雅思写作语料库
雅思考试中常见的逻辑关系词
1.表示并列关系
likewise once again/once more in (much) the same way
(manner) similarly/similar to vice versa also/as well as not only … but also …both … and … neither … nor … like/just like as/just
as equally namely or and
2.表示转折关系
but/yet/whereas however otherwise in contrast (to) conversely
though/although nevertheless unlike in spite of despite on the contrary even if/even though
on the one hand …, on the other hand … instead (of) not as … as … rather than even so vary different from differ from
while
3.表示举例
for example/for instance/e.g. such as that is/namely/i.e.
in other words in general/in particular a case in point is especially specifically
4.表示因果关系
as a result as a consequence consequently so/therefore/thus then for this reason hence accordingly because/because of owing to thanks to on account of
since due to …, for as this is why
5.表示递进关系
and then as well as again another also/too in addition
(to) additionally additional besides (that) moreover furthermore not only … but also … what’s more
6.表示让步关系
though/although while even though/even if nevertheless in spite
of/despite admittedly
7. 表示总结
in a word in brief in short above all all in all on the whole in general to conclude/in conclusion to sum up/to summarize/in summary
远程办公的利弊
工作类：
More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 越来越多的企业准许职员在家办公，是积极还是消极的?
作家立场：尽管远程办公有其独有的利好，但是远程办公弊大于利，办公室办公更加适合大多数人。
新东方网薛鹏思路拓展：
远程办公的弊端：
1. 比之远程办公，来自于办公室的限制和来自同事的压力能刺激员工更加努力地工作，提高工作效率。相反，远程办公者很可能出现工作的懒散和懈怠，因此，效率较低。
2. 在家办公，因为没有交流的对象，人会变得孤独和自闭，在社交方面力不从心，更没有办法建立良好的人脉资源，而这些对于人的职员生涯的发展恰恰是有利好的。相反，办公室办公才能培养健康的人际关系以及带来更多的工作乐趣，和谐的人际关系。
远程办公的利好：
1. 远程办公对于老板有利好，因为他可以节省经济成本，因为不用租用办公场地以及支付坐班工资，但是，这样的经营模式很难培养集体凝聚力，增强员工的归属感。
2. 远程办公对于职员有利好，具体而言，他们不必往返，工作时间灵活，也许幸福感更强，因为远程办公有效地克服了地理的障碍以及节省了时间成本。但是，远程办公对于职员的自律性要求极高，不是人人适合远程办公。
新东方网薛鹏原创雅思写作语料库：
1. telecommuting = tele-work n远程办公
2. work at home = work form home v远程工作
3. play the role of tele-commuters v 扮演远程工作者的角色
拓展：telecommuting workers = telecommuters n远程办公者
4. superior = business leader n 老板
5. business owners = enterprisers n企业家
6. …… could enhance the efficiency of working v ……可以提高工作效率
7. provide sb with more flexible mode of working v给某人提供了更加灵活的工作方式
8. A flexible work life is beneficial to one’s health because home workers can relax for a while without the supervision of business owners if they are fed up with work. 弹性工作模式有益于身体健康，因为没有企业主的监督，工作者可以在疲惫的时候休息下。
9. Long-termed telecommuting might contribute to poor working performance，laziness and even detrimental health condition. 长期的远程办公会导致工作懈怠，懒惰和不良的健康状况.
10. Working at home minimize the opportunity of face-to-face communication. 远程办公减少了面对面交流
拓展：minimize = diminish = reduce v 减少……
11. Tele-working exerts a baneful influence on maintenance of the close relationship among the colleagues or the cultivation of good teamwork spirit 远程办公不利于维持同事间的友谊以及培养良好的团队合作精神。
解析：the cultivation of good teamwork spirit团队精神的培养
12. On the side of employers, with many of the employees telecommuting, they no longer need to invest large sums of money renting spacious offices or paying office salary. 对于老板来说，如果很多的员工远程办公，他们就不用花钱来租宽敞的办公室以及支付坐班工资。
13. As for plenteous employees, they no longer take the trouble to commute between their homes and offices every day. 对于员工来说，他们不再用费力地每天在家和办公室之间往返了.
拓展：as for …… = on the side of …… = on the part of……对于……来说
14. Tele-commuters could have more free time at their own disposal 远程办公者有更多的时间可以自己支配。
点评：推荐细节展开，远程办公者可以做自己喜欢的事情，陪伴家人，锻炼身体，发展个人爱好。
15. The constraints in offices and pressure from colleagues can motivate the employees to work harder办公室的限制和来自同事的压力能刺激员工更加努力地工作.
