4读写任务的四条建议(2P)

读写任务的四条建议笔者通过分析高考真题与市级模拟题，结合所教班级学生读写任务的写作情况，就读写任务“发表自己看法”这部分，给广大考生总结出四条建议，供考生们参考。

一、要点拓展，不可一句完成在读写任务的写作中，若遇到要点如2012年读写任务第一个要点“上文使你想起哪位对你帮助最大的老师”与第三个要点“你怎样看待老师对学生的影响”，考生很容易用一句话就写完，这样就会造成篇幅过短，内容不够丰富。

对于这样的题型，考生可以以下的方式对要点进行拓展。

(1)单独用一句话以翻译法围绕该要点的内容写该段的主题句。

(2)运用To be specific, More specifically, Exactly speaking, To be exact（具体地说）在主题句后用2-3句进一步阐述该要点。

[实例1] （2012年广东）以约120个词就老师影响学生的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：（1）上文使你想起哪位对你帮助最大的老师；（3）你怎样看待老师对学生的影响。

参考范文：The article reminds me of my English teacher who helped me the most. To be specific, it was she that enabled me to know myself and realize my own value. What’s more, it was she that offered me the chance to recognize that confidence is the vital key to success.In my opinion, the influence that a teacher has on the students is of great significance.To be exact, it is certainly beneficial to the students’ growth and their study. Moreover, it absolutely contributes a lot to bettering the students’ self-development as well as realizing their dreams.注意：要点如2009年的第三个要点“你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照”，这样的要点也很容易用一句话就可以写完。

但考生需要注意的是，因为要点中没有明确要求考生进一步阐述持该观点的理由，因此在拓展要点时，虽然有时提到的内容与持该观点的理由相关，但为了不使评卷老师认为写作离题，考生应避免直接使用“The reason why I put forward such an idea is that…”这样的句式来拓展要点。

可运用To be specific, More specifically, Exactly speaking, To be exact（具体地说）在主题句后用2-3句进一步阐述该要点。

[实例2] （2009年广东）(3)你认为是否应该禁止游客和动物拍照。

参考范文：From my point of view, the tourists are supposed to be stopped from taking pictures with the animals. More specifically, it is likely that the peaceful life of the animals would be definitely destroyed if the tourists insist on taking pictures with them. Moreover, it is reasonable that the animals have their own right to live as they are and taking pictures with them is absolutely not a part of the life of them.二、描述经历，需抓三个要素读写任务的要点如2011年深圳市宝安区一模读写任务的第二个要点“你印象最深刻的一次过节送礼的经历”中要求考生描述经历，为了避免篇幅过长，考生可依照“起因、经过、结果”三要素以3—4句话以过去时态来描述自身或他人的经历。

[实例3] （2011年宝安区一模）（2）你印象最深刻的一次过节送礼的经历；参考范文：It reminds me of an impressive experience of sending gifts to my friends on the festival. Due to my tendency to present a unique gift, I set my mind to draw some pictures personally as gifts instead of buying any. I had devoted all my vigour to the task. As a consequence, my friends accepted the gifts with great pleasure, which demonstrated that my effort was worthwhile.三、假设处境，要用虚拟语气读写任务的要点如2012年深圳高三第一次调研读写任务的第二个要点“假如你是Jane，你会如何处理这件事”要求考生对假设的情况进行描述。

考生应在描述该要点的文段中运用虚拟语气，如“ If I Were …, I would…”或“Were I …, I would…”。

[实例4] （2012年深圳市一模）（2）假如你是Jane，你会如何处理这件事；参考范文：If I were Jane, I would find time to have a face-to-face talk with Mary. I would tell her all about what I felt and what I thought about her. Besides, I would tell her if she continued doing like that, nobody could bear it and she would have no friends any more.四、要点写全，做到有血有肉读写任务的要点如2012年广州一模读写任务的第二要点“你是否赞成你妈妈的观点，并陈述理由”中包含了两个小要点，即要求考生先阐述是否赞成妈妈的观点，接着再陈述理由。

