2011年四级写作辅导
2011英语四级考试辅导之优秀作文范文(2)_1500字
2011英语四级考试辅导之优秀作文范文(2)_1500字2011英语四级考试辅导之优秀作文范文（2）The World Population ExplosionThe human race has experienced a consistent increase in population since the beginning of its history. Famine and disease have done little to offset（抵消）this steady increase. Too many people are added annually to the population of the world. So both the causes of population increase and the results of having more people are worth careful study.Culture evolution is the major factor responsible for population increase. Early in human development，people invented tools to hunt animals. Later they built shelters to protect themselves. Step by step，they made life easier. As a result，fewer died from natural forces，such as harshclimate and disease.In the past，when population grew，there was unexplored territory to inhabit. But now，almost all the habitable land has been explored.The world‘s population may reach 8.7 billion in 2033. It is clear that world population is a serious issue that needs careful attention. Human beings are unique to solve problems through cultural evolution.（发展）Facing the world population explosion in the near future. We must carry out the birth control program in order to save the mankind and save the world.。
2011年12月英语四级考试作文（共五则）
2011年12月英语四级考试作文（共五则）第一篇：2011年12月英语四级考试作文2011年12月四级作文：坚强的意志作文：Where There Is a Will There Is a Way1．坚强的意志是成功的重要保证。
2．意志坚定的人才能完成伟大的使命，3．学生也是这样，不刻苦学习，终究不会成为有用之才用。
1.Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will“Where there is a will, there is way” is an old proverb which almost everyone knows, but not all understand it so well.Actually, it means that if you are really resolved to do something, no matter how difficult it might be, never give up.In fact, strong will is a kind of good quality which successful people should own.A great man is always one who has a firm resolution and an inflexible spirit.One will never succeed all his life without a firm will to get the final victory.As a rule, great tasks are accomplished by men of strong will.For example, Dr.Sun Yatsen, the founder of the Republic of China, set the Chinese people free from the Manchurian rule through a long period of hard struggle.Many of his attempts failed and many of his followers were killed, but he had an inflexible spirit and stuck to his cause.Finally, he made the revolution of 1911 a success.The same is true of men in all walks of life.It is quite obvious that there is nothing difficult in the world, if you make up your mind to do it, you will certainly accomplish your end.That stands to reason.So as for students like us, we should have a good attitude towards failure.Facing with difficulties and failures, keep heads up and never give up.Besides, we should make full preparation, though strong will help usovercomethe diffioulties, it is not for person who has no preparation.2.We have spoken, written and discussed quite a lot on the relationship between iron will and success.Many people dream of becoming scientists, millionaires or superstars.However, without iron will, do you think they can succeed in making their dreams come true?Beyond all doubt, iron will plays a key role in being successful.At the top of the list, there must be difficulties in the way toward success.Apparently, the iron will is a strong weapon for against difficulties.In addition, positive attitude is indispensable to success.It is the iron will that can provoke positive attitude.T o be successful, everyone needs to understand the close relationship between iron will and success.In one word, no an iron will today, no success tomorrow.3.Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong WillAs we have read from above, quitting-smoking seems easy, but in reality it is rarely achieved.There is something provoking and interesting in this paradox, just because sword does not wear the stone as dripping water does.The ability to do something over and over again in a short time may imply its easiness, but in a long run, a lifetime maybe, things turn out to be quite the opposite.Also, as is often the case, one may have obtained all the tools and opportunities to achieve something, but in the end they still fail due to the will shortage.So how could we avoid the dilemma? Here is the prime condition of success: will and perseverance.Concentrate you energy, thought and mind exclusively on the business in which you are engaged, hang on in there and be patient, for, as Emerson put it, no one can cheat you out of your ultimate success but yourself.第二篇：英语作文四级考试Traffic jams are very commonly-seen in big cities, and a big headache for the citizens.In rush hours, endless cars get stuck on the road, and the whole city is like a huge parking lot.The driving restrictions, therefore, are put forward to alleviate the traffic problems in big cities.By implementing driving restrictions, around half of the private cars can be reduced from the road, which will help decrease the possibility of traffic jams.I believe that the driving restriction can be effective, but it is not the only way out.If the car ownership is increasing continuously, this policy will have limited effects.So the government should look at other areas to address the traffic problem, including reasonable road design, and encouragement of the public using public transport system.交通拥挤在大城市是很常见的，并为公民的一大难题。
2011专四作文抢分法宝
背诵是提高英语综合能力的法宝，分为精彩词汇，精彩句型，精彩句子，万能框架，经典范文几个方面的背诵。
语音学习有两个关键，输入和输出。
听力和阅读说英语输入，是被动状态，所以考试时只需要将听到的看到的弄懂即可。
口语和写作属于输出，需要变主动为被动。
对于英语写作，盲目的背诵和背的不够熟都不能在考试时有所帮助。
一篇作文应背到脱口而出的程度，考试时才能快速的反应到你的卷子上。
背完经典范文后经过默写，对照原文纠错，减少一些小错误。
中译英也是提高写作的好办法，根据反问的中文译文，将其按照自己的理解译成英文。
翻译完后，你会发现自己的翻译和原文有很大的差别，这些差距就是去的写作高分的关键。
这时对照范文，看着原作者是怎么写的，思考为什么这么写。
看看范文中用了那些词汇和句型？不断的学习模仿，套用反问的精彩句型，词汇，框架，不断积累才回越来越顺手。
备考时牢记一些过渡词，句型和范文，并进行仿写。
考试时，使用学习过的，熟悉而有把握的词汇和词汇，没有把握的句子，尽量采取“回避政策”。
一、问题解决型1．定义：问题解决型作文就是针对命题提出的问题或论题，列举所能够解决的方法、途径，并对这些方法或途径提出自己的挑选观点，然后结合自己的认识和体会，再做出评价或结论。
2．写作步骤：第一步：提出论题。
针对命题要求，提出论题，阐述其重要性。
第二步：列举方法。
列举出解决问题的几种方法或途径。
第三步：做出评价或选择。
根据列出的方法或途径，结合自身体会，做出评价或选择。
3．Title: How to Solve the Problem of Heavy TrafficI. OutlineA. Importance of solving the problem of heavy trafficB. Ways to solve the problem of heavy trafficC. My suggestionII. SampleWith population rapidly increasing, heavy traffic has become a big headache for many cities. For this very reason,many government officials and experts have thought up some solutions, among which two draw much attention over the country.Some people suggested that more and wider roads should be laid down. It is evident that it can relieve the traffic congestion in the streets, thus accelerating（加速） the flow of buses and cars. And meanwhile, the fast and smooth flow of traffic reduces the air pollution caused by engine-idling. But the disadvantages of this solution lies in the fact that too much land could be used for farming or housing will inevitably be occupied by more and more roads. Therefore, others hold that the number of public bus routes should be raised so that more people can be transported and fewer people will have to travel in their own cars or ride bikes. Less use of bicycles and private cars will make the roads less crowded. Unfortunately, t here is also a drawback in this solution: it will bring inconvenience to those who live or work far away from bus stop.As neither of the two solutions is effective enough t o solve the problem of traffic in cities, I favor a combination of the two. While building more roads in places where land is less useful, we should increase the number of public bus lines. Only in this way can we more effectively solve the problem of heavy traffic.(247words)范文点评：本文严格按照问题解决型作文成文。
2011英语四级作文话题预测及范文之教学_2000字
2011英语四级作文话题预测及范文之教学_2000字2011下半年英语四级作文话题预测及范文之教学Directions：For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a letter to the university president. You should write at least 120 words based on the outline given below in Chinese：1. 学校教学应该注重学生学习方法的培养。
