上海中考英语作文分类训练:材料作文

材料作文

1.英语是世界上使用最广泛的语言,请以“Why Do We Study English?”为题,谈谈学好英语的重要性。请根据提示,写一篇阐述英语重要性的文章。80词左右。

提示:1.英语是世界上使用最广泛的语言,全球有5亿多人把英语作为母语使用。

2.世界上大约有3亿人把英语作为第二语言来学习和使用。

3.英语是一门国际化语言。中国的发展和与其他国家交流的增加,激励着更多的中国人学英语。我们要学好英语,把我们的国家建设得更美好。

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2.请根据以下提示以“Body language around the world”为题目介绍不同国家的肢体语言。

1.不同国家的人们有不同的肢体语言。

2.中国女孩经常和朋友臂挽臂地走。南美人在和你说话的时候有时抓着你的胳膊,所以你不能移开!但是在英国,很多人一点也不喜欢别人碰触他们。

3.在一些国家,谈话时看着对方不礼貌,但是在其他的国家,谈话时看着别的地方不礼貌。在英国和美国,当人们谈话时,他们通常看着对方。

要求:

1.词数70左右。

2.文章要包含所有要点。不能有遗漏。

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3.

如今,人们富起来了,父母给孩子的零用钱(pocket money)越来越多了,对孩子的理财能力(the ability to manage your money)即财商(FQ)的培养也随之提上日程。某英语学习平台就零用钱管理和使用对500名中学生进行了调查,情况如下表:

假如你是李华,请结合调查表谈谈对零用钱的管理和使用,并向英语学习平台投稿。要求:

1. 80—120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;

2. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。

参考信息:

1. 调查情况分析

2. 你如何管理使用你的零用钱……

3. 你对零用钱的管理使用打算……

Nowadays, as we are given more and more pocket money by our parents, it’s really necessary for us to make good use of it and develop our FQ.

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4.中共中央、国务院印发了《关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》,提出了

中学生应该树立劳动最光荣、劳动最崇高、劳动最伟大、劳动最美丽的观念。作为一名中学生,请你就家务劳动发表自己的观点。内容包括:

(1)你认为应该培养学生的劳动意识吗?为什么?

(2)你打算做些什么来让自己养成主动劳动的好习惯?

作文要求:

(1)不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。

(2)语句连贯,词数80个左右。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ 5.全国文明城市是国家授予一座城市最高的综合性荣誉,也是一张靓丽的城市名片。当前,各大城市正在举全市之力,巩固和提升全国文明城市创建成果,创建更美丽的家园。作为学生,请用英语写一份倡议书,让我们行动起来,从小事做起,让我们的城市更加美丽。要点:1.多种植花草树木,不乱砍伐树木;

2.购物时重复使用袋子;

3.不乱扔垃圾,保持河流等干净;

4.遵守公共秩序,做文明学生。

要求:1.参考要点内容,可适当发挥;

2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;

3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);

4.词数:不少于80词。

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6.假如你是李华,正在参与学校英语校刊的征稿活动,谈论你的校园生活。请你根据征稿的要求写一篇文章投稿。

内容提示:

a. What’s your school life like?

b. What do you like best about your school life?

c. What do you usually do to make your school a green school?

要求:

1. 必须回答提示中所有的问题,内容可以适当发挥;

2. 不能出现真实的人名校名等信息;

3. 词数90-110。

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7.刚刚过去的2022年北京冬奥会再次让体育运动成为人们关注的社会话题之一,奥运精神和热爱运动的精神也一直在中国传递,学校也提倡同学们积极参加体育运动。请你以此为话题写一篇短文,内容包括:

(1)谈谈体育运动的好处(不少于两点);

(2)下个月就要体育中考了,你准备好了吗?你是怎么备战的?(两点)

(3)呼吁同学们积极参加体育运动,祝福同学们中考体育取得好成绩。

作文要求:①不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。

①语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。

There is no doubt that sports benefit us in many ways.

