. Remember to sort the waste so that it can be well recycle. It would be better for you turn off the power in your housewhen you go out. Instead of driving your car everywhere, you can save energy by either walking nor riding a bike. Beside, take a bag along when shopping to avoid using too many plastic bag. Last but not least, never spit in the public. It is real easy to be an eco-friendly person.答案1.第二句:was改为is2.第四句:all改为both3.第四句:collecting改为collect4.第五句:recycle 改为recycled5.第六句:在turn off前加to6.第七句:nor改为or7.第八句:Beside改为Besides8.第八句:bag改为bags9.第九句:去掉the10.第十句:real改为reallyProofreading 5 (2022届河南许昌质检)话题:以“劳动”为主题的班级活动难度:中Last week, our class carried out an activity, which theme is about labour.At first, the important of labour was emphasised by our teacher. Keep what he said in mind, I packed the suitcase all by me before setting off. Then come thetwo-day activity. We were asked to helping the fruit farmer pick and deliver the watermelons. Exhausted though I was, I experienced great sense of achievement from hard work.When I came back to home, I couldn't wait to share with my parents the forgettable experience. I harvested very much from the activity that they were both proud of me.答案1.第一句:which改为whose2.第二句:important改为importance3.第三句:Keep改为Keeping4.第三句:me改为myself5.第四句:come改为came6.第五句:helping改为help7.第六句:在great前加a8.第七句:去掉back后的to9.第七句:forgettable改为unforgettable10.第八句:very改为soProofreading 6 (2022届云南师大附中测试)话题:旅游的好处难度:中Traveling had become increasingly popular over the years. Perhaps one of the big reasons is that it makes people feel refreshed. Other reason is that it allows us to escape our lives. Sometimes, what our mind really need is a break from the same atmosphere. When we travel, more often than not, we will spend great deal of time outdoors, that is the best medicine for a mind locked indoors for most of the time. But traveling allows us to adopt to new perspectives. Strange enough, it's when we take a break from our problems that they sometimes manage to find solutions to them.答案1.第一句:had改为has2.第二句:big改为biggest3.第三句:Other改为Another4.第四句:need改为needs5.第五句:在great前加a6.第五句:that改为which7.第六句:But改为And8.第六句:删除adopt后的to9.第七句:Strange改为Strangely10.第七句:they改为weProofreading 7 (2022届南宁摸底)话题:毕业之际的心情和计划难度:中As June is coming, I will leave for my high school soon. I feel real excited because that mean I'm going to start my college life. At same time, I'm a little sad because I can imagine saying goodbye to my classmates and teacher. I want to take some photos with both of them. We will not be together so we will be friends forever. We will keep in touch with each other by send e-mails on the Internet. In the past three years I had learned not only how to study, but also how to be a man.I will work even harder in the future to become the proud of my school.答案1.第一句:删除for2.第二句:real改为really3.第二句:mean改为means4.第三句:At后加the5.第三句:teacher改为teachers6.第四句:both改为all7.第五句:so改为but8.第六句:send改为sending9.第七句:had改为have10.第八句:proud改为prideProofreading 8 (2022届西南四省名校大联考)话题:回国后表示感激之情难度:中I have returned back to my country safe and sound. I really wanted to express my gratitude to my host for that he has done for me. During my stay with him, I was good looked after and he showed me around many place of interest, which left a deep impression on me. In addition, with her help, my oral English has greatly improved. Besides, I have better knowledge of American culture. With its atmosphere attracted me, I hope I can have a second chance to go there.As the winter vacation is at the corner, I hope he can spare some time to visit China. Unless he comes, I will accompany him to enjoy the beauty of Chinese culture. 答案1.第一句:去掉back2.第二句:wanted改为want3.第二句:that改为what4.第三句:good改为well5.第三句:place改为places6.第四句:her改为his7.第五句:have后加a8.第六句:attracted改为attracting9.第七句:at改为around10.第八句:Unless改为IfProofreading 9 (2022届山西长治质量监测)话题:发生在日本的一次地震难度:难March 11, 2011 was a holiday in Japan. Everything was going on like usual. Most people were at home while there came an extreme loud sound like thunder. Next, people's houses began to shake. Buildings cracked and water pipes bursting. In the town of Fukushima (福岛), the main street went up into the air ten feet, holes openedup in the ground, and buildings fell into ruins. People were shocking by the unexpected quake. Some ran up and down the street, while others were trapped in the buildings were looking out their windows for help. An earthquake that hit Japan was one of the strongest disaster in the world. Many towns were destroyed in the earthquake and a great number of people was killed. Most seriously, the Fukushima nuclear accident happened.答案1.第二句:like改为as2.第三句:while改为when3.第三句:extreme改为extremely4.第五句:bursting改为burst5.第七句:shocking改为shocked6.第八句:删除trapped前的were7.第八句:out后加of8.第九句:An改为The9.第九句:disaster改为disasters10.第十句:was改为wereProofreading 10 (2022届哈尔滨六中期中)话题:散步时发现了生活中的美难度:难People always say that we lack of the eyes to realize the beauty in life. I can't agree complete. Last Friday, I wake up very early and decided to take a walk. In the square there many senior citizens were dancing, I found several elders absorb in feeding birds. Without many cars, I realized that the city looked so clean but beautiful. Some coffee shop, which used to be old and shabby, were decorated pretty well and caught my attention. On both sides of the street were big treescovering the whole city, making a green city. At that moment, I found a city was so interesting. How I regret ignore its beauty before!答案1.第一句:去掉of2.第二句:complete改为completely3.第三句:wake改为waked或woke4.第四句:there改为where5.第四句:absorb改为absorbed6.第五句:but改为and7.第六句:shop改为shops8.第七句:making后加it9.第八句:a改为the10.第九句:ignore改为ignoringProofreading 11 (2021云南文山教学质检)话题:未来规划难度:中Does the university you attend or the major you choose determine your success in the future? According up to a recent survey done by China Youth Daily, 48.6 percent of participants believe that the university one goes to plays a important role in shaping their future. On the other hand, 33.8 percent of people held the view that it's what you do in the university which matters. For some students, they think that a prestigious university does bring many benefit. Without access to academic training in college, she wouldn't have successfully got their invaluable experience. However, others believe that choose the right major has much weight than choosing a good university. Both the university and one's major are important, and they don't necessary determine your life. It's what one has learned that matters.答案1.第二句:删除According后面的up2.第二句:plays后的a改为an3.第三句:held改为hold4.第三句:which改为that5.第四句:benefit改为benefits6.第五句:she改为they7.第六句:choose改为choosing8.第六句:much改为more/much后面加more9.第七句:逗号后的and改为but10.第七句:necessary改为necessarilyProofreading 12 (2021郑州示范性高中阶段性考试)话题:健康家庭难度:中In your e-mail, you ask me for some suggestions about how to have a healthy family. Here is my advice. Generally spoken, a healthy family needs efforts of every family member. First, it is obviously that parents should treat their children equally, that is important for the family. What's more, children or parents both benefit from having some day-to-day routines. In the addition, every member should give other member right expectations. Finally, you should love my own family life. In a word, if you want to own a healthy family, it is the positive attitude that are of great importance. I would appreciate very much if you could write back and give me your own opinion.答案1.第一句:ask改为asked2.第三句:spoken改为speaking3.第四句:obviously改为obvious4.第四句:逗号后的that改为which5.