2. 学校应该丰富学生的校园生活【范文】A Letter to the University PresidentDear Sir，I am writing to put up some suggestions concerning our teaching and campus life.As a sophomore from the Math Department，I am quite satisfied with the present condition of my university，but I like to say that there is still some room for improvement.First，I believe that more attention should be paid to the guidance of our study methods. To some extent，university students are capable of studying by themselves，but more often than never，we find ourselves at a loss as to choose good books to read and appropriate topics for our research. It is clear that we need some advice from our teachers. If our teachers can lecture more on “how to learn by yourself” for us，especially for the freshmen，our skillswill be further improved.Second，more activities should be conducted to make our campus life more colorful. I sorry to say that the present life on campus is quite boring. Every day we have classes，read in the library，or stay in the dormitory. Life here is routine. We need more meaningful activities organized to enrich our college life and enable us to study more efficiently.I hope you can consider my suggestions. Thank you.Yours sincerelyLi Ming。
大学英语四级作文辅导
写作类型从写作类型上看，提纲式文字命题和提纲式图表命题作文主要可分为现象解释型、对比选择型、问题解决型、观点论证型和记叙文五大类；而应用文则以书信为主，包括建议信、拒绝信、投诉信等，另外偶尔也会涉及到倡议书、演讲辞或通知。
1、现象解释型这类作文要求对某一社会现象进行解释，并加以评论。
其基本结构是：首先对现象进行描述或说明；其次阐述这种现象产生或存在的原因；最后提出建议或总结观点。
主线：现象存在的合理性组织材料形式：描述现象—阐述原因—表明观点段落组织模式：描述段（描述现象）—说明段（阐述原因）—议论段（表明观点）例：06-06 新On Students Selecting Lecturers （120字）1）有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程的任课教师2）学生选择教师时所考虑的主要因素3）学生自选任课教师的益处和可能产生的问题2、问题解决型这类作文要求从试题的提示性文字、图表或图画入手，解释提示性文字、图表或图画所反映出的问题，指出问题的危害性或解决这一问题的紧迫性；然后对问题展开分析，提出解决问题的方案或应对措施；最后要求考生表明自己对这一问题的态度、做法或建议等。
其基本结构是：首先提出问题并分析原因，然后分析解决问题的方法或措施，最后表明自己的态度或做法。
（一般以How to …作为题目）主线：兼顾问题涉及的各方面，圆满解决问题组织材料形式：提出问题—分析问题的原因或危害---解决问题段落组织模式：描述段（描述问题）—说明段（分析问题的原因或危害）---说明段（说明解决问题的方法或措施）例：00-01 How to Succeed in a Job Interview1) 面试在求职过程中的作用2）取得面试成功的因素：仪表、举止谈吐、能力、专业知识、自信、实事求是…3、对比选择型这类作文标志明显，容易识别，一般直接要求比较两种观点或两种做法，进而表明自己的态度或观点。
其基本结构是：首先对相关的事物或现象进行整体介绍，然后陈述两种不同的观点或做法，最后表明自己的观点或结论。
2011年英语四级考试作文真题及解析(昂立版)
2011年英语四级考试作文真题及解析(昂立版) 2011年06月18日 13:39 新浪教育微博2011年大学英语四级考试已结束，新浪网教育频道第一时间收集整理试题及参考答案，供考生参考，以下为昂立版四级作文真题 Online Shopping 及解析。
1 现在网上购物已成为一种时尚2 网上购物有很多好处，也有不少问题3 我的建议此次四级作文话题online shopping，作文体裁属于议论文中的对比类，分析网购的利弊。
话题不算新颖，是考生比较熟悉，容易发挥的话题。
在昂立的写作课上我最后一次课重点强调了对比类作文，反复提醒学生一定要背下这个模板。
对比型议论文模板One of the controversial issues today is ____________. According to a recent survey,___________________________. In this essay, I will discuss the positive and negative effects of this issue and offer my own view on it。
On the positive aspect, one of the most significant advantages is that ____________________(优点一). Moreover, _________________________________(优点二). Perhaps the primary advantage is that ___________________________。
(优点三) On the negative aspect, for one thing,_________________________________。
(缺点一) For another, ___________________________________。
2011年6月四级培训班作文练习范文
2011年6月四级培训班作文练习范文[练习1]Chat on the Internet1.网聊时尚；2. 网聊的利弊；3. 我的看法。
Nowadays, with the rapid development of IT industry, Internet plays a dominant role in our modern life. It’s a fantastic information expressway that connects every corner of the world. With Internet popularized, people in the world feel the others like their neighbors. They can chat with each other easily on Internet. Chat on the Internet is in fashion now. All the people, young and old, males and females, boys and girls are all to follow the fashion.However, like everything else, Chat on the Internet has both positive and negative aspects. On the one hand, chat on Internet can give you a merry mood when you feel sad. And when you want to talk with someone but you would not like the one to know who you are, you can chat on Internet. It lets you feel relaxed and no restrained. But on the other hand, chat on Internet also has many unfavorable aspects. Some naive persons always believe the material of the one which he or she chat with and think all he or she said was true. They wallow in it little by little. They are eager to chat with the person all day long and do not want to work or study. Especially the young girls always like this. Some of them even make an appointment with the man.In my opinion,chat on Internet is like a double-edged sword.We should made the best use of one edge and try not be hurt by the other.[练习2]The Sky-Rocketing Price ofApartments in Chinese Cities1.近年来中国城市房价不断上涨；2.中国城市房价不断上涨的原因；3.你的看法。