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8.劳动是最光荣最崇高、最伟大和最美丽的。宋庆龄说,“知识是从刻苦劳动中得来的,任何成就都是刻苦劳动的结晶。” 做家务也是一种劳动,我们在做家务时也会有所收获。请以“What I get from doing housework” 为题,根据要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文。

要点:

1.你做过哪些家务;

2.你的收获是什么;

3.你是否会坚持做家务及理由。

要求:

1.文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;

2.词数100左右。

What I get from doing housework

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_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 9.劳动(labor) 是日常生活不可或缺的部分。今年9月,义务教育劳动课程标准开始执行。请你以“labor”为话题,结合生活实际,谈谈参与劳动的重要性。列举你的劳动技能(至少两点)与劳动经历(至少一次),并向同学们发出积极参与劳动的倡议。

注意:

1. 词数90左右,短文开头已经给出,不计入总词数;

2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。

We often hear of the sentence “Labor is a glorious (光荣的) thing.”

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10.假如你是李华,你们学校组织了一次传统文化进校园活动。这次活动主要是针对中国传统节日展开的。请根据以下内容,介绍本次活动。

1.时间及地点:上周六早上九点在学校艺术楼举行;

2.参加活动的人员:全体师生;

3.活动:你和大家分享了有关中国传统节日的知识,比如说春节、端午节、中秋节等

节日。也邀请了同学们分享自己了解的传统节日;

4.谈谈你对传统节日的认识和想法。

注意:

1.词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);

2.合理增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。

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参考答案

1.例文

Why Do We Study English?

English is the most widely used language in the world. It’s spoken by more than 500 million people as their mother tongue. About 300 million people use English as a second language. With the development of China, more and more communications between China and other countries take place, which encourage the whole nation to learn English. English is becoming more and more important in our daily life. Therefore, we should try our best to learn it well and make a contribution to building our country better.

【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Why Do We Study English?”为题,结合提示内容谈谈学好英语的重要性。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。

2.写作指导:写作时要以第三人称来行文,时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍英语的现状,说英语的人数以及学英语的作用。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。

2.例文:

Body language around the world

People from different countries have different body languages.

Chinese girls often walk arm in arm with their friends. South Americans sometimes hold your arm when they talk to you, so you can’t move away! But in Britain, many people don’t like other people to touch them at all.

In some countries, it isn’t polite to look at people when you talk, but in other countries it isn’t polite to look somewhere else. In Britain and the US, people usually look at each other when they talk.

【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于说明文写作。需要以“Body language around the world”为题目介绍不同国家的肢体语言,要包含所有要点。

2.写作指导:本文主要以第三人称来介绍各国的肢体语言;时态用一般现在时;根据要点提示,第一段总写不同的国家有不同的肢体语言;第二段写中国、南美以及英国的肢体语言;第三段写在一些国家,人们说话时,与眼睛相关的肢体语言。写作时,注意要点齐全,逻辑清晰,文章连贯。

3.例文

Nowadays, as we are given more and more pocket money by our parents, it’s really necessary for us to make good use of it and develop our FQ. According to the survey, most students use their pocket money without a plan. However, only a few of them are good at managing their money.

Just like most students, I also put my pocket money into my mother’s pocket. I don’t know how much I have. When I need to buy something, I ask my mother for money.

So, I think it’s time for me to come up with a plan for my pocket money. I will learn how to use my pocket money. And I need to write down a daily-cost. What’s more, I plan to put the rest of my pocket in the bank and watch it grow.

【详解】1.题干解读:本文主要根据题干中的饼状图谈谈学生对零用钱的管理和使用,并介绍自己是如何管理和使用零用钱的。

2.写作指导:本文以一般现在时为主,人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。第一段根据饼状图讲述调查情况;第二段讲述自己如何管理和使用零用钱;第三段介绍自己对零用钱的管理使用打算。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。

4.范文:

I think it’s necessary for students to help do some labors in their free time. Students can learn something about life by doing so.

