【专项训练】高中英语--概要写作技能训练(含答案)

【专项训练】高中英语--概要写作技能训练(含答案)
【专项训练】高中英语--概要写作技能训练(含答案)

第一节归纳主旨大意

将350词以内的文本浓缩成60词左右的概要, 需要一个过程。它大致是从文本整体的理解到各部分的概括再到整体的合成。首先, 我们需要整体阅读文本, 归纳主旨大意。

【有缘初识】

请阅读下面的短文以及某同学所写的概要, 回答导学问题。

1. 该短文的主题是________.

A. shopping

B. advertising

C. undercover

D. marketing

2.在A同学的概要中, 与该主题不吻合的句子是_________________.

You are in a department store and you see a couple of attractive young women looking at the sweater. You listen to the conversation.

“I can't believe it--a Lorenzo Bertolla! They are almost impossible to find. Isn’t it beautiful? And it’s a lot cheaper than the one Sara bought in Rome.”

They leave and you go over to see this incredible sweater. It's nice and the price is right. You’ve never heard of Lorenzo Bertolla, but those girls looked really stylish. They must know. So you buy it. You never realize that those young women are employees of an advertising agency. They are actually paid to go from store to store talking loudly about Lorenzo Bertolla clothes.

Every day we notice what people are wearing, driving and eating. If the person looks cool, the product seems cool, too. This is the secret of undercover(暗中影响的) marketing.

Undercover marketing is important because it reaches people that don’t pay attention to traditional advertising. This is particularly true of the MTV generation--consumers between the age of 18 and 34. It is a golden group. They have a lot of money to spend, but they don’t trust ads.

So advertising agencies hire young actors "perform" in bars and other places where young adults go. Some people might call this Practice deceptive, but marketing executive Jonathan Ressler calls it creative. "Look at the traditional advertising. Its effectiveness is decreasing.” However, one might ask what "real " is exactly about if young women pretend to be enthusiastic about a sweater? Advertising executives would say it's no less real than an ad. The difference is that you know an ad is trying to persuade you to buy something. While you don't know when a conversation you overhear is just a performance.

某同学写的概要:

①Some attractive women say a Lorenzo Bertolla is beautiful but cheap, and you buy it. ②Actually these stylish people are employed by advertising agencies to do undercover marketing, which aims at people who don’t trust ads. ③ Although, in

some advertising executives’ o pinion, it is creative and effective, undercover marketing is blamed for the performance which you are unaware of.

1. 议论和说明性文体通常围绕某个主题( topic/ subject)展开。

2. 概要写作的第一步便是阅读并抓取主题, 进而提取主旨大意, 即有关该主题的

主要内容或作者在该主题上的观点或主张。这一过程被称为归纳主旨大意。

3. 归纳主旨大意, 是为了整体上把握语篇要义, 有利于区分主次、剔除细节信息。

【名师导学】

一. 阅读A、B、C三个段落,回答导学问题

1. 请用下划线在各段标出含有本段主旨大意的句子。

2. 请分析这三个句子与所在段落中其他句子间的关系, 并举例说明

A

Many things may make you angry. You may get angry when something doesn’t go your way. Maybe you get mad at yourself when you don’t understand your homework or when your team loses an important game. Maybe your teacher gave you too much homework. Or maybe a friend borrowed your favorite video game and then broke it. That made you angry!

B

Often no one looks more guilty than the innocent. On the other hand, nobody may look more innocent than a professional criminal. And the man who knows "everything" may really only be trying to hide his own weakness. So, it is foolish to try to judge a person only by his appearance.

C

What is Standard English? Is it spoken in Britain, the US, Canada, Australia, India and New Zealand? Believe it or not, there is no such thing as Standard English. Many people believe the English spoken on TV and the radio is Standard English. This is because in the early days of radio, those who reported the news were expected to speak excellent English. However, on TV and the radio you will hear differences in the way people speak.