解析： constraint n.抑制，拘束
16. Home workers may fail to associate and communicate with people around them effectively 家庭办公者也许不能和周围人的有效地交往和交流。
17. Telecommuters, to large extent, tend to become socially inadequate 远程办工者在很大程度上会在社交方面变得力不从心
解析：become socially inadequate v 在社交方面变得力不从心
18. Working from home requires good self-discipline and time-managing capacity 远程办公需要自律性和时间管理能力
19. In comparison with working at home，office working enjoys more glaring merits. 对比在家办公，办公室办公优势明显。
20. Tele-commutating is not universally suitable for the vast majority of employees 远程办公不是普遍适合大多数职员。
解析：is not universally suitable for v不是普遍适合……
政府是否应该给教育和医疗买单
政府类：
Some people say that the government should pay for the health care and education of its citizens， to what extent to you agree or disagree? 有人认为政府应该给公民的教育和医疗买单, 你是否同意这个观点?
相关题目：
Some people say that the government should pay for the health care and education of its citizens, but other people say that it is not the government’s responsibility. Discuss the two opinions and give your views. 有人认为政府应该给公民的教育和医疗买单，有人认为这不是政府的责任，讨论两种观点，给出你的意见?
作家立场：政府应该给教育和医疗买单，同时，政府应该合理地分配教育和医疗预算。
写作布局：让步反驳
思路拓展：
政府给教育医疗买单的理由：
1. 公民是纳税人，有享受教育和医疗的权利。政府是人民利益的代表，普及免费的教育和医疗可以换利于民。
2. 教育的发展可以培养更多的高端人才，提高国民的基本素质，增强一个国家在国际舞台的竞争力。
3. 政府的医疗上的援助可以使得很多患病的，同时来自贫困家庭的人得到及时的治疗，这有助于提高政府的威信，以及增强民众的民族自豪感。
反对政府给教育和医疗买单的理由：
1. 政府的财政有限，但是，要解决的民生问题是无穷的，完全的教育医疗买单会增加政府的经济压力。
2. 对比给教育和医疗买单，政府还要解决更重要的民生问题，例如改善环境和加强基础设施建设，这些更加需要政府经济援助。
薛鹏原创语料库：
1. free higher education = free college education n免费的高等教育
2. medical care = medical treatment n 医疗
3. popularize v 普及
4. subsidize = sponsor = finance v 提供经济援助
5. provide sb with financial aid v给某人提供经济援助
6. to do sth is highly recommended 做……是被高度推荐的
7. it t is the unshakable obligation of the government to do sth 做……是政府不可推卸的责任
8. enjoy the basic right of 享受……的基本权利
9. properly allocate the educational and medical budget 合理地分配教育和医疗预算
10. Advanced education is the key factor in promoting the basic quality of a nation’s population 先进的教育是提高国民的基本素质的关键因素。
11. Free medical care provided by the government should be deemed as a returned favor. 政府提供的免费医疗是还利于民的一种方式。
12. …… enable those top students coming from humble background or remote rural areas to receive fine education v ……使得来自贫寒家庭背景或者偏远山区的优秀学生有机会接受精英教育
13. help those ambitious but underprivileged young people to change their fates v帮助那些有梦想但是贫困的年轻人改变人生命运
14. Every individual could become the beneficiary of a good education 任何人都可以成为良好教育的受益者。
15. inject new life into the further development and mightiness of a nation v 给国家的进一步发展和强大注入新鲜活力
16. Education is the price force of the productivity 教育是生产力发展的驱动力。
17. Free education could cultivate more responsible and law-abiding citizens 免费教育可以培养更多有社会责任感，有守法意识的公民。
18. …… will impose much pressure upon a nation economically v增加了国家的经济负担
19. The government has more pressing social problems that need to render more concerns over 政府还有更多紧迫的民生问题需要优先考虑。
20. to optimize the environment or to strengthen the construction of infrastructure v去改善环境或者加强基础设施建设。
网络交易的个人和社会影响
科技类：
Nowadays, people perform their everyday tasks, such as banking, shopping as well as business transactions, without the need of meeting other people face to face. What are the possible effects of the phenomenon on the individual and the society as a whole? 现在很多人可以通过网络做很多事情，例如购物和交易，这对于个人和社会的影响是什么?
