2020年高考英语新题型:读后续写,概要写作以及大作文模板
2020新高考i卷英语读后续写范文

2020新高考i卷英语读后续写范文全文共6篇示例,供读者参考篇1The New KidI was really excited when I found out there was going to be a new student joining my class. Having a new kid show up is always fun - I get to make a new friend and there's a bit of a buzz around school for a little while. Everybody wants to get to know the new student and hear all about where they came from.His name was Marcus and he had just moved to our town from another city pretty far away. On his first day, the teacher asked him to stand up and introduce himself to the class. Marcus seemed really shy and nervous. His face went all red and he spoke in just a tiny little voice when he said his name and that he liked soccer. I felt kind of bad for him.At recess, a bunch of us tried to get Marcus to come play with us, but he didn't want to. He just stood off by himself in the corner of the playground. I went over to try and get him to join in, but he didn't say much. I could tell he was feeling really uncomfortable being the new kid. I remembered how awkwardand scary it felt when I was the new student a couple years ago after we moved to this town. It can be really hard!Over the next few days, Marcus still wasn't really talking to anyone. He would quietly sit by himself at lunch, reading or playing littlehand-held video games. A couple mean kids started picking on him a bit for being so quiet and alone all the time. That made me mad - I hated seeing the new kid get bullied like that when he was just being shy. I told those bullies to cut it out and leave Marcus alone.One day after school, I saw Marcus was the last one left besides me. His head was hanging down looking at the ground as he slowly gathered his stuff to leave. I walked over to him and said "Hi Marcus! You want to walk home together?" He looked up at me with a surprised look. Then he gave a little nod and a tiny smile.As we walked, I started chatting with him to try and make him feel more comfortable. I asked him questions about what his old city was like and what he liked to do for fun. Slowly, Marcus started opening up. He told me about the huge park near his old house that had a soccer field, basketball courts, and a cute little stream running through it. He said he really missed that park.I told Marcus all about the awesome hiking trails and woods near my neighborhood that we could explore together sometime. His eyes lit up at that - he said he loved the outdoors and going on adventures. Marcus started talking more and more about all his interests like gaming, art, and especially bugs. He went on forever about all the cool insects he's seen and studied. I had no idea he was such an insect expert!We became really good friends after that walk. Now Marcus was eager to hang out, and I introduced him to all my other friends. They all liked Marcus once they got to know him - he was actually a really funny, cool dude once he opened up. We started eating lunch together every day, playing soccer at recess, going on bug collecting expeditions in the woods, and just having a blast being kids.The teachers were so happy to see Marcus finally coming out of his shell and making friends. He was excelling in class once he felt more comfortable and confident at school. I was really proud of myself for being the one to first get through to the shy new kid. I remembered how much it helped when some other kids made an effort with me when I was the new student. Now I had paid that kindness forward by being a friend to Marcus.I'm so glad Marcus joined our class. He's my best buddy now!I honestly can't picture my life at school without him. This whole experience taught me that it's important to make an effort with new people, even if they seem shy or different at first. You never know what an amazing friend you might make if you take the time to get to know someone. Now our little crew is so tight - like real life buddies going on little kid adventures every day after school. I'm having such an awesome year thanks to Marcus!篇2The Curious Case of the Missing MarblesHi there! My name is Tommy and I'm in the 4th grade. I love reading, especially mystery stories. The reading passage we had in our English exam was super interesting. It was about a boy named Jack who lost his marbles. At first, I thought it was just a silly story about a kid who misplaced his toy marbles. But as I read on, I realized it was a real mystery!Jack's marble collection was very special to him. He had been collecting marbles since he was little and had all sorts of cool ones – cat's eyes, shooters, and even a rare jade marble. One day, Jack noticed that some of his precious marbles were missing from the jar he kept them in. How strange!Jack started looking everywhere for the missing marbles. He checked under his bed, in the closet, and even in the kitchen. No marbles