山东省2020届新高考英语总复习第四板块写作第二部分读后续写对点集训
山东省2020届新高考英语总复习第四板块写作第二部分读后续写对点集训
第二部分读后续写Writing 1阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
I had to go grocery_shopping this morning for the first time in a couple of weeks.My husband had been in Greece for a few weeks and my daughters were not at_home either so I had stocked up on vegetables，salad ingredients and fruits along with the meat that I had in the freezer.I am curious.When you are in line waiting to check out，do you check out what others have in their carts？I hate to admit it，but I do.I try not to judge，but again，I suppose I do to some extent－when I see a family in which the parents and the kids are very overweight and they are buying pop(汽水)and highcalorie snack foods.My biggest issue with groceries is that all of the processed foods are easier to get and cheaper than fresh produce and probably stretch further.It amazes me to see families buying 12 packs or 24 packs of different kinds of pop.Most of the people that I am seeing are buying regular pop，not diet.But when I was young，we bought pop on_special_occasions.For birthday parties or a camping trip，we could only have one can per day.We bought Shasta back then.I am not even sure whether it is still sold or not.We could all pick a few different_flavors that we wanted for the trip.But nowadays，pop is everywhere you go. I am glad to say that the_hospital that I work for threw_away all of their pop vending machines(自动贩卖机)．They didn't think health care workers，patients or patients' families needed them.I was happy for the change，but other people might not think so.注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
2024高考英语二轮总复习第4部分专题2读后续写第2讲微观把握突破读后续写技法2精心构建续写情节课件
my head farther into the pumpkin so Mom could reach in and undo the rubber band round my ponytail.I emerged with squash-conditioned hair, a sore chin and my nose plugged with pulp.
Paragraph 2： The video was posted the Monday before Halloween. ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________
这样，根据设问，整理答案，适当扩充，再运用合适的动作描写、 心理描写和一些高级句式和高级表达，用适当的过渡词语，就组成一篇 完整的文章了。
【范文】 Paragraph 1： It was five or six minutes though it felt much longer. Dad was summoned-less, it seemed, in expectation of practical help than to make sure he didn't miss out on the spectacle.I heard him propose calling the fire department.“Stay tuned，” said Mom; she'd mentioned she was going to upload the video to Facebook, but it was only then I realized she'd been filming the whole time.The video cuts before my rescue—Dad got me to push
2020山东卷高考英语读后续写作文评讲
拿出玉米，做爆米花，装袋
3.添细节：依据情节发展，在确定框架内，按 “所见、所闻、所想、所说、所做、所感” 六个方面给每段增加4到6个具体细节。
Para 2 With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.
续写：关注原文最后一段
1. Where did they get the corn? You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us? 2. Who made popcorn? Well, we can make popcorn(爆米花), and put it into paper bags. 3. Where did Bernard sell the popcorn? Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.
Events Para 4 Bernard was such a help to his mother. He wanted very much to earn some money.
Para 5-8 The children were willing to help. John came up with an idea to help Bernard.
You know that big box of corn Uncle John sent us? Well, we can make popcorn(爆米花), and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.
2020届山东省新高考模拟英语作文读后续写写作指导与解读(含范文)
2020届山东省新高考模拟英语作文读后续写写作指导一、续写原题阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的故事短文。
续写的词数为150左右。
Though it is one of the faded memories of my life today, there are times when I remember his face clearly, especially his eyes. As he had yellow spots on his eyes we called him Spotty. He would have been a stray(流浪) dog, until he came to me.I was seven years old. My dad had just got a new job in Nasik. We had moved into a rented house. It was raining very heavily on the day we moved.It was a cold dark night. We had our meal and went to sleep. Somehow in the midnight I heard some strange sounds outside the main door. I gathered courage and looked out through the window and I was really amused with what I saw outside.There was a small puppy lying on an old doormat which my mother had put outside the door. It was wet and trembling. At first it was difficult to see the little one. It was the yellow spots on its eyes that made me realize its presence.It was trying to get under the doormat to avoid the cold air outside and it had managed to get in as I could see only its head outside the doormat. Was it sick or injured?I felt pity for the poor soul. I went in and came out with an old towel. I went near the innocent one and held it in my hand and wiped the puppy till he had become dry. I took him into my room and made a bed for him with a woolen blanket and a small pillow. He seemed very healthy and comfortable in his new bed as he went to sleep immediately.The next morning, everyone in the family came to know about the unusual guest. "Shall we keep him with us?" I questioned my mom.Like any other parents would, my parents first totally refused my idea but my sister and I convinced them to keep Spotty.Slowly Spotty got on with everyone and became one of the family members.Paragraph 1:One day, Spotty returned from his daily walk with a broken leg. ____Paragraph 2:Almost a year later, one midnight we heard Spotty barking breathlessly ____二、下水续写总体思路第一段第一句：Spotty有一天回家，断了一条腿。