第五句:or改为and6.第六句:删除In后面的the7.第六句:other后面的member改为members8.第七句:my改为your9.第八句:are改为is10.第九句:appreciate后面加itProofreading 13 (2021“皖南八校”联考)话题:校园生活难度:中As it we all know, do exercise is good for our health. I join in a school sports meeting at the beginning of this term. There were many activity that we could do, such as running, the relay race or so on. All the students and teachers took part all kinds of sports competitions. I joined in the boys' 100-meter relay race of Senior 3 with three another boys from our class. We won the first prize with your efforts. I felt very happily not only because we won but also because we enjoyed doing sports, where helped us to be stronger and healthier.答案1.第一句:删除we前面的it2.第一句:do改为doing3.第二句:join改为joined4.第三句:activity改为activities5.第三句:or改为and6.第四句:part后面加in7.第五句:another改为other8.第六句:your改为our9.第七句:happily改为happy10.第七句:where改为whichProofreading 14 (2021云南师大附中适应性月考)话题:智能手机携带细菌难度:中Tens of million of people carry their smartphones with them everywhere they go, included the bathroom. Our phones are always within their grasp, which means they are also constantly being exposed to however bacteria we may have accumulated on our hands. Unfortunately, a new survey of 1,200 Americans and their cleaning habits find that 25 percent of them have never cleaned their phones. Researchers estimate that a regularly use smartphone that has never been cleaned may hold up more bacteria than an entire household bathroom. According to survey conducted by the company Vital Vio, that is common for smartphone users to come into contact with various forms of bacteria. Suddenly, eating a sandwich in your bathroom doesn't sound so badly.答案1.第一句:million改为millions2.第一句:included改为including3.第二句:their改为our4.第二句:however改为whatever5.第三句:find改为finds6.第四句:use改为used7.第四句:删除hold后面的up8.第五句:survey前面加the9.第五句:that改为it10.第六句:badly改为badProofreading 15 (2021广西钦州一中月考)话题:人物故事难度:难My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world,so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked,“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!答案1.第一句:删除last前面的in2.第二句:anything改为something3.第三句:better改为best4.第三句:decide改为decided5.第四句:step改为steps6.第六句:well改为good7.第七句:after改为when/while8.第八句:party前面的a改为the9.第八句:just后面加to10.第九句:enjoy改为enjoyingProofreading 16 (2021银川宁大附中月考)话题:运动会经历难度:中Last week we had a school sports meeting on the playground of our school. All the students in our class took an actively part in it. John took part in the 1,500-meter race. He was the fastest runner in the race, win a gold medal. Lisa was a shortgirl,who didn't do good in the high jump, so we said “Don't blame yourself”to comfort him. I took part in the 200-meter running race. As soon as I hear the sound of the starting gun, I tried my better to run faster than others. As I was running, I could hear“Come on! Come on!”from my classmate. That gave me great strength. Finally I was first person to cross the finishing line. As a result of, my class was No.1 in the sports meeting. What proud we were! It was really an exciting day!答案1.第二句:actively改为active2.第四句:win改为winning3.第五句:good改为well4.第五句:him改为her5.第七句:hear改为heard6.第七句:better改为best7.第八句:classmate改为classmates8.第十句:first前面加the9.第十一句:删除result后面的of10.第十二句:What改为HowProofreading 17 (2021四川省南充高级中学月考)话题:运用新方法游览故宫难度:难During the holiday, I tried a new way to explore the Forbidden City, where left me with deep impression. To avoid waste time buying a ticket on the spot, I made a reservation online. I got my ticket from a machine without difficulty and start the exploration. I was deep attracted by the grand architecture. To my excited, I could scan the QR codes to get detailed informations. With the VR glasses on, I even found me back to the time when the palace was under construction. How impressive! Ifound the Forbidden City both traditional or modern because of our history was made alive here.答案1.第一句:where改为which2.第一句:deep前面加a3.第二句:waste改为wasting4.第三句:start改为started5.第四句:deep改为deeply6.第五句:excited改为excitement7.第五句:informations改为information8.第六句:me改为myself9.第八句:or改为and10.第八句:删除because后面的ofProofreading 18 (2020四省八校上学期质检)话题:旅游经历难度:中Last summer vacation I travelled to America and I met a lot of foreigner. I found a tour guide which spoke both English and Chinese because of I was not confident with my English. Interesting, some native English speakers joined me in the trip. When we are in the Grand Canyon, we lost contact with our guide but everyone was worried. All of sudden, my phone rang and it was from the guide, said that he would wait for us at the gate of the Canyon. He asked I to inform the other members. I collected my courage to tell them in English, and then I was praising by them. I felt more confident afterwards.答案1.第一句:foreigner改为foreigners2.第二句:which改为who/that3.第二句:删除because后面的of4.第三句:Interesting改为Interestingly5.第四句:are改为were6.第四句:but改为so/and7.第五句:sudden前面加a8.第五句:said改为saying9.第六句:I改为me10.第七句:praising改为praisedProofreading 19 (2020河南名校线上联考)话题:个人倡议难度:中I think teenagers in China should have a specially festival that I would call it Teenager Volunteer Day. As is known to all, most teenagers in China are brought up as a only child in the family. They usually given too many care and attention.Through volunteering, teenagers may learn to think of others and many other important life lesson. In Teenager Volunteer Day, teenagers are encouraged to volunteer wherever you are needed. They may help to raise money for people which suffer from a serious disease. They may go to a home for the aged to do what is good for old people, or collecting books for children in poor areas.答案1.第一句:specially改为special2.第一句:删除call后面的it3.第二句:a改为an4.第三句:They后面加are5.第三句:many改为much6.第四句:lesson改为lessons7.第五句:In改为On8.第五句:you改为they9.第六句:which改为who10.第七句:collecting改为collectProofreading 20 (2020安徽合肥质检)话题:个人梦想难度:中I have been decided to become a pilot since I am a little kid. Each time I see a plane flying across sky, I feel extremely excited but want to fly it. That is why I believe it can make me happily and free. To make my dream come true, I have to be physically fit by keeping a healthy diet and work out regularly. Besides, I must work hard to make great progresses with my studies. Although it is not that easy to being a pilot, I'll never give up my dream and spare no effort to realize them.答案1.第一句:删除have后面的been2.第一句:am改为was3.第二句:sky前面加the4.第二句:but改为and5.第三句:why改为because6.第三句:happily改为happy7.第四句:work改为working8.第五句:progresses改为progress9.第六句:being改为be10.第六句:them改为it。
2020年高考英语全国卷I短文改错及答案详解
2020年高考英语全国卷I短文改错及答案详解Today。
XXX with eggs。
and I thought it must be easy to cook。
My mom told me how to prepare it。
First。
I cut the tomatoes into pieces and put them aside。
Next。
I broke the XXX。
After that。
I poured oil into a pan and XXX until the oil was hot。
Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into the pan together。
"Not that way," my mom tried to。
us but failed。
She was right。
It didn't turn out as I had wished.eat构成并列关系，应该用过去分词作定语，故将frying改为fried。
第三处：preparing—prepare考查动词时态的误用。
句意：我认为它一定很容易做。
应该用一般现在时表示普遍性，故将preparing改为prepare。
第四处：off—on考查介词的误用。
句意：用筷子快速地搅拌起来。
应该用介词on表示打开状态，故将off改为on。
第五处：chopsticks—chopstick考查单复数的误用。
句意：用筷子快速地搅拌起来。
chopstick是不可数名词，故将chopsticks改为chopstick。
第六处：XXX—unless考查连词的误用。
句意：我耐心地等着，直到油热了。
应该用连词unless表示“除非”，故将until/till改为unless。
第七处：us—them考查代词的误用。
句意：然后我把西红柿和打好的鸡蛋一起放进锅里。
应该用代词them代替前面提到的西红柿和鸡蛋，故将us改为them。
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8.并列连词的错误（and, but, or, so) 1）Without a moment’s delay, his neighbor picked up the box but announced: “ I’ ll take them.” but---and 2） All I had to do was to write a story or present it. or--- and