anywhere! Jack was really upset. Those marbles meant a lot to him. Some of them were gifts from his grandpa.The story didn't say what happened next, but my mind started racing with ideas. I decided to write my own continuation to solve the curious case of the missing marbles. Here's what I think could have happened:Jack told his mom about the missing marbles and she suggested he re-trace his steps from the last few days. Maybe he'd taken them out to play somewhere and forgot to put them back properly.Jack tried his best to remember. Then it hit him – he had been playing marbles in the backyard with his best friend Emma a couple of days ago! He raced outside and sure enough, there were a few stray marbles lying in the grass. Phew, mystery solved!Or was it? As Jack picked up the marbles, he realized several were still missing, including his prized jade one. This was getting really strange. Jack's dog Buster then came bounding over, drooling all over the place. Jack gasped – Buster's mouth was full of marbles!"Buster, you naughty pup! Did you eat my marbles?" Jack scolded. Buster just wagged his tail happily. It seemed the family pet was the real culprit behind the missing marble caper!Jack checked Buster's fur and found more marbles stuck in there. He started gathering them all up, feeling relieved to have solved the mystery. That is, until he saw the jade marble lying a few feet away...broken into two pieces! Jack's heart sank. His favorite marble was ruined.Just then, Emma came running over. "Jack, there you are! I have something to tell you about your marbles." She looked guilty.Emma explained that a few days earlier when they were playing, her little brother Tom had taken some of Jack's marbles and hidden them around the backyard as a prank. That sneaky Tom!With Emma's help, Jack was able to recover the last few missing marbles from the hiding spots. Although his jade one was broken, he felt much better knowing the marbles hadn't been lost forever, just temporarily misplaced by a pesky younger brother and an even peskier dog.From that day on, Jack made sure to keep his marble collection safely locked away when he wasn't playing with it. No more losing his precious marbles to dogs, siblings, or anyone else! Mysteries are fun, but not when they involve your favorite toys going missing.Well, that's my take on what could have happened after that reading passage. Writing mysteries is hard work, but using my imagination to continue Jack's story was a lot of fun. I can't wait to read more mystery books and maybe even write my own novel one day! A kid can dream, right? Thanks for reading my take on the curious case of Jack's missing marbles. Until next time!篇3The Reading Passage Was All About the EnvironmentWow, that reading passage was really interesting! It talked all about how we need to take better care of the environment. There were a lot of big words that I didn't quite understand, but I got the main idea.The passage said that humans are hurting the planet by polluting too much and using up too many natural resources. It mentioned things like factories letting out yucky smoke, carsputting bad gases into the air, and people throwing away too much trash that doesn't biodegrade. It sounds like we're really messing things up for the Earth!I don't want the planet to be all dirty and yucky when I grow up. I love playing outside, breathing the fresh air, and seeing all the pretty flowers, trees and animals. I would be so sad if all of that went away because we weren't being careful enough.That's why I think it's really important that we all do our part to be more environmentally friendly. Even kids like me can help out! At school, I always make sure to recycle my plastic bottles, cans, and paper instead of just throwing them in the regular trash. My teacher says that recycling helps save natural resources and cuts down on waste.At home, my mom is really good about turning off lights when we leave a room so we don't waste electricity. She also takes reusable bags with her to the grocery store instead of using plastic ones. Those plastic bags are really bad for the environment because they take so long to break down.I try to conserve water too by not letting the sink run forever when I'm brushing my teeth. My dad told me that clean drinking water is becoming scarce in some parts of the world, so weshouldn't waste it. Little things like that can make a big difference if everyone does them.Sometimes I get frustrated though because it seems like grown-ups aren't doing enough to help the environment. Why are there still so many big factories polluting the air and water? Why do people keep littering everywhere instead of putting trash in the proper bins? It makes me worried about what the world will look like when I'm older.That's why I think we need stronger laws to force companies and people