薛鹏点评：本文按照题目指令写作，只需谈及网络交易对于个人和社会的利弊影响，无需重点提出解决策略，可选择在尾段简单提及。
作家立场：本文将会分析网络交易对于个人和社会的影响。
新东方网薛鹏思路拓展：
网络购物对于个人影响：
1. 利好的方面：给人们的购物带来了便利，具体而言，网络购物可克服地理的障碍，节省了大量的时间，同时，网络购物价格低廉，选择丰富。
2. 不利的方面：对于女性消费者而言，因为网络商品价格低廉，所以，很多人在打折期间囤积商品，这样，惯性消费反而会增加经济负担。
网络购物对于社会影响：
1. 利好的方面：网络交易平台的出现在一定程度解决了就业，很多年轻人可以开网店赚钱，这种工作方式时间灵活，
2. 不利的方面：网络商品质量没有保障，消费者容易买到假货，经济受损。新形态的网络犯罪成为社会问题，例如，网络购物过程中，很多不法分子传播病毒，窃取密码，侵犯隐私，非法牟利。
新东方网薛鹏原创雅思写作语料库：
1. The invention and popularity of the computer has profoundly revolutionized modern people’s option of consumption 互计算机的发明和普及深刻地改变了人们的购物选择。
解析：revolutionize v极大改变
2. On-line shopping has been boosting like the mushrooms after spring rains. 网络购物就像是雨后春笋般不断地增长。
3. People have been debating the pros of cons of cyber business transaction without reaching any definite agreement. 人们在思考网络交易的利弊，没有达成共识。
4. In this essay，I will endeavor to examine the impacts brought about by this on-line business traction both on individual consumers and the society. 本文中，我将努力探究下网络交易带来的个人和社会影响。
解析：endeavor to do sth v 努力做……
5. The merits of on-line shopping and on-line business prevail over its possible demerits. 网络购物和网络交易的利大于弊。
解析：prevail over v 远远超过
6. In comparison with the traditional shopping, the cyber shopping enjoys its unique advantages , which quite fit the young consumers’ taste. It is no necessary for consumers to take trouble to go outside, just click their mouse, the goods will be delivered to them. 和传统的购物相比，网络购物有其独特的优势，这更符合年轻消费者的口味。消费者不需要外出，只需点击一下鼠标，商品就会送到他们手中。
7. Many youngsters like to spend their hardly earned money on their favorite goods 许多年轻人喜欢把辛苦赚到的钱花在他们喜欢的商品上。
8. Problems, however, inevitably ensue 然而，问题随之而来。
解析：ensue v跟着发生
9. Excessive on-line consumption will impose much pressure upon some unwise consumers economically. 过度的网络消费对于非理性消费者施加了经济压力。
10. Some young ladies are addicted to cyber consumption out of the reason of seizing the opportunities of discount 出于抓住打折的机会的目的，很多年前女孩网络购物上瘾。
11. Even worse，on-line consumption fraud has been agonizing many on-line shoppers 更加糟糕的是，在线的消费欺诈行为正在困扰很多在线买家。
解析：agonize v使痛苦
12. It is highly possible that consumers might be fooled into buying fake or illegal products. 消费者很有可能被欺骗购买虚假的非法的商品。
13. Many on-line advertisements are full of flowery phrases and empty promises 很多的在线广告充满了花哨的宣传语以及空洞的承诺。
14. Some law-breakers draw on the Internet to deliver the bait or disseminate virus in order to steal the password and reap fabulous profits illegally.一些不法分子利用互联网发送诱饵，传播病毒，窃取密码，非法牟利。
解析：draw on the Internet v利用互联网
解析：reap fabulous profits illegally v非法牟利
15. On-line business transaction is a two-edged weapon which can be used equally for good or evil. 网络交易是一把双刃刀，有利有弊。
16. What is of the utmost importance is to make use of its merits and be careful about its demerits. 重要的是，我们要利用其利好及当心其弊端。
17. It is the duty of every consumer to raise the awareness of wise buying. 消费者应该提高理性消费意识。
18. The government should be urged to strengthen the censorship of on-line advertisement and severely penalize those illegal sellers. 政府应该被督促去加强对于网络广告的审查，处罚非法卖家。
解析：The government should be urged to do sth 政府应该被督促去做……
政府是否应该给教育和医疗买单
政府类：
Some people say that the government should pay for the health care and education of its citizens， to what extent to you agree or disagree? 有人认为政府应该给公民的教育和医疗买单, 你是否同意这个观点?
相关题目：
Some people say that the government should pay for the health care and education of its citizens, but other people say that it is not the government’s responsibility. Discuss the two opinions and give your views. 有人认为政府应该给公民的教育和医疗买单，有人认为这不是政府的责任，讨论两种观点，给出你的意见?