5.非谓语动词 （非谓语动词混用、不定式符号to的有无；介词 后使用动名词；并列结构中几个非谓语动词是 否一致；非谓语动词用作主语时可用动名词或 不定式，不能用动词原形） 1）On the box was a card say: “25 cents each.” say---saying 2) “ Excuse me,” she said, put her arm around the unhappy old woman. put----putting
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7. 从句引导词错误 (注意： eithr…or…, neither…nor…, not only…but also…,not…but…, how与what, how与why, so…that, such…that） 1） I felt so nervous as I shook like a leaf. as---that 2)Here is my idea about how a friend is like. how—what
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1.一致性问题 主谓一致，时态一致，语态一致，代词指代一致 名词数和格的一致，行文关系一致 2.词性 名词，动词，形容词，副词 3.固定搭配 介词，短语，固定句型，习惯用法
I’m very tiring today. We had a maths test at school. It was very difficult. I study a lot yesterday, and stayed up very lately. I didn’t get enough sleep So I didn’t feel very good this morning. But I still think I did good job in the test .I hope so! I’m afraid if I did bad, Mum and Dad may regret they bought me so an expensive bike. My friends say that they should not worry because that I always get good marks in maths , so I’m still nervous about my result.
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Proofreading 1：My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends. Proofreading 2Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although we’ve been delighting to have you as neighbors, we’re hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog-Cleo.We’ve called several time about Cleo’s early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she’s outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before 5 o’clock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.Sincerely,Jack and Rose Proofreading 3Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.Proofreading 4I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.Before long, a train inspector comes to check our tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live.Proofreading 5My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky—they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!Proofreading 6The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800’s. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.Proofreading 7My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish.Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.Proofreading 8Mr. Jonson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.”That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon, I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.Proofreading 9Dear Diary,Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find other one.”His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school or just everything else I love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I’ll never fall sleep. Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend. Yours,Rosemary Proofreading 10My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel public transport.We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.Proofreading 11Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think of some time, I let her copy my answers. But after the test, all of us were called to the teacher’s office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn’t cheat. I was just helping a friend. Why does she punish me?Proofreading 12There are many different signs in the public. They tell you what to do or what not to do in a place. Do you know what they exact mean? For example, if you go to see a film, you should enter the cinema at the ENTRANCE and leave for the EXIT. You will either find NO SMOKING signs in many cinemas. If you visit a museum, don’t take some photos inside the halls. You are not allowed. You will find NO PHOTOS signs in many museum. When you drive a car, don’t park in a street without a NO PARKING sign. Making sure understood the signs and you won’t get into any trouble.Proofreading 13Last night I am getting ready for the coming examination when the noise from my neighbor interrupted me. The noise went on and on. It was too loud that I could hardly pay attention to my study any longer, but I went to my neighbor’s houses and say to him. “Excuse me, would you please turn down the TV? I’m preparing for tomorrow’s examination.”Hear these words, he felt ashamed and his face turned to red. And he said, “OK, I will. I’m very sorry to have made so much noise. Just now, the football game was very wonderfully. I was too exciting to control myself. I won’t do that again. Good lucky in your coming examination.”After that, I went on with his study.Proofreading 14My uncle was the biology professor. When I was young he was used to take me to the biology lab, when I saw pigs, cats and other animals. My uncle also influenced me through nature walks. He often takes me for a walk in the backyard. We would catch frogs and snake, and find fireflies in the sky. He seemed know everything about wildlife. Eighteen years later, think about my uncle and her influence on my life. I feel very lucky. I am grateful that I got the chance to learn for him. He helped me develop my interest in all that was alive and sometimes death around me.Proofreading 15Time flies! This is a third year that I have been in this school. In the past two and a half years, our school had organized many activities. What impressed me best was an activity called “Learning to Farm”. In an autumn afternoon, we were sent to a farm which we learned to plan potatoes. Having been in the city for so a long time, we were so happy to go to the countryside. After divided into three groups, we started to work. Some students cut potatoes into pieces; some dug holes, and the others put the pieces of potatoes into the hole, put the earth back and pushed them down hard. We continued doing that until all the work was done. Although we were exhausted, but we felt fulfilled on our way back home.Proofreading 16Dear schoolmates,In order to get high school students to attaching importance to the environment and improve oursense to protect the environment, and China Daily is planning to hold an interestingly knowledge contest. A contest starts on October 14th and end on 31st. Remember, you can take the contest in China Daily newspaper, that is very popular among high school student. The answer sheet must cut from the newspaper and sent to China Daily after the deadline.Please pay more attention to the related information of the contest and take an active part in them on time.Students’Union Proofreading 17A young man called Low-Carbon Brother become a hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggests living a low-carbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing carbon dioxide in the air. For example, she always picks up something. While he is watching TV, he always turns up the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. Therefore, he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a simply life with so many modern invention around us. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in support his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, but he at least can enjoy a healthy life.Proofreading 18Li Ming and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three. They all work hard but they have different learning method. