高考英语基础写作basic writing character
高三英语基础写作basic writing课件
（2005年广东高考题）Michael是一名美国中学生，在学 校里选修汉语。他利用暑假到中国进修，希望进一步
了解中国文化。有一天，他看到下面有关成语的漫画， 不大明白其中的意思。请你用英语把漫画所表达的故事 和寓意写成一段短文，向他解释。
注意：1．词数：在80—120词之间； 2．参考词汇：bump into(撞上)，hoe(锄头)
写作要求：请根据以上文字提示用5个句子来描述 故事里的全部内容。注意故事的连贯性和文章的 过渡。
• ①【思路导航】 • 这是一篇记叙文，是一则寓言故事：掩耳盗铃。这里要求用5句话完成，只要抓住记
叙文的要素：时间、人物、地点和发生了什么事就行了。在这里要注意故事情节的完 整性，要有头有尾，但不可瞎编或增多故事情节。考试主要抓住故事的要素和以下几 个要点即可完成一篇漂亮的文章。
基础写作步骤
六、誊写
注重基础,单词短语多。 2. 培养写句意识,以动词为中心。
Summaries:
1. Use different ways to describe one sentence. 2. Making sentences by using non-predicate. 3.Sentence patterns are always useful.
基础写作步骤
一、审题
理清文字信息
判断文章格式、人称、要点、时态、
基础写作步骤
二、抓要点
确定主要行为
用一两个词或短语 写出每句的要点
基础写作步骤
三、扩展成句
形成基本语义单位
用一些简单句、不同句型、不同句式或 高级词汇将要点扩展成句
基础写作步骤
四、连句成文
时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应
背景（适当增加时间、地点条件等）、 逻辑关系、开头与结尾、巧用连接词和 过渡句
高考英语 写作人物篇 Basic writing---character introduction
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Thank you for listening!
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评价
1、由于他的研究,我国水稻产量快速增长。2、他被 誉为“杂交水稻之父”。
3、虽然他很出名，但是他过着简朴的时候，不计名 利。
[写作要求] 请根据表格的内容，用5句话介绍袁隆平教授。
参考词汇： 杂交水稻 hybrid精r选ic版epp产t 量production
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Yuan Longping was born in a poor family in Chongqing on September 7, 1937. Since his graduation from university in 1953, Yuan has done research on rice for over half a century. Because of his research, China’s rice production is increasing rapidly. So he is honored as “Father of Hybrid Rice”. Though he is famous, he lives a simple life
live a … life 过着…的生活 graduate from … 毕业于…
devote one’s life to 致力于…
do research on… 研究…
be honored as 被誉为/作为...而闻名
care little about money and fame 不为名利
make a contribution to … 为…作贡献
英语基础写作人物篇)
By describing the inner world of a character, it showcases their emotions, thoughts, emotions, and personality traits.
Psychological description
Physical Traits
Explain the characters' personality, their likes and dislikes, their strengths and weaknesses, and their beliefs and values
Mental Traits
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Directly describe the appearance, personality, emotions, and other characteristics of the character, and use specific details and vivid language to make the character vivid.
When describing characters, it is important to highlight their individual characteristics to make their images more vivid.
When describing the behavior and language of characters, it is important to adhere to logic and avoid contradictions and irrationality.
大学本科英语专业 Basic Writing
Introduction
1) Present the topic/statement.
2) Provide some background/context to the topic. (Optional)
3) Present/outline both sides of the argument. 4) State your position.
Paragraph 2: The first of three MAIN BODY paragraphs. 1) Name and explain the most important reason for your stated position. 2) Introduce an opposing opinion & a reason for it. 3) Explain why the opposing opinion it is not valid. End the paragraph or begin the next with a tranb) c)
View, supporting your belief (your argument) Opposing opinion Rebuttal/counter to b)
3) Conclusion
Re-state your position as the most sensible one.
5 Paragraph Essay
Paragraph 1: INTRODUCTION. 1) A brief explanation of your topic: (Optional - some background information) 2) The different positions/views 3) Your position/argument.
Basic Writing(基础写作)
3.组句（注意添加恰当的主语） 3.组句（注意添加恰当的主语） 组句
1) 要减少感染病毒的机会，最重要的是要勤洗 要减少感染病毒的机会， 手。
The most basic thing you should do is wash your hands frequently so as to reduce the chance to get infected.
组句成文的各种关系的常用过渡词语
• • • • • • • • • • 比较 on the country ; on the one hand; on the other hand ; 转折 but ; yet; however ; though; in spite of ; instead ; 递进 besides ; moreover ; what’s more; in addition ; 举例 for example/instance; such as ; that is ; namely ; 总结 all in all ; in short ; in general ; in conclusion; in brief; in a word.