1.议论和说明性文体时常含有概括全段主要内容的句子, 即段落主旨句(top

sentence)

2.段落主旨句作为段落的核心句子, 受到段落中其他句子的支撑, 即其他句子

为段落主旨句提供支持性细节。

3.受英语开门见山、直切主题的表达特点的影响, 段落主旨句多在段首。少数

主旨句可能出现在段中或段尾。

二、请阅读下面这个段落以及三位同学给出的段落主旨句, 回答导学问题

3.哪位同学给出的段落主旨句比较合理? 为什么?

So why has English changed over time? Actually all languages change and develop when

cultures meet and communicate with each other. At first the English spoken in Engla nd between

about AD 450 and 1150 was very different from the English spoken today. It was bas ed more on

German than the English we speak at present. Then gradual between about AD 800 a nd 1150

English became less like German because those who ruled England spoke first Danis h and later

French. These new settlers enriched the English language and especially its vocabula ry. So by

the 1600s, Shakespeare was able to make use of a wider vocabulary than ever before. In 1620

some British settlers moved to America. Later in the 18th century, some British peop le were taken to Australia, too. English began to be spoken in both countries.

三位同学给出的段落主旨句:

同学1: Why has English changed over time?

学 2: All languages change and develop when cultures meet and communicate with e ach other.

同学3: English changes as its culture meets and communicates with that of another.

1. 不是所有的段落都有现成的段落主旨句, 有的段落主旨句需要你根据段

落内容予以归纳和概括。

2. 归纳主旨大意时, 既要回答“这段落关于什么?( What is the paragraph

about?)” 以抓住段落的主题( topic/. subject), 又要回答“作者就该主题写

了什么? ( What is said about the subject ?)” 以提炼出有关该主题的主要内容或作者就该主题。

提出的观点和主张。

三、阅读以下短文,回答导学问题。

4. 第一段的主旨向是第一句还是最后一句? 请说明理由。

5. 以下哪句比较好地归纳了该短文的主旨大意? 请说明理由。

A. Although prevention is believed to be beneficial, more attention is given to heart surgeries

than prevention programs.

B. Although heart surgery can help a large number of people who are suffering

from heart disease, it has some disadvantages.

One of the greatest killers in the Western world is heart disease. The death rate from the disease has been increasing at an alarming speed for the past thirty years. Today in Britain, for example, about four hundred people a day die of heart disease.

Medical experts know that people can reduce their chances of getting heart disease by exercising regularly, by not smoking, by changing their diets and by paying more attention to reducing stress in their work.

However, Western health-care systems are still not paying enough attention to the prevention of the disease. There is a need for more programs to educate the public about the causes and prevention of heart disease. Instead of supporting such programs, however, the U.S. health care system is spending large sums of money on the surgical (外科的)) treatment of the disease after it develops. This emphasis on treatment clearly has something to do with the technological advances that have taken place in the past ten to fifteen years. In this time, modern technology has enabled doctors to develop new surgical techniques. Many operations that were considered impossible or too risky a few years ago are now performed every day in U.S. hospitals. The result had been a huge increase in heart surgery.

Although there is no doubt that heart surgery can help a large number of people, some people point out that the emphasis on the surgical treatment of the disease has three clear disadvantages. First, it attracts interest and money away from the question of prevention. Second, it causes the costs of general hospital care to rise. After hospitals buy the expensive equipment that is necessary for modern heart surgery, they must try to recover the money they have spent. To do this, they raise costs for all their patients, not just those patients whose treatment requires the equipment. The

third disadvantage is that doctors are encouraged to perform surgery--even on patients for whom an operation is unnecessary--because the equipment and expert skills are there. A government office recently stated that major heart surgery was often performed even though its chances of success were low. In one type of heart surgery, for example, only 15 percent of patients improved their conditions after the surgery. However, more than 100, 000 of these operations are performed in the United States every year.

1. 确定段落主旨句时,还应该兼顾语篇大背景, 即在全文主旨大意的统领下

归纳段落主旨, 将段落主旨纳入语篇主旨的架构中。

2. 概括段落大意时, 要在理清句与句之间关系的基础上抓住贯穿全段的中心意思。

3. 有时候, 段落第一句(和前几句)只是起到导入话题或过渡衔接的作用, 而

不是作为段落主旨句起到统领的作用。

4. 归纳全文主旨大意时, 需要理清段与段之间的关系, 尤其关注段落之间的

连接词和过渡句, 以便更好地抓住贯穿全文的中心意思。

5. 有时候, 第一段(或前几段)只是起到导入话题的作用, 和全文主旨没有直接关系。

【先试为快】

请阅读下面短文, 并运用本节有关主旨大意归纳的微技能, 完成文后学习任务。

You are in a department store and you see a couple of attractive young women looking at the sweater. You listen to the conversation.