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teacher. As a result, he miss lots of points that the teacher makes and I usually takes him much time to finish his homework. But he has to stay up late and doesn’t get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite the different way of learning. She listens attentive and tries to catch everything that the teacher said in class. Because this, she spends less time doing her homework, which makes it is possible for her to go to bed early.Proofreading19A few years before, Jack and I had a quarrel over score in a football match. From then on, we didn’t speak to each other any longer.One day, when I was standing by a tree read, a ball flew to me and I kicked it back with looking at the player. But while I put up my head, I found it was Jack. Seen him, I was feeling very embarrassed. However, he was smiled to me, so I smiled either. Then we made up.This way the walls between us were torn down with a smile but we become good friends again. Proofreading 20Dear Mr. Smith,I’m very much glad to hear that your international shopping center will build no-smoking supermarket. In my opinion, it is a good idea to do so, for it can not only help the smokers to smoke less, and it can also do good to other customers’health. Since you had given up selling cigarettes, the customers don’t like smoking are sure to support you. In addition, smoke in the shopping center may cause fire, which is very dangerous to both your possession and the safety of the customers. In a word, the non-smoking supermarket will not effect your business. To the contrary, it will help you attract more customers who want to keep health.Best wishes!Proofreading 21It has been years since the Chinese get plastic bags from supermarkets for free. China has banned free plastic bags at shops and supermarkets, but people have to pay for them. The Chineseonce used about 300 million of plastic shopping bags a day, which has caused environmentally pollution because plastic bags are not easy to break down. So the Chinese is encouraged to take their own bags for shopping. Then what kind of shopping bag is the best to carry? Some student in Chongqing have a extraordinary idea. They use old clothes to make cloth bags, and then to ask their parents and friends to use these cloth bags instead of plastic ones. They do so because they think it is our duty help protecting the environment.Proofreading 22Union is strength. Whenever you’re faced with difficulties or in a dilemma, cooperation plays an important part in getting you out of trouble.There was a time when I was too proud that I overlooked my classmate, refusing to work together with them. Therefore, it was no doubt that I was left alone, suffering from loneliness and failure. Unfortunately a teacher impressed on me the value of cooperation. From then on, I learned to help others and turn to my friends for the help whenever I had difficulty finish a task on my own. Surely cooperation made a great difference. Now I am getting well with my friends.My experience has teach me that only if we attach great importance with cooperation can we go beyond ourselves. As the saying go, “United we stand; divided we fail.”Proofreading 23Dear Tom,How is everything going recently? That has been a long time since we meet in China last time. Having passed the finally exams, I am busy planning a two-weeks trip to the U.S. during this winter holiday. Do you have any suggestions about the choice f America cities? I prefer to big and modern cities. I guess I’d better book a hotel. What is the price for single boy like myself? Is it easy to find Chinese food? What is the traffic like, after I travel between cities in the U.S.? Hope to hearing from you. Thank you!Best regards! Li Hua Proofreading 24Dear teachers and students,As we know, air pollution is serious environmental problem in our city. Every day we had to take in very dirty air, that isn’t good for our health. To make sure the air fresh, we should keep the following suggestions on mind. Firstly, we should take a bus or ride a bicycle as much as possible instead of drive a car. Secondly, we shouldn’t throw litter here and there but put them into the dustbin. Thirdly, some factories should be closed and moved out of the city. Finally, we need to plant many trees to make the air fresher. Let’s take action and try your best to make the air in the city cleaner!Thank you！The Students’ Union Proofreading 25I would like to tell you a secret. I have great penfriend, Lee. He is an American boy of eleven year old. We haven’t been seen each other ever, so we are good friends. We have common interests and always know which each other’s thought is. We both like reading, watching movies and listen to soft music. If any one of us finds any new books, later movies or some wonderful music, we will tell the other one. And then we will share the feelings before reading, watching or listening. If i have any trouble, I will tell him. And almost every time he knows the best way to comfort myself. If he is upset, I will certain do the same thing for him.Proofreading 26My name is Linda. I used to living in the countryside of Chicago with my parents, that was born in New York. Living in the countryside have a lot of advantages. The air isn’t polluted, and the environment is clearly. Besides, the neighbors are friendly for each other. However, there are some disadvantages of living in the countryside as well as. If you have job downtown, you have to spend many time on the road every day. And life in the countryside isn’t very excited, so most teenagers like to live downtown. When i complete high school at 20, I moved to California to study at a university.Proofreading 27It has been three months before I left the junior high school. Besides, there is one thing I’ll never forget about it. It was my turn to give an English speech in class. I felt worried because my poor spoken English. So I went to Miss Lee for help. She not only encourages me, but gave me some valuable advices. And then i spent nearly two hours practice it at home every day. To my great joy, my speech was the great success. It was the teacher’s encouragement who halped me get courage. Through the experience, I know when we have difficulty we should never be afraid to ask other for help.Proofreading 28Many teachers worry about the effects of television on young people. According to studies, any children spend more time watching television than they spend in school. Because so much viewing, children may not be develop the habit of read and the ability to enjoy themselves. No one worries much about the radio program young people listen to, although radios can be very noise.Teachers also wonder about the effects of television commercials. On one year the average child will see 25, 000 television commercials, all planned and written by grown-ups to make children to want things that they don't real need.Proofreading 29When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing in the tests. I was feeling very nervous.I had not studied at all at the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test. I went through the test for many times but I could only answer three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail the exam. Then, I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn't looking at me, but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand on my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don't know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not push for cheating but instead gave me a second chance.Proofreading 30I am very excited to have accepted an e-mail from