上海中考英语作文分类训练：书信作文

书信作文

1．Write at least 60 words on the topic "I am no longer a little child"（以"我不再是一个孩子"为题，写一篇不少于60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格）

背景：如今，我们的父母一方面对我们百般呵护，一方面又时常抱怨我们长不大.请给你的父母写一封信，证明你不再是一个孩子了（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入字数）.

The following is for reference only：

Dear parents

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________

Yours

xxx 2．Suppose you are Kitty and you are writing to your best friend, Anna and telling her about your new penfriend. Complete the letter in at least 50 words to Anna and your letter should include the following（假设你就是Kitty，你正在给你最好的朋友Anna写信介绍你的新笔友。用至少50个单词向Anna介绍你的新笔友。标点符号不占空格。

●Do you like your new penfriend? Why or why not?

●What does he/she usually do with his/her family?

What are his/her hobbies?

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3．假设你是Lucy，请邀请你的朋友Mike参加一次野餐活动。要求：不少于50个单词，紧扣主题，语法正确、意思连贯，短文中不得出现考生的信息。

以下问题供参考：1) When and where are you going to have a picnic?

2) What food and drink are you going to buy? Why?

3) What activities are you going to do together?

Dear Mike,

How are you? I’d like to invite you to have a picnic with me. _________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______.

I hope you will come. Please write soon.

Yours,

Lucy 4．Write a letter of at least 60 words based on the given situation. (根据所给情境，写一封不少于60个词的信，标点符号不占格)

A friend of yours is studying at home and has asked you to recommend a learning tool. 你的一位朋友最近在家自学，想请你推荐一个学习工具。

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:

say what the learning tool is (give it an interesting name)

describe the learning tool and its uses

tell the reason why you recommend it

Remember: the learning tool can be a reference book, a website, a program, an app, or whatever you use to help you with your study.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

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5．In at least 60 words, write a letter to the person you want to express your thanks. 请以"A thank-you letter to ________"为题，写一封不少于60个词的感谢信，标点符号不占格。

2020年是不平凡的一年，在这段特殊的日子里，你一定感受到了父母、老师、朋友或是一些陌生人给你带来的温暖和感动，请结合自己的经历，写一封信给他（他们），表达你的感激之情。

The following is for reference only (以下表达仅供参考)

thank…for be moved by provide...with

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _____

6．Writing (写作)

Write a letter of at least 50 words to your penfriend Tod according to the given situation. (根据所给情景写一封信给你的笔友Tod, 不少于50个词，标点符号不占格)

(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分)

Situation: 假设你是Emily, 你的笔友Tod 想要从SPCA（爱护动物协会）领养一只流浪狗，但他的妈妈不同意。他希望你能给他一些建议（至少三条）来说服他妈妈。

Dear Tod,

I think it’s great to get a dog from the SPCA．

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________

Well, good luck and keep in touch.

Yours

Emily 7．Traffic is now becoming a more and more serious problem in Shanghai. Could you please write a letter to the mayor to give your advice on how to solve the problem? Write at least 60 words. 上海的交通问题越来越严重，请你给市长写一封至少60个字的信提提建议来解决问题。

Suggested points:

* How is the traffic problem in Shanghai at the moment?

* How does the traffic problem affect your life?

* What good advice have you thought about on solving this problem?

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8．Writing.

write at least 60 words about the topic“A thank-you letter to ”.（以“给……的一封感谢信”为题写一篇不少于60 个词的短文。信件格式已给，标点符号不占格。）在日常的生活与学习中有许多人曾经帮助或鼓励过我们，令我们时常心存感激。请选择一个对象写一封感谢信，并结合你们之间的真实经历谈一谈你为何要感谢他/她，说一说你当时的感受以及此时此刻想对他/她说的话。

（注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）

The following is for reference only.（以下表达仅供参考）

have difficulty in…

encourage me to…

It was…of you to…

9．Writing

In 60-100 words, write a letter of complaint according to the given situation and prompts. （根据所给情景和提示，写一篇60-100词投诉信，表单电符号不占格。）

Write a letter of complaint to the manager of an online shopping site about the product(s) that you bought and aren’t happy with. In your letter:

explain why you’re writing the letter

give details of your order

describe the problem with the product(s)

say what you want the manager to do

（注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予平分。也不需要出现购物网站的具体名字）

10．Write letter of at least60 words.（据情景写一篇不少于60个词的信，标点符号不占格。）假设你是李华，请给你在英国的笔友Jack写一封信，谈谈你的暑假安排。信的开头与结尾已给出。

Dear Jack,

The summer holidays are coming.

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

1．例文

I am no longer a little child

Dear parents,

I am a 16-year-old girl now. I am not a little child any more. So, dear mom and dad, please don’t treat me as a little baby. I have changed a lot, I used to be weak and short. But now, I am stronger and as tall as you. The most important thing is that I have learned to understand and care about others. Since I have grown up, I can do a lot of things by myself. For example, I can do housework. I can work in the field. I always help old people when they are in trouble. All the teachers and students think I’m a good girl. There is no need for you to worry about me.