to be more environmentally responsible. If they don't follow the rules, they should have to pay really big fines. Maybe that will finally make them realize how important it is to go green and clean up their acts!I also think we should have more education about the environment starting from when kids are really little. If we can teach good habits and values from the beginning, it will be easier to create a generation of people who truly care about protecting the planet. I've been learning about recycling, conserving energy/water, and not littering since I was in preschool, and now it just feels normal and natural to me.In school now, we have eco-clubs where we do fun activities like picking up litter in parks, planting trees, and making arts &crafts projects out of recycled materials. We even took a field trip last year to a renewable energy plant that runs on solar power and wind turbines - that was really cool to see! The more interactive learning experiences we can give kids, the more engaged and enthusiastic they'll be about environmental protection.My biggest dream is that by the time I'm a grown-up, we'll finally have clean air to breathe, safe drinking water everywhere, and unspoiled natural habitats for plants and animals to thrive. I imagine cities with buildings made from eco-friendly materials, solar panels on every rooftop, awesome public transportation systems so we don't need as many cars, and beautiful green spaces like parks and community gardens.I know that might sound too optimistic and idealistic. After all, the reading passage made it seem like environmental problems are just getting worse and worse as time goes on. But I have to篇4My Trip to the ZooHey there! My name is Lily and I'm 8 years old. I just took a really cool field trip to the zoo with my class and I wanted to tell you all about it!We took a big yellow school bus to get to the zoo. It was kind of a long ride, about an hour, but it was fun because we got to sing songs and play games on the bus. When we finally got there, I was so excited! I love animals so much.The first animals we saw were the mon篇5My Visit to the Science MuseumOne sunny Saturday, my mom and dad took me to the big Science Museum in the city. I was really excited because I love learning about science and seeing cool experiments!When we got there, the first thing I saw was a huge dinosaur skeleton in the lobby. "Woah, look at that T-Rex!" I shouted, running up to get a closer look. The sign said it was65 million years old. I couldn't even imagine being alive that long ago when dinosaurs roamed the earth.Next, we went into the physics section. There were all kinds of hands-on displays letting you play with forces like gravity,inertia, and magnetism. My favorite was the vacuum tube that you could put things into and watch them defy gravity. I made a beach ball float in mid-air and twirl around - it was awesome!The biology area had models of cells and organs that you could walk through. Everything was giant-sized so you could see all the details up close. I climbed through a gigantic eyeball and saw the lens and retina. In the brain model, I could see where memories are stored and where decisions are made. It was mind-blowing!After that, we visited the chemistry labs. There were lots of test tubes and beakers filled with bubbling, colorful liquids. We got to make our own slime by mixing a couple clear solutions together. The slime turned bright green and was so gooey and stretchy! Taking it home was the best souvenir.Around lunchtime, we went to the museum cafe for some food. There were actually dishes themed around the molecular structure of different meals. My sandwich had pieces of bread made to look like atoms! Even the drinks had dry ice smoke billowing out of them. It was a full multi-sensory science experience.With renewed energy, we explored the space and aviation galleries next. I saw real rockets and spacesuits that astronautshave worn on missions. There was a flight simulator ride that made me feel like I was truly blasting off into orbit. The G-forces pushed me deep into my seat as we accelerated through the atmosphere. I wished I could go on a real rocket ship someday!Finally, we made our way to the computer science wing to learn about coding and cybersecurity. We got to program little robot buggies to follow a maze and pick up small objects. There were also some cool 3D printers making weird plasticky sculptures. The computers were linked into a massive video game where everyone could team up and battle viruses trying to break into the network. Our team won by building the strongest cybersecurity firewall!By the time we left, my brain was bursting with new knowledge. I had no idea science could be that much fun and so interactive. We saw physics in motion, walked through giant biological models, made chemistry slime, experienced a space launch, and defeated a network attack all in one day. I can't wait to go back to the Science Museum again soon!