作家立场：政府应该给教育和医疗买单，同时，政府应该合理地分配教育和医疗预算。
写作布局：让步反驳
思路拓展：
政府给教育医疗买单的理由：
1. 公民是纳税人，有享受教育和医疗的权利。政府是人民利益的代表，普及免费的教育和医疗可以换利于民。
2. 教育的发展可以培养更多的高端人才，提高国民的基本素质，增强一个国家在国际舞台的竞争力。
3. 政府的医疗上的援助可以使得很多患病的，同时来自贫困家庭的人得到及时的治疗，这有助于提高政府的威信，以及增强民众的民族自豪感。
反对政府给教育和医疗买单的理由：
1. 政府的财政有限，但是，要解决的民生问题是无穷的，完全的教育医疗买单会增加政府的经济压力。
2. 对比给教育和医疗买单，政府还要解决更重要的民生问题，例如改善环境和加强基础设施建设，这些更加需要政府经济援助。
薛鹏原创语料库：
1. free higher education = free college education n免费的高等教育
2. medical care = medical treatment n 医疗
3. popularize v 普及
4. subsidize = sponsor = finance v 提供经济援助
5. provide sb with financial aid v给某人提供经济援助
6. to do sth is highly recommended 做……是被高度推荐的
7. it t is the unshakable obligation of the government to do sth 做……是政府不可推卸的责任
8. enjoy the basic right of 享受……的基本权利
9. properly allocate the educational and medical budget 合理地分配教育和医疗预算
10. Advanced education is the key factor in promoting the basic quality of a nation’s population 先进的教育是提高国民的基本素质的关键因素。
11. Free medical care provided by the government should be deemed as a returned favor. 政府提供的免费医疗是还利于民的一种方式。
12. …… enable those top students coming from humble background or remote rural areas to receive fine education v ……使得来自贫寒家庭背景或者偏远山区的优秀学生有机会接受精英教育
13. help those ambitious but underprivileged young people to change their fates v帮助那些有梦想但是贫困的年轻人改变人生命运
14. Every individual could become the beneficiary of a good education 任何人都可以成为良好教育的受益者。
15. inject new life into the further development and mightiness of a nation v 给国家的进一步发展和强大注入新鲜活力
16. Education is the price force of the productivity 教育是生产力发展的驱动力。
17. Free education could cultivate more responsible and law-abiding citizens 免费教育可以培养更多有社会责任感，有守法意识的公民。
18. …… will impose much pressure upon a nation economically v增加了国家的经济负担
19. The government has more pressing social problems that need to render more concerns over 政府还有更多紧迫的民生问题需要优先考虑。
20. to optimize the environment or to strengthen the construction of infrastructure v去改善环境或者加强基础设施建设。
平衡工作和生活的问题解决
社会类：
Currently many people fail to balance the work with the other parts of lives, what are the reasons and how to solve it? 现在，人们很难平衡工作和生活的其他部分，讨论其原因再提出解决方法。
解读题目：
除了工作以外的生活的其他部分：
1. 发展和培养爱好
2. 自主学习
3. 扩大交友圈
4. 家庭聚餐和家庭旅行
5. 健康管理(企业家健康管理很差)
思路拓展：
原因分析：
1. 工作狂的现象可以被归结为工作压力大和激励的竞争，多数情况下，一个人想要事业中取得成功就要比别人努力，因此，很多人没有选择只能全心工作。
2. 现代年轻人更加有雄心，如果一个人想在专业上训练有素，想在事业发展中出类拔萃，他就要专注于工作，因此，一个人在工作中花费的时间多，一个可以分配给家庭生活，健康管理和个人爱好的时间就少。
解决策略：
1. 企业应该帮助职员缓解压力，建立理性的工作制度，提倡健康的工作方式。
2. 对于每一个职员来说，他们应该清晰认识到，事业的成功不是人生唯一的目的，去努力工作是为了去创造和享受更加美好的人生。无论多么繁忙，一个人应该记住家庭生活和健康管理也是重要的，他不该把没有完成的工作带回家，他也应该有规律地运动。
薛鹏原创语料库：
1. So fierce is the competition that a lot of young adults have no choice but to fully apply themselves to career development. 竞争激励，很多年轻人没有选择只能专注发展事业。
2. It is conceivable that if a new employee slackens his or her efforts at self-improvement, he or she is doomed to be eliminated by the hot competition. 可以想象，如果新职员放松在工作上的努力，他们注定会被激励的竞争淘汰。
3. Modern young workers are more enterprising and ambitious in comparison with the counterparts of the past. 比之过去，现在的很多年轻人更加富有进取心和雄心。
点评：counterparts n 对应的人或者是物
4. Many youngsters desire to outshine others in their career. To excel professionally, one has to focus on work. Hence, the more time one spends on careers, the less time one might allocate to other activities such as family life, health management or personal hobbies. 如果在专业上训练有素，如何想在事业发展中出类拔萃，一个要专注于工作，因此，一个人在工作中花费的时间多，一个可以分配给家庭生活，健康管理和个人爱好的时间就少。
5. A sensible man knows how to strike a proper balance between work and life. 明智的人会在生活和事业之间找到一种平衡。
6. No matter how occupied one might be, one should always bear in mind that family life tops all and he or she should never brings outstanding working tasks to home. 无论多么繁忙，一个人应该记住家庭生活是最重要的，他不该把没有完成的工作带回家。
解析： tops all ……是最重要的
解析：outstanding adj没有完成的;杰出的
7. As for the relevant enterprises, measures to reduce the excessive workload and create healthy work style should be given to their employees. 对于相关的企业来说，他们应该采取措施，帮助员工减轻工作的负荷以及创造健康的工作方式
8. Virtually, to advocate and popularize a kind of healthy way of work not only brings merry mood to the working staff but also enhances the efficiency of work. 实际上，提倡和普及一种健康的工作方式不仅仅是可以给员工带来愉悦心情也相应地提高了企业工作效率。
9. It is no easy task to keep the appropriate balance between career and life at times. 有时候，在事业和生活中达到一种平衡是很困难的。
解析：at times adv有时候
10. However, one should get a clear perspective that achievement in career will never be the sole purpose of life, to work diligently is to create and savor more wonderful life. 然而，人应该有清晰的认识，事业的成功不是人生的唯一的目的，去努力工作是为了去创造更加美好的人生。
是否应该支持传媒审查
犯罪类 + 传媒类
Films and computer games containing violence are popular. Some people say they have negative effect on society and should be banned. Other says they are just harmless relaxation. Discuss both sides and give your opinion? 电影和游戏中的暴力元素很流行，有人认为暴力元素对于社会有不良影响，有人认为看暴力电影和玩暴力游戏仅仅是无害的娱乐，讨论两种观点再结论? (2011年10月29日)
相关题目：
Some people suggest that there should be restrictions on a detailed description of crimes in the newspapers and on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 有人建议对于报纸和电视上犯罪细节(暴力信息，色情)的描述应该加以限制，你在多大程度上同意这个观点?