you. I'm glad you have made such a great progress that you can write your e-mail good Chinese. I read your e-mail to my parents and show them the photo you sent it to me. How time flies! Our friendship has lasted for several months. We have got to know but learned a lot from each other. Yes, it is clearly that your life in your country is quite different from me. Thanks again for writing to me. I'm looking forward to hear from you soon. Best wishes to you and your family.Proofreading 31Dear Ms. Smith.I appreciate your help very well. On the first day of camp, you came up to myself while I was sitting alone. After that. You always gave me specially attention and inspired to me to join in activities. As a result, I gradually got to know the other campers. Because the help you gave methat summer. my life changed. I gained so much confidence that I go back to school as new person. My grades improved. I became very active but made new friends. Today, I got a letter that said I had been admitting to a college. I am proud of it. I just want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person.Yours,BobProofreading 32One day, while my friend and I was traveling through Germany, we were not very hungry but we only had a little money. We decided stop at a village market to buy something to eat. We choose the cheapest biscuits and ate it under a tree. We thought the biscuits were great. “Let’s got some more,”I said, “They’re cheap and they really taste well.”My friend could read some German, but I couldn’t, and I gave her the biscuit bag to find the name. She looked at it and started to laugh, “How are you laughing?”I asked. “Because they’re dog biscuits!”She said. Proofreading 33Dear Alice,I have just got some good mews to tell to you. I win a national prize for painting last week.My father was so pleasing that he suggested I go to England for a holiday. I’d like to staying There for half a month, visiting place of interest. Or practicing my English as well. We’ve been Writing to each for nearly a year now. I have often dreamed of talk face to with you. I imagine you’ll be at vacation yourself by that time. Perhaps we could go out to do some sightseeing together.Best,LilyProofreading:34If I have the honor to be chose to work for the 29th Olympic Games, I will at first improve my English so that I can talk easily about foreign visitor. Second, I will learn more about history of the Olympics as good as the 2008 Olympic Games. Third, since I was familiar with Beijing, I can help visitors find their ways in the city. Finally, I should be able to tell visitors about our history and culture and show them their great achievements. In short, I will do my best to help making the Games a success.Proofreading:35As summer vacation are coming soon, my classmates are trying very hardly to get train tickets to go home. But I have made up my minds to spend the vacation far from home for first time in my life. My parents have agreed to visiting me, and I will have a different vacation. When they came here, I will show them around my university and the city just as well. I have decided to buy them some nice gifts. It will be a big surprising for them. My parents have done a lot for me, and I think it is high time that I did anything special to express my thanks.Proofreading:36Last summer I go to America and studied at a language school. I had many wonderful experience, but I also had a sad one. One day, the school held party, where I invited to talk about Tianjin. After that they asked me a lot of Things about China. But I couldn’t explain them with English Clearly.I felt sadly. I learnt a lesson from this experience. I have already studied English for eight years, I can’t use it very good. I must work hard to improve my spoken English so that I will not be able to communicate freely with foreigners. I hope I can be a bridge between China and others countriesin the future.Proofreading:37The Story about Growth is my favorite American TV play because it is very interested. The play tells humorous stories that happen in the Green’s family. With such stories it make people think about life, but therefore attracts the audience. It is also a window which we can learn about American society. And there were many meaningful things that are worth think of, such as the relationship between parents and children in a lot of American family. It is quite different from those in China. The play is very popular. We’d better not to miss the chance to enjoy it. Proofreading:38Dear Ms Smith,I am secretary of the City Student Union (CSU). We were organizing an art exhibition for high school students in city. This will be held on the 9th of July in the Exhibition Hall of Beihai. More than 1000 painting will be on show, but high school students and teachers from all the eight districts will come to the event. As you are very popularly with us Chinese high school students, we’d like to invite for you to the exhibition. We would be grateful when you could join them that day. Looking forward to hear from you soon.Yours,Li MingProofreading:39Last winter vacation, some of my classmates decide to travel with their friends, while I chose to take par-time job to gain experience and earn some money. I learned from my teacher that a nearby company was looking after students with good handwriting to write address on envelope. The pay were 10 cent per envelope. I headed for the company, feeling sue I would easy finish 300 envelops in five hours and to earn the money. Actually, I only finished 200. Now, I fully understand how hard is to earn money. Getting out of the classroom is indeed necessary for we all.Proofreading:40John Brown is London taxi driver who love going to the theatre .Last week his mother gave him two tickets for a play. The tickets were on Sunday evening. Then John read some reviews of the play, which all said it was a terribly one! He wouldn’t go to see a play that no one liked it, So two hours before the play started, he left the ticket on the back seat of his taxi, Perhaps someone who wanted see the play would take them. However, while John went back home, the tickets were still there. In the fact ,there were four tickets on the seat. Someone has placed another pair of tickets on top of them!Proofreading:41Dear Jerry,I’m glad to know that you had an interest in Chinese food. Here I’d like to tell you something about them. Chinese food is famous with its wide variety. The food in one area can be easy told from that in another. For example, Shanghai food, a little bit sweet, differ from Sichuan food that is rather hot. However, every kind of the Chinese food is worth trying, because each has a delicious taste and good for health. Since the restaurant in China usually serves special dish of different areas, you can enjoy various Chinese foods whenever you are. I’m looking forward to meet you here so that I can tell you more about Chinese food at table.Best wishes. JinProofreading:42Dear Mrs. Winthorp,So my first week at college is over! No lectures this morning so I think I’d email you and let you know what things are going.I’m glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm. I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one on second floor. There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make friend with them so they we can help each other on the course work. Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here.Well, I had better to stop now. I’m going to attend mine first lesson this afternoon, for I’ve got some preparation to make, Keep in touch.Best,CarolProofreading:43One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend, a truck came to a stop besides us. The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through.I stood there and couldn’t believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful. The man insisted, so I grateful accepted the offer, thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road. This man might need the umbrella himself, and he preferred to give it to everyone else. It was a lesson to us that it possible give without expect anything in return.Proofreading:44After five years away in my hometown ,I find that the neighborhood which I used to living in has changed a lot. The Sichuan Restaurant and the older fish shop across the street from our middle school were gone there exist now a park that has a small river running through. The factory at the corner of Friendship Street and Zhongshan Road has been moved out of the city, and sports center has been built in their place. The market at the corner of friendship Street and Xinhua Road has been given way to a supermarket. Besides the bookstore next to our middle school is still there. Proofreading:45My classmate, Joseph, is at present in hospitalWith a breaking leg. He was walking to school the other day when he let a bicycle ran right into him . He never watches where he is going, so he often gets into the trouble. But he is having a nice time there. He has a comfortable room, patiently nurses, and a great deal of time to read. Some friends of his go to see him every day, they take him lost of good book and fresh fruit. He is not losing any time from school because he is busy study what he has missed in classes. The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected and will b out of hospital a few weeks. Proofreading:46It was a chance of a lifetime to win the firstprize on the Story Writing Show. All I had to do was to write a story or present it. My teachers have been telling me how great my writing was. So if they had said was true, I would have a chance of winning the prize . What were better, I had useful help . There was Uncle Chen , gentleman living near my house , who was a very much famous writer he agreed to reading my story and give me some advices on how to write like a real writer.Proofreading:47Here is my idea about how a friend is like. Firstly, a friend is someone you can share your secrets. If you tell him a secret, never will he talks about it with anybody else. Besides, a friend is。
2020年高考英语全国卷II短文改错试题及答案详解
2020年高考英语全国卷II短文改错试题及答案详解（全国卷II适用地区：重庆、陕西、甘肃、宁夏、青海、新疆、黑龙江、吉林、辽宁、内蒙古、海南）请看试题：第一节短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m surely you’ll have a good time. Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.请看译文：谢谢你的来信，这真的令我很高兴。
2020年高考英语短文改错专题复习(带答案)
2020年高考英语短文改错专题复习(真题+详细解析答案)1．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.More and more foreigners like to come to China. Last Friday our school was invited a foreign teacher in our city give a class to the students of Senior Grade Two. We found his class interested. I learned a lot from him. The teacher had a free talk to us with easy English. He spoke slow so that we could understand him well. Sometimes he repeated what we don’t understand. My classm ates were all active in the class. To his joy, I understood everything the teacher said. And I was able to ask question in English. This class encouraged me very much. I’m sure that until we keep on practicing, it will be easy for us to learn speaking English well.2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.One day I pushed my cousin Li Dong in wheelchair on an especial narrow sidewalk. We struggled along with one wheel on the sidewalk or the other on the road. Suddenly, a man riding his motorcycle past us rapidly, missing Li Dong by several inch. Immediately, he turned round, stopped his motorcycle and came over. We were worried she would blame us for have stood in his way. To our surprise, he said nothing at all and helped out push the wheelchair until we reached a slightly wider sidewalk. Then he left after we could say thanks to him. We were leaving ashamed of what we thought.3．只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分.When I was a child, I spent more than ten years learn the violin. Therefore, I couldn’t understand "real music". After I graduated at high school, a friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool. I will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store. There I saw a guitar player playing the guitar, which I really enjoyed. He became my the first guitar teacher. It took me such a long time choose a guitar among several wonderful model. Now the guitar is the most importantly part of my life and I practice it every day.4．只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分.In the past, I always think my little brother was very unpleasant, because he used to ask mesome questions every time he did his homeworks. I felt as if I had been the smartest person in the world every time he accepted my explanations. Answered one of his questions, I often liked to say that he was too stupidly to solve such simple questions.Last week both us received our report cards from our school. Unexpectedly, I got C's, when he got straight A's. To make things bad, all the day my brother screamed what foolish it was of me not to ask questions! I just sighed and had to admit that she was right. I have never made a fun of him since then.5．只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分.How can a person recover from emotional problems? A popular opinion suggests that he watches humorous films. And a recent study proves this to be wrong. The study also shows that watching at sad films can make getting over a negative mood a easier job. Emotional experiences is important to people’s well-being. People are less likely to share their feelings with these who have had similar experiences. Similar, people prefer movies that reflect their mood. That’s the reason a sad film can contribute to comfort a sad person more than a pleasant one.6．只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分.Thanksgiving Day is one of the most important family holiday in America. All the members of a family, no matter where far away they are, will try to get together on that day. The first Thanksgiving in America takes place in October, 1621. In 1620, the group of Englishmen sailed to Massachusetts. They had expected to find a freely place to live in, so they experienced a hard winter. Half of them starved death. The next spring, we began farming. With the help of local Indians, they learned to be plant corn and raise animals. In the fall, the fields produced a good harvest. Filling with joy and thanks to God, they held a celebration. In 1863, it became a national holiday.7．只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分.Dear Mr. Green, I'm very exciting to learn that you will start a magazine together. That sounds great and I definitely agree you on that.Some of the columns that you mention in the letter are really my cup of tea. “Cultural Express” give us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different part of the world have different values, it's necessary to learn from each another. Apart from that, "Blurt Out" is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improving oral English. "Entertainment" is also cool! The popular singers, actors or celebrities are so attractively that you absolutely can't miss this part. Teenagers are to fond of popular things, too.Well, I can't list more. I really can't wait to read this magazine.Yours, Li Ming8．