篇6The Big Mud Puddle AdventureHi! My name is Lily and I'm 8 years old. I love going on adventures and using my imagination. One sunny Saturday morning, I woke up feeling really excited because my best friend Emma was coming over to play. We had big plans to build a fort in my backyard and pretend we were brave explorers discovering a new land.After eating my pancakes, I ran outside to get everything ready. I grabbed some old blankets, pillows, and my collection of stuffed animals to make our fort cozy. I also found a couple of big sticks we could use as explorers' walking sticks. Just as I finished setting up, I heard the gate open and Emma came running over."Hi Lily! I'm ready for our big adventure today!" Emma said with a big smile."Me too! Our explorer fort is all set up over here," I replied, leading her to the backyard. "Whoa, this looks awesome!" she exclaimed when she saw the fort. We got right to work fluffing up the pillows and arranging the stuffed animals just how we wanted.After admiring our handiwork, I said "Okay Emma, time to gear up for our journey into the wild!" We grabbed our walkingsticks and put on our explorer hats and backpacks. Emma even tied a bandana around her head to look extra rugged."Where should we explore first, Lily?" Emma asked, swinging her walking stick with enthusiasm."Hmm..." I thought for a moment, scanning the backyard. That's when my eyes landed on the biggest, muddiest puddle I'd ever seen! The rain from a few nights ago must have caused it."There!" I pointed towards the puddle. "That will be our first destination. Can you imagine all the cool creatures and plants we might discover there?"Emma gasped. "You're right, Lily! A puddle that size must be teeming with exotic life. It will be very dangerous though... are you sure we're prepared for such a perilous journey?"I puffed out my chest with confidence. "Don't you worry, I'm the bravest explorer around. We can handle anything that puddle throws our way!"And with that, we began making our way across the yard towards the gigantic puddle. We had to step very carefully to avoid any "deep muddy pits" that could swallow us whole. Every few steps we stopped to look around with our hands on our foreheads, scanning for any sign of danger.Finally, after what felt like an eternity of cautious trekking, we made it to the puddle's edge. Emma and I stood there in awe, mouths hanging open."I can't believe we actually made it..." Emma said quietly."Me neither," I replied. "Should we...go in?"Emma gulped. "The risks could be extreme. But we can't let our fear stop us from making an astronomical puddle discovery!""You're right. Okay, get ready and follow me in..." I said, lifting one foot up and taking a tiny step forward into the muddy water.Within seconds, the puddle began gurgling and bubbling like a swamp! Emma and I stumbled backwards, gripping our walking sticks tightly."What's happening?!" Emma cried out."I...I don't know! Maybe we've angered the puddle spirits!" I shouted back.Just then, a gigantic mud monster rose up from the middle of the puddle, snarling and gurgling nonsense words! It had two big googly eyes made of rocks, a mouth full of twigs and leaves for teeth, and six slimy tentacles writhing around.Emma and I screamed at the top of our lungs and turned to run away as fast as we could. But the mud monster gave a mighty roar that seemed to shake the whole backyard. We froze in our tracks, shaking with fear.Slowly, the mud monster opened its mouth and spoke in a deep, gravelly voice. "CHILDREN...YOU HAVE ENTERED...MY MUDDY DOMAIN..."My lips trembled as I stammered "W-We're very s-sorry Mr. Mud Monster! We d-didn't mean to intrude! We're j-just explorers!"The monster narrowed its googly eyes at us. "EXPLORERS YOU SAY? THEN EXPLORE YOU SHALL!"Before we could react, two of the monster's slimy tentacles stretched out and wrapped around our legs! Emma and I screamed again as the tentacles lifted us up into the air. With one powerful swing, the monster flung us across the backyard......right into the middle of the giant puddle!We came up sputtering and coughing, covered from head to toe in thick brown mud. The monster bellowed with laughter that sounded like rumbling thunder."Th-That was horrible!" Emma cried, frantically trying to wipe mud out of her eyes."And awesome!" I shouted back, slinging some mud her way playfully.Emma gasped, then started laughing too. "Oh you're gonna get it!" She picked up a big handful of mud and flung it at me.We spent the next hour having the most epic mud battle ever, laughing and splashing around gleefully. Every time we thought the fight was over, one of us would sneak in one more mud attack from behind.Eventually, we were so