讨论两种观点话题解析：
提问标志：Discuss both sides and give your own opinion ? Discuss these views and give your opinion?
作家立场：政府应该限制传媒中的暴力信息，我支持传媒审查。
谋篇布局：
首段：背景介绍 + 争议焦点+ 写作意图 (1. 直接亮明观点; 2. 表示先讨论再结论)
二段：正方观点的合理性以及展开(2-3个分论点)
三段：反方观点的合理性以及展开(2-3个分论点)
尾段：我的观点(1. 再次亮出观点+总结理由;2. 支持理由多的一方)
新东方网薛鹏思路拓展之传媒审查：
首段：
商业化的大众传媒充斥着对于各种犯罪以及暴力的生动描绘。许多现代游戏以大量的暴力元素吸引着玩家。很久以来, 关于电视和游戏暴力与日常生活中的暴力行为是否有关系的问题似乎一直存在争论。传媒中的暴力元素是否有害，仁者见仁。我认为，传媒中的暴力，血腥，色情等信息对于成长中的年轻人和社会都有不良的影响，因此，政府有责任加强传媒审查。
二段：支持传媒审查
无疑，很多理由可以被探究来支持我的立场。第一，暴力游戏以及含有太多暴力元素的电影对于青少年的心理产生了不良的影响。可以想象，年轻人很好奇，模仿力很强，同时，他们很多人不能明辨是非，因此，过度接触到含有暴力元素的游戏和电影无疑会诱发他们的暴力冲动，误导他们人生观，因为暴力游戏和电影会潜移默化地毒害他们纯净的心灵。第二，不良的电影视节目和有害的暴力游戏是造成街头暴力和校园欺凌的主要原因。数据显示模仿的犯罪行为有大幅度的增加,这证明电视暴力和暴力游戏是犯罪增加的一部分直接原因。第三，儿童和青少年接触到少儿不宜的信息, 例如恐怖和血腥的场面，会惊恐万分, 恶梦不断。
三段：反对传媒审查
有些制片人以及游戏开发商会顽固地为自己辩解说电视中的暴力镜头与生活中的暴力犯罪无关，仅是无害娱乐。有人也许认为：人性本善，不是所有接触过暴力游戏和影视的人都一定会犯罪，例如，有人就说，孩子们可能会对于卡通片中的暴力感到可笑，但是目睹到了生活中的真实暴力的时候又会感到不舒服。还有一种观点很流行：大部分青少年没有成长为暴力倾向者，比如，很多孩子喜欢功夫游戏，喜欢彼此打闹摔跤，但是，孩子们基本上是可以区分真实暴力和虚拟暴力。
尾段：
我认为让儿童或者青少年接触暴力节目和游戏几乎是一种犯罪行为。父母应该帮助孩子选择游戏和影视节目，父母应该考虑什么对于孩子们是适合的。
雅思写作语料库--人们如何保障饮食健康
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nutritionists, too much intake of sugar, calorie and fat is undoubtedly health-threatening, for fast food, in most cases, is low in nutritional value. People differ greatly in their views as to how to foster wholesome dietary habit. As I see it, educating the public about the dangers of unhealthy eating, regulating baneful sales and food advertisements to children and lowering the price of healthy foods should be used together to help people keep fit. 【二段】 Granted, one effective way to promote a healthy diet is to educate people about the potential risks of unhealthy diet. Modern people might opt for healthier meals and snacks if they are taught that fast foods are high in salt, fat and sugar. To illustrate, I myself changed my unwholesome eating habits after watching television programs on how to preserve health. Also, while it is of great significance to educate adult eater, schoolchildren should be main target for education because they are not only in their formative years but also the regular eaters of fast foods. 【三段】 In addition to education, other ways to promote healthy eating are not far to seek. First, methods should be adopted to strictly censor those
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雅思写作词句语料库(双页)
adolescent(s)/juvenile(s)/youngster(s)/youth(s) n.青少年 adolescent adj.青春期的 parenting/upbringing n.家庭教育，教养 schooling n. 学校教育 aptitude/talent (for) n.（有……的）天赋 cultivate/foster/nurture v. 培养 specialist n.专才 generalist n.（有多方面知识和经验的）通才 all-rounded/well-rounded/versatile adj.全面的，多面的，多才多艺的awareness/sense/recognition n.意识 the development of students’personality and values 学生个性和价值观的发展mould (or mold美式拼写) one’s character塑造某人的性格 mould (or mold美式拼写) sb. into sth. 把某人塑造成…… a (or the ) sense of responsibility (or duty/obligation)责任感 improve moral standard 提高道德标准
