初中英语作文的修改PPT教学课件
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中考英语写作教学-文章修改策略课件
“语句通顺策略”指写好句子，写准确的句子。准确的 句子是基于对六大简单句基本句型的认识和掌握。我 们可以将简单句的基本句型称为句子的主干部分，其 余信息称为修饰部分。在写句子时，我们只有先抓住 主干部分，而修饰部分可以挪到主干的后面（有些时 间、地点也可放在前面）。简单地说，先主干，后修 饰。
微技能指导
词汇不够丰富、有一些语法错误。
文本长度符合要求、书写规范，涵盖所有要点、结构规范、条理清楚、逻辑严密，语言丰富、没有语法错误。
文本第长度三符档合要（求8、-1书1写分规）范，涵盖文所有本要长点、度行与文基要本求连贯有，明词汇显不距够丰离富、、有书一写些语不法规错误范。，要点不完整、行文不
连贯，词汇不足、错误较多、勉强能看出作文意图。
you can come
点、结构规范、条理清楚、逻辑严密，语言丰富、没有语法错误。
This is a quiet and nice place to study.
“语句第通五顺策档略（”指1写6好-1句9子分，）写准确理的句解子写。 作任务；文本长度符合要求、书写规范，涵盖所有要点、
简单地说，先主干，后修饰。 Lunch is from 12:00 to 1:00, and
（the2r0e2a0r年e p龙le湾nt区y o模Bf tu拟htin卷ygso）tuo t follow some rules. You can’t talk aloud. You can’t throw rubbish. You 第四档（12-15分c）an’t run. You can’t eat food.
It’s cool in summer, and warm in winter.
This is a quiet and nice place to study. I believe that you will like it.
微技能指导
词汇不够丰富、有一些语法错误。
文本长度符合要求、书写规范，涵盖所有要点、结构规范、条理清楚、逻辑严密，语言丰富、没有语法错误。
文本第长度三符档合要（求8、-1书1写分规）范，涵盖文所有本要长点、度行与文基要本求连贯有，明词汇显不距够丰离富、、有书一写些语不法规错误范。，要点不完整、行文不
连贯，词汇不足、错误较多、勉强能看出作文意图。
you can come
点、结构规范、条理清楚、逻辑严密，语言丰富、没有语法错误。
This is a quiet and nice place to study.
“语句第通五顺策档略（”指1写6好-1句9子分，）写准确理的句解子写。 作任务；文本长度符合要求、书写规范，涵盖所有要点、
简单地说，先主干，后修饰。 Lunch is from 12:00 to 1:00, and
（the2r0e2a0r年e p龙le湾nt区y o模Bf tu拟htin卷ygso）tuo t follow some rules. You can’t talk aloud. You can’t throw rubbish. You 第四档（12-15分c）an’t run. You can’t eat food.
It’s cool in summer, and warm in winter.
This is a quiet and nice place to study. I believe that you will like it.
短文改错讲解精品PPT教学课件
radios can be very noisy. ▪ C.根据主谓一致确定单复数
▪programs
▪ There are branch library in many villages.
▪ 2)冠词的错误规律和改正方法 libraries
A.根据冠词的基本用法确定冠词的错误
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▪ As everyone knows, it’s famous mountain
same roof.
the
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▪ 3)代词的错误规律和改正方法
▪ A.根据主语确定错误
▪ The Smiths did his best to make me feel at
home.
their
▪ B.根据句意确定错误
▪ The day before the speech contest English
with all kinds of plants and animals. a
▪ B.根据名词前后的修饰部分确定冠词的错误
▪ Each player must obey captain, who is the
leader of the team.
the
▪ C.根据惯用法确定冠词的错误
▪ We may be one family and live under a
How to correct a composition
Revision of senior grade 3
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▪ 短文改错的错误类型
▪ 1.词法错误 2.句法错误 3. 用词错误
▪ 4.惯用语，固定词组的使用错误5.逻辑错误
初中英语作文写作技巧PPT优秀课件
5．含蓄的内容能加以解说。语句的含 蓄，一 是作者 为了表 达的需 要或某 种目的 ，故意 不直接 表达想 表达的 内容， 而把它 隐含在 字里行 间；一 是运用 了象征 、双关 等修辞 格，采 用婉曲 的手法 来表达 自己的 思想、 观点、 看法。 对此类 材料， 不仅要 理解它 字面的 含意， 而且要 深入挖 掘其 所隐含 的信息 ，即能 用简洁 明白的 语言解 说材料 深层的 内涵。
初中英语作文写作技巧PPT优秀课件
初中英语作文写作技巧PPT优秀课件
检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：
(1) 格式是否有错。 (2) 拼写有无错误。 (3) 语言是否用错。 (4) 时态、语态错误。 (5) 标点错误。 (6) 人称是否用错。
初中英语作文写作技巧PPT优秀课件
初中英语作文写作技巧PPT优秀课件
3.表转折对比关系的：However，but Although+clause( 从句)，In spite of+n/doing，On the one
hand…，On the other hand… Some…，while others… 4.表因果关系的：Because，As，So，Thus，Therefore，As
a result 5.表换一种方式表达：In other words 6.表进行举例说明：For example，句子；For instance，句子；
such as+n/doing 7.表陈述事实：In fact 8.表达自己观点：As far as I know，In my opinion 9.表总结：In short，In a word，In conclusion，In summary
一 、认真审题，确定时态，人称，题材格式
初中七、八、九年级英语《短文改错》优质教学课件
what I want to do over a weekend.