【新高考作文】2020年山东省高考英语读后续写下水范文(详解版)
山东省高考英语模拟试题读后续写下水范文（详解版）一、续写原题阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的故事短文。
续写的词数为150左右。
Though it is one of the faded memories of my life today, there are times when I remember his face clearly, especially his eyes. As he had yellow spots on his eyes we called him Spotty. He would have been a stray(流浪)dog, until he came to me.I was seven years old. My dad had just got a new job in Nasik. We had moved into a rented house. It was raining very heavily on the day we moved.It was a cold dark night. We had our meal and went to sleep. Somehow in the midnight I heard some strange sounds outside the main door. I gathered courage and looked out through the window and I was really amused with what I saw outside.There was a small puppy lying on an old doormat which my mother had put outside the door. It was wet and trembling. At first it was difficult to see the little one. It was the yellow spots on its eyes that made me realize its presence.It was trying to get under the doormat to avoid the cold air outside and it had managed to get in as I could see only its head outside the doormat. Was it sick or injured?I felt pity for the poor soul. I went in and came out with an old towel. I went near the innocent one and held it in my hand and wiped the puppy till he had become dry. I took him into my room and made a bed for him with a woolen blanket and a small pillow. He seemed very healthy and comfortable in his new bed as he went to sleep immediately.The next morning, everyone in the family came to know about the unusual guest. “Shall we keep him with us?” I questioned my mom.Like any other parents would, my parents first totally refused my idea but my sister and I convinced them to keep Spotty.Slowly Spotty got on with everyone and became one of the family members.Paragraph 1: One day, Spotty returned from his daily walk with a broken leg. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Almost a year later, one midnight we heard Spotty barking breathlessly. ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________二、下水续写总体思路第一段第一句：Spotty回家，断了一条腿。
2020山东新高考英语试题英语写作读后续写详解与指导PPT(精编实用课件)
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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
1. The Meredith family lived in a small community．As the economy was in decline，some people in the town had lost their jobs．Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet．People were trying to help each other meet the challenges．
新教材适用2024版高考英语二轮总复习第4部分写作技能升华篇专题2读后续写第2讲微观把握突破读后续写
第四部分专题二第2讲技法二(2023·山东省潍坊市高考一模)High-school sports is the biggest thing that happens in our town of Verden, population six hundred.Sports are important in our family.Both of our sons were high-school athletes.So I shouldn't have been surprised when Lauren announced she was going out for the girls' basketball team, but I was worried because she has Down syndrome(唐氏综合症)．My wife and I never told Lauren that she was different, treating her like our other children.“I'm gonna play basketball, Daddy.” Lauren flew into my arms when I came in from work.“That's nice, honey，” I replied automatically and patted her, figuring she meant outside—on the driveway.Walking into the kitchen, I met my wife Laura, whose frown indicated I'd missed ura spoke slow ly, her tone steady.“She meant she's joining the girls' high-school basketball team.”Just as her words sank in, I heard Lauren behind me.“I'm gonna be a Lady Tiger，” she yelled, skipping into the room and throwing her arms in the air.Everything that could happen flashed through my mind.I discussed Lauren's announcement with my wife that evening and finally agreed.After all, there were only 11 girls, not everyone willing to play.The next afternoon, I parked in front of the school gymnasium.Inside, Coach F orsythe greeted us, “We're glad Lauren came out for the team.She is not just a cheerleader！” Lauren stood alone at the other end of the court, shooting free throws.No other girl on the court grinned(咧嘴笑) like Lauren did, and after every shot, Lauren approvingly cried, “Woo hoo！”