exhausted that we just collapsed in the puddle, letting the mud ooze over us. We stared up at the clouds, feeling totally content."That...was...the...BEST adventure ever!" Emma panted."You got that right," I said. "Thanks for being an awesome explorer buddy."Emma smiled at me. "No, thank YOU Lily. I can't wait for what we get to discover next time!"We fist bumped, sending a shower of mud droplets up into the air and all over our already filthy bodies. Then we bothstarted laughing all over again. I felt so happy and grateful to have such an amazing friend to go on adventures with.As we were catching our breath, we heard my mom call out from the backdoor. "Lily? Emma? What on earth are you girls up to- OH MY GOODNESS"She rushed outside and gasped when she saw the aftermath of our battle. Emma and I exchanged a mischievous look before shouting "MUD MONSTER ATTACK" and tackling my poor mom into the puddle with us.The three of us rolled around, laughing hysterically and coating my mom in just as much mud as we were covered in. I don't think I've ever seen her laugh so hard!By the time we finally dragged ourselves inside to get cleaned up, we were all completely exhausted. As I was eating a snack and sipping some hot chocolate, I overheard my mom telling my dad about our "explorer adventure gone wild."Dad just chuckled and said "Well, you know how kids are with their imaginations. Although I must admit, getting ambushed by a mud monster does sound pretty intense!"I smiled into my mug, feeling like the luckiest kid in the world. Emma and I had been on the most amazingly silly, messy,unforgettable adventure together today. And who knows what other imaginary quests and creatures awaited us next time?。
2020高考英语八大热点应用文范文以及新题型:读后续写,概要写作

2020高考英语八大热点应用文范文以及新题型:读后续写,概要写作假定你是李华,正在英国接受英语培训,住在一户英国人家里。
今天你的房东Mrs.Wilson 不在家,你准备外出,请给Mrs. Wilson写一留言条,内容包括:1. 外出购物2. 替房东还书3. Tracy 来电话留言:1 )咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消2 )此事己告知Susan3 )尽快回电Mrs. WilsonI’m going out shopping and won’t be b ack until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library. At about 1 o’clock this afternoon, Tracy called, saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she had something important to attend to. She felt very sorry about that, but said that you could set some other time for the meeting. She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home. She has already told SusanYours sincerely,Li Hua二. 道歉信假如你是新华中学的学生李华,你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发电子邮件,询问你暑假里的打算,但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。
请根据以下要点给他回封邮件:1. 未及时回信的原因;2. 你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。
2020新高考全国一卷英语续写范文

2020新高考全国一卷英语续写范文The person I admire most is my grandmother, who has been a significant figure in my life. Born in a small village, she grew up during challenging times but always persevered. She worked as a teacher for over thirty years and dedicated her life to educating children in her community. My grandmother is known for her kindness, patience, and unwavering commitment to her students. Even in her old age, she continues to inspire those around her with her positive attitude and wisdom.There are many reasons why my grandmother deserves respect and love. First and foremost, her dedication to education has had a profound impact on countless lives. Many of her former students have gone on to achieve great things, attributing their success to her guidance and encouragement. She believes that education is the key to a better future and has always gone above and beyond to ensure that every child has access to learning opportunities.Moreover, my grandmother embodies the values of compassion and empathy. She often volunteers at localshelters, providing support to those in need. Her selflessness and willingness to help others have inspired me to be a better person. She teaches me that small acts of kindness can make a significant difference in the world.Lastly, my grandmother's resilience is truly admirable. Throughout her life, she faced numerous challenges, including financial hardships and personal losses. Yet, she always approached life with a smile and a determination to overcome obstacles. Her strength and optimism motivate me to face my own challenges with courage.In conclusion, my grandmother is a remarkable person who deserves both respect and love. Her dedication to education, compassion for others, and resilience in the face of adversity make her a role model for everyone. I am grateful to have her in my life, and I strive to emulate her values every day.中文翻译:我最钦佩的人是我的祖母,她在我的生活中扮演了重要的角色。
2020新高考全国一卷英语续写范文