the
(4) I hope you’ve had pleasant
a
journey home
命题特点及改正方法：英语中冠 词只有三个，只能从以下几个方 向出题：1）不定冠词a和an互改； 2）不定冠词a或an和定冠词the 互改；3）根据需要增删冠词。
morning.
that
(3)Earning their own money
Байду номын сангаас
allows them to spend on
anything as if they please.
if
命题特点及改正方法：
句子结构方面的错误主要涉及句子成份和 复合句的关联词等。
改正方法：1）看句子结构是否完整，成份 是否冗缺；2）看复合句中连接主句和从句 的关系词的运用是否得当等。
8.形容词、副词
(1)I would describe myself as shy and quietly. quiet (2) Finding information on the Net is easily. easy
(3) So what I learned from the job
was much more important as what
9.非谓语动词
(1)My parents will do all they can make sure that I get a good education. to
(2) Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express myself in simple English. talking
the
(4) I hope you’ve had pleasant
a
journey home
命题特点及改正方法：英语中冠 词只有三个，只能从以下几个方 向出题：1）不定冠词a和an互改； 2）不定冠词a或an和定冠词the 互改；3）根据需要增删冠词。
morning.
that
(3)Earning their own money
Байду номын сангаас
allows them to spend on
anything as if they please.
if
命题特点及改正方法：
句子结构方面的错误主要涉及句子成份和 复合句的关联词等。
改正方法：1）看句子结构是否完整，成份 是否冗缺；2）看复合句中连接主句和从句 的关系词的运用是否得当等。
8.形容词、副词
(1)I would describe myself as shy and quietly. quiet (2) Finding information on the Net is easily. easy
(3) So what I learned from the job
was much more important as what
9.非谓语动词
(1)My parents will do all they can make sure that I get a good education. to
(2) Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express myself in simple English. talking
初中英语作文写作课(精编版)-PPT课件(共17张)
Compare (比较)
Different students have different ideas about the Internet. Most students think that the Internet is very useful in our life. First of all, we can learn a lot from the Internet. We can also listen to music and enjoy movies for fun. Besides, our life becomes more convenient with the Internet. However, some other students feel differently. There are lots of unhealthy pictures or movies on the Internet. They make students lose interest in their study.
The beginning
三段式 The body ----用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。【注意使用 （总-分 支持句 连接词】 -总）
The ending
结论句----对全文的总结和概括。 【结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应】
Writing skills—seven steps
审清题意 誊写规范
(复述)
Key sentence1
Topic
On the Internet
Body
正文
Most students…
Besides make…more convenient
Supporting sentences Key sentence2
初中英语作文PPT课件(28张)
六、一致性错误
所谓不一致不仅指主谓不一致，它还包括数的 不一致、时态不一致以及代词不一致等。
例1：Once one have money， he can do what he want to do. 人一旦有了钱，他就能想干 什么就干什么。
析：one 是第三人称单数，因此本句的 have 应改为 has。同理，want 应改为 wants。
四、时态的误用
例：She like it very much and reads it to the class. 她很喜欢它 并且读给同学们听。
析：在书面表达中，应根据上 下文或时间状语来确定动词的时态。
▪ 正：She liked it very much and read it to the class.
writing
书面表达六步法
审
抄
抓
书面
表达
改
扩
连
Writing points
一.审题 (体裁 结构 格式 内容 人称 时态） 二.抓要点 三.扩展句子 四.连句成文 （时间 空间 细节 连贯 呼应） 五.查错改错 六.眷写
“中小学生健康 ”为话题写一篇短文 【要求】
(1)内容包括①列举中小学生面临的健康问题。 ② 请谈谈怎样才能保持健康。
例：There are many ways to know the society. For example， by TV radio， newspaper and so on. 有许多 方式来了解这个社会，例如通过电视、广播、报纸等等。
析：本句后半部分 For example， by TV， radio， newspaper and so on 不是一个完整的句子，仅仅是一些 不连贯的词语，不能独立成句。 正：There are many ways to know the society， for example， by TV， radio， and newspaper and so on.