， seemingly not caring if she made the basket or not.Mid-November, the season's first basketball game arrived.I settled into a seat with the rest of my family.The game got off to a good start, but soon Lady Tigers was uren followed the movement on the court and reacted to every play.Even though Lauren wasn't playing, she looked as if she were having the time of her life.I felt admiration for my daughter.Plus, her team was getting beat, yet she still enjoyed the action.Just less than two minutes left, and Lady Tigers was down by seventeen points.注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
山东省2020届新高考英语总复习第四板块写作第二部分读后续写教案
第二部分读后续写[浙江卷三年考情分析]命题者说1.考纲要求提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示的关键词进行续写(150词左右)，将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。
读后续写或概要写作，两种形式在不同考次不定期交换使用。
2.考查特点读后续写是一种将阅读与写作紧密结合的考查形式，旨在考查学生的综合语言运用能力。
与应用文不同，故事续写除了要求学生掌握丰富的词汇和句式外，还注重学生的内容构思和情节衔接的能力。
主要聚焦在以下四个方面：3.选材特点(1)所需阅读的短文词数在350以内；(2)多以记叙文、故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类的文章为主，故事情节曲折、跌宕、起伏，但是，故事线索的逻辑性比较强。
4.续写特点简言之，读后续写就是阅读完一篇还未写完的文章之后，根据要求和提示把这篇文章未写完的部分补充完全，使之浑然一体。
它一方面能很好地考查考生对所学语言知识的实际运用能力，另一方面，它也培养学生的发散思维能力。
根据《考试说明》该部分的规定，考生在续写文章时，要注意续写部分“与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度”，“内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况”，“应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性”以及“上下文的连贯性”。
5.命题趋势自2016年10月浙江省启用新题型以来至2018年11月高考，连续四次考查读后续写，这足以看出读后续写的重要性。
但2017年11月的高考读后续写与前两次的不一样，出现了标题，内容也不是有关遇险的。
因此，今后读后续写的文章形式及内容会更加丰富，也会给考生留下更大的发挥空间，只要掌握读后续写的命题规律和写作方法，并具备一定的阅读和写作能力，该题型就会迎刃而解。
(2018·浙江卷6月)阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was summer，and my dad wanted to treat us to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque，a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle_Paul，my dad's friend，picked us up from the airport and drove us to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm_house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning， Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast，“The day starts at dawn on my farm，”he said，After breakfast， I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens，while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon， I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride，and he said yes，as long as my dad went with me. I wasn't going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So，my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats，got on our horses，and headed slowly towards the mountain.“Don't be late for supper，”Uncle Paul cried，“and keep to the track so that you don't get_lost！”“OK！”My dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm were out of sight.It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks，the deep green pine trees，and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
山东省2020新高考英语大二轮总复习 第四板块 写作 第一部分 应用文写作 第2讲 增加细节的5大高分技巧教案
第二讲增加细节的5大高分技巧在应用文写作中，增加细节内容的描述是必不可少的。
在信息提纲类写作中，考生一定不能简单地翻译或者仅仅完成所给条目的指定内容；在看图作文中更不能只是轻描淡写图片内容，否则很有可能造成内容不充实、词数要求不达标或者结构不连贯等问题。
适当增加细节内容，能够使习作流畅、丰满，达到应有的表达效果。
列举具体的实例进行补充说明(2019·浙江卷6月·应用文写作)我仍旧记得……1．I still remember...→I still remember what you have devoted to improving my oral English and English writing.2．(2018·浙江卷11月·应用文写作)这是一个黑色的皮革钱包。
It is a black leather wallet.→It is a black leather wallet with my ID card,2 credit cards and around 200 dollars in it.3．(2020·宁波综合检测·应用文写作)我想大体上介绍一下中国的传统文化。
I'd like to talk briefly about Chinese traditional culture.→I'd like to talk briefly about Chinese traditional culture，especially Chinese painting.4．(2020·台州市第一次质量预测·应用文写作)现在，我想与你分享春节的一些传统风俗习惯。
Now，I'd like to share with you some traditional customs of the Spring Festival.→Now，I'd like to share with you some traditional customs of the Spring Festival，the most important festival in China.5．我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。
新教材适用2024版高考英语二轮总复习第4部分写作技能升华篇专题2读后续写第2讲微观把握突破读后续写
【解题示范】 第一步：精读短文，掌握关键信息。 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者被邀请去一个农场野餐，发现 一所房子里有只蜂鸟被蜘蛛网困住了。作者把蜂鸟救了，带出去的时候 它迟迟不肯飞走，当作者走到一条布满黑莓的小路时，它开始动了，却 仍然不肯离去，徘徊着，后来终于飞走了。当作者准备离开农场时，蜂 鸟又飞到作者面前，好像是在和作者告别。
第四部分
写作技能升华篇
专题二 读后续写
第2讲 微观把握 突破读后续写 技法三 打造读后续写的龙头凤尾
技法点拨 一、高分开头 如何写好读后续写，在高考中博取阅卷老师的眼球，获得梦寐以求 的高分？如何让学生的作品在高考中脱颖而出？这是很多老师和学生一 直不懈努力的课题。一个好的故事开头就好比是一个香味十足的诱饵， 诱使读者上钩并且饶有趣味地读完。而一个拙劣的故事开头，一定会让 读者大倒胃口，昏昏欲睡。
妙招4 巧用倒装结构 Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.Hardly had the little dog come out when Poppy came over to lick it as if it were a long-lost friend. 妙招5 巧用强调句结构 That video was posted the day before Halloween.It was my brother who did that for amusement.