小、
，例如色情和
delete/eliminate/excise v. 删除evaluate v. 评价、评估 the evaluation on 对……的评价或评估 be ?ooded (or ?lled/awash/saturated/inundated) with... 充斥着 excessive and gratuitous violent and pornographic contents 过多的、无端的暴力与色情内容 at the expense/cost of 以……为代价 media hype 媒体炒作advertising hype 广告炒作 hype n. 炒作，大肆吹捧 v. 对 ……大肆宣传，吹捧commercial(s) n. 商业广告public service advertising 公益广告 evoke (or stimulate) impulse buying 刺激冲动性购物shopaholic(s) n. 购物狂promotion n. 促销 marketing tool 市场营销手段 induce sb. to do sth. 诱导或引诱某人做某事 target audience 目标受众sensationalise (or sensationalize 美式拼写) /exaggerate v. 耸人听闻地夸大某事，大肆渲染 over-report...to hook viewers and maximise pro ?ts 为了利益最大化，从而过度报道……来吸引公众的眼球 道德规范（尤指职业的） 良好的/较强的/无懈可击的职业道德adj. 无所不在的，普遍存在的……的流行或盛行对……有着深远的影响 揭露社会问题 监督非常详尽地报道…… 如实的描述、报道adj. 有新闻价值的，有报道价值的adj. 最新的，及时的adj. 客观公正的adj. 不客观的，有偏见的 adj. 可信的，可靠的 adj. 令人误导的，不如实报道的，曲解的adj. 虚假的adj. 欺骗性的 adj. 信息量大的，增长见闻的adj. 娱乐性的，令人愉快的 v. & n. 审查n. 审查制度 对……实施审查 v. 影响，左右 (e.g. sway sb./sb. be swayed by... 影响某人或者某人受到影响)
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慎小嶷 《十天突破雅思写作》总结2
General Knowledge 注意： 1. 作文要有实质内容。 2. 6分：260~270个词左右；6.5分：280个词以上。 3. 没有必要一定写长难句，但要提高句子的准确度和多样性。必须在对英语造句知识准确理解和把握的基础上流畅地写出复杂的长句子，而不是刻意、机械地拉长句子。（准确、严密、多样、清晰） 4. 对于零星出现的少量拼写错误，只要不引起歧义，是不会导致严重扣分的，但要努力减少作文里出现拼写错误的可能。 5. 考场里没有时间打草稿，但可以在印考题的试题纸上把看到题目后头脑里闪现出的ideas、考前准备的相关加分词汇和句型大致记录一下。 6. 当考官要求停笔时即使还没有写完也一定要停下来，否则会被判为违纪行为。 7. 考前练习一定要尽可能模拟实战：下载标准格式的答题纸；用铅笔写作，每行10~12个单词；严格控制时间，Task 1不应超过25 min，Task 2不应超过45 min。备考初期，可将Task 1和Task 2分开练习，但在考前一周内，必须演练完整的写作考试全程，严格控制时间，写完后再核对或请有经验的老师批改。 8.
如果Task 2准备得较为充分，有信心在40min写出一篇自己满意的议论文，那么就先完成Task 2。反之，就先写Task 1。 9. 齐头式：每段开头顶格写，每两段之间空一行 缩入式：每段开头后退3~4个字母的距离，每个段落之间不空行 10. 可使用I/we、被动语态，但不宜滥用；可将But/So放在句首 11. 7分或以上的作文对于用词的要求是准确，而不是冗长 ?Topics ?学术类写作的特殊要求 1. 不接受缩写形式 2. 不使用非正式口语表达 3. 英美拼写不能混淆 4. 用词要有特色 5. 句式不能过于短促 6. 句式不能过于干瘪 7. 感情色彩不能过于强烈
雅思写作Task1饼状图考官范文(4)
雅思写作Task1饼状图考官范文(4) The table below shows CO2 emissions for different forms of transport in the European Union. The Pie Chart shows the percentage of European Union funds being spent on different forms of transport. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below. Sample Answer: The given graphs provide information on the amount of Carbon dioxide emission per person from different vehicles in the European Union and also show the expenditures on different modes of transportations. As is observed from the given illustration, the highest amount of CO2 per person is emitted by the Air transports and European Union spends highest percentage of funds for the road transportation system.