2020新高考全国一卷英语续写范文English:As the sun dipped below the horizon, casting a warm glow over the serene landscape, Sarah found herself lost in a whirlwind of emotions. She had come a long way since the start of her journey, facing challenges that seemed insurmountable at times. But now, standing at the edge of the cliff, with the wind gently tousling her hair, she felt a sense of peace wash over her. The journey had tested her resilience, pushing her beyond her limits, but it had also taught her valuable lessons about perseverance and determination. As she gazed out at the vast expanse before her, Sarah realized that the path to success was not always smooth, but it was worth every struggle and setback along the way. With renewed determination, she took a deep breath, ready to face whatever challenges lay ahead, knowing that she was stronger and more capable than she had ever imagined.中文翻译:当太阳在地平线下落时,给宁静的景色披上了温暖的光芒,萨拉发现自己陷入了一种情绪的漩涡之中。
2020-2022年高考英语读后续写真题及优秀范文汇总

2020-2022年高考英语读后续写真题及优秀范文汇总2022年012022年全国高考新高考I卷读后续写It was the day of the big cross-country run. Students from seven different primary schools in and around the small town were warming up and walking the route(路线)through thick evergreen forest.I looked around and finally spotted David, who was standing by himself off to the side by a fence. He was small for ten years old. His usual big toothy smile was absent today. I walked over and asked him why he wasn't with the other children. He hesitated and then said he had decided not to run. What was wrong? He had worked so hard for this event!I quickly searched the crowd for the school's coach and asked him what had happened. "I was afraid that kids from other schools would laugh at him," he explained uncomfortably. "I gave him the choice to run or not, and let him decide."I bit back my frustration(懊恼). I knew the coach meant well — he thought he was doing the right thing. After making sure that David could run if he wanted, I turned to find him coming towards me, his small body rocking from side to side as he swung his feet forward.David had a brain disease which prevented him from walking or running like other children, but at school his classmates thought of him as a regular kid. He always participated to the best of his ability in whatever they were doing. That was why none of the children thought it unusual that David had decided to join the cross-country team. It just took him longer — that’s all. David had not missed a single practice, and although he always finished his run long after the other children, he did always finish. As a special education teacher at the school, I was familiar with the challenges David faced and was proud of his strong determination.注意:1. 续写词数应为150左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.We sat down next to each other, but David wouldn't look at me.I watched as David moved up to the starting line with the othe r runners.【范文赏析】We sat down together on some steps, but David wouldn’t look at me.I turned him around and looked him in the eye sincerely. I quietly said, “David, if you’re not running because you’re afraid someone is going to laugh, that’s not a good enough reason. Are you going to let them get in your way? If you really want to run, David, run!” I held my breath as David took this in. Then he looked at the field and said with a fierce but quiet determination, “I’m gonna run.”I watched as David moved up to the starting line.The starter’s gun sounded. But he had only gone a few metres before he tripped and fell flat on the ground. My heart sank. As I started to shout encouragement, other voices around me took up the call. “Come on David, you can do it!” David picked himself up and started again until he crossed the finish line to wild cheers and applause.最后几句结尾有三种:第一种:(首选结尾)That day, David got a special award for his courage. He also got respect of all students. To him, that was worth a whole lot more than an award. (169 words)第二种:(原文结尾)Then, when David’s coach slapped him on the back and said proudly, “Good job, David!” he caught my eye, flashed me a toothy grin and said, “That was easy!” (169 words)第三种:That day, David got a special award for his courage. He was shining on the winner’s podium. David, with so many birth problems, was a hero to all of us and most importantly, to himself! (175 words)022022年1月浙江卷读后续写When Dr. Henderson was assigning(指定) project mates for his psychology class, I secretly hoped he would pair me with my best friend or at least a classmate I could have some fun with. Above all, I hoped he wouldn't assign me to work with the fiercely competitive, extremely serious fellow who always wore dark clothes and apparently had a personality to match. As fate(命运)would have it, Dr. Henderson very deliberately matched everyone in class and announced that I would be working with the one person in class I wanted to avoid.I went up to my new teammate and introduced myself. He looked at me as though I weren't there. I felt he treated me as though I would hold him back and probably make him fail to get an A in the course. He wasn't mean or