Dear mom and dad, please trust me. It’s time for me to be independent now!

Yours

xxx 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。要求以“I am no longer a little child”为题，根据所给出的提示材料，给父母写一封信，证明自己不再是一个孩子。注意语句要通顺，内容要完整，可适当发挥。

2. 写作指导：本文采用第一人称来展开写作，时态主要用一般现在时。写作时要认真审题，根据提示的内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作；可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。

2．例文：

Dear Anna,

I want to tell you something about my new penfriend. His name is David. He comes from England. He is 13. He is the same age as me. Now he is in Grade 7. He is a warm-hearted boy. He always helps me with my English and my English has improved a lot.

He lives with his parents in Shanghai. He usually goes hiking with his father. He likes doing exercise. He thinks it can make him strong. He also likes photography. Whenever he goes out, he takes some beautiful pictures and shares them with me.

I like my new penfriend. What do you think of him?

Yours,

Kitty 【详解】1. 题干解读：这是一篇书信作文。主要是向朋友介绍自己的新笔友的情况。本文要写的内容题目中已经给出一些提示。写作时要运用正确的英语把想要表达内容表达出来，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2.写作指导：文章主要用一般现在时，人称用第三人称展开详细介绍。文章可分三段描写。第一段介绍新笔友的个人和家庭信息；第二段介绍笔友的兴趣爱好；第三段总结自己喜欢新笔友。写作时要注意文章描写要具体，思路清晰，语言表达准确，用词恰当，意思通俗易懂。3．例文：

Dear Mike,

How are you? I’d like to invite you to have a picnic with me. We are going to have a picnic at my home this Sunday. I will buy some apples and pears, because Lily likes eating them. I will also buy some orange juice because it tastes very delicious. We will play badminton and football with other friends. We will have a lot of fun.

I hope you will come. Please write soon.

Yours,

Lucy 【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于邀请函，邀请朋友Mike参加一次野餐活动。包含时间和地

点，以及要买的食物和饮料，还有就是买这些东西的原因。

2.写作指导：文章应用第一人称叙述，时态用一般将来时；叙述野餐活动的时间、地点等情况需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。

4．例文：

Dear Mike,

I’ve learnt that you are studying at home now because of the virus. As for the learning tool, I want to recommend an American sitcom called Friends, which has been on for twenty-five years. It's a story of six young people. They came to New York City to find love, success, adventure and fun. Each of the characters had a different personality. However, they were able to overlook their differences and became good friends.

You can watch the series on the Internet. Watching English TV series such as Friends is really helpful to your English study. You can write down the words and phrases you don’t understand. Translate them and then imitate the pronunciation. And, to make it more fun, think about the life lessons you can learn from the show. Through watching the show, you can not only learn about American culture but also improve your conversational English.

I sincerely hope you can achieve success and keep healthy from the bottom of my heart.

Yours,

Tony 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于书信写作。在写作时应根据内容提示介绍一个学习工具，讲述工具的使用以及推荐的理由。

2.例文点评：例文主要用第二人称进行写作，主要采用一般现在时态来写作，讲述工具的使用及推荐的理由叙述完整且条理清晰。

3.高分亮点：

短语：because of；as for；want to；such as；write down; learn from; from the bottom of my heart。句型：not only…but also…句型；which引导的定语从句；and表示并列的句子。

5．例文

A thank-you letter to my mother

Dear mom,

How time flies. I am going to be a high school student soon, and you are in your forties. Here I’d like to sincerely say thanks to you.

When I was a little girl, you told me that human nature was kind and the world was full of truth, goodness and beauty. As I grew up, I found that life was not as good as imagination, it also had a lot of difficulties and setbacks. When I wanted to quit, you told me not to give up easily and to go ahead bravely.

Thank you for giving me confidence and power to go forward. I will love you forever and accompany you, my dearest mother. I hope you will be happy every day.

Your daughter,

Alice 【详解】题干解读：这是一篇书信作文。要求以“A thank-you letter to ________”为题和提示的内容完成作文。写作时要注意语句通顺，语意连贯，紧扣要点，注意句子之间的连接与过渡，要注意涵盖所给提示。

例文点评：例文采用三段式；时态综合运用一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时；将题目要求的要点都很好地融入到文章当中，适当发挥部分也很好地展示了对文章主题的理解，表达出自己的观点态度。

高分亮点：

短语：be full of；grow up；as good as；a lot of；give up；go ahead等。

句型：I am going to be a high school student soon, and you are in your forties.

When I was a little girl, you told me that human nature was kind and the world was full of truth, goodness and beauty.

6．Dear Tod,

I think it’s great to get a dog from the SPCA. It's very kind to plan to adopt a homeless dog. You can tell your mother that it’s kind of you to keep a dog. As we all know that animals are human's good friends , you should love and protect them. Once you adopt one, you should be patient. It’s very careful to it. And you also need to learn more knowledge of raising pets, so that you can care it better.

Well, good luck and keep in touch.