基础写作训练
你是校报小记者, 最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况：
4.成篇 成篇
Announcement Hello everyone. Here is some advice on how to keep yourself healthy and avoid the H1N1 flu. The most basic thing you should do is wash your hands frequently so as to reduce the chance to get infected. If any of you have caught a cold, you should go and see a doctor as soon as possible. For those with serious illness, we suggest you stay home and rest until the doctor tells you it’s safe to return to school. Besides, you’d better clean your surroundings, such as your desks and chairs, every day. Drinking plenty of boiled water and taking more exercises will also do you good. May everybody be healthy and enjoy your study. That’s all. Thank you.
Basic Writing Skills 基础英文写作技巧
BASIC WRITING SKILLS
Dr A Soundy
Albert Einstein said:
It's not that I'm so smart, it's just that I stay with problems longer.
WHAT IS CRITICAL WRITING? AS AGAINST
DESCRIPTIVE
SECTION FROM A STUDENTS DISCUSSION: DOES THIS LOOK CRITICAL
.1 Psychological explanation for improved outcomes with goal setting Locke & Latham, (2002) describe goal setting as a technique used as part of the self-regulation theory and control theory. Interventions that employ goal setting are likely to be more helpful if they focus on a personally defined goal or one selected by the individual that embodies their personal motivation (Locke and Latham, 2002). This indicates that the specific individualised goals mentioned in this review contributed to the improvements observed. Shilts et al., (2004) also suggest that the Selfregulation theory can be helpful to maintain behaviours, such as tools that allow people to track their physical activity, like the exercise logs by those included in this review (Shilts et al., 2004).
高三英语《基础写作人物描写》课件
The purpose of character description writing is to enable readers to have a clear understanding of the characters in the story, and to further understand the story through the characters.
穿着打扮
人物的穿着打扮也是反映其性格和身 份的重要标志，可以从衣着、配饰等 方面进行描述，如精致的领带、考究 的西装等。
The Personality Traits of Character Description
性格特点
描述人物的性格特点，如开朗、 内向、勇敢、懦弱等，有助于揭 示人物的心理活动和行为动机。
定义
Character description writing is a type of writing that aims to vividly and comprehensively describe the appearance, personality, and other relevant characteristics of a character.
Vividness
To make the character more vivid and lifelike, writers can use imagery,比喻and other literary techniques to enrich the description.
Common problems and solutions in character description writing
The Language Style of Character Description
Basic writing基础写作
Basic Writing Skills (correction,completeness,coherence) Teachers introduce something theoretical and show us how to have a better control of things such as structural organization ,plot development and so on at a macro-level of composition. ENHANCE OR FORSTER MY critical and logical, lateral thinking, creation and sensitiveness to life.Informative, motivating, funEssay format:For introduction: This attention gather should be like a quotation,a question,a startling statement,anything that just instantly your reader goes“oh，I want to read this，this sounds like its gonna to be interesting”and thesis statement that tells the readers exactly what the paper the essay is going to be aboutFor body: second to fourth paragraph should highlight a certain aspect of the thesis statementsupporting details (expert testimony, statistics, example, personal experience, logic an d reasoning, known facts, analogy write the topic sentence；then write the sentences that explain and illustrate the topic sentenceFor conclusion: RESTATEMENT of essay linking the concluding paragraph to the introduction and make recommendations(suggestion/warning/prediction/importance) Be acquainted with …..Narration, as a pattern of thought, consists of the act of following a sequence of actions or events in time. (contains time,place,agent,action)It is a recounting of the facts or particulars of some occurrence, incident, or experience.The simplest kind of narration is the one which follows chronological order,i.e. which tells the events in the order in which they occurred.A Story of MyselfExposition：An expository paper explains or explores something, such as the process of doing a chemical experiment, the causes and effects of a natural or social phenomenon, the planning to a project, or the solution to a problem. It deals with processes and relationships. It answers questions of how something works, how something happens, what the outcome of a certain event may be, or why a certain situation exists. The purpose of exposition is to inform.Methods to develop the paragraphs of an exposition：Definition (定义说明法) Illustration (举例说明法) Process (程序说明法) Classification and Division (分门别类说明法) ( ) Comparison and Contrast (比较对比说明法) Cause and Effect Analysis (因果分析说明法)An argument is a set of statements in support of an opinion or proposed course of action.It is expressed in an orderly way, and is used to try to convince someone that the opinion or course of action is correct.How to support an argument1. expressing your opinion clearly in a topic sentence.2. giving relevant and accurate reasons or facts as evidence.3. giving examples.4. using transition words and phrases that signal your supporting evidence. Advanced writing:Innovative activities such as mini-lectures, group discussions, student-exchange commenting,。
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2. 性格气质（character） kind-hearted好心的， warm-hearted 热心的， absent-minded 心不在焉的， bad-tempered 坏脾气的， a strong will很强的意志力， naughty 淘气的， smart/bright 聪明的， wise睿智的， hard-working/diligent 勤奋的，
经历
尽量用复合句,倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章
注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组
His own unique Chinese R&B style is unparalleled by others and he continues to make breakthroughs as he takes risks in attempting new things.