初中英语专题复习短文改错ppt精编版
b_e___p__l__anted
4.名词的单复数一致
命题特点:本来用复数,却用单数. 改正方法:(1)根据名词前的修饰限定成份;(2)根据上下文的逻辑关系.
1) …and asked me lots of question. questions
2) We study quite a few subject，such as
as
2、I couldn’t help laugh when I heard the joke.
laughing
3.They did not want me to do any work at family.
home
根据词在句中的位置与其它词的修饰与被修饰关系，判 断词的正确使用形式，根据词在句子中不同的句法功能，使 用与之相适应的词性。例如：
Hi,I'm Lucy. There are four people in my family, dad, mom, my brother Tim and me. We usually visited grandma at weekends. 1.visit
She is nice and real good at cooking. 2. really
the airport， alththe
afternoon.
because
二、平行结构
平行结构是指两个或更多的具有相似或相同的句法功能的
词、词组或从句并列在一起的结构，在表达相互平行的概念时，
要使用相同的语法结构，即（动词与动词并列，形容词与形容
词并列，不定式与不定式并列，短语与短语）并列。平行结构
1. She was smiling but nodding at me. and
4.名词的单复数一致
命题特点:本来用复数,却用单数. 改正方法:(1)根据名词前的修饰限定成份;(2)根据上下文的逻辑关系.
1) …and asked me lots of question. questions
2) We study quite a few subject，such as
as
2、I couldn’t help laugh when I heard the joke.
laughing
3.They did not want me to do any work at family.
home
根据词在句中的位置与其它词的修饰与被修饰关系，判 断词的正确使用形式，根据词在句子中不同的句法功能，使 用与之相适应的词性。例如：
Hi,I'm Lucy. There are four people in my family, dad, mom, my brother Tim and me. We usually visited grandma at weekends. 1.visit
She is nice and real good at cooking. 2. really
the airport， alththe
afternoon.
because
二、平行结构
平行结构是指两个或更多的具有相似或相同的句法功能的
词、词组或从句并列在一起的结构，在表达相互平行的概念时，
要使用相同的语法结构，即（动词与动词并列，形容词与形容
词并列，不定式与不定式并列，短语与短语）并列。平行结构
1. She was smiling but nodding at me. and
初三英语作文教学(共32张PPT)
(104 in total)2016长宁一模
Model from you(II)
My Lifestyle As we all know, everyone has his own lifestyle and me, too. I often have two pieces of bread which covered with blueberry jam and a glass of milk for breakfast. For lunch, I have vegetables,meat and apples. “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” And for supper, I usually have fish ,eggs and rice. Sweets and cakes are my favourite snakes. In order to protect my teeth, I brush them twice a day. I sleep about seven hours on average a day. Generally speaking, I usually running in the morning and sometimes play basketball after school. When I have some spare time I will listen to music and read books. How fantastic my Lifestyle is!
work hard; calm down; do proper outdoor exercise
Read carefully Find key words Enlarge the sentences
Model from you(II)
My Lifestyle As we all know, everyone has his own lifestyle and me, too. I often have two pieces of bread which covered with blueberry jam and a glass of milk for breakfast. For lunch, I have vegetables,meat and apples. “An apple a day keeps the doctor away.” And for supper, I usually have fish ,eggs and rice. Sweets and cakes are my favourite snakes. In order to protect my teeth, I brush them twice a day. I sleep about seven hours on average a day. Generally speaking, I usually running in the morning and sometimes play basketball after school. When I have some spare time I will listen to music and read books. How fantastic my Lifestyle is!
work hard; calm down; do proper outdoor exercise
Read carefully Find key words Enlarge the sentences
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Tom’s mother jumped into the water. She saved her daughter at last. 3. On Tree Planting Day,many trees planted in Yongan Park. On Tree Planting Day,many trees were planted in Yongan Park. 4.The 29th Olympic Games will hold in China.
office.
时态和语态问题
1. Her mother jumped into the lake and swimed to Joy.At last her mother saved Joy. They were all got wet.
Her mother jumped into the lake and swam to Joy.At last her mother saved Joy. They all got wet. 2. Tom’s mother jumped into the water. She saves her daughter at last.