As for me, I will help my parents do chores at home. For example, I will help them clean the floor, wash the vegetables and do the dishes actively when I’m free. I can learn how to take care of myself by sharing the housework. At school, I will help my classmates clean our classroom and school yard carefully. I will learn how to work with others. It’s also beneficial to me to develop a good friendship with my classmates. Besides, I will do some volunteer work on weekends, such as picking up the rubbish in the park or planting trees and so on.

In a word, I think we should develop the habit of doing labors to become better persons.

【详解】1.题干解读:本文属于说明文,主要讲述学生们是否应该培养劳动意识和原因,以及你打算如何培养自主劳动的习惯。本文采取三段式,第一段提出观点,即学生应该帮忙做一些家务;第二段从自身的角度出发,讲述我怎么帮忙做家务;第三段总结,即我们应该培养劳动的习惯。

2.写作指导:本文主要以第一人称叙述,时态以一般现在时为主,讲述自己如何帮忙做家务时,应使用一般将来时。写作时保证要点齐全,不要遗漏要点,条理清晰。可以适当使用所

学亮点词句,如It’s adj for sb to do sth, help sb do, take care of, beneficial以及develop the habit of等。

5.例文

Boys and girls,

We should make our city more beautiful and comfortable. What can we do for our city?

In order to make our city more beautiful, as students, I think we should start from small things. First of all, we should know the importance of protecting the environment. We should plant more trees and flowers and not cut down trees. Second, we’d better reuse the bag when shopping. We can’t throw rubbish away, and we should keep the rivers clean and so on. In addition, we must follow public rules and and be civilized students. Wait in line when we get on the bus.

If everyone follows the suggestions above, our city will become more and more beautiful.【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。根据要点提示,写一份倡议书,让我们行动起来,从小事做起,让我们的城市更加美丽。

2.写作指导:本文时态采用一般现在时;人称采用第一人称。作文可分为三段式,第一段点明主题;第二段介绍具体的行动;最后一段表达美好的祝愿。文章力求语句通顺,无单词语法错误。

6.例文

Dear Linda,

It’s great to hear from you. I have studied in my school for almost 3 years. I’m eager to share my unforgettable and meaningful school life with you.

Among all the things about my school life such as friends, teachers and the positive atmosphere of studying, maths, I have increased my knowledge of the world. When it comes to the PE lessons. I do get healthier and fitter thanks to the exercise. Some other subjects like philosophy also teach me to be a moral person. I usually go to school by bike to make our school a green school.

Generally speaking, it is the colourful subjects that make me knowledgeable

Yours,

Li Hua 【详解】1. 题干解读:本题是一篇材料作文,根据所给提示,谈谈自己的校园生活。

2. 写作指导:本文时态用一般现在时,人称用第一人称。写作时可分为三段式,首先从整体概况校园生活是什么样的;然后具体介绍校园生活中自己最喜欢的方面,以及自己如何践行绿色校园活动;最后进行总结。注意语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。

7.参考范文:

There is no doubt that sports benefit us in many ways. First, sports can make us fit and strong. When taking part in sports, we get the chance to train almost all parts of our bodies. Second, when were in a low spirit, taking part in sports can help us forget our sadness. I’m fond of sports because I not only gain a well balanced life through sports, but also I get more chances to make more friends. Next month will be the high school sports examination. I’m ready. I run every morning and evening. I go to the park to practice the long jump at the weekend. I hope the students will take an active part in sports. I wish the students good results in the high school entrance examination.

That’s all. Thank you.

【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求根据提示要点,介绍体育运动的好处以及体育中考的准备情况等,可以适当的发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2.写作指导:写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来,本文应该用第一人称来介绍内容;时态采用一般现在时;在介绍内容时,力求语言准确,内容完整,保证行文连贯,条理清晰。8.例文

What I get from doing housework

I used to help my mother clean the room, make the bed. I could help my mother cook, clean the floor, take out the garbage and other simple housework. Helping our parents do some housework not only is our duty but also makes our family happy. Doing housework makes me learn how to take care of myself. It also made me more independent. Besides, I learned the meaning of fairness by doing housework. I will continue to help my mother with the housework. Nothing makes me feel better than seeing the smile on my parents faces when I help them.