“I can't believe it--a Lorenzo Bertolla! They are almost impossible to find. Isn’t it beautiful? And it’s a lot cheaper than the one Sara bought in Rome.”

They leave and you go over to see this incredible sweater. It's nice and the price is right. You’ve never heard of Lorenzo Bertolla, but those girls looked really stylish. They must know. So you buy it. You never realize that those young women are employees of an advertising agency. They are actually paid to go from store to store talking loudly about Lorenzo Bertolla clothes.

Every day we notice what people are wearing, driving and eating. If the person looks cool, the product seems cool, too. This is the secret of undercover(暗中影响的) marketing.

Undercover marketing is important because it reach es people that don’t pay attention to traditional advertising. This is particularly true of the MTV generation--consumers between the age of 18 and 34. It is a golden group. They have a lot of money to spend, but they don’t trust ads.

So advertising agencies hire young actors "perform" in bars and other places where young adults go. Some people might call this Practice deceptive, but marketing executive Jonathan Ressler calls it creative. "Look at the traditional advertising. Its effectiveness is decreasing.” However, one might ask what "real " is exactly about if young women pretend to be enthusiastic about a sweater? Advertising executives would say it's no less real than an ad. The difference is that you know an ad is trying to persuade you to buy something. While you don't know when a conversation you overhear is just a performance.

1. 最后一段的主旨句是第一句吗?为什么?

2. 如果不是, 请画出本段主旨句或归纳出本段的主旨大意。____________________________________________________________________ ___________

____________________________________________________________________ ___________

3. 前三段和本文其他段落是什么关系?

____________________________________________________________________ ___________

4. 请归纳出本文的主旨大意。

____________________________________________________________________ ___________

____________________________________________________________________ __________

【练能生巧】

阅读下面短文, 运用已学的微技能完成短文后的学习任务。

In the past 30 years, Americans' consumption of restaurant and take-out food has doubled.

The result, according to many health watchdog groups, is an increase in overweight and obesity. Almost 60 million Americans are obese, costing $117 billion each year in health care and related costs. Members of Congress have decided they need to do something about the obesity problem. A bill was recently introduced in the House that would require restaurants with 20 or more locations to list the nutritional content of their food on their menus.

Our legislators (立法者) point to the trend of restaurants’ marketing larger meals at attractive prices. People order these meals believing that they are getting a great value, but what they are also getting could be, in one meal, more than the daily recommended allowances of calories, fat and sodium. The question is, would people stop “supersizing” or make other healthier choices if they knew the nutritional

content of the food they’re ordering? Lawmakers think they would, and the gravity of the obesity problem has caused them to act to change menus.

The restaurant industry isn’t happy about the new bill. Arguments against it include the fact that diet alone is not the reason for America’s obesity. A lack of adequate exercise is also to blame. In addition, many fast food chains already post nutritional information on their websites, or on posters located in their restaurants.

Those who favor the MEAL Act, and similar legislation, say in response that we must do all we can to help people maintain a healthy weight. While the importance of exercise is undeniable, the quantity and quality of what we eat must be changed. They believe that if we want consumers to make better choices when they eat out, nutritional information must be provided where they are selecting their food. Consumers are not likely to have memorized the calorie counts they may have looked up on the Internet, nor are they going to leave their tables, or a line, to check out a poster that might be on the opposite side of the restaurant.

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归纳主旨大意(含段落大意)

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【小试牛刀】

完成上面这篇文章的概要写作

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【反思总结】

回顾以上学习本节微技能的过程, 并总结自己学到的有关该微技能的要点。

1. 主旨大意是什么?对于概要写作而言, 它起到什么作用?

2. 如何归纳主旨大意?