abusive; he just gave me the impression he could do whatever project we dreamed up better if he did it alone.Needless to say, I didn't look forward to an entire term of being brushed off, but I tried to make the best of it and didn't say anything for fear that I would make things worse.The project required each team to develop a hypothesis (假说), set up an experiment to test the hypothesis, do the statistical analysis and present the findings. Whatever grade the team received would be shared by both students.When my teammate and I met to discuss our project, I was uneasy. Here was this challenging student who had a reputation for single-mindedness and good grades—the exact opposite of me. I was outmatched. I actually wanted to drop the class at one point, but stopped short because Ididn't want to give him the satisfaction of my chickening out. I decided to stick to it no matter what. After long discussions we somehow agreed to do a study on the psychological well-being of teenagers. I wasn't sure what it meant exactly, but at least we had a topic.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 结部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后, 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
2020新高考一卷英语读后续写范文

2020年新高考一卷英语读后续写范文一、起因此次2020年新高考一卷英语阅读材料中,提到了一个有关环保的话题。
文章中描述了在一个小山村里,由于环境破坏,导致村庄的水源污染,农田荒芜。
文章结尾处,提到了“from then on, people inthe village started to realize the importance of protecting the environment”这样的话句。
这个句子很明显的暗示了一个续写的可能。
二、续写from then on,人们开始重视保护环境,村庄的环境逐渐得到改善。
为了实现环保的目标,村民们开始行动起来了。
他们建立了一个环保团体,来监督村子周边环境的改善工作。
这个团体由村里的年轻人和老年人共同组成,他们分工合作,一边组织村民们清理垃圾,一边开展环保宣传教育活动。
通过这些活动,村民们对环保的概念有了更深刻的了解,逐渐改变了对环境的态度。
随后,村里还出台了一系列的环保政策。
政府加大了对环境违法行为的惩罚力度,制定了一些激励措施,鼓励村民们积极参与环境保护。
政府还投入大量资金,修复了水源,让山间的溪水变得清澈见底,农田也重新焕发出生机。
通过政策的引导和扶持,环保工作得到了更好的开展,也为村民们创造了更好的生活条件。
另外,为了进一步提高环保意识,村里开展了一些环保活动。
比如举办环保知识讲座、组织环保义工队,还成立了一支环保音乐队,通过歌曲的形式宣传环保理念。
这些活动不仅让村民参与其中,感受到环保带来的乐趣,还能达到宣传和教育的目的。
村里还与周边村庄合作,共同开展环保行动。
他们建立了环保合作组织,共同开展环境整治和维护工作。
这种合作不仅让环保工作得到了更好的开展,还让村民之间的感情更加融洽。
三、反思这个故事告诉我们环保工作是一个需要全社会共同努力的事业。
只有每一个人都能够立足于自身的岗位,从点滴之处做起,才能够最终达到环保事业蓬勃发展的目标。
不仅如此,我们还要明白环保是一项长期的工作,不是一蹴而就的,需要每个人都能够持之以恒地坚持下去。
2020高考英语作文热点+范文以及新题型:读后续写,概要写作

2020高考英语作文热点+范文以及新题型:读后续写,概要写作1.关于高铁高铁给人们的出行带来了快捷和方便,请你写一篇短文简单介绍武广高铁。
基本情况:1. 始建于2005年,2009年12月26日开通运营,干线全长1068公里;2. 途经湖北、湖南和广东;3. 列车时速高达350公里/小时,目前世界上最快。
主要优点:1. 武汉至广州仅需3个小时,比先前减少7个多小时;2. 高铁列车设施齐全,安全舒适。
美中不足:1. 票价偏高;2. 车站离市中心较远。
First built in 2005, the Wuhan-Guangzhou high-speedrailway went into operation on December,26th,2009. Overall length of its main line is 1068 kilometers, and it goes through the following three provinces: Hubei, Hunan and Guangdong.The speed of the Wuhan-Guangzhou high-speed railway is 350km/h,the fastest speed in the world now, which makes it only three hours needed from Wuhan to Guangzhou, seven hours less than before. Besides, there are all kinds of facilities in the train, which make your trip safe and comfortable, so it is more humanitarian.However, the only fly in the ointment is that the train fare is too high and the station is quite far away from the downtown area.2.移动支付随着微信,支付宝、银行APP等的发展想必大家都爱用他们支付购买。
高考写作新题型读后续写,概要写作和应用文及答案8

2020新高考作文综合练习-----续写,概要,应用文专练八1. 阅读下面短文,根据文章的情节续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
An 80-year-old man was sitting on the sofa in his house along with his 45-year-old highly educated son. Suddenly a crow(乌鸦)perched(栖息)on their window.The father asked his son, “What is this?” The son replied, “It is a crow.”After a few minutes, the father asked his son for the second time, “What is this?” The son said, “Father, I have just now told you that it’s a crow!”After a little while, the old father again asked his son for the third time, “What is this?”At this time some expression of irritation (恼怒)was felt in the son’s tone when he said to his father with a rebuff(生硬回绝). “It’s a crow, a crow.” A little while later, the father again asked his son the fourth time, “What is this?”Th is time, the son shouted at his father, “Why do you keep asking me the same question again and again, although I have told you so many times ‘IT IS A CROW’? Are you not able to understand this?”A little while later the father went to his room and came back with an old tattered(发皱的)diary, which he had maintained since his son was born.On opening a page, he asked his son to read that page.When the son read it, the following words were written in the diary:Today my little son aged three was sitting with me on the sofa when a crow was sitting on the window. My son asked me 23 times what it was, and I replied to him all 23 times that it was a crow. I hugged him lovingly each time he asked me the same question. I did not at all feel irritated but I rather felt affection for my innocent son.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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2020年高考英语新题型:读后续写,概要写作以及大作文模板一道题目,双倍难度。