【详解】1.题干解读:本文要求以“What I get from doing housework?”为题,结合提示问题进行写作,注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。

2.写作指导:写作时要以第一人称来叙述;时态用一般现在时。本文可以是一段式写作:介绍自己做了哪些家务、自己的收获和感悟、是否会坚持做家务及理由。在写作时要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。

9.例文:

We often hear of the sentence“Labor is a glorious(光荣的)thing.” As a middle school student, I also have some labor skills. I can cook meals, clean my room, wash the dishes and so on.

Last weekend,I got up early and cooked noodles for my parents. First,

I boiled some water.Then I put some noodles into the pot.About five or six minutes later,I placed them in the bowls and added

some salt and oil.When my parents got up,they were surprised and praised me with a big smile.It was the first time I cooked for

them.I felt proud of myself because I could take care of my parents.

Labor is an important part of life.By laboring,we can build up our https://www.360docs.net/doc/a819191734.html,boring can not only teach students how to do things, but also cultivate their ability to take care of themselves.

Doing chores helps to develop children’s independence and teaches them how to look after th emselves.As teenagers,we should take action and do more housework.

【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求根据提示要点,写出自己的劳动技能、劳动经历以及劳动的重要性和对劳动的倡导等,可以适当的发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。

2.写作指导:写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来,本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容;时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时相结合;在介绍内容时,力求语言准确,内容完整,保证行文连贯,条理清晰。

10.例文:

Last Saturday morning, our school had an activity called Traditional Culture Enters the Campus. All of the teachers and students took part in the activity.

During the activity, I shared my own ideas of some traditional festivals, such as the Spring Festival, the Dragon Boat Festival, and the Mid-Autumn Festival. Some students were also invited to share their ideas about traditional festivals.

Through this activity, we learned a lot about the traditional culture. We should be proud of our country and try our best to protect the traditional Chinese culture.

【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文,以“传统文化进校园活动”为话题参照题纲中要点信息进行分析。写作时需包括题中所有要点,并适当拓展。

2.写作指导:本文以第一人称为主,时态为一般过去时,注意过去式的正确书写;写作时注意分段叙述,第一段开门见山,引入活动参加人员;第二段介绍活动具体内容安排;第三段介绍自己对传统文化的看法;保证文章条理清晰,语句通顺。

上海中考英语作文10篇【集锦】

上海中考英语作文10篇【集锦】 现在离中考越来越近,很多学生还在盲目的看书和英语语法,下面我就给大家带来一些关于上海的中考英语作文10篇【集锦】,希望对大家有所帮助。 上海中考英语作文10篇【集锦】1 假设某中学生英文报开展关于计算机与学生生活的征文活动,请你根据下表所提示的要点,以Computer in my life为题,用英语为该报写一篇短文,简述计算机在你生活中的用途,并就计算机对你生活的影响谈谈你的感受。 1.表达中必须包含所给要点,可以适当发挥,不要简单翻译。 2.词数100左右,开头已经写好,不计入总词数。 3.表达中请勿提及真实校名和姓名。 Computer in my life The computer has become an important part of my life 【范文】 Computer in my life The computer has become an important part of my life.

Usually I use the computer to search for information and do some further reading. With the help of computer,I can get more knowledge easily in my free time. I not only communicate with my teachers and classmates by email,but also discuss questions with them online. What’s more,I can enjoy the music online and shopping on the Internet makes my life much easier. Sometimes CD-ROMs help me learn English and make me relaxed. Moreover,I can take part in some kinds of activities online. In a word,the computer is really of great help to me. It brings me a more meaningful and colourful life. 上海中考英语作文10篇【集锦】2 Shanghai was a small town three hundred years ago. There were only a few thousand people living here. Many of them were fishermen and farmers. 300年前,上海只是个小镇,只有几千人居住在这里,其中很多人是渔民和农民。 Today, Shanghai is becoming an international city. Many tall building have been built. Some bridges have been put up over the Huangpu River. More and more foreigners come to Shanghai for a visit every day.

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