只允许修改10处错误,多者（从第11处起）不计分.Of all my teachers, Mr. Zhang is the one who impresses me most. Though he is 40, but he looks very younger for his age. He’s one of the most popular teacher in our school. Comparing with other teachers, Mr. Zhang pays more attention to his methods of teaching. He tries many ways of make his classes lively and interesti ng. In her opinion, we should not only know “what” but also understood “why”. So, instead of giving us answers immediate, he encourages us think by ourselves first. With his help, we’ve learned how to analyze and solve problems. What a wonderful world of “why” he leads us to! He is so an excellent person that we all admire him very much.9．只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分.Last week I went to visit to my former neighbor, Mr. Yang. He and I used to living next to each other for many years. About half a year ago, an order came which the old building, along with many other similar ones, were going to be pulled down to make room for a main street.So I had to move apart. Mr. Yang now lives in the suburbs near a beautiful park. His new apartment is much big than before. The only problem is that it took quite a long time to get to the downtown area. Therefore, Mr. Yang doesn’t seem to worry about the long distance. He says that new subway line is to be built in a few year and he is sure life will be better in the future.10．只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分.I went to a shop to buy a jacket one Sunday. It is famous one where there are a variety of clothes. I looked all around and finally find an attractive jacket. When I was asked the price, the assistant said, "Seventy dollars." He added that if I paid by cash, he would give me a discount — ten percent off the fixing price. I thought it was so expensive and started to leave. As I was left, he grabbed me and said, "Okay. Forty-five dollars. "Delighting, I bought the jacket. However, when I got home and tried on my new jacket, I realized that anything was wrong with it. It had a pocket where wouldn't open. I was speechless and looked at it in amazement.11．只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分.Great changes have been taken place in my village. Ten years ago, the small and low houses, which lie on the north of a lake, produced much waste. As the result, the lake was serious polluted. To the west was a sandy field that was the source of dust. Better still, a brick yard on the southwest side of the lake used up a great deal good soil. Now the poor house have been replaced by green trees and the brick yard by tall buildings. The sandy field that the villagers used to ploughing has been covered with fruit trees. On the lake the villagers often spend his spare time boating and fishing.12．只允许修改10处,多者（从第11处起）不计分.It was 7:15 in the morning of February 8, 2007. I was walking along Park Road towards the east while an old man came out of the park on the other sides of the street. Then I saw a yellow car to drive up and make a right turn into Park Road. The car hit the man while she was crossing the road. He falls with a cry. The car drove off at full speed heading west. I noticed driver was a woman wore a pair of glasses and the plate number was AC864. Two minutes late, I managed to stop a passing car, took the old man to the nearest hospital but paid for his treatment.答案1．【答案】1．去掉invited之前的was2．give前加to3．interested→ interesting4．with→ in5．slow→ slowly6．don’t→ didn’t7．his→ my8．question→ questions9．until→ if10．speaking→ spoken2．【答案】1．在wheelchair之前加a2．especial→ especially3．or→ and4．past→ passed5．inch→ inches6．she→ he7．have→ having8．去掉helped后的out9．after→ before10．leaving→ left3．【答案】1．learn→ learning 2．Therefore→ However 3．at→ from4．started→ start5．all→ both6．that→ which7．去掉the8．choose前加to 9．model→ models 10．importantly→ important 4．【答案】1．think→ thought 2．homeworks→ homework 3．answered→ answering 4．stupidly→ stupid 5．both后加of6．when→ while7．bad→ worse8．what→ how9．she→ he10．去掉a5．【答案】1．watches→ watch 2．And→ But3．去掉at4．easier前的a改为an 5．is→ are6．less→ more 7．these→ those 8．Similar→ Similarly 9．the reason后加why 10．comfort→ comforting 6．【答案】1．holiday→ holidays 2．where→ how 3．takes→ took4．the→ a5．freely→ free6．so→ but7．starved后加to 8．we→ they9．去掉be10．Filling→ Filled 7．【答案】1．exciting→ excited 2．agree后加with 3．mention→ mentioned 4．give→ gives6．another→ other 7．improving→ improve 8．or→ and 9．attractively→ attractive 10．去掉to8．【答案】1．去掉but2．younger→ young 3．teacher→ teachers 4．Comparing→ Compared 5．make→ making或of→ to 6．her→ his 7．understood→ understand 8．immediate→ immediately 9．think→ to think10．so→ such9．【答案】1．去掉第二个to 2．living→ live3．which→ that4．were→ was5．I→ We6．big→ bigger8．Therefore→ However 9．that后加a 10．year→ years 10．【答案】1．famous前加a 2．find→ found3．去掉was4．by→ in5．fixing→ fixed6．so→ too7．left→ leaving 8．Delighting→ Delighted 9．anyt hing→ something 10．where→ which/that 11．【答案】1．去掉been2．lie→ lay3．第一个the改为a 4．serious→ seriously 5．that→ which 6．Better→ Worse 7．deal后加of 8．house→ houses9．ploughing→ plough10．his→ their12.【答案】1．in→ on或of→ on2．while→ when3．sides→ side4．去掉to5．she→ he6．falls→ fell7．driver前加the8．wore→ wearing或wore前加who 9．late→ later10．but→ and短文改错解析1．4．with→ in老师用简单容易的英语和我们自由地交谈.表达用某种语言交流,要用in English.5．slow→ slowly他说得很慢.用副词slowly来修饰动词speak.6．don’t→ didn’t该段都是用动词的一般过去时,根据该句中的repeated可知此处应该是didn’t.7．his→my让我高兴的是, 老师讲的所有的东西我都懂了.这件事是让我高兴,所以要用to my joy.8．question→questions我也能用英语提问问题了. question是一个可数名词,此处应该用复数形式.9．until→ if我确信只要我坚持练习的话.应该是if引导的条件状语从句.10．speaking→ spoken英语口语spoken English.2．5．inch→ inches inch是可数名词,前面有several修饰, 所以要用复数形式.6．she→ he根据上一句话中的a man可知此处应该用he.7．have→ having介词for后面要用v-ing形式作宾语.8．去掉helped后的out他什么也没说,还帮着我们把轮椅推了出来. help ab.do sth.帮助某人做某事.9．after→ before在我们还没来得及说声谢谢之前他已经走了, 根据语境应该是before引导的时间状语从句.10．leaving→ left留下我们为自己刚才的想法感到羞耻. sb. be left +adj. =leave sb. +形容词,使某人处于某种状态中.3．4．started→ start 动词suggest表示“建议”之意时, 其后的宾语从句要用“should+动词原形”表示虚拟,should可以省略.5．all→ both不定代词的逻辑错误.all表示三者或三者以上.我和我的朋友, 只有两个人,应改为we both（我们俩都）.6．that→ which“介词+which”引导定语从句, on which在从句中作时间状语,相当于when.7．去掉the 前有物主代词my,则序数词前无需定冠词the.8．choose前加toIt takes sb some time to do sth是固定句型,表示“某人做某事需要花费多少时间”,其中it是形式主语,不定式短语是真正的主语.9．model→ models several（几个,若干）后接名词复数.10．importantly→ important形容词修饰名词,故应将importantly改为important.4．【解析】1．think→ thought in the past是明显的过去时间状语,故think应用一般过去时.2．homeworks→ homework homework（家庭作业）是不可数名词,没有复数形式.3．answered→ answering I是answer的逻辑主语, 两者间是主动关系,故应使用answering引导现在分词短语作时间状语.4．stupidly→ stupid 系动词后用形容词作表语, 故应改为stupid（愚蠢的）.5．both后加of. “我们两个人”既可以说we both,也可以说both of us.5．5．is→ are主语experiences（体验）是复数,其谓语动词也应使用复数形式.6．les s→ more根据上下文语境以及常识判断,这句话属于逻辑错误,应改为:人们更可能和那些有过类似经历的人分享自己的感受.7．these→ those其可跟who引导的限制性定语从句的指示代词是those.8．Similar→ Similarly作状语,修饰整个句子的是副词,故改为Similarly.9．the reason后加why the reason作先行词,定语从句用关系副词why引导,且why在从句中作原因状语.10．comfort→ comforting contribute to表示“有助于”,其中to为介词,故应接动名词comforting 作宾语.6．4．the→ a 应使用不定冠词泛指“一群英国人”.5．freely→free形容词修饰名词,故应将副词freely改为free.6．so→but他们本打算找一个可以自由自在生活的地方,但是却经历了严冬.上下文之间含转折关系.7．starved后加to starve to death是固定短语,意思是“饿死”.8．we→they人称代词的逻辑性错误.9．去掉be不定式和其逻辑主语they之间是主动关系,故应去掉be.10．Filling→Filled be filled with表示“充满”,故分词与其逻辑主语they之间为被动关系,应使用过去分词引导短语作原因状语.7．5．part→partsdifferent后接复数名词,这里表示“不同的地域”.6．another→other“向彼此学习”应说learn from each other.7．improving→improve and连接了两个不定式作状语,第二个不定式符号to可省略.8．or→and or常用于疑问或否定句,故这里应改为and.9．