Yours Emily

【详解】题干解读：本文是应用文，要求写一封信，告诉你的朋友说服他母亲，自己的看法，用议论文。

例文点评：本文采用摆事实，讲道理的方法，运用第二人称，大部分句子用情态动词should，条件状语从句。

高分亮点：

短语：plan to；as we all know; be patient; so that

句型：It’s kind of …; once …,引导条件状语从句；you should…so that 引导的目的状语从句。7．范文

A Letter to Mayor

Respected mayor,

I’m a student from XXX. I’m worried about the traffic in Shanghai. It’s becoming a more and more serious problem, especially during rush hour because many people go to work in their own cars and some people don’t obey the traffic rules.

I know Shanghai is trying to solve the traffic problem in different ways. However, the problem hasn’t been solved yet. I think it’s a good idea for the government to improve the public transportation so that more and more people would like to take the subway or buses. In addition, the government had better reduce the number of cars by increasing the cost of driving.

I really hope there will be fewer traffic problems in our city.

Best wishes

XX 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目要求包含目前上海的交通问题怎么样；交通问题如何影响你的生活；对于解决这个问题你有什么好的建议。

2.例文点评：例文通过对目前上海的交通问题怎么样；交通问题如何影响你的生活；对于解决这个问题你有什么好的建议等一一讲述。语句通顺，条理清晰，词组，短语，句型等运用灵活。

3.高分亮点：词组：be worried about；a serious problem；obey the traffic rules；solve the traffic problem；in different ways；improve the public transportation；so that；In addition；the cost of driving等。

句型：It’s becoming a more and more serious problem, especially during rush hour because many people go to work in their own cars and some people don’t obey the traffic rules./I know Shanghai is trying to solve the traffic problem in different ways./I think it’s a good idea for the government to improve the public transportation so that more and more people would like to take the subway

or buses./I really hope there will be fewer traffic problems in our city.

【点睛】书面表达：

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如be worried about；a serious problem；obey the traffic rules；solve the traffic problem；in different ways；In addition；the cost of driving等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如however；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

8．例文

Dear Mrs Wang,

No word can describe my thanks to you, my English teacher.

When I first came into the middle school, I was poor at my English. One day, you asked me to go to your office after school. You listened to my problem patiently and encouraged me to keep studying hard. We made a plan for my English study. After that, you started to help me from time to time. Finally, I made great progress in English.

I thank you very much for all the help you has given me.

【详解】1.题干解读：本书属于记叙文，通过真实存在的一件事谈谈你为何要感谢她。描述过去曾经发生的事情时，用一般过去时。并灵活使用所学的单词、短语以及句型使文章出彩。

2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

3.高分亮点：

单词短语：ask sb to do, encourage sb to do sth, keep doing, make a plan for, start to do, from time to time以及make great progress。

高分句型：When I first came into the middle school, I was poor at my English中when引导的时间状语从句。

【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如ask sb to do, encourage sb to do sth, keep doing, make a plan

for, start to do, from time to time以及make great progress等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

9．Dear manager,

I am writing a letter of complaint to the manager of an online shopping site about the product(s) ,that I bought and aren’t happy with .I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about.

The reason for my dissatisfaction is give details of your order。In addition,the problem with the product(s) Under these circumstances,I find it bad to receive the product(s). I appreciate it very much if you could take back. I would like to have this matter settled by next week.Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

xx 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文，根据所给情景和提示，写一篇60-100词投诉信，表单电符号不占格。注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予平分。也不需要出现购物网站的具体名字。

2.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。

3.高分亮点：

短语：the manager of；feel bad；make a complaint about；take back；will be looking forward to 等。

句型：1. I am writing a letter of complaint to the manager of an online shopping site about the product(s) , 2. I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about. 3. . I appreciate it very much if you could take back. 4. Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.

【点睛】首先要认真阅读根据下表信息的提示，认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生

英语功底扎实。能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。

10．范文

Dear Jack,

The summer holidays are coming. How glad I am! I can do many things of my own. I am going to have a trip to Y u Garden by bike with my friend. I'm sure it will be a lot of fun! We can see many traditional treasures there. I'll also spend some time improving my maths because I am a little weak in it. Of course it is necessary for me to do some housework, such as cooking meals and cleaning rooms. Isn't my plan nice?

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua 【详解】题目解读：本文是一篇书信作文，因此要求作文的格式按照信件格式书写。根据要求可知文章用第一人称和一般将来时书写。主要的计划已给出思维导图，可根据这五个方面写，并且做适当发挥。

例文点评：本文以第一人称书写，时态是一般现在时和一般将来时。文中穿插使用感叹句，原因状语从句，固定句型等复杂结构。意思连贯，表达流畅。

高分亮点：

短语：by bike；Of course；such as；cooking meals；have a trip；look forward to；hear from。句型：How glad I am!；I'm sure it will be a lot of fun!；I'll also spend some time improving my maths because I am a little weak in it.；Of course it is necessary for me to do some housework；Isn't my plan nice?。