2011新东方英语四级作文模板(免费下载)
模板一How to Deal with Stress-如何面对压力How to Deal with Stress(如何面对压力)1．为什么会有压力?2．如何面对压力?[写作导航]第一段先用定义法指出压力是什么，以及压力的危害；第二段写压力的各种来源；第三段写如何面对压力，可针对第二段的来源，举例说明各种解决办法；最后一段提醒人们面对压力方法要对头，不可走歪路。
[范文]Stress is a state of being upset that happens when we are under pressure. Both our feelings and our bodies get upset. We can even get emotionally and physically sick if we have too much stress for too long.Stress can come at us from every direction. For instance, it can come from fights with other people. It can come when we have too many things to do and too little time to do them. It can also come when we do not have enough money to pay for what we want.Since stress can make us sick, we have to learn how to deal with it. There are good ways and bad ways to do so. We should deal with stress in good ways, of course. Good ways to cut down on stress include changing our lifestyles. For example, we can learn either to get along with people or to stay away from them. We can decide what to do now, what to do later, and what to leave off doing forever. We can also figure out how to get money or we can cut down on what we want.We should not deal with stress in bad ways because bad ways to cut down on stress just lead to more troubles, for example, skipping out and leaving our work undone, blaming our problems on someone else, stealing or cheating.模板二My View On Private Tutoring-家教之我见My View On Private Tutoring(家教之我见)1．家教与日俱增；2．家教的优缺点；3．我的看法。
CET-4 2011.11.03.作文讲义 彩色版
What will be the next topic?Letter Again?For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition 2002.1.2 Dear Mr. President,2002.6.The picture shows the changeuniversity 2003.6.2003.9.2004.6.its natural beauty and will on behalf of my travel agency, I would2005.1.Good afternoon, ladies and gentleman,2005i n u t e s t o w r i t t n o f 's d s f o l l o w i n g t h2006.6.2006.6.1999.6.haveWriting写作题型分析和介绍：根据1999年《大学英语教学大纲（修订本）》，学生应当能在阅读难度与课文相仿的书面材料是作笔记、回答问题和写提纲，能就一定的话题或提纲在半小时内写出120~150词的短文，能写短信或便条，表达意思清楚，无重大语言错误。
《大学英语四级考试大纲及样题》详细规定了考试时间、作文长度、题目类型和写作内容：第五部分：写作。
共一题，考试时间30分钟。
要求学生写出一篇120~150词的短文。
试卷上可给出题目，或规定情景，或给出段首句要求续写，或要求看图作文，或给出关键词，要求写成短文。
要求能够正确表达思想，意义连贯，无重大语法错误。
写作内容包括日常生活和一般常识。
∵30 minutes 时间限制120-150 words 篇幅限制Title and Topic Sentences 范围限制∴有一定程式化倾向∴有规律可循考试作文题材：命题话题，即写作内容多为生活或社会热门话题，可重复出现，但提纲不同。
2011年12月大学英语四级作文高分策略-推荐下载
一、 四六级写作技法和策略 1． 对应法 由于四六级写作都是提纲式写作，有时，我们可以采用对应法按照中文提纲分 别写成三段。 如：96 年 6 月份考题： 提纲： 1） 有人认为淡水是取之不尽的。（雨水、河水、井水……） 2） 实际上淡水是非常紧缺的。（人口增加、工业用水增加） 3） 我们应该怎么办？
2． 调整法 尽管是提纲式写作，提纲所提示的只是文章所要包括的主要内容，却不是文章 的结构模式，一般情况下，同学们应根据英语文章的类型，重新安排文章。如 上面有关"钱"的一个写作，按照英语的表达习惯，最好是加上一个引子。
二、 首段和尾段的写作 上一讲中我们介绍了段落的扩展模式，也就是说，我们已经了解了文章中间一 部分的叙述模式。根据四六级写作的特点，一般首段和尾段都要自己补上，那 么怎么才能写好首尾段呢，下面我介绍一下，首尾段的写作方式。
3) 因果 as a result, consequently, therefore, hence, so, because of this, for these reasons, due to the fact that
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议论文 问题分 析型 议论文 问题分 析型 议论文 问题分 析型 议论文 现象/观 点阐释 型
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2008.12 Limiting the Use of Disposal Plastic Bags 2008.06 Recreational Activities
• 四级写作要求考生要具有大纲要求的词汇 量和语法知识，还要有一定的规划篇章布 局、合理扩展段落和遣词造句的能力。 在 规定的时间内紧扣主题，层次清楚、段落 分明、文理通顺、用词恰当地表达自己的 思想是考生具备良好的综合语言能力的提 现，也是取得四级写作高分的关键所在。
大纲要求的词汇量
• 新的教学大纲所规定要掌握的四级词汇量 为：总词汇量应达到4500个单词和700个词 组。 • (修订前的大纲规定应掌握的四级词汇量为 4200)
第一段对照 点评
第一段对照 点评 第一段 对照点评
9分作文
9分作文
12分作文
12分作文
15分作文
15分作文 使用了高分词汇 attach attention to, 强于(pay attention to), bring into public focus等，使表达 更加生动 使用了定语从句 Nowadays, students attach less attention to the spelling of words in the process of English study, which… 使用复合句直接开门见 山点出主题
2. 命题方向
• 为了更好地了解英语四级写作命题方向、 规律及趋势，近五年的写作真题的题目归 纳分析如下：