at tractively→attractive副词so修饰形容词attractive作表语.10．去掉to be fond of是固定短语,意思是“喜欢”.8．5．make→ making或of→to.解析表示“做某事的方法”,可以说ways of doing或ways to do.6．her→ his.解析物主代词的误用.7．understood→understand.解析not only…but also连接两个并列谓语, 也可看成是连接两个句子, 省略了we should.8．immediate→immediately.解析副词修饰动名词.9．think→to think.解析表示“鼓励某人做某事”要说encourage sb to do sth.10．so→ such.解析such an excellent person=so excellent a person.9．【解析】1．去掉第二个to visit作“拜访,访问”讲时,是及物动词.2．living→ live used to do sth.意思是“曾经做某事（但现在停止）”;注意区分be used to (doing) sth.该短语意思是“习惯于（做）某事”.3．which→ that that引导同位语从句,说明an order的内容.4．were→ was在从句中,主语the old building是单数,谓语动词仍用单数.注意along with不是并列连词,所以它引导的短语不能被看作并列成分.5．I→We人称代词的逻辑错误.根据语境,这里指我们（我和住了多年的邻居）分开了.6．big→bigger than before提示上文应使用比较级.10．5．fixing→fixed“固定价格”要说the fixed price.形容词fixed意思是“固定的,不变的”.6．so→too衣服太贵买不起,应改为副词too修饰形容词expensive,表达失望的语气.7．left→leaving过去进行时（was leaving）表示过去将来的动作,即:我正要离开.8．Delighting→Delighted delighted指人感到高兴的,在句中作状语,该句意为:我高兴地买回这件夹克.delighting则用来指令人高兴的事.9．anything→s omething肯定句要用something,表示出了一些问题.10．where→which/that先行词pocket（口袋）指物,应用关系代词which/that引导定语从句,且which/that在从句中作主语.11．5．that→which关系代词that不能引导非限制性定语从句.这里用which引导非限制性定语从句补充说明先行词a sandy field,且which在从句中作主语.6．Better→Worse better still（更好的是）,不符合上下文语境,应改为worse still（更糟的是）.注意大写首字母.7．deal后加of a great deal（许多,大量）,后接名词时应先加介词of.8．house→houses这里的house指上文提到的“the small and low houses”,故应改为复数形式.9．ploughing→plough关系代词that在定语从句中作use的宾语,use sth to do sth意思是“用某物做某事”,to是不定式符号,故ploughing应改为plough.10．his→their人称代词的逻辑错误,主语the villagers是复数,其形容词性物主代词应为their.12．【解析】1．in→on或of→on具体到某一天要用介词on.2．while→when只有when能表示“恰在那时”.3．sides→side sides前面的other说明这里要用单数形式.4．去掉to see sth. do中的do是作see的宾语补足语.5．she→he应该用he和man统一、。
2020年高考英语全国卷一短文改错原文、译文、长难句解析及答案详解
2020年高考英语短文改错原文、译文、长难句解析及答案详解第一部分：短文改错原文和译文Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove.I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together. ＂Not that way，＂my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn’t tum out as I had wished.今天我亲自尝试做一道简单的菜。
我喜欢吃西红柿炒鸡蛋，并且我认为做这道菜一定很容易。
妈妈告诉了我如何做这道菜。
首先，我把西红柿切成块，然后放到一边。
接着，我把鸡蛋打到碗里，然后用筷子快速把鸡蛋打散。
之后，我把食用油倒入平底锅里，打开火。
我耐心等待，直到油被烧热。
接着我把西红柿和打散的蛋液一块儿倒入了平底锅里。
“不要那样，”我妈妈全力来阻止我，但没有成功。
她是对的，（这道菜）结果并没有像我希望的那样（做好）。
第二部分：短文改错长难句解析难句解析一：Today I tried cooking a simple dish myself.解析：本句中“try cooking”意思是“试着做某事”；“myself”意为“我本人、亲自”（注意区分by myself是独自的意思）。
2020版《3年高考2年模拟》(二轮)专题五 短文改错
专题五短文改错题组一Proofreading 1(2019河北石家庄二模)I went to buy some traditional Chinese medicine on last Sunday. Just before leaving the drugstore, I noticed that some foreigners seems to have difficulty communicate with the assistant.I went over to ask if I needed. The assistant told me that she couldn’t make herself understand about how to boil the mixture correctly. Learning that I could give them the hand, they were relieved. Without some trouble, I translated that the assistant wanted to say. Both sides expressed thanks to me. I was delighted to help other. More importantly, as a Chinese, I felt proudly to see foreigners try traditional Chinese medicine.答案I went to buy some traditional Chinese medicine ①last Sunday. Just before leavingthe drugstore, I noticed that some foreigners ②seemsseemed to have difficulty ③communicatecommunicatingwiththe assistant. I went over to ask if I ④needed. The ass istant told me that she couldn’t make herself ⑤understandunderstoodabout how to boil the mixture correctly. Learning that I could give them⑥thea hand, they were relieved. Without ⑦someanytrouble, I translated ⑧thatwhatthe assistantwanted to say. Both sides expressed thanks to me. I was delighted to help ⑨otherothers. Moreimportantly, as a Chinese, I felt ⑩proudlyproudto see foreigners try traditional Chinese medicine.解析①考查介词。
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2020年高考高三英语改错Proof Reading(共28张PPT)ppt课件完美课件优秀 课件公 开课课 件
2020年高考高三英语改错Proof Reading(共28张PPT)ppt课件完美课件优秀 课件公 开课课 件
改错格式
短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分） 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你 修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除 或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）。并在其下面 写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改 后的词。 注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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2020年高考高三英语改错Proof Reading(共28张PPT)ppt课件完美课件优秀 课件公 开课课 件
2020年高考高三英语改错Proof Reading(共28张PPT)ppt课件完美课件优秀 课件公 开课课 件
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2020年高考高三英语改错Proof Reading(共28张PPT)ppt课件完美课件优秀 课件公 开课课 件
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1. Different people speak different language.
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2. Last Sunday, the police cars hurry to the tallest building.
2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
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改错格式
Unnecessary 1. He used to play the chess after school.
time
have
tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that
honesty
fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that
a
∧ 2. She asked me to watch for the traffic on the roads. out
∧ 3. I like swimming, but I won’t be able tomorrow.
to
∧ 4. At age of 12, he started writing his own book. the
weight
getting_m___a__n__y_ too fat. I didn’t realize
much 或去掉 many
how serious it was until I went∧see a
to
doctor. He t_e__l_l_s_ me that I’d probably
told
time
have
√ tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that honesty
fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that
Now I realize although I am always h__u__n__g__r__il_y__,
hungry
I have to stop _e_a__t__as much as before. I know
eating
it is hard to lose weight and that it takes a lot
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2
3
4
5
6
7
8
9
10
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得分
0 0 0 1 1 1 1 0 1 0 0
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增加
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原本未错
删除
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只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
where
can go on a diet. Meanwhile, I’ll do ＼a plenty of exercise, which won’t do me any harm. My diet and the exercise will _a_l_l_ help me to
both
regain my health.
carefully
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Ⅱ．增加（Missing words)
∧ 1. She is such good teacher that we all like her.
Wwhere
very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area . It is always crowded with
√ customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle
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2015～2016年全国高考短文改错考查形式统计表
考查形式
年份
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2016(课标全国I) 8
1
1
2016(课标全国II) 8
1
1
2016(课标全国III) 8
1
1
2015(课标全国I) 8
have a heart attack _i_f_I started to eat
less
unless
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an√d
u√sed
√ he
never
dreams
beoc∨∧ofming
rich
in
the
short
a
period
of
time.
Instead,
he
hopes
that our business will grow steady.
h1s
steadily
his
5分
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Where
very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area . It is always crowded with
customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle
and
used
he never dreams bec∨oming rich in the short period of time. Instead, siness will grow steady.
h1s
steadily
这份答卷得多少分？
My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not
am
∧ 8. The baby is taken good care by his grandma.
of
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hurried
3. The students each has a dictionary.
have
4. There are falling leaves on the ground.