雅思写作小作文必备语料库
雅思写作小作文必备语料库 动态图形词汇 上升 -rise, increase, grow, climb, jump，go up, an upward trend shoot up (informal)，ascend -rocket, soar, swell, surge, skyrocket, mushroom, escalate, on the rise，on the increase 相关单词用法 下降 -drop, decrease, go down, decline, fall, descend, sink, dip, an downward trend., -plummet, Plunge, slump, dive, nosedive 相关单词用法 不变、平稳等 -keep/remain/stay stable/steady/unchanged/constant（不变） -maintain the same level -experience a stable trend, -level off at（上升或下降之后）/ level out at（上升之后）/ -hover at/ stabilize at/ reached a plateau at 波动 fluctuate/rise and fall, vary, undulating; be volatile/ variable; 高点、低点： ?reach the highest point，reach(arrive at/hit) a peak(summit) at+数字(用hit 时动作较剧烈)，peak at+数字 ?reach/fall to/arrive at/hit the bottom/the lowest point at数字，bottom out at数字，(用hit时动作较剧烈) 其他点 ?起始点： n. starting point v. start/begin/end at ?交叉点： It is worth/deserves mentioning that 1）.A和B在...处拥有相同数值 A and B share the same amount/number in 2）.A在...处超过B A outstrip/overtake/outnumber/go beyond B in... ?表示达到了多少数量的及物动词或词组 Reach/arrive at/ amount to / hit/ register/ stand at
雅思大作文范文：老年人与现代科技
雅思大作文范文：老年人与现代科技 本文是雅思大作文范文：学生就业难，供大家阅读参考。认真研读一定的雅思范文及作文模板可以帮助我们检验自己的写作水平，并能很好地吸收和应用优秀范文里的优秀内容。 With technology speeding up, more and more young people begin to use mobile phones and the Internet, but old people have little chance to be exposed to them. What ways could mobile phone and the Internet is useful to old people? How do old people be encouraged to use this new technology? 范文： It is obvious that advanced technologies such as cellular phones or the net not only bring a lot of fun to youngsters who are always passionate to novel things, but also have an important effect on the life of senior citizens who would like to keep the pace of the age. Today, mobile phones are increasingly popular with old people. Unlike young people who fancy playing games or taking photos with phones, they seem to be most interested in their most basic function –communication. It is easily found that keeping in touch by mobiles with
雅思写作Task1饼状图考官范文(3)
雅思写作Task1饼状图考官范文(3) 本文为大家收集整理了雅思写作Task1饼状图考官范文(3)。认真研读一定的雅思范文及作文模板可以帮助我们检验自己的写作水平，并能很好地吸收和应用优秀范文里的优秀内容。 The charts below show the percentage of food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.
Sample Answer: The given illustration compares the amounts spent on restaurant foods and on home cooking foods in four different years and gives data on the number of meals eaten in two different restaurant types. As is presented in the pie chart, initially in 1970, 90% of total food budget was spent on home-made foods while only 10% was spent on restaurant foods. The amount spent on restaurant meals increased to 15% in 1980 while it reached to 35% in 1990. Finally in 200 average family spent half of the total budget in restaurant meals and that shows a rapid increase on the people’s habit of having meals in restaurants. In the line graph, we can observe that in 1970, the fast foods and sit-down restaurant meals were taken 20 thousand times each and over time these numbers kept increasing. Finally in 2000, more than 90 thousands fast food meals were eaten while the sit-down restaurant meals were eaten 50 thousand times a year. This indicates the changes of
雅思写作语料库父母角色差异的原因及未来作用