真题体验 (2023·浙江1月卷) I was invited to a cookout on an old friend's farm in western Washington.I parked my car outside the farm and walked past a milking house which had apparently not been used in many years.A noise at a window caught my attention, so I entered it.It was a hummingbird (蜂鸟), desperately trying to escape.She was covered in spider-webs (蛛网) and was barely able to move her wings.She ceased her struggle the instant I picked her up.
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第二部分读后续写Writing 1阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
I had to go grocery_shopping this morning for the first time in a couple of weeks.My husband had been in Greece for a few weeks and my daughters were not at_home either so I had stocked up on vegetables，salad ingredients and fruits along with the meat that I had in the freezer.I am curious.When you are in line waiting to check out，do you check out what others have in their carts？I hate to admit it，but I do.I try not to judge，but again，I suppose I do to some extent－when I see a family in which the parents and the kids are very overweight and they are buying pop(汽水)and highcalorie snack foods.My biggest issue with groceries is that all of the processed foods are easier to get and cheaper than fresh produce and probably stretch further.It amazes me to see families buying 12 packs or 24 packs of different kinds of pop.Most of the people that I am seeing are buying regular pop，not diet.But when I was young，we bought pop on_special_occasions.For birthday parties or a camping trip，we could only have one can per day.We bought Shasta back then.I am not even sure whether it is still sold or not.We could all pick a few different_flavors that we wanted for the trip.But nowadays，pop is everywhere you go. I am glad to say that the_hospital that I work for threw_away all of their pop vending machines(自动贩卖机)．They didn't think health care workers，patients or patients' families needed them.I was happy for the change，but other people might not think so.注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1：I heard a piece of news on the radio. It is reported that 40% of American women are obese， who often eat at restaurants and fast food places. They are unwilling to cook at_home because they are lazy. But in order to stay healthy， we should buyvegetables，_ fruit and meat and make the majority of our meals at home. We can find recipes on the Internet that are good for us. We can cook various foods that we love to eat. When your family see a feast on the table， they will feel good.Paragraph 2：I love fresh fruit and I love fish. In fact， I always go grocery_shopping，_buy many fresh fruits and cook various fishes that I like. I pick a few different_flavors for my parents and my friends， which makes them happy.Writing 2阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Tawny Nelson is a single mother of four sweet little girls aged 9，5，2， and one year old. It's not easy to take care of the girls all on_her_own. Recently， she shared a story with Frank Somerville， a news anchor for KTVU News in California. He was so moved by her story that he shared it on his Facebook page.Tawny's story opened with her visiting the grocery store. It was a rainy and miserable day and by the time she got all the girls loaded in the truck and ready to head home，_it was dark and pouring down. When she tried to start her truck， it wouldn't start. With no one to call， Tawny turned to ask strangers for help to charge her truck. Hours passed and so did at least twenty_people. They all ignored her. Tired and hungry， her daughters began to act out. Tawny was filled with tears when someone knocked on her passenger window.Somerville writes，“I swear I got chills when I read what happened next.” And you will do the same when you read Tawny's story：I am the single mother of four absolutely beautiful little girls. They are 9，5， 2， and one year old. And things have been particularly rough since my ex left. Our truck had a flat tire and I had to inflate it constantly. The driver side window motor died. And I needed a new belt. The truck was a mess. And we didn't drive anywhere unless we had to. Well， the_other_day we desperately needed to go to the store. So we loaded up and drove to the Winn Dixie about 9 blocks away. When we got out of the store it was far after dark. And it was raining heavily. I loaded my kids and groceries into the truck.注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Pargagraph 1：My battery was dead. My phone broke down. I had no family to chat with and I had to do everything on my own. I turned to more than twenty_people for help but they all turned me down. My 5yearold girl was very hungry and began to cry. My twoyearold daughter wanted to go home and my oldest girl tried to help. I felt that I was the worst mother ever.Paragraph 2：I was crying when a gentleman stopped and offered to help me. He handed me a plate of chicken and biscuits and bottles of water. He said，“Feed your girls. I have a truck on the way and my wife will be here to take you home.” What he said was right. His wife arrived followed by our truck.We and the truck were taken home. The next morning the gentleman returned to my house with a man who replaced my battery and fixed my window. Seeing the scene I burst into tears.Writing 3阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。