3.学完该微技能, 我

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答案:

第一节归纳主旨大意

【有缘初识】

1.该短文的主题是C

2.在A同学的概要中,与该主题不吻合的句子是第1句

【名师导学】

1. 含有段落主旨大意的句子分别是:

A 段: Many things may make you angry.

B 段: It is foolish to try to judge a person only by his appearance.

C 段: There is no such thing as Standard English.

2. 这三个句子与段落中其他句子间的关系: 其他句子都围绕这几个句子展开, 都是支持它们

的细节。

比如:A段的第2、3、4、5句共用5个细节支持主题句中的 many things,它们分别是:

something doesn't go your way;

you don t understand your homework;

your team loses an important game;

your teacher gave you too much homework;

a friend borrowed your favorite video game and then broke it.

3. 同学3所归纳的主旨句比较合理。

同学1选择段落第1句“ Why has English changed over time?” 作为主旨句。虽然段落首句

往往是段落主旨句, 而且该段a落确实围绕这个问题展开, 但它只提出了本段的主题( topic/

subject), 即“为什么英语随着时间的变化而变化”, 而没有就此主题给出观点或主张,也就是说它没有回答“为什么英语随着时间的变化而变化”。所以将它作为本段主旨句是不合理的。

同学2选择段落的第2句

“ All languages change and develop when cultures meet and

communicate with each other.” 作为主旨句, 这句话就所有语言变化发展的原因给出了观点,虽然也包括英语变化发展的原因, 但本段的主题是“为什么英语随着时间的变化而变化”, 所以它的范围太大, 作为本段主旨句是不合理的。

同学3将这两句予以整合, 把主旨句概括为

“ English changes as its culture meets and

communicates with that of another.”, 既提出了本段的主题,又归纳了作者就该主题题提出的观点。

4. 第一段的主旨句应该是最后一句

理由如下:

虽然本段第2和和第3句都是支持第1句的细节, 但放眼整个文本可知, 本文的主题是

“prevention of heart disease”, 而不是“ heart disease”; 文本第2段的第1句正是用“however”引

出了本文的主题; 第1段的第1至3句句只是指出了“ heart disease”的严重性,从而带读者进入本文的话题,即“ prevention of heart disease”。

5. A句更好地归纳了短文的主旨大意

理由如下:

本文三个段落的主旨大意分别是:

Medical experts believe the key to protecting people from heart disease is prevent ion.

Instead of supporting prevention programs, more emphasis is laid on treatment of the

disease.

The emphasis on the surgical treatment of the disease has three clear disadvantages. A句整合了这三段的主旨大意,且把重点放在本文的主题

“ prevention of heart disease”上;

而B句把重点放在了“ heart surgery”的“disadvantages'”上, 没有涵盖所有段落的主旨大意。

【先试为快】

1. 最后一段的主旨句不是第一句。第一句的作用是承接上文,小结

“ undercover marketing”。从第二句开始, 梳理各句的主干

“ Some people might call this practice…,but …Jonathan Ressler calls it…. However, one might ask... Advertising executives would say it’s …The difference is that….”可以发现,这段的主旨大意是不同人对“ undercover marketing”的不同看法。

2.本段主旨大意可归纳

为: This new way of advertising has now become a controversy.

3.前三段是一个假想的典型事例,目的是导入本文话题。其他段落则是围绕本文话题展开

陈述。因此, 前三段和本文其他段落都服务于本文中心, 但是两者之间没有直接的关系。

4. 本文的主旨大

意: Many companies are employing undercover marketing to promote

sales. in which actors are hired to pretend to be customers and to attract those around them to

buy the products. This new way of advertising has now become a controversy.

【练能生巧】

全文主旨大意: Opinions divide on the MEAL Act aimed at overweight problems.

各段主旨大意:

Paragraph 1: A bill was recently introduced in the House that would require restaura nts

with 20 or more locations to list the nutritional content of their food on their menus.

Paragraph 2: Lawmakers think people would stop eating the larger meals and make o ther

healthier choices if they knew the nutritional content of the food.

Paragraph 3: The restaurant industry isn't happy about the new bill.

Paragraph 4: Those who favor the MEAL Act believe that nutritional information mu st be provided where they are selecting their food.

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