In some countries，the role of a mother differs in some ways from the role of a father. Why do you think these differences exist? How might parental roles develop in the future? 在一些国家，父母在教育孩子中扮演的角色，和很多方面，是不同的，为何存在这种差异，在未来父母的角色会有哪些变化? 【名师点评】 新题出现，恒热教育，谈及父母对于孩子成长中影响差异的原因，展望父母在孩子未来成长中作用的不同，不属分析问题解决问题话题，考察头脑风暴，写作有一定难度。 预测题目中的寒门贵子还是将门虎子，是否所有的父母都应该学习育儿课程，和本场考试都有交集。 【思路拓展】 男性比较理性和阳刚，女性比较感性和温柔，因此，他们对于孩子成长的影响自然不同，一般而言，孩子会从爸爸身上学到坚毅和勇敢，会从妈妈身上学会善良和孝道。骨血相连，血浓于水，无论父母，对于孩子的教育和引导都是积极的善意的。爸爸努力赚钱，是为孩子赢一个成长环境，妈妈努力育儿，是让孩子明辨是非、行为规范。 教育这个词的本源是说将一个人从一种蒙昧的无知的状态中引导出来，教育应该涉及道德教育、性格培养、学术教育等。
教育不能颠覆：道德教育和性格培养应该优先于学术成长，先重品质和品行，后重成绩和选择。如果可以畅想未来，父爱如山，为人父，应该树立标杆，让孩子学会志存高远，不懈奋斗。母爱如水，为人母，应该树立标杆，让孩子学会海纳百川，清澈纯净。 【范文赏析】 【首段】背景介绍+ 写作目的 Parents are the initial teachers of their children, thereby, their speeches and behaviors, to a larger extent, exert a subtle influence on children’s character-training and future development. The impacts that parents impose on their kids might differ greatly due to various reasons. This essay aims to explore where the differences lie in and how parental roles will change in the future. 【解析】 1. Their speeches and behaviors, to a larger extent, exert a subtle influence on children’s character-training and future development. 父母的言行举止，在很大程度上，对于孩子的性格培养和未来发展有潜移默化的影响。
雅思写作必背短语以及精彩句型
雅思写作核心语料库 Part 1 1 offer a sense of job satisfaction and security 带来工作的满意感和安全感2lay a solid professional working experience 积累扎实的工作经验 3 reduce/cut down expenditure 削减支出 4increase/generate job opportunities 创造就业机会 6promote talent introduction and exchange 促进人才的引进与交流 7keep skills fresh and up-to-date 保证技术的不落伍 9lay a solid foundation for 奠定坚实的基础 10 pave the way for the future/development 为未来铺平了道路 11foster a sense of competition and cooperation 培养合作感与竞争感 12cultivate the spirit of team working 培养团队合作精神 13master interpersonal skills 掌握人及关系技巧 14widen one’s knowledge 拓宽知识面 15enrich one’s social and life experience 丰富社会与人生经历 16enlarge one’s view/broaden one’s horizon 拓宽视野 17realize the value of life 实现人生价值 18surmount /overcome / win over /master difficulties 克服困难 19grasp good communication skills 掌握人际交流技巧 20remove misunderstanding and discrimination 消除误解与歧视 21keep balance between work and family 保持事业与家庭的平衡 22raise the standard of living提高生活水平 25enrich people’s spiritual life 丰富人们的精神生活 26promote social skills and competence 提高社交技巧与能力 27strengthen the family ties促进家庭团结 28cultivate a strong sense of responsibility 培养强烈的责任感 29bring joys and comforts to sb带来愉悦与舒适 30usher in a brand-new life-style引入全新的生活方式 31relieve the pressure of 缓解压力 32maintain the community stability 保持社会的稳定
雅思作文写作Task2第四课时—观点类
雅思作文写作Task2第四课时—观点类
IELTS大作文讲解：agree & disagree/what's your opinion 类作文学生面授老师 时间本次课时IELTS写作第四课 时 教学思路1.作文简介、写作技巧 2.实例分析 3.课后作业 教学目标1. 观点类作文理论分析 2. 掌握此类作文基本特征和写作方法 3. 学习写作思路，掌握写作套路 讲解重点题目特点 解题思路 写作技巧以及范文分析 备考资料剑桥真题、《雅思写作套路剖析与范例大全》
教学详细内容： 一、分析雅思写作——观点类理论 1.题目特点及解题思路 ?题目特点： Express your opinion about… （To what extent）do you agree or disagree? What is your opinion about…? How do you think about…? ?解题思路： 这种题的写法较灵活，考生的回答能够是正面的也能够是反面的，还能够从正、反两个方面论述。 2.写作技巧及知识点 1）开头段 ?Sentence 1 ：background(general statement) 第一句话：文章的背景（一般的介绍） ?如何写背景句？ 首先，确定题目讨论哪个方面的问题，然后以这个问题为中心，写一句介绍性的话。 例：Some people who have been successful in the society don’t attribute their success to the theoretical
knowledge they learned from their university. Do you agree or disagree? 这个题目讨论的是个人成功或者理论知识，那么就围绕这几个单词写一个陈述句： 开头句一： People have long been interested in identifying the forces that contribute to personal achievement. 开头句二： The importance of theoretical knowledge to one’s success is a matter for debate. 考生能够记住一些开头句的句型，比如the importance of…to…is a matter for debate等，并将此运用在不同的题目练习中，这样就能够在考场上迅速写出开头段了。 注：考生在考场上能够按照实际情况自由掌握句子的数量，未必一定要写三句。 ?Sentence 2: rephrase the topic(thesis statement) 第二句话：改写题目（点名论题） 很多考生在这里容易犯两个错误：一是照抄题目，二是句子过长。解决方法如下：