认真讲,以前英语老师会说:“得阅读者得天下”,因为阅读理解考查学生的能力最综合,得分也难。
而英语作文,只要背够连接词、链接句、再来几个经典长难句,基准分是有保障的。
可如今的“概要写作”“读后续写”,已不再是背几十个单词,用用on the one hand......on the other hand 就可以应付了,在写作之前,先得读懂阅读材料,还得构思与原文衔接、还要用上原文所给的五个单词,然后才能续写。
2015 年 8 月,在教育部考试中心发布的《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明》中,提出了写作新题型:读后续写或概要写作,两种形式在不同考次不定期交替使用。
读后续写作为一种全新的高考题型,于 2016 年 10 月首次在浙江英语高考卷中亮相,并用至今。
该题型已经在浙江、山东、辽宁等省份的日常考试中频繁出现,并将在2020年高考中使用。
河北、江苏、北京、天津、海南、湖南、湖北、广东、福建、重庆等省份也在陆续将新题型纳入日常练习和高考考查中。
“概要写作”重点考查考生理解和呈现原文要点和准确使用词汇和语法结构的能力。
要求学生客观并且简练的概括出原文,而且要保证故事的完整连贯,逻辑通顺。
(这类题型相对来说比较简单;考察三方面的能力:1. 找关键词的能力;2. 把关键词写成正确句子的能力;3. 把句子写成合理的段落的能力问题4:读读后续写主要关注学生以下四个方面的能力:①把握短文关键信息和语言特点的能力。
学生需要了解所给短文的主要内容,清楚其关键词和语言结构的使用情况,并通过续写短文表现出来。
②语言运用的准确性和丰富性。
学生能准确、恰当地使用所学词汇和语言结构,还能够根据内容需要使用较多、较复杂的词汇和语言结构。
③对语篇结构的把控能力。
学生需要掌握上下文逻辑关系,所续写的短文与所给短文及段落开头语之间要有连贯性,所续写的短文内语句要连贯、有序。
④创造性思维能力。
学生所续写的短文要具有较丰富的内容,包含详细和生动的情景、态度和感情描述。
样子?(2018年6月浙江高考真题)注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Paragraph 2:We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.问题6:读后续写评分标得分标准(1)与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度;(2)内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况;(3)应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性;(4)上下文的连贯性。
扣分标准(1)总分25分,按5个档次给分;(2)根据写作内容及语言初步定档(3)词数少于130的,扣2分;(4)单词拼写及标点符号使用情况,视其对交际的影响程度酌情考虑;(5)书写较差以致于影响交际,可酌情降低评分档次。
21-25分档的评分标准:问题7:读后续写解题思◆续写思路和以往的高考英语命题作文不同,读后续写要求考生首先要读懂已有信息,不仅要读懂字面含义,还要厘清文章的脉络和关系。
续写这篇短文时,考生需要明白故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置变化、人物情感等。
在此基础上,考生顺着文章的思路,根据线索,发挥想象,对其后的情节进行合理预测,并用英语表达出来。
同时,在组织语言时,切记使用5个以上给出的提示词。
◆续写分析(以上文浙江省真题为例)已知线索:去西部荒野——体验农场生活——骑马去森林(父亲带作者去“西部荒野”,喂鸡牧羊,体验农场生活;见父亲和叔叔骑马很是潇洒,作者心生向往,于是亲身上马体验,和父亲一同骑马走向森林……)可续写线索:迷路?找到回农场的方法?回到农场?1. 第一段所给首句“Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.”这一句是故事发展的转折点,可从兔子出现后带来的结果入手扩展开去,可以写马受到惊吓狂奔而去,也可以写因追赶兔子而迷路,无论从何角度拓展,需注意与续写第二段首句呼应。
2. 第二段所给首句“We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.”这一句呼应前文Uncle Paul的嘱托——不要误了晚饭、不要迷路,可以从如何寻路返回入手去写续文。
前文提示农场附近有河流,并且river为标有下划线的关键词语,所以可以从沿着河流回到农场的角度拓展。
◆续写词汇已给提示词汇:dad,Uncle Paul,farm house,river,feed,sheep,late,track,get lost,sight话题激活词汇:情感:panic,relief,nervous,worried动作:run,cry,think to oneself环境:scenery,mountain,range,valley,river,lake,forest,sun,set,wind,blowOne possible version:◆高分范例Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Dad and I found it was so cute that we decided to chase it. After a while, we were completely lost in the forest. There wasnothing left in oursight but the trees. “We may not be able to make it back to the farm house in time for supper.” I thought to myself. After a series of fruitless attempts to find a way out, we felt hungry and tired.Paragraph 2:We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. We got stuck in the forest. And an unexpected shower added to the difficulty of us in finding a way home, for all the tracks we had made disappeared because of the rain. I was almost on the edge of breaking down when my father said, “Don’t worry, my son. I remember there is a river near the farm house. Find the river and we will be back home.” Finally, we found the river and got back to the house along it. Needless to say, we ate alate dinner.“读后续写”重点考查考生所写短文与原文及所给段落开头语的衔接程度、内容的丰富性和文字语句使用的准确性。
“读后续写”备考攻略(1)精读文章,确定文章线索。
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路,通过精读文章(考试说明中的样题是记叙文,所以可以推测,考察的主要类型是记叙文,所以下边的方法才成立),找到该篇文章的写作线索,例如什么人(who)什么时间(when)在什么地方(where)因为什么(why)做了什么事儿(what),最后有了什么发展(how)。
这样分析有利于考生“顺藤摸瓜”。
(2)仔细审题,明确续写要求。
一般短文后面的“注意”都有对此短文续写的具体要求,如字数限制、使用几处下划线关键词语、续写段落的首句提示,这样考生能做到“心中有数”。
(3)回扣原文,揣摩续写思路。
根据文章后面的要求,再次快速回读短文,抓住文章的思路,结合段首的提示语,最终确定续写段落的思路,同时结合文章划线词语提示,确定续写段落的内容。
(4)拟写草稿,修改错词病句。
在确定了思路和内容之后,最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中划线的关键词语拟写草稿。
拟写时,注意句子结构的多样性、语言的丰富性,并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用,使上下文连贯。
这一步是得分的关键。
必杀技:使用2-5个动作描写,1-2个环境描写,1-2个对话,1-2个表情或者心情。
例如:Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Dad and I found it was so cute that we decided to chase it(动作一). After a while, we were completely lost in the forest. (连接词+ 动作二)There was nothing left in oursight but the trees. (环境)“We may not be able to make it back to the farm house in time for supper.” I thought to myself.(对话,直言自语)After a series of fruitless attempts to find a way out, we felt hungry and tired.(动作三+ 心情表情)Paragraph 2:We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. We got stuck in the forest(动作一). And an unexpected shower added to the difficulty of us in finding a way home, for all the tracks we had made disappeared because of the rain(环境). I was almost on the edge of breaking down(心情表情)when my father said, “Don’t worry, my son. I remember there is a river near the farm house. Find the river and we will be back home.”(对话)Finally, we found the river and got back to the house along it. Needless to say, we ate alate dinner.(动作二)老师有话说:方法不难,积累是关键。