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社会 热点 校园 学习 校园 学习 社会 热点
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2010. How should Parents 12 Help Children to Be Independent? 2010. Due Attention Should 06 Be Given to Spelling 2009. Creating a Green 12 Campus 2009. Free Admission to 06 Museums
用词一般， 使用了fewer and fewer, 无特色 以及高分短语 a dramatic increase
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2.新《四级考试大纲》规定：写作选用考 生所熟悉的题材。因此与考生的生活息息 相关的社会热点话题和校园话题成为主要 命题范围。考生应有意识的就他们感兴趣 的话题进行思考和拓展，力争在实践中磨 练敏锐的构思能力。
3. 根据考试改革方案和课程教学要求的相关规 定，应用文（包括书信、便条、通知、海报 等）、说明文和议论文扔将是新四级作文的 主攻方向。 4. 四级写作命题形式主要有提纲作文、情景作 文、提示作文、图表作文、关键词作文等。 最常考的是提纲作文、情景作文以及图表作 文。
【12分作文】
• Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling • Nowadays fewer and fewer students pay attention to their word-spelling. According to a recent survey, there is a dramatic increase in the number of students who can only imitate the pronunciation of a word but incapable of spelling it. • There are a number of factors accounting for this situation. First of all, the goal of most students to learn English is to speak it and pass the examination which reduces the importance of spelling. What’s more, the wide use of electronic devices such as e-dictionaries and computers makes students no longer need to correct the words by themselves. • As far as I’m concerned, I firmly argue that we need to attach great importance to word-spelling. To the students, they should write English as much as they can. Meanwhile, to the teachers, the dictations should be reinforced in the class. (140词)
2011年四级写作辅导
第一章 考试概要
• 第一节 四级写作的测试要求和考情分析 • 写作一项作为试卷的最后一个测试项目 ， • 要求考生在考试开始后的前30分钟完成 120 字以内短文。 • 纵观近几年的大学英语四级考试，不难发现， 考察的题材往往贴近生活实际和社会热点， 而且越来越侧重实用性。
1. 测试要求
【9分作文】
• Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling • Nowadays, students pay little attention to the spelling of words when study English. This influences students’ writing very much and makes the teacher worry. • There are possibly three reasons for this phenomenon. First, our education makes students pay less attention to spelling. Second, some teachers don’t emphasize the importance of spelling during teaching. Last, some students are too lazy to recite words. • Since spelling is one of the most important factors in English study, due attention should be given to it. As for me, I think, first, exams should add some factors into it. This can help students pay more attention to spelling. Then, schools should also set effective mechanisms to help teachers as well as the students to realize the importance. (122 词)
【15分作文】
• Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling • Nowadays, students attach less attention to the spelling of words in the process of English study, which has been brought into public focus and called for further concern. • Several factors could account for the problem. To begin with, students like an easy way of studying, which causes some omissions and changes in spelling. Further more, the standardized-test oriented way of English learning, in which the high score can be achieved without spelling, put students to the position in which they have the quite reason to ignore spelling. • To change this situation, the teachers and the students should work together. On the one hand, the teachers should give more attention to students’ spelling, asking the students to be conscious of the importance of correct spelling from the very beginning of their English study. On the other hand, the students themselves are supposed to be aware that correct spelling is a must in English study. (152 词)。
范文点评
• 下面我们以2010年6月的四级作文题 Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling 为例， 对各分数段的文章进行点评。 • Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30minutes to write an essay entitled Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling. You should write at least 120 words following the outline below: • 1 如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写， • 2 出现这种现象的原因是…… • 3. 为了改变这种状况，我认为……