因此考生审题时，要认真仔细，一定确保在这一文段中不会因为粗心漏写要点后面部分造成不必要的失分。

事实上，此题即使去掉“并陈述理由”几个字，在你明确表示赞成或否定后，也要陈述理由，这样才使文章有血有肉。

[实例5] （2012年广州市一模）假设你是信中的David，请用英语给你妈妈写回信。

以下是回信的内容（信的开头和结尾已经为你写好）：2. 以约120词谈谈你对参加学校社团或俱乐部活动的看法，内容包括：(2)你是否赞成你妈妈的观点，并陈述理由；参考范文：Frankly speaking, I totally agree with your idea that the most important thing at this stage of my life is my studies. The reason why I think so can be listed as follows. First and foremost, there is no denying that the after-school activities do take up more and more of my time for study. In addition, it is the excellent academic achievements in my studies that will enable me to be admitted to the key university.[试题精选]1. (2012年广州二模)以约120词对父母送孩子出国游学的现象进行讨论，内容包括：(1) 你是否赞成文中对出国游学的看法？(2) 以你或他人的经历说明你的观点；(3) 如果有机会，你愿意参加什么样的出国游学？2. (2012年深圳二模)以约120个词发表你的看法，内容包括：(1)你是否赞成李明当选学生会主席并说明理由；(2)你是否赞成他提出的加强课外活动的建议，为什么？(3)谈谈你最喜欢的课外活动及其对你的影响。

[原创练习]以约120个词就“该不该禁止家长陪着孩子报到”进行议论，内容包括：(1)家长为什么会喜欢陪着孩子报到；(2)假如你是新生要报到，你会怎么做；(3)你认为是否应该让家长陪着孩子报到。

参考范文[试题精选]1. Though expensive, I still think study tours are worthwhile. To be specific, study tours provide me with a chance to get to know the culture of that country. Besides, my efforts at communicating with local people really help to build my confidence in speaking English.My experience on my own 2-week study tour of the UK confirmed this. I was afraid of speaking English in my daily life though I really did a good job in every examination. However, I was totally changed during the 2-week study tour of the UK. It was the hospitality of the local people in UK that enabled me to speak English with confidence.If I were given a chance to go on study tours, I would like to tailor my own tour. To be exact, by planning the route according to my own interests, and making decisions on things such as transport and accommodations, I would be able to apply what I’ve learned to real life and learn how to survive in a foreign country.2. Personally, I won't hesitate to vote for Li Ming, the active and kind-hearted person to be the president of the Students’ Union. The reason why I think so can be listed as follows. To begin with, h e, as is stated above, is always eager to help others. Besides, his three years’ working experience as a monitor provides a solid proof that he possesses outstanding leadership and management skills.Besides, from his speech, I highly appreciate his suggestion about enriching after-class activities. It is because colorful after-class activities will free students’ mind temporarily from study pressure. What’s more, they offer a chance to the students to do some meaningful activities, thus benefiting them both mentally and physically.Take myself for example. My favorite post-class activity is badminton. Each time I get tired with study, I go out for badminton. Sweet laughing and moving make me totally relaxed. After that, I can feel myself recharged with energy to carry on my study in a better mood and with a stronger will.[原创练习]The reasons why parents like to accompany their children to the university on the enrollment day can be listed as follows. To start with, parents still don’t trust in children’s abilities, worrying that they can’t handle some matters themselves. Besides, it is perhaps the sense of pride that drives them to do so to show that their children are quite successful.If I were a freshman, I would go to the university on the enrollment day on my own. What’s more, I would manage everything by myself on that day so as to prove my self-reliance.From my point of view, it is not a good idea for the parents to accompany their children to the university on the enrollment day. To be specific, it does harm to the development of the children because it rids them of the opportunity to be self-reliant.。