• 7. 成就(achievement) • excellent /outstanding /remarkable出色的 • be good at/ do well in… 擅长 • famous/well-known at home and abroad国内外 著名的 • make great/rapid progress in 在…取得很大/快 速进步 • overcome many difficulties/go through hardship克服困难 • set a good example to为……树立好榜样 • speak highly of… 高度赞扬… • be honoured as…被授予……
影响
成为"感动中国"的人物(Moving China hero).
① In May 1923, Dr Huo Yingdong was born into a poor family in Hong Kong. ② At the age of ten, his father died. ③ After 1955, he was engaged in architecture, shipping, petroleum and became a famous person at home and abroad. ④ Since the beginning of the reform and open policy, he had donated over 10 billion dollars to sponsor education, culture, sports, and public welfare in Mainland.⑤ He has made great contributions to constructing and benefiting our country, which makes him a Moving China hero.
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1. 外貌（appearance/look） good-looking相貌英俊的 funny-looking外表可笑的 ugly-looking丑陋的 ordinary-looking 外貌平平的 white-haired白头发的 near/far-sighted 近/远视的 charming有魅力的 fashionable时尚的 slim 苗条的 fat胖的 lovely 可爱的
同位语 身份与 生平
尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺
注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼
省略句Байду номын сангаас
②Showing interest in music, he began learning to play the piano at the age 定语从句 of 3. 状语从句 ③ When Jay's first album was released in 2000, he got the world's attention. ④ His popularity sky-rocketed (急速上升), which allowed him to receive many awards for his songs.
Commonly-used sentence patterns
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• 1. 介绍概况：同位语结构、分词结构，使文 章简洁。如： • (1)Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family (一个贫苦家庭的儿子), was born in Kentucky on February 12, 1809. [同位语] • (2)Sun Shuwei, a world champion in diving ( 一位跳水的世界冠军), is a boy of 14 from Guangdong. [同位语] • (3)Born in Maryland, USA in 1985(他1985年 出生于美国马里兰州), Michael Phelps is a famous swimmer.[分语短语]
• 5. 教育背景（schooling / education background） • be admitted to …university考取……大学 • graduate from …department of … university 从某大学某系毕业 • receive/get a doctor’s degree获取博士学位 • go abroad for further studies 出国深造 • When at college, he majored in French/he was a French major. 读大学时他主修法语
• 3. 生日、出生地 (birth/age) • …, (who was) born in …, is a… • 4. 家庭背景（family background） • … was born into a poor/rich family出生在贫穷 的/富裕的家庭 • as a child of … years old, he…还是个……岁的 孩子时 • his/ her father was very strict with him… 父亲 对他//她严格要求 • spend his childhood in …在……度过了他的童 年 • live a happy/hard life生活很幸福/艰苦
• (2)In 2006, having broken the world record and got the gold medal (在他打破世界纪录并获 得金牌之后), he became the idol of the youth. • [分词短语] • (3)Not only does he show interest in science (他 不但对科学极有兴趣), but also he has a gift for music. [倒装句式] • 4. 评估：尽量运用短语。如： • Lei Feng set a good example to us (给我们树立 了一个良好的榜样), so all the people show great respect to him (很敬重他).
Jay Chou(周杰伦)
分词结构 • ① Born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, Jay Chou, a famous singer, was raised by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood.
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Allen Stewart, ① an Australian old man, born on March 7, 1915, is already the holder of the world record for being the oldest graduate. ② He thinks that it is never too late to learn to challenge oneself to achieve something worthwhile. ③ He got his degree in 1936, later along with a doctor’s degree of medicine. ④ He decided to study law in his eighties, and he received the master’s degree in 2006 , which was his third degree. ⑤ In 2012, he received his fourth degree by networking, who won praise for his proper arrangement on his study schedule. ( By Jackie Yi 2012广东)
• 2. 描写外貌：巧用with短语。如： • My history teacher is a beautiful woman, with long hair and big eyes (她长着两只大眼睛，留 着长发). • 3. 生平事迹：尽量用复合句、并列句、非谓 语动词短语和倒装等高级语句。如： • (1)In his life, he got many honours, one of which is the 2005 CCTV Moving China Award ( 其中包括获得“2005感动中国年度人物”的称 号). [定语从句]
•6. 主要事迹（main events） •serve as做……工作 •devote oneself /one’s effort/one’s life to; be devoted to 致力于 •make up one’s mind to do/be determined to do 决心做 •have a gift/talent for / be gifted/talented in 有 ……的天赋