Sunday. David with his little brother goes to the park every Sunday
4. There are a man teacher and two women
teachers in the office. There is a man teacher and two women teachers in the
kinds of fish.
The water was so clear that they could see all kinds of fishes.
3.Many place are very dry.
Many places are very dry.
主谓一致问题
1. And now many rivers becomes very dirty.
初中英语作文的修改
名词的单复数问题：
1. …Joy found there was much fish in the lake.
…Joy found there were many fish in the lake.
2.The water was so clear that they could see all
And now many rivers become very dirty.
2. Everything are going very well.
Everything is going very well.
3. David with his little brother go to the park every
名词的单复数问题 主谓一致问题 时态和语态问题 Chinglish 现象 行文的逻辑性问题 词类错用
请你当老师
书面表达
自行车在北京仍然受欢迎，骑车上 学或上班都很方便。如今越来越多 的人……这使得……。骑车既可 以……，又可以……。那么你更喜 欢哪种交通工具呢？为什么？
请你当老师
save her daughter with her mother’s help.
At once, she jumped into the water to save her daughter.
2. But she wasn’t careful, so that she fell into
the river. She wasn’t careful, and she fell into the river.
词类错用
1.When I was sadly, I played with it. When I was happily, I played with it. When I was sad, I played with it. When I was happy, I played with it.
2. I and my classmates by bus to Dayang Foreign Language School.
My classmates and I took a bus to Dayang Foreign Language School.
行文的逻辑性问题
1. At once, she jumped into the water to
2. All of us are excited in it. Because it can make we happy and healthy. All of us are excited about it. Because it can make us happy and healthy.
典型病例
The 29th Olympic Games will be held in C1. Last Sunday,Ann with her mother and brother went to a park. The park with a lake.
Last Sunday,Ann went to a park with her mother and brother. There was a lake in the park.
Please read it carefully, then find the mistakes and correct them.
Bicycle are still popular on the streets in Beijing. It’s easy to by bike go to school or go to work. Now more and more people plan to buy cars instead of bike. But I think that running cars make air dirty. It was harmful to our health. Riding bicycles can help people keep healthy, and energy can be save. Because riding bikes will always make me happy, so I prefer to go to school by bike.
office.
时态和语态问题
1. Her mother jumped into the lake and swimed to Joy.At last her mother saved Joy. They were all got wet.
Her mother jumped into the lake and swam to Joy.At last her mother saved Joy. They all got wet. 2. Tom’s mother jumped into the water. She saves her daughter at last.
Sunday. David with his little brother goes to the park every Sunday
4. There are a man teacher and two women
teachers in the office. There is a man teacher and two women teachers in the
kinds of fish.
The water was so clear that they could see all kinds of fishes.
3.Many place are very dry.
Many places are very dry.
主谓一致问题
1. And now many rivers becomes very dirty.
初中英语作文的修改
名词的单复数问题：
1. …Joy found there was much fish in the lake.
…Joy found there were many fish in the lake.
2.The water was so clear that they could see all
And now many rivers become very dirty.
2. Everything are going very well.
Everything is going very well.
3. David with his little brother go to the park every
名词的单复数问题 主谓一致问题 时态和语态问题 Chinglish 现象 行文的逻辑性问题 词类错用
请你当老师
书面表达
自行车在北京仍然受欢迎，骑车上 学或上班都很方便。如今越来越多 的人……这使得……。骑车既可 以……，又可以……。那么你更喜 欢哪种交通工具呢？为什么？
请你当老师
save her daughter with her mother’s help.
At once, she jumped into the water to save her daughter.
2. But she wasn’t careful, so that she fell into
the river. She wasn’t careful, and she fell into the river.
词类错用
1.When I was sadly, I played with it. When I was happily, I played with it. When I was sad, I played with it. When I was happy, I played with it.
2. I and my classmates by bus to Dayang Foreign Language School.
My classmates and I took a bus to Dayang Foreign Language School.
行文的逻辑性问题
1. At once, she jumped into the water to
2. All of us are excited in it. Because it can make we happy and healthy. All of us are excited about it. Because it can make us happy and healthy.
典型病例
The 29th Olympic Games will be held in C1. Last Sunday,Ann with her mother and brother went to a park. The park with a lake.
Last Sunday,Ann went to a park with her mother and brother. There was a lake in the park.
Please read it carefully, then find the mistakes and correct them.
Bicycle are still popular on the streets in Beijing. It’s easy to by bike go to school or go to work. Now more and more people plan to buy cars instead of bike. But I think that running cars make air dirty. It was harmful to our health. Riding bicycles can help people keep healthy, and energy can be save. Because riding bikes will always